نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس نمره 9 نوع 2 سوالی

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس نمره 9 نوع 2 سوالی

سمپل نمره 7 نوشته شده توسط مدرس

It is suggested that an increase in the cost of fuels for vehicles can be considered a method to battle pollution and traffic. There are reasons why I believe such approach can work and obviously it comes with some drawbacks. Other possible measures are worth considering as well. (48 words)

I believe any rise in the fuel price has a direct message for consumers and they try to immediately adjust their life accordingly. Since cars are inseparable part of residents’ lifestyle it cannot be expected that with such increase they abandon their vehicles altogether, but they definitely consider limiting their unnecessary trips. It is a well-known fact that many young people in large cities drives hours simply for fun or to pass the time but when the price increases they will be forced to think about the financial burden and to judge if it is worth it. (97 words)

Although the signal is straightforward and chances are it can persuade at least certain number of drivers to limit their consumption, such policy is not without undesirable consequences. The political parties responsible for such unpopular decisions will be criticized and they may not be elected in the future and this is the last thing a political party wants. However even in less democratic parts of the world, such approach can have other sorts of negative impacts. The historical records clearly show us any increase in the value of gas has directly influenced the price of other goods. It can be an inevitable increase through the cost of transportation or simply a psychological impact on the market. (116 words)

I tend to believe to control the pollution and traffic we need to consider more delicate and wiser actions. Education, though can take longer to its result, can always act as a more fundamental solution that a widespread blind punishment. If commuters understand the impact of their cars on the environment, chances are they try using public transportation or at least try carpooling every now and then. This goes without saying that a comfortable and reliable public transport which is proportional to the size of population especially during rush hours should be in place. (94 words)

In conclusion, while an aggressive method of increasing fuel price to combat both pollution and traffic can function properly in some cases, I believe wiser and more civilized approach such as education together with a proper choice of public transport can probably deliver better results. (45 words)

(Total: 400 words)