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دوره آیلتس فشرده گروهی 3 ماهه آنلاین
😍 با 24 تصحیح رایتینگ! کلاس آنلاین فشرده آیلتس بهمن ماه 1403 روزهای 1 شنبه و 4 شنبه ساعت 8 تا 9.30 شب. (با قوی ترین پشتیبانی) بهترین گزینه برای زبان آموزان سختکوش و هدفمند با هدف ارتقاء نمره در بازه زمانی کوتاه
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✍️ این دوره از سطح نمره 5.5 تا 6 آیلتس شروع میشه و شما رو تا سطح 6.5 تا 7.5 آیلتس میرسونه. اگر به تازگی در دوره یا آزمونی شرکت نداشتید با لینک تعیین سطح میتونید سطح رو مشخص کنید و نتیجه رو برای پشتیبانی بفرستید.
✅ کلاس آنلاین ویدیویی در اسکایپ هست و هر 4 مهارت آیلتس (رایتینگ، اسپیکینگ، ریدینگ و لیسنینگ) لغت و گرامر رو شامل میشه.
✅ تمامی تکالیف در تلگرام و برخی همین صفحه از سایت در تایم خارج از کلاس تصحیح میشه. (دیدن نمونه دوره های قبل)
✅ پشتیانی طلایی! حرفه ای ترین پشتیبانی رو در تلگرام و در ارتباط مستقیم و پیوسته با استاد دارید (بشنوید!):
✅ منابع این دوره گلچینی از معتبرترین و جدیدترین کتاب های انتشارات کمبریج و نکات و جزوه های تکمیلی اگزمینر های مطرح آیلتس در سطح جهانی (بشنوید!):
✅ این کلاس گروهی هست و ظرفیت 10 زبان آموز رو داره. چند نفر به صورت فقط شنونده ممکن هست اضافه بشوند.
✅ تمامی آموزش های پایه به صورت رکورد شده در دسترس است و هیچ جای نگرانی از نظر غیبت یکی دو جلسه در طول دوره وجود نداره.
📝 24 تصحیح کامل رایتینگ کاملا منطبق با فرمت رایتینگهای آیلتس و فیدبک بر روی صد فایل صوتی ارسالی بخش اسپیکینگ وجود داره.
🎯 برنامه ریزی شفاف و حرفه ای. اصول تمامی 4 مهارت آیلتس و صفر تا صد نکتهها به صورت دقیق در همین دوره کاور میشه (بشنوید!).
📆 دوره به مدت 3 ماه در 24 جلسه 1.5 ساعته ادامه داره.
👨🏻🏫 مدرس این دوره مهندس ابوالقاسمی با نمره 8 آیلتس آکادمیک و بیش از 15 هزار ساعت تجربه تدریس هستند. (بررسی رزومه و مدارک) (نمونه تدریس)
🚀 #آغاز این دوره روز 4 شنبه 3 بهمن 1403 هست.
👈 توضیح بیشتر (در یوتیوب)
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👈 تعیین سطح رایگان با این لینک و ارسال نتیجه با اسکرین شات به پشتیبانی در تلگرام
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In recent years, advancements in farming techniques have significantly enhanced agricultural practices compared to traditional methods. Despite these innovations, millions of people worldwide continue to face hunger. A critical factor contributing to this issue is global warming, which undermines agricultural productivity. However, we can mitigate this challenge by reducing pollutants and emissions. (52)
Global warming is a primary reason farmers encounter difficulties. As environmental temperatures rise, water resources diminish, complicating irrigation efforts. When cultivators experience water shortages, they will have to rely on rainfall to meet their water needs. Altered climate patterns lead to decreased rainfall, exacerbating the situation. For instance, in my city of Gilan, we used to experience substantial rainfall every autumn, replenishing dams and streams for summer irrigation. Recently, however, the rainfall has significantly decreased, leaving local farmers struggling with water shortages. This decline in precipitation not only threatens crop yields but also jeopardizes the livelihoods of those dependent on agriculture, further perpetuating the cycle of hunger. (107)
One effective approach to combating global warming is managing pollution. To support farmers, we must prioritize the reduction of pollutant emissions. Individuals with outdated vehicles should consider upgrading to newer models or, ideally, transitioning to electric vehicles that are more environmentally friendly. In my country, many people previously relied on older cars that produced substantial emissions. Once they recognized the detrimental effects of their vehicles, many sought to invest in cars equipped with pollution filters. This shift not only benefits the environment but also contributes to alleviating global warming. (89)
In conclusion, while new farming methods are being adopted globally, hunger persists. Global warming must be acknowledged as a key factor hindering farmers’ efforts. By managing pollutant emissions, such as transitioning to modern vehicles and promoting sustainable transport, we can help control rising environmental temperatures and support agricultural productivity. (49)
(sustainable transport: aims to create a more efficient, accessible, and environmentally friendly transportation system).
environmental temperatures چنین ساختاری نداریم خیلی دقت کنید و حتما چک کنید.
approach to combating در این ساختار شکل ساده فعل نیاز هست.
