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نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time
نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time
نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Are The Happiest Time of Life از کمبریج آیلتس 9 جنرال B که توسط مدرس آیلتس با نمره 8 (مهندس ابوالقاسمی) و اگزمینر آیلتس نوشته شده در دسترس زبان آموزان گرامی می باشد:
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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Adults are happier
# have a job
# have family
Teenagers are happier
# more free time
# more hope for the future
پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 6
Some people argue that adulthood is the happiest time in the whole life. First of all, adults usually have a full-time job, which means they are financially stable. Unlike teenagers, they do not need the support of others, which gives them the feeling of satisfaction and happiness. Secondly, when someone turns 18 years old and is considered an adult, they can start a family and have children. This big step in life is filled with pleasant feeling and sense of happiness for many people. The first time they find someone to live with for the rest of their life or when their children are born are among the very happy moments that only adults can experience. (116 words)
Others feel that teenage years are the happiest stage in life. First of all, teens have much more free time than adults, as they are financially supported by their families and do not work for long hours. Consequently, they have a great opportunity to enjoy their free time with their friends and simply have a lot of fun. Secondly, teenagers are very young without much painful experience and therefore have an optimistic view of the future. Most of them believe they will be someone important in the future with a good job who can make the world a better place. Such view, which may not necessarily happen in reality, is a source of happiness and joy in many people in that age. (122 words)
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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7
Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times. First of all, they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Secondly, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. Spending time on activities that they truly love can create a sense of satisfaction for them A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.(121 words)
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. First of all, the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy is mentioned as an important reason. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Secondly, adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step.(112 words)
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نمونه پاسخ اگزمینر در سطح نمره 9
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ویدئوی آموزشی از استاد Liz – ایده پردازی و نوشتن Mixed Schools Separate Schools
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نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Are The Happiest Time of Life – بیشتر بخوانید
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