نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Happiest Time
نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس Teenage Years Adult Life Are The Happiest Time of Life از کمبریج آیلتس 9 جنرال B که توسط مدرس آیلتس با نمره 8 (مهندس ابوالقاسمی) و اگزمینر آیلتس نوشته شده در دسترس زبان آموزان گرامی می باشد.
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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Adults are happier
# have a job
# have family
Teenagers are happier
# more free time
# more hope for the future
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✍️ سمپل رایتینگ Teenage Years Adult Life و Happiness با فرمول:
One good Reason + Explanation (50 words) + Example (40 words)
Teenagers are free from many responsibilities. People at this age are considered too young for many serious tasks and even when they are given some, they are admired by others for accomplishing them. This situation can give them a free space to spend their time in a way that make them very happy. For example in my country, many juveniles’ only serious job is to study hard and most of them are financially supported by their families. This is perhaps part of the culture or it may have to do with the fact that some families want to provide such an environment in which their loved ones can feel very satisfied and happy. (113 words)
Adults have the opportunity to make their own decisions. This is in fact very important in this stage of life since an adult needs to feel that they can make a difference and their decisions can shape a better future for them. Good decisions that are made independently is an important feature of adulthood and only an adult can have the chance of tasting the feeling of accomplishment in this way. For instance, in our culture at the present time, families try to give the opportunity to their children when it comes to making decisions regarding the choice of occupation or marriage. In many cases when the result is in fact a satisfying one, these young adults can feel very happy for the good decisions they make. (127 Words)
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نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای
Happiness seems to be the human’s final goal. While some argue that teenagers have the opportunity to have more happiness, others believe it would be easier for adults to achieve it. (31 words)
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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 6
Everyone is looking for happiness in their lives. Although I believe teenage years enjoy the happiest time, adulthood can also be very enjoyable.
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Some people argue that adulthood is the happiest time in the whole life. First of all, adults usually have a full-time job, which means they are financially stable. Unlike teenagers, they do not need the support of others, which gives them the feeling of satisfaction and happiness. Secondly, when someone turns 18 years old and is considered an adult, they can start a family and have children. This big step in life is filled with pleasant feeling and sense of happiness for many people. The first time they find someone to live with for the rest of their life or when their children are born are among the very happy moments that only adults can experience. (116 words)
Others feel that teenage years are the happiest stage in life. First of all, teens have much more free time than adults, as they are financially supported by their families and do not work for long hours. Consequently, they have a great opportunity to enjoy their free time with their friends and simply have a lot of fun. Secondly, teenagers are very young without much painful experience and therefore have an optimistic view of the future. Most of them believe they will be someone important in the future with a good job who can make the world a better place. Such view, which may not necessarily happen in reality, is a source of happiness and joy in many people in that age. (122 words)
In conclusion, teenage years and adulthood can be the happiest times. I personally believe while you are a teenager you have almost unlimited energy and so many reasons to be hopeful and energetic about the future, but still you have other reasons while you are older to feel the same feeling. So, overall I believe age is not necessarily a factor when we consider happiness. (65 words)
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واژگان/ترکیب های پیشنهادی مدرس برای این تاپیک
To make somebody happy /// to be/feel happy /// to achieve true happiness /// To support somebody emotionally /// To enjoy somebody’s support ///To have complete freedom to do something /// to have many friends /// to form a friendship /// to get married /// to begin a career /// to have a successful career /// to build a career /// to take/have responsibility /// primary/sole responsibility /// to accept/take full responsibility /// leisure time/activity /// to make a decision /// a right/difficult/important decision /// plan for the future /// promising/bright future /// to have/receive an education /// further/higher education
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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7
Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times. First of all, they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Secondly, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. Spending time on activities that they truly love can create a sense of satisfaction for them A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.(121 words)
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. First of all, the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy is mentioned as an important reason. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Secondly, adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step.(112 words)
In conclusion, while some consider teenage years as the time of enjoying the happiest moments in life, other people have the same view about adulthood. I believe both of these times can be the happiest moments in our lives regardless of age. (42 words)
نسخه طولانی نتیجه گیری با توضیح نظر شخصی
In conclusion, teenage years and adulthood can be the happiest times. I personally believe while you are a teenager you have almost unlimited energy and so many reasons to be hopeful and energetic about the future, but still you have other reasons while you are older to feel the same feeling. So, overall I believe age is not necessarily a factor when we consider happiness. (65 words)
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نمونه پاسخ اگزمینر در سطح نمره 9
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نمونه نوشته شده توسط هما الف، از زبان آموزان فروردین 1402
Some people argue that adulthood is the happiest time in their whole life. First of all, adults usually have a full-time job, and they have a fixed income. In other words, despite adulthood makes people more responsible, they are not dependent on anyone for their finances. Thus, a well-established career help them to save and splurge money on things that they want for themselves and their family members. Secondly, having a family can give a lot of joy, such as spending time with children and watching them grow up. In addition, the family provides a support system both physical and emotional. Hence, it helps a person to be an efficient member of his family and society. This gives more value to their growth. (124)
On the other hand, other people think that adolescents are living the happiest moments. First of all, teenagers have fewer responsibilities as they are supported by their parents. In other words, a child aged 13 and 19 is allowed to live carefree lives. For instance, teenagers have a great opportunity to focus on their hobbies and socialize with friends instead of worrying about their bills and other affairs. Secondly, teens are energetic and full of hope about the future since they are at the beginning of their lives. In other words, they are eager to discover new things and experience them to achieve their dreams without being afraid of failure. Thus, they have an optimistic attitude in the future. (119)
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نمونه نوشته شده نمره 8 توسط هوش مصنوعی (آموزش رایتینگ نویسی با هوش مصنوعی)
Introduction:
The debate over whether the teenage years or adult life brings more happiness is a topic of contention. While some argue that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives, others believe that adult life brings more happiness, despite the greater responsibilities. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own opinion.
Body Paragraph 1: Arguments in favor of the teenage years being the happiest times
One reason why some people consider the teenage years as the happiest is the absence of significant responsibilities. During this phase, individuals are generally free from the burdens of adulthood, such as financial obligations, career pressures, and family responsibilities. Teenagers can focus on self-discovery, exploring their interests, and enjoying life without worrying about the future.
Additionally, teenagers often have fewer worries and stresses compared to adults. They may have fewer responsibilities and enjoy a carefree lifestyle, surrounded by friends and engaging in activities they love. The lack of major life decisions and commitments can contribute to a sense of freedom and happiness during this period.
Body Paragraph 2: Arguments in favor of adult life bringing more happiness
On the other hand, many argue that adult life brings more happiness, despite the greater responsibilities it entails. With adulthood comes independence, personal growth, and the ability to pursue one’s dreams and aspirations. Adults have the opportunity to build meaningful relationships, start families, and establish successful careers, which can bring a sense of fulfillment and contentment.
Moreover, adults often have a greater sense of self-awareness and emotional maturity compared to teenagers. They have learned from their experiences and have a better understanding of themselves and what truly makes them happy. This self-awareness allows them to make informed decisions and prioritize their well-being, leading to a higher level of happiness in adult life.
Conclusion:
In conclusion, both the teenage years and adult life have their own unique aspects that contribute to happiness. While some argue that the teenage years are the happiest due to the absence of responsibilities, others believe that adult life brings more happiness through personal growth and fulfillment. Personally, I believe that happiness is subjective and can vary from person to person. It is essential for individuals to embrace each stage of life, appreciate the joys it brings, and find happiness in their own unique journey.
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آموزش رایتینگ آیلتس – سوالات Discussion Type
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Sharing information is one of the most important topics that related to society or even government. While a group of people believe that everybody should share all kind of information in publics, others argue that it might not be good for human Society. (43 words)
some people insist on sharing information and they encourage others to do that. First of all there are lots of benefits on reveal the witting with whole Society, like some researches that can be practical and useful that effect on optimal life. Some kind of research are closely linked to promote personal life or better health and quality. Secondly others can acknowledge, point out flaws or weaknesses or improve the skills and abilities of the research. When researchist share this specific data, it could used by others to expand the investigation that can make it more comprehensive. In some cases it helps to recognize the errors that may solved by other`s opinions. (113 words)
on the other hand, some people think that disseminating and publicizing research may not be the right thing to do. First of all it can have many benefits for the researcher from an economic and financial point of view. The way that it will increase sales, revenue, show and distribution opportunities. most of these Information costs a lot of budget so in this way they can regain there fund. Secondly, some people may abuse the information that can harm the society or environment. In that case sharing data opens a route for them to create dangerous devices or a chemicals and even use them against other people. (105 words)
in conclusion, there are lots of disagreements about sharing information and everybody have their own reason that is logical, I am personally believe that releasing data could have some negative effects on people’s life that should not be ignored. (total 300 words)
Some believe that life in modern cities is much better. While others say life in small towns is easier. I think life in small towns is better.
Some people think it is better to live in a big city.first of all, there are the best transportation system. People have access to better roads and better means of transport. Big cities have access to better road networks, airports and trains that make transportation easier. Secondly, access to health facilities in modern the cities also easy. You can better medical services in the city becase most of the hospitals and main doctors are located there.
On the otherchand, there are people who blieve it is better to live in a small town. In small town, crime is less, because people knew each other. Secondly, the cost of living is generally much lower in small town. The price of a house, the cost of rent, groceres, and consumer doods and serices are reasonable.
In conclusion, I believe, living in a small town makes it easier for people to get what they need, so they live easier. However, living in a big city has more facilities
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Some believe that life in modern cities is much better. While others say life in small towns is easier. I think life in small towns is better.
Some people think it is better to live in a big city.first of all, there are the best transportation system. People have access to better roads and better means of transport. Big cities have access to better road networks, airports and trains that make transportation easier. Secondly, access to health facilities in modern the cities also easy. You can better medical services in the city becase most of the hospitals
لطفا در صفحه کلاس ارسال بفرمایید.
سلام
1-میشه مقدمه رو با سوال شروع کرد؟اینجوری پر کشش تر میشه به نظرم Which part of life is the happiest? People have different opinions about it.
2-Adults can have jobs even if they be uneducated.
این جمله درسته؟
3-و اینکه earn income حرف اضافه لازم داره؟
ممنون
درود. سوالات را در صفحه کلاس خودتان ارسال بفرمایید
Erfan tabatabaie
Ielts dey 99
Adults
Have a stress
Have a job
Have a
Teenger
More dangeres
Big city
Many job
More facilities
Small town
Weather is clean
Low costs
با فرمتی که در کلاس مشخص کردیم و در صفحه کلاس خودتون ارسال بفرمایید.
Idea:
Adults are happier
# Money
# leisures like alco.hol, s.moking, s.e..x
Teenagers are happier
# energy of youth
# health
Introduction:
Happiness has different meanings during life. Some people think that it can be achieved during the teenage years and regret that the years has been passed, in contrast, others believe adulthood is the happiest years.(34)
جمله ها باید با نقطه جدا شوند. passed, in contrast,
در ایده پردازی فقط یک مورد باید نوشته شود. مثال ننویسید.
Sara (mehr 99
Happiness is one of the items that every one is looking for thorough the life . people have tow perspective of happiest time . some of them believe teenage years were more enjoyable than adults life while the others think adult life has more reasons to be happy
محدثه افخمی . جلسه دوم. انلاین ایلتس مهرماه ۹۹
A feeling of happiness is very important in our life. Although some people believe adult life happier than teenage years, others including me believe teenage years can have more happiness. (30 words)
Good work!
Individuals tend to seek happiness in different stage of life . While some believe teenagers are more likely to feel satisfaction, others include me think old ones have greater chance to feel happy.
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Age of people can be a major factor to be happier .Although some people argue that teenagers are happier than adults ,other group have the opposite their idea. (28word)
Some people think teenagers are more happiness.First of all,their needs for being happiness is very accessible.Almost teenagers can be happy with inexpensive things such as a electorinc toys,a video game,going to the park and other stuff like this.For instance , thesedays the biggest ambition for teenagers is having a tablet and most of them having smart phone or a tablet.Secondly,teenagers do have not imagination of future and live in peresent for this reason they have alot of reason for happiness.For example,teenager when encounter a problem could over come on such challenge alone or with helping their parents and then they forget such challenge forever.(104 word)
On the other hand,there are people who argue that adults are happier than teenagers.First of all,adults are found their job and they are financially independent that is why could creat better condition for being happy such as purchasing a push car or specious house, giving a lot of exiting experience such traveling to another continens .Secondly,adults have their own family and in their life have been stablished alot of change while can be providing more happiness.such as awide range of new experience,getting married, becoming mother or father,find a job that allthem are a new experience with a new sense of happiness.(101 word)
In conclusion,a grupe of people think that the best time for being happy is in during young while another group believe that adulthood is appropriate time for being happy.(29word)
سلام و احترام
من فیدبک این رایتینگو دریافت نکردم
حتما ارسال میشه ممنون از یادآوری
ممنون از محبت و توجه شما
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Having satisfaction feeling in life is essential at any age .Although a couple of people argue that teenagers can be having such feeling, others including me believe adults can be having such sense.33
a couple of people مناسب رایتینگ آکادمیک نیست.
can be having از این عبارت استفاده نکنید و ضمنا ساختارهای تکراری به کار نبرید.
ممنون از نظر شما
سروه ناصری -یک شنبه سه شنبه اسفند 98-
– Happiness is one of an imperative item that everyone seeks it unconstiously. Some people assume that teenagers expeience the happiest time in life, while others belive adulthood are happier althogh they have more responsilitys.
– Seeking happiness in life is one of human’s characteristic. Although some people assume teenage years as the happiest time in life, others including me believe that adulthood is a happier time.
محمد کرمی-یکشنبه-سشنبه-آذرماه
Some students prefer to study alone. Others think it is better to study in a group.
Discuss both views.
Because our successes are mainly relevant to how we comfortable and focus on studying, so that is very important for everyone. A lot of people benefit from study in silence and being alone in the study caused remarkable thing for them, however, there are students would want to study in the group who think this approach is more efficient. (56)
In conclusion, take one of these approaches is vital for our career, so some students choose to study in a group and being more dynamic while a lot of students are who only could study alone. (35)
محمد کرمی- یکشنبه- سشنبه- آذرماه
Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
We as mankind always looking for more pleasure from our restrict life while the best ages to enjoy life are variants among individuals. The teenage period has own supporter; the lifetime in term of an adult always has its advocators. I have an opinion between this to views, though. (49)
In conclusion, some people want to come back to those lovely teenage days, although lots of persons say we always desire to grow up and now we enjoy this perfect time. As variety in viewpoints is in every issue, this subject is very arguable for me because I am not included in these categories. (53)
محمد کرمی- کلاس یکشنبه- سشنبه- آذرماه
Some people prefer to live in a big city. Others think it is better to live in a small town.
Discuss both views.
Since always, one of the main and crucial choices about what we have to do before we occupying any place is to decide where to live. While lots of people are trying to make sure they live in a big city, many individuals would like to live in a small town. (50)
In the 21st century, more and more people want to live in a big city. First of all, one of the reasons why individuals want to live in a large city is more facilities. For example, in these cities, there are lots of convenience especially for the young age category like, more choice to spent leisure time, even better education, and whatever you want to have an exciting life. Secondly, while you live in economic trouble in a small town, lots of job opportunities definitely can wake you up from your nice bed in a small town and drive you to the nearest large city. These are some occasion reasons that everyone desire to go to full-grown cities which bring their more comfortable and relief life. (125)
The following lines will give some reasons for us that there are some people would like to go to a small town and live there; their passion is intelligible! First of all, in the crowded city access to calmness life is decreased. They would want to go far away from those cities which only lead us to social anxiety, more daily fight and go to a small town to find peace. Secondly, smaller commuter volume, a low number of cars and factories release fewer pollutants in the air and water which has led to a healthier environment. For instance, in the west of Iran where there are smaller towns than central Iran so that we have less pollution in the environment. (115)
In conclusion, some people feel living in big cities have more benefit to them although others interest in go to a small town and have a garden to grow chickens and roosters. (30)
محمد کرمی- کلاس یکشنبه و سشنبه- آذرماه
Some people prefer to live in a big city. Others think it is better to live in a small town.
