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Nowadays, alternative medicine is on the rise, allowing individuals to treat themselves without a doctor’s prescription or examination. While this method perhaps has some positive sides, I believe that it can have negative effects on the treatment process and make it difficult or prolong it.

Since alternative medicine is often rooted in tradition and is not typically taught in medical environments, it may have side effects on a certain disease that is unaware of consumers. In some cases, these practices can even be harmful and lead to worsening conditions rather than effective treatment. Because serious illness needs a treatment process under the supervision of a specialist doctor. For example, during the COVID-19 pandemic in my country, a belief emerged among some individuals that this disease could be treated through alternative medicine alongside traditional methods. This misguided approach caused irreparable damage and led to campaigns aimed at informing people about the ineffectiveness of such treatments.

Alternative medicine allows individuals to treat themselves without visiting a doctor or obtaining a prescription. This approach can be particularly effective for common ailments such as colds or headaches. One of the results of this service is the reduction of treatment costs. Because the patient does not have to pay expenses such as doctor visits or test. For instance, in my country, there are naturopathy stores where people can purchase herbal remedies. Since this service does not incur doctor or lab fees, it is generally cheaper and more accessible. Additionally, some individuals may opt to visit pharmacies to obtain over-the-counter medications.

In conclusion, the growing desire for alternative medicine— driven by factors such as lower costs— appeals to individuals dealing with common illnesses. However, concerns regarding unknown side effects of these treatments serve as a deterrent for many, particularly those who only trust conventional medical methods.

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Writing/ alternative medicines
It has been observed that many individuals affected by issues related to health prefer to heal themselves, rather than being in therapy. While I believe that it avoids having more side effects, which is a substantial advantage, it causes unknown prolonged consequences, which can be complicated to treat.(48w)

Utilizing alternative medicines, have less side effects. Alternative medicines are popular in many countries as they are less harmful to people’s health, compared to chemical drugs. They are chemical-free, which are completely natural. Due to fewer side effects, many individuals select this method to be healthy and many people try to use methods that make them satisfied. For instance, in my country old individuals use organic medicine as an alternative method, instead of visiting a doctor. They believe that alternative medicines are not chemichal and are more curative and healing, which have positive effects to overcome a difficulty. Unprocessed medicines make older people more satisfied and relaxed. (100w)

Sometimes, treating diseases with alternative medicine can have long-term effects that can be harmful. It is a fact that alternative medicine may fail to remedy the serious problems because it seems to be the best choice in some situations, while in many cases chemical drugs are needed to therapy the disorders. However, people need to be aware of its unknown results and choose the best option for their treatment. For example, in Iran many individuals are unaware that pure medicines do not help them to be healthy in serious illnesses, they have to visit a doctor and find out that only chemical medicines help them to be cured. Nevertheless, they keep on using the natural method to treat the disorders and unknown issues appear. (110)

In conclusion, these days more and more people have a tendency to use alternative medicines, although I believe that these may have fewer aftereffects to remedy the diseases and we must consider that many pure medicines are less helpful, especially in critical cases, which cannot cure the disorders in some conditions. (51w)

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Nowadays, the phenomenon of alternative medicine is increasing, in which an individual does not need a doctor’s prescription and it allows him to treat on his own alone without an examination. This behavior can have both positive and negative effects on the process of treatment. (45 words)

Since tradition typically supports alternative medicine, and is not taught in a medical environment, this method may have some side effects on consumers who are not aware of it, so some may even be harmful and lead to worsening conditions rather than real treatment. For example, in my country, during the Corona pandemic, an idea spread among some people in which they believed that this disease could be treated by alternative medicine associated with traditional medicine. This arbitrary decision causes some irreparable damage and creates such situations that some campaigns form to inform people about the ineffectiveness of this method. (100 words)

Although alternative medicine has clear negative consequences, its few positive aspects can even attract individuals to this service. One of the most impressive is the reduction of costs. Alternative medicine often includes herbal medicine and an ill person can, without visiting a doctor or obtain a prescription, easily visit some places like a store and treat yourself at a lower cost. This method, especially for some prevalent diseases such as colds or headaches, is effective. For example, in my country, there are stores called naturopathy stores that people visit and buy herbal medicine. Since this service does not have doctor and lab fee, is cheaper and more affordable. Also it is possible some may just go to the pharmacy and get the medicine they need. (125 words)

In conclusion, currently, the desire for alternative medicine for some reason such as lower cost is increasing and individuals that are involved in common diseases may turn to this service. In contrast, some reasons, like side effects of drugs that are unknown to ordinary consumers, are a preventive factor in this method and people who do not believe in any treatment except a medical one avoid alternative medicine. (65 words)

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Writing/multiple graphs

The three graphs, including the table and pie charts, illustrate the funding provided for the police department in the UK from different sources and how it was allocated to various areas from 2017 to 2018. (35w)

Overall, despite an increase in all sources, local taxes witnessed a significant rise, as a source of budget over the year. Money spent on technology saw a slight growth between 2017 and 2018, although the figure for salaries decreased. (39w)

From 2017 to 2018, national government and other sources, as sources of police department, rose slightly from 175.5 m to 177.8 m for the former and from 38 m to 38.5 m for the latter, respectively. There was a marked increase in local taxes, from 91.2 m in 2017 to 102.3 m in 2018. Likewise, the total amount of the police budget increased by 13.9 m (from 304.7 m to 318.6 m) throughout the year. (66w)

Regarding pie charts, despite a reduction for salaries of officers and staff (from 75% in 2017 to 69% in 2018), the amount of money allocated to the technology rose by 6% during the years shown. The share of money spent on buildings and transport remained unchanged at 17% in both years. (51w)

Total: 191w

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writing task 1 – goods transported

The line graph illustrates the amounts of products delivered as four variety categories (road, water, rail, and pipeline) in the UK from 1974 to 2002.  

Overall, there are fluctuation in the date. All categories except for rail mode rose gradually over the period. Road mode of transportation had the highest million tons and stayed in high level by the end of the timeframe. However, the figure for pipeline mode had the lowest all over the period.

