سمپل رایتینگ Some Accept Bad Situation

در این صفحه یک نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بدون خطاهای دستوری به همراه واژگان مناسب و پیوستگی و انسجام متن در سطح نمره 7 تا 7.5 در دسترس علاقمندان گرامی می باشد. این سوال از کتاب کمبریج آیلتس 14 آکادمیک تست 1 بوده و پاسخ آن توسط مهندس ابوالقاسمی با نمره 8 آیلتس و بیش از 10 هزار ساعت تجربه تدریس تنظیم شده است.

نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای:

Life is always full of challenges and difficulties. While some believe it is best to accept such hard situations, others say one should try to change it for the better and I somehow agree with both groups. (37 words)

نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای:

The life people live in this world is full of obstacles. While it might be in our best interest not to fight hard when we face tough times, there are those who believe even in such times the best course of action is to do everything we can. (48 words)

سمپل رایتینگ Some Accept Bad Situation – نمونه پاسخ مدرس نمره 7 تا 7.5

نسخه بلند(340 کلمه ای)

Facing challenges is an inseparable part of life and everyone has to face it from time to time. Although some believe it is best to accept such hardships, others including me think we need to fight them in order to improve the situation. This essay will discuss both views. (49 words)

There are those who argue that the best approach is to accept unfavorable conditions in life. First of all, people will suffer less if they do not fight their problems very hard. Regardless of the real consequences of the challenges that someone faces in life such as the debts following redundancy or homelessness at the time of natural disasters, the psychological effects might be the cause of irreversible decisions such as suicide or self-injury. Secondly, a personal problem such as joblessness is mostly a part of a bigger picture and in many cases it is only a matter of time before a political party step in and take measures to deal with it. Therefore, a seemingly personal problem may be solved by the passage of time. (126 words)

On the contrary, however, there are those who suggest it would be better if we took a more active role in life and try hard to change the situation for the better. First of all, in the hectic and fast-paced life in today’s world, opportunities disappear quickly, so being passive and not making efforts to deal with problems is sometimes equal to losing unique opportunities. Secondly, reacting to difficulties can be beneficial by itself. When people do something and choose to take an active role to deal with their problems, they feel worthy regardless of what they achieve. There is more hope in this approach and it is more likely for people to both inspire others and receive help from them. (121 words)

In conclusion, while there are those who favor remaining passive toward challenges of life, others including me are the advocates of taking actions and changing the situation. I believe life would feel empty for those who give up and let problems transform their lives. (44 words)

Total: 340 words

واژگان و ترکیب های پیشنهادی مدرس برای این تاپیک

Redundancy / joblessness / lay off / unemployment / to be broke / recession / economic meltdown / / receive help / to deal with a problem / suffer from stress / relieve stress / cause stress / traumatic experience / prioritize something / postpone / cope with tackle with / standards of living / start again from scratch / inspire creativity / personal achievement / to make progress / a reliable income / social alienation / a disabling disease / stepping out of comfort zone / to provide for family / to ignore their hardships /

Accepting a bad situation

# Less pressure
# less work

Try to improve

# More promising future
# More help

سمپل رایتینگ Some Accept Bad Situation – نمونه پاسخ مدرس نمره 6 تا 6.5

Life is full of difficult situations that people cannot avoid. While some believe it is better to accept and try to adapt to them, others say it is better to improve them. I tend to agree with both to some extent. (41 words)

There are those who argue that it is better not to fight difficult days of our lives. First of all, there will be less pressure on those who accept such situations since for every challenge to manage, mental preparation and good decisions are needed. When a person simply accepts that at least for a while they cannot do much about it, this considerable energy is saved. Secondly, one can avoid some physical work too. Difficult situations mean more efforts are needed to manage the situation but if important decisions and works can be postponed to a later time, those troubles will be avoided too. So, choosing not to take action at difficult times can keep people from working hard and thinking too much. (123 words)

There are, however, those who believe that it is better to fight and improve such situations. First of all, when someone is taking action to achieve a goal, the future may look more promising to them as there is always hope that these efforts will produce the desired results. Regardless of the results that will be known in future, the present time is a hopeful time for them. Secondly, there is more chance to get help when they are taking actions toward a goal. Help may come in different places in various forms because taking actions and not being passive is admirable in many cultures. People who fight always find someone who share their enthusiasm and offer their assistance. (119 words)

In conclusion, there are two ways of approaching hardships in life, being active and taking actions or just being passive. I personally think both can be useful depending on the situation. For more personal problems, for instance, I believe taking actions would be preferable, while in case of national disasters, for instance, waiting for a while and being passive would probably be the best. (64 words)

Total = 347 words

نمره 7 تا 7.5 نسخه کوتاه (294 کلمه ای)

Facing challenges is an inseparable part of life. Although some believe it is best to accept such hardships, others including me think we need to fight them. This essay will discuss both views. (49 words)

There are those who argue that the best approach is to accept unfavorable conditions. First of all, people will suffer less if they do not fight their problems very hard. Regardless of the real consequences of the challenges that someone faces in life such as the debts following redundancy, the psychological effects might be the cause of irreversible decisions such as suicide or self-injury. Secondly, a personal problem such as joblessness is mostly a part of a bigger picture and in many cases it is only a matter of time before a political party step in and take measures to deal with it and may simply be solved as a result. (111 words)

On the contrary, there are those who suggest it would be better if we try hard to change the situation for the better. First of all, in the fast-paced life in today’s world, opportunities disappear quickly, so being passive and not making efforts to deal with problems is sometimes equal to losing unique opportunities. Secondly, reacting to difficulties can be beneficial by itself. When people do something and choose to take an active role to deal with their problems, they feel worthy regardless of what they achieve. There is more hope in this approach and it is more likely for people to receive help from others. (122 words)

Total: 294 words

نمونه ای از پاراگراف اول با توضیحاتی نسبتا خارج از موضوع (off topic)

There are those who argue that the best approach is to accept unfavorable conditions in life. First of all, people will suffer less if they do not fight their problems very hard. Regardless of the real consequences of the challenges that someone faces in life such as the debts following redundancy or homelessness at the time of natural disasters, the psychological effects might be the cause of irreversible decisions such as suicide or self-injury. Secondly, the media always target general public and magnify some social problems for certain political gains. Consequently if people sincerely believe their endless disturbing stories and make them their own problems, it adds up and they might end up living a depressing life with a gloomy view of the future. (124 words)

سمپل رایتینگ Some Accept Bad Situation

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