سمپل رایتینگ نوع Positive / Negative کمبریج 17 تست 4
سمپل رایتینگ نوع Positive / Negative کمبریج 17 تست 4
در این صفحه نمونه پاسخی در سطح نمره 7+ نوشته شده توسط مدرس آیلتس برای آخرین تست کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد 17 ام در دسترس زبان آموزان گرامی قرار میگیرد. این سمپل توسط مهندس ابوالقاسمی با نمره 8 رایتینگ آیلتس در آزمون رسمی و 15 هزار ساعت تجربه تدریس نوشته شده و تمامی عوامل تاثیرگذار بر رسیدن این نمونه به نمره بالای 7 در یک پادکست آموزش در ادامه ارائه میشود.
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سمپل رایتینگ آیلتس کمبریج 17 تست 4
سمپل نمره 7+ نوشته شده توسط مدرس
What is known as holistic medicine or homeopathy has gain considerable traction and publicity over the past few decades for different reasons. Although it has proven its efficiency in certain cases, there is still a lot to be known about its side effects. (43 words)
Benefits many patients reports after trying such medicines are undeniable. First of all, the chemical factors responsible for the desired impact that is the whole mechanism behind western or conventional medicine can also be found in certain species of plants. Over the past thousands of years, human being has mastered using them by a simple trial and error technique when no other option had been around. At the present time we are well aware what plants can be used for certain chronic and acute medical issues and even modern labs can scientifically show us the chemical factors involved. Secondly, the faith some people specially from the orient have in such methods can help them heal faster and have a better outlook to fight chronic diseases, though they obviously need to manage their expectations. Diseases are rarely a breakdown in a machine-like apparatus and psychological factors play a vital role in recover (152 words)
The success of alternative medicine, however, should not be overrated since there are serious limitations to consider. First of all, there is no such remedy for all diseases known to modern medicine especially for more acute and fatal ones. Acting late or choosing half measures in dealing with such diseases can put the lives of patients in serious risks while in comparison, modern medicine has proven to be quick and decisive in such cases. Secondly, due to the fact that the mechanism or the responsible chemical factors behind some herbal or other alternative medicine is unknown or only partially known, using them may create false hope in patients with certain point of views. Some people especially with religious backgrounds may believe in drugs that have no or very little actual effect but no one can actually claim they are ineffective and this blurry picture can contribute to many poor decisions that those people may take. (155 words)
In conclusion, while alternative medicine as its name implies suggesting an “alternative” solution, and in fact has been useful for particular individuals, caution should be exercised and their efficacy should not be overestimated and such choices should be made subjectively in order to prevent false hope or permanent complications. (49 words)
Total = 400 words
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جدول معیارهای تعیین نمره آیلتس تسک 2
