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دوره آموزشی پیش آیلتس تیرماه 1403

دوره های 2 ماهه فشرده پیش آیلتس از سطح کاملا مقدماتی برای رسیدن به آمادگی لازم برای دوره های آیلتس

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توضیحات

  کلاس 6 نفره سطح پیش آیلتس به صورت 2 روز در هفته
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✍️ این دوره از سطح نمره 4 تا 4.5 آیلتس (کاملا پایه) شروع شده و سطح زبان آموز را تا سطح 5 تا 5.5 آیلتس بهبود میبخشد تا ایشان بتوانند استارت پرقدرتی را در دوره های آیلتس داشته باشند.

✅ این کلاس #آنلاین_ویدیویی در اسکایپ بوده و هر 4 مهارت آیلتس (رایتینگ، اسپیکینگ، ریدینگ و لیسنینگ) همچنین لغت و گرامر را شامل میشود.

✅ تمامی #تکالیف در #تلگرام در تایم خارج از کلاس تصحیح خواهد شد.

📝 این دوره شامل 8 #تصحیح_رایتینگ کاملا منطبق با فرمت رایتینگ های آیلتس و #فیدبک بر روی 50 فایل صوتی ارسالی بخش #اسپیکینگ هست.

📆 این کلاس به مدت 2 ماه برابر 16 جلسه 1.5 ساعته ادامه خواهد داشت.

👨🏻‍🏫 مدرس این دوره مهندس ابوالقاسمی با نمره 8 آیلتس آکادمیک و بیش از 15 هزار ساعت تجربه تدریس هستند. (بررسی رزومه و مدارک) – (نمونه تدریس)

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توضیحات تکمیلی

نام مدرس

مهندس ابوالقاسمی

نحوه برگزاری کلاس

کلاس نیمه خصوصی

تعداد جلسات

شانزده جلسه

مدت زمان هر جلسه

یک ساعت و نیم

کل ساعات آموزشی

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Moein
Moein
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Writing 16th session

A significant amount of fossil fuel consumption can be a major reason for the air pollution issue around the world. Human activities for generating energy lead to use fossil fuels, involving vehicles that produce fumes containing harmful gases causing air pollution problems. As these activities increase, air pollution gradually rises. For example, fossil fuel consumption has significantly increased in my country for the past few years because many people prefer to use their vehicles for transportation, which is more comfortable and accessible. These activities increase the consumption of fossil fuels. The large number of vehicles in cities produces a lot of pollution in the air. (105 words)

Governments should invest in renewable energy resources instead of using fossil fuel that can be a primary solution for reducing air pollution. They should encourage people to use of renewable energy resources rather than fossil fuels. People can use renewable energy resources without producing fumes and this can help decrease pollution. For instance, in my country, solar energy can be an alternative source of energy because many regions in my country usually have sunny days. People can generate energy from the sun to charge their electric cars without producing pollution. Governments should invest in solar energy to promote its use among the public. (103 words)

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
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lead to use غلط هست در اینجا حتما بعد از lead to باید اسم باشه

use of فارسیه در کلاس هم توضیح دادیم این مورد رو

بقیه موارد خوب هست مشکل خاصی وجود نداره

Moein
Moein
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تست ۱۳سطخ متوسط

Reading

Reading

1.B,C paragraph.3 line.1 the whale’s journey / unusual—surprised  

2.C,E paragraph.3 line.3 (Typically—generally) / (move-migrate)

3.A,E paragraph.4 line.1 the coast of Brazil / (photographed—record) paragraph.5 line.3 (which have distinctive—identity)

4.A,E paragraph.6 line.1 (may have pass—possible) route paragraph.6 line.5 (may have pass—probably)

5.B,D paragraph.7 line.1 (more research—most humpback-whale research focus)

6.C,D paragraph.8 line.2 ( different journey—that migration pattern are shifting)

7.B,E  paragraph.7 line.9(finding where—satellite tracking)

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

بعضی دلایل خوب نیستند این رو در کلاس آیلتس صحبت میکنیم کامل تر

Moein
Moein
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Assignment 15th session Writing

People who prefer to be self-employed have flexibility in their time. self-employed people don’t require to go to work in fixed time; they can choose their work hours by considering their life circumstances. This flexibility allows people to do job in best time as possible as they can during the day and increase or decrease work hours by themselves. For example, in my country, professional web designers prefer to be self-employed because it does not require them to be present in the company at a fixed time every day. They have flexible work hours and that not require day off; they can continue their work at any time of the day. (111 words)

People who prefer to be self-employed have some financial risks in their job at first time. Because they require to network with other people effectively to takes orders from their customers for having income which needs to take a few months before they can receive any orders and that is a financial risk for self-employed people. For instance, in my country, some web designers choose to work for companies because they concern about the financial challenges of self-employed. In other words, they worry maybe they can’t find own clients and that may make a significant financial issues for several months.(100 Word)

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

don’t require نداریم اصلا. منبع شما چی بوده؟؟؟

they require to در پاراگراف دوم هم همینطور هست. اشتباهه حتما منبع رو چک کنید.

to takes????

در کل خوب هست اما به خطاهای کوچک باید دقت کنی و قبل از ارسال حتما دو سه بار بخونی

Moein
Moein
3 ماه قبل

Collocation “Internet”

1. Students can learn better about a subject by surfing the Internet.

2. Students have free access to the Internet in universities.

3. Many people use the Internet to buy necessities.

4. In my country, Some people don’t have Internet access at home.

5. Some students go on the Internet to find some information for their assignment.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

خوب هستند آفرین

Moein
Moein
3 ماه قبل

Assignment 15th session Writing

By studying in online universities, students can participate in online classes from anywhere at any time. Because study in online universities offers flexibility in time and location. That doesn’t require students move from their cities to university cities or live in dormitories. Online classes able students to choose a suitable time for their classes. For example, during the COVID-19 pandemic, people were unable to go out and couldn’t participate in universities classes due to the risk of contagious of virus increase by participating in fixed classes, but online universities enabled students to continue their studies without being physically present in fixed place. (102 Words)

Traditional universities provide an opportunity for students in practical education. In other words, traditional universities emphasize the practical aspect of education. Because that plays a significant role in students’ learning. Many courses require experiments that cannot be hold at online universities. For example, in subjects such as biology, students must learn to use laboratory instruments for biological observations and experiments to learn more about a subject, students unable to learn biology effectively without experiments in laboratories. Students may gain their experiences in the field effectively. Studying at traditional universities enables students to gain valuable insights into practical courses like biology. (100 Words)

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

they concern about غلط هست منبع چی بوده؟

مثال پاراگراف دوم فقط توضیحات هست یک مثال مشخص رو توضیح نمیده. فقط بخش اولش مثال هست بقیه توضیحه دوباره

بقیه بخش ها قابل قبول هست

Moein
Moein
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Assignment 13th session Oxford Words Skills

1. Consuming fast food play a crucial role in developing high pressure blood disease.

2. Some students prefer to study alone because they fear talk in groups.

3. Some student prefer to study in their home country because they may spend considerable amount of money for studying abroad.

4. Consuming fast food excessively caused health damage.

5. In 2003, earthquake caused damage in our country and destroy buildings, many people trapped in their home.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

شماره 1 plays باید باشه

شماره 2 بخش آخرش غلط هست fear talk نمیتونه باشه. منبع شما چی بوده؟

شماره 3 هم some باید با اسم جمع باشه

شماره 5 هر دو باید یک زمان باشه

❌ تعداد خطاها بالاست با دقت و با منبع بنویسید.

Moein
Moein
3 ماه قبل

Assignment 13th session Select Reading

1. Consuming fast food too much caused health problem.

2. By studying abroad students can reach higher academic qualification.

3. Some people move from one company to another one due to little job security.

4. Studying in groups completely differently from studying alone.

5. The government still can’t find a solution for reducing air pollution in big cites.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

❌ شماره 4 بی معنی هست.

Moein
Moein
3 ماه قبل

Collocation “consumption”

1. The government is encouraging people to reduce electricity consumption.

2. Oil consumption has risen dramatically in our country for the past few years.

3. Total consumption of energy has risen by 10% in our country.

4. In this summer household consumption of water risen by 15%.

5. High petrol consumption is a major reason for air pollution.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

شماره 4 غلط هست چون قسمت سوم فعل نمیتونه تنها بیاد. باید کامل بنویسید.

بقیه خوب هستند.

Moein
Moein
3 ماه قبل

Grammar Conditional statement second

1.If I didn’t like the job, I wouldn’t continue.

2.If I had more money, I would buy a new car.

3.If I work hard, I would have higher income.

4.If I study hard, I would pass the exam.

5.If he didn’t drive fast, he wouldn’t has an accident.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

❌ شماره 3 و 4 با فرمولی که گفتیم هماهنگ نیست. دقت کن

Moein
Moein
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Grammer Conditional Sentences zero and First

1. If people live in big cities with air pollution, they may damage their health.

2. If people consume fast food excessively, they will become overweight.

3. If people move from move from one company to another one, they may have a higher income.

4. If students study abroad, they will have better academic qualifications.

5. If people live in big cities, they enjoy more facilities.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

بسیار هم خوب

Moein
Moein
3 ماه قبل

Assignment 13th Oxford Words Skills

1. Some people prefer to live in small towns because air pollution has gradually increased in big cities.
2. Consuming fast food can lead to the development of high blood pressure diseases.
3. Consuming fast food is a major reason for the rising cholesterol levels in the blood.
4. The increasing crime rate in countries affected by financial issues.
5. Some employees prefer to stay in a company because there is a friendly atmosphere.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

مشکلی وجود نداره آفرین.

Moein
Moein
3 ماه قبل

Assignment 13th session Select Reading

1. Studying abroad provides the opportunity to learn more about the cultures of other countries.

2. Some employees move from one company to another one because they prefer to work for their favorite company.

3. Some people prefer to live in small towns to protect themselves from air pollution damage.

4. Some students join study groups because they believe they can learn better.

5. Some students believe they learn better when they study at a traditional university.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

culture جمع بسته نمیشه

بقیه خوب هستند

Moein
Moein
3 ماه قبل

Assignment 12th session Wirting

Financial issues are known as a major reason for the increasing crime rates in countries around the world. Many people believe that economic problems play a significant role in their lives because they impact on people feeling, making them nervous and concerns about the consequences of not being able to buy necessities. Low income leads them to make bad decisions. These situations force people to consider earning money through illegal activities such as robbery and kidnapping. They may try to convince themselves that they will only engage in these activities once, but eventually, they find themselves unable to stop. In such circumstances, people may turn to crime. (107 words)

Governments can try to increase job opportunities with higher incomes for people. The solution can help reduce crime rates, as economic issues are often the main reason of criminal activities. This solution has been shown to be effective because people can earn enough money to support themselves, they feel more secure and comfortable. In this situation that is less likely to engage criminal behavior. By finding the origin cause of crime, this solution may lead to decrease crime rates in societies around the world. It is one of the many strategies that governments can implement in their countries for this problem. (101words)

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

توضیحات خوب هست اما مثال نداره. فرمتی که گفتیم 50 کلمه توضیح هست و 50 کلمه مثال. تدریس جلسه اول رو چک کنید.

Moein
Moein
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Assignment 12th session Select reading Unit11

1. Some students prefer to study in their home country because they don’t have enough money to study abroad.
2. Some people choose to live in big cities because they can have a comfortable life.
3. Some employees prefer to move from one company to another one because of poor working conditions.
4. Consuming fast food too much is harmful to human health.
5. Some students prefer to study alone because it is hard to concentrate.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
3 ماه قبل

خوب هستند

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Collocation “advantage”

1. High calories and fat are disadvantages of eating fast food.
2. The great advantage of living in big cities is that they have more facilities to enjoy.
3. Sharing ideas is one of the many advantages of studying in groups.
4. Air pollution is a clear disadvantage of living in big cities.
5. A significant advantage of living in big cities is that they have more job opportunities.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Collocation “advantage”

1. High calories and fat are disadvantages of eating fast food.
2. The great advantage of living in big cities is that have more facilities to enjoy.
3. Sharing ideas is one of the many advantages of studying in groups.
4. Air pollution is a clear disadvantage of living in big cities.
5. A significant advantage of living in big cities is that have more job opportunities.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignment 11th session Oxford Words Skills intermediate Unit 11

1. Scientists believe people who eat fast food too much are at risk of developing high blood pressure diseases.
2. Fast food has a negative impact on health; scientists have confirmed that.
3. Some students decide to study abroad because of higher academic qualifications; in other words, they believe they learn better by studying abroad.
4. Some people move from one company to another one because they have reached the point where they earn a good salary.
5. Students have an opportunity to gain experience by studying abroad.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

عالی هستند آفرین 👌👌👌

Sara Mohammadkhani
Sara Mohammadkhani
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Collocation….> population
1. Larger populations require more food.
2. The population of a big city is more than a small city.
3. Many diseases over the centuries caused population decline.
4. As several employees were transferred to the new company, the company’s population was reduced.
5.The recruitment of immigrants began with the aim of increasing the population.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Sara Mohammadkhani
4 ماه قبل

company’s population منبع شما برای این ساختار چی هست؟ آیا چنین عبارتی رو در لانگمن دیدید؟

ضمنا رایتینگ شما باید دست کم 100 کلمه برای هر پاراگراف باشه. ویرایش کنید دوباره بفرستید.

