نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Are The Happiest Time of Life از کمبریج آیلتس 9 جنرال B که توسط مدرس آیلتس با نمره 8 (مهندس ابوالقاسمی) و اگزمینر آیلتس نوشته شده در دسترس زبان آموزان گرامی می باشد:

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Adults are happier
# have a job
# have family

Teenagers are happier
# more free time
# more hope for the future

نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای

Happiness seems to be the human’s final goal. While some argue that teenagers have the opportunity to have more happiness, others believe it would be easier for adults to achieve it. (31 words)

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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 6

Everyone is looking for happiness in their lives. Although I believe teenage years enjoy the happiest time, adulthood can also be very enjoyable.

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Some people argue that adulthood is the happiest time in the whole life. First of all, adults usually have a full-time job, which means they are financially stable. Unlike teenagers, they do not need the support of others, which gives them the feeling of satisfaction and happiness. Secondly, when someone turns 18 years old and is considered an adult, they can start a family and have children. This big step in life is filled with pleasant feeling and sense of happiness for many people. The first time they find someone to live with for the rest of their life or when their children are born are among the very happy moments that only adults can experience. (116 words)

Others feel that teenage years are the happiest stage in life. First of all, teens have much more free time than adults, as they are financially supported by their families and do not work for long hours. Consequently, they have a great opportunity to enjoy their free time with their friends and simply have a lot of fun. Secondly, teenagers are very young without much painful experience and therefore have an optimistic view of the future. Most of them believe they will be someone important in the future with a good job who can make the world a better place. Such view, which may not necessarily happen in reality, is a source of happiness and joy in many people in that age. (122 words)

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To make somebody happy /// to be/feel happy /// to achieve true happiness /// To support somebody emotionally /// To enjoy somebody’s support  ///To have complete freedom to do something /// to have many friends /// to form a friendship /// to get married /// to begin a career /// to have a successful career /// to build a career /// to take/have responsibility /// primary/sole responsibility /// to accept/take full responsibility /// leisure time/activity /// to make a decision /// a right/difficult/important decision /// plan for the future /// promising/bright future /// to have/receive an education /// further/higher education 

 

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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7

Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times. First of all, they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Secondly, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. Spending time on activities that they truly love can create a sense of satisfaction for them A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.(121 words)

On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. First of all, the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy is mentioned as an important reason. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Secondly, adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step.(112 words)

In conclusion, while some consider teenage years as the time of enjoying the happiest moments in life, other people have the same view about adulthood. I believe both of these times can be the happiest moments in our lives regardless of age. (42 words)

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نمونه پاسخ اگزمینر در سطح نمره 9

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Some believe that life in modern cities is much better. While others say life in small towns is easier. I think life in small towns is better.

Some people think it is better to live in a big city.first of all, there are the best transportation system. People have access to better roads and better means of transport. Big cities have access to better road networks, airports and trains that make transportation easier. Secondly, access to health facilities in modern the cities also easy. You can better medical services in the city becase most of the hospitals

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سلام

1-میشه مقدمه رو با سوال شروع کرد؟اینجوری پر کشش تر میشه به نظرم Which part of life is the happiest? People have different opinions about it.

2-Adults can have jobs even if they be uneducated.
این جمله درسته؟

3-و اینکه earn income حرف اضافه لازم داره؟

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Erfan tabatabaie
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Erfan tabatabaie

Erfan tabatabaie
Ielts dey 99
Adults
Have a stress
Have a job
Have a
Teenger
More dangeres
Big city
Many job
More facilities
Small town
Weather is clean
Low costs

mehdi Moayeri
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mehdi Moayeri

Idea:
Adults are happier
# Money
# leisures like alco.hol, s.moking, s.e..x
Teenagers are happier
# energy of youth
# health
Introduction:
Happiness has different meanings during life. Some people think that it can be achieved during the teenage years and regret that the years has been passed, in contrast, others believe adulthood is the happiest years.(34)

Sara Abbasi
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Sara Abbasi

Sara (mehr 99
Happiness is one of the items that every one is looking for thorough the life . people have tow perspective of happiest time . some of them believe teenage years were more enjoyable than adults life while the others think adult life has more reasons to be happy

محدثه افخمی
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محدثه افخمی

محدثه افخمی . جلسه دوم. انلاین ایلتس مهرماه ۹۹
A feeling of happiness is very important in our life. Although some people believe adult life happier than teenage years, others including me believe teenage years can have more happiness. (30 words)

Najme
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Najme

Individuals tend to seek happiness in different stage of life . While some believe teenagers are more likely to feel satisfaction, others include me think old ones have greater chance to feel happy.

