نمودار دایره ای کمبریج آیلتس جلد 11 آکادمیک تست 4

Cambridge IELTS Academic 11 Test 4 Task 1 Pie Chart Band 9

در اینجا یک رایتینگ کمبریج نمودار دایره ای از تست 4 جلد 11 سری کتاب های کمبریج آیلتس آکادمیک را همراه با جواب نمره 8 تا 9 با هم میبینیم. این رایتینگ از انواع Pie Chart می باشد و پاسخگویی به آن نیازمند شناسایی و دسته بندی اطلاعات اصلی یا Main Feature ها در نمودار و گزارش آن ها در 4 پاراگراف (مقدمه و جمع بندی و 2 پاراگراف توضیحات اصلی) است. بعد از ارایه نمونه نمره 8 برای این نمودار، تحلیل و آنالیز گرامر و لغات آکادمیک همین سمپل را خواهیم داشت. اگر با این بخش از رایتینگ نویسی آیلتس آکادمیک آشنایی ندارید، انواع 7 نوع سوال در تسک 1 رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک پیشنهاد بعدی ما به شما عزیزان است.

رایتینگ کمبریج 11 نمودار دایره ای تست 4 (Pie Chart)

متن سوال رایتینگ کمبریج 11 نمودار دایره ای تست 4 (Pie Chart)

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

نمونه پاسخ نمره 9:

The table presents the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum in the year before and the year after its refurbishment, while the accompanying pie charts illustrate the distribution of responses to visitor satisfaction surveys conducted during the same two periods.

Overall, both visitor numbers and satisfaction levels showed an improvement following the museum’s refurbishment. In the year prior to the refurbishment, 74,000 people visited the museum. This figure rose considerably to 92,000 in the year following the renovation.

Regarding visitor satisfaction, the largest proportion of respondents in the year before the refurbishment, at 40%, expressed dissatisfaction with their experience. However, this percentage dropped significantly to just 15% after the museum’s refurbishment. The proportion of visitors who were very dissatisfied also decreased markedly, falling to only 5%. In contrast, the percentages of those who reported being ‘satisfied’ and ‘very satisfied’ both increased in the year after the refurbishment, reaching 40% and 35% respectively. These two categories became the most frequent responses in the post-refurbishment period.

Total = 164 Words

نگاهی به لغات آکادمیک سمپل رایتینگ کمبریج 11 نمودار دایره ای تست 4 (Pie Chart)

1. Vocabulary:
   • Presents: A more formal word for “shows,” often used in academic writing.
   • Accompanying: Used to describe the relationship between the tables and pie charts, indicating they are related.
   • Distribution: Refers to the spread or allocation of responses, which is appropriate for discussing survey data.
   • Improvement: A precise term for an increase or positive change, often used when analyzing data trends.
   • Considerably: A stronger alternative to “significantly,” emphasizing a large change in numbers.
   • Markedly: Used to describe a notable or significant change, especially when comparing data points.
   • Proportion: A formal word for the percentage or share of respondents in each category.
   • Categories: Refers to the different satisfaction levels or groups of responses in the survey.
2. Grammar:
   • Passive Voice: (e.g., “was refurbished,” “were conducted”) is frequently used in academic writing to focus on the data itself rather than the actors (e.g., people or organizations).
   • Comparative Structures: Phrases like “in contrast” and “however” signal comparisons between the two years, helping to structure the information clearly.
   • Complex Sentences: These are used to describe data in detail and compare changes over time (e.g., “The proportion of visitors who were very dissatisfied also decreased markedly…”).
   • Quantifiers: Terms like “largest proportion,” “just,” and “both” are used to convey specific changes or trends, providing precision.
3. Coherence and Cohesion:
   • Clear Structure: The text begins with an overview of the main trends, followed by detailed comparisons of visitor numbers and satisfaction levels. Each paragraph logically builds on the previous one, making the analysis easy to follow.
   • Linking Words: Phrases such as “In contrast,” “However,” and “Following the refurbishment” help guide the reader through the changes in data and maintain a smooth flow of ideas.

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