Looking at road mode in 1974, this represents around 65 million tons, which was the highest figure in 1974. By 1994, with slight fluctuation reached just under 80 million tons. The figure climbed again by 20 in 2002.  Pipeline in 1974 as the lowest number amounted to approximately 5 million tones. The figure rose slightly amount of just over 20 in 1994, and stayed off by 2002.

Regarding water and rail modes, in 1974, those amounted around 40 million tones and remained constantly by 1978. Following this, water mode increased by approximately 20 million tons, while rail mode dropped around 10 million tons from 1978 to 1994. The figures for those modes climbed by around 20 million tons in the last of the period.

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Writing/modes of transportation

The line graph illustrates how goods tranmitted in the UK via various modes of transportation from 1974 to 2002. (19w)

Overall, road and water transportations carried high volumes of goods, while carrying by pipeline and rail transportations were less favorable modes. (21w)

Despite fluctuations throughout 20 years, road transportion started at about 60 million tonnes in 1974, followed by a slight increase to nearly 100 million tonnes in 2002, while water transportation reached at just under 60 million tonnes in 1980, it remained unchanged at around 60 million tonnes between about 1980 and 1992, followed by a slight growth to over 60 million tonnes. (62w)

In terms of rail mode, it reached its lowest amount to about 20 million tonnes about in 1996, after starting at 40 million tonnes in 1974, returning to its initial amount in 2002. Pipline mode, saw a notable rise to more or less 20 million tonnes during between 1974 and 1996, before remaining stable over the six following years. (59w)

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Transportation درست است که اشتباها s اضافه شده است.

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writing / letter

Dear Ms. Smith,

I am writing to make a request regarding the duration of my contract with you. As you know, I have a six-month lease on this apartment that start on May and expires next month.

Since my work on my new project will continue for a few more months, if possible, I would like to extend the contract for another six months and I hope the project will be finished.

Another thing I would like to share with you is about the building’s heating ventilation. The weather is getting colder and the system won’t work properly. I also talked to the neighbors and apparently the problem was the whole building. But I didn’t know how to fix it, so I decided to tell you and I hope you can solve this problem.

I would be grateful if you could agree with my request regarding the extension of the contract. I look forward to receiving your response. 

Kind Regards,

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Writing / line graph/ goods transported in UK

The line graph compares the amount of goods shipped in the UK through four different methods of transport, from 1974 to 2002.

 

Overall, it is clear that road remained the most popular mode of transportation over the period, while pipeline was the least favored method. Additionally, rail was the only item that was not grown in comparison with its initial amount.

With regard to the main and minor ways of goods’ transportation, it should be noted that the majority of the goods were moved by vehicles both at the beginning year, 1974 (about 70 million tonnes) and the ending year, 2002 (just under 100 tonnes). However, pipeline, albeit being the least mode at first, followed a growing trend to reach just over 20 million tonnes after 28 years.

Water and rail shared almost the same role in transportation of the goods from 1974 to 1978 (about 40 million tonnes), when they started different patterns. From 1978 onward, water mode showed an upward trend to the end of the period, as it peaked at just over 60 million tonnes, whereas rail saw a gradual decrease before turning back to the same figure of the beginning year.

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Writing/ cash payment

It is said that the main type of paying for things in shops will change in the future and individuals will have to use their cards or phones instead of cash. Although it is an inevitable part of evolution’s scheme providing perfectly safe as well as comfortable conditions for them, some may be unpleasant to changing their old method due to personal privacy. (62words)

Admittedly, the primary aim of launching bank cards or some applications that are run on mobile improve safety and bring modern comfort to users. Because these tools give a chance to experience transactions without bank notes. It means that people do not need to carry much money to buy things, creating great convenience for them. Moreover, no physical money leads to avoiding the risk of theft and losing them. For example, in my country, when using bank cards became prevalent among the public, the rate of stealing money had incredibly decreased and people even young students and elderly residents could transfer money effortlessly. (103words)

However, protecting personal privacy is a major priority. Some people still prefer the old-fashioned ways of maintaining money instead of enjoying modern technology. They argue that if one keeps their money in a bank, the secret data of their private account will be made available for others so that revealing information about their wealth results in desperately unhappy emotions. Because it might increase the risk of robbery and last but not least the government would have accurate access to their income. For instance, in my country, where there is not enough database about individuals’ incomes, the government cannot collect income tax from those who have not been state-owned and these people always keep away from this evolution. (117words)

 

 

In conclusion, new forms of payment will likely replace traditional methods in the future, while some worry about their personal privacy which tends to keep the old ways up. (29words)

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Writing: payment method

In the future, it is predicted that all financial transactions will shift towards digital payments, where individuals may no longer use cash to pay for goods and services in shops.While I believe it may brings some concerns about certain groups who have difficulties in adapting to new technologies. (W.49)

The advent of technology has revolutionized payment systems, making them more convenient and widely accessible through the proliferation of digital payment methods, such as mobile wallets and online payment platforms. As a result, not only has the need for physical cash significantly decreased, but individuals also no longer need to worry about carrying sufficient physical money due to the ability to easily access their bank account balances. For example in the past, when someone was planning a trip, it was necessary to carry a substantial amount of cash, consider potential emergency situations, and be careful with the risk of loss or theft. However, with the ubiquity of digital payment options, such concerns have been alleviated.(W.114)

Transitioning to digital payment methods can be challenging for some people, particularly those who may not have had much exposure to technology. Individuals who are not accustomed to using smartphones or computers may find it difficult to navigate the complexities of digital payments. This lack of familiarity with online transactions and staying updated with technological advancements can lead to apprehension and resistance towards making the switch to cashless options. For example, in my country, the older generation are the most people who are not happy to use modern payment methods because they often find it challenging to memorize and manage multiple passwords, which can lead them to rely on others, potentially putting their privacy and security in danger.(W.118)

In conclusion, the ongoing revolution in digital payment systems has significantly impacted the way we conduct transactions, which seems to be replacing paying by cash. However, it is the most difficult for some groups of people to get along well with new technology, as it has left some individuals dissatisfied with giving up physical money.(W.47)

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cash-card payment

It is predicted that the use of electronic payments through cards and smartphones instead of physical cash will become more widespread globally due to its convenience. However, some individuals might be unhappy about transition to a cashless society as it can diminish sense of psychological ownership.

