پیشنهاد جملات حرفه ای تر رایتینگ آیلتس

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پیشنهاد جملات حرفه ای تر رایتینگ آیلتس

پیشنهاد جملات حرفه ای تر در رایتینگ آیلتس

پیشنهاد جملات حرفه ای تر در رایتینگ آیلتس

در اینجا فهرستی از جمله های نوشته شده توسط زبان آموزان دوره های آیلتس مهندس ابوالقاسمی به همراه معادل های بدون خطا، آکادمیک تر و حرفه ای تر آن ها از نظر گرامری در دسترس خواهد بود.

بازدیدکنندگان گرامی میتوانند جمله های پیشنهادی خود را در بخش دیدگاه های همین صفحه وارد کرده و برابرهای مناسب تری برای آن ها دریافت نمایند.

با عضویت در گروه تلگرام ielts2 میتوانید جمله های پیشنهادی خود را برای بررسی توسط مدرس ارسال فرمایید. 

اینجا کلیک کنید یا به این شماره در تلگرام پیام داده و لینک گروه را درخواست کنید. 

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پیشنهاد جملاتی حرفه ای و مناسب تر در رایتینگ آیلتس – Task 2

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#55

 

 

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#54

Maybe it will be better if other countries in the world do the same thing as they did. 

 

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#53

School boss should let teachers spend more of school day outside the building.

School directors need to authorize the teachers to spend a larger chunk of the school day outdoors.

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#52

People in power have started to accept this growing problem.

Authorities have begun to acknowledge this pressing problem.

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#51

Mental power of people in big cities decreases because our energy is spent on dealing with a lot of things. 

Intellectual function weakens as our energy expended simply sorting out the overwhelming stimuli of city life.

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#50

The level of children who are fat and unhappy is increasing very much.

Childhood obesity and depression are reaching an epidemic level.

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#49

Only professionals have the ability to see very well and also match it with their ability to move well.

Only professionals can coordinate physical skills with sharp vision.

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#48

Internet helps people get help when they have problems such as a bad disease.

Internet enables people to seek support when undergoing difficulties such as a grave illness.

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#47

….showed same changes in these years similar to…..

…….followed a similar pattern to that of…..

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#46

It is important to find ways of cutting trees that cause less harm to environment.

It is important to develop more environmentally friendly logging practices.

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#45

Roots of trees keep the soil in its place and stop soil loss.  

Tree roots stabilize the soil and help prevent erosion.

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#44

Internet removes the limitations that are caused by real world.

Internet eradicates  the limits imposed by the physical world.

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#43

Wheelchairs are big and heavy and also are difficult to move in small places.

Wheelchairs are unwieldy and difficult to maneuver in tight spaces.

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#42

He tried to gather support and money for that new business.

He rallied support and raised money for that venture.

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#41

These students are encouraged when they can talk with others or when teachers talk in class.

Discussions and verbal lectures stimulate these students.

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#40

He used only his brain and believed in hard work and at the end he changed aviation completely.

Depending only on his intelligence and work ethic, he eventually revolutionized aviation.

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#39

People always buy expensive things because they think these things give them higher level.

People consistently purchase pricey items because of the perceived status those items confer.

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#38

Important jobs need a lot of time.

High-level jobs require inordinate amount of time

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#37

The situation in some countries has become better but still more countries should do the same.

Although many countries have made improvements, many more have yet to follow their example.

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#36

Smart children use difficult methods to solve problems.

Gifted children take sophisticated approaches to problem solving.

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#35

Regardless of limitations of their organization or bureaucracies they can do the work with their own approach.

Being free from limitations imposed by organization or bureaucracies they will be able to perform the tasks the way they consider the best. 

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#34

People think that it could bring a higher future work.

People think that they can have better career prospects.

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#33

Employment has a better situation in big cities.

There is a higher rate of employment in major cities.

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#32

This repair had a good effect on museum.

This renovation had a considerable/profound/significant/major effect on the museum. 

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#31

Research need a lot of money.  

Conducting a research requires considerable financial resources

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#30

Some companies earn some money with selling their information.

Some companies put up their information for sale in order to generate revenue (=increase income)

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#29

The population in a small town definitely is fewer

the population in a small town is comparatively smaller

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#28

So, there is a better chance of a job position.

So, this improves your chance This will definitely improves your chance of being considered for a decent job.

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#27

When, some one get older get into a different situation also can decide better.

As people grow old they gain more experience and as a result they can make wiser decisions.

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#26

Also my new home don’t have any space for bicycle.

Moreover, there is not any space for parking my bicycle in the vicinity of my new home.

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#25

There is a small age gap between children and parents

Age difference between children and parents

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#24

 They have a better children

They can raise better children

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#23

Grow a baby.

Raise a child.

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#22

Millions of people lives in poor situations.

Millions of people live in poverty.

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#21

…and probably not get in to trouble.

….or perhaps avoid danger.

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#19

From Some people’s opinions

From Some people’s perspective/point of view, …

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#20

All they are obligated to do sums up to

All they are obligated to do are limited to

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#18

Others including me contrary to these opinions think…

Others including me disagree with this opinion and think…

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#17

Teenagers are supported about basic necessities.

Teenagers are supported when it comes to basic necessities.

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#16

Students can progress their different abilities

Students can improve their different abilities

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#15

You can fit studying in throughout your day

Student can set a time that fits them best. 

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#13

These children are upbringing according to the latest information of the day.

These children have been educated based on the latest research in education.

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#14

Due to they can take benefit from their parents‘s support.

Due to the fact that they can take full advantage of their parents‘s support.

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#12

This policy will have a deep effect on society. 

This policy will have a dramatic/profound/significant effect on society. 

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#11

We will have the chance to get on our feet again.

It will be easier for young adults to recover from such emotional traumas

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#10

The problems that these societies have are substantial.

The challenges that these societies face are substantial.

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#9

So, usually as much as we getting close to adult life we become more conservative.

 Furthermore, as one starts to live their adult life, more caution will be likely for them to exercise and become more conservative as a result.

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#8

I was shocked because she said it might be damaged after I bought it. I think it is unreasonable.

It was very disturbing to hear from your staff that the item might have been damaged after the purchase and I find this claim very unreasonable.

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#7

Students will have a lot of chance to find a good job after graduation. 

Students will have plenty of opportunity to begin successful careers after graduation. 

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#6

Some people think that acceptance of a bad situation should be done. 

Some argue that an unfavorable condition should be accepted/embraced

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#5

Since pollution treatment needs spending money, they probably release much of it into the atmosphere. 

Since pollution mitigation requires proper financial resources, a major part of it is probably released into the atmosphere.

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#4

I’m writing this letter to say to you that…

I’m writing this letter to inform you of

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#3

Moreover, no neighbors to bother you when you live in a house. 

Moreover, residents of houses are not bothered by curiosity of immediate neighbors in comparison with living in apartments.

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 #2

There are many reasons for air pollution in big cities. 

Several factors are behind the air pollution in megacities

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#1

Students can study at any time

Students can enjoy a more flexible learning schedule

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پیشنهاد جملاتی حرفه ای و مناسب تر در رایتینگ آیلتس – Task 1

 

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#1

The graph shows….

A glance at the graph provided reveals…

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#2

A and B look like each other and are similar.  

There are some striking similarities between A and B

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  There were big fluctuations in A and B. 

Both A and B saw considerable fluctuations.

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#4

The figure increased from %10 in 1920 to %15 in 1935 and then it decreased rapidly to only %5 in 1945. 

√ Increasing from %10 in 1920 to %15 in 1935, the figure then plunged to a low of just %5 in 1945. 

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This was followed by a period of exponential growth, with…..reaching a peak of %20 in 1950.

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The second half of the period, however, brought a sustained decline to this figure. 

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#7

 

The figure fluctuated at somewhere between 5 to 10% prior to 1940, before dropping sharply to less than 5% in 1945.  

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#8

 

The following 5 years saw a rapid decline in this rate, to somewhere in the vicinity of 15 percent in 1950, followed by a steady fall. 

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#9

 

While the figures were comparable until 1950, the gap between these two widened after this time. 

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#11

 

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Hossein taheri
مهمان
Hossein taheri

Moving gets tough for diabled people when they want to utilize large wheelchairs in the unfit walkways.of the town.

Nassim.m
مهمان
Nassim.m

شماره 7 نباید plenty of opportunities باشه؟

فاطمه فیضی پور
مهمان
فاطمه فیضی پور

واژه remain در این جمله مناسب هست؟ :
some prefer to accept difficult situations and remain in a stable condition
جمله زیر درست است؟ و به عنوان جمله اول پاراگراف جهت بیان main ideaزیاد طولانی نیست؟
Some people are strong advocate of this approach that the best way to do on approach to the undesirable situation is acceptance
در مورد درست بودن جمله های زیر هم شک دارم
not thinking to changing difficult situation contributed to people stay away from stress
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changes are always challenging and might be create tension
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However they don’t know; if do work toward changing unfavorable conditions, what will happen next.

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