کلاس آیلتس آنلاین تیرماه 1398

سلام
نمونه های کتاب اکچوال رایتینگ را چه کسی نوشته و چه نمره ای دارند؟

The diagram below illustrates the process of electricity production using the geothermal energy. (13) Overall, it is obvious that there are two main stages in this production including storage of thermal energy utilizing the earth, and converting it to electricity power. (27) At the first level, water in low temperatures is injected into the ground about 4.5 kilometers. Then, its temperature rises due to crossing over a horizontal region named Geothermal zone, and absorbing the thermal energy of surrounding hot stones. At the end of this path, it reaches the production well with higher temperature. (53) This warm liquid is… ادامه مطلب »

کدام درست است؟
a horizontal region named “Geothermal zone” -1
a horizontal region named Geothermal zone -2
a horizontal region named geothermal zone -3

استاد آوردن کلماتی مانند consequently در تسک ۱ ایراد دارد؟
در جمله زیر:
vapor makes a turbine to rotate. consequently, the generator rotates.

کدام بهتر است؟
a turbine یا the turbine ؟
همینطور برای برخی اسامی دیگر مانند generator یا condencer

استاد برای اورال process چطور بنویسیم ؟‌
بنده دارم برای نیروگاه برق (زمین گرمایی) می نویسم.
ذکر تعداد مراحل مناسب هست برای اورال یا اینکه شرح کلی بنویسم از کل فرآیند ؟

Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities. Others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Nowadays educational methods and principles are changing. Some believe students should be classified based on their capacity for learning, while others argue with this approach. This essay will discuss both views. There are those maintain that students should be categorized according to their educational capabilities. Firstly, the student can focus better on the subject that they are talented. Every person has an ability. Some students… ادامه مطلب »

سلام. وقت بخیر استاد
ممکنه لطف بفرمائید اجازه بدهید به جای رایتینگ تسک ۲ این هفته، یک تسک ۲ دیگه با موضوع زیر را که نوشتم بفرستم ؟
🔶Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities. Others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together.
🔸Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The set of virtual below illustrates, how many visitors went to Ashdown museum and the result of an investigation on the degree of visitors’ satisfaction before and after its repairs.

جمله بندی درست هست؟ با تشکر

As pie charts show, just under a third of all responders (30%) before refurbishment were satisfied and half of these number (15%) were very satisfied

سلام. ببخشید just under a third of all responders یعنی چی؟

Today different types of careers and jobs are available more than the past. Although several reasons can be suggested why some decide on working freelance, there are also drawbacks that cannot be ignored. This essay will discuss both aspects. 39 Some people maintain that working freelance can be better than being employed by a company. First of all, they can be their own boss. It means there is no person to tell them what should they do or dictates their duties. For example, the employees who feel annoying in such these environment they may choose work as self-employed. Secondly, it… ادامه مطلب »

استاد این کتاب (1000 collocations) را تایید می فرمایید که مورد استفاده ما قرار بگیرد ؟

لطفا اگر صلاح میدانید رایتینگ تسک ۱ آخر را diagram(process) کار کنیم.
باتشکر

استاد می توانیم در بادی دوم تسک ۲ به جای secondly (تکراری از بند اول) از واژه های مثل furthermore استفاده کنیم‌؟

سلام
برای استفاده از ضمیر سوم شخص مفرد که جنسیت آن معلوم نیست چطور باید بنویسیم ؟
he or she دزسته ؟‌ یعنی هر دو ضمیر را بنویسیم !

سلام کدام جمله درست هست؟
1)Some people maintain that working freelance can be better to be employed by a company.

2)Some people maintain that working freelance can be better than employed by a company

با تشکر

Introduction:
Today different types of careers and jobs are available more than the past. Although several reasons can be suggested why some decide on working freelance, while there are also drawbacks that cannot be ignored. This essay will discuss both aspects. 40

Each country with that specific international singers can be followed by rang of age groups or people with a different culture.

Reasons
#being your own bass
#work from home
Disadvantages
#paying more tasks
#distractions at home

The set of visuals below is reflection of a research that shows the number of visitors to Ashdown museum and the level of visitors’ satisfaction before and after a renovation.