 

First of all, I personally believe that, the society shift towards a cashless due to development of technology, and in the future individual not be able to carry currency to purchase critical need. Although some people insist on using new technology for electronic payments, but governments of developed countries promote card reader devices and transfer applications to facilitate easier transaction processes. In this way, transactions are completed in a shorter amount of time, and people do not have to carry large amounts of money. For example, in my country, due to price inflation, the cost of daily products is increasing. If people cannot use electronic payment methods, they would have to carry significant amounts of cash just to cover their daily necessities.

 

On the other hand, some individuals might be unhappy to use card or smart phone for their cash turnover as physical cash gives them a sense of psychological ownership. Despite being aware of the risks and inconveniences, many people, who are particularly from the older generation, still choose to keep cash as a form of personal possession. Having physical money evokes nostalgia for an era when people kept gold and other valuable assets, which often signified wealth and power. For example, in my country, many elderly people often have physical cash to make purchases. Older generations may seek assistance from younger individuals to help transfer bills and provide them with physical cash.

 

In conclusion, it is predicted that, thanks to technological advancements, all markets will eventually adopt electronic payment methods instead of physical cash due to their convenience. I think in future, all people will be able to easily transfer money in various situations even to purchase staple goods. Shops and malls will provide devices and applications to facilitate transactions. However, some individuals convenient using physical cash for the sense of ownership it provides.

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Writing/cash payment

It is said that all transactions are carried out by using cards in the following years. While I believe that considering this method helps to be more secure, having access to their personal information makes people feel uncomfortable. (38W)

Achievements in technology, have helped people to protect their money. Paying with bank cards, which has been done for many years, is a safe way to carry a large amount of money just in a single card, instead of carrying it in cash. If individuals pay more attention to using bank cards, as one of the new developments, they have a chance to keep their valuable belongings, safe. For example, in Iran, people have been following this method for years, which made their payments, easy and safe. They prefer to utilize various bank cards in order to pay their debits, rather than applying old techniques in their payments. They agreed that carrying money could increase the risk of money theft. (109w)

Many issues related to people’s business dealing records in maintenance of money, makes them apprehensive. People always try to keep their privacy safe, which is an important issue for them. When using bank cards, which is a modern way of payment and is used by people instead of cash, they find out all their information related to their accounts, are being followed by the officials. For instance, in my country the government has access to all transactions made by people. This, helps people in case of any fraud, which the government can trace the transaction and solve the problem. Applying this technique by the officals, people are always protected from abuse, which gives people a sense of security. (103w)

In conclusion, people may completely tend to use bank cards instead of utilizing cash in all their transactions in the coming years. However, some problems such as security is an important issue to be considered, which is supposed to worry people. (41W)

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writing / multipart and opinion

It is possible that in the future all payment methods will be affected by the information technology advancement and the digital revolution and become digital payment. Every type of connection is changing, and this fact may have opponents. (38 words)

All aspects of modern life are surrendering to technological advancement and this process can lead to a complete change in payment methods, too. On the other hand, the end of paper money is an acceptable and irrefutable event, and it will not be able to compete against the advantages of digital payment. For example, in my country, over time, cash payment has become an old way of payment and has been accepted as a common, convenient and safe one. This method has been welcomed especially by younger people. (87 word)

There are issues with payment cards and phones that lead to some individuals disagreeing with that. One of them that may create a significant concern is safety. If one’s card is lost or stolen, thieves will be able to make purchases or if someone loses access to important data and payment methods because of missing or stolen, he will face difficult circumstances. For instance, in my country, although the government has created conditions for digital payment for all owners of bank cards, some happens such as hacking of accounts arises problems for people. In more cases, it is possible that complaints by plaintiffs don’t receive fair responses. (107 words)

In conclusion, while the use of smartphones and cards as a payment device is accompanied by speed and convenience, there are some issues such as lack of enough safety that make some people not agree with that. (37 words)



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writing-cash and card payment

It is predicted that the use of electronic payments through cards and smartphones instead of physical cash will become more widespread globally due to its convenience. However, some individuals prefer having physical cash as it provides them with a sense of ownership.

 

The shift towards a cashless society is already evident in many developed countries. Although some people insist on using new technology for electronic payments, developed countries promote card reader devices and transfer applications to facilitate easier transaction processes. In this way, transactions are completed in a shorter amount of time, and people do not have to carry large amounts of money. For example, in my country, due to price inflation, the cost of daily products is increasing. If people cannot use electronic payment methods, they would have to carry significant amounts of cash just to cover their daily necessities.

 

On the other hand, some individuals prefer having physical cash as it gives them a sense of ownership. Despite being aware of the risks and inconveniences, many people, particularly from the older generation, still choose to keep cash as a form of personal possession. Having physical money evokes nostalgia for an era when people kept gold and other valuable assets, which often signified wealth and power. For example, in my country, many elderly people often have physical cash to make purchases. Older generations may seek assistance from younger individuals to help transfer bills and provide them with physical cash.

 

In conclusion, it is predicted that, thanks to technological advancements, all markets will eventually adopt electronic payment methods instead of physical cash due to their convenience. People will be able to easily transfer money in various situations to purchase everyday products. Shops and malls will provide devices and applications to facilitate transactions. However, some individuals will continue to prefer using physical cash for the sense of ownership it provides.

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Writing/ payments by phone or cards

In the future, it is predicted that all financial transactions will shift towards digital payments, where individuals may no longer use cash to pay for goods and services in shops. While I believe this shift may leave certain groups unsatisfied who struggle to adapt to new technology, finding it overly complex.(W.51)

With the advantage of technology, payments have become much more convenient than before. The digital payment system offers a high level of efficiency, such as the fact that there is no need to carry physical money, so people are free from carrying cash around, especially when large amounts of money are required for purchases. For instance, the young generation is more willing to use their smartphones or cards for payments, as they claim that in emergency situations, they don’t need to worry about having a sufficient amount of cash, since they can access their bank account balance anytime, anywhere.(W.99)

Some individuals, particularly the elderly, may be apprehensive about using technology, which can make it difficult for them to give up using cash. They may struggle to adapt to digital payments, and this challenge is further deteriorate for those who live in rural areas where the digital payment infrastructure is limited. For example, in my country, the older generation are the most people who are not happy to use modern payment methods because they often find it challenging to memorize and manage multiple passwords, which can lead them to rely on others, potentially putting their privacy and security at risk.(W.100)

In conclusion, the ongoing revolution in digital payment systems has significantly impacted the way we conduct transactions, which seems to be replacing paying by cash. However, despite the fact that it brings some benefits, it is difficult for special groups of people to use new technology, leading them to be reluctant to give up physical money.(W.56)

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Writing / increasing self-employment

In recent times, there has been an increasing tendency to have an independent job instead of working for established companies or organizations. Less regulation in self-employment encourages people to choose it, although there are some negative aspects such as the high risk that self-employment faces. (45 words)

One of the reasons for a growing preference for self-employment is the fewer determined rules which result in fewer limitations and more independence. Independent work, because of flexibility, permits individuals to regularize work schedules. It lets self-employees follow their personal purpose and project with more autonomy. For instance, in my country, working for your own business, such as owning a manufacturing workshop, gives the owner more opportunity to achieve a higher financial status. Because individuals are not compelled to follow some strict rules, they can freely decide about methods and process of producing that make them feel more creative. (99 words)

However, self-employment includes a set of challenges. One of the disadvantages of that is encountering unpredictable risks. Since an individual is the owner of a business, and he has to make personal decisions, he is obliged to shoulder the responsibility for any possible events and challenges. For example, in my country, although having an independent job offers a chance for professional development and higher financial position, there are some risky situations that require difficult decisions and hard effort. The owner of a private company compared with employees of an established company, has to address different circumstances and manage a range of risks. (102 words)



In conclusion, despite the drawbacks of a self-reliance job and some advantages of working for a stable income, many people tend to own their own personal and independent job. This desire depends on a set of benefits that leads to increased self-employment. (42 words)

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Writing/ self employed

In recent times, many individuals have chosen to pursue freelance careers over traditional employment. The main reason behind this trend is the desire for greater flexibility, which is a key benefit of self-employment. However, this choice also comes with potential drawbacks, including less job security, which can have negative consequences for these individuals.(W.53)

Some people do not like to obey rules and restrictions, so they choose to work as freelancers to enjoy more independence in the workplace. They often argue that the regulations are the greatest obstacle for them to obtain real satisfaction in their job, and also lead to lower performance. For instance, some individuals prefer to work as substitute teachers because of the inherent flexibility and autonomy it affords. In fact, it allows them to choose when and how much they work, without having to be involved in the day-to-day tasks. If they need to work more, they can easily request more teaching hours, and if they do not want to work, they are not obligated to do so. (W.118)

Self-employment can come with significant drawbacks, including income fluctuations that can be unpredictable and unreliable. Inasmuch as there is not a steady paycheck, individuals may struggle to make ends meet, as their financial security is tied to their clients payment. This uncertainty can be a major source of anxiety, affecting not only their financial stability but also their overall quality of life. The example of this is farmers, whose income is heavily dependent on factors like weather. A natural disaster, such as a flood or hailstorm, can devastate their crops, and leaving them without a steady income for an entire year.(W.104)

In conclusion, it seems that nowadays many individuals are drawn to freelancing due to the independence it offers, but this career path also comes with some disadvantages. One of the significant drawbacks is the uncertainty of income, which can lead to anxiety and financial instability.(W.45)

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writing-being self employed

In today’s world, an increasing number of individuals choose to work for themselves and setting up a business rather than working for wage in a company or organization as an employee. The main reason for people who desire to be freelancer might be making more income and the negative impact such as being a high risk that these people might experience.

The desire to work independently offers the potential to earn money. While employees working in a company or organization receive a fixed salary each month, entrepreneurs seek found for investing in various business. Freelancers have ample motivation to develop their business and earn more money. They believe that more work leads to higher revenue. For example, a knowledge enterprise company named Kats was stablishes in 2020 with minimal capital, and they planned to double their initial budget within just one year.

However, those who choose this path encounter challenges along the way, with the most significant being the high level of risk involved. Individuals who desire to work independently face a considerable chance of success or failures. If they make a mistake, they may lose their entire investments. Not only might they lose their job, but they confront with bankruptcy. For example, the manager of one company named Safire made a minor mistake in product manufacturing, and eventually the company went bankrupt and all saving were lost.

In conclusion, a considerable number of people these days are attracted to work as self-employee rather than being employee to work fixed wage. They are driven by the motivation to earn more income despite the inherent risks associated with this path. While success in self-employment can bring significant financial rewards, individuals must be aware of the potential failures and be prepared to face challenges along this way.

(298 w )

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Writing/self-employed

These days, a number of individuals tend to work as freelancers instead of working for paid jobs. While less restrictions can be a source of this change, some negative effects such as the need for more financial support, can be faced by these people. (44w)

Less limitations may encourage the people to start their own businesses. When people work for other companies, they have to follow the rules regulated by the employer, which makes the employees more strict than ever in following the rules. People, especially young individuals, nowadays get into disputes over not following some of the rules, controlled by the founder of the company. For example, in Iran, there are a number of individuals who are self-employed and go into partnership with an individual who is the professional one, after getting laid off, which is occurred because they could not undergo the principles, guided by the employer who expects who expects the rules to be followed strongly. (103w)

The need for more financial support can be one of the disadvantages of being self-employed. People who are self-employed, always look for sponsors to raise capital, after they have started a business. Young people, who face many problems in the field of financial resources, tend to take loans from banks, because the insufficiency of financial resources, causes many problems, which have negative effects on start-ups, which often are irreparable effects. For instance, in my country, Iran, people, especially young individuals, people who are not well experienced, often suffer from not being able to provide money for their business, therefore they encounter many problems and try to find partners in order to avoid bankruptcy, which can be hazardous situation for founders. (105w)

In conclusion, these days a substantial number of individuals are encouraged to work as freelancers without any fixed salaries. The reason, can be less constraints that they face. In spite of having many advantages, they encounter many problems related to providing financial help, which makes them look for a partner. (50w)

سولماز
سولماز
پاسخ به  سولماز
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استاد اگر ممکن هست این مورد رو هم لطفا بررسی بفرمایید. ممنونم.

جلال
جلال
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Writing / self-employed

These days, a growing number of businesses appear to be run by individuals who are their own boss, instead of serving their government or companies. There is a financial motive underlying this tendency, however, having more risk will probably lead to failure in some cases. (44words)

To start with the motivating factor for such preferences among job seekers, it seems that they want to make as much money as possible. Being self-employed gives workers the chance to decide about their level of income by working more. If their business booms and experiences a successful period, all the credits and income are just for them, while in a company they might not get extra benefits for working hard. For instance, in my country in recent years, as a result of self-employment, many business owners have gotten noticeable profits. It means that, they find this path more appealing and are ensured that more money will be made by focus on more quality and quantity of work. (118words)

However, there are serious drawbacks to working independently. First and foremost, coming up against a very high degree of risk thereby endangering results and outcomes. If one works for their own, they have to shoulder all the responsibilities of their jobs. And they might even end up with backbreaking debts and failure due to unexpected problems. For example, during the COVID-19 pandemic throughout the world, many small businesses in my country, which are managed by one, freelancing were faced with a wide range of issues, leading to failure and their activity had come to a close. (97words)  

 

In conclusion, although some tempting advantages come with self-employment such as higher income, countless challenges are hidden at the beginning of a business that should not be ignored. (28words)

(total 288words)

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جلال
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درود

رایتینگ من هم بررسی نشده استاد

سمانه
سمانه
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Writing / increasing self-employment

In recent times, there is an increasing tendency for having a freelance job instead of working for established companies or organizations. Self-employment and compliance with less rules leads to this decision and facing some negative points including the higher risk. (43 words)

One of the reasons for a growing preference for self-employment is the fewer determined rules which result in more limitations and less independence. Independent work is accompanied by flexibility and permission to regularize work schedules. It lets self-employees follow their personal purpose and project with more autonomy. For instance, in my country, working as a freelance job such as owing a manufacturing workshop, give owner more opportunity to achieve a higher financial and emotional status. Because you are not compelled to follow some strict rules, you can freely decide about methods and process of producing that make you feel more creative. (101 words)

However, a self-employed being also involves a set of challenges. One of the disadvantages is encountering unpredictable risks. Since you are owner of a business, and you have to make personal decisions, you are obliged to shoulder the responsibility for any possible events and challenges. For example, in my country, although having an independent job offers a chance for professional development and higher financial position, there are some risky situations that required difficult decisions and hard effort. The owner of a proprietary company compared with employees of an established company, had to address different circumstances and manage a range of risks. (98 words)



In conclusion, despite the drawbacks of a self-reliance job and some advantages of working for a stable income, many people tend to own their own personal and independent job. This desire depends on a set of benefits that leads to increased self-employment. (42 words)

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Listening/ test38

1- interested

2-acquired

3- complex

4- research methods

5- actual process

6- under five

7- A

linguistic skills can be developed= developing language

8- D

look at spoken = speaking

9- C

teach to children to read= reading

10- G

developing awareness of written language = writing

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zahra
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writing -pie chart

The pie charts provide information about the presence of detrimental ingredients, such as Sodium, Saturated fat, and added sugar in four daily meals.

It is noticeable that the dinner meal has the highest proportion of sodium and saturated fat. By contrast, snacks meal accounts for the vast majority of added sugar. Breakfast and lunch meals have approximately similar proportion of each unhealthy ingredients.  

The dinner meal accounts for 43% sodium and 37% of saturated fat. By contrast, only 23% of added sugar is present in the dinner meal. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at snack meal, which accounts for a massive 42% of added sugar, while only containing 21% saturated fat and 14% sodium.

The other two meals, breakfast and lunch do not have dramatic differences in the percentage of unhealthy ingredients. In terms of all these unhealthy ingredients, breakfast contributes just over one-third of the total. The figure for lunch is less than one-third for both sodium and saturate fat, and one-fifth for added sugar. (totally 169 words)

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writing/ pie chart/nutrient

These pie charts illustrate the average proportion of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar in daily meals in the USA, which have negative effects on our health if taken more than enough. (32words)

Overall, as breakfast accounts for the least amount of mentioned nutrients, it is the healthiest daily meal in American food. The figures show that dinner is the main source of fat and sodium, while snacks are predominately formed by sugar. (40words)

To start with sodium, its pie chart indicates that the largest amount of sodium consumed at dinner is 43%, which is about half of the amount of it in comparison to other meals, however, 29% of sodium is used in lunch, which is almost twice as much as its figure found in the breakfast and snacks, at 14%. (58words)

In terms of saturated fat, it is again the dinner contains the biggest percentage of fat, at 37%. Nevertheless, it is used at a low level in other meals so that lunch constitutes 26% fat and both snacks and breakfast stand for 21% and 16% of fat, respectively. (48words)

The last item that can be dangerous if used a lot is sugar. The amount of added sugar, which is found in snacks at 42%, is about twice as much as dinner at 23% and lunch at 19%. This means that breakfast, with 16% of sugar is still the least amount of sugar among other meals. (56words)

(total 234words)

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Writing _letter

Dear Sara,

I am writing to let you know that I have recently moved to a different place. The reason behind this decision was that I felt the need for some changes in my daily life, and this movement is exactly what I wanted. I would be delighted if you could come and visit us soon.

Since I had been living in my previous apartment in downtown for 15 years, I felt a desperate need of more peace and calm away from the hustle and bustle. Therefore, I bought a new house in the suburbs. This decision has brought more satisfaction into my life.

My new home is located in a quiet and peaceful neighborhood, surrounded by lush and verdant. I also enjoy more privacy in my new place.

I hope you will accept my invitation and come to visit us as soon as possible. I cannot wait to show you around my new place, host a dinner party, and take a leisurely walk through the green surroundings. I am sure we will have a wonderful time together.

Please let me know which dates work best for you.

Looking forward to your visit!

Your friend,
Marziye
(W. 196)

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مرضیه
پاسخ به  مهندس ابوالقاسمی
2 ماه قبل

خواستم محیط جدیدی که سکونت دارند رو توصیف کنم

سولماز
سولماز
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Writing – pie chart – nutrients

The three pie charts illustrate the average proportions of three major categories of nutrients in four daily meals in the USA. Nutrients can have side effects if overeaten. (28w)

Overall, dinner had the highest levels of sodium and saturated fat, while the share of added sugar was high in the snacks. Moreover, in the breakfast had the lowest levels of added sugar, sodium and saturated fat. (37w)

For breakfast, the shares of added sugar and saturated fat were at %16, while the figure for sodium was at %14. The amount of added sugar was at %19, whereas sodium and saturated fat at lunch were at %29 and %26 respectively. (42w)

The highest amount of sodium in the dinner was at %43, followed by saturated fat at %37. The figure for added sugar was at %23. Snacks had the highest amount of added sugar consumed at %42, while the amount of sodium consumed was lower than other nutrients, at %14. The distribution of saturated fat in snacks was at %21. (59w)

zahra
zahra
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writing – process – manufacturing of noodle

The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of instant noodles through eight steps, beginning with the storage silos stage and concluding with the labeling stage for consumers. (26 words)

This process begins with flour storage, where two silos have been constructed for continues flour supply. In the first step, flour is transported by trunk and accumulated in the storage area, then water and oil are added to the flour then is mixed together. The mixed flour is conveyed from the mixer machine to mechanical rollers for preparing dough sheets. In the following step, cutter machine transformed the dough sheets into layers of strips, and the strip dough is prepared in the shape of discs for cooking with oil in an oven integrated into the machine. After cooking the noodles are dried. Next, the noodles are placed into cups arranged on the machine’s conveyer belt, where additional ingrediencies such as vegetables dry and spices taste are added to enhance the flavor. Finally, the noodles are sealed, labeled, and shipping to retailers and wholesalers. (totally 172 words)

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Writing/ letter

Dear Mr. Crow

I am writing to explain my concern about the amount of noise from the new restaurant that has opened recently near my university residence. The canteen worked up to midnight with a high level of noise, and these conditions always continue until 1 p.m. every night.

Although we are glad for this facility near where we live, it poses some problems for me and other students. When we are still studying at that time, or intend to rest, the high-level noises from the canteen don’t allow us to have a calm and quiet situation. On the other side, we prefer to resolve this issue in a way that prevents conflict.

I would like to suggest some solutions to address this problem. Campus authorities can restrict the work hours of the canteen and determine a time before midnight to close it. It can also install some posters or signs on the walls to point out to customers that they should pay attention to some rules about the level of noise and commuting.

Thank you for giving your attention to this matter.

Kind Regards,
(185 words)

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جلال پیر
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writing/ manufacturing instant noodles

The diagram illustrates the various stages of a process in which using industrial machinery, instant noodles are produced. (18words)

Overall, the diagram depicts the production of instant noodles, with eight steps, starting with carrying flour from storage silos and ending with labeling and packing noodles. (26words)

The process begins with moving flour, which is the main ingredient, from silos to the factory. In this place, first of all, flour is blended with water and oil in the large mixer, becoming a row material called dough. Then it goes through several roles formed as a sheet on a plate. (52words)
 
 
After that, the dough sheets are turned into narrow strips, using some blades and then transferred into noodle discs. In this step, noodles are cooked with oil and after drying, are placed inside the cups. In this part, vegetables and spices are added to the noodles. At the end of the process, cups are labeled and packaged, preparing them for the market. (62words)

(total 158words)

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سولماز
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Writing – Noddle:

The diagram shows the steps in the production of instant noodles, which are made from raw materials to the final product using a mechanical process. (25w)

Overall, the diagram illustrates the production of instant noodles with eight steps, starting with transfering of flour from the warehouse and ending with the storaging of labeled and sealed noodles. (30w)

The process starts with the carrying of the flour, which is loaded onto a lorry from a silo and is transported to the factory. After water and oil are added to the container, all the ingredients are mixed together. The next step is that the dough is rolled by using rollers which then, is turned into a dough sheet by an automated machinery. Next, the dough sheet is sent by a conveyor belt to another section, which instant noodles are produced. (81w)

In this section, the dough sheet is cut into strips by rotating blades. After that, the noodles are fried in oil in a container and then, are dried to be placed in cups. Then, some additives such as vegetables and flavorings such as spices are added to the noodle-filled cups. In the next step, the cups are labeled and sealed. Finally, the instant noodles are ready to be distributed. (69w)

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سمانه
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writing / agriculture/ problem and solutionDespite significant progress in the field of agriculture, part of the global population still suffers from food shortage. An important reason for this issue is drought caused by climate change that arises problems regarding malnutrition and hunger. Planting drought-resistant crops that can bear tough conditions is an efficient measure. (49 words)Drought caused by climate change is an important environmental challenge that affects the ecosystem, agriculture, and water resources. Higher temperatures can lead to reduction in the health, moisture of soil, and water availability. Also lower rainfall is another negative impact of climate change that result in drought in some regions. The change in these patterns will degenerate into the lack of agricultural products. For instance, in the southeastern lands of my country, destruction of the Hamun wetland and its border lands affected by climate change, especially lower rainfall and even occasional devastating floods, have turned these areas into barren regions with eroded, salty soil. (100 words)Drought-resistant crops are typically grown in regions that experience low rainfall, high temperatures, or extreme weather. These crops have deeper roots allowing them to access moisture stored in the soil, so they can withstand dry weather. Also, some drought-resistant crops have smaller leaves which help them lose lower water on hot days. For example, in my country, Canola fields are a good model of a drought tolerant crop with adaptability to any soil. On the other hand, Ra pe prepares soil to plant crops such as wheat and barley, which are high consumption products.. (93 words)In conclusion, while new technology has facilitated and accelerated the agricultural industry, some countries are still facing food shortages. In my opinion, drought-resistant crops play a crucial role in adapting agriculture to changing climate conditions and contributing to global food security. Acquainting these areas with such products is essential in the face of climate change. (54 words)

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Writing /agriculture

Obviously, the most important way to address this issue is to educate and train the farmers. When they are aware and informed about new technology and its effectiveness, they will be more enthusiastic to use it. Governments around the world should support farmers by providing them with funds and offering lower interest rates on loans so they can equip their farmers with modern methods. For example, in my country, the government has effectively supported farmers by providing financial assistance for modern irrigation equipment and specialized machinery. This has led to significantly higher crop yields annually, improved water resource management, and increased income for farmers.(W.104)

In conclusion, some countries need to increase crop yield sufficiently to feed their populations by transitioning from old agricultural methods to modern farming practices. Governments should support farmers in adopting these modern methods and technologies to improve agricultural productivity.(W 39)

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Writing / problem- solution/ second paragraph and conclusion

Indeed a logical structure to manage this issue is to acquaint farmers with new technology. If they are trained in modern agricultural process, significant progress in their final results will be made. Nevertheless, nobody can deny the important role of the government in introducing and investing in new approaches to promote farmers through incentive strategy. In fact, they should have easy access to both new mechanisms and machinery as well as be kept fully informed of sustainable farming practices. In my country, recently the government has effectively implemented a program that provided fertilizers and pesticides by local NGOs at fairly reasonable prices to protect their crops. Therefore, good cooperation has led to remarkable achievements in outcomes. (116words)

In conclusion, although implementing obsolete methods in some portions of the world threatens poor nations’ lives, this trouble will be addressed by modern techniques if the farmers are supported with monetary policy and public awareness by the government. (38words)

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سولماز
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Writing/advances in agriculture/solution and conclusion:

To tackle this problem, new techniques are needed to apply in terms of modernalization. In order to carry out the latest actions and plans, the goverment must provide myriad arrays of tools for farmland possessors to support them. Furthermore, being able to access professional education and training which leads the farmers to proper ways in cropping productions, can make an improvement in obtaining high volume of productions. For instance in my country, many high-skilled farmers, who are supported to enroll in courses related to agriculture and farming, utilize the equipment which are given by the government and legal authorities to have high volume of producrions which declines the starvation among people who are not successful in eating enough food. (105w)

In conclusion, old ways of cropping yields can result in less volume of production which may enhances the global hunger and also, starvation around the world, but if modern techniques are applied, it is predicted to improve. (36w)

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مرضیه
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Writing / agriculture / first paragraph

In many countries, especially in poorer nations, lack access to up-to-date technologies and modern equipment for cultivation forcing the people to work with old facilities. In this case a large amount of land is used inefficiently for growing crops, leading to lower yields, that are insufficient to feed the population. For instance, in the southern part of my country, where known for its water shortage and high temperatures, a significant amount of water resources are being wasted or evaporating due to the lack of modern irrigation facilities. By effectively using this water, farmers could significantly increase crop production to fight against starvation. (W.102)

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جلال پیر
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Writing / problem-solution/ first paragraph

The prominent reason for this problem stems from outdated agricultural technology is still prevalent in poor countries. Farmers, who come up with numerous economic problems do not intend to change the old farming process. Because it needs huge investment and cultivators usually cannot afford to do it. This not only leads to lower output for them but also contributes to food scarcity in the future. It means that fewer products increase widespread famine for the population in these countries. For example, in the northern part of my country, there is a lack of appropriate irrigation systems to produce rice, leading to shortages in the ultimate objective every year and it has a long-term effect on their economic condition resulting in more hunger days after day. (125words)

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writing / problem and solution

Despite significant progress in the field of agricultural, part of the global population still suffers from food shortage. An important reason for this issue is drought caused by climate change that arises problems regarding malnutrition and hunger. Planting drought-resistant crops that can bear tough conditions is an efficient measure. (49 words)

Drought caused by climate change is an important environmental challenge that affects the ecosystem, agricultural, and water resources. Higher temperatures can lead to reduce health and moisture of soil, and water availability. Also lower rainfall is another negative impact of climate change that result in drought in some regions. The change in these patterns will degenerate into the lack of agricultural products. For instance, in the southeastern lands of my country, destruction of the Hamun wetland and its border lands affected by climate change, especially lower rainfall and even occasional devastating floods have become barren regions with eroded, salty soil.(100 words)

سمانه
سمانه
پاسخ به  سمانه
2 ماه قبل

استاد لطفا این رایتینگ رو بررسی کنین. مرسی

مرضیه
مرضیه
2 ماه قبل

Writing/ agriculture/first paragraph

In recent years, the issue of starvation among people, especially in poor areas, has become increasingly prominent. One of the primary reasons behind this is that despite some countries having advanced facilities and using modern equipment for cultivation, many countries do not have access to these up-to-date technologies. As a result, they are unable to feed all their people, and their productivity levels are lower.For instance, in among remote areas, a significant amount of water resources are being wasted due to the lack of modern irrigation facilities. This not only results in increased water loss but also contributes to reduced crop yield. (W.102)

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Writing/ problem – solution

Today, technology has revolutionized myriad aspects of agricultural systems, a growing number of people throughout the world are suffering from starvation. A major reason for this is rooted in using old methods implemented by farmers usually in poor countries. This problem will probably be tackled if incentive schemes are undertaken by the government making them more familiar with new knowledge.(60words) 

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سولماز
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Writing/advances in agriculture/problem:

One main reason for the problem of starvation is old and invalid ways of farming which are still conventional in countries with poor economy. Farmland owners in many regions are unsuccessful in carrying out the latest strategies in agriculture industry which leads to a reduction in the volume of crop production. It implies that a high level of intrinsic awareness is demanded for farmers to apply methods and with a low level of knowledge, farmers are unable to have high volume of productions they expect. For example, in poor districts of my country, old techniques are being utilized in order to gather the crops, which are still common. While novel practices are used by the farmers of other parts of the country, these farmers employ invalid ways. They may provide less supplies only due to the lack of information. (115w)

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zahra
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writing-problem- solution-agriculture -hungry people

Despite advancements in agriculture, many people worldwide still tackle starvation. The primary cause of this problem is climate change, which has led to a significant increase in the number of people suffering from hunger. One potential solution could be the implementation of modern irrigation methods to enhance farming productivity. (49 words)

the global climate change is the main factor contributing to famine worldwide, even with modern technology available. Climate change can affect the rate of evaporation and soil moisture, which determinate crops productivity and quality. Also, If the weather gets warmer, we would face water scarcity in agriculture, causing a significant reduction in food sources annually. For example, in a tropical region the annual temperature rise of approximately 0.5 -1 degrees Celsius, contributes to the global warming crisis that leading to a decrease in water supply for the irrigation of agricultural lands and have impact on food shortage. (99 words)

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سولماز
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While modern approaches are discovered in the field of agriculture, people still suffer from their inaccessibility to food. The vital reason of this problem is traditional methods and a valuable solution is to have enough knowledge about new methods of farming in this context. (44w)

سولماز
سولماز
پاسخ به  سولماز
2 ماه قبل

استاد لطفا این مورد رو هم بررسی بفرمایید. ممنونم.

مرضیه
مرضیه
2 ماه قبل

Writing / agriculture/ introduction

Despite the fact that advanced methods are being used in agriculture industry more than ever before, many individuals are still suffering from starvation. The main reason for this problem is that in remote areas, many people are using old facilities. To tackle this issue, the government should invest more in agricultural infrastructure.

مرضیه
مرضیه
2 ماه قبل

Dear Mr. Lee,

I am writing to discuss an issue that I have recently faced and would like to share with you, hoping that something can be done about it.

When I come home from work in the evening, I have noticed that not only my parking space is occupied, but also there are no available vacancies for me to park my car. As you know each tenant is allocated a specific parking space, so when all spaces are filled, it suggests that either some tenants have more cars or unknown individuals are using our apartment’s parking facilities.

When there is no available space, I am forced to park my car on the street. While I am paying a monthly fee for parking lot usage, furthermore it does not need to mention that parking on the street at night is not safe.

I have a proposed solution to address this problem. Firstly, consider installing an entrance gate that can only be accessed by tenants with their respective keys. Additionally, assign and label parking spaces according to apartment numbers to ensure that each tenant uses their designated spot.

I kindly request that you inform me of your decision regarding this matter.

Thank you for your attention.

Sincerely,
Marziye
(W.207)

مرضیه
مرضیه
پاسخ به  مهندس ابوالقاسمی
2 ماه قبل

با توجه ب سمپلی که تو سایت هست نوشتم

سولماز
سولماز
3 ماه قبل

Writing/UK telephone calls:

Regarding local calls, the only category with a fall, the figure started from about 70 billions minutes in 1995 to reach a peak of 90 billions minutes in 1999, while it declined moderately to just over 70 billions minutes in 2002.(41w)

In contrast, although mobiles and national and international calls witnessed a rise, the figure for mobiles and national and international calls started at under 10 billions minutes and near 40 billions minutes in 1995 respectively, before a significant growth for the former (from under 10 billions minutes in 1995 to around 50 billions minutes in 2002) and a slight boom for the latter, reaching at near 60 billions minutes in 2002.(71w)

zahra
zahra
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writing task1 -telephone cell

The bar chart compared contribution of telephone calls minutes (billion) in the UK over a period of 8 years from 1995to2002, in three categories, local- fixed line, National and international fixed line, and mobiles cell.

Overall, all categories experienced significant changes. Number of call minutes for the local fixed line increased in the first 5 years and after that decreased. The figures for national and international fixed line and mobiles phone gradually rose over 7 years and eventually the difference among all categories diminished in the year 2002.

In 1995, the local fixed line was by far the greatest amount of over 70 billion minutes, and the second highest calls was national and international fixed line with near 40-minutes (billion) phones. However, mobiles phones had the lowest number of calls at under 10 billion minutes. After 4 years in 1999, the local- fixed line with a slight rise reached its peak at 90 billion minutes. The figures for national and international fixed call experienced a steady increase at 50 and up to 10 billion minutes respectively.

By the final year in 2002, fixed line fell back to slightly over 70 billion minutes calls which was the same level as in the starting year. additionally, other categories experienced gradually increase all over years and ended to its peak around 55 billion minutes. (221 words)   

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جلال پیر
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Writing / UK telephone calls /session 12

The given bar chart provides information on the amount of whole time of telephone conversations in billion minutes, categorized into three groups in the UK between 1995 and 2002. (29words)

Overall, all groups changed significantly during this time. Although Local-fixed line had the highest level at all times, it was the only ones with a decline. National and international-fixed line and Mobiles had dramatically increased and at the end of the period the difference among groups reached its lowest point. (50words)

At the beginning of the period, the Local-fixed line had the highest amount of time at about 70 billion minutes(BM) in 1995 and it peaked at 90 BM four years later. However, it declined by almost 20 BM to its lowest point at 70 BM in 2002, which was the same level as its beginning point. (56words)

National and international-fixed lines and Mobiles started at approximately 38 BM, and 5 BM, respectively but during these years both categories experienced considerable growth. In 1999, Mobiles started to sharply increase, reaching a peak of about 45 BM at the end of the period while National and international-fixed line and Local lines were at 60 BM and 20 BM, respectively. Moreover, these differences were the smallest figure over this period among the three groups. (74words)

(Total 209 words)

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سمانه
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Writing /letter / doing work experience in an organization

Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding my work experience at the Architecture and Philosophy that will starts on 25 September in your organization. I am really thankful for this opportunity. I have always been eager to learn more about architectural subjects.

As I mentioned in my curriculum vitae, I am especially interested in the field of architectural theory and would love to expand my awareness and knowledge about it. Besides this, I am hoping to develop my abilities in areas such as writing philosophical essays and understanding connections between architecture and philosophy at different periods.

I would like to know if there will be any training before my work starts and whether there is any type of group work for writing research essays in this period. Another concern of mine is that it is possible we will meet some renowned experts in philosophy of architecture.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

سمانه
سمانه
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 تصحیح پاراگراف اول Writing / unpaid services

Carrying out unpaid compulsory activities in schools can provide an effective situation for students to become familiar with kinds of humanitarian affairs. Promoting a sense of civic duty increases awareness and comprehension of their collective actions in society. For example, in my country some events and festivals are held in schools to attract students to activities such as helping poor students with delivering cloths and stationary. Also, they are encouraged to form groups to learn abilities for carrying out some responsibilities related to natural environments and public tasks such as planting trees and being a police assistant. (95 words)

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Writing/UK telephone calls/ introdution ans overview:

The bar chart illustrates the amount of time spent during the calls made in the UK, classified into three groups between 1995 and 2002.(24w)

Overall, although mobiles and national and international calls experienced a significant increase during the period, local calls was the only category with a reduction. (24w)

  

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