Discuss both views.
Since always, one of the main and crucial choices about what we have to do before we occupying any place is to decide where to live. While lots of people are trying to make sure they live in a big city, many individuals would like to live in a small town. (50)
In the 21st century, more and more people want to live in a big city. First of all, one of the reasons why individuals want to live in a large city is more facilities. For example, in these cities (like the capital of countries) there are lots of conveniences to have better life especially for young age category like expanded transportation, free and Commitment Relationships, more choice to spent leisure time, even better education, and whatever you want to have an exciting life. Secondly, while you live in economic (difficulties) trouble in a small town, lots of job opportunities definitely can wake you up from your nice bed in a small town and drive you to the nearest large city. As you know, these are some occasion reasons that everyone desire to go to full-grown cities that bring their more comfortable and relief life. These people have good reasons to believe that a big city is better than in a small town. (158)
The following lines will give some reasons for us that there are some people would like to go to a small town and live there; their passion is intelligible! First of all, in the crowded city access to calmness life and friendly relationships are decreased. They would want to go far away from those cities which only lead us to social anxiety, more daily fight and losing confidence in others, and go to the countryside and small town to find peace, calm and some friends to enjoy their life. Secondly, furthermore, smaller commuter volumes, a low number of cars and factories release fewer pollutants in the air and water which has led to a healthier environment for living. For instance, in the west of Iran where there is a smaller town than central Iran so that we have less pollution in the environment. For these reasons, there are a number of people who believe they should live in small towns. (153)
In conclusion, some people feel living in big cities have more benefit to them although others interest in go to a small town and have a garden to grow chickens and roosters. (30)
Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
We as mankind always looking for more pleasure from our restrict life while the best ages to enjoy life are variants among individuals. The teenage period has own supporter; the lifetime in term of an adult always has its advocators. I have an opinion (viewpoint, sight, regard) between this to views, though. (49)
In conclusion, some people want to come back to those lovely teenage days, although lots of persons say we always desire to grow up and now we enjoy this perfect time. As variety in viewpoints is in every issue, this subject is very arguable for me because I am not included in these categories. (53)
Some students prefer to study alone. Others think it is better to study in a group.
Discuss both views.
Because our successes are mainly relevant to how we comfortable and focus on studying, so that is very important for everyone. A lot of people benefit from study in silence and being alone in the study caused remarkable thing for them, however, there are students would want to study in the group who think this approach is more efficient. (56)
In conclusion, take one of these approaches is vital for our career, so some students choose to study in a group and being more dynamic while a lot of students are who only could study alone. (35)
رایتینگ شما با شیوه تدریس شده هماهنگ نیست.
دقیق به توضیحات جلسه اول و نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس دقت کنید .
پاراگراف های اصلی باید بین ۱۰۰ تا ۱۲۰ واژه باشند.
sahar ghods دوره آیلتس ترم آبان
Happiness is one of the most important factors of felicity in everyone’s life. although some people think teenage years are the happiest time , others believe adult life brings more happiness and I agree with both.
Some people think teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s life. First of all ,teenagers don’t have serious responsibility . people usually live with family support when they are teenagers, because they don’t have enough experience to accept great responsibility . they are in the early decades of their life so they just focus on their future’s goals. secondly ,teenagers have more friendly relationship. Teens have more free time to spend with their friend’s. scientist’s research show that people who spend more time with their friends have more happiness.
In the other hand there are people who believe that adult life brings more happiness. First of all , there is more financial independence in adult life. People have more job apportunity in adulthood . since they have more experience in this period time of their lives. They can find better and higher- paying jobs and as a result they have more money to spend with their friends and family and also more chance to feel happiness. secondly they are experienced enough. People have done a lot in this period of their lives therefore, this issue reduces the risk of making mistake. Certainly living with less problem will make our lives happier.
In my opinion people could be happy in all period of their lives but it needs to make their mind positive and try to find their goal of life.
In conclusion , while some argue that teens spend the happiest time of life , others believe adults have this advantage and I agree with both.
