رایتینگ نمودار میله ای کمبریج آیلتس جلد 11 آکادمیک تست 1

Cambridge IELTS Academic 11 Test 1 Task 1 Pie Chart Band 9

در اینجا یک نمودار میله ای از تست 1 جلد 11 سری کتاب های کمبریج آیلتس آکادمیک را همراه با جواب نمره 8 تا 9 با هم میبینیم. این رایتینگ از انواع Pie Chart می باشد و پاسخگویی به آن نیازمند شناسایی و دسته بندی اطلاعات اصلی یا Main Feature ها در نمودار و گزارش آن ها در 4 پاراگراف (مقدمه و جمع بندی و 2 پاراگراف توضیحات اصلی) است. بعد از ارایه نمونه نمره 8 برای این نمودار، تحلیل و آنالیز گرامر و لغات آکادمیک همین سمپل را خواهیم داشت. اگر با این بخش از رایتینگ نویسی آیلتس آکادمیک آشنایی ندارید، انواع 7 نوع سوال در تسک 1 رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک پیشنهاد بعدی ما به شما عزیزان است.

سوال نمودار دایره ای کمبریج 11 تست 1 (Pie Chart)

متن سوال نمودار دایره ای کمبریج 11 تست 1 (Pie Chart)

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

نمونه پاسخ نمره 9:

The pie charts illustrate the distribution of water usage for agricultural, industrial, and domestic purposes across six global regions.

Overall, agriculture is the dominant sector in terms of water consumption in Central Asia, Africa, Southeast Asia, and South America. In contrast, Europe and North America allocate more water to industry than to agriculture or domestic use.

In Central Asia, Africa, and Southeast Asia, a large proportion of water—88%, 84%, and 81% respectively—is used for agriculture. In these regions, industrial and domestic water consumption is minimal, with neither exceeding 10%. An exception is Southeast Asia, where industrial water use rises to 12%.

South America uses less water for agriculture (71%) and more for domestic purposes (19%) than the regions mentioned above. In Europe and North America, the distribution is markedly different, with industrial usage accounting for approximately half of total water consumption. Agriculture, by contrast, makes up only 32% to 39%, and domestic use constitutes 13% to 15%.

Total = 159 Words

نگاهی به لغات آکادمیک سمپل

1. Vocabulary:
   • Proportion: A formal word for “percentage,” which is commonly used in academic writing.
   • Illustrate: A more formal synonym for “show,” used to introduce data.
   • Dominant sector: A sophisticated way of saying “largest consumer” or “most significant user.”
   • Allocate: A precise verb for how resources (like water) are distributed across sectors.
   • Minimal: A higher-level alternative to “very small.”
   • Contrast: Used to show a comparison of differences between two sets of data.
   • Rises to: A more sophisticated way of saying “increases to.”
2. Grammar:
   • Passive voice (e.g., “is used for agricultural purposes”): This is a common structure in academic writing, especially when the focus is on the data, not the doer.
   • Comparative structures (e.g., “less water,” “more water”): Used to compare quantities, which is a key skill in describing data in Task 1.
   • Adverbs of degree (e.g., “significant,” “minimal”): Helps to express the degree of difference in data.
3. Coherence and Cohesion:
   • The text uses clear transitions like “In contrast,” “Compared to,” and “Overall” to guide the reader through the analysis, helping to structure the response logically.
   • Sequencing information: The information is presented logically by regions, starting with the largest consumers (agriculture) and then contrasting areas with more industrial use.

ویژگی های اصلی رایتینگ بالا برای رسیدن به نمره 9

1. Overview: Begin with a clear, concise overview that summarizes the main trends or comparisons in the data (as you did with “Overall” and the contrasts between regions).
2. Details: Provide specific, accurate details using a variety of grammatical structures (e.g., comparatives, passive voice, range of verb tenses).
3. Coherence and Cohesion: Make sure the response is easy to follow by logically organizing the information. Use appropriate linking words to connect ideas.
4. Task Achievement: Address all parts of the task—describe the main trends, make comparisons where relevant, and don’t omit any important details.
5. Lexical Resource: Use a variety of vocabulary that is both appropriate and sophisticated, avoiding repetition of words (e.g., instead of always saying “water consumption,” use synonyms like “water use” or “allocation”).
6. Grammar: Use complex sentence structures, accurate punctuation, and a mix of tenses. Avoid errors in sentence formation and grammar usage.

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100 نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس پیشنهاد آخر ما به دوستان گرامی هست. این نمونه رایتینگ های تسک 1 آیلتس از پرتکرار ترین نوع سوالات این بخش و همچنین جدیدترین موضوعات می باشند. این مجموعه توسط یکی از سایت های معتبر انگلیسی زبان فعال در حوزه آیلتس تنظیم شده است. همچنین برای تصحیح رایگان رایتینگ آیلتس تسک 1 و 2 به صورت نامحدود در کانال تلگرام رایتینگ ما همراه باشید و به ادمین برای تصحیح رایتینگ اطلاع دهید.