Moein
Moein
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Assignment 9th session Writing
Eating fast food is known as a major cause of human overweight around the world because it contains more calories and fat than the human body needs. The extra calories and fat accumulate by eating fast food daily, leading to overweight. For example, in my country, fast food restaurants serve hotdogs and french fries that prepared with excessive oil. These fast foods contain more calories than the body needs. The significant point is, it’s not occurred once a month; these people frequently eat fast food and go to the restaurants multiple times a month, causing their bodies to accumulate more fat and calories. (103 words)

Fast food is almost available everywhere, people can access it easily without spending much time because the preparation of fast food is quick. Fast food restaurants use ingredients that can be cooked rapidly or sometimes do not require cooking. For example, in my country, some people who do not have much time for cooking prefer to buy fast food because there are many fast food restaurants available close to their work or home. This accessibility helps people access food more quickly and easily compared to cooking for themselves at home. (90 words)

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

human overweight چنین ترکیبی نداریم.

leading to overweight. این ترکیب هم غلط هست توی کلاس هم گفتیم اینجا باید اسم داشته باشیم این صفت هست.

it’s not occurred چنین ترکیبی نداریم این فعل اصلا فرم مجهول نداره

❌ تعداد ترکیب های چک نشده بالاست باید بیشتر دقت کنید.

پاراگراف ها نباید زیر 100 کلمه باشه. کمترین مقدار مجاز همون 100 کلمه هست. دقت کنید و برای رایتینگ های بعدی هم بیشتر ترکیب ها رو چک کنید هم مقدار رو دقت کنید.

Moein
Moein
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Collocation “population”
1. Some people prefer to live in small towns because small towns have low population density.
2. Low population density in small towns decreases people’s stress.
3. High population density in big cities makes people feel nervous.
4. High population density in big cities is causing heavy traffic jams.
5. Small towns don’t have traffic jam that because of low population density.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

❌ هر جمله باید یک کالوکیشن رو داشته باشه در همه این ها population density رو استفاده کردید که اشتباه هست. هیچ ساختار تکراری نباید داشته باشیم.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignment 10th session Select Reading Unit 10

1. Eating fast food has some advantages. For instance, fast food preparation is easy.
2. One advantage of big cities is that have better transportation.
3. The streets of big cities are very noisy, which make people feel nervous.
4. Some companies pay more money to hire skilled people.
5. Studying in home country is cheaper than studying abroad.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

این جمله ها هم بدون خطا هستند.

Moein
Moein
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Assignment 10th session Select Reading Unit 9

1. Students can learn better by sharing their ideas in a group.
2. Living in big cities is better because big cities provide modern facilities for people.
3. Eating fast food has some advantages. For instance, fast food does not require much time for preparation.
4. Some employees move from one company to another one because they wish to work for a famous organization.
5. Some employees move from one company to another one because they are always busy and do not have time for vacations.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

✅ خوب هستند اما کوشش کنید ساختارهای تکراری نداشته باشید.

Mozhgan
Mozhgan
4 ماه قبل

جلسه نهم disadvantage,Fast food

fast food can have a lot of negative impact on human health,It has a lot of harmful materials,include salt and sauce . These materials and Today’s eating habit increase the chance of being overweight and being sick.For example in my country, Iran,people go to restaurant and eating fast food more than twice a week and This can increase Sick in the country.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Mozhgan
4 ماه قبل

,including salt and sauce باید باشه

توضیحات و مثال هر کدوم باشد 50 کلمه باشند.

پاراگراف ها اصلی نباید از 110 کلمه بیشتر باشند. حتما تعداد کلمات رو بنویسید.

