نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک تسک 2 – نمره 8

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نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک تسک 2 - نمره 8

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک تسک 2 – نمره 8

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس – نمره 7 و نمره 8

در این صفحه 2 نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک تسک 2 با نمره های به ترتیب 7 و 8 برای سوال مربوط به تست دوم کمبریج آیلتس 9 نوشته شده است. این نمونه از مجموعه نمونه های رایتینگ آیلتس نمره 7، 8 و 9 می باشد که توسط مهندس ابوالقاسمی با نمره 8 آیلتس برای زبان آموزان گرامی گردآوری و تنظیم شده است. در این نمونه ها کوشش شده تمامی 4 سنجه اصلی نمره دهی رعایت شود و جمله بندی ها از نظر دستوری بدون خطا باشند. نمونه های بیشتر را میتوانید در این صفحه دنبال فرمایید.

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نمونه پاسخ در سطح نمره 7 تا 7.5

High school years is a great time for gaining precious experience. I believe teenagers can benefit from working for free as a part of their education to acquire experience, but such scheme certainly comes with drawbacks. (36 words)

Teenagers can benefit from volunteer works even as if it is mandatory part of their education. First of all, it can be the first serious experience of work for most high school students and they can have a real sense of performing tasks outside home under the supervision of strangers with different attitudes, which is a challenge since they have to find a way to adapt themselves not only to the new environment but also to the people who assign them tasks. Moreover, it provides an excellent opportunity to start considering a career outside the world of books and classrooms, which is crucial since many graduates find themselves unfit in the job market as the academic world teaches them little about required occupational skills. (124 words)

Such obligation, however, might prove to be an obstacle. First of all, not all high school students are available after school hours as some do part-time jobs to save up money to be able to afford college. Hence, forcing them to do an unpaid work to gain the experience that they already have seems unreasonable. Moreover, the safety of such work environment deserves consideration as some students at that age may be unable to defend themselves against offenders and harassment. This potentially puts students at risk when they are left alone in places without enough supervision, so unless a proper and safe environment is provided, this voluntary work should never be forced to unfit pupils. (115 words)

In conclusion, while I believe such unpaid work can be a great chance for teenagers to gain valuable experience, it should be limited only to those who will not be adversely affected by such schemes. (35 words)

Total = 310 words

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نمونه پاسخ در سطح نمره 8 + توضیحات اگزمینر

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک تسک 2 - نمره 8

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20 خطای متداول دستوری زبان آموزان ایرانی

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نمونه جواب 7+ برای رایتینگ های سری کمبریج آیلتس

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages. These days, knowing a foreign language is essential for people. Some people state primary school students should learn it instead of at secondary school. In my perspective, the positive effect of this scheme is more than its drawbacks, however, we should not ignore them. One of the experts’ reasons for such decision is children in lower ages have more ability to learn. In other words, they can learn a foreign… ادامه مطلب »