The amount of happiness during different stages of life has been always a serious question. Although some people claim that their adolescence were the happiest period of their life, others point out that they experience happier time during their adulthood. I agree with latter.
Some people believe that teenagers experience happier time. Initially, a teenager often has no responsibilities in home even in society, which means that there is less stress and more free time. Therefore they can enjoy more from their leisure activities and pursue their interests. Secondly, supporting by their parents is another reason for being happier. They are not concern about money. In other words, when you are a teenager, you are not responsible for earning money and paying the cost of living. Teenagers receive money from their parents without doing anything and this give you a sense of security.
On the other hand, other people argue that adulthood is the happiest time in their life. First of all, financial independence is one of the most important reason for being happier in adult life. A well-paid stable job helps you to have sense of confidence for doing what you want. Secondly, adults are allowed to make their own decision. That means there are more power over the decisions that affect their lives. Despite more responsibilities comes with adulthood, financial independence and more authority make you happier.
In my opinion, you experience happier time in adulthood. When people start out their adult life, they are more cheerful and satisfied. They can do whatever they want and make any decision they desire alone as a result of being an adult. Independence in your life both in financial affairs and making decision give you a sense of happiness.
In conclusion, although many people believe that adolescence is the happiest period of their life, others claim that adults live happier and I agree with second view.
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these days the place that people choose for visiting are changed and the number of tourists who are enthusiastic about dangerous destinations are on the rise. this phenomenon have several benefits and drawbacks for
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in conclusion, the people who travel to dangerous destinations might receive many benefits but it can have risk for them too
Happiness plays an important roles in everyone’ s life . Although some believe that teenage time brings happiness , others argue that adulthood can be happier time .Both groups have their own reasons and I am totally agree with the second group .(40)
Some believe that teenagers can have more happy time in the life .First of all , teen ages are the age of dream , freedom and recklessness because most teenagers are supported by their parents and they don’t have greater responsibilities . Therefore , they are not under stress like adult,and they also have more free time . Then ,they can do whatever they like as doing their favourite sports or hanging out with their friend which is rarely happen to adult .as a result they are more satisfied With their life .secondly, they usually get emotional support in their family . 90 percent of parents try to understand them and find a way to solve their problem when they are faced by it. (120)
On the contrary , some people argue that adulthood can be happier time .First of all , people are more dependent in this time , and adult life offers more economic freedom. The grown-up people decide their journey of life themselves but it rarely happens to teenagers .secondly , they know what they want exactly and what is their goal in their life, so it is easy to find a effective way to reach it .Therefore , their life is more clear and they can be more relaxed and confident than teenagers .As a result , they are more happy in this period of time .(109)
Some reasercher think that the teenage are most happiest time of during the life.
First of all in this level teenage don’t carry responsibility that is their,s duty are a little and their,s mind are free then they don’t face the problem finally they are free and they can go every time they want and they can back to home every time they want. Secondly they give money of parents every time they need and they don’t go to work at least they are free of the all things are limit. I think this level is most happiest for people than the other level.
Other reserchers think that adult life is more enjoyable. First of all in this level can do every work independently and it is very well sense and enjoyable in spite of he san help to other people, secondly in this level the person has the several experience and he can make a new life a base of those experience and he can recognize a lot in the different subject.
سلام استاد
منظور از (معنی) lie ahead در رایتینگ نمونه چیست؟
People have different views about what time is the happiest time in lives.Some people believe teenage period is full of joy and happiness,while other think adulthood can be happier than teenage years.I agree with both beliefs for many reasons[39]
Somebody argue for happiness of youth in their life but others has a different idea which indicate gladness of adulthood from life .of course both issues are debatable. But I agree with both of them. (35words)
Some believe that teenagers enjoy the happiest times in their lives, at first adolescent life are joyful, cause no responsibility about other family members, and in fact youths just care of their requirements and can live a carefree life. Secondly as the power of energy in teenage years is much more than other periods of life, Then Teenagers are generally full of vitality and this object cause them to be more adventure and have more fun with their peers and enjoy everything they are passionate about. And they find contentment in whatever they do and conquer the world literally. Teenagers can also challenge themselves to practice extreme risky sports like bungee jumping and experience new insights without fear of failure. (120words)
Other thinks the adulthood is the times of joy and pleasure. In the first place as adults are more independent, they can manage their own time to do what they want or they can make a decision where they face the problem .in spite of consequence of their decisions, they are more satisfied with this situation instead of the conditions which others make a decision for them and this subject is mentioned as an important reason to enjoyment. Secondly adulthood is period of reach goals and enjoy achieving from ones efforts like earn money, good job, get more relationship, excellent social status and gain respect that each of these items can bring a great pleasure in life. (115 words)
But as I experienced both of the times can have its pretty and difficulties, because happiness is a state of mind. There are so many factors which may determine the level of cheerfulness. Age cannot alone estimate the degree of delightfulness.
