کلاس آنلاین آیلتس

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس – روزهای زوج دی ماه 1396

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای زوج کلاس مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست که در تاریخ 2 دی 1396 آغاز میشود. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس – تکالیف جلسه 18 ام

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه 18 ام

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه 17 ام

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس – تکلیف گرامر جلسه 18 ام

بعد از مشاهده صفحه مربوط در لینک های زیر و مطالعه دقیق توضیحات به زبان فارسی، چند ویدئو مربوط به هر فصل را مشاهده کرده و با ذکر نام برای هر مبحث دست کم 5 مثال در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد فرمایید.

گفتار بیست و سوم: اتصال ایده ها با حروف ربطی و وجه قیدی

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گفتار بیست و چهارم: موضع گیری در متن با استفاده از ضمایر، قید ها، افعال و صفت ها

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه 12 ام + نمونه پاسخ

زبان آموزان آکادمیک

Cambridge IELTS 12 Academic Test 3

پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7.5

 Cambridge IELTS 12 Academic Test 3 Sample Answer

The chart illustrates six categories based on the frequency of fast food consumption in USA in three different years over a decade between 2003 and 2013.

It is most common for American people to consume fast food once a week or once or twice a month since about 30 percent of the population is reported to have these habits in 2003. In 2013, however, this number decreased by about 5 percent for the former and increased by a similar amount for the latter.

In 2003, those who had fast food several times a week and few time annually constituted slightly over and under 15 percent of the population respectively. A decade later in 2013, the first group seems to had increased by a few percent before falling closer to 15 percent and the second group, despite showing a few percent of increase, finally stabilized at its starting level. Only a negligible percentage (almost 5 percent) of Americans ate either everyday or never and both showed a downward trend to form an even smaller percentage.

Overall, eating every week and every month seems to be the most popular eating habits for fast foods during this period and it appears in all categories there is a tendency to remain unchanged.

(Total 208 words)

زبان آموزان جنرال

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس – رایتینگ جلسه 9 ام

A sample Response at the level of 7.5

There are two maps of a town center named Islip which belong to the present time and changes that are planned for its development. (24)

The most noticeable of all in the map of developed town center is the construction of a “dual carriageway” which circles it and makes some previously inaccessible parts such as a school in southwest and a park in the southeast approachable. It also provides access to both the old and newly developed residential areas in the southern part of Islip center. (61)

It appears in the northern part the changes are both more numerous and varied. Most of the shops all across the northern part disappeared and replaced by facilities such as a bus station and a shopping center in the western part and a car park In the east that all overlook the abovementioned “dual carriageway”. In the northern east part, however, a new housing will be constructed.  In the middle of the Islip center, the shops will survive the development but main road will become a pedestrian only path for people who want to spend time in these shops.(99)

Overall, it seems the development will dramatically alter Islip center and there will be both more residential capacity and wider range of facilities available in this town.(27)

(Total Words: 214)

رایتینگ ارسالی مریم + #فیدبک – 7 بهمن 1396

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رایتینگ ارسالی حلیمه + #فیدبک – 7 بهمن 1396

 

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رایتینگ ارسالی ابوالفصل+ #فیدبک – 7 بهمن 1396

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رایتینگ ارسالی روزا+ #فیدبک – 7 بهمن 1396

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس – بانک فیدبک های اسپیکینگ و رایتینگ

بانکی از تمامی فیدبک های ارائه شده بر روی رایتینگ و فایل های اسپیکینگ ارسالی در کانال تلگرام زیر وجود دارد که از تمامی علاقمندان و زبان آموزان درخواست میشود در این کانال عضو شوند:

https://t.me/FeedbackParadise

کانال اصلی ما در تلگرام برای آگاهی از آخرین منابع و تازه های آیلتس:

https://t.me/ielts2com

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس Task 1 و Task 2

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)

همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید

براورد سریع دایره لغات زبان انگلیسی شما بصورت آنلاین

عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها 

 

177 پاسخ های ایجاد شده:
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  1. Maryam Moghadam (even day
    Maryam Moghadam (even day says:

    درود من نصف فصلهای کتاب tactics listening 1و کتاب1 select reading نخوندم، همون فصل هايي که مربوط به اوایل دوران کلاسمون ميشد نیازی هست که برگردم و قبلیارو بخونم؟ یاتمرکزمو بذارم سر کتاب های تست وreading های کمبریج؟

    2)بعضی از سوالات لیسینینگ که پر کردن جاخالی هست که (fill gap) اينا به ترتیبن همیشه؟

    3)تو آزمون اصلی غلط املایی تو لیسینینگ لحاظ ميشه؟ تاثیر داره رو نمره؟

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  2. Maryam Moghadam (even day
    Maryam Moghadam (even day says:

    Grammer
    Lesson 1
    Simple present and present progressive
    1)I get a bus to the work
    2)it rains a lot most of the time
    3)he always was sitting next to me
    4)he was always playing piano
    5)I’m learning English at the moment /these days /nowadays
    6)look!! It’s showing
    7)I found it helpful
    8)he speaks slowly with a great gravity
    9)I’m going to Canada in June
    10)she constantly /always was complaining
    11)he was always forgetting everything
    12)are you talking to me
    13)give me a lift
    14)take a break
    15)the population is growing by 50percent a year
    16)we found it was impossible to to continue our frenship
    17)he was always intrupting
    18)I realize I make mistake
    19)I’m realizing I make mistake

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  3. Maryam Moghadam Even day
    Maryam Moghadam Even day says:

    نمره مدنظر من 6هست
    نیازی نیست بیام تهران آزمون اصلی بدم؟
    یاحتی نیازی نیست آزمون ماک در تهران بدم؟
    واینکه تاریخش کی باشه بهتره؟

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    • admin
      admin says:

      بعد از کتاب آبجکتیو بهتر است چند تست از کمبریج 10 یا 11 بزنید تا براوردی دقیق تری از نمره داشته باشید و بعد اقدام به ثبت نام بفرمایید.

      اگر رفت و آمد برای شما ساده هست مانعی نیست میتونید در تهران برگزار کنید.

      تاریخ وابسته به نمره شما از کتاب های کمبریج هست. میتونه ابتدا یا انتهای اردیبهشت باشه.

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  4. vahid taghavi
    vahid taghavi says:

    962 even day
    Agree
    Destroy environment#
    Destroy animal’s habitat
    Rise air pollution#
    growing cities
    Increase costs
    Nowadays, more animals are losing their habitat. Although some people believe who we should build new houses in countryside, others including me disagree. In this essay I will examine this issue and provide reasons for my standpoint. 37 words
    Constructing new buildings have a huge negative impact on environment. First of all, a huge number of animal specie live in countryside. Many trees should be cut for construction and a wide range of animals and birds lose their own habitat, majority of them will die. another have to migrate to another place. Secondly, there are a lot of trees in countryside which help declining pollution. In consequence of building construction mainly of trees should cut as a result of there are no trees to eliminate contaminating, and air pollution more and more rising. 97 words
    Building new houses in countryside get cities bigger. First of all, if build new houses in countryside people ought to commute between home and workplace and for shopping too. As a result of population should spend more time for commuting and of coarse more fuel consumed and air more polluted. Secondly, constructing new building rise government costs. After people settle in new building government ought to provide a lot of facilities for them for example school, hospital, and transportation equipment. All of these building have a huge charge and the government should pay it. 95 words
    By the way of conclusion, building new houses in countryside have dramatically negative effect on environment and rise government costs. In my opinion we have to protect countryside and build new houses in urban area. 35 words
    256 words

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  5. vahid taghavi
    vahid taghavi says:

    even day
    The diagram illustrates, geothermal power plant that produce energy by geothermal energy in 5 steps. cold water get hot and
    steam twist turbine and generator produce energy. 24 words
    In first step there is a container that connected underground and accumulate cold water. water is pumped down into depth 4.5 km. in this part of earth there are hot rocks that called geothermal zone. Temperature water rise after pass trough hot rocks. 48 words
    Hot water is pumped up into a container on surface. in next step water convert into steam in condenser. Turbine powered by steam. Turbine is connected to generator in last step. As result of twist turbine, generator produce electricity. 44 words
    Overall, the diagram shows a kind of producing electricity. Some steps do on surface and another are under ground. In this process, electricity produce by hot rocks (geothermal zone) 29 words

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  6. Marjan
    Marjan says:

    The flow diagram illustrates the process of electricity production from geothermal energy. And shows several steps to go from cold water to the electricity that we use daily. (28 words).

