نحوه نوشتن رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک Self-employed

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نحوه نوشتن رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک Self-employed

نحوه نوشتن رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک Self-employed

What are the advantages and disadvantages of being self-employed?

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# more income
# more progress


# more work
# more risk

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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 6

There are benefits in being self-employed. First of all, it is possible to have a higher salary compare with a person who works for other people. When someone works for others, there is almost always a fixed salary per month that does not change but for a self-employed person, the benefit of the business can be much more. Secondly, if the person is smart and makes good decisions, it will be possible to make progress at work and go to a higher level. It is more difficult to make much progress for a regular employee and the result of their hard work is difficult to see, but when they work for themselves the benefit will be clear and immediate. (119 words)

There are, however, some drawbacks to think about. First of all, a self-employed should work much harder than a regular employee because there is much more to do. They normally have to do different things and a lot of responsibility to take, which means much more than 8 hours of work every day. Secondly, this kind of work involves more risk since they will see the negative effects of every single decision they make. If a self-employed person makes a bad decision, they will lose money or a customer and there is no one to support them. They mostly make decisions alone with less time to discuss the issues, so there is also more risk of making a wrong decision. (120 words)

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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7.5

 

Why
# dissatisfaction
# Seeing successful people

Disadvantages

# Too much work
# Financial Risk

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Undoubtedly, these days there are many people who run their own business as a freelance. While there are difference reasons for this choice, it can sometimes create problems. (28 words)

People choose to be self-employed for various reasons. First of all, dissatisfaction at work may persuade them to make decisions of this kind. Being unappreciated or unable to demonstrate their outstanding capabilities may lead to reaching a point where they accept that they would be better off it they chose to run their own business and made their own decisions. Secondly, some ambitious employees may unconsciously copy the behavior or drastic decisions of their role models who have left a reputable corporation, for instance, to work independently and have eventually accomplished something that they would have never been able to achieve otherwise. Such impressions could manipulate some staff and add to the number of those who break away from their companies every year. (121 words)

There are, however, some possible negative consequences when someone chooses to be a freelance. First of all, there is much more work to do compare to an average employee. Since all the responsibility needs to be taken by one person, they normally have a tight schedule filled with various tasks. It means they have to work much more than normal eight hours a day that an employee does in a company with seemingly no immediate profit or perks. Secondly, financial risks that results from wrong decisions will have more dire consequences when they are left to one single person. Any poor judgment will result in a financial loss which is very intimidating unlike anything similar to the situation in corporations. (120 words)

In conclusion, different reasons behind the fact that some people choose to be a freelance. This way of running the business poses its own risks and disadvantages. (27 words)

Total = 279 words

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نحوه نوشتن رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک Self-employed

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