آرزو هاشمی آیلتس اسفند 98
میهمان
آرزو هاشمی آیلتس اسفند 98

Age of people can be a major factor to be happier .Although some people argue that teenagers are happier than adults ,other group have the opposite their idea. (28word) Some people think teenagers are more happiness.First of all,their needs for being happiness is very accessible.Almost teenagers can be happy with inexpensive things such as a electorinc toys,a video game,going to the park and other stuff like this.For instance , thesedays the biggest ambition for teenagers is having a tablet and most of them having smart phone or a tablet.Secondly,teenagers do have not imagination of future and live in peresent for… بیشتر بخوانید

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آرزو هاشمی آیلتس اسفند 98

سلام و احترام
من فیدبک این رایتینگو دریافت نکردم

آرزو هاشمی آیلتس اسفند 98
میهمان
آرزو هاشمی آیلتس اسفند 98

Having satisfaction feeling in life is essential at any age .Although a couple of people argue that teenagers can be having such feeling, others including me believe adults can be having such sense.33

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سروه

سروه ناصری -یک شنبه سه شنبه اسفند 98-
– Happiness is one of an imperative item that everyone seeks it unconstiously. Some people assume that teenagers expeience the happiest time in life, while others belive adulthood are happier althogh they have more responsilitys.

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محمد کرمی

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محمد کرمی

محمد کرمی- یکشنبه- سشنبه- آذرماه Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. We as mankind always looking for more pleasure from our restrict life while the best ages to enjoy life are variants among individuals. The teenage period has own supporter; the lifetime in term of an adult always has its advocators. I have an opinion between this to views, though. (49) In conclusion, some people want to come back… بیشتر بخوانید

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sahar ghods دوره آیلتس ترم آبان Happiness is one of the most important factors of felicity in everyone’s life. although some people think teenage years are the happiest time , others believe adult life brings more happiness and I agree with both. Some people think teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s life. First of all ,teenagers don’t have serious responsibility . people usually live with family support when they are teenagers, because they don’t have enough experience to accept great responsibility . they are in the early decades of their life so they just focus on their… بیشتر بخوانید

Mostafa Saadatinia
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Mostafa Saadatinia

The amount of happiness during different stages of life has been always a serious question. Although some people claim that their adolescence were the happiest period of their life, others point out that they experience happier time during their adulthood. I agree with latter. Some people believe that teenagers experience happier time. Initially, a teenager often has no responsibilities in home even in society, which means that there is less stress and more free time. Therefore they can enjoy more from their leisure activities and pursue their interests. Secondly, supporting by their parents is another reason for being happier. They… بیشتر بخوانید

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sadafseifollahi

introduction
these days the place that people choose for visiting are changed and the number of tourists who are enthusiastic about dangerous destinations are on the rise. this phenomenon have several benefits and drawbacks for
tourists

in conclusion, the people who travel to dangerous destinations might receive many benefits but it can have risk for them too

نرگس .س
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نرگس .س

Happiness plays an important roles in everyone’ s life . Although some believe that teenage time brings happiness , others argue that adulthood can be happier time .Both groups have their own reasons and I am totally agree with the second group .(40) Some believe that teenagers can have more happy time in the life .First of all , teen ages are the age of dream , freedom and recklessness because most teenagers are supported by their parents and they don’t have greater responsibilities . Therefore , they are not under stress like adult,and they also have more free time… بیشتر بخوانید

hashemi.kh
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hashemi.kh

Some reasercher think that the teenage are most happiest time of during the life. First of all in this level teenage don’t carry responsibility that is their,s duty are a little and their,s mind are free then they don’t face the problem finally they are free and they can go every time they want and they can back to home every time they want. Secondly they give money of parents every time they need and they don’t go to work at least they are free of the all things are limit. I think this level is most happiest for people… بیشتر بخوانید

اسدالله هوشنگی دوره ایلتس مهرماه 98
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اسدالله هوشنگی دوره ایلتس مهرماه 98

سلام استاد
منظور از (معنی) lie ahead در رایتینگ نمونه چیست؟

sadafseifollahi
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sadafseifollahi

People have different views about what time is the happiest time in lives.Some people believe teenage period is full of joy and happiness,while other think adulthood can be happier than teenage years.I agree with both beliefs for many reasons[39]

Farzaneh Zafary
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Farzaneh Zafary

Somebody argue for happiness of youth in their life but others has a different idea which indicate gladness of adulthood from life .of course both issues are debatable. But I agree with both of them. (35words) Some believe that teenagers enjoy the happiest times in their lives, at first adolescent life are joyful, cause no responsibility about other family members, and in fact youths just care of their requirements and can live a carefree life. Secondly as the power of energy in teenage years is much more than other periods of life, Then Teenagers are generally full of vitality and… بیشتر بخوانید

Tannaz A.i
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Tannaz A.i

The argue that in which age people feel happiness has been up for a debate.Although, some people think that teenagers have most happiness time , others, including myself believe that adults life have more happiness.This essay will give explanation and reasons.(42) Some of people believe that Teenagers have more happiness time .they have financial support from their parents, and do not have concern about making money. Not only do they have free time , but also they do not tend to shoulder any responsibilities.first of all, they have more leisure activities and spend most of their time with their friends… بیشتر بخوانید

fatemeh.ahi
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fatemeh.ahi

Being happy is one of the best achievement in human’s life. Although some people think that they can find it in teenage years, others including me believe that adult life is better for achieving happiest times. This essay will discuss both views. (42) On the one hand, some people think that teenagers enjoy the happiest times. First of all, adolescents have more energy. Some recent research at university of California has shown that teenagers are more energetic that is related to their physical situation. They tend to do more exercise than adult people. They usually have more ability and power… بیشتر بخوانید

samira
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samira

Living in a good place is very important for everyone. Although some prefer stay in a small town, others including me believe that it is better to live in a big city. This essay will discuss both views. Some people think that it is better to live in a big city. First of all, there are many benefits in big cities people can use easily public transportation, it is a good alternative to driving yourself, so there are subways, buses and a lot of taxies. Also, in a big city there are variety of entertainment for people at day or… بیشتر بخوانید

Zobeydeh
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Zobeydeh

In fact, it depends on everybody’s life. Some People believe that Teenagers experience more happiest times. First of all, They have less responsibility in the activities like Financial issues or do daily house working. Even They have a bit of responsibility, it is not very bold that They cannot endure or annoy them. Lack of series responsibilities have benefits for them. They do not have more stress because of that, and have open mind and excellent ideas for creating new things. Secondly, Teenagers have more free times. They can experience enjoyable memories with their friends. Spending more time with friends… بیشتر بخوانید

میلاد هاشمی
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میلاد هاشمی

Some people believe that the happiness can be achieved in teenager age. First of all being teenagers makes them free and they do not think about life ,so the girls and boys in the school prefer to think about their lesson than having a job and taking family responsibilities. Their responsibilities are to study hard so they can pass the exam with the highest score. They do not think about to earning money. Secondly On the one hand, some people feel that adolescent life is joyful than the matured. The reason is that the youths do not have any duties… بیشتر بخوانید

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پیمان

سلام خسته نباشید میخواستم در مورد تلفظ the ازتون سوال کنم تو ویدیوهای آموزشی مطابق فونتیکی که هست تلفظ میشه (یعنی ðə) ولی تو جمله و فیلم ها وقتی که سریع حرف می زنن من تلفظش رو de میشنوم الان تلفظ دقیقش چطوریه کلا حساسیت پیدا کردم رو این موضوع ممنون میشم جواب بدین