سلام در این جمله نقش اپاستروف اس امده بعداز visitors چی هست؟

The table below illustrates how many people visited Ashdown Museum at the year of its refurbishment. The charts indicate that how much the people visiting the museum were delighted for the two duration. (33) As an overall trend, it is obvious the number of visitor significantly increased after the reconstruction from 72,000 to 94,000 as well as the level of their satisfaction. (25) As the pie charts indicate, only 15% of respondents were very satisfied, and the number of satisfied visitors was twice this number, whereas after the repair these numbers changed in a positive pattern to a little more… ادامه مطلب »

سلام
استفاده از Grammarly را در ارتقا نمره گرامر رایتینگ چقدر موثر می دانید؟

, despite of the positive effects of music in people’s lives, there are major differences between music styles all around the world and it cannot always bringing people with different nationalities together
کامل شده همان جمله ناقص. با تشکر.

Music has always been considered more than an art. Some maintain that it can unify people in spite of their cultural diversity and age differences, while others disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss both views. (37) There are those who claim that music can cross the borders of age and culture to connect different groups to each other. First of all, billions of people around the world enjoy listening to music. There is no need to know any foreign language to enhance their satisfaction by listening to a piece of instrumental music. In addition, there are some famous… ادامه مطلب »

خسته نباشید اقای ابوالقاسمی امکانش هست بفرمایید که جملاتی که پایین نوشتم صحیح هستن یا خیر؟ با تشکر

درود
در درست بودن جمله زیر به لحاظ گرامری شک دارم
there are some famous musicians who have countless fans of all ages
شک بنده بر روی دو کلمه have و of all ages هست. جمله درست چیست؟
و راهکار کلی برای برطرف کردن چنین ایرادی چیست که در موارد مشابه خطایی رخ ندهد.

سلام.
آیا نوشتن چنین جمله ای در رایتینگ تسک 1 برای چارت درست است؟
مثلا :
over the period of the last 2-year its wealth declined
اینکه مثلا دو سال آخر سال های 2009 و 2010 باشند ولی ذکر نشوند در جمله کار اشتباهی هست یا اشکالی ندارد ؟

اقای ابوالقاسمی در صورت خریداری فایلهای اسپیکینگ هر 3 پارت در اختیارمون قرار میگیره؟ یا اینکه هزینه هر کدام بصورت جداگانه هستش؟ تشکر

سلام
ممکن است لطفا رایتینگ بنده را ملاحظه بفرمایید

in spite of the positive effect of music in peoples lives.

Some people maintain that music has a direct link to bringing age and culture of different nationalities together

Because obscure music genres cannot attract many people with different culture or ages

The given pie charts indicates the average intake of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar which are three types of substance in four typical American meals. According to the chart, people in the US received a major share (43%) of their sodium from dinner, while lunch is the other major contributor with 29% percent of whole sodium consumption and almost the same amount come from snacks and breakfast combined. Similar to sodium, biggest share of the saturated fat (37%) comes from dinner, while other two meals such as lunch and snacks contributed rather moderate shares of 26% and 21% respectively.… ادامه مطلب »

سلام و صبح بخیر خدمت اقای ابوالقاسمی. خسته نباشید. گفته بودید سوالی که در کلاس مطرح کرده بودم را اینجا عنوان کنم.

خواستم با حفظ ساختار یک جمله جمله دیگری بنویسید که بتوانیم چگونگی این مورد را یاد بگیریم. مثلا جمله پایین.

Biggest share of the sodium (43%) comes from dinner, while lunch is responsible for less than one third (29%) of the whole sodium intake and almost the same amount come from snakes and breakfast combined.

ممنون میشم راهنمایی بفرمایید که چطور با حفظ ساختار جمله مشابه جمله بالا میتوان نوشت .

سپاس

سلام
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Immigration means people moving from their native regions into another country. Although some argue that speaking native language in host country creates both social and practical difficulties for immigrants, others disagree. This essay with covers both views. 38 Immigrants are always have a problems in their communicating with people in the country of destination when they stepping out of their regions. First of all, make connections with others in a host country become more difficult. Because it would takes time to find ways to adapt to the new environment and correct the spoken errors. Secondly, depressing due to inability to… ادامه مطلب »

Immigrants have always stepped out of a comfort zone. Some argue that using the native language creates social difficulties as well as practical problems for the non-native ones, though others disagree. This essay will discuss both views. (37) Some maintain that immigrants face problems in their social and business connections because of using a foreign language. First of all, Most of newcomers have no enough capability to communicate with natives. They can hardly establish an effective communication with other citizens, for this requires the ability to speak to them flawlessly and fluently. Secondly, most of people who migrate face some… ادامه مطلب »

Music is one of the things chosen by everyone in leisure time. Although some argue it is the best way to join different nationalities and same ages together while others disagree. This essay will cover both views. 37 Some people maintain that music can join the age and culture of different nationalities together. Firstly, music can affect peoples emotions. For example, there are a lot of music which express love or strongly criticized war and this kind of music could be highly popular among people all around the world. Secondly, internationally known singers can bring different people from around the… ادامه مطلب »

سلام نمونه رایتینک موزیک کجا نوشته شده ؟ با تشکر

Agree:
# music can affect peoples emotions
#internationally known singers
Disagree:
#limited music is meaningful for each regions
#some music can be annoying to group of people.

سلام. وقت بخیر
استفاده از کالوکیشن speak to somebody flawlessly درسته ؟
منظورم استفاده اس قید flawlessly هست. توی سایت فری کالوکیشن هیچ قیدی با این مضمون برای فعل speak نیامده.
اگر مجاز نیست پیشنهاد شما برای قید جایگزین چیست؟
باتشکر

سلام وقت بخیر
درس هشتم قسمت ریدینگ کتاب آفیشیال مربوط به آزمون جنرال هست.
من که آزمون آکادمیک میخوام بدم میتونم این درس را حذف کنم ؟

There are two maps of the center of the town of Islip that illustrate the present time and forecast development. (20words) The most noticeable item in the map is construction of the dual carriageway will be built instead of the main road. This road will be changed to a pedestrian which passes through the remaining shops and new facilities replaced old shops including bus station, shopping mall, car park and housing on the southern and northern side respectively. As a result of this development the size of the city will be bigger, and the northern countryside will be disappeared. (78words)… ادامه مطلب »

There have not been such pressure on the environment as now. Some believe the most important problem is the extinction of specific species, while others including me argue that there are some more important environmental challenges. This essay discusses both views. (41words) Some think that the disappearance of some species is the most important environmental challenge. First of all, as a result of the disappearance of any animals or plants the balance of food web changes. Because of the total loss of any animal or plant, food of some others will be restricted, so their life will be in danger.… ادامه مطلب »

The environment has never been under pressure it is now .there are those who maintain the most important issue is disappearance of certain species .other including me argue that challenges of other types are the most important ones .this essay covers both views. 42 Some people believe that nowadays the extinction of some species is the most important environmental issue .First of all , all species are interdependent on each other .if kinds of some plants and animals vanish,Others will loss their habitats and food sources .as an instance the rain forests are destroyed ,all animals that live in there… ادامه مطلب »

One can claim that no invention has drastically altered human life the way the internet has. Although humanity has greatly benefited from world wide web, it is downside should not be overlooked. This essay covers them both. 36 The advantages of internet are numerous. First of all, countless online service have made the life easier for hundreds of millions of people around the globe. Thanks to the internet it is possible to do banking, ordering a long list of goods or even pursue our education in the cyber space. Secondly, counterintuitively, users can generate revenue having a wide range of… ادامه مطلب »

The environment is in the pressure these days. Although, some people think the biggest ecological problem is the endangered species, others including me maintain that challenges of any other types are the major environmental issues in recent years. This essay will discuss both views. (44) There are some people think endangered species is the main environmental problem. First of all, the unique genes will be gone forever by the total extinction. This seemingly unimportant genome can be a treasure future generations since we do not have the technology and its possible applications. It may be too late when science is… ادامه مطلب »

الان چیزی که من راجبه delicate balance پیدا کردم این هست که بعدش between میاد. ولی ما در جمله between نداریم

سلام یشه برای مثال به من توضیح بدید این جمله را چطور انتظار دارید که پارافریز کنم. یعنی من جمله زیر را چطور عوض کنم و در رایتینگم بنویسم؟This seemingly unimportant genome can be a treasure future generations since we do not have the technology to use its potential applications.

There have not been such pressure on the environment as now. Some believe the most important problem is the extinction of specific species, while others including me argue that there are some more important environmental challenges. This essay discusses both views. (41words) Some think that the disappearance of some species is the most important environmental challenge. First of all, by disappearance of any animals or plants the balance of food chain and food web changes. All organisms need food to be alive and there is a connection in this case. Because of the total loss of any animal or plant,… ادامه مطلب »

. This seemingly unimportant genome can be a treasure future generations since we do not have the technology to use its potential applications.
به صورت زیر پارافیرز کردم
This evidently any trivial genome can be a treasure future generations because we do not have the technology and its possible applications.

when science is advanced enough to utilize these genes it might be too late because species will be extinct by then.
میتونم جمله پایین رو جایگزین کنم.
It may be too late when science is sufficiently advanced to use these genes because species will be extinct by then.
یا

If science is sufficiently advanced to use these genes, it may be too late because species will be extinct by then.

