کلاس آیلتس آنلاین تیرماه 1398

چندتا ویس پارت 3 باید ضبط کنیم؟

سلام وقت بخیر
آیا میتوانم از پارافریز “extinction of species” استفاده کنم ؟
بجای loss of species که در صورت سوال آمده
یا نمونه disappearance of species
باسپاس

The chart shows the percentage of people who frequently consuming at fast food restaurants in America in three different years over a ten-year period. By far the highest level of consume fast food once a week or once or twice a month since about 30 percent of American people did that frequently during the year 2003. This figure is slightly lower than the 2006 and 2013 of around 5 percent. The several times a week and a few times annually the second highest level of fast food consumption were recorded, and the number fluctuated between 13 percent to 20 percent… ادامه مطلب »

Facing the difficulties is an indivisible part of the life. Some think it is better to accept the hardships in their lives than to fight for them, while others including me believe that every person must struggle against his or her problems. This essay will discuss both views. (47words) Some think it is the best approach to admit unfavorable situations in life. Firstly, people would suffer themselves physically and mentally when they are fighting against the hardships. Generally, in these challenges people have to work hardly, so they hurt their body. They must sit, stand or be awake extremely. Consequently,… ادامه مطلب »

سلام
استاد عبارت “reacting to difficulties” نه در لانگمن و نه در free collocation نیست. توی گوگل هم نتایج بی ربط مثل شیمی می آورد.
کالوکیشن encounter مناسب تر هست ؟

It is tempted to spend all time on it
internet is tempted
درست هست جمله من. ؟

The internet has changed significantly our world and lives for the recent half century .despite the great benefits have been for human societies , whereas there are disadvantages . this essay covers them both .33 There are the great benefits to using the internet for human societies . First of all ,it is possible for all people have access to extensive information . if you need information , you can easily access that information but in the past , something like that was not possible so you must have read a lot of books to find need information but now… ادامه مطلب »

The graph below illustrates the amount of electricity power produced by four main energy sources in France over a period of 32 years from 1980 to 2012. (27words) At the first, nuclear power produced about 70 TW-h of electricity, but this number soared dramatically till 1993. Then, the rate of growth became moderate, and peaked at 430 of TW-h in 2005. After this year, this number fluctuated at the same level of 410 TW-h to the end of period. (52words) In 1980, thermal energy generated about 120 TW-h of electricity, however this number fell to the level of 50 TW-h… ادامه مطلب »

However, the internet disadvantages are discussed on the other side

is this correct dear tutor?

ببخشید ترتیب جمله بندی در انگلیسی چجوریه؟
مثلا در زبان المانی داریم که مثلا بعد از فعل و فاعل و غیره مثلا قید زمان و سپس قید مکان داریم. میخوام بدونم در انگلیسی ترتیبش به چه شکلی هست

کل لب تاب و اینترنت با این کلمه ارور داد..

counterintuitively

کسی معنیشو داره بفرسته واسم.

ایا این جمله صحیح است؟؟؟

, there are millions of people have a simpler life caused the uncounted internet online services these days..

ایا این جمله بندی صحیح است؟
Internet has drastically altered human life while no other invention dose the way like that.

The internet has changed significantly our world and lives for the recent half century .despite the great benefits have been for human societies , whereas there are disadvantages . this essay covers them both .33 There are the great benefits to using the internet for human societies . First of all ,it is possible for all people have access to extensive information . if you need information , you can easily access that information but in the past , something like that was not possible so you must have read a lot of books to find need information but now… ادامه مطلب »

سلام خدمت شما : من میخواهم این جمله را بنویسم
no invention dose the way like that.
ایا برای invention از dose یا do استفاده کنم؟ چون هم countable هم uncountable نمی دونم چطور باید استفاده کنم

تانکیو

سلام استاد. اگه اشتباه نکنم شما فرمودین لغات ضروری Essential words for the ielts را یه جا جمع بندی کردین. میتونیم اونها را داشته باشیم؟