The argue that in which age people feel happiness has been up for a debate.Although, some people think that teenagers have most happiness time , others, including myself believe that adults life have more happiness.This essay will give explanation and reasons.(42)
Some of people believe that Teenagers have more happiness time .they have financial support from their parents, and do not have concern about making money.
Not only do they have free time , but also they do not tend to shoulder any responsibilities.first of all, they have more leisure activities and spend most of their time with their friends at school and most of them chatting with their friends without concerning about wasting time. secondly , they don’t have any responsibility on home stuff ,ranging from cooking to look after of someone. teenagers are heavy loaded with their hobbies or learning new skill.(113)
On the other hand some others think that adults life have more happiness and elated .first of all , They are more independent from their parents and they have right to choice that with who communicate.they capable of making money,raising money to have new house or new car . secondly , The kind of happiness that they have is more different , they can make themselves elated with helping someone or group of insolvent people or help to charities or they become penchant by resolving someones problem. There are more situation that they feel elated.(91)
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Being happy is one of the best achievement in human’s life. Although some people think that they can find it in teenage years, others including me believe that adult life is better for achieving happiest times. This essay will discuss both views. (42)
On the one hand, some people think that teenagers enjoy the happiest times. First of all, adolescents have more energy. Some recent research at university of California has shown that teenagers are more energetic that is related to their physical situation. They tend to do more exercise than adult people. They usually have more ability and power to spend their time with their friends. Secondly they do not share responsibility in their homes and their parents prepare everything for them. They are not responsible for some issues such as family-relating and financial problems. As a result these factors contribute them to have the best possible chance of happiness. (108)
On the other hand, some argue that people can experience happiest times in their adulthood. First of all, they have better financial situation, because they can find better job with higher salaries. Hence they can save their money and invest it on everything that they want. It can bring more security and ease of life. Secondly they have better social status. They can achieve economic and social stability in their adulthood. So they can express themselves in society and people respect them. As a result these factors have positive impact on happiness. Hence, adult people can achieve more happiness than teenagers. (101)
با سلام و وقت بخیر
استاد رایتینگ را فرستادم
کلاس ایلتس شهریور98
با تشکر
مرسی استاد. چشم.
Living in a good place is very important for everyone. Although some prefer stay in a small town, others including me believe that it is better to live in a big city. This essay will discuss both views.
Some people think that it is better to live in a big city. First of all, there are many benefits in big cities people can use easily public transportation, it is a good alternative to driving yourself, so there are subways, buses and a lot of taxies. Also, in a big city there are variety of entertainment for people at day or night of the week. there are a lot of theaters, concerts and other ways of entertainment. Also, there are possibilities of shopping in different shopping centers and galleries. Secondly, there are many job opportunity, many big international firms have their locations in the cities, so it is much easier to find a job in a big city.
On the other hand, some people believe that it is better to live in a small town. First of all, in the small town, cost of living is lower. people spend less money for house, car, goods and everything that they need. even the price of fare for apartment is very low. Secondly, there are few cars so, there is not much traffic in the road therefore, people can save time, money and petrol. Hence, accident numbers statistically decline.
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The quality of life depends on the type of attitude every person. Although some people think the best happiness time of life is the teenager ages, other believe that in spite of having burden of responsibilities can achieve happiness in adult. This essay will discuss both views.
