نمونه رایتینگ فرایند تسک اول رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک
در اینجا یک رایتینگ تسک 1 از کمبریج آیلتس جلد پانزدهم به همراه سمپلی در سطح نمره 6.5 به همراه توضیحات ارایه شده توسط اگزمینر در دسترس قرار داده شده است.
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نمونه پاسخ نمره 6 نوشته شده توسط محمدرضا از زبان آموزان پاییز 1401
The diagram shows the process in which instant noodles are made in eight steps, starting from transporting flour from storage silos to mixers to make the dough, to labeling and sealing the finished product.
In the first stage, flour is taken from storage silos and delivered to the noodle factory by truck. After that the flour is put through a mixer where water and oil are added. Following this the mixture passes through rollers where dough sheets are formed and as soon as the dough sheets are created, they pass through several circular blades in a form of a cylinder and are cut into strips.
When they are formed into strips, the noodles are turned into discs and they are then fried in oil and dried. In the final steps the instant noodles are put into cups where vegetables and spices are added for flavor then the cups are labelled and sealed. At this point the whole process is completed.
Overall, this fully mechanized operation can be divided into 8 main steps, starting with flour storage, dry noodle assembly, cooking, and finally packaging for consumption.
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نمونه پاسخ در سطح نمره 6.5 + توضیحات اگزمینر
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