نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Adults are happier
# have a job
# have family

Teenagers are happier
# more free time
# more hope for the future

نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای

Happiness seems to be the human’s final goal. While some argue that teenagers have the opportunity to have more happiness, others believe it would be easier for adults to achieve it. (31 words)

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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 6

Everyone is looking for happiness in their lives. Although I believe teenage years enjoy the happiest time, adulthood can also be very enjoyable.

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Some people argue that adulthood is the happiest time in the whole life. First of all, adults usually have a full-time job, which means they are financially stable. Unlike teenagers, they do not need the support of others, which gives them the feeling of satisfaction and happiness. Secondly, when someone turns 18 years old and is considered an adult, they can start a family and have children. This big step in life is filled with pleasant feeling and sense of happiness for many people. The first time they find someone to live with for the rest of their life or when their children are born are among the very happy moments that only adults can experience. (116 words)

Others feel that teenage years are the happiest stage in life. First of all, teens have much more free time than adults, as they are financially supported by their families and do not work for long hours. Consequently, they have a great opportunity to enjoy their free time with their friends and simply have a lot of fun. Secondly, teenagers are very young without much painful experience and therefore have an optimistic view of the future. Most of them believe they will be someone important in the future with a good job who can make the world a better place. Such view, which may not necessarily happen in reality, is a source of happiness and joy in many people in that age. (122 words)

In conclusion, teenage years and adulthood can be the happiest times. I personally believe while you are a teenager you have almost unlimited energy and so many reasons to be hopeful and energetic about the future, but still you have other reasons while you are older to feel the same feeling. So, overall I believe age is not necessarily a factor when we consider happiness. (65 words)

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واژگان/ترکیب های پیشنهادی مدرس برای این تاپیک

To make somebody happy /// to be/feel happy /// to achieve true happiness /// To support somebody emotionally /// To enjoy somebody’s support  ///To have complete freedom to do something /// to have many friends /// to form a friendship /// to get married /// to begin a career /// to have a successful career /// to build a career /// to take/have responsibility /// primary/sole responsibility /// to accept/take full responsibility /// leisure time/activity /// to make a decision /// a right/difficult/important decision /// plan for the future /// promising/bright future /// to have/receive an education /// further/higher education 

 

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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7

Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times. First of all, they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Secondly, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. Spending time on activities that they truly love can create a sense of satisfaction for them A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.(121 words)

On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. First of all, the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy is mentioned as an important reason. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Secondly, adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step.(112 words)

In conclusion, while some consider teenage years as the time of enjoying the happiest moments in life, other people have the same view about adulthood. I believe both of these times can be the happiest moments in our lives regardless of age. (42 words)

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In conclusion, teenage years and adulthood can be the happiest times. I personally believe while you are a teenager you have almost unlimited energy and so many reasons to be hopeful and energetic about the future, but still you have other reasons while you are older to feel the same feeling. So, overall I believe age is not necessarily a factor when we consider happiness. (65 words)

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نمونه پاسخ اگزمینر در سطح نمره 9

Sample Answer of IELTS Writing Task 2 by Examiner band 9

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نمونه نوشته شده توسط هما الف، از زبان آموزان فروردین 1402

Some people argue that adulthood is the happiest time in their whole life. First of all, adults usually have a full-time job, and they have a fixed income. In other words, despite adulthood makes people more responsible, they are not dependent on anyone for their finances. Thus, a well-established career help them to save and splurge money on things that they want for themselves and their family members. Secondly, having a family can give a lot of joy, such as spending time with children and watching them grow up. In addition, the family provides a support system both physical and emotional. Hence, it helps a person to be an efficient member of his family and society. This gives more value to their growth. (124)

On the other hand, other people think that adolescents are living the happiest moments. First of all, teenagers have fewer responsibilities as they are supported by their parents. In other words, a child aged 13 and 19 is allowed to live carefree lives. For instance, teenagers have a great opportunity to focus on their hobbies and socialize with friends instead of worrying about their bills and other affairs. Secondly, teens are energetic and full of hope about the future since they are at the beginning of their lives. In other words, they are eager to discover new things and experience them to achieve their dreams without being afraid of failure. Thus, they have an optimistic attitude in the future. (119)

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نمونه نوشته شده نمره 8 توسط هوش مصنوعی (آموزش رایتینگ نویسی با هوش مصنوعی)

Introduction:
The debate over whether the teenage years or adult life brings more happiness is a topic of contention. While some argue that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives, others believe that adult life brings more happiness, despite the greater responsibilities. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own opinion.

Body Paragraph 1: Arguments in favor of the teenage years being the happiest times
One reason why some people consider the teenage years as the happiest is the absence of significant responsibilities. During this phase, individuals are generally free from the burdens of adulthood, such as financial obligations, career pressures, and family responsibilities. Teenagers can focus on self-discovery, exploring their interests, and enjoying life without worrying about the future.

Additionally, teenagers often have fewer worries and stresses compared to adults. They may have fewer responsibilities and enjoy a carefree lifestyle, surrounded by friends and engaging in activities they love. The lack of major life decisions and commitments can contribute to a sense of freedom and happiness during this period.

Body Paragraph 2: Arguments in favor of adult life bringing more happiness
On the other hand, many argue that adult life brings more happiness, despite the greater responsibilities it entails. With adulthood comes independence, personal growth, and the ability to pursue one’s dreams and aspirations. Adults have the opportunity to build meaningful relationships, start families, and establish successful careers, which can bring a sense of fulfillment and contentment.

Moreover, adults often have a greater sense of self-awareness and emotional maturity compared to teenagers. They have learned from their experiences and have a better understanding of themselves and what truly makes them happy. This self-awareness allows them to make informed decisions and prioritize their well-being, leading to a higher level of happiness in adult life.

Conclusion:
In conclusion, both the teenage years and adult life have their own unique aspects that contribute to happiness. While some argue that the teenage years are the happiest due to the absence of responsibilities, others believe that adult life brings more happiness through personal growth and fulfillment. Personally, I believe that happiness is subjective and can vary from person to person. It is essential for individuals to embrace each stage of life, appreciate the joys it brings, and find happiness in their own unique journey.

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