The chart below illustrates the time spoken by British residents on three main types of telephone calls between 1995 and 2002. (21 words) At the beginning, the time spent on calls by Local fixed lines was more than 70 billion minutes. This number surged constantly to a peak of 90 million minutes in 1999. Then it decreased significantly for the next 3 years and stayed at the same level that had started. (49words) In 1995, the number of minutes that were spoken by National and International line was about 38 million minutes. This number had a gradual increase all over… ادامه مطلب »

سلام.
وقت بخیر.
سوالی در باره سمپل کمبریج (تسک1 اخیر) دارم.
چرا در جمله آخر پاراگراف آخر از عبارت had narrowed استفاده کرد؟
منظورم علت past perfect چیست ؟
آیا به خاطر این هست که قبل از سال 2002(که همین سال هم زمان گذشته محسوب میشه) می باشد؟
“the gap between the three categories had narrowed considerably…”

سلام استاد من متن دوبار ويرايش مردم ولي پرانتزاش در جاهاي نامناسبي قرار ميگيره ولي دو word درسته

The bar chart illustrates the time spend by uk people on three types of telephone calls between 1995 and 2002. (20) In the 1995 rate of local fixed line calls were approximately 72 billon.local calls increased steadily from 72 billon in 1995 to about 90 billon in 1998 and then local fixed line calls fell from peak 90 billon in 1999 to under approximately 72 billon in 2002. national and international calls was less than 40 billon.it shows an gradual upwards trend over 7 years to the end of the period . The number of minutes spend on the mobile… ادامه مطلب »

The bar chart represents the time spent by UK citizen on three groups of telephone calls: local line, national and international fixed line and Mobile during the period from 1995 to 2002. In 1995, local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. then, this number increased gradually from about 70 to 90 billion in the years 1995 and 1998 respectively. After that, it reached a peak of 90 billion in 1999. Then, there were a considerable declined in time calls from around 85 to 75 billion between 2ooo and 2002. There were a moderate grew in National and International calls… ادامه مطلب »

The optimum proportion of young people in society can bring dividends for any countries. Although, some argue the more young people, the more earned benefits, other believe it has serious disadvantages for nations. Both of these views will be analyzed in this essay. (42) First of all, the most vital activities, which is needed significant effort and attention, in countries is done by young adults. It is due to the fact that, young people have much vigor and concentration; thus, they can execute their duties more proper. Moreover, agility on decision making is one of the outstanding characteristics of people… ادامه مطلب »

سلام. ببخشید در مورد رایتینگ task1 با موضوع time schoolchildren … چند سوال داشتم که پایین در زیر رایتینگ پرسیدم

سلام.
برای نمودارها جملات را باید مجهول بنویسیم ؟
مثلا the number had started یا
the number had been started
سپاس

Nowadays, demography of countries is a valuable data which has a serious outcomes. Although there are some advantages for a country which its young people are the dominant population, there are some disadvantages too. In this essay this issue will be examined and both positive and negative consequences of it will be discussed. (53words) Having a young population is a benefit for countries. Firstly, economy will be developed by having more workforce. Since young people are physically active, they can work more than older ones, and more suitable for the industry. As a result of this, the production will be… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays, majority of population in the most sosieties in the world make up of young people. Although, there are lots of benefits for countries with young population, but, the older population has some specific drawbacks. This essay will discuss both views.(41) Existence a large number of young citizens in the sosiety undoubtedly provide a lot of opportunities. Fist of all, in thus countries there are more work forces. Lots of jobs can be accupied by the young labour force in different fields. Each of them could made progress in their country’s economy. Second, the country with young adults has more… ادامه مطلب »

باسلام،استاد ميشه لطف كنيد آخرين رايتينگ را بررسي كنيد ممنونم

The bar chart gives information about how much time do 10-11 schoolchildren have spent on both TV and computer at home since 2000. Looking at the green line, it is easily apparent that the total spent time on TV has decreased since 2000 from about 21 hours per week to approximately 14 hours. This line illustrates that the time which was spent on TV by schoolchildren was stable until 2003. After that, it plummeted significantly around 14 hours per week in 2004. Afterwards, it has become constant until present time at this amount, with a noticeable fluctuation between 14 to… ادامه مطلب »

سلام. استاد من آموزش گرامر درس 21 ام را در سایت پیدا نکردم. برا این درس آموزش نیست؟

سلام ببخشید من رایتینگ task 2 این هفته رو تو تکالیف نمی بینم نباید بنویسیم؟

اگر بخوام درستی ساختار یک جمله رو بپرسم باید اینجا بپرسم؟

The graph illustrates how much time per week spent on two different domestic activities by schoolchildren between the time period of 2000 to now.over this span of 10 years(30) schoolchildren spent just over 3 hours in a week on computer at the beginning of the period in 2000. the amount of time rose from 2000 to 2004 steadily that reach approximately 15 hours in a week .this crease has continued slower than past, as it is now at it’ s peak at about 22 hours in a week.(53) amount of time spent on tv by children is more than 20… ادامه مطلب »

The line graph figures information about the average weekly time spent by offspring at the age of 10 to 11 on two different leisure activities (TV and computer) at home. (30) According to the line, offspring prefer to time spent computer. This is the most common activity. However in 2000, offspring time spent roughly 4hours a week on computer. This number to grow for the next 8 years .but in 2004, it to rise slowly downhill until 2008 to reach a peak of roughly 22 hours per week . (57) Initio offspring prefer to time spent computer. Although in 2000… ادامه مطلب »

some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and academic words. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Maximum sharing # development of science # Easy to use the information Sharing with limitation #to prevent dangerous activities #copyright laws Sharing information in a variety of fields is a powerful tool for progress. Although some people believe that sharing information should be available without restriction, others including me think that it must be limited.… ادامه مطلب »

The graph below illustrates the average time per week that spent by 10 and 11 years old children on the two common devices (TV and computer) as their domestic activities. (30 words) Schoolchildren spent more than 20 hours weekly on TV at the beginning of the period and this level remained stable for 3 years until 2003. During this year the usage of TV dropped to 15 hours per week and then except some fluctuations in 2005 have been stayed stable until the present time in 2008. (55 words) Firstly, time spent on computer was lower than 4 hours a… ادامه مطلب »

This line graph illustrate two different popular activities (TV and computer) among offspring between 10 to 11 ages. Also it shows the average hours they weekly spent on each activity. (30) At the beginning of the period 2000 schoolchildren spent their time on computer just under 4 hours a week. In next 4 years the number grew considerably to 15 hours a week in 2004. Then it increased to just under 22 hours in 2008 more slowly. (46) In compared to spending time on computer, TV was significantly higher at the beginning of the period 2000. It can be seen… ادامه مطلب »

در گراف خطی schoolchildren زمان present ایا 2019 است یا 2008؟

It would not be able to make incredible strides in the field of science and technology in latest decades without sharing the generosity of information. While some argue that sharing of information should be maximized without limitations, others, including me, assume that it should be in check. This essay will be discuss both viewpoints. (54) Some claim that data should be shared to the highest level. First of all, this strategy saves time as otherwise a lot of studies would be repeated and endless hours would be wasted on attaining the same outcomes worldwide. A more matched study which group… ادامه مطلب »

در نمونه رایتینک 7 اینفورمیشن 2 خط مونده به اخر پاراگراف اول future breakthroughs چرا باهم اومده؟ هرچی گشتم در دیگشنری ها اینا باهم نیومده بودن ؟ مگر شما نگفتین باید چک کنیم هر چیزی رو که قراره باهم بنویسیم؟

با تشکر

سلام در نمونه رایتینگ 7 اینفورمیشن خط اخر پاراگراف اول broaden horizon در دیگشنری لانگمن اومده که باید بنویسیم broaden horizons.

