IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Free Share Information

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Free Share Information

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Free Share Information

در اینجا یک نمونه پاسخ در سطح نمره 7.5 برای اولین سوال رایتینگ تسک 2 آکادمیک از کمبریج 12 آورده شده است. این پاسخ برای استفاده زبان آموزان تنظیم شده و کوشش شده از جمله ها یا واژگان بسیار دشوار در آن استفاده نشود.

یک پاسخ ساده در سطح نمره 6 هم برای زبان آموزانی که در سطح پایین تری قرار دارند اضافه خواهد شد.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Free Share Information

نمونه های مقدمه 2 جمله ای

Information sharing is an inevitable result of modern communication. While some people support the idea of maximum information sharing, others believe it should be under restriction and to some extent I agree with both views. (35 words) 

Sharing information is commonplace in the modern world that we live in. While some argue that maximum sharing information should be encouraged, others believe some information is too important for sharing freely and I tend to agree with both views.(40 words)

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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7 تا 7.5

The unbelievable progress in the field of science and technology in the recent decades would be impossible without sharing information with generosity. While some argue that information sharing should be maximized without restrictions, others including me think it must be under control. This essay discusses both viewpoints. (47 words)
Some argue for the maximum level of sharing information. First of all, this approach saves time since otherwise a great deal of research would be repetitive and millions of hours would be spent on achieving the same results around the globe. A more synchronized research with collective targets would be imaginable if sharing the information is the priority. Secondly, the pace of progress in science and academic world will increase drastically as many studies pave the way for future breakthroughs. Having access to the results of thousands of studies worldwide each year enables a scientist to directly benefit from contribution of others and have numerous hours to observe, ponder and broaden their horizon. (113 words)
Yet others maintain that because of the outstanding value of some information, there should be a limit on how much is to be shared. First of all, unchecked information sharing inevitably discourages new lines of research since the results will be revealed for free. In today’s world, where financial incentive for every serious activity is the key, the charitable nature of free display of results will be proved disastrous. Secondly, the risk that some sensitive information may fall into the wrong hands should not be overlooked. Terrorists groups around the world, for instance, undoubtedly seize every opportunity and abuse free information related to say nuclear facilities or water treatment plants to launch lethal terror attacks. (115 words)
In conclusion, while there are valid arguments for free sharing of information, the benefits of limiting such approach is enormous and I am personally convinced that more benefits can be gained when sharing information is controlled by imposing some limitations. (40 words)
Total = 315 words

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نمونه پاسخ مدرس از نظر لغات و ساختار های دستوری در سطح نمره 6 تا 6.5

Human has always shared information with others though the history. Although some people think information should be shared with others without any limitation, others including me think information sharing should be limited somehow. In this essay both views will be examined. (41 words)
Some people think there are more benefits in sharing information as much as possible. First of all, it will be cheaper for scientists to continue their work because they can easily use the results of the works of others. Research is very expensive and also takes a lot of time too. When people start to share their works, it will be very easy for others to simply use the results and save their time and money. Secondly, science can make more progress because what researchers find can help others to work on new ideas and products. New research and development is impossible without necessary information of the past, so sharing information is a critical factor. (115 words)
On the other hand, some people think that we should restrict the information that is shared. First of all, when all information is shared, very few people will be eager to continue to work because they cannot make money. This is very important because these days, financial side of any business or even scientific and academic world is important to everyone. Secondly, some of this information can be used for killing people by terrorists. Information related to nuclear research, for example, can be used to make bombs or to kill millions of people if it is shared without limitation, so some rules must keep certain information secret and hidden. (109 words)
In conclusion, it is obvious that sharing information without any limitation benefit many people but some people think that the dangers of sharing some information is real and I personally agree with the second group. (35 words)
Total: 300 words

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نمونه پاسخ پایان کتاب کمبریج در سطح نمره 6

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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط زبان آموزان دوره تیرماه 1399 (سطح نمره 6.5)

These days sharing information is an important issue in the society. Although there are people who believe information can be shared freely, I think it is required to consider some restrictions for sharing information. (34 words)
Some people believe maximum sharing information is more helpful. First of all, unlimited sharing information results in developing free online resources of information and this can facilitates accessing information. For example, online libraries provide accessing a lot of books for everyone all over the world. Also, researchers and scientists can easily find and read any scientific paper in the field of their study which prevents duplicate research and helps advancement of science more rapidly. Secondly, with easy sharing of information people can save their time because in a few minutes everyone can access almost any information they required on the internet, while in the past people have to spend a lot of time for obtaining information. (116 words)
Other people think sharing information must have some restrictions. First of all, information security is an important issue in the current modern society. In order to protect people’s privacy, some information should publish with limitations. Because in some cases the information belongs to people or corresponds to confidential subjects. Some people can use information illegally if there isn’t any limitation for accessing information. They can apply the information for committing crimes and damaging people. Secondly, some people and companies earn money from their inventions and ideas. So, they don’t want to let other people and their competitors to access the results of their efforts. Free sharing information can be led to poor quality of information and decreasing motivation of inventors. Because it would be irrational to spend a lot of time and obtain no money. (135 words)
In conclusion, while some people agree with unlimited sharing information, others believe sharing information should have some limitations. I think it is more beneficial to control sharing information. (28 words)

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 IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Free Share Information

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