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سمپل نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره 7 تا 7.5

The bar chart illustrates three important exports from Southland over two past decades and a projection of 2025.

Overall, it appears that over the years, those exports with initial higher value (International Tourism and Dairy products) showed considerable improvement while the one with the lowest level at the beginning (Meat products) had a falling trend.

International tourism was the biggest export earner at the initial value of about 8 billion Pounds (BP) in 2000. By 2000s, its value had improved to just under 9 BP, before the estimation of increasing another billion in 2025, and becoming the biggest earner of all times through all categories along with dairy products in 2000s.

Dairy product, however are expected to fall slightly from their peak of 9 BP in 2000s to 8 MP in 2025. It is interesting to note that unlike international tourism, its initial value of export was a lower figure at only 7 BP.

Meat products, showed a moderate revenue of 6 BP in 2000, and had a falling trend over the next decade with expectation of the same pattern. to a low of only 4 BP in 2025, which makes it the lowest earner of all times and all categories.

Total = 203 words

سمپل رایتینگ نقشه آیلتس Task 1 نمره 8 تا 9

نمونه نمودار میله ای آیلتس

نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط زبان آموزان دوره مهرماه 1399

The bar chart provides information on three principal exports from Southland in 2000 and 2020 and projections for 2025. (19 words)
International tourism is the greatest export earner of the three industries over the whole period. Its initial value was 8 billion pounds in 2000 and by 2020, it had reached one more billion. It is predicted that this industry will continue to grow and earn almost £10 billion in 2025. (50 words)
Dairy products experience a considerable growth. Although they rose from £7 billion in 2000, this industry increased remarkably to £10 billion in 2020. Yet, there will be a slight fall for exports in this area and a figure of £9 billion is expected for 2025. (45 words)
Meat products are the lowest earner of the three categories during the period. They started from £6 billion in 2000 whereas currently stand at £5.5 billion in 2020. It is expected meat products revenue will continue to decrease and lose half billion pounds in 2025. (45 words)
Overall, it seems that although international tourism remains as the dominant industry in Southland’s export market and also the export of dairy products increases significantly, exporting meat products decreases continuously. (30 words)

Total Words: 189

نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط زبان آموزان دوره آذرماه 1399

The bar chart demonstrates three groups of Southland’s principal exports in 3 different periods, 2000, 20…, and future forecasts for 2025.

Based on the information reported, international tourism, with 9 billion Pounds (BP), had the highest exports among all three categories in 2000. This amount reached just under 9 billion in 20… and is expected to peak at around 10 billion by 2025.

Dairy exports initially had only 7 BP exports, but grew sharply in 20… and this amount was equal to the number of international tourism exports in the same year (approximately 10 BP). According to the data, dairy exports will decline slightly in 2025 and reaching 9 and a half BP.

In 2000, exports of meat products with 6 BP had the lowest amount among all groups. According to the data in this chart, this group had a slight decrease and is estimated to reach its minimum amount of 5 PB in 2025.

Overall, International tourism and dairy exports have grown significantly in this country and will be the largest exported products in the future, but on the other hand, exports of meat products will be steadily declining. (190 words)

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1️⃣❌will decline slightly in 2025 and reaching 9 and a half BP. ✅will decline slightly in 2025, reaching 9 and a half BP.
یا هر دو زمان آینده یا به این صورت بنویسید.
2️⃣❌exports of meat products will be steadily declining. ✅the revenue generated from the exports of meat products will be steadily declining.

✅ رایتینگ بسیار خوبی هست. کوشش کنید تمرکز بیشتری بر روی ساختارهای سمپل های نمره 9 در گزینش و گزارش اطلاعات داخل ویژوال ها داشته باشید:
https://ielts2.com/نمونه-سوال-رایتینگ-آیلتس-آکادمیک-task-1/