Travel is always enjoyable, spicily going to fascinating and natural place. Although some believe going to these places have benefit other think it has disadvantage for tourists. This essay will discuss both views. Some believe there are benefits for tourists visiting fascinating place. First of all, some tourist are interested in natural places because they get tired of crowded places. So they prefer the places less crowded in addition another reason for tourists to be interested in such places is that they can go to new discovered places and face places that are not change by humans. Secondly, tourists are… ادامه مطلب »

As a result of open access information there has always been a considerable progress in science. Some people think there should be no restrictions on data sharing, while others including me believe that some constraints must be enforced on contribution to academic investigations. This essay discusses both views. (48 words) Some believe that would be better if access to information was freely and boundlessly. First of all, this type of availability accelerates researchers’ achievement because they can access a comprehensive knowledge, therefore they can find the solution of their inquiries easier and faster. In addition, open access to scientific data… ادامه مطلب »

Maximum sharing
# development of science
#globalization

Sharing with limitation
#to prevent dangerous activities
#copyright laws

Sharing informatio :
+
# stimulate innovation and growth
#reduce the loss of know_how
_
#plagiarism
#revialing secrets of success

استاد این جمله درست هست؟
I spent a lot of time looking at the picture in the museum.

#2 – common mistake

سلام. استاد یه سوال داشتم. کدوم عبارت زیر درست هستش؟
the teacher encouraged her students …….to an English pen-friend.
1) to write
2) wrote
3) write
4) should write

Knowledge is power. Although some reasons for sharing information freely include rapid development of science and benefit of humanity, I believe it should not be request without pay because information needs finance and security. This essay discusses both viewpoints. (39 words) Some believe for the maximum level of sharing information. First of all, Scientific advancements can be achieved faster and more when people do not need to have financial backing to give the necessary knowledge. There are many clever students who do not have the budget to find important information to complete their research. Secondly, we live in an age… ادامه مطلب »

Sharing informatio :
+
# stimulate innovation and growth
#reduce the loss of know_how
# delivering better, more efficient services
_
#plagiarism
#revialing secrets of success

The picture below shows an island that a lot of construction has been done during the time. Top map shows before the construction of leisure facilities for tourists and down map appears to after the construction. At first, this island had not been any facilities for convenience of tourists. For example, there was not footpath for walking. Also, there was not situation for swimming but in the second map there is a reception in middle of island that there are some accommodation on the left side. There is a beach for swimming on the West of accommodation. There is a… ادامه مطلب »

The maps illustrate developments which took place before and after erecting some facilities in order to touristic purposes in a vacant island of a few hundreds square meters. In the eastern part of the island some accommodations were built in a circular array which are connected to each other by a footpath. In addition, there is no provided path to the beach through the mentioned accommodations. In the central part of island toward the east, two building has been emerged. To be more precise, a restaurant has been constructed in the middle part. Moreover a pier has been built in… ادامه مطلب »

اقای ابوالقاسمی میشه خواهش کنم رایتیک مپ بنده رو فیدبک بدید ممنون.

سلام در فید بک یکی از رایتینگ ها فرموین جمله رو چک کنم و در صفحه کلاس سوال کنم.
جمله پایین رو فرمودین که کاملا بی معنی هست:
which reported by many psycologist teenagers behavior article.
خواستم بگم در بسیاری از مقالات مربوط به روان شناسی رفتارهای نوجوانان گزارش شده است.
دوباره که تلاش کردم اینو نوشتم:
.Many psychological articles of adolescent behaviors have been reported

These two maps illustrate an island changes before and after developing to a particular touristic purpose and revealed implantation services that provided for visitors convenience. There is a reception in the middle of the island which surrounding by the vehicle track. It can be seen a restaurant at the north of the reception that can be reached by vehicle track too. Several accommodations are available at the west of the map which traveler could have access to them by footbath. Other footbath around the trees, which located at the center of multiple accommodations linked to long other footbath that ends… ادامه مطلب »

The two schemes indicate an island before and after building of different touristic facilities .(14)In the first map demonstrate an island empty of sufficient tourists facilities and services . except ,there are a beach in the left side of island and several trees . On the other hand , in the second map indicate that different facilities were made .First of all , there is reception in the heart of island which join pier and restaurant by car track . In addition , this restaurant was built in the northern area and port was built in southern area where tourists… ادامه مطلب »

The two maps illustrate an island in different time, before and after a development of some tourist construction. In the west side of the first map there is a beach which is not suitable place for swimming, while in the second map the tourists can enjoy swimming in this area and relaxing in some constructed accommodation. One the other hand, there are some facilities which has been constructed in the middle of the later map. In the central area there is a Reception which is connected to some other constructions that did not exist in the first map. Firstly, in… ادامه مطلب »