    At the first stage in the production of electricity, a vast amount of cold water is accumulated in a container on the ground and then, it is pumped down in the depth of 4.5 km into the injection well. In this depth there are an area with hot rocks that called “geothermal zone”. Next, the water is heated by moving through this area. Following by being pumped up to the condenser (71 words).

    At the fourth stage of producing of electricity, in condenser hot water which is in gas form (steam) is put in the turbine. The steam rotates the turbine and then, after a circle movement the steam is transferred to the generator. Finally, generator produces electricity which is distributed to the geothermal power plants around the city. (56 words).
    Overall, we can see that electricity is made using geothermal energy, and that the manufacturing process consist of five distinct stages. Starting with injecting cold water and ending with electricity is being generated. (33 words).

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  7. halimeh lakzaei/even day
    halimeh lakzaei/even day says:

    Cambridge IELTS 12 academic test4
    This diagram shows the generation electricity process of geothermal energy in five sequential steps.
    (14 words)

    The process commences with pumping cold water down into well, which is 4.5 KM in depth, next water is transferred by injection well, that has been insulted underground, to geothermal zone. By passing this area water become hot. after that, hot water be pumped up throw production well and store in condenser.
    (52 words)

    The steam, which is produced by hot water, accumulates in the top of condenser and exits through valve, which is installed in the top of condenser, and enters generator turbine. Finally, turbine is turned by steam and this cause generator to be powered and electricity will be produced.
    (48 words)

    Overall, according to this illustration, for converting geothermal energy to electricity power, some facilities are needed which should insulte under ground and up ground. In addition, two wells are required for transferring water from up ground and after gaining energy from hot rocks be come back to up ground.
    (49 words)
    (169 words)

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  8. مریم even day
    مریم even day says:

    Academic Cambridge
    Test 4
    Task 1
    The illustration shows how cold water turn to steam and produce electricity by few steps at geothermal power plant. 20words

    At first step, cold water is pumped down through a well which has the depth of 4.5km. In this depth of ground there are several hot rocks that called “Geothermal zone”, water is injected through it and its temperature increases dramatically. In next step, hot water reaches another well that its depth is the same as previous well, but it is more wide. Hot water is pumped up through the well and reaches the surface of the ground and goes into condenser, in this step water is evaporated, afterward, the steam powers the generator and turbine, at the end turns to electricity.

    Overall, the Geotermal power plant is used to produce electricity, it changes cold water into steam, this circular movement includes several facilities, some of them are based into ground, the duration of the process water turn to electricity 35words

    Overall 160words

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  9. (Abolfazl p(962 even day
    (Abolfazl p(962 even day says:

    grammar section 22

    1)the car was cleaned by Bob.
    2)pasta was eaten by Ali.
    3) the letter is delivered.
    4)my car is being painted by the painter.
    5)my bag was stolen.
    6)the TV was not turned off.
    7)the issue was talked about.
    8)she avoids being seen.
    9) Ali does not mind being taught.
    10) you have been invited.
    11) i was being interviewed.
    12)we have been sent a copy.
    13)a note was handed to me.
    14)an email has been sent to us.
    15)a mosque is going to be built.

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  10. rosa-evenday
    rosa-evenday says:

    Cam 12- general- test 2- task 2- countryside – 2nd Version

    Nowadays, overpopulation demands developing construction and there is not enough space in the city. Although some people agree with constructing in the countryside, others including me believe that developing and construction is harmful to nature. This essay will examine the second view. (42)

    Development and construction are harmful to nature. First of all, construction in the countryside had detrimental effects on animals and plants. Developing and more construction replaces free spaces where plants can grow and animals can graze there and find their food. So, new housing decreases animal’s foods, water and shelter and many of them will die consequently. So, their species will be endangered. Secondly, it leads to more pollution. Development and construction accommodation in countryside destroys free spaces, lakes, and garden, cutting trees down, bridge construction and other development projects, and those make air polluted. Moreover, more buildings related to more population and population increases noise pollution. (106)

    Furthermore, protecting the countryside had positive effects on health and well-being. First of all, it saves farmland. Farmlands conservation and Make the common agricultural policy work for a sustainable farming system by subsiding green farming schemes lead to soil health, wildlife, water, heritage, and landscape. Secondly, a clean and healthy environment which thrives with life provides a major asset for the so-called countryside tourism which can be a major contributor to the rural economy and provide the urban population a getaway from the city buzz and an opportunity to enjoy tranquility and beauty of unspoiled nature. (95)

    In conclusion, in my opinion, developing in the countryside is harmful to nature and it had bad effects on such field like as health, economic and well-being. So, it’s important to the government to consider some places to accommodate people in cities. (41)

    Total: 287 W

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  11. مریم even day
    مریم even day says:

    درود
    من اواخر اردیبهشت باید مدرک ایلتسمو
    تحویل سفارت بدم، و نميدونم دقیقا چه تاریخی آزمون بدم؟ اصرار دارم که با اولین آزمون به نتیجه دلخواهم برسم وبراش تلاش میکنم، نگرانم چون نمیخام عین بعضی ها با آزمون مجدد به نتیجه برسم،باتوجه به این که مسیرم خیلی دوره واقعا سخته واسم، من 25فروردین درنظر گرفتم، به نظر شما تا اون موقع میتونم آماده آزمون باشم؟ ممنون ميشم که توضیحات وراهنمایی لازم در مورد آزمون وهمینطور center آزمون بگید که کدومو انتخاب کنم؟

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      در مورد سنتر حساسیت زیادی نداشته باشید و سنتر نزدیک به محل سکونت خودتون رو انتخاب کنید. پروشات و ایرسافام مرکز های خوبی هستند.

      باید بفرمایید نمره ای که مد نظر دارید چه نمره ای هست. نام کاملتون رو بفرمایید که اشتباهی رخ نده. ممنون

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  12. (Abolfazl p(962 even day
    (Abolfazl p(962 even day says:

    grammar section 17/18
    1)if ice melts, it becomes water.
    2)if you go to the movies, you could eat popcorn.
    3)if i study hard, i will learn english well.
    4)if you were a smarter man, you would be rich.
    5)if Ali were to study, he would be a good student.
    6)i will call you if i am late.
    7)if i don’t study, i am going to fail the exam.
    8)if i do my homework, i may watch TV.
    9)if you feel ill, you should rest.
    10)if i drink too much soda,i get fat.
    11)if i had a lot of money, i would buy a beautiful car.
    12) she would call him if he knew his telephone number.
    13)if i were you, i would go to Paris.
    14)if we had lots of money, we would go to Australia.
    15)if she became president, she would reduce taxes.
    16)if you played baseball together, she could win.
    17)If i had won lottery , i would have bought a car.
    18)i would have invited my friend to the concert if i had seen him.
    19)if i had studied for my exam,i would have passed.
    20)if Ali had gone to university, he might have become a doctor.
    21)if anything changes, we will let you know.
    22) if anything changed, we would let you know.
    23) if anything had changed, we would have let you know.
    24)i would miss the bus if i did not leave now.
    25)if i had known he was coming, i would have come too.

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  13. (Abolfazl p(962 even day
    (Abolfazl p(962 even day says:

    grammar section 16
    1) it is worth seeing this movie
    2)i feel like teaching
    3)he really dislikes watching TV.
    4)i dread speaking english.
    5)he discusses making changes.
    6) i try to avoid arguing.
    7) running is good for our heart.
    8) i hate watching TV
    9)what she hates most is arguing.
    10)i saw Ali eating his food.
    11)i am interested in improving my writing.
    12)i hate to watch TV.
    13)i remember booking a table.
    14) i managed to get in touch with him.
    15)you needn’t worry about it.
    16) i failed to impress my boss.

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    • admin
      admin says:

      روی اشتباه ها تمرکز کنید. ملاک شما اصلا تست زدن و پیش رفتن نباشه. میتونید نصف تکالیف ارایه شده رو انجام بدید و بجز تقویت لغات و حفظ کردن لغات جدید، تمرکز بیشتری روی تکنیک ها و شیوه های طراحی تست ها داشته باشید.

