رایتینگ نمودار میله ای کمبریج آیلتس جلد 18 آکادمیک تست 2

Cambridge IELTS Academic 18 Test 2 Task 1 Bar Chart Band 9

در اینجا یک نمودار میله ای از تست 2 جلد 18 سری کتاب های کمبریج آیلتس آکادمیک را همراه با جواب نمره 8 تا 9 با هم میبینیم. این رایتینگ از انواع Bar Chart می باشد و پاسخگویی به آن نیازمند شناسایی و دسته بندی اطلاعات اصلی یا Main Feature ها در نمودار و گزارش آن ها در 4 پاراگراف (مقدمه و جمع بندی و 2 پاراگراف توضیحات اصلی) است. بعد از ارایه نمونه نمره 8 برای این نمودار، تحلیل و آنالیز گرامر و لغات آکادمیک همین سمپل را خواهیم داشت. اگر با این بخش از رایتینگ نویسی آیلتس آکادمیک آشنایی ندارید، انواع 7 نوع سوال در تسک 1 رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک پیشنهاد بعدی ما به شما عزیزان است.

کمبریج 18 نمودار میله ای تست 2 (Bar Chart)

متن سوال کمبریج 18 نمودار میله ای تست 2 (Bar Chart)

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

نمونه پاسخ نمره 9:

The chart categorizes US households into five income ranges for the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.

Overall, the income distribution in US households showed similar trends across all three years, with significantly fewer households earning between $50,000 and $74,999 or between $75,000 and $99,999 annually.

A large proportion of households in both 2007 and 2015 fell into the highest income bracket of $100,000 or more, with approximately 30 million households in 2007 and around 33 million in 2015. The next two largest groups in these two years were the lowest income brackets: those earning under $25,000 and those earning between $25,000 and $49,999. These groups each included between 25 million and 28 million households.

However, in 2011, a different pattern emerged. The number of households in the highest income bracket, at roughly 27 million, was surpassed by the number of households in each of the two lowest income ranges, which numbered between 28 million and 30 million.

In contrast, across all three years, only around 20 million households had an income between $50,000 and $74,999, while about 15 million earned between $75,000 and $99,999 annually.

Total = 185 words

لغات و ساختارهای گرامری پیشرفته به کار رفته:

گرامر یکی از 4 بخش اصلی در جدول نمره دهی رایتینگ آیلتس در تسک 1 است. در این بخش نگاهی به ساختارهای دستوری پیشرفته این سمپل نمره 9 داریم. همچنین در بخش بعدی همین مطلب به فرمت 4 پاراگرافی این نمونه رایتینگ نگاهی دقیق تر خواهیم داشت.

1. Comparative Structures:
   • Example: “A large proportion of households in both 2007 and 2015 fell into the highest income bracket.”
   • Explanation: Comparative structures are used to compare income distributions across different years. This helps draw attention to the key trends and patterns in the data.
2. Passive Voice:
   • Example: “The chart categorizes US households.”
   • Explanation: The passive voice shifts the focus from the subject (the chart) to the action of categorizing, which is common in academic writing when the focus is on the data.
3. Time Expressions:
   • Example: “For the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.”
   • Explanation: Time expressions are crucial for specifying the period covered by the chart. This helps the reader understand when the data applies and allows the writer to structure their response logically.
4. Modality:
   • Example: “With approximately 30 million households” and “about 15 million earned.”
   • Explanation: Modality (expressed through words like “approximately” and “about”) shows flexibility in the exact numbers and is commonly used in data analysis to present figures in a precise but not overly rigid way.
5. Reporting Verbs:
   • Example: “The chart categorizes,” “the number of households surpassed.”
   • Explanation: Reporting verbs like “categorizes” and “surpassed” are used to describe the actions or trends shown in the chart, and they contribute to a formal tone.

فرمت رایتینگ تسک 1 برای نمره کامل:

1. Introduction:
   • Purpose: Paraphrase the task and introduce the data presented in the chart.
   • Example: “The chart categorizes US households into five income ranges for the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.”
2. Overview:
   • Purpose: Provide a summary of the main trends or features of the data without going into too much detail. This is where you highlight the general patterns.
   • Example: “Overall, the income distribution in US households showed similar trends across all three years, with significantly fewer households earning between $50,000 and $74,999 or between $75,000 and $99,999 annually.”
3. Body Paragraphs:
   • Purpose: Describe the details of the data, often by splitting it into categories or specific years.
   • Example: “A large proportion of households in both 2007 and 2015 fell into the highest income bracket of $100,000 or more.”
4. Use of Data:
   • Purpose: Accurately report the data from the chart. Using specific figures such as “approximately 30 million” and “between 25 million and 28 million” provides clarity and ensures accuracy.
   • Example: “The next two largest groups in these two years were the lowest income brackets: those earning under $25,000 and those earning between $25,000 and $49,999.”
5. Cohesion and Coherence:
   • Purpose: Ensure the writing flows logically, with clear transitions between different parts of the description. Cohesion devices like “however,” “in contrast,” and “in both years” guide the reader through the data smoothly.
   • Example: “However, in 2011, a different pattern emerged.”
6. Formal and Objective Tone:
   • Purpose: Use a neutral and formal tone, focusing purely on the data presented without including personal opinions.
   • Example: “In contrast, across all three years, only around 20 million households had an income between $50,000 and $74,999.”

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