سلام این موارد را میتوان جایگزین یکدیگر استفاده کرد

Applicant possibilities / possible application / potential application / prospective application /

Loss of particular species = the disappearance of certain species= the endangered species

ایا یک معنی را میدهند؟

The main environment problem = the most important challenges = the major environmental issue = the main/ biggest ecological problem

سلام ایا اینها یک معنی را میدهند؟

سلام متن اسپیکینگ ها کجا هستن؟

چندتا ویس پارت 3 باید ضبط کنیم؟

سلام وقت بخیر
آیا میتوانم از پارافریز “extinction of species” استفاده کنم ؟
بجای loss of species که در صورت سوال آمده
یا نمونه disappearance of species
باسپاس

The chart shows the percentage of people who frequently consuming at fast food restaurants in America in three different years over a ten-year period. By far the highest level of consume fast food once a week or once or twice a month since about 30 percent of American people did that frequently during the year 2003. This figure is slightly lower than the 2006 and 2013 of around 5 percent. The several times a week and a few times annually the second highest level of fast food consumption were recorded, and the number fluctuated between 13 percent to 20 percent… ادامه مطلب »

Facing the difficulties is an indivisible part of the life. Some think it is better to accept the hardships in their lives than to fight for them, while others including me believe that every person must struggle against his or her problems. This essay will discuss both views. (47words) Some think it is the best approach to admit unfavorable situations in life. Firstly, people would suffer themselves physically and mentally when they are fighting against the hardships. Generally, in these challenges people have to work hardly, so they hurt their body. They must sit, stand or be awake extremely. Consequently,… ادامه مطلب »

سلام
استاد عبارت “reacting to difficulties” نه در لانگمن و نه در free collocation نیست. توی گوگل هم نتایج بی ربط مثل شیمی می آورد.
کالوکیشن encounter مناسب تر هست ؟

It is tempted to spend all time on it
internet is tempted
درست هست جمله من. ؟

The internet has changed significantly our world and lives for the recent half century .despite the great benefits have been for human societies , whereas there are disadvantages . this essay covers them both .33 There are the great benefits to using the internet for human societies . First of all ,it is possible for all people have access to extensive information . if you need information , you can easily access that information but in the past , something like that was not possible so you must have read a lot of books to find need information but now… ادامه مطلب »

The graph below illustrates the amount of electricity power produced by four main energy sources in France over a period of 32 years from 1980 to 2012. (27words) At the first, nuclear power produced about 70 TW-h of electricity, but this number soared dramatically till 1993. Then, the rate of growth became moderate, and peaked at 430 of TW-h in 2005. After this year, this number fluctuated at the same level of 410 TW-h to the end of period. (52words) In 1980, thermal energy generated about 120 TW-h of electricity, however this number fell to the level of 50 TW-h… ادامه مطلب »

However, the internet disadvantages are discussed on the other side

is this correct dear tutor?

ببخشید ترتیب جمله بندی در انگلیسی چجوریه؟
مثلا در زبان المانی داریم که مثلا بعد از فعل و فاعل و غیره مثلا قید زمان و سپس قید مکان داریم. میخوام بدونم در انگلیسی ترتیبش به چه شکلی هست

کل لب تاب و اینترنت با این کلمه ارور داد..

counterintuitively

کسی معنیشو داره بفرسته واسم.

ایا این جمله صحیح است؟؟؟

, there are millions of people have a simpler life caused the uncounted internet online services these days..

ایا این جمله بندی صحیح است؟
Internet has drastically altered human life while no other invention dose the way like that.

The internet has changed significantly our world and lives for the recent half century .despite the great benefits have been for human societies , whereas there are disadvantages . this essay covers them both .33 There are the great benefits to using the internet for human societies . First of all ,it is possible for all people have access to extensive information . if you need information , you can easily access that information but in the past , something like that was not possible so you must have read a lot of books to find need information but now… ادامه مطلب »

سلام خدمت شما : من میخواهم این جمله را بنویسم
no invention dose the way like that.
ایا برای invention از dose یا do استفاده کنم؟ چون هم countable هم uncountable نمی دونم چطور باید استفاده کنم

تانکیو

سلام استاد. اگه اشتباه نکنم شما فرمودین لغات ضروری Essential words for the ielts را یه جا جمع بندی کردین. میتونیم اونها را داشته باشیم؟