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  14. (Abolfazl p(962 even day
    (Abolfazl p(962 even day says:

    objective IELTS (26-59)
    listening:
    7/9
    4/5
    4/9
    5/9
    8/10
    10/14
    reading:
    4/6
    6/10
    3/5
    4/8
    5/10

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  15. vahid taghavi
    vahid taghavi says:

    962 even day
    Agree
    Destroying environment#
    Destroying animal’s habitat
    Rising air pollution#
    growing cities
    Increasing costs
    Nowadays, more animals are losing their habitat. Although some people believe who we should construct new building in countryside, others including me disagree. In this essay I will examine this issue and provide reasons for my standpoint. 37 words
    Constructing new buildings have a huge negative impact on environment. First of all, a huge number of animal specie are living in countryside. Many trees should cut to build construction and a wide range of animals and birds losing their own habitat, majority of them died. another have to migrate to another place. Secondly, there are a lot of trees in countryside which help declining pollution to find new habitat. In consequence of building construction mainly of trees should cut as a result of there are not trees to eliminate contaminating and air pollution more and more rising. 97 words
    Building new houses in countryside get cities bigger. First of all, if build new houses in countryside people ought to commute between home and workplace and for shopping too. As a result of population should spend more time for commuting and of coarse more fuel consumed and air pollution rising. Secondly, constructing new building rising government costs. After people settled in new building government ought to provide a lot of facilities for them for example school, hospital, and transportation equipment. All of these building have a huge charge and the government should pay it. 95 words
    By the way of conclusion, building new houses in countryside have dramatically negative effect on environment and rising government costs. In my opinion we have to protect countryside a build new hoses in urban area. 35 words
    256 words

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  16. طلایه
    طلایه says:

    Cambridge ielts general 12 – general – test 2 task 2

    Nowadays population increase has left no choice to people but to constricting in countryside. Some people agree with this issue, others including me think the growing trend cities is considered as a trigger for numerous urban problems. In this essay I will examine my viewpoint.

    more constructing on outskirts can be very hazardous for nature. First of all many animal's nature habitat and vegetation will be lost. You have to  deforest in the area and cutting down of all the trees in there and some times you should use chemical pesticides to eliminate some animal to prepare land  for building. And this way endanger the animal's existence. And even it might be extinct some species. Secondly climate change may occur. In some cases removing a mountain is effective in climate change. And cutting the trees diminish  rainfall in that area. And these are some key factors that cause climate change.

    Building in countryside need more government budget. First of all people who live in residential area in vicinity of the city need amenities  and equipment. People nowadays have higher expectations for quality of life. So they should not face general shortage. Such as hospital, educational centers, shopping and entertainment places and so on. Then government must invest a lot. Secondly new location entails a lot of infrastructure and urban facilities. And this issue need huge investment package. Providing water piping for potable water, sewage treatment, electricity and gas supply and many other basic and essential needs for residents.

    By way of conclusion, perhaps few of the people can benefit form constricting in suburbs but continue this process will pose adverse impacts to large number of people and animal and vegetation.

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  17. مریم
    مریم says:

    Cambridge General
    Test 2
    Task 2
    Nowadays, appeal for more accommodation has increased due to population density. Although Some people believe that the space of countryside should be utilized to construct new buildings, others including me believe that preserving natural areas is very crucial. This essay will be examined the second viewpoint (43words

    Building new houses in countryside,increase the number of cities. firs of all, population density has increased during Las few decades, they need more space to construct new buildings. Because of shortage of space in downtown, people trend to build living accommodation in countryside as much as possible. Human activities and increasing population breed problems, for instance, air pollution and global warming. Secondly, this large proportion of people require more facilities, residential areas and medical accommodation.providing these, requires a considerable budget. Because of financial problems, economic is not performing very well, so,government can not afford to eliminate people ‘requairemet, they can not control the whole people, in addition, these activities waste the time, money and energy.)107words

    Constructing new living accommodation in countryside jeopard the nature. First of all, the extent of farmland is decreased, as a result, farmers can not cultivate plants and vegetation, the availability of nutrition became more difficult, these problems have negative influence on agricultural industry, for this reason government have to import nutrient from other countries, all these processes make the country poor and needy. secondly, Nowadays logging and deforestation for commercial industry reduce the forest density.Virgin areas and spectacular landscapes are eroded gradually.terrestrial animals and plants fall in danger too. In addition, the pollution rate has increased, furthermore, global warming breed the numerous problems.) 103words

    In conclusion, the large number of people agree with useing the countryside for more accommodation. I disagree with this, because of erosion natural areas. I hope people will stop constructing in countryside. 32words

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  18. halimeh lakzaei/even day
    halimeh lakzaei/even day says:

    Cambridge IELTS 12 General Test 2 Task 2
    Nowadays constructing new houses is in demand due to population growth. Although some people argue for constructing countryside as a possible solution, others including me argue against this idea. In this essay I will give some reason for this claim.
    (48 words)

    Protecting environment has always been a crucial importance. First of all, it is undeniable fact that countryside is the main source of natural habitat. If countryside is inhabited by human, there would be risks of damaging the flora and fauna. Furthermore, some irreplaceable species are indigenous to some part of countryside and they would become extinct unless we preserve their habitat. Secondly, constructing new houses in countryside would result in pollution. Consider air pollution as an example, the residents of this new houses need to commute long distances in order to go to work or attend to their university classes, so that more carbon dioxide would be emitted.
    (108 words)

    There is no doubt that construction itself is both capital-intensive and labour- intensive. First of all, constructing countryside need workforce and materials which demand money, while these facilities can be spent on revitalizing inner city to supply better housing condition, moreover, for building a new area we need to construct not only houses but also basic infrastructure such as roads, rail ways, subway systems, and so on. Secondly, residents to who will move new houses would be in dire need for some facilities such as schools, hospitals, and recreational facilities. consequently, these demand would absorb more budget.
    (97 words)

    In conclusion, I believe that constructing countryside neither for nature nor for human is beneficial and maybe the idea of building new houses in countryside alleviate the problem of housing for a short while, but it would not be a long term solution.
    (43words)
    (303 words)

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  19. rosa
    rosa says:

    Cam 12- general- test 2- task 2- countryside

    Nowadays, overpopulation demands developing construction and there is not enough space in the city. Although some people believe constructing in the countryside isn’t an important issue, others including me believe that developing and construction is harmful to nature. In this essay, I will examine this issue. (46)

    Development and construction are harmful to nature. First of all, construction in countryside hurts animals and plants. Developing and more buildings construction replace free spaces where plants can grow and animals can graze there and find their food. So, new housing decreases animal’s foods, water and shelter and many of them will die probably. So, their species will be endangered. Secondly, it leads to more pollution. Development and construction accommodation in countryside destroys free spaces, lakes, and garden, cutting trees down, bridge construction and something like that, and those make air polluted. Moreover, more buildings related to more population and population increases noise pollution. (104)

    On the other hand, development and construction in countryside increase poor people’s well-being and life satisfaction. First of all, new housing in countryside helps them who don’t have enough income to live easier and spend their life with least cost. Moreover, the rent of a house in the countryside is less than other parts of the city. Furthermore, they can use farm products and sell them as their local job. Secondly, construction accommodations in the countryside can lead to economic growth. Modern building, eyeful tower, and big shopping mall attract people to trip to this part of the city. Furthermore, these facilities encourage people to live and find a job there. So, these can lead to economic development. (118).
    In conclusion, in my opinion, developing in the countryside is harmful to nature in spite of accommodation and shopping center constructed in the countryside can be useful for working condition. (30)

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  20. مریم
    مریم says:

    درود
    این جمله درسته؟
    I could make progress in spite of /despite many problems.
    بعد in spite of وdespite اسم مياد؟
    واین جمله ؛I was promoted in spite of /despite making so many mistakes

    Grammer
    Part 22and 23
    The Internet helps people to communicate with each other in the world, it is also cheap. In addition /furthermore /moreover /they provide entertainment.

    It is reasonable priced, but/yet/although /even though /though /nevertheless/nonethelesnobody purchase it
    2)Although it is reasonable priced,but nobody purchase it
    3)it is reasonable priced. Nobody purchase it though
    4)it is reasonable priced ;still /however nobody purchase it
    5)he is a doctor, but/although /yet he smokes
    6)I was smiling, but I was looked sad

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود.

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      این جمله درست هست
      I could make progress in spite of /despite many problems.

      این جمله هم درست هست
      I was promoted in spite of /despite making so many mistakes

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