رایتینگ نمودار خطی کمبریج آیلتس جلد 18 آکادمیک تست 4

Cambridge IELTS Academic 18 Test 4 Task 1 Line Graph Band 9

در اینجا یک نمودار خطی از تست 4 جلد 18 سری کتاب های کمبریج آیلتس آکادمیک را همراه با جواب نمره 8 تا 9 با هم میبینیم. این رایتینگ از انواع Line Graph می باشد و پاسخگویی به آن نیازمند شناسایی و دسته بندی اطلاعات اصلی یا Main Feature ها در نمودار و گزارش آن ها در 4 پاراگراف (مقدمه و جمع بندی و 2 پاراگراف توضیحات اصلی) است. بعد از ارایه نمونه نمره 8 برای این نمودار، تحلیل و آنالیز گرامر و لغات آکادمیک همین سمپل را خواهیم داشت. اگر با این بخش از رایتینگ نویسی آیلتس آکادمیک آشنایی ندارید، انواع 7 نوع سوال در تسک 1 رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک پیشنهاد بعدی ما به شما عزیزان است.

سوال رایتینگ کمبریج 18 نمودار خطی تست 4 (Line Graph)

متن سوال کمبریج 18 نمودار خطی تست 4 (Line Graph)

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

نمونه پاسخ نمره 9:

The line graph illustrates the average monthly price fluctuations of three metals throughout 2014, with a comparison to the previous months.

Overall, the prices of all three metals generally increased during the year, with nickel experiencing the most pronounced price variations compared to zinc and copper.

Nickel prices demonstrated the largest fluctuations in January and February, with increases of 6% and 4%, respectively. The following three months also saw growth, though at a more modest rate, ranging from 0.5% to 1%. After a decline of 1% to 3% between June and October, nickel prices began to rise again, experiencing a 1% increase in both November and December.

Similarly, zinc prices only decreased from June to October, by no more than 1%. However, the most significant price surges occurred in February, March, and December, with increases of 3%, 2%, and 2%, respectively.

In contrast, copper prices remained relatively steady throughout the year, showing increases of no more than 2%, with the exception of a slight drop of around 0.5% from May to June.

Total = 172 words

لغات و ساختارهای گرامری پیشرفته به کار رفته:

گرامر یکی از 4 بخش اصلی در جدول نمره دهی رایتینگ آیلتس در تسک 1 است. در این بخش نگاهی به ساختارهای دستوری پیشرفته این سمپل نمره 9 داریم. همچنین در بخش بعدی همین مطلب به فرمت 4 پاراگرافی این نمونه رایتینگ نگاهی دقیق تر خواهیم داشت.

1. Comparison Structures:
   • Example: “Nickel experiencing the most pronounced price variations compared to zinc and copper.”
   • Explanation: The comparative structures highlight the relative changes in price fluctuations between the metals, making it clear that nickel had the most significant price movements.
2. Time Expressions:
   • Example: “Throughout 2014,” “From June to October,” “In February, March, and December.”
   • Explanation: Time expressions are essential for setting the context of the data. The use of specific months and the phrase “throughout the year” help anchor the description in a specific timeframe.
3. Use of Percentages and Numerical Data:
   • Example: “Increasing by 6% and 4%, respectively,” “by no more than 1%,” “ranging from 0.5% to 1%.”
   • Explanation: Providing precise data is key in Task 1, as it demonstrates the ability to interpret and report numerical information accurately. Using percentage ranges gives more context to the fluctuations and trends.
4. Passive Voice:
   • Example: “Prices for all three metals increased throughout most months.”
   • Explanation: The passive voice emphasizes the action (price changes) rather than the subject (metals), which is typical in formal writing where the focus is on the data.
5. Contrast and Comparison:
   • Example: “On the other hand, copper prices remained relatively stable.”
   • Explanation: Contrast structures like “on the other hand” are useful for showing differences between the trends of the metals, which helps create a clear and cohesive argument.

فرمت رایتینگ تسک 1 برای نمره کامل:

1. Introduction:
   • Purpose: Paraphrase the task and introduce the data presented.
   • Example: “The line graph illustrates the average monthly price fluctuations of three metals throughout 2014, with a comparison to the previous months.”
2. Overview:
   • Purpose: Provide a summary of the main trends. The overview should give a brief summary of the most significant changes or patterns in the data.
   • Example: “Overall, the prices of all three metals generally increased during the year, with nickel experiencing the most pronounced price variations compared to zinc and copper.”
3. Body Paragraphs:
   • Purpose: Provide a detailed description of the data. You can divide the body into two paragraphs: one that describes the trends for two of the metals and another that covers the third metal.
   • Example: “Nickel prices demonstrated the largest fluctuations in January and February, with increases of 6% and 4%, respectively.”
4. Precise Data Reporting:
   • Purpose: Accurately report the data using specific figures and percentages.
   • Example: “The most significant price surges occurred in February, March, and December, with increases of 3%, 2%, and 2%, respectively.”
5. Cohesion and Coherence:
   • Purpose: Ensure that the text flows logically. Use transition words and phrases like “Similarly,” “However,” and “In contrast” to guide the reader through the trends and comparisons.
   • Example: “Similarly, zinc prices only decreased from June to October.”
6. Formal and Objective Tone:
   • Purpose: Keep the tone neutral and formal, focusing only on the data presented without personal opinions.
   • Example: “Copper prices remained relatively steady throughout the year.”

By following this structure, providing detailed and precise data, and using advanced grammar and cohesive devices, this writing can achieve a Band 8 or 9 in IELTS Writing Task 1.

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