کلیت پاراگراف خوب هست اما این موارد باید رعایت بشه

Moein
Moein
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Assignment 9th session Select Reading Unit8

1. One disadvantage of living in big cities is the heavy traffic jams.
2. Fast foods have a negative impact on the human body, such as causing high blood pressure and high blood cholesterol levels.
3. There is a reason why some students prefer to study abroad.
4. People who live in big cities worry about pollution.
5. There are more facilities to enjoy in big cities, such as the capital city.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

بسیار خوب هستند. 👌👌👌

Moein
Moein
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Assignment of 9th session Oxford Words Intermediate Unit 9

1. Students have emotional support from their parents while studying in their home country.
2. Students who are the only child in a single-parent family prefer to study in their home country.
3. Students learn better by studying in groups because each member of the group needs to explain their ideas in more detail to convince others.
4. Students who wish to study abroad often choose to immigrate to Western countries.
5. Students who wish to study abroad emigrate from their home country to Western countries.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

بدون مشکل هستند 👌👌👌

Mozhgan
Mozhgan
4 ماه قبل

جلسه نهم collocation #Impact
1.fast food can have a lot of negative impact on your health.
2.Living abroad can has an impact on people’s future.
3.moving to another company have a big impact on my salary.
4.the government is looking at ways to reduce impacts of global warming.
5.Having a university degree may positive impact on your income.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Mozhgan
4 ماه قبل

moving to another company have باید has باشه چون جمع نیست.

may positive impact فعل نوشته نشده. بی توجه به منابع ننویسید.

Mohammad Kazem
Mohammad Kazem
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Assignment 9th session —collocation =Impact
1-Healthy foods can have an impact on decreasing blood pressure.
2-Decreasing the use of fast foods has a dramatic impact on losing weight.
3-Using a lot of oil and salt in fast foods results a negative impact on missing health.
4-Managers are looking at ways to reduce the impact on human resources.
5-U.S election has had a major impact on the financial market in the last month.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Mohammad Kazem
4 ماه قبل

results a negative impact on missing health. بی معنی هست. بدون منبع ننویسید.

بقیه خوب هستند.

Sara Mohammadkhani
Sara Mohammadkhani
4 ماه قبل

جلسه ی ۸:
Collocation….> information
1.I need more information to solve the problem.
2.The officer received information about a fugitive.
3.The newspaper contains useful information in different sections.
4.Artificial intelligence has interesting information about the future.
5.The manager had received wrong information.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Sara Mohammadkhani
4 ماه قبل

خوب هستند آفرین 🌸🌸🌸

Sara Mohammadkhani
Sara Mohammadkhani
4 ماه قبل

Writing : 98 word

Sara Mohammadkhani
Sara Mohammadkhani
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☆جلسه ی هشتم:
Writing:
Studying alone enables individuals to focus more efficiently on their academic goals. Without the distractions and interruptions of others, one can better manage their study schedule and make optimal use of their time. This independence allows for a more effective learning process, as one can concentrate more effectively on absorbing and comprehending the material. Furthermore, setting specific study times without interference from external factors allows for better concentration and a more productive use of time. Overall, studying alone provides a conducive environment for enhanced learning and academic achievement.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Sara Mohammadkhani
4 ماه قبل

توضیحات خوب هست اما مثال وجود نداره. در فرمولی که گفتیم 50 کلمه باید مثال نوشته بشه. تدریس کلاس و فرمول رو با دقت ببینید و بازنویسی کنید.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignment 7th session writing

Students can share their ideas by studying in groups. It really helps them learn better because each member of the group needs to explain their ideas in more detail to convince others that it is a good idea for solving a problem. This provides an opportunity for students to discuss different ideas and receive more information about the subject. For example, in my country, students in groups share different ideas for solving a physics problem. This helps students consider the problem from different perspectives. They need to search for information about the ideas and make corrections if necessary.(98Words)

Studying alone allows students to concentrate more on their homework and learn better. There are less distractions and annoyances that can affect their studying when they study alone in a quiet place, such as a library or a private place. This helps students focus on their homework effectively. For instance, in my country, students who want to study go to the library to find a single desk for studying because they believe they can concentrate better and study harder when there isn’t anyone close by making noise or causing distractions. This enables students to relax and concentrate better on their studies. (101 words)

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

بسیار خوب هست به همین شکل ادامه بده 🌸🌸🌸

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignment 8th session Select Reading Unit 7
1. Some students decide to study abroad because they wish to have a better future.
2. Big cities have air pollution, and some people have a problem with that.
3. Students learn better during group discussions.
4. It seems to me that some students prefer to study in their home country because they don’t have enough money to study abroad.
5. Some people with lung problems should avoid living in big cities.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Collocation “Impact”

1. Some people prefer to live in small towns due to the health impacts of air pollution.
2. Some students prefer to study in their home country because of financial problems.
3. Some employees move from one company to another one due to financial problems.
4. Some students prefer to study alone because they believe it has a significant impact on concentration.
Some students prefer to study in groups because they believe it has a significant impact on their academic qualifications.

