در اینجا یک نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس نمره 7 از نوع دیسکاشن در دسترس علاقمندان عزیز قرار داده میشود. این سمپل به همراه توضیحات ارایه شده توسط اگزمینر در کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد پانزدهم درج شده است.
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نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای:
People around the world watch numerous ads every single day and brand promotion have become part of our life. While some believe advertisement is very powerful and affect people enormously, others believe it has very little influence (37 words).
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نمونه پاسخ پیشنهادی کتاب در سطح نمره 7
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توضیحات اگزمینر درباره این رایتینگ
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سمپل نمره 6.5 نوشته شده توسط شیوا(زبان آموز دوره خصوصی تابستان 1401)
Advertising has always played an important role in introducing a product. Some people believe that ads can convince consumers to purchase products. While others think that because it has become repetitive, fewer people pay attention to them. (37)
Some people say that advertising works well and succeeds in encouraging them to shop for goods. First of all, creative propaganda is very important in this industry. something that is new, if promoted in an unusual way becomes fascinating to the public, for example, using a three-dimensional painting makes that special ad memorable. In addition, using the right places to show the ad should be creative to be noticed. Secondly, everyone loves attractive offers. If sometimes companies consider particular options for their customers in using their products this special offer increases attracts customers and boosts their sales. sometimes even maybe someone has not any information about that brand but because of the offer, they buy it. (116)
On the other hand, another belief is that advertising is less attractive today because it has become more frequent. First of all, there are some who think attention to advertising is a waste-time. Everyone knows that most ads are exaggerated, therefore, people say they are not real and honest. So, it is not logical to spend time listening and watching them. Secondly, nowadays due to the many diverse goods and ads people cannot pay attention to all of them. There are various billboards on the streets, online advertisements, on television, and so on. all of which require a lot of time and energy to read and follow. consequently, normally some of them are ignored. (114)
In conclusion, in my opinion, I think it is true that advertisements have a significant effect on publicizing aproduct but the fact that if they are not fascinating people do not like the prevalent presence of them. (38)
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✍️ خطای اول
در اینجا public, for example, آغاز و پایان جمله باید مشخص باشد.
✍️ خطای دوم
این مورد using a three-dimensional painting makes that special ad memorable. با سوال مطرح شده هماهنگی ندارد.
✍️ خطای سوم
این ساختار increases attracts customers بی معنی هست. منبع شما؟؟؟
✍️ خطای چهارم
منبع شما برای این ساختار؟؟؟ is a waste-time
✍️ خطای پنجم
این مورد people do not like با ایده اصلی مطرح شده در سوال هماهنگی ندارد و بحث هم نشده.
یک پاسخ
As countries become more developed many fast food outlets move into the country giving local people greater access to fast foods:
Fast foods have an undeniable potential to spread around the world the point is whether fast food outlets are worth expanding or not.
clearly, it has some downsides and upsides that we should examine them in our context.
Since fast foods have a prohibitive price they cannot be financially worthwhile.
considering a group of people may have not enough money to order foods owing to occupational issues like layoffs or redundancies, furthermore, there also seems to be so harmful it can damage a psychologically significant part of our body in spite of the fact that they are so delicious and tempting.
By way of illustration, I can assert that my cousin lost his liver completely due to eating fast food nonstop.
indeed, this issue is to be considered broadly.
Fast foods are the best key for employment and improvement financially the majority of people can benefit from developing fast foods they can transfer an incredibly huge part of the money for recruiting employees.
furthermore, they can provide huge taxes for the government
Besides that there is another certain advantage for developing fast food is that they provide a higher standard of accommodation alternatively it is a step for globalization and increases country liquidity to encourage investigators to invest in our industries, it is a way to rolling in money.
Certainly, advantages overweigh disadvantages