The chart below illustrates the time spoken by British residents on three main types of telephone calls between 1995 and 2002. (21 words) At the beginning, the time spent on calls by Local fixed lines was more than 70 billion minutes. This number surged constantly to a peak of 90 million minutes in 1999. Then it decreased significantly for the next 3 years and stayed at the same level that had started. (49words) In 1995, the number of minutes that were spoken by National and International line was about 38 million minutes. This number had a gradual increase all over… ادامه مطلب »

سلام.
وقت بخیر.
سوالی در باره سمپل کمبریج (تسک1 اخیر) دارم.
چرا در جمله آخر پاراگراف آخر از عبارت had narrowed استفاده کرد؟
منظورم علت past perfect چیست ؟
آیا به خاطر این هست که قبل از سال 2002(که همین سال هم زمان گذشته محسوب میشه) می باشد؟
“the gap between the three categories had narrowed considerably…”

سلام استاد من متن دوبار ويرايش مردم ولي پرانتزاش در جاهاي نامناسبي قرار ميگيره ولي دو word درسته

The bar chart illustrates the time spend by uk people on three types of telephone calls between 1995 and 2002. (20) In the 1995 rate of local fixed line calls were approximately 72 billon.local calls increased steadily from 72 billon in 1995 to about 90 billon in 1998 and then local fixed line calls fell from peak 90 billon in 1999 to under approximately 72 billon in 2002. national and international calls was less than 40 billon.it shows an gradual upwards trend over 7 years to the end of the period . The number of minutes spend on the mobile… ادامه مطلب »

The bar chart represents the time spent by UK citizen on three groups of telephone calls: local line, national and international fixed line and Mobile during the period from 1995 to 2002. In 1995, local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. then, this number increased gradually from about 70 to 90 billion in the years 1995 and 1998 respectively. After that, it reached a peak of 90 billion in 1999. Then, there were a considerable declined in time calls from around 85 to 75 billion between 2ooo and 2002. There were a moderate grew in National and International calls… ادامه مطلب »

The optimum proportion of young people in society can bring dividends for any countries. Although, some argue the more young people, the more earned benefits, other believe it has serious disadvantages for nations. Both of these views will be analyzed in this essay. (42) First of all, the most vital activities, which is needed significant effort and attention, in countries is done by young adults. It is due to the fact that, young people have much vigor and concentration; thus, they can execute their duties more proper. Moreover, agility on decision making is one of the outstanding characteristics of people… ادامه مطلب »

سلام. ببخشید در مورد رایتینگ task1 با موضوع time schoolchildren … چند سوال داشتم که پایین در زیر رایتینگ پرسیدم

سلام.
برای نمودارها جملات را باید مجهول بنویسیم ؟
مثلا the number had started یا
the number had been started
سپاس

Nowadays, demography of countries is a valuable data which has a serious outcomes. Although there are some advantages for a country which its young people are the dominant population, there are some disadvantages too. In this essay this issue will be examined and both positive and negative consequences of it will be discussed. (53words) Having a young population is a benefit for countries. Firstly, economy will be developed by having more workforce. Since young people are physically active, they can work more than older ones, and more suitable for the industry. As a result of this, the production will be… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays, majority of population in the most sosieties in the world make up of young people. Although, there are lots of benefits for countries with young population, but, the older population has some specific drawbacks. This essay will discuss both views.(41) Existence a large number of young citizens in the sosiety undoubtedly provide a lot of opportunities. Fist of all, in thus countries there are more work forces. Lots of jobs can be accupied by the young labour force in different fields. Each of them could made progress in their country’s economy. Second, the country with young adults has more… ادامه مطلب »

باسلام،استاد ميشه لطف كنيد آخرين رايتينگ را بررسي كنيد ممنونم

The bar chart gives information about how much time do 10-11 schoolchildren have spent on both TV and computer at home since 2000. Looking at the green line, it is easily apparent that the total spent time on TV has decreased since 2000 from about 21 hours per week to approximately 14 hours. This line illustrates that the time which was spent on TV by schoolchildren was stable until 2003. After that, it plummeted significantly around 14 hours per week in 2004. Afterwards, it has become constant until present time at this amount, with a noticeable fluctuation between 14 to… ادامه مطلب »

سلام. استاد من آموزش گرامر درس 21 ام را در سایت پیدا نکردم. برا این درس آموزش نیست؟

سلام ببخشید من رایتینگ task 2 این هفته رو تو تکالیف نمی بینم نباید بنویسیم؟