Mozhgan
Mozhgan
4 ماه قبل

Assignment of the 8th season collocation #information
1.She gave me some general information about another company.
2.Internet provide new information for me.
3.Studying in group provided an opportunity to exchange information.
4.I need additional sources of information about live in big cities.
5.They are gathering basic information about big companies.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Collocation “job”
1. Some people move from company to another because of job satisfaction.
2. Some people transfer to big cities to take a permanent job.
3. Some people lose their jobs because of economic issues in their country.
4. Some employees quit their job because they find a better job.
5. They quit their job because they applied for a new job.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

people transfer to big cities نداریم چنین چیزی.

بقیه خوب هستند. با دقت بیشتری بنویسید و سعی کنید نزدیک تر به تاپیک های رایتینگ باشه.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignment 7th session Oxford Words Skills Unit7

1. Moving from one company to another one can make some people feel anxious.
2. Studying abroad after graduating from high school makes some students feel delighted.
3. Employees tend to perform better when they stay in one company for a long time because they have supportive friends to ask for help.
4. Staying in one company for a long time can make some people feel terrified.
5. Living in big cities can make some people feel upset.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignment 7th session Select Reading Unit6
1.Some people believe big cities are better than small towns.
2.Some students prefer to study in group instead of studying alone.
3.Students receive a poor education by studying in their home country.
4.Employees who want move from one company to another one may come across a few problems.
5.People should have a healthy respect for air pollution in big cities.

Nasim Hesari
Nasim Hesari
4 ماه قبل

جلسه هفتم Job
1-Temporary job: Teenagers can take temporary jobs to improve precious experience.
2-Job satisfaction: The amount of salary is one of reasons of job satisfaction.
3-Demanding job: Adults have permanent job therefore teenagers have much more demanding jobs than adults.
4-Manual job: Houskeeper is the one of manual jobs.
5-Quite job: Many quit their jobs because of a lack of job satisfaction.
6-lose job: Losing job is the reasons why people face sadness.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Nasim Hesari
4 ماه قبل

improve precious experience.این رو در لانگمن داریم؟

teenagers have much more demanding jobs than adults. این اشتباه هست. من فکر میکنم شما معنی demanding jobs رو متوجه نشدی. یه تحقیق بکن و اگر متوجه نشدی بگو که توی کلاس صحبت کنیم.

Houskeeper is the one of manual jobs. این اشتباه هست housekeeper یک شخص هست و ضمنا شما قرار بوده راجع به manual job بنویسی. داستان چیه دقیقا؟

is the reasons why چرا جمع؟ شما به یک مورد اشاره کردی.

❌ تعداد خطاهای ریز بالاست. بی دقت ننویسی و قبل از ارسال چک کن.

Nasim Hesari
Nasim Hesari
4 ماه قبل

Nasim Hesari, jalase 7
Some students prefer to study alone because they have more concentration during studying, almost they can focus on matters at home or in a library or other private space when they study alone. There is no one to disturb them and less distraction is something that can help every student since they try to understand their lessons. When students start to learn something alone, they can research deeply on the related books and articles individually. Therefore, many results achieve by students when they don’t have any distributions. Also, more deeply focus on lessons is the first result aloneness. (98 words)
One the other hand, however, there are students who prefer to study in group because of sharing ideas with other members of people in group. For these people, it is important to know different ideas and argue about related sources. Some classmates have some idea to solve some mathematic problems and help each other to find the reason of problem solvently. In fact, every lesson can understand by many ways that students can improve their knowledge in team work. Also, as students talk together and share some ideas, new ideas create at the same time too.(98 words)

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Nasim Hesari
4 ماه قبل

during studying, almost بین دو جمله باید نقطه باشه نه ویرگول. وقتی جمله تموم میشه فقط نقطه!

almost they can focus این ساختار کلا ترجمه فارسی هست. موقع نوشتن باید دقت کنی همون ساختار باید در لانگمن وجود داشته باشه. مثلا استفاده از almost رو باید چک کنید به چه صورت هست نه اینکه همونطور که در فارسی استفاده میشه بنویسید.

توضیحات و انسجام متن خیلی خوبه فقط نمیدونم چرا شما 50 کلمه مثال رو اصلا ننوشتی.

فرمول و فرمت رو اینجا چک کن حتما. چندین بار قبلا توی کلاس گفتیم:
✍️ آموزش ویدیویی نوشتن #پاراگراف های اصلی
https://youtu.be/3PZA8rZmpNQ

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

achieve success
a lot of success
در لانگمن هست استاد
achieve a lot of success هم سرچ کردم استفاده شده

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

زمانی که منبع رو درخواست میکنیم جمله کامل رو باید از لانگمن بفرستی.

اینترنت به هیچ عنوان ملاک نیست چون افرادی مثل تتلو هم ممکن است توش چیزی بنویسن و توسط گوگل ایندکس بشه. فقط لانگمن.

هر دو رو اگر در لانگمن داری بفرست.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignments of the 6th session-Select Reading Elementary Unit 5

1. In a small town, the streets are usually narrow.
2. People have better job opportunities because big cities have many companies.
3. Without sufficient financial resources, universities cannot improve the quality of education.
4. It is possible for people to achieve a lot of success in their careers by moving to another company.
5. can you bring me another pizza?

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

آیا چنین ترکیبی در لانگمن بوده؟ achieve a lot of success خیلی دقت کنید.

❌ جمله پنجم آکادمیک نیست و چنین جمله هایی مورد تایید نیستند لطفا ننویسید. فقط جمله های 10 کلمه ای میخوایم که بتونیم مستقیما در رایتینگ استفاده کنیم.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignment 6th session Writing

People have a chance to increase their income by moving from one company to another. Some companies pay employees more money because they have found ways to manage financial resources effectively, satisfy customers by improving the quality of products and services, and keep prices at a minimum. Moreover, they know if they satisfy employees it’s effect on the quality of products and services. For example, in my country, companies utilize digital marketing and websites for advertising and selling their products. This enables customers to purchase products directly from companies at a lower cost and cut out middlemen. These companies generate better profits, which in turn helps increase employees’ income.(109 words)

Employees tend to perform better when they stay in a company long-term due to familiarity with the job environment, colleagues, rules, and various situations, which can impact performance. Additionally, having friends at work creates a friendly atmosphere, enhancing productivity and increasing opportunities for advancement. Compared to starting anew in a different company, staying in one place is less demanding. For instance,in my country, in professions like healthcare and employees who work in hospital, having work friends can be beneficial for shift changes and problem-solving. This support may not be available to new employees or those changing workplaces after few years. (100 words)

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

have a chance to increase their income نباید به صورت فکت بنویسید. این تنها یک دیدگاه هست. لحن رو با استفاده از مودال ها ملایم کنید.

they have found ways to manage financial resources effectively, satisfy customers by improving the quality of products and services, and keep prices at a minimum. این سبک نوشتن اشتباه هست. شما بجای توضیح منطقی و ساده موردی که ادعا کردید فهرستی از ادعاهای جدید مطرح کردید که خودشون بدون توضیح هستند. ضمنا بلافاصله وارد یک مورد دیگه شدید Moreover, they know if they satisfy employees it’s effect

پاراگراف دوم هم به همین ترتیب نوشتن شده.

آموزش پاراگراف نویسی رو با دقت اینجا ببینید و به شیوه ای که توضیح دادیم بازنویسی کنید:
✍️ آموزش ویدیویی نوشتن #پاراگراف های اصلی (https://youtu.be/3PZA8rZmpNQ)

این سبک نوشتن کوچکترین هماهنگی با چیزی که تدریس کردیم نداره.

Sara Mohammadkhani
Sara Mohammadkhani
4 ماه قبل

☆تمرین جلسه ی ۶:
Writing:
Moving from one company to another can be better for potential career advancement. When you move to a new company, you have the opportunity to take on new challenges, learn new skills, and expand your professional network. This can lead to a faster career progression, as you are exposed to different perspectives and ways of working that can help you grow and develop. Additionally, some companies may offer better opportunities for promotion or career development than your current employer, allowing you to reach your career goals more quickly. By transferring to a new company, you can take control of your career path and create new opportunities for yourself that may not have been available in your current position.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Sara Mohammadkhani
4 ماه قبل

you have the opportunity to take on new challenges, learn new skills, and expand your professional network. این سبک نوشتن اشتباه هست. شما موردی که ادعا کردید(career advancement) رو باید به صورت ساده و گام به گام بدون طرح ادعای جدید توضیح بدید. جمله ای که اشاره شد 3 ادعای جدید مطرح کرده که هر کدوم نیاز به توضیح داره و از بحث اولیه هم فاصله میگیره. فرمت رایتینگ نویسی تدریس شده در جلسه اول رو با دقت ببینید.