Traveling to troublesome areas is becoming increasingly popular among tourists. While, there could be many major drawbacks in such a places, the majority of traveler might gain positive points on their journey. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of visiting difficult places in details. (39) There are benefits for tourists seeing unusual places. Firstly, the greatest benefit is that traveler will have more life experiences. This will improve their social position otherwise impossible if they had have only usual journey. Because this helped person to become happier in their individual lives. For example, knowledge experience skills and… ادامه مطلب »

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Two maps depict the changes on an island before and after the construction of tourist facilities and compere their different. In the first map, there are no facilities for tourists to relax and have fun. Before the construction, there was only trees and a beach in the west and all of the places was empty. It appears after the construction, have been developed many tourists’ facilities such as tourists… ادامه مطلب »

The picturs shows tow maps of one island the others: one of them before constraction facilities and the other after having facilites. In the first map there is not enough attraction for tourists because of lack of convenient facilities. In the first map ,just some tree in the middle of island and a beach at the west can be seen .as regards in the second map there are alot of desirable facilities for tourists. The east and the west of reception there are acomodation for tourists .which can be used to relax. The reception is in middle of island and… ادامه مطلب »

Traveling to troublesome areas is becoming increasingly popular among tourists. While, there could be many major drawbacks in such a places, the majority of traveler might gain positive points on their journey. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of visiting difficult places in details. (39) There are benefits for tourists seeing unusual places. Firstly, the greatest benefit is that traveler will have more life experiences. This will improve their social position otherwise impossible if they had have only usual journey. Because this helped person to become happier in their individual lives. For example, knowledge experience skills and… ادامه مطلب »

The maps illustrate major changes in an tropical island in different times, before and after development touristic places. The most changes were done in the left of the one hundred squre meters of island and the most parts of zone are free. Situated a reception in the senter of the reagion which is accessable by vehicle track. It was connected to a restaurant at the northern part and the pier for using boats at the southern by car track. The accommodations were located in two side of reception that is possible to get to them with each other and with… ادامه مطلب »

ببخشید استاد شما تو فیدبک به من گفته بودین به جای قید تو جمله توجه کنم چون always رو اول جمله آورده بودم میخواستم سوال کنم تو خود Task که Today رو اول جمله آورده چه فرقی هست؟
میشه لطفا توضیح بدین … چون متوجه نشدم

In conclusion, tourists choose these places according to their morale and they enjoy their journey. However, this travels have advantages and disadvantages for tourists. (24 words)

In conclusion, despite of positive points for traveler who select furthest reaches with harsh conditions for traveling, however, there could be drawbacks for them to deal with and tackle the problem.

In conclusion, there are certain individuals who desire to live in a village while other people like best to live in a major city.

In conclusion, faraway places has attracted more travellers toward themselves during the latest decade. Tourists can real enjoy benefits, but they suffer from some unexpectable drawbacks too.

In conclusin,some tourists may like going to places sever condition because of benefits such as: erning new expriences and seeing intact places but certainly there are disadvantages to face with.

سلام مجدد فرستادم نتیجه رو تا شنبه ارسال میکنم

Travel is always enjoable ,specilly going to fascinating and natural places . Althoug some belive going to these places have benefits,others think it has disadvantages for tourists. This essay will discuss both views.34 Some belive there are benefits for tourists visiting fascinating places. First of all, some tourists are interested in natural places because they get tired of crowded places. So they prefer the places less crowded in addition onother resons for tourist to be intrested in such places is that they can go to new dis_coverd places and face places that are not chenged by humans.secondly ,touristes are able… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays tourists have an increasing tendency to visit places with difficult conditions. Although this kind of traveling has some disadvantages for them, this could be beneficial in some aspects. This essay will discuss both sides of this issue. (38 words) Traveling to places with difficult conditions could has some disadvantages for the tourist. Firstly, they would be in danger by visiting these locations such as the Sahara desert. As there is no technological connections such as the GPS and the mobile phone signal, they could be easily lost. In addition they could encounter some dangers of the nature or wildlife.… ادامه مطلب »