Some argue that the happiest time of life is the teenager period. First of all, there is no responsibility to life especially financial issues, they don’t have job and their parents support them or they work part- time, they save money for themselves and don’t spend on their families. Even, they have less a sense of responsibility for instance they are responsible for their homework, clean up their own room. Secondly, Teens have more free time to do something that they like, for example they go out their friends, go to the cinema, gym, go swimming. They register for the kind of classes, Also the have close and simple relationship to each other.
On the other hand, some people feel that the most effective phase of happiness is adulthood. First of all, they can manage their time to do everything that they want or they can make a decision while face many problem and they can solve these. they enjoy their responsibility and honor to that, this group of people improve themselves against life problem, therefore they reach better satisfaction. They can make money so spend themselves and their families. they are social persons so they prefer to have journey with their family and friend. Secondly, their happiness can be result in a success marriage of them. When there is a great relationship between parents they can bring up their offspring successfully. Therefore, it can make a good sense morally.
In fact, it depends on everybody’s life. Some People believe that Teenagers experience more happiest times. First of all, They have less responsibility in the activities like Financial issues or do daily house working. Even They have a bit of responsibility, it is not very bold that They cannot endure or annoy them. Lack of series responsibilities have benefits for them. They do not have more stress because of that, and have open mind and excellent ideas for creating new things. Secondly, Teenagers have more free times. They can experience enjoyable memories with their friends. Spending more time with friends gives them this opportunity for knowing and handling exciting things. It gives them energy for progressing in their adulthood and future relationships.(122
On the other hand, however, there are Those Who believe that adult life is the most happiest times in the life. First of all, They have Financial and emotional independence. They have some freedom of choices by their solory. Starting family is another logical independence. Exciting of a Child is really enjoyable part of adulthood. Secondly, They show high ability to solving problems and making main decision. Solving problems is the significant feature that gives them grounds for more satisfaction. By making major decisions They also can stabilize their socioeconomic status, and increase their self confidence.(96
Some people believe that the happiness can be achieved in teenager age. First of all being teenagers makes them free and they do not think about life ,so the girls and boys in the school prefer to think about their lesson than having a job and taking family responsibilities. Their responsibilities are to study hard so they can pass the exam with the highest score. They do not think about to earning money. Secondly On the one hand, some people feel that adolescent life is joyful than the matured. The reason is that the youths do not have any duties and can live a carefree life. In other words, no one is actually dependent on them and thereby, they can spend most of the time performing the task they enjoy the most. Thus, it is apparent that they can feel satisfied with whatever they do and in turn, will always live a happy life.(154 words)
Some people believe that the happiness can be achieved in adult age. First of all, an adult have more freedom. An adult usually has bigger chance to try something than the teenager such as having an identity card, driving license, credit card, freedom of spending and having a great job. They can manage their own time to do that they want or they can make a decision where they face the problem.. Secondly It is argued that bringing happiness to others makes us happy, so doing our duties perfectly to our family, children and society would definitely yield a positive effect. Though the pressure due to the job, earning, saving have to be overcome, it should be accepted that our maturity to think lucidly and plan properly help us to manage these issues in a facile manner. More we take responsibilities the more we feel self-satisfied by taking care of everyone’s need in a family.(155 words)
سلام خسته نباشید میخواستم در مورد تلفظ the ازتون سوال کنم تو ویدیوهای آموزشی مطابق فونتیکی که هست تلفظ میشه (یعنی ðə) ولی تو جمله و فیلم ها وقتی که سریع حرف می زنن من تلفظش رو de میشنوم الان تلفظ دقیقش چطوریه کلا حساسیت پیدا کردم رو این موضوع ممنون میشم جواب بدین
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2 تلفظ داره در واقع و معنی این دو تلفظ هم متفاوت هست.
توضیحش در جستجوی گوگل به این صورت ارایه شده:
Normally, we pronounce the with a short sound (like “thuh”). But when the comes before a vowel sound, we pronounce it as a long “thee”. When we wish to place emphasis on a particular word, we can use “emphatic the” [thee], whether or not the word begins with a consonant or vowel sound.
منبع: https://www.englishclub.com/pronunciation/the.htm