نمونه رایتینگ Music Good Way Bringing People Different Cultures Ages Together

نمون رایتینگ بالا مربوط به تست سوم از کمبریج آیلتس 14 آکادمیک می باشد. پاسخ در 40 دقیقه زمان، بدون بررسی واژگان و ساختارها در دیکشنری یا اینترنت(شرایط آزمون) و توسط مهندس ابوالقاسمی با نمره 8 آیلتس آکادمیک تنظیم شده است و انتظار میرد در سطح نمره 7.5 باشد.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Agree

#can make people sad or happy

#internationally known singers

Disagree

# rather limited to some regions

# way of showing different for young

نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای

It has been suggested that music can be effective in making connection among people from different age groups and cultural backgrounds. I believe in some cases this might be true while in others this is simply an overstatement. (38 words)

نمونه مقدمه 2 جمله ای

There is an enormous potential in music. While I believe it can be powerful enough in some cases to create a sense of unity amount people despite of their differences in age or culture, I agree this cannot be considered a fact. (42 words)

نسخه طولانی

Music is considered as an international language even when it is produced without words. Although some claim that it capable of crossing the borders of age and culture to unite individuals, others disagree. In this essay I discuss how both views can be valid. (44 words)

There are those who argue that music can appeal to a broad audience regardless of their age or culture in a way it that it creates a sense of unity among them. First of all, it is undeniable that even an unknown piece of music whose composer speaks a foreign language can create a depressing or exciting atmosphere that attracts millions of people around the world. This audience may find this shared interest a starting point to begin discussions and exchange of ideas especially on the Internet. Secondly, the existence of internationally known musicians who launch continent-wide tours proves the fact that some music is appreciated beyond any cultural borders or age group. Although modern and effective advertisement plays a role but music itself is the key driving factor behind such events. (132 words)

On the contrary, however, there are those who question the attribution of such qualities to music and believe music cannot be considered a way of uniting people with different backgrounds or age gap. First of all, most types of music even with passionate fans are rather limited to some regions with specific culture or language and the number of their audience diminishes rapidly outside such areas as if they do not even exist. Secondly, listening to music and following a certain type or a singer is in fact a way of expressing one’s differences and keeping distance rather than a simple and blind interest. That is why young generation deliberately show interest in the genres of music that is almost impossible for middle-aged parents or acquaintance to appreciate. (128 words)

In conclusion, there are those who stress the tremendous power of music in binding individuals together, while others point to the reasons why this cannot be the case and I think both these views are fair. (36 words)

Total = 340 words

نسخه کوتاه

Music is considered as an international language even without words. Although some claim that it capable of crossing the borders of age and culture to unite individuals, others disagree. In this essay I discuss how both views can be valid. (40 words)

There are those who argue that music can appeal to a broad audience regardless of their age or culture in a way it that it creates a sense of unity among them. First of all, it is undeniable that even an unknown piece of music can create a depressing or exciting atmosphere that attracts millions of people around the world. This audience may find this shared interest a starting point to begin discussions and exchange of ideas. Secondly, the existence of internationally known musicians who launch continent-wide tours proves the fact that some music is appreciated beyond any cultural borders or age group. (103 words)

On the contrary, however, there are those who believe music cannot be considered a way of uniting people with different backgrounds or age gap. First of all, most types of music even with passionate fans are rather limited to some regions with specific culture or language and the number of their audience diminishes rapidly outside such areas as if they do not even exist. Secondly, listening to music and following a certain type or a singer is in fact a way of expressing one’s differences and keeping distance rather than a simple and blind interest. That is why young generation deliberately show interest in the genres of music that is almost impossible for middle-aged parents or acquaintance to appreciate. (119 words)

Total = 298 words

نمونه پاسخ به این سوال از سایت های انگلیسی زبان: