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1. Nowadays the use of social media such as Facebook, Twitter and so on is becoming more popular than one-on-one conversations in person. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience
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   It is a fact that the Internet technology has helped people in connecting with their relatives and friends without the boundaries of distance and cost. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the social media far outweigh its drawbacks.
   First of all, the Internet allows people to get in touch with their families, friends and relatives who live in other countries. For instance, some students go abroad to continue their education, or some people migrate to foreign countries to develop their professional works. By the Internet existence, they are able to interact and communicate with their families, even if they are limited by many miles away from their homes. And they can know about their families’ condition.
   On the other hand, people share their knowledge and information with a vast number of people around of the world. The Internet also makes communication easier, so people can recognize and find a lot of conditions and situations around in other countries.
   Despite all the reasons given above, it is an undeniable fact that, using this social media is addictive. A problem has occasionally been seen in people who overspend plenty of time in social networks, checking email, chatting, and so on. While they have necessary personal and professional work. Their performance had reduced in work; this may cause giving up their job.
   By way of conclusion, I believe that the Internet especially the social media has had a positive impact on the modern life style. In my opinion, people must manage between their leisure times and their work.

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2. Cambridge 8 test1 task2
   Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
   Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
   Some people are of the opinion that teaching children to become a good member is one of the parental duties, others, including me, argue that schools should prepare children for this purpose.
   On the one hand, a group of people put forward one main argument to support the idea that children should be educated by parents has great benefits. According to these people, children before entering to schools, they spend a vast amount of their time at home and they record all the things that are needed to become a good member. This means that children are growing beside their parents and they are nurtured by parents. Therefore, parents have a vital role in teaching children to make a good member for society. The parents ought to teach children for this.
   On the other hand, others, including me, state two plausible reasons due to which children are educated at schools to become a good and beneficial person for society. First of all, when children turn 7, they go to school. This means that because schoolchildren can’t distinguish between good and bad things, they need a good instruction. all teachers were educated by the scientific methods at university, if children are taught by teachers, they will presumably become a good person for society. Additionally, personality often is developed until 19 that is the age of schoolchild. In other words, children spend a vast amount of time at school, therefore, school has enormous impact on children. Therefore, the best way that children can learn, is schools.
   In conclusion, I have a deep conviction that school has the most important role in the society, which comprises people. Almost all people go to school and they spent a large amount of time at school and also teachers have been taught by the best methods that they prepare for teach children. Hence, children that are educated at schools become better citizens.
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3. Hi. Cambridge 8, Test 2, TASK 1:

   The pie charts provide information about the amount of spending by a certain school in Britain across 1981, 1991 and 2001.

   In 1981, 2% of the school budget was spent on teachers’ salaries, while this amount increased noticeably in 1991 to 50%. Moreover, in 2001 teachers’ salaries saw a decrease to 45%, still not its initial value. In addition to teachers, other school’s staff received 28% of the total schools budget in form of salary, but unlike teachers, this amount dropped in 1991 by 6% and lowered again in 2001 to 15%.

   In terms of equipment and resources, the school spent 15% of its total money and materials like books in 1981, and rose it to 20% in 1991. In 2001, this spending lowered by 11% reaching to 9%. Furniture and equipment category dedicated 15% of the school budget to itself in 1981, lowering to only 5% in 1991.However, unlike other categories, this spending witness an observable climb to 23% in 2001. Finally, insurance that started its share by just 2% in 1981, was increased to 3% one decade later, and approached to 8% in 2001.

   Overall, it is seen that most of the school spending has been dedicated to salaries. Besides, spending on furniture and equipment and also insurance were the only categories that faced an upward, considering the whole period.

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4. Hi. Cambridge 8, Test 2, Task 2
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   The emergence and advances of communication technologies were two groundbreaking events in the past century. With these advances, the way people interact with each other has changed greatly, that could be either positive, or negative in term of relationships. Either this effect has been positive or negative is going to be investigated in this essay.

   The apperance of internet and intranet has been most effective in the offices, where people used to be physically involved to fulfil what they wanted. Today, you can stay at your home and do most of your works over the internet without being physically engaged. For example, in the past you had to go to a bank to open an account, while today, you can do it at home over the internet. There is no doubt that this has improved the way works are done, but in terms of relationships, the fact that you have to stay at home and reduce your engagement with the society may lead you to a state of loneliness that is not desirable.

   Today, a lot of meetings between companies with long distances take place over the internet by programmes such as skype. This improvement in technology has caused a huge saving in the amount of money that used to be spent on transportation, accommodation and etc. Therefore, regarding companies with long distances, this is considered a positive incident, since the relationship between staffs in this case is not very important and physical involvement is not very essential.

   Internet and communication technology have had an undeniable impact of the way people communicate with their friends and families. In the past, if a family member were away, other members faced many hardships in reaching him, while today, it is a very simple process if you just have access to a cellphone or a computer. It does not matter where on earth you are, you can connect with everybody that you want very easily. However, this might have some negative effects too. This simplicity has easily caused people, even in close distances, to avoid meeting each other in person, and they prefere using virtual means to do so. This might be very destructive to humans’ different aspects of true happiness.

   To conclude, technology has changed people’s relationships greatly. Although there might be a lot of positive effects, the fact that we meet each other less face to face, is something that should be thought of, before it leads to serious social problems.

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5. Cambridge 11.Test 2,Task 2.
   Some people say that in all level of education, from primary
   schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough to learning practical skills.
   Do you agree or disagree?

   Some people believe that educational system dedicated much time to theoretical lessons compared with practical trainings. In my opinion, this is right idea and this system needs to be reformed.

   I agree that students have to spend most of their educational time just on studying lessons. The first reason is that, a glance at education curriculums in schools and universities shows that a sizable time of these programs are theories and practical trainings have just a small portion. I remember, when I was a teenager, I had to learn many lessons such as mathematics and physics in class and there were not any practical education for them. So for most part of our studying we just kept in mind complicated formulas without using them in our daily life or ever having information about what they can be used in life.

   One the other hand, young people have to work as an apprentice after obtaining qualifications. It reveals that their knowledge can not meet the expectations of work market. When a new graduated person is in search of finding a job in their major will cope with questions about their practical skills. This is a serious barrier to find a decent job. Therefore, lacking of sufficient applicable experiences completely is clear.

   To sum up, I think we can observe that students in all grades of education are forced to spend much time of their education to learn factual information. In the other words they have not educated enough for their futur life and work.

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6. Cambridge 10:
   In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
   What do you think are the main causes of crime?
   how can we deal with those causes?

   The crime rate has been on the rise for many years. In this essay the reasons behind this increase and measures which could be adopted to overcome this challenge will be discussed.

   One of the main reasons is that judicial systems are still relying on preventive laws that are out-dated. In other words, legislations which have been enforced by low enforcement organizations are not updated for many years to suits the new era, in particular crimes related to technologies. Computers and the internet are the marvels of this era but we can rarely find a legislation which is aimed to curb the negative ramifications of misusing them. To deal with cyber-crimes the congeress in every country must take a more active role by passing legislations that targest cyber-criminals.

   The second cause of the boom in crime rate could be explained by considering the economical inequality which has been steadily increasing over the past decades. For instance, a new study has revealed that wealth distribution has dramatically changed in favor of wealthier people over the last 15 years. It is also mentioned that 10% of people have control on almost 90% of wealth, which is extremely unjust. This difficulty could be to some extent dealt with by re-distribution of wealth by governments. This is therefore the responsibility of them to collect money from the rich by levy tax on their incomes and then invest this money to boost the standard of living of the poor.

   To sum up, the rules which have not been updated and the wealth which is not distributed fairly are the most significant reasons of the increase in crime rate in recent years. To tackle these major issues, passing new rules by parlimants and increase in government expenditure in under-developed areas are of vital importance.

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   1. The estimated score for this sample is 6.5

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7. It is evident that there are many academic
   subjects which are represented in educational system all around the world. While some people often argue that history should be considered as the most magnificent academic field for teaching students, other people have different views toward this mater. Although I believe that history is unavoidable course, other academic fields would be certainly more beneficial for students.
   On the one hand, history has a key role to play in education system, as some people assert that it should be necessary for schools and education ministry to pay more attention to this matter. Firstly, history is a basic element and identity for each country. Student could be familiar with information about their ancestors and culture that assist them in improving their country. Pupils are likely to acquire knowledge by studying many events which took place in the past, and they would take the best approach to handle some national crises due to their experience. Secondly, understanding of country’s historical background could be an effective tool to grow many positive characteristics inside teenagers. For example, students could learn kindness, unity, avoiding any tension from previous domestic wars between local people and various dynasties which these cause a country to lag behind the rest of the globe.
   On the other hand, in my personal view, the needs of people and diversity in their life styles have led to they have to study updated and state of the art subjects, especially in our fast changing universe. Each society needs many experts with different levels and widespread professional knowledge who could improve political, social and international status of their countries. In addition, there is a global competition between nations in all dimensions, therefore, science and technology based subject and teaching in schools and universities will pave the way of achieving prospects.
   In conclusion, although history course should not be eliminated from education schedules among schools or tertiary education, learning of other subjects are more vital.
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8. The bar chart reveals the amount of electricity that the ten major countries around the world produced and consumed in 2014. It is measured in billion kilo watt per hour. Overall, it can be seen that although the amount of the energy consumption and production for two countries; china and USA were by far more than other countries, there was almost the small difference between two criteria, consuming and producing electricity as a whole. Also Germany experienced a diverse pattern.
   China stood at the first of the list by manufacturing of electricity about 5,400 billion KWh per year, and around near 4330 million KWh consumption, whereas the figures for USA show the values of around 4100 and 3870 for two sections, respectively. In cases of Russia, japan and India, the values were near one fifth of china as people used around 1000kwh in Russia compared with India and japan that used two third less than Russia, 700 kwh and 800 kwh.
   The figures show the similar average of production and consumption of electricity for four nations: Canada, France, Brazil and Republic of Korea around 500Kwh and 450KWh. With regard to Germany as the just exception in the list, whereas people approximately used electricity more than that they can produce, the amount of manufactured energy went to 526 kwh in compared with 582kWh for consuming energy.

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9. Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities. Others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

   There are many students who have different abilities. Some think that schools should choose students according to their academic skills, while there are who believe that it is better students with a variety of abilities study together. In my opinion, I believe that students with different skills should be together.
   On the one hand, the option to select students based on their educational abilities is attractive for several reasons. Teaching students who have an equal academic level is easier. This means that, when a group of learners has an equal range of academic skills, the teacher can easily go to the next step because all students understand the lessons as well, and there is no need to repeat lessons just for a few students and can focus on specific issues, instead of, lessons with lower importance. Another reason is when the knowledge of students is at the same level, the time of the class never wastes because of those students who cannot realize the lesson as others.
   On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for pupils to study together. Firstly, children who are weak, have to study more and more and improve themselves to keep up with other classmates. Secondly, this diversity of skills can be useful to students because they can learn lessons together with a common language, and in between, these children learn about teamwork and social interactions. For example, when some students could not solve mathematical problems, other classmates who are cleverer can help weaker individuals to learn and solve practices. Finally, it is a competitive atmosphere for learning and student can become a successful person.
   In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their educational life and follow their career in the future if they study in schools where there are all kinds of students with different talents and skills.

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10. The provided chart illustrates the most significant difficulties that people encounters when moving to abroad. As is observed from the diagram the guys from the different age’s group would have various comments about the most significant problems in that situation.
    The youngest group aged 18-34 believes that dealing with financing issues is at the top of problem’s list. People aged 35-54 look at this issue more seriously but they say that sorting out healthcare is the most problematic thing. People over 55 years old think in a same way, too. All of them show the least notice to problems that related to finding schools for children wise the level of its importance is highest for the second group.
    Overall immigration is a process that causes same problems for almost all of the people but the priority of them is different based on their ages.

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11. Some people buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
    What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

    One of the common elements of everyone life as a child is to play with toys. Some people believe that they should provide their children with as many playthings as possible, but whether or not it is advantageous, is a moot point. In this essay, the benefits and drawbacks of having several toys to play with will be discussed.

    The main advantage is that children are entertained. This is because they have an array of options to choose from and thus never get bored to death. When children are enjoying their time, parents will also find the opportunity to spend some time on their personal interests, rather than their children. This is of vital importance because if they do not experience a joyful and ecstatic life, there will be a chance that they will start growing negative feelings towards their offspring, which may deteriorate the relationship between the members of a family.

    Many psychologists have repetitively mentioned that it is crucial for young people to be in touch and interact face-to-face with their peers, whereas having access to a multitude of toys may result in the exclusion of children from social interactions with friends and families. The reason is that if we want to have better personal and professional lives in the future, we must hone our social skills when we are younger and have the luxury of trial and error, which will not be acceptable when we are grown-up. For instance, a behavior which is considered to be unacceptable in our work may result that we get fired.

    To sum up, although playing with numerous toys might be useful for children as it provides them and their parents with enjoyable time, it might be detrimental to their communication skills and lack of this may have catastrophic consequences when they become adults.

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12. Cambridge 13, test3, task1
    Dear Sir or Madam,
    My name is Sofia James, and I live in the Main avenue, No4. I am writing to complain about my area’s situation in terms of pureness.
    At first, collecting the rubbish is one of the most important duties of a municipality, and I have to say that I pay tax for it, so a clean neighborhood is my right. In our local zone, all neighbors take their own trash at 9 pm. But, most of the time, those are never collected completely, and in the morning, I face with an unhappy view that a part of rubbish has remained in front of houses.
    As you know, this trash is a suitable palace for insects and rodent animals such as Fly and Mouse. In addition to this, they are a major source of some diseases.
    Due to these reasons, I want you to follow my request form the municipality to clean our neighborhood. In my opinion, they should hire some people who can individually clean locals at the end of the nights after garbage collection machines to sure that all rubbishes are collected and took away.
    I look forward to hearing from you, and I hope you accept my suggestion.
    Faithfully,
    Sonia James

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13. Cambridge 13, test3, task 2
    These days, due to the progress of technology there are an enormous of gadgets which people can select between them for watching a movie. While some people believe that we can see films on modern gadgets such as such phones, there are others who think to watch the movie in the cinema is more enjoyable, rather than other ways. In my honest opinion, I would argue that it is better to watch movies in the cinema. This essay will discuss both points of view.
    On the one hand, the option to watch a film on phones and somethings like that is attractive for several reasons. Many people want to see a movie with friends and sometimes have a struggle with some sequences of the movie which is impossible in a place like cinema because it is a major disturbance for others. In this way, they can watch it at home and have some fun through it. in addition to this, in several situations, persons would see an old film. This means that those cannot go to the cinema since cinemas do not show oldies. And the last point, play a film on phones and so on means that it is possible to see a movie any time and you are not depending on the cinema’s scheduled time-table.
    On the other hand, I believe that it is more enjoyable to watch a movie at the cinema. First and foremost, it is about the screen. The cinema screen is wide enough which give persons good feeling through watching the movie. Secondly, the cinema provides Dolby and stereo sound and people could easily imagine themselves in locations. this feature is just happening in the cinema hall. Finally, the cinema has an impact atmosphere and lets persons share their feeling together in some scenes of the movie. For example, when you see a funny scene, you can laugh loud with others and transfer your emotions which you could not find it in your phone or laptop.
    For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that watching a movie in the cinema is more likely to be fascinating if you care about what you watch.

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14. Cambridge 13) test 2) task 1 ) The bar chart compares the proportion of families who owned a house and tenants in England and Wales during a period of 93 years. Overall, the number of households having their own houses increased significantly during this time scale.
    Initially, in 1918, approximately more than three-quarter of families couldn’t afford to buy a house. This proportion dipped into just below 70% during the next 28 years and stayed steady until 1953. A noticeable drop in percentage cause this number to be accounted for 60% more and less, in 1961. In 1971, however, the figure of families who were able to purchase a house was as equal as families who were tenants. This continuous scenario during the next 40 years, caused house owners to outnumber the house renters and almost 70% of families from England and Wales were successful in attaining a house. Eventually, a slight decrease made this percentage to be plunged into nearly 63%.

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15. levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. what are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions.

    In various cities around the world, levels of youth crime are rising. While some advocate view that need seriously attention to reasons for why occur this problem, the other insist that find significantly solutions are more important than reasons. This assay will examine both sides of the debate.

    Firstly, unfortunately these days young people are encouraging to find easy ways to achieve money. For example they try illegal activities like smuggling and join organized crime. By doing this, increasing crime rate between them more and more. In addition, some of them do not have appropriate opportunities to study at university and find job. This is because, in modern life style the education fee is high and the parents rarely can supporting their children to continue education. Consequently, the person without any educational and job specialty can not find legal job to support himself and even family. So leads to mugging, burglary, robbery and smuggling at night clubs or parks with another young persons.

    There are two main measures. In the first place, government play important role in these cities. They have to creating new job opportunities to youth people with high salary. For example establishing society association to find their talents. As a result, occur two phenomenon: growing society economic and decreasing offence rate. A further step is declining education fee at universities and planning to give scholarship for poor persons. For example according to new survey from low crime rate countries, training system is one off the effective ways to control youth future life.

    In conclusion, crime is a kind of epidemic problem in these days. Poverty, comfort and absorb easy ways to earning money are popular reasons to do. Moreover family and government have to devote more attention to education.

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16. Ielts 7 writing task 1 page 101
    The four chart here illustrate how much units of electricity by fuel produced in two country including Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000.
    Overall, at the beginning of the period to the end in Australia, coal was the most significant segment of electricity production whereas nuclear power became the largest part of total production in France over time.

    Coal produce which accounted for 50 units of 100 units in Australia in the first period (1980) with 170 units growth in total production in the year 2000, its increased to 130 units, and this increasing was involve hydro power too, which from 20 units in 1980 increased to 36 units in 2000. In 1980 natural gas and oil were at 20 and 10 units respectively, and both decreased by 2 and 2 units in 200.

    France with having one element (nuclear power) to Australia was able to achieve from 90 units in 1980 to 180 units in 2000, which in this period nuclear power and oil increased from 15 to 126 units and from 20 to 25 units respectively. Natural gas and hydro power comprised 25 and 5 units respectively in 1980, fell to 2 and 2 units in 2000, and coal remained constant throughout the period.

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17. Cambridge 12 – General – Test 8

    Local stores appear to be less trendy in recent years as many prefer shopping in huge, fancy malls and shopping centers. I believe that this is a negative trend and the principal reasons for this argument are as follows.

    Local shops have been supplying needs of neighborhoods for years and many of them have turned into family businesses which are managed by immediate members of a family – in some occasions- for several generations. These newly boomed malls are acting as a hamper for them to gain profit which would lead to be bankrupted, and consequently many families could lose their job and business. This unemployment does not merely impact individuals or families, but also it is detrimental for the whole society since it may bring societal issues as well as economic challenges.

    Another reason is that this approach to shopping requires driving for miles which seems to be highly disadvantageous. First of all, it adds millions tonnes of carbon to atmosphere aiding destruction of Ozone layer and exacerbating global warming. Secondly, it causes traffic congestion s resulting in wasting huge amount of people’s time and energy – that could be spent on efficient activities – and burning fuel to exceed. Finally, it would uplift sedentary lifestyle among families which is considered to be source of various health issues such as obesity and cardiovascular ailments. While they used to walk a distance to purchase their needs, now they merely sit and drive to the shopping center.

    By way of conclusion, I once again, reaffirm my position that disappearing of local businesses and retail outlets is an inappropriate development given the fact that it fosters many issues such as unemployment and poor health.

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18. Cambridge 12, Academic, test 7, task 2
    People have different views about spending money on build new railways in order to have brisk trains between cities or developing public transports across cities. While there are some benefits to manufacturing fast railways, I believe that improving public transports in cities are much more important.

    Nowadays, people use more trains to travel between cities. In this regard, we need to make prompt trains in order to have less waste of time. Also, the old railways might lead to accidents, so they should be improved. In addition, people prefer to use trains instead of plains as they are more safe, and they can enjoy their trip while having their coffee and looking at the beautiful scenery. Last but not least, trains do not pollute the environment like cars.

    Public transports in cities have a key role in transferring people. Firstly, people use them to work or university or college. Secondly, the more public transports exist across the city, the less personal cars are seen. As a result, the rate of pollution will be decreased. Thirdly, the old public transports have a high risk of collisions, so we should spend money to developed them. Finally, if the number of modern public transports high, waste of time will be reduced.

    In conclusion, although fast trains play a vital role in transferring between cities, the function of public transport among cities are more significant.

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19. Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    Today, due to industrialization and overpopulation, all nations have to struggle with a lot of issues from concern about the extinction of specific flora and fauna to some others like pollution or even congestion. While it is argued that the former would be the most vital problem, others say we should consider other important phenomena which more related to humankind. Personally speaking, both views have something to concern. In this essay, I will explain how those issues would have nearly the same consequences.

    To begin with, the main reason why environmentalists try to raise awareness of people about the extinction of some species is that mankind like any creature has a unique place in the food chain. Primarily, the food chain is all about the interconnectedness between hunters and prey. What this means is that, if some animals did not exist in the cycle, everything could go wrong. For example, the existence of humans heavily depends on crops and meats. Largely thanks to insects, crops can grow and breed. As well as this, many livestock is fed with vegetables. Because of this cycle, fresh commodities and meats can be produced for society’s need.

    On the other hand, some people more often say that many cities already have a demanding problem with their traffic congestion and air pollution. Moreover, they say if we were not able to tackle such a problematic situation, the world slid into emptiness. Mainly this trend traced back to overpopulation and consumerism. Nowadays, people tend to, for instance, use their cars rather than using public transport. In addition to that, because of consumerism, household cast-offs have been increasing dramatically over the last decades.

    In conclusion, although it is thought losing species would affect humankind’s existence, it is also argued pollution in megacities would be harmful than the distinction of animals. To my mind, the probability of the existence of man equally relies on both views.
    [Cambridge Ielts 14 Academic, Test 2, Task 2]

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20. Cambridge 12, test5: Task 1
    Your work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
    Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment
    In your letter
    . describe the problem with the equioment
    . explain how this problem is affecting your work
    . say what you want the shop or company to do

    Dear Sir/Madam,
    I am writing this letter in order to explain the problem with the equipment that I purchased from your store recently. I have a homemade cooking job and because of my work, I have bought a brand-new food processor from your shop on 17th of June, receipt number: 23456.
    I told your representative that I required a powerful and dependable blender as I would like to use it several times on a weekly basic. He assured me that it is the best model of the market. However, as soon as I took it to start my work malfunctions appeared.
    First of all, I noticed that safety lock of it demanded applying a great force. I had to asked my husband for help. Furthermore, I discovered another major problem. I put some apples and peers in it and pushed the ‘start’ button. It started working but suddenly got stuck and I was unable to turn it on again.
    Since I have purchased this appliance on your employer’s advice and it also is under warranty, I feel I am entitled to ask for it to be replaced of a full refund. I have decided that I would like to return it.
    I can contacted at email address or phone number provided.
    I appreciate your prompte response to this matter.
    Your faithfully,
    M. John.

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21. Cambridge 10 – test 4- task 2:
    Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
    Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
    Whether taking admission fee from people or not have become a controversial issue in the society. I strongly believe that benefits of this policy are completely more than its drawbacks.
    There is not any denying viewpoint about preferring of public to utilize from museums freely. Indeed, setting charges to visit these places usually cause some people to choose other options which do not require admission cost. As a result, the number of visitors maybe remarkably less than free museums. Specially when the entrance fee is very expensive. In addition, people may feel unsatisfaction if they have cost tremendously, because they have strict expectations while they know a considerable budget have collected for that museum.
    However, there are spectacular advantages in this plan. First of all, museums would have been perfectly facilitated if they gained enough money as a powerful agent. For example, they can add several kinds of amusing equipment for teenagers and children, or consider some new places with modern constructions to attract new visitors from society. Furthermore, setting a price for admission can make museums as brilliant destinations for investment. Consequently, the money flow can develop their quality situation even more, and many people can achieve a suitable profit from their contributions. Finally, this policy may increase the number of museums that will help society civilization.
    In conclusion, I would argue that how benefits of assigning entrance charge exceed its demerits. Although a lot of people have probably no consent about that, it can have amazing advantages for itself, people and society.

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22. Book 13- test3
    Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    Nowadays, students taking an array of subjects in the schools rather than previous. There are some people who think that one of the most significant subjects in school is History, others argue that at the moment there are lessons, more considerable for students like Science and Technology. I agree with the former argument and in this essay, I will explore both views with my opinion.

    On the one hand, in some people’s minds learning the History of their own country seems to be an indisputable affair that most of the children should take in through their school age. Having a lot of positive things, this subject could teach to everybody. In addition, those people believe that figuring out the History of their country is an essential work that should not be neglected and this thing could help individuals to introduce their country and culture to foreigners in the best way. For instance, through my country, having some heroes like Takhti and Rezazadeh or some famous poets like Ferdosi and Hafez and moreover knowing about them in details have been considered as a good affair and many students are encouraged to learn.

    On the other hand, knowing about state-of-the-art Technology and Science are two marketable subjects between the vast majority of parents and students. However taking in History in schools could help students to notice some important historical events, being a master of modern technology and Science appears to be a different matter. what could result in introducing your country and your abilities to other countries in the best way is just doing up-to-date and developed affairs based on Technology and Science. Take Bill Gates for example; he could manufacture marketable products that people all pronounce him because of his brilliant mind in the use of Technology. From this point of view, I agree that Technology and Science are the necessity of current life and I think that these subjects could not compare with the historical one.

    In conclusion, in today’s world, most people place a premium on Technology and Science and these two things could help individuals to progress; so these should be considered as an important subject in schools.

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23. book14-test3
    Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together

    To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    By and large, it is heard and asserted that the Musical world is more likely to unify diverse individuals who have different tastes either in terms of believes and costumes or ages. Similarly, I strongly agree with this view and I will explain some reasons in the following.

    Desiring to experience a similar music genre, which is being led by a famous group, might bring a vast majority of people in the same way together. That is to say, playing a special kind of music, renowned group who is followed by a myriad of individuals broadcast live music on social media such as Instagram. Seeing these fascinating kinds of music on Instagram, the people are bound to pursue and listen to a similar music band so as to show their sense of support. Take Shajaryan who is a popular traditional singer as an example; once he posts a short clip of himself and his majestic group, his followers, worshiping him, are highly likely to imitate him by buying an interesting in the same way, thus, resulting in following him by people of different cultures and ages.

    Furthermore, the psychological aspects of music in gathering people within different festivals and ceremonies should not be by no means neglected. almost all people, from their early ages of youth, have experienced a wedding ceremony in which a number of different pieces of music played which it is more likely to attract different tastes. In other words, within such spectacular event people of different cultures and ages are brought together, as a costume, in order to not only congratulate to bride and groom but also to have some nice and happy time for dancing and listening. Meanwhile, although people of different tastes are out there, listening and dancing with music being played might make the majority of those diversities eliminated or at least reduced. having said that, this trend and idea will probably have a domino effect on everyone, resulting in unifying individuals.

    In conclusion, I strongly believe music world play a significant role in gathering people of different cultures and ages in the same way on the basis of desiring to experience a similar music genre and its psychological nature.

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24. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
    Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
    Some people claim that learning a foreign language at the very first round of school have better results than in their secondary of it.I totally agree with given idea and I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.
    To begin with,let us take a look at the most recent studies experts have done about the importance of learning a foreign language at young age. They have came to the conclusion that young children showcase better performance at memorizing new words rather than their fellow friends in secondary school. This indicates that children are more capable of learning new unheard words and that leads them to be easily learned .
    In addition, they can learn word’s pronunciation easier and more naturally than older children. They do not need to put lots of efforts on learning grammatical structures of sentences and to put it simply, they become almost like native speakers. To show an example, we can refer to many bilingual children who for different reasons have to learn two or some times more languages from the day one they born; they do not show any difficulty to communicate in different languages they know and they can easily switch it to another one .
    To sum up, learning a language different than your mother one can indeed be very difficult , but researches show that doing it while you are child, can be a whole different story. I could not agree more that how crucial it is to learn a new language in young age.

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25. Today we are going to analyze Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and compare how many of these tourists went to Australia.
    First chart is exhibiting numbers of Japanese traveled abroad. As you see there is an increasing in slope which means by passing time,  Japanese travel growth and in 1995 most traveler by 16 millions in a year.
    The second chart is exhibiting percentage of Japanese passenger who traveled to Australia. This chart has almost increasing slope except of two years in 1988 and 1993 that has a lesser amount of Japanese traveler to Australia compare to their last year. The range of this chart is between 2 to a bite more than 6 percentage, starting on 2 percent and ending on exact 6 percent.
    Although Japanese abroad passenger increase in 1989 compare to 1988 but number of travel to Australia decreased.
    The end I appreciate for your attention.

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27. The table below shows the percentage of journey by different means in 4 countries and the bar
    graph shows the reasons for Canadian people to use a car to reach their workplace.
    Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
    comparisons where relevant.
    ———

    The given table compares the percentage of different transport means in four countries, and the
    bar chart shows the reason behind the fact that why commuters prefer to use cars as the most
    common way of transport.
    As can be viewed from the table, the private vehicle stands at the top of preferences. Car usage,
    as the most popular one, varies between 90 % for Canada users and 47% for Netherland users.
    According to the presented data, Nederland has the most bicycle riders than in other cases. 26%
    of people would rather bicycle while this figure for others is less than 3 %.
    The bar chart shows that the lack of alternative transport facilities is the conspicuous reason for
    the high rate of car usage, and the second one can be defined as the need for reaching the
    workplace. About 22% believe that using cars would be more convenient than other ways of
    transport.

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28. Nowadays, both obesity and unhealthy manner of living are the results of the fast pace of the modern lifestyle. Almost a large number of people are suffering from psychological and physical disorders resulting from an unhealthy schedule of their regular activities. This issue is viewed and analyzed from several prospectives in the following paragraphs.
    Individuals from various ranges of ageing and occupations, male or female are obliged by some daily activates. Different professions in today society might impose us different shapes of difficulties. For example, labours are mostly doing works with severe physical actions, and designers are always in the office and behind their work-table. It is proved that the higher rate of physical activity, the healthiest your body is, and some argue that unfitness comes from motionlessness.
    The implications of the abovementioned life-manner will gradually endanger individuals’ healthiness, and over time, it not only affects private lives but spoils the wellbeing of the elder in the approaching future. While the government and authorities are always showing their concerns about this issue, nobody can witness any effective measures taken by governmental organizations.
    According to each individuals’ condition, it should be suggested that they keep doing exercising and pick a healthy diet in their daily plan.
    Based on the mentioned facts, one can conclude an appropriate managing plan for work out and eating would significantly impact the unwanted outcome of fast-paced modern lifestyle.

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29. Living constant life without any charge is preferred by some people, while, others consider changes a positive decision. In my opinion, people should not follow a continual way of life and they should create new events in their own life.

    On the one hand, it is maintained by some that people should be adventurous in their life and I agree. To start with, changes not only make men brave but also open doors for them. To put it another way, changes give chance to human being to flourish their talents. Also, they will be capable of grasping various skills which support them in their job prospects. By way of illustration, employers tend to recruit new job seekers who have been heavily loaded with different domains, irrespective of their nationalities and races. Furthermore, some people embrace new lifestyle, fashion and diet. These variations turn into updated one and it helps them to live with prospect and love. Therefore, these individuals will be successful in their entire life.

    On the other hand, it may be claimed by others that changes are neither a positive matter nor a useful decision. To begin, many people create comfort zone at workplace, also, their position have not changed for over ten years. This group believes that if they stay in their career for long time, they obtain state-of-the-art techniques and even they keep abreast of latest skills in that occupation. Moreover, some people have offspring who study either in elementary schools or secondary schools. These people might not change their occupations and their cities at expense of their children’s academic failure. For this reason, relocation of residence has a devastating impact on children’s lessons ranging from 7 to 11 years old.

    The main conclusion to be drawn from this discussion is that although, the group of people enable constant life with no serious changes, I believe that it is an essential approach to revolutionize our life.

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30. do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?

    (agree(advantages
    # cars are comfortable especially private cars
    # to be on time at work

    (disagree( disadvantages
    # traffic jam , noise pollution
    # air pollution

    nowadays , people easily commute to other place. although , many of vehicles have some benefit and particularly a few negative effects in our life . this essay will dicuss about these views.

    car is one of the most common transportation . first of all , this vehicle has few advantages . when people go to travel they can feel better particularly by private car because of this transportation system is very comfortable and especially we can arrive to destination safe and sound . second of all , today every person have different kinds of prefession or career and also many of those people are employed in office , company , factory and other organization , this vehicle cause people to be on time at work.

    insted of advantages , car had a number of disadvantages. first of all , the majority of cars consumer gasoline and petrol, this fules make air pollution and also some problems such as diseasese , athma , sort of cancers. by the way , this issue has affected on habitate animals and also the biggest problem is divestating of zonee layer. second of all , an other disadvantage is noise pollution because this sound is very boring and annoying particularly in the evening , at the time traffic congestion is very high and many of main streets are much crowded.

    in conclusion , i think when people go to work if they use bicycle air pollution will decrease and diseases will too, and also when people commute to other countries or big cities the can use own car.

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31. Nowadays, the proportion of the youth has enhance over the gray Population In many regions. this procedure has both negative and positive Impacts; however, The benefits of having young inhabitants are much more than its drawbacks.
    First of all young population means posing a great number of laborer in job market. They are full of hopes and ambitious that encourage them to achieve various experts and a skills enable them to move the industry wheel of the country. Secondly young dwellers are motivate and they tend to enter new technologies into different field Ranging from industry to agriculture to education. This viewpoint would lead to changing individuals lifestyle and make the method of living more comfortable. Finally the rate of fertility is very important for any country and young couple are able to meet the significant requirement.
    On the other hand older citizen need to nursing to be able to perform daily daily routines. The nursing expenses could be considered as a numerous financial burden for the government and work forces. This age ranges are not capable at improve national gross production as well. Furthermore, people in the retirement age have a wide righty of healthcare expenses too. Since a lot of tough tax rules should be imposed to fulfill this source of cost and put young people under pressure.
    In conclusion, having the great rate of young population over the older could be noted as a positive aspect because the advantages of having young country outweigh it’s disadvantages

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32. Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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    Although a growing number of people feel that the primary environmental problems are the existing low verity of creatures, it is argued by some that the other problems such as global warming are more important compared with it. I go along with the view that several issues results in environmental problems.
    On the one hand, a group of people put forward a main argument to support the idea that the main cause of the environmental problems is that the number of animals and plants has been decreasing. Environmentalists believe that ecosystem has strongly linked to all the creatures. This means that from an environmental point of view, being wide range of creatures such as several kind of plants, animals and so on plays a vital role in the environmental balance, which means that the spoiling environment is thought to have been brought by reducing the numbers of endangered animals and plants.
    On the other hand, others, including myself, are of the opinion that numerous reasons which cause irreparable damage to the environment have been identified. Global warming have a significant impact on our planet. This may lead to rising temperatures which cause melting of the polar ice cap, droughts and firing. Human activity must have been the first factor in global warming discussion.
    In conclusion, these days, protection of environment has been the main discussion around the world. However it is often thought that the extinction of plants and animals is the main issues for conserving environment, others claim that there are other considerable problems relating human activities. It seems to me that human activity is the decisive factor about destroying environment in the long run.

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33. In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.
    Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

    It is true that more people tend to live alone instead of living with family members. In my opinion, living alone has both positive and negative effects.

    On the one hand, there are many positive aspects to defend the idea of living alone. Firstly, people can be more concentrated on their works, and will be able to gain new skills. For example, I myself, learnt to play new music instrument by living alone. Secondly, you will be able to do whatever you want freely without disturbing others. You would not have any difficulties with watching your favorite movies or programs as people in a shared house have, or you can dress in a way that you are convenient. Finally, I have known many international students studying abroad, and they got prepared to live miles away from their hometown by living alone at their home country.

    On the other hand, living alone may bring some difficulties. First of all, it is hard to pay the rent and bills alone. Housing is becoming more expensive each year at metropolitan areas, and unshared houses would not be a reasonable idea for people earning mid-range salaries. In addition, since it is tough to work in and out of house, people living alone always complain about difficulties that be brought by it. For instance, you need to cook dinner every night, and therefore wash the dishes yourself. Besides, although it can contribute people to be focused on their jobs, it also may lead to major depressions and anxieties in some cases.

    In conclusion, while there are many positive and negative developments in it, it completely depends on individual’s personal qualities to choose their path to live alone or not.

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34. Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    People have differing view with regard to the question of who should discipline children in order for them to be good members, parents or teachers? While the role teachers play in upbringing is very important, I would argue that family is even more important in teaching children how to behave well.
    There are various reasons why people believe that schools should discipline children to be nice people in the future. Firstly, they may assert teachers must maintain discipline in their classrooms. Secondly, teachers are qualified in different discipline techniques, for example they are trained in advanced levels how to treat teenagers, psychologically. Finally, if teachers do not educate a naughty child at school, other children will suffer from the disruption. Moreover, it could have a negative impact on other pupils and it spreads misbehaving such as smoking, getting drug addicts, being aggressive.
    In spite of these arguments, I believe that children should be taught behave well by their parents, because parents spending much time with their children, they know them better and deeper than teachers. Also, parents might be able to understand reasons behind bad behavior. In addition, parents need to be responsible for their child’s conduct at home and they must know the consequences of their actions. In other words, in my opinion, parents are ultimate responsible for upbringing of their children.
    In conclusion, while schools can help to educate children to have nice personality and become good figures in society, I think that parents have even more important role in this sense.

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35. Essay

    Topic: some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

    Task:

    Environmental issues have a profound impact on the earth.It is believed that the major problem is loss of special species of plants and also animals.However, others say there are more crucial factors.This essay will discuss both views.

    On one hand, losing some plants and animals would be dangerous for the ecosystem.Not only does this problem damage the vegetation, but also it causes tremendous changes to food chains.In addition, according to one university research lack of important species will cause irreparable issues in the long run.Overall , this should be taken seriously to save the environment from the possible dangers.

    On the other hand, it is said that there are more detrimental environmental concerns that need to be taken into account.For instance, climate change is a big cause for concern.Basically the consequences are more crucial including melting icebergs, poor harvest, food shortages and…According to scientific findings problems affected by this change would be way more harmful.In short, changes in climate could be one of the main environmental problems that require precise attention and action.

    In conclusion, this essay discussed the possible problems to the environment.In my opinion climate change is far more essential compared to others and urgent actions should be taken by the people and authorities to avoid disasters.

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36. Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarictic. What are benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

    Nowadays we are seeing that tourist love to go to places with unsuitable conditions like Sahara Desert or Antactic. In this essay I will talk about this issue that, what is the pros and cons of going to this places?
    Actually there are several items that people like to do. First of all they want to gain more experience which help them to improve their knowledge of different kind of places even it has bad conditions, moreover some people feels more relaxed in this situations due to be alone, otherwise, they get more energy, for instance I know someone who visit the deserts twice a year and do yoga and meditation. She always says that she feels more energetic and also more comfortable.
    On the other hand there is a different part of view about visit the bad conditions situations. People are more frightened of going to this kind of places. They have plenty of reasons such as, what if they get in problem in bad conditions and there is nobody to help them and also you may be face with harmful animals in deserts. As we know the deserts are too hot and you may get out of water, although the tourist should bring essential tools with themselves, but they may be run out of them.
    To sum up, it is a good idea to go to places that has attractions for tourists but they have to bring sufficient food and equipment, in addition provide their tour for just a few days.

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37. Cambridge ielts test 1 task 2

    People have different views on the responsible party for teaching children
    on how to be reliable citizens. I believe that even though the role of parents is absolutely undeniable, the schools are much more successful in doing so.
    some people would argue that it’s parents who should educate their children in order to become a good member of the society. To begin with, children spend most of their time with their parents, particularly at the early stages of life when the major behavioral attitudes, including those related to the society, are implemented in their personality resulting in children being influenced mainly and mostly by them. Moreover, parents can take a variety of measures to discipline their children as they are the main decision makers and fewer people would interfere with their methods. Also, children would eventually realize that these lessons are solely out of their parents’ good intentions and as a result they tend to pay more attention to them.
    Although, others might think it’s a school duty to prepare children to take part in a society as a valuable member. Because, from the beginning of school days, in a kindergarten, to the last day of higher education, we are dealing with other people, acting as a member of a small and mostly likeminded society. Which provides the optimum situation to educate children in this matter. Furthermore, schools have a more strict and firm hand on regulations which children are expected to obey, by benefiting from the hierarchy that I believe is a key element in disciplining children.
    In conclusion, I argue that if schools step forward toward teaching children the value of being a respected member of the society, the result will surely be more satisfactory

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          Subject: Invitation for joint cooperation in Iran and Turkey

          Respectfully, following the negotiation with Mr…. regarding the transportation of export products, including all types of petrochemical, steel products, etc., to the countries of the CIS, Turkey, and Europe, hereby Rahian Company… under the registration number….in TTC under the registration number … in Turkey announces its readi Iran andness and willingness to cooperate with that respected group.
          It is worth mentioning that this company, relying on its executive capacities, experienced and expert manpower, and the valuable experience of its management team, which is the result of several years of continuous activity in the field of transporting all kinds of chemical, petrochemical, and basic industries of the country, has succeeded so far. More than 100 thousand tons of the country’s export products have been transported to their target markets, especially Turkey and Europe.
          Therefore, all the above-mentioned matters and capacities available in the country, the capabilities of the EXL group as well as the experience and specialized knowledge of this company,
          it is hoped that the cooperation will be an effective step in improving the business and profitability of both companies.
          Thank you in advance for your assistance and cooperation

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39. Cambridge Practice Test For IELTS 1
    Test 1 – Writing Task 1

    Every person has a specific motivation for applying to an educational programme. According to the bar chart, these motifs can be categorised into two main classes: relating to one’s occupation and personal attitudes.
    The main reasons for people to pursue their education or their personal interest in the subject and to receive a degree with 40% and 38%, respectively. In addition, the vocational motifs such as becoming better in the current occupation, with 22%, increasing the chances of getting promotion, with 20%, and having more flexibility to change one’s job, with 12%, are other factors for applying to educational programmes. Finally, the personal passion for exploring new things and brooding social interactions or other reasons for people to try educational programmes, with 20% and 9%, respectively.
    Now the question is how should the price of programmes be paid? Three resources are assumed to be used to pay this cost: taxpayers, the student himself, and the employers. According to the pie chart, people believe that the student himself should be responsible for 40% of the expenses, while the major quata should be paid through taxes, 25%, plus the remained 35% which can be provided by the institutions where the students are currently working at.

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40. Cambridge ielts 7 – test 1 – task 1
    The table compares three different categories of people expenditure in five different countries in the year 2002.
    As the table illustrates, it is clear that food, drinks and tobacco category has the majority of the money spent between the other elements. It is also visible that leisure and education has a quite negligible amount of proportion in total spending.
    The table shows that turkey has the highest proportion in the first category with 32.14% followed by Ireland, Spain, Italy and Sweden respectively. But in clothing row, we can see that Italian people have a higher amount of spending with 9% of their total expenditure.
    Looking through the last row, the minority of consumers money is spent on leisure and education and again, Turkey is the leader with 4.35% proportion while Spain has approximately 2% of the total amount. Sweden and Italy are almost the same with nearly 3.2% and there is Ireland with 2.21%.

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41. Some people think that young people can learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others argue that
    people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
    People are calling into question the benefits of digital games. While some advocate that youth’s skills
    might improve by playing electronic games, others dismiss them as a wasting time. Both sides of the
    argument present rational ideas, which will be elaborated.
    On the one hand, some assert that the benefits accruing from playing video games are by no means
    negligible. To begin with, digital games would improve people’s abilities and skills. That is to say,
    playing electronic games, youth should not only concentrate on the game but also do some multitasking
    actions such as running, firing and reloading. In this term, adolescent’s concentration and multitasking
    skills might be improved by playing video games. Moreover, the daily-life stress would be controlled
    easily by people who playing computer games. This means that being stressful, most of the games
    would help children to control their stress in a convenient way.
    On the other hand, Others put forward the argument that computer-based games would waste young
    people’s time. The most compelling reason is that youth would loose their social skills. In other words,
    the more the young people play video games, the more they stay at home. More specifically, staying at
    home to play digital games, youth would become indoor person rather than interact with their peers. A
    good illustration of this is social communication problem which today is one of the most problems
    beyond children. Furthermore, an enormous advantages can be taken by physical games rather than
    logical games. Take volleyball game which involves a lot of body activities as an example; these
    physical-based games would help children from a lot of obesity disasters.
    To conclude, There are logical points in both sides, However, I am of the opinion that children should
    not waste their time by digital games. This is mainly because they might suffer from some obesity
    problems and loose their social skills

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42. Nowadays, traffic congestion and pollution are the worst public intricate questions. Admittedly, increasing the price of petrol is a good way to release from this heavy tedious traffic and pollution. However, some stratum won’t have any provision to provide their daily expenses.
    One of the main causes of this important issue is using private vehicles. If the people get the perception of using public transportation, we will have no more poisonous gas in the atmosphere I think increasing the price of petrol has some faults in some cases. For instance, some jobs will possess in this decision. Taxis include this group. When the price of petrol increases, the taxi driver’s expense increase, too. So, we have to pay more money to travel by taxi.
    Actually, there are more options which are more effective and convenient to reduce pollution.Many people would use public transportations like buses, trains, bicycles and etc. instead of using their own cars for short destinations. After a period of time, people will use their cars as less as possible. but many small industries and small businesses would find it hard to run their businesses.
    To conclude, raising the cost of petrol alone will not give the desired result. However, developing the use of public transportations and its benefits will help to overcome the problem of traffic jams. Also, producing electric vehicles will reduce pollution to a great extent.

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43. Cam 13 test 2 task 2
    A number of individuals think that we have loads of choices these days. I strongly agree with this view because of the confusion, this variety of choices leads to.
    There is a lot of variety in everything today rather than before, which I think makes people confused while deciding. For example when a person wants to buy a jacket, he encounters numerous different colors , materials and styles. Therefore, he has to spend much time comparing them and deciding which one to buy. This process wastes a lot of his time. Furthermore, too much variety increases consumerism because it makes people confused so they are not able to choose between various things, which , in many cases, results in buying them all. for instance when a lady needs just one bag but she cannot choose between two beautiful bags, she is quite likely to buy them both.
    some may argue that having a lot of choices is good because it gives people the opportunity to select the best in terms of quality and price. However, a large number of these choices actually has the same quality and price,so it is just confusing and useless.
    in conclusion I believe having too many choices is not good because of the waste of time and increasing the consumerism.

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44. Writing Task2.Book7.Test1 Academic
    Question: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
    Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

    It is widely accepted that a number of people have different kinds of giftedness genetically, for example in sport field or music types; nonetheless, some others contend that to be taught in educational career is one feasible way of training a perfect musician or athlete, held true for all children. From my viewpoint, the combination of those two theories will have essential, but the importance of being genius is to a large extent upper than the second hypothesis lonely.
    Having parental talent is definitely one of the crucial matters for being star in distinct field, that is to say, with special giftedness, children find their favorite affairs in the shortest and simplest possible methods. Was Hamed Rouhani born in a talented family famed for them musician craft, he definitely would succeed in that career, for example. Simultaneously, with acquiring such an enriched curriculum in their educational standards path, a profoundly gifted child can gave high levels of cognitive abilities than their peers while practicing more.
    Another subject that can be mentioned is one substitution for genius, called teaching. Some people strongly assert that all children can be taught by subjects that concluded to success without very especial talent. If the amount of teaching is enough for all kind of pupil varies considerably by scientist that should be assessed. However, the adequate importance of correct teaching methods besides perseverance is a vital milestone; so many developed countries have put such underlying syllabuses into their educational contents, as well. Had gifted children be exactly taught what they need, meaning that, both they would have dedicated their efforts and succeeded in their remedial than others.
    To sum up, I am strongly in favor of the first adage. Once a brilliant child has been completely taught in their favorite field of giftedness, they certainly will concentrate on their field of crafts; hence, showing more creativity in their paths, being successful increasingly.

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45. Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
    Although many people have a high tendency to spend their lives doing the same things day in and day out, others hold the view that alternation is always a good thing. Frankly, my personal opinion is that it is important to have a plan for your everyday activities, but also this essay will examine some possible reasons for this diversification in people’s mindsets.
    Those people who constantly avoid variation, and prefer to do a same thing over and over again are considered to be principled individuals that for whom change is a big deal and makes them a lot of confusion and anxiety. Thus, this people have a huge fairness of breaking their daily routine and doing vary things.
    On the other hand, there are some reverse beliefs compare to those one mentioned earlier. That is, some people hold the view that conversion is always a good thing, and one reason for this way of thinking might be linked to their characteristic. In other words, this kind of people are obviously considered to be adventurous because they cannot simply get by repetitive daily routine, and as a result, they would like to have some thrilling changes sometimes. Thus, this individuals will get bored with doing the same thing in their lives since their characteristics are opposed in compression with the first group.
    To conclude, it is a matter of opinion whether it is a good idea to make changes in our lives sometimes or not. Although I, personally, believe that having a set schedule without any adjustments is the best way to have a tranquil life.

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46. test4-book11: One of the topics which has generated a wide-ranging discussion is whether economic growth should be the main purpose of a society or not. Although both lines of argument are somewhat reasonable, I think the situation of the society determines the principal aim in different periods. The following paragraphs will explore all side to debate.
    Governments put the premium on economic progress, as improvement in economy of a country may lead to a better condition in infrastructure of other parts of the country, such as education, health and security. That is, the more revenue increase, the more facilities will be provided. However, economic schemes, sometimes, face failure and not only do not help other sections but also waste a big amount of money and sources.
    Opponent claim that progress in uneconomic areas is as essential as economic parts. This is mainly because if a country has healthy and educated citizens, is more likely to expand companies having a lot of financial advantages for the country. Japan, for instance, is a successful country with growth in various fields ranging from economy to education. But it should be considered that poverty would bring many social problems.
    Nevertheless, my view is that governments should focus on a goal regarding the needs of the society. In other words, at any point in time, there are some weaknesses in a specific part. For example, when a country is in a war, security is the primary aim of the government, while health is the main concern when a contagious illness spread through the country.
    In conclusion, although put stress on economic goals can be beneficial especially in terms of facilities, it, if viewed contrarily, has adverse effects. I firmly believe that it is completely conditional and the main purpose is changeable based on different occasions.

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47. Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that theses are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
    Discuss both theses views and give your own opinion.

    There are a number of people putting emphasis on the importance of learning a foreign language. Some of them state working or traveling abroad is the only reason for learning a foreign language; however, others, including me, believe that there are other purposes in learning a foreign language.
    One of the significant reasons for learning a foreign language is its widespread use in various scientific fields. Numerous students studying at universities and other academic people in some parts of the world, especially in my country, are in need of learning a foreign language in order to benefit from some references or attend special events. Therefore, they can read articles which are not written in their mother tongue or take part in conferences or seminars set up in an international language. Learning a foreign language also helps people to be aware of Ward’s news and expand their knowledge. People can pursue the most recent news with watching some foreign TV channels or Reading newspapers if they are familiar with their language. Hence learning a foreign language is vital item to broaden people’s horizons.
    However, there are some people who argue that learning a foreign language is only useful for working in or travelling to other countries. They believe that people going abroad are able to have a better understanding of local traditions and customs if they have learnt their language. Consequently, they can adopt to the local culture and lifestyle. It is also state that individuals seeking a job in a foreign country would receive a better offer during overseas job applications. Companies have a preference to recruit employees who know their language. Thus learning a foreign language can provide significant superiority for a job seeker among other applicants.
    In conclusion, learning a foreign language would be beneficial and practical in some purposes. People can benefit from it to develop their academic knowledge and boost their awareness of the latest world’s news.

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48. Cambridge IELTS 16:In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
    Why is this?
    Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

    Nowadays advertisements help companies to be seen better and they always show the latest their production leads to introducing their brand more and more to the community. I reckon this idea’s pros are outweighed its cons.
    Indeed advertising influences folk and encourages them to buy new products which consumerism can boost the economy can create business and jobs, on the other hand, some people always want to latest model of anything to enhance their self-image who are keeping pace with the fast-changing technology. Take, a large number of people follow special brands eagerly on social networking for instance Apple and Zara, and they are keen on getting knowledge about the latest produced by these companies.

    Conversely, when people can see ads everywhere, such as on TV, billboards, social media, etc., they are subconsciously encouraged to buy anything while they do not need it, thus the Society becomes a ‘throw-away community’ producing unnecessary waste; moreover, since advertising increase demand, products can result in more low-quality products being made.

    In conclusion, businesses are usually mesmerising customers because they are Persuaded to buy anything that they don’t really need additionally their Productions ads help to improve the economy that is why I strongly believe that prons reasons are more outstanding.

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49. cambridge 10/ Test 1/ Task 2

    It is important for children t learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
    To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

    What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

    It is considered that offspring should have to be to distinguish the right and wrong things in their childhood. And it is believed that some sorts of punishment have to consider to learn this difference. I certainly disagree with this given statement, which is about making the child behave well by beating them.

    To my mind, the answer to the question depends on the age of the scion. In the case of a very young child, punishing is both fully and wrong because an infant will not understand what is happening, or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of reason is reached, parents and teachers should reward heirs for behaving well or discourage them from bad things. Therefore, these kind but firm rules of penalizing children may have a great influence on them.

    There are some efficient ways for teachers and parents to discipline offspring. Firstly, children should be aware of the consequence of a awful action. As an illustration, in some families, teenagers may steal money from their caregivers’ pockets. Parents first and most should make the child know that borrowing money from others without their permission is a quite disappointing act. Secondly, caretakers and teachers should be good role models themselves, for instance, do not throw the rubbish away on the ground, or argue with violence with someone about skin color. These may make an heir more likely to behave well because of the developed responsibility.

    In conclusion, in my opinion, suffering a child without considering their age is absolutely a wrong way of teaching them the distinction between right and wrong. Teachers and parents should be informed of the effective way of discipline scions.

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50. Hi, Cambridge 11, test 4 , task 1: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
    Charts illustrate the number of visitors and their satisfaction in two years, the year before and after refurbishment respectively.
    To begin with the table, visitors of Ashdown museum the year before refurbishment was 74000 people that significantly increased to 92000 in the year after refurbishment. This enhancement proves that this renovation greatly impacted the number of visitors.
    The percentage of very satisfied and satisfied people increased after refurbishment, while the dissatisfied and very dissatisfied proportions experienced a decrease.
    The very satisfied proportion sharply increased from 15% to 35%, and satisfied people showed 10% growth, which was 40% after the museum’s renovation. Interestingly, the dissatisfied proportion fell from 40% to 15% after the museum’s renovation, and the very dissatisfied ratio slightly decreased to 5%. No response part had not shown any differences between these years.
    In conclusion, the satisfaction of people increased from 45% to 75% after refurbishment, and the dissatisfaction of individuals decreased from 50% to 20%.

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51. some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.

    Nowadays information considers an essential part of world activities such as businesses and academic articles. Some people believe sharing information is really beneficial for those tasks, but others think some of the vital data should not be shared. In this essay, both views will be discussed
    On the one hand, there are various benefits to sharing information. Firstly. Scientists and students can be informed of some results of the latest articles which may help them to discover new things and also give some hints to them to provide some new ideas and research. These previous and new results can help technology progresses. Secondly, information gives some feedback to businesses to boost their products in competitive markets.in other words, businesses by joining to information circle can inform consumer needs and as a result, they make some products that are necessary to people.
    On the other hand, sharing valuable data causes various irreparability consequences. Although shared information can help companies to raise their profits, if highly classified data become available to competitors, they may take out of the market those companies who give them all important information. Furthermore, sharing academic theses gives opportunities to fraudsters who can create their own scientific research. For example, European journal rejects different articles each year because most of them have the same results or facts which specifies that some of them imitate others.
    In conclusion, sharing proper information can usually help companies and researchers to boost their work; however, a lack of attention to some important things which are the heart of a company and a thesis may make Disadvantageous results for those individuals.

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52. Art in the schools and curriculum continues to be a controversial topic in the society. Some people believe that art can intensify students’ ability in order to learn new sciences. This essay will investigate this point of view and provide reasonable and logical conclusion.
    As far as I’m concerned, art gives students a sense of fulfillment and makes them much more productive. For instance, when they feel blue, music, calligraphy or others kind of arts can be so useful. Based on scientifically proven, if you fell cheerful, you will learn better. Hence, I think arts must be in the curriculum.
    Another point which I could mention is that, arts cause improve students’ self-confidence and self-esteem and causes they stay away self-pity. To the best of my knowledge, when students are frustrated, arts can remember them there is a silver lining to every cloud and they must know their ability. Furthermore, arts can improve their attention and concentration. So they will learn easily.
    To sum up, arts are essential and necessary in the schools. On the one hand, it can enhance students’ personality traits. On the other hand, improve their focus.

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53. Hi cambridge 13 test 4: topic:(some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important
    than History)
    my essay:
    while it is claimed by some individuals that history is one of the most salient subjects of the school, others, myself included, believed that both science and technology are more crucial matters than history.
    on the one hand, those who claim that history is the most dominant subject of the school’s curriculum insist there are some advantages to the point. First and foremost, history can help individuals to avoid repeating previous mistakes. To be precise, history is such a mirror for individuals who investigate issues and think about them. Therefore, once these people encounter a situation that there is an equivalent for it in history they could not only manage it better but also make more suitable decisions and those who ignore history are doomed to repeat mistakes. Furthermore, reading history could aid people in self-cognition. By this we mean studying history could give people a detailed background of their ancestors, land, legends, and myths. if people know these pieces of information, can not only be aware of their position in the past but also appreciate their ancestors’ sacrifices in the wars and grueling conditions, leading to a sense of self-confidence as well as appreciation.
    on the other hand, some people justifiably argue that science and technology are more essential than history, which I agree with. For one, by emphasizing on these subjects, more knowledgeable people will definitely be delivered to society, leading to the progress of the country. By this we mean provided that, a nation benefits from more scientific individuals, it can adapt itself to the latest advances in technology and move up the development ladders much quicker. Secondly, this idea will undoubtedly result in more creative individuals. Once science and technology are cherished in a society, people will definitely have more tendency to investigate and analyze articles’ data and patents, leading to more creativity in the long run. A good case in point is Japan, possessing the most genius people, in which these two subjects play an important role in schools subject.
    By way of conclusion, there are some reasons for the importance of teaching history in school, but i believe that a progressive country, as well as creative individuals, depends on highlighting science and technology for students.

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54. (?topic:(what are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rural areas

    From an overall perspective living in rural areas like other places to live
    has good and bad points.
    As the first advantage we can consider the fact that the country is less polluted and traffic isn’t heavy .in addition there is no need to be worried about health condition cause the air and weather are so clean.
    secondly in the rural areas there is a freedom in order to admire the breathtaking landscapes such as huge meadows, peaceful hills or forests.
    furthermore this beautiful area offers a very attractive reason to build a house and the garden since the charges for ground are much lower than in the cities .

    Despite these arguments many people feel that living in rural areas has negative aspects for a number of reasons.
    The Major drawback of living in country is that people in the country don’t earn so much money because they don’t have to work so many hours as they do in the cities .Moreover communication can be considered as a drawback of living in rural areas and this problem concerns the access to the hospitals, schools, police stations, etc ,which are usually located far from Village.
    To conclude, although living in rural areas can have certain negative aspects like lack of public transportation or less economic opportunities ,it has an extremely positive influence on the feeling of being near to nature and also tranquility. I believe that the benefits over rate it’s drawbacks.

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