در پاراگراف اره حل اصلا اشاره نشده چطور این کار به رفع گرسنگی کمک میکنه. در واقعیت هم ارتباط مستقیمی وجود نداره بهتر بود این مورد رو اصلا نمینوشتید.
اما از نظر فرمت و توضیح و مثال همه چیز به خوبی انجام شده. به همین صورت ادامه بدید و به نکاتی که گفتیم دقت کنید.
There are various tourists who are very keen to visit novel locations, whether the traveling conditions are weird or challenging. While these experiences may provide valuable insights for nature enthusiasts, they should be considered hardships when starting their adventure. (39)
Certain enthusiasts who have traveled a reluctant route have enhanced their experience. During the trip, they should adapt to unpleasant surroundings that encourage them to improve their life perspective. They should refrain from using their equipped accommodations and should endeavor to meet their needs by themselves. For instance, in my country, local tourists are truly passionate about camping in the Lut Desert, challenging themselves with exotic creatures and the risk of dehydration. It is not only a memorable experience, but it also provides some practical exposure for adventurers who have slept in tents with limited facilities instead of in comfortable hotels in the city center. This kind of experience causes people to increase their patience when the situation is undesirable. (120)
Adventure journey can present tourists with challenging experiences. These challenges are not only related to harsh geography, but can also involve inadequate facilities when emergencies threaten their safety. Travelers may find themselves awkwardly contacting emergency services center and relying on their first-aid kits. For example, tourists who visit the Alborz mountain range in my city my face dangers such as unstable pathways and falling rocks, even when they expect well-organized conditions. This type of journey often takes adventurers to unknown locations they have never seen before. Enduring hardships can turn a journey into a difficult experience for travelers who seek to broaden their horizons. (104)
تمام عبارت ها باید در دیکشتری لانگمن وجود داشته باشه اصلا نباید حدس بزنید یا جای کلمات دیگه بنویسید. برای مثال novel locations یا a reluctant route یا enhanced their experience یا Adventure journey
معادل چیزی که در سوال هست نیست conditions are weird / a reluctant route
they should be considered hardships مشخص نیست they به چه چیزی برمیگرده و جمله به نظر غلط هست.
Certain enthusiasts who have traveled a reluctant route have enhanced their experience. During the trip, they should adapt to unpleasant surroundings that encourage them to improve their life perspective. They should refrain from using their equipped accommodations and should endeavor to meet their needs by themselves. For instance, اینجا توضیح اصلا کافی نیست و به سرعت سراغ مثال رفتید. این سبک نوشتن اشتباه هست با چیزی که گفتیم هماهنگی نداره
This kind of experience causes people to increase یعد از مثال دوباره وارد توضیحات شدید درصورتیکه گفتیم توضیح کامل باشه و بعد در تکمیلش مثال بیاد و پاراگراف بعدش تموم میشه
در پاراگراف دوم هم همین حالت تکرار شده: Enduring hardships can turn a journey into a difficult experience for travelers who seek to broaden their horizons. (104)
باید هم تمامی ساختارها رو با دقت در دیکشنری چک کنید هم فرمت رو به شکلی که گفتیم تغییر بدیم. مشکل بزرگ دیگه ای وجود نداره.
“Increasingly, tourists are choosing to travel to destinations with extreme and challenging conditions. What are the advantages and drawbacks for those who choose to explore such difficult destinations?”
There are some reasons why people choose to travel to difficult places, but the main reason is the love for adventure. Many tourists enjoy visiting such places because they want excitement and new experiences. They like to do something different from their daily routine. Facing hard conditions, like rough paths or unpredictable weather, makes the trip more exciting. Some travelers feel proud when they go on a difficult journey, as it gives them a great sense of achievement. Exploring new and untouched areas also makes them feel special and connected to nature. These experiences make the trip unforgettable. Many people enjoy the challenge of staying in tough conditions, which gives them confidence.(112 words)
On the other hand, one big problem with visiting these places is the danger to health and safety. Harsh weather and limited food and water supply can make the trip very hard. Tourists may not always be ready for such difficult conditions, which can put them at risk. If someone gets sick or injured, medical help might be a challenge, making the situation worse. In such areas, it is often difficult to find basic services, and travelers may struggle if they are not well-prepared. Because of these risks, traveling to such places may not be suitable for everyone. People who are not experienced in handling tough conditions may find these trips too dangerous and uncomfortable.(115 words)
به نظر میرسه با کمک نوشته شده چون هیچ خطایی در این متن وجود نداره.
ضمنا با فرمتی که گفتیم هم نوشته نشده چون مثال وجود نداره. فرمت پاراگراف بندی رو حتما با دقت بررسی کنید. سمپل داخل سایت رو هم حتما ببینید.
Difficult places refer to locations that are challenging to access due to geographical, climatic, or cultural conditions.Traveling to these areas can provide unique opportunities to experience local cultures and breathtaking natural landscapes.
One reason tourists visit difficult places is to explore nature. Mountains, deserts, and jungles can be hard to reach, but they are full of stunning views. For example, hiking in the Himalayas or visiting the Amazon rainforest can be unforgettable experiences. Tourists can see beautiful landscapes and rare animals that they cannot find anywhere else.