رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک Plans layout University Sports Center Redevelopment
در این صفحه 2 نمونه پاسخ برای رایتینگ تسک 1 آکادمیک (Plans layout University Sports Center Redevelopment) از کتاب کمریج آیلتس 13 آکادمیک تست 4 (Cambridge 13 Academic test 4) در دسترس علاقمندان قرار گرفته است. این رایتینگ توسط مدرس آیلتس (مهندس ابوالقاسمی با نمره 8 رایتینگ آیلتس) به صورتی نسبتا ساده و برای راهنمایی زبان آموزان نوشته شده و از نظر واژگان و ساختارهای دستوری در سطح نمره 7 ارزیابی میشود.
نمونه رایتینگ Plans layout University Sports Center Now After Redevelopment
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پاسخ مدرس(نسخه طولانی 234 کلمه ای)
There are two blueprints showing a current university sport center and a new one with some changes for the future.
Overall, it seems the center is going to transform radically and much more indoor space for doing sport along with more facilities will be made available for students.
At the present time, there is a 25-meter swimming pool in the middle of the layout, which is surrounded by a reception in the south, some seats in the east and a changing room in the west. All these will remain untouched in the second plan but a gym in the north of this swimming pool will expand to the east and will double in size.
The eastern Outdoor courts in the current plan will give its place to two dance studios on the eastern end of the complex and a large sports hall adjacent to the seats of the swimming pool. However, in the western side, a leisure pool with a random shape will replace the Outdoor courts.
In both maps there is an entrance to this sport complex in the south. While currently this entrance will immediately lead to the reception and it is limited to swimming pool and its facilities, in the second layout its access will expand to a cafe in the east and a sports shop in the west along with two changing rooms on both ends of the complex. (234 words)
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پاسخ مدرس(نسخه استاندارد 202 کلمه ای)
There are two blueprints showing a current university sport center and a new one with some changes for the future.
Overall, it seems the center is going to transform radically and much more indoor space along with more facilities will be available.
Currently, there is a 25-meter swimming pool in the middle of the layout, which is surrounded by a reception in the south, some seats in the east and a changing room in the west. In the second plan, there is a gym in the north of this swimming pool which will expand to the east.
The eastern Outdoor courts will give its place to two dance studios on the eastern end of the complex and a large sports hall adjacent to the swimming pool. However, in the western side, a leisure pool will replace the Outdoor courts.
In both maps there is an entrance in the south. While currently this entrance will immediately lead to the reception and it is limited to swimming pool and its facilities, in the second layout its access will expand to a café in the east and a sports shop in the west along with two changing rooms on both ends of the complex. (202 words)
موارد با اهمیت در نوشتن رایتینگ های نقشه در آیلتس آکادمیک
در رایتینگ تسک 1 آیلتس آکادمیک (نقشه)، باید تغییرات بین دو یا چند نقشه را به دقت توصیف کنید. یک پاسخ خوب باید شامل موارد زیر باشد:
1. مقدمه (Introduction)
پارافریز سوال با استفاده از کلمات خودتان.
ذکر نوع نقشه (مثلاً یک شهر، منطقه یا ساختمان) و بازه زمانی تغییرات.
مثال:
“The maps illustrate how the village of Ryemouth has developed over a 30-year period from 1995 to 2025.”
2. بررسی کلی (Overview)
مهم‌ترین تغییرات را بدون جزئیات ذکر کنید (حداقل ۲-۳ تغییر کلی).
مثال:
“Overall, the village has undergone significant modernization, with the addition of new housing, tourist facilities, and improved infrastructure, while some natural features have been removed.”
3. جزئیات تغییرات (Detailed Comparisons)
تغییرات را به صورت منظم و منطقی توصیف کنید (مثلاً از چپ به راست یا بر اساس دسته‌بندی).
از لغات مقایسه‌ای و افعال تغییر استفاده کنید:
لغات مقایسه‌ای: whereas, while, compared to, in contrast, similarly
افعال تغییر: constructed, replaced, expanded, removed, converted, added, demolished, built, developed
حالت مجهول (Passive Voice): was built, were added, has been transformed
مثال:
“The farmland in the south-east was replaced by a golf course and tennis courts, while the fishing port was demolished to make way for a marina.”
4. سازماندهی متن (Organization)
پاراگراف‌ها را بر اساس زمان یا مکان مرتب کنید.
از linking words مانند: Furthermore, In addition, However استفاده کنید.
5. نکات مهم برای نمره بالا
دقت در توصیف مکان‌ها (با استفاده از جهت‌ها: north-west, south-east).
مقایسه واضح بین وضعیت قدیم و جدید.
تنوع گرامری و لغوی (استفاده از جملات مجهول و واژگان توصیفی).
عدم ارائه نظر شخصی (فقط واقعیت‌ها را گزارش کنید).
نمونه جمله‌های مفید:
“The forest in the northern part was cut down to accommodate new residential areas.”
“A new road was constructed, connecting the housing estate to the town center.”
“The school was extended, whereas the park was reduced in size.”
با رعایت این موارد، پاسخ شما منسجم، دقیق و مناسب برای نمره‌بندی بالا خواهد بود.
مطالبی برای مطالعه بیشتر
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نقشه کمبریج 17 آکادمیک تست 1 (نمونه رایتینگ نمره 8)
نقشه کمبریج 16 آکادمیک تست 3 (جواب نمره 9)
سخن آخر
نمونه پاسخ برای رایتینگ تسک 1 آکادمیک (Plans layout University Sports Center Redevelopment) را به همراه کلیاتی در زمینه نقشه ها در رایتینگ آیلتس با هم دیدیم. برای تصحیح رایگان رایتینگ آیلتس در کانال تلگرام ما همراه باشید.
