رایتینگ آیلتس Large Population Young Adults Older People Advantages

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رایتینگ آیلتس Large Population Young Adults Older People Advantages

رایتینگ آیلتس Large Population Young Adults Older People Advantages

رایتینگ آیلتس Large Population Young Adults Older People Advantages

نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای:

It is a fact that in several countries the young population outnumber the older citizens. I have reasons to believe that this situation creates both benefits and problems. (28 words)

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در این بخش یک نمونه پاسخ مناسب در سطح نمره 7 تا 7.5 توسط مدرس آیلتس برای این رایتینگ نوشته شده است.

Population makeup of each country offers hidden and obvious perils and opportunities. While there are advantages for a country when the number of its young people outnumber the older ones, there are also a downside to think of. In this essay I will examine the issue and discuss positive and negative consequences. (52 words)

A surge in the number of young citizens in a given society will undoubtedly create some opportunities. First of all, there will be more workforce for the industry and other sections of the country and this is a good news sine since these employees will be able to produce desired goods and services and consequently the economy will be more prosperous. Secondly, young people will not demand much medical care because they live the period in which their body can fight many disease-causing organisms or the illnesses of a chronic nature simply have not been yet surfaced. They need far less medical attention and related expenses and this gives the chance to the government to invest for more productive purposes. (120 words)

However this change can not be all good and there is a downside to think of. First of all, the experimental experience of young people who are about to get employed in different sections are inferior to that of those who live their forties and fifties. This means the overall delivery of the same result at different fields in simply unrealistic. Secondly, a glance a the economy of many developing and even developed parts of the world reveals that such changes poses the threat of unemployment. Economies simply fail to manage the ever growing percentage of young population and ultimately a sizable chunk will be rendered unemployed. (107 words)

In conclusion, I believe the fact that the population in some countries are made of more young citizens these days offers both benefits and disadvantages for those countries and needs to be exploited or dealt with by those societies. (39 words)

Total: 318 Words

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سمپل برای مقدمه

The age of the population has a profound effect on every aspect of life in each county. Although there are disadvantages when the percentage of younger citizens increases, the benefits of such situation seems to be more. This essay will discuss this point. (43 words)

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نمونه پاسخ ساده تر در سطح نمره 6.5 

این نمونه در سطح متوسطی از لغات، ترکیب های واژگان و ساختارهای دستوری قرار دارد اما به صورت کامل به سوال مطرح شده پاسخ داده و از نظر پیوستگی و انسجام جمله ها و یکپارچگی هر پاراگراف وضعیت کاملا مناسبی دارد:

While in some parts of the world old population is an issue, in other parts young population outnumber the old people. I believe there are both advantages and disadvantages to think about. (32 words)

There are benefits when the population of young people increases. First of all, the country can enjoy the presence of many people who are ready to learn and work for a number of years. This means the country can promote its economic situation and produce goods and services. Since young population do not ask for a very high salary and usually are ready to ask older people’s advice, they can learn quickly and apply whatever they experience. Secondly, young adult have more reasons to be happy and optimistic. They are healthy and engage in more social activities. As a result they look attractive to those around them and create a pleasant atmosphere at work. They are also admired for their success. (121 words)

There are, however, drawbacks when the younger people outnumber the old. First of all, more investment is required because more schools, factories and companies are needed to meet new demands of the society. The country needs to educate millions of people every year and employ them when they graduate. This needs a considerable fund from the government and effective planning. Secondly, unemployment may increase because in many developing countries the growth of young population is not carefully planned and governments are not able to use the added workforce. The lack of investment and poor managements in many countries means young people fail to find a decent job and remain jobless for many years. (113 words)

In conclusion, I believe a rise in young population will have both negative and positive effects in that society. (19 words)

Total = 290 words

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Large Number of young people
Advantages
# Less health care
# more productive

Disadvantages
# Low experience
# Less job opportunity