رایتینگ نمودار میله ای کمبریج آیلتس جلد 18 آکادمیک تست 3

Cambridge IELTS Academic 18 Test 3 Task 1 Map Band 9

در اینجا یک نقشه از تست 3 جلد 18 سری کتاب های کمبریج آیلتس آکادمیک را همراه با جواب نمره 8 تا 9 با هم میبینیم. این رایتینگ از انواع Map می باشد و پاسخگویی به آن نیازمند شناسایی و دسته بندی اطلاعات اصلی یا Main Feature ها در نمودار و گزارش آن ها در 4 پاراگراف (مقدمه و جمع بندی و 2 پاراگراف توضیحات اصلی) است. بعد از ارایه نمونه نمره 8 برای این نمودار، تحلیل و آنالیز گرامر و لغات آکادمیک همین سمپل را خواهیم داشت. اگر با این بخش از رایتینگ نویسی آیلتس آکادمیک آشنایی ندارید، انواع 7 نوع سوال در تسک 1 رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک پیشنهاد بعدی ما به شما عزیزان است.

سوال رایتینگ نقشه کمبریج آیلتس 18 تست 3 (Map)

متن سوال نقشه کمبریج آیلتس 18 تست 3 (Map)

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

نمونه پاسخ نمره 9:

The diagram depicts the changes made to the floor plan of a public library over a period of 20 years.

Overall, the library has been significantly modified to enhance its child-friendly features and incorporate modern technologies.

Upon entering, the central area, which was previously used for seating, has now been transformed into an open passageway. To the left of the entrance, the former reading room for newspapers and magazines has been replaced with a computer room. On the right side, a café has replaced the former enquiry desk.

Moving beyond the café, the section that once housed adult non-fiction books has been reconfigured into an information desk area with self-service machines. Adjacent to this, the area that previously contained adult fiction books has now been designated for reference books. The adult fiction collection has been relocated to share space with the information desk area.

At the far end of the passage, a spacious room on the left is now dedicated to children’s fiction books and storytelling activities, complete with sofas. This area was previously a small storage space for CDs, movies, and computer games. On the opposite side, a lecture room has replaced the former children’s book section.

Total = 198 words

لغات و ساختارهای گرامری پیشرفته به کار رفته:

گرامر یکی از 4 بخش اصلی در جدول نمره دهی رایتینگ آیلتس در تسک 1 است. در این بخش نگاهی به ساختارهای دستوری پیشرفته این سمپل نمره 9 داریم. همچنین در بخش بعدی همین مطلب به فرمت 4 پاراگرافی این نمونه رایتینگ نگاهی دقیق تر خواهیم داشت.

1. Past Tense for Describing Changes:
   • Example: “The library has been significantly modified,” “the section that once housed adult non-fiction books has been reconfigured.”
   • Explanation: The use of past perfect and simple past tenses is appropriate because the task describes completed changes to the library over time.
2. Present Perfect Passive:
   • Example: “The library has been significantly modified.”
   • Explanation: This construction shifts the focus away from who made the changes and emphasizes the result, which is common in Task 1 writing to describe processes or transformations.
3. Use of Prepositions and Transition Phrases:
   • Example: “To the left of the entrance,” “On the right side,” “At the far end of the passage.”
   • Explanation: These are key for providing clear, logical directions and helping the reader visualize the changes within the library. Prepositions like “to the left,” “on the right,” and “at the far end” guide the reader through the spatial layout.
4. Complex Sentences:
   • Example: “The adult fiction collection has been relocated to share space with the information desk area.”
   • Explanation: Using complex sentences, such as those with multiple clauses, helps in conveying detailed information concisely and is expected at higher band scores.
5. Vocabulary Related to Space and Function:
   • Example: “Allocated,” “dedicated,” “reconfigured,” “designated.”
   • Explanation: The use of precise vocabulary reflects a higher level of academic writing. These verbs give clear insight into how the spaces have been repurposed and serve to create a more formal tone.

فرمت رایتینگ تسک 1 برای نمره کامل:

1. Introduction:
   • Purpose: Paraphrase the task prompt and introduce the diagram in a concise way.
   • Example: “The diagram depicts the changes made to the floor plan of a public library over a period of 20 years.”
2. Overview:
   • Purpose: Summarize the key transformations. It should highlight the most significant changes.
   • Example: “Overall, the library has been significantly modified to enhance its child-friendly features and incorporate modern technologies.”
3. Body Paragraphs:
   • Purpose: Describe the specific changes in the library’s layout. The details should follow a clear, logical order, typically from left to right or top to bottom, depending on the diagram.
   • Example: “Upon entering, the central area, which was previously used for seating, has now been transformed into an open passageway.”
4. Cohesion:
   • Purpose: Ensure the text flows logically. Using phrases like “To the left,” “On the right side,” and “At the far end” helps guide the reader through the layout, creating a coherent structure.
   • Example: “Moving beyond the café, the section that once housed adult non-fiction books has been reconfigured into an information desk area with self-service machines.”
5. Formal and Objective Tone:
   • Purpose: Maintain a formal, objective tone throughout the description. Do not include personal opinions or extraneous details.
   • Example: “A lecture room has replaced the former children’s book section.”
6. Detailed Reporting:
   • Purpose: Provide detailed information about each change. Including specific details ensures a thorough description and helps to present an accurate representation of the diagram.
   • Example: “A spacious room on the left is now dedicated to children’s fiction books and storytelling activities, complete with sofas.”

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