در بخش رادیو ielts2، مهندس ابوالقاسمی به آموزش رایگان آیلتس بصورت تخصصی در زمینه مهارت های چهارگانه اسپیکینگ، رایتینگ، ریدینگ و لیسنینگ پرداخته و همچنین در زمینه برنامه ریزی کلی برای آیلتس و بهبود و تقویت همین مهارت ها از سطح پایه توضیحاتی ارائه مینمایند.
صفحه پیش رو مربوط به دوره فشرده آیلتس روزهای شنبه چهارشنبه ساعت ۴ تا ۶ که در مهرماه ۱۳۹۷ آغاز شده می باشد. در این صفحه تکالیف و توضیحات وارد شده و زبان آموزان رایتینگ ها و پرسش های خود را در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد خواهند کرد و از این راه با مدرس در تماس خواهند بود.
Advantages: more workforce / less medical expenses
Disadvantage: Lack of experience / Unemployment
Population makeup of each country offers hidden and obvious perils and opportunities. While there are advantages for a country when the number of its young people outnumber the older ones, there are also a downside to think of. In this essay I will examine the issue and discuss positive and negative consequences. (52 words)
A surge in the number of young citizens in a given society will undoubtedly create some opportunities. First of all, there will be more workforce for the industry and other sections of the country and this is a good news sine since these employees will be able to produce desired goods and services and consequently the economy will be more prosperous. Secondly, young people will not demand much medical care because they live the period in which their body can fight many disease-causing organisms or the illnesses of a chronic nature simply have not been yet surfaced. They need far less medical attention and related expenses and this gives the chance to the government to invest for more productive purposes. (120 words)
However this change can not be all good and there is a downside to think of. First of all, the experimental experience of young people who are about to get employed in different sections are inferior to that of those who live their forties and fifties. This means the overall delivery of the same result at different fields in simply unrealistic. Secondly, a glance a the economy of many developing and even developed parts of the world reveals that such changes poses the threat of unemployment. Economies simply fail to manage the ever growing percentage of young population and ultimately a sizable chunk will be rendered unemployed. (107 words)
In conclusion, I believe the fact that the population in some countries are made of more young citizens these days offers both benefits and disadvantages for those countries and needs to be exploited or dealt with by those societies. (39 words)
Total: 318 Words
کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه دوازدهم و سیزدهم
The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.
In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90 in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.
At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.
The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.
Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to diminish and at the final year all these categories had very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)
نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷
The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.
The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.
Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.
Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)
The graph shows the average weekly hours spent by schoolchildren on two different leisure activities at home over a period of nine years from 2000 to 2008.
Schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 years old spent less than 4 hours per week on computer in 2000. This number increased considerably over the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. At the beginning of the same period (2000), the time spent on watching TV was 21 hours per week, which remained the same over the nest three years. Next, it fell rapidly from 21 to 15 hours weekly in 2004.
Schoolchildren continued to spend more time on computer from 2004 and 2008 and the number reached a peak of just under 22 hours. At the same time despite a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006, the time spent on watching TV remained stable at the level of almost 15 hours per week.
Overall, While TV was much more popular than computer at the beginning of this period, it seems the time schoolchildren spent on them has reversed. (۱۷۵ words)
Two maps depict a tropical island of a few hundreds square meters before and after the construction of some leisure facilities for tourists.
It appears that two sites for tourists accommodation have been built, which are connected to each other and to other areas with footpath. There is also a reception in the middle of the island, which is accessible by a vehicle track from the southern part, where a pier is constructed for some pleasure boats. The other significant change is a single restaurant in the northern part of the island that can be also accessed by vehicles. The beach in the western side can be used for swimming after this development. There are also some palm trees in the western and eastern regions of the island, which seem to be untouched by this change.
Overall, the development which appears to be more concentrated on the western side and the center, has dramatically changed the face of the island in a way that it can accommodate a few hundreds of tourists at the same time. (177 Words)
نمونه پاسخ ساده تر در سطح نمره ۶
Two maps show the construction of facilities in an island. One map show the situation before and one map after the construction.
In the first map there is not much for possible tourists to enjoy except a swimming area in the left side of the island. How ever in the second map there is a restaurant in the middle of the island on the left close to a reception. There is a vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. Other important change is the construction of several accommodation sites for tourists not far from the reception. Other important facilities for enjoyment of tourists are the boats for sailing in the southern side of the island,where a pier can be seen and a beach for swimming in the left side.
Overall, it seems the island is totally different after the construction of tourist facilities and especially the western and middle parts can be a good place for tourists to enjoy their stay. (167 Words)
نمونه پاسخ نمره ۶ ارایه شده در پایان کتاب
نمونه پاسخ زیر که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد ۹ بعنوان نمونه جواب نوشته شده توسط شرکت کننده در آزمون برای نمره ۷ نوشته شده را بهمراه توضیحات اگزمینر(تصحیح کننده) مشاهده میفرمایید. در صورتی دقت بیشتر متوجه خواهید شد هر ۳ بخش اصلی توضیح داده شده در فایل صوتی و آورده شده در بالا به روشنی در پاسخ این شرکت کننده در آزمون رعایت شده است.
نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۶
Some people believe that teenage years are the happiest time in life. First of all, they have a lot of free time. Teenagers normally do not have full-time jobs and their time of study is also limited so several hours a day. A a result they have many hours to spend with their friends and on leisure activities. Secondly, teens have less responsibility compare with adults. They are financially supported by their parents and it is too early for them to start a family and become a breadwinner. So, instead of hard work they can spend their time the way they wish.(102 words)
Other people, however, believe in adult life people can achieve more happiness. First of all, adults have career and not only they can enjoy a good salary, they can also have the respect of other people around them. Having money gives everyone the power to make changes that they like and buy the items to have a better life. This gives adults a sense of satisfaction and happiness. Secondly, when a person reaches maturity, they enjoy independence and do not need to follow their parents’ orders anymore. they can make decisions and feel happy and pleased when they see good results of their actions. (104 words)
نمونه دوم نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۶٫۵ تا ۷
Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times mainly because they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Moreover, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. This group tend to mention the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step.
نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر(ٍExaminer) آیلتس که در سطح نمره ۹ براورد میشود:
۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه دوم
# more concentration
#learn about opposite s..e…x
نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۷ تا ۷٫۵
Some people believe that separate schools are a better place for children to educate. First of all, since distraction is proven to be a challenging issue in schools, students who receive single-s…e..x education will have the privilege of being more concentrated on their studies due to the fact that other pupils are of the same s…e…..x and not appealing to them. Secondly, school compound will be a less dangerous environment and the chance of s.e..x…u…a.l abuse will diminish drastically. For that it will be less likely for students to be romantically involved and the hostility stems from terminating such relationships will minimize. (102 words)
Yet others argue that mixed schools will be more beneficial to students. First of all, the presence of both genders and this dissimilarity can in fact create a competition among them for a better results and higher achievements. Boys and girls would find ways to attract the opposite s..e….x and those who perform better in schools will stand a better chance to be admired in front of everyone. Secondly, the fact that both genders are present in a same place is a perfect opportunity for each one to learn a great deal about the other and this precious knowledge will ultimately be useful in later stages of their lives. (109 words)
نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۶
Some people believe separate schools are better for students. First of all, they can have more concentration. Because girls and boys are not in the same classroom, they do not spend time with each other or do not have the chance to talk and never become close friends. So, they only focus on their lessons and try hard to get good results. Secondly, schools will be safer for them because there are only boys or girls in the yard or the classrooms and if they start to fight, they can defend themselves. Furthermore, boys will not fight to get the attention of female students. (104 words)
Other people argue that mixed schools are more helpful for students. First of all, when male and female students are at the same classrooms, they start to compete with each other to show off and get the attention of opposite s…e…x. At very young age or even teenage years, students really want to be better than others and getting better results will be their goal. Secondly, when both genders study together and spend time at the same place, they start to learn about each other and this way they can be better husbands and wives in the future especially those who are the only child and do not have brothers or sisters. (۱۱۲ words)
۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه اول
Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?
Better situation for job
#more companies and factories #higher salary
#more investment #more demand
Big cities provide a better situation for job. First of all, there are thousands of small and big factories around large cities and thousands of companies inside them. These companies and factories need people to work in them and as a result they employ hundreds of thousands of people and there is a higher chance for finding a job. Secondly, it is easier to have a higher salary in big cities because companies and factories are bigger and they need more managers and supervisors. It may take ten years for an employee to go to next level at work in a small town but in a big city it may take only a few years. (115 words)
There are more facilities and services in a big city compared to a small town. First of all, there is more investment a big city and as a result more services are available. This investment makes it possible to build many more clinics and hospitals or large universities with modern laboratories. Secondly, many more people live in a big city and they need many things for their everyday lives. They need transportation and thousands of schools for their children. They also need parks and cinemas to spend their free time after their work and because of these needs, facilities should be available for them.(104 words)
کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس