Tourists in Difficult Places Sample Writing Task 2
نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس 7 برای سوالی از Cambridge 12 General Test 1 Task 2 با عنوان Tourists in Difficult Places نوشته شده توسط مدرس آیلتس با نمره 8 رایتینگ آکادمیک(مهندس ابوالقاسمی) در اینجا ارایه شده است. این نمونه برای زبان آموزان نوشته شده است و کوشش شده از ساختارهای بسیار دشوار دستوری یا واژگان و ترکیب های بسیار دشوار در آن استفاده نشود و بنابراین در سطح نمره 7 تا 7.5 براورد میشود.
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آموزش رایتینگ آیلتس لیز، سوالات Advantage / Disadvantage
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نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای:
The number of tourists who show interest in difficult destinations is on the rise. While there are benefits for these tourists, there are also some drawbacks for them that should not be ignored. (33 words)
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نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای:
Tourists have recently shown interest in the least expected places like remote corners of the world with extreme and unfriendly environments. While it may seem to be a wrong choice at first glance, they might reap the benefits in later stages of their lives. (44 words)
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Tourists in Difficult Places Sample Writing Task 2
Exotic and unusual places has gain popularity among tourists during the past decades. While they can gain benefits from such journeys, there might be some threats too. This essay will examine these two points (34 words).
There are benefits for tourists visiting exotic places. First of all, there is more excitement to enjoy because unlike five-star hotels around the globe that offer excellent but very predictable and undeniably similar services, unusual places break the norm of taking sunbath and eating fancy foods. This alternative would be more appealing especially to younger generations who do not share the eagerness for peace and quiet of famous hotels. Secondly, travelling to an odd destination as a tourist would be a new experience for travelers. Having such experience is perhaps able to change one’s perspective and give the life a new meaning. This, undoubtedly, is worth much more compare to a tedious and predictable summer vacation. (116 words)
On the other hand, there is a reason why not everybody fancies such journeys. First of all, there are some threats to the visitors’ health and even lives. Places such as Arctic or Sahara deserts or islands of uncharted territories have skillful predators who know those regions very well and can attack any second. Not only large and small animals but even insects, parasites or seemingly harmless plants may pose a threat to the travelers’ wellbeing or lives. Secondly, facilities and amenities that a visitor to such places can enjoy is undoubtedly inferior to that of other tourist destinations. Services such as air conditioners in the middle of the deserts or spacious and pleasantly warm suits in Polar regions may never be possible to be delivered (126 words).
In conclusion, tourists in faraway places with extreme weather may enjoy some benefits but admittedly there are disadvantages to deal with (21 words).
Total Words: 297
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واژگان و ترکیب های پیشنهادی مدرس برای این تاپیک
Extreme weather / put somebody’s life at risk / to be disoriented / destination / uncharted territories / unreliable information / exorbitant costs / lose interest in something / limited range of facilities / a life changing experience / enjoy the scenery / exotic creatures / enormous excitement / endangered/unknown species / form friendship / put things in perspective / internal peace / give a new meaning to something /
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نمونه نوشته شده توسط سینا از زبان آموزان تیرماه 1402
Recently visiting wild natural locations which are remote from civilized cities have become favorable among tourists. Although there are some advantages for these tourists, there are also some drawbacks which should be taken into account. (35 words)
There are some benefits for tourists who like to visit untamed, difficult nature. First of all, they may enjoy an adventurous experience. Visiting such difficult and sometimes unreachable places causes a feeling of excitement and can be very thrilling. This issue can be very favorable for those who want to be far from large cities for a while. Tourists can release their energies in such a wild nature without the restricting rules of a society. Secondly, traveling to difficult places can be instructive about living approaches in such hard conditions. Some people believe that sometimes nature can be extremely wild and human beings have suffered enormous natural disasters and had to adapt themselves to the new circumstances. Therefore, visiting and living in such difficult places for a short time can be instructive for these uncontrollable conditions. (136 words)
On the other hand, people who wish to have an arduous journey must be aware of disadvantages. First of all, tourists may experience the lack of suitable welfare. Considering the fact there may not be civilization in far distances from cities and counties, they may encounter the lack of appropriate welfare facilities, which is essential for living in such conditions for people who are accustomed to modern living conditions. Secondly, traveling costs to these places may be unreasonably high. Tourists might not find a regular transportation system for traveling to their desired destination. Sometimes they have to carry additional equipment which they may require in case of any hardship. In addition, tourists may need to hire a guide who is familiar with the location and any possible danger of the desired region. (132 words)
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نمونه نوشته شده توسط زبان آموزان دوره اردیبهشت 1400
Over the last few years, the number of tourists who have been willing to travel to remote and inhabitable places has increased. Although there are some drawbacks, there are also some beneficial factors for them that should not be ignored.
There are some reasons why a group of tourists would rather choose these exotic places as their destination. First of all, by traveling to these odd places and undertaking difficulties, they are able to gain their self-confidence in some abilities and skills that one is required to have. Although these journeys can be mentally and physically frustrating, the thrill that one experiences after the successful completion is something ineffable. Secondly, traveling to an odd destination can be highly influential. Tourists get a chance to admire and enjoy the breathtaking scenery, which is untouched by humans. So, it can have a spiritual impact and change one’s perspective which is incomparable to other journeys that tourists usually take.
On the other hand, there are reasons why tourists prefer not to choose these destinations. First of all, exploring these places can be extremely dangerous. It can put visitor’s health conditions and even lives in danger. In places such as the Antarctic or the Sahara desert of uncharted territories different species of skillful predators can be found, who are familiar with the areas very well and can attack any second, and be a threat to the visitors. Secondly, because of the limited range of facilities, many travelers may lose their interest and find the journey quite dull. Especially, since these facilities and amenities are inferior to that of other tourist destinations. Services such as air-conditioners or even slighter needs like access to an abundance of water in the middle of the desert may be impossible to be delivered.
In conclusion, tourists in remote places with extreme weather may face some difficulties but undoubtedly some advantages make this journey extremely thrilling.
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7 پاسخ
Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, there is a significant rise in tourism sector who are willing to visit places that have a tough condition. Although such places are very attractive to visitors, they may have negative consequences. The objective of this essay is to elaborate arguments in favor of and against exotic areas for tourism purposes.
Firstly, it is an indisputable fact that unusual places are the final destination for many visitors all around the world. People always get excited by those environments where are intact and strange. For instance, in Africa, there are many places where the condition is unbearable for humans. Equally significantly, Intact environments and incredible sceneries are the main attraction for travelers like being in a desert for those who have never seen any desert in their entire lives. In addition, some people opine that visiting dangerous places are a new experience which give them different perception regarding the world.
On the other hand, visiting unusual places have some drawbacks. People by nature cannot tolerant difficult situation and experiencing such journeys may have a negative effect on their body and mind. For example, visitors in an exotic jungle can hurt from wild animals or predators. moreover, in such areas, there are no facilities to stay alive or safe especially for old people. For instance, on a remote island, there is no hospital or equipment for those tourists who are suffering from disease.
All in all, despite the fact that in exotic places tourists can have lots of fun and enjoy their journey, it is a risk. Travelers must be aware of the issues that may appear while traveling to remote and strange areas.
محمد کرمی. کلاس آذر. یکشنبه و سشنبه
some people believe that it is good to share as much information as
possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Knowledge is one of the most important tools for the progress of a society. As it is clear, many people believe that maximum share of data is necessary to our human culture while, lots of individuals think it is better to distribute information by security category. In my opinion, both these viewpoints have their advantages and disadvantages. (57)
The effort of all scientists throughout history have been to produce knowledge for rise quality of human life. First of all, progress of medical is one of the most important matter to us. For example, better cure accessible in cancer is very vital. When a scientist in poor country want to conduct a research in this field, it is not necessary to perform repetitive research, just by sharing previous data and studies in this era. Secondly, in the 21set, century the term of freedom of expression is very arguably in the world. As you know free flow information enable each person to access information everywhere in the world. For instance, Arab Spring happens just by achievement to information of other countries and compare their life with other countries. (128)
Humane society to reach this current situation has incurred a lot of living and financial expenses. First of all, production of knowledge has huge financial costs for progressive countries. For example, in stem cell study they build many machines and lab, develop programming languages and teach as well as train lots of scientists and expert in this field. Secondly, it can be devastating for every country and government, if important data fall into wrong hands. For instance, data about explosive weapons and nuclear physics is extremely sensitive and very confidential so that, not only does not must data share freely, but also it is vital to keep these information safely in producing country. (113)
In conclusion, there are a lot of people say that to have better life we must share totally data, however, others opine that to keep us safe and stay ahead of the competition, dangerous and serious data must not be exposed to public, nevertheless these regards, based on before experiences I have neutral one sight. (55)
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Introduction
The number of sightseers who want to visit hazardous destinations is increasing. While there are many drawbacks for these visitors and also some advantage for them that should not be ignored. (31 words)
conclusion
In conclusion, tourists who travel to unusual and troublesome destinations may have some benefits but certainly these places have disadvantage too. (21 words
In these few last years , the number of tourists who are interested in inhabited and rough places has been a increase .Although there are some befits for these touristes, there are also detriment .