Always adventure travels and selection of special places have been of interest to tourists. Because they like to try the ways that others have not chosen. Although, this journey have benefits and disadvantages. This essay will discuss two viewpoints.(39words) Travelling to unusual areas have benefits for tourists. First of all, in the most of times these areas are intact and unscathed. Seeing these virgin and picturesque places is quite pleasant and give good feeling to everyone. They are introduced to different kinds of plants and organisms and they see the nature that few have seen. Secondly, these places are far… ادامه مطلب »

Travel is always enjoyable, specially going to fascinating and natural places.Althoug some believe going to these places have benefits,other it has disadvantages for turists. This essay will discuss both views.some believe there are benifits for tourists visiting fascinating places. First of all, some tourists are intersted in natural places because they get tired of crowded places so they prefer the places less crowded. In addition onothrresons for tourists to be intersted in places. they go to new dis_cowerd places and face places that are not chenged by humans.secondly, tourists are able to new experience in these travela.In this type of… ادامه مطلب »

Over the last few years, travelling to hostile places has attracted many tourists. Although, there are wonderful opportunities to travelling to remote area, others say that there are serious drawback in difficult places. I will discuss both of them in this essay. (42) There are many advantages to visiting exotic destination. First of all, these increase one’s adventure feeling, despite can be mentally and physically a gruelling journey but tourists enjoy discovering of unknown lands and gain new experience. Some like to test themselves in a terrible condition until be able to tolerate many problem and solve them in their… ادامه مطلب »

Trending toward experiencing spectacular tourist attractions has been widespread nowadays. Although some argue that tourists can benefit from this, others may consider it as a disadvantage for tourists. Both of views will be discussed in this essay. There are some people who argue that visiting new places has advantages for tourists. First of all, when a tourist visit somewhere that is a hardly-seen place, he perceives the uniqueness of human’s home land. Furthermore seeing rare wild species, plants, and eye-catching scenes causes feeling of happiness. Secondly, visiting marvelous attractions of the Earth will open one’s mind and boost knowledge of… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays, travellers desire to experience new things about natural world. Although, seeing these places not empty of major disadvantages, also it has exciting benefits. This essay will examine both 33)point of views). There are benifits for people who want to see exotic location all over the world. First of all, travellers will be familiarity with wildlife. It is exciting for some of tourists to know more facts about animals, plants,or weather in the different natural places. For enstsnce, how plants endure the harsh conditions in the desert, how animals or beards breeding and growing. When the answer are founded, it… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام ببخشید رایتینگم دو تکه فرستاده شد مقدمه جدا بادی پاراگراف‌ها جدا

Nowadays travellers desire to experience new things about natural world. Although, seeing these places not empty of major disadvantages, also it has exciting benefits. This essay will examine both points of views.

There are benifits for people who want to see exotic location all over the world. First of all travellers will be familiarity with wildlife, it is exciting for some of tourists to know more facts about animals, plants or weather in the different natural places. For enstsnce، how some plants can endure harsh conditions in the desert, how animals and beards breeding and growing. When the answers are founded, it gives them a little inner feeling and they fell pleasure. Furthermore, they can breath clean weather, which cannot find in the other site, nowadays. Secondly, they experience having fresh, healthy… ادامه مطلب »

بنده یک رایتیگ پایین همین صفحه دارم که فیذبک نخورده. ممنون میشم پیگیری کنید با تشکر. البته ویسهای من هم فیدبک نخورده. ممنون

سلام خسته نباشید. یه موضوعی که مغز منو این چند روز درگیر کرد این هست که. برای رایتینگ توریست ها از همون چهارچوب شهر بزرگ و روستا باید تبعیت کرد؟
منظورم قسمت بادی رایتینگ ها است
مگر نه که برای نوشتن رایتیگ دارای معایب و مزایا باید طوری دیگه عمل بشه.
من کاملا گیج شدم. لطفا کمکم کنید و بهم بگید چهار چوب رایتیگ توریستها به شکل باید باشه. با تشکر