همچنین آموزش ویدیویی با نمونه:
✍️ آموزش ویدیویی نوشتن #پاراگراف های اصلی (https://youtu.be/3PZA8rZmpNQ)

Additionally, some companies may offer better opportunities اینجا هم یک مورد جدید رو مطرح کردید درصورتیکه باید مورد طرح شده در اول پاراگراف توضیح داده بشه و 50 کلمه هم براش مثال بنویسید.

❌ این رایتینگ با شیوه تدریس شده کوچکترین هماهنگی نداره. اگر رایتینگ نویسی رو در نظر بگیرید بدون مشکل هست اما اگر میخواین آیلتس امتحان بدید باید به شیوه ای که گفتیم بنویسید.

در آخر پاراگراف تعداد کلمات رو بنویسید و فرمولی که تدریس شده رو دقیق رعایت کنید.

Sara Mohammadkhani
Sara Mohammadkhani
4 ماه قبل

☆تمرین جلسه ۶:
Provide <….Collocations
1.Research provides valuable information in any field.
2.Historical monuments provided information about the past to explorers.
3.The company provides a guarantee for its customers.
4.Technology provided a much appreciated service for people.
5.new qualifications must provide for changes in technology.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Sara Mohammadkhani
4 ماه قبل

خیلی خوب هستند اما دقت کن که اگر چیزی رو اصلا عوض نکردی باید کوشش کنید ترکیب ها رو کاملا حفظ کنی و در مرحله بعدی با کمی تغییر سعی کنی ببری سمت تاپیک های رایتینگ.

اینکه همیشه 100% کپی باشه اشتباهه اما برای شروع کار قابل قبول هست.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Collocation “information”

1. The police have received accurate information about him.

2. We need more information to make a decision.

3. The man was jailed for providing false information.

4. This document contains information about the victim.

5. Sometimes the internet is not a reliable source of information.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignments of the 6th session-Oxford Word Skills Unit 6

1. Some companies pay more money to hard-working employees.

2. Some people move to another company because they believe.

their new employer’s generous offer to pay the bill.

3. Some people move to another company because their previous company was dull and boring.

4. The company is responsible for a budget of over 5 million dollars.

5. Mothers are always highly ambitious for their children.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

چرا وسط جمله نقطه گذاشتید؟ they believe. their new

their new employer’s generous offer to pay the bill. این ترکیب بی معنی هست. قبل از ارسال تک تک جمله ها رو چک کنید.

5 million dollars. این ترکیب برای نوشتن قیمت نادرست است. به ساختار درست دقت کنید $5 Million و همیشه قبل از ارسال چک کنید.

❌ تعداد خطاها بالاست. بیشتر دقت کنید و حتما قبل از ارسال با منبع چک کنید.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignments of the 5th session-Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 4
1. The mayor decides to change the appearance of the whole city.
2. Everything in his room is neat and tidy.
3. He has a fattish face with rough skin.
4. The doctor thinks she is too old to get pregnant.
5. He prefers to use contact lenses instead of glasses.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

خوب هستند اما همانطور که گفتیم باید درباره تاپیک های رایتینگ بنویسید.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Assignments of the 5th session-Select Reading Elementary Unit 4
1.Choosing the right answer depends on your knowledge.
2.your behaviour in the class is not acceptable.
3.I can’t make a decision in this situation.
4.It’s difficult to describe how he feels.
5.It is traditional to eat watermelon Yalda celebration.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

watermelon in Yalda celebration باید باشه.

قبلا هم بارها گفتیم که جمله سازی ها باید حتما درباره تاپیک های رایتینگ باشند. بی ربط نوشتن هدف ما از این تکلیف نیست.

Moein
Moein
4 ماه قبل

Collocation “Research”
1. His research is about the effects of smoking on the lungs.
2. Scientists are doing research on treatments for cancer.
3. The purpose of this research is to find treatments for the coronavirus.
4. The research team requires financial support from the university.
5. Government allocates a lot of money for medical research.

مهندس ابوالقاسمی
پاسخ به  Moein
4 ماه قبل

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