کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج بهمن 1396

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای زوج کلاس مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست که در تاریخ 30 دی 1396 آغاز میشود. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تکالیف جلسه 11 ام 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تکالیف گرامر جلسه 11 ام 

بعد از مشاهده صفحه مربوط در لینک های زیر و مطالعه دقیق توضیحات به زبان فارسی، چند ویدئو مربوط به هر فصل را مشاهده کرده و با ذکر نام برای هر مبحث دست کم 5 مثال در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد فرمایید.

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گفتار یازدهم: صفت های تفضیلی و عالی در زبان انگلیسی

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گفتار دوازدهم: جمله واره اسمی در زبان انگلیسی Noun Clause

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه نهم

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه نهم

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه هشتم

Sample Answer by Pouya Abolqasemi

The graph shows the average weekly time spent by children at the age of 10 to 11 on two different leisure activities (TV and computer) at home. (27)

Schoolchildren spend just under 4 hours a week on computer at the beginning of the period in 2000. This number increased steadily for the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. Then it increased more slowly during the following 4 years to 2008 to reach a peak of almost 22 hours per week. (54)

Time spent on TV was much higher compare to computer at the beginning of the period. It started at 21 hours in 200 and stayed the same until 2003. At this time it showed a downward trend and fell to 15 hours in 2004. During the next 4 years up to the end of period in 2008, despite some fluctuations, it remained stable at this level. (66)

Overall, it seems children’s preference for these two pastime activities changed dramatically and during this nine-year period they have reversed. (20)

(167 Words)

 

تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه ششم 

 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه پنجم

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه چهارم + نمونه پاسخ

 نمونه نامه نوشته شده توسط مدرس  ???

Dear Amin

I hope everything is fine with you. If you remember I had a bicycle that you really adored and the truth is I no longer use it much. In fact I am going to sell it because I don’t think I would have time for this sort of leisure activities anytime soon. Currently I am a full-time employee in Webster Company and I try to prepare myself for university entrance exam in less than three months.

The bicycle as you know is a road one with a nice black color and powerful brakes which gives it a professional look. Its tires are original and still under one-year warranty. It also has a lock which comes handy in case you want to lock it up somewhere on your campus.

I know you have always wanted to own a bicycle like that and I believe this is a wonderful opportunity for you to purchase the favorite vehicle of your own at a very reasonable price.

Let me know what you think.

Best Wishes

Pouya

(174 Words)

 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه دوم + نمونه پاسخ

Advantages: more workforce / less medical expenses

Disadvantage: Lack of experience / Unemployment

Population makeup of each country offers hidden and obvious perils and opportunities. While there are advantages for a country when the number of its young people outnumber the older ones, there are also a downside to think of. In this essay I will examine the issue and discuss positive and negative consequences. (52 words)

A surge in the number of young citizens in a given society will undoubtedly create some opportunities. First of all, there will be more workforce for the industry and other sections of the country and this is a good news since these employees will be able to deliver desired goods and services and consequently the economy will be more prosperous. Secondly, young people will not demand much medical care because they live the period in which their body can fight many disease-causing organisms or the illnesses of a chronic nature simply have not been yet surfaced. They need far less medical attention and related expenses and this gives the chance to the government to invest for more productive purposes. (120 words)

However this change can not be all good and there is a downside to think of. First of all, the experimental experience of young people who are about to get employed in different sections are inferior to that of those who live their forties and fifties. This means the overall delivery of the same result at different fields is simply unrealistic. Secondly, a glance a the economy of many developing and even developed parts of the world reveals that such changes poses the threat of unemployment. Economies simply fail to manage the ever growing percentage of young population and ultimately a sizable chunk will be rendered unemployed. (107 words)

In conclusion, I believe the fact that the population in some countries are made of more young citizens these days offers both benefits and disadvantages for those countries and it cannot be either black or white. (36 words)

Total: 317 Words

 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج بهمن ماه – نمونه Voice ها

این نمونه ویس های ضبط شده از پارت اول اسپیکینگ آیلتس در نخستین روزها از طرح ریحانه ضبط شده و بعنوان یک نمونه خوب بهمراه فیدبک ارسالی در اینجا قرار داده میشود:

نمونه ویس های ارسالی ریحانه پرسش 4 تا 10 + #فیدبک 






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نمونه ویس های ارسالی امیرحسین سوالات 20 تا 25 پارت اول






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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج بهمن ماه – نمونه های زبان آموزان

نمونه رایتینگ مورد تایید و کار بسیار خوبی از ایمان با رعایت تمامی موارد چک لیست و جمله بندی مناسب.  ?????

نمونه رایتینگ ایمان ???

نمونه رایتینگ عامر + #فیدبک ???

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه رایتینگ امیر حسین + #فیدبک

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه کنفرانس ریحانه از کتاب Select Readings با سرعت مطالعه 160 واژه در دقیقه

به ترتیب از فصل اول تا چهارم ???


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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – وارد کردن لغات در سایت

زبان آموزان گرامی با ورود به این صفحه فهرستی از تمامی فصل های کتاب های Select Readings، Oxford Word Skills و Essential Words for IELTS را مشاهده خواهید فرمود. فصل مورد نظر خود را پیدا کرده و در بخش دیدگاه ها مشابه نمونه زیر مثال های خود از لغات جدید آن فصل را وارد کرده تا مورد بازبینی قرار بگیرد ???

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – بانک فیدبک های اسپیکینگ و رایتینگ

بانکی از تمامی فیدبک های ارائه شده بر روی رایتینگ و فایل های اسپیکینگ ارسالی در کانال تلگرام زیر وجود دارد که از تمامی علاقمندان و زبان آموزان درخواست میشود در این کانال عضو شوند:

https://t.me/FeedbackParadise

کانال اصلی ما در تلگرام برای آگاهی از آخرین منابع و تازه های آیلتس:

https://t.me/ielts2com

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – بررسی آنلاین Collocation ها

دوستان برای نوشتن رایتینگ در صورت نداشتن دانش کافی در زمینه ترکیب ها و کالوکیشن ها حتما از دیکشنری زیر استفاده بفرمایید. کلمه اصلی یا کلیدی مثلا advice را وارد کرده و collocation مورد نیاز و مناسب را گزینش فرمایید:

http://collocations.enacademic.com

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس Task 1 و Task 2

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)

همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید

براورد سریع دایره لغات زبان انگلیسی شما بصورت آنلاین

عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها 

362 پاسخ های ایجاد شده:
ديدگاه ها:
  1. ریحانه کلهر
    ریحانه کلهر says:

    The bar chart depicts the time spent by British citizens on phoning and it is classified into three clusters according to domestic, international and mobile calls. — 25 words
    The people in the UK spent 72 billion minutes on calling which used fixed line in 1995. This number increased steadily during next 4 years and it reached its pick of 90 billion minutes in 1999. Then the calls duration declined gradually to 73 billion minutes during next 3 years till 2002. — 53 words
    There was a consistent growth in values of 2 other groups. While international calls duration had a gradual increase between 1995 and 2000 and its figure reached from 37 to 56 billion minutes, the mobile calls duration rose sharply and its value reached from 2 to 22 billion minutes. In next 2 years the length of international calls grew gently to 60 billion minutes, but mobile calls rose dramatically and its value was doubled from 22 to 44 billion minutes. — 80 words
    Overall, it seems during this 8-year period the UK citizens not only spent a lot of times on local and international calls, but also were enthusiastic for calling by mobile. — 30 words

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  2. ایمان
    ایمان says:

    The bar chart compares three types of phone calls using in the UK in terms of entire number of minutes over a period of 7 years.
    From 1995 to 2002, Local – fixed line had the highest usage rate among the UK citizens, which was almost double the number of billion minutes of phone calls by the second most popular call type, National and international – fixed line. Since 1995 and for over the next 7 years, the second most popular call type saw a slight growth from approximately 38 to 61 billion minutes.
    In contrast, the other call category, Mobiles, had different trend throughout the period, it stood at the lowest level in 1995 when it was just around 2 billion minutes, it experienced a steady increase until 1999 after which it had a considerable surge during the subsequent 4 years that means it was grown up by almost 40 billion minutes.
    It is clear that Local – fixed line by far was the most popular way for making phone calls in the UK. However, Mobiles calls saw
    two folds dramatic rose in the years 1999 and 2000.
    Total words = 189

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  3. مریم
    مریم says:

    The Internet is a huge and global system of human, information and computer. Some people believe that using the Internet has many disadvantages. However, others have seen it as a positive change. I will try to discussion both views in this assay.(42 words)

    With internet, access to information has become very easy. Frist of all, the Internet is an important source of information and gives the user knowledge and information about everything. Search engines sites such as Google that provide information about any topic in the world. Secondly the Internet has helped people through chat and social networks communicate easily with each other, and instant messages become reciprocate between people. Video communication, also made possible to the replacement of many business trips, resulting in significant savings in expense and time.(100 words)

    On the other hand, anything related to the Internet can be addictive. Frist of all, The Internet and its addiction cause people to be isolated and ultimately make them obese or depressed. Online games and entertaining videos which are available online, are contributing to the online addiction among many teenagers. Secondly, receiving and sending emails has been a tool for abusers and hackers to spread viral programs on the Internet. They can make it difficult for the computer and laptop system to turn off some applications and access personal information. They may also play with the user’s feelings or even use the threat of disclosure of personal information.(109 words)

    In conclusion, it is evident that the Internet has brought advantages as well as disadvantages to the people’s life. I believe that individuals as a whole have faced much more benefits than drawbacks from using the Internet as a method of communication.(42 words)

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  4. نورالدین مقدسی
    نورالدین مقدسی says:

    mehdi moqadasi:
    Internet is a great tool that makes people’s lives in contemporary society much convenient. Although some people believe that internet has some advantages, others claim that it has negative points. Both views will be discussed in this essay (38 words)
    The internet has some positive consequences, first of all by using the internet all people can access information that they need, and people can dramatically enter and gain data from millions of online resources such online encyclopedias and data banks and searching motors as well, so internet creates a very easy accessible way to get information, secondly all people can communicate in more straight forward way with others from any places of the globe, and people can be in touch with their friends and relatives by Skype and other internet based applications and could talk with them even voice call or video chat in almost any part of the world where internet service is available (117 words)
    In the contrary, some people believe that internet has some negative feedbacks, first of all many of children and young adults and even adults get addicted to be in front of computer and laptop and cell phone and surf the internet or play online games and waste their time , and some of them miserably are addicted to the internet and no one can disconnect the internet, secondly the internet can result security problems, before the time that usage of the internet have been widely spreaded, people use to hold their personal information by themselves and deal with their financial problems by going to bank, but these days people normally are doing all the things online, thus hackers could acquire people’s profiles password and misuse their personal data (126 words)
    In conclusion, the internet and utilize it has some merits and some demerits(13 words)

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  5. عليرضا رمضان پور
    عليرضا رمضان پور says:

    Nowadays internet has changed a considerable part of people’s life. Although some people believe that internet has many negatives effects, others including me admit that it has positives more. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay. (39words)

    There are some positives aspects of using the internet in people’s lives. First of all, people can access information very easily. There are a lot of educational websites that everybody can visit and use the profitable web contents in their life. It’s a kind of place that everyone can increase their knowledge and get the latest international news and world events or follow information in their environment. Secondly, it’s became easier to communicate with one another. Nowadays there are lots of applications under network and internet that people can communicate with everyone everywhere on the planet. They can see and talk together emotionally lively. That’s why the present century is called “the Age of Communication”. (115 words)

    Besides, there are some negatives facets using the internet. First of all, it makes an addiction for people especially kids. There are a lot of interesting virtual games. These games can become a habit for children and it’s not good for them. Also, some adults are very addict to the internet. They waste lots of time for internet explorer. Secondly, there are many problems that they’re not safe for everybody. It’s true that internet has convenient information but it can’t be useful for every age, as well as sharing information by others may contain a harmful advertising about religion, culture or every other thing that makes convey misinformation on others. (110 words)

    In conclusion internet is a technology that it maybe has positives and negatives effects. It can be white and black. (20 words)

    Total: 284 words

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  6. ایمان
    ایمان says:

    It is a proven fact that in today’s society the internet plays a central role in all aspects of life. While such world-wild technology revolutionizes human being on different sides, there are some negative effects influencing by these changes. The merit and demerit of this issue including my opinion will be discussed in this essay. (55 words
    On the one hand, the internet has several positive points in its favour. First of all, accessing information through the global network is one of the most significant things, which is provided by the internet. With this service, people around the world can access to the needful information while they are moving between various places. Secondly, easier communication is another of services, which is offered by the networking technologies. Nowadays in every spot, the internet is accessible by numerous devices, which are working together around the world, therefore, communicating with other people who are already connected to the internet is much easier and faster than before. (106 words
    On the other hand, there are some potential drawbacks against the internet. First of all, addiction is one of the dangerous facts of this era. The Internet is expanding around the world such as jobs, daily life and many facilities altogether using the internet to offer their some of the primary and special services as a result using the internet is altered to a compulsory activity for those people influencing by these services. Secondly, another potential disadvantage of the internet is security problems. Thousands of companies and governmental institutions provide some of the online facilities through the internet when transferred information will be accessed by millions of people throughout the world consequently this information would be a potential condition for hackers. (120 words
    In my opinion, I completely agree that the internet is an inseparable part of today’s life while it has dozens of positive and negative points in its favour. (28 words
    In conclusion, whereas there are a number of benefits to support of internet, drawbacks of its changes in our life should be considered scrupulously. (24 words

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      مقدمه میبایست 35 تا 40 واژه باشد.

      همانطور که بارها در کلاس تاکید کردیم این پرسش دیدگاه شخصی را درخواست نکرده و پاراگراف جداگانه در این رایتینگ بی معنی و نادرست است.

      تصحیح کنید بفرستید.

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      • ایمان
        ایمان says:

        The internet plays a central role in all aspects of life. While it revolutionizes human being on different sides, there are some negative effects influencing by these changes. The merit and demerit of this issue will be discussed in this essay. (40 words
        On the one hand, the internet has several positive points in its favour. First of all, accessing information through the global network is one of the most significant things, which is provided by the internet. With this service, people around the world can access to the needful information while they are moving between various places. Secondly, easier communication is another of services, which is offered by the networking technologies. Nowadays in every spot, the internet is accessible by numerous devices, which are working together around the world, therefore, communicating with other people who are already connected to the internet is much easier and faster than before. (106 words
        On the other hand, there are some potential drawbacks against the internet. First of all, addiction is one of the dangerous facts of this era. The Internet is expanding around the world such as jobs, daily life and many facilities altogether using the internet to offer their some of the primary and special services as a result using the internet is altered to a compulsory activity for those people influencing by these services. Secondly, another potential disadvantage of the internet is security problems. Thousands of companies and governmental institutions provide some of the online facilities through the internet when transferred information will be accessed by millions of people throughout the world consequently this information would be a potential condition for hackers. (120 words
        In conclusion, whereas there are a number of benefits to support of internet, drawbacks of its changes in our life should be considered scrupulously. (24 words

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  7. مریم
    مریم says:

    The Internet is a huge and global system of human, information and computer that has had a lot of influence on the people over the past few years. Some people believe that using the Internet has many disadvantages. However, others have seen it as a positive change. I will try to discussion both views in this assay.(57 words)

    With internet, access to information has become very easy. Frist of all, the Internet is an important source of information and gives the user knowledge and information about everything. Search engines have provided various information to users. Examples include sites such as Google that provide information about any topic in the world. Secondly the Internet has helped people through chat and social networks communicate easily with each other, and instant messages become reciprocate between people. Also, video communication made possible through the Internet has greatly contributed to family relationships, as well as to the replacement of many business trips, resulting in significant savings in expense and time.(107 words)

    On the other hand, anything related to the Internet can be addictive. Frist of all, The Internet and its addiction cause people to be isolated and ultimately make them obese or depressed. Online games and entertaining videos which are available online, are contributing to the online addiction among many teenagers, because it does not allow them to be active or close to the family. Secondly, receiving and sending emails has been a tool for abusers and hackers to spread viral programs on the Internet. They can make it difficult for the computer and laptop system to turn off some applications and access personal information. This will provide an opportunity for online hackers and fraudsters to play with the user’s feelings or even use the threat of disclosure of personal information.(129 words)

    In conclusion, it is evident that the Internet has brought advantages as well as disadvantages to the people’s life. I believe that individuals as a whole have faced much more benefits than drawbacks from using the Internet as a method of communication.(42 words)

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    • admin
      admin says:

      مقدمه میبایست 35 تا 40 واژه و پاراگراف های اصلی 100 تا 110 واژه باشند.
      شمار کل واژگان هرکز نباید بالاتر از 300 واژه باشد و میبایست در پایان رایتینگ نوشته شود.
      تصحیح بفرمایید بفرستید.

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  8. زینت
    زینت says:

    IELTS WRITE RIGHT TASK 2: THE INTERNET

    Nowadays the internet plays a significant role in human’s life. Although this advanced technology has lots of benefits, the disadvantages are undeniable as well. In this essay both sides of this point will be discussed. (35)

    This is an indisputable fact that the invention of the internet made people’s lives easier. First of all, in today’s world everyone who accesses to the internet can find all kinds of information on that fast and easily while in the past people had to look for the information in the libraries. Secondly, the internet makes a very interesting form of communication. It is a virtual world that connects people from all walks of life. Besides the advantage of keeping in touch with acquaintances, There are many sites on which people can enter a chat room and talk privately or in a group with others by text, audio or even video. (112)

    Alternatively, there are some downsides of the internet which are worth considering. First of all, the internet can become an addiction.People might develop an emotional attachment to their online friends and activities under these circumstances, they are not able to manage their real life and It may impact on their job and significant personal relationship. Secondly, the huge amount of personal and vital information has been shared on the internet. It obviously puts personal privacy and security in danger of abuse. For example, when people share their holiday’s photo on the internet, burglars will find out that they are far away from home.(102)

    to conclude, the pros and cons of the internet show us that naturally it is either good or bad for people depending on how it is used.(28)

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  9. رضا
    رضا says:

    How effective have the internet in your life? Although, some people believe that the internet was positive altered in their life. On other hand, some other people say that effect of this had negative. These points will be discussed in this essay.
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    The internet certainly was positive altered in people’s life. First of all, the internet is the global system of interconnected computer network and since the internet is especially prevalent among peoples. Every one can share their information in the network and in the event that other people need to this information can to find their requist in the internet easily. However, easy access to informtaion can is helped to people’s life. Secondly, more of companies in field of network was achieved a new technology that can transfer a voice through the IP that this managed to careate an applications for communication through the internet and people can to establish a call with each other by lower price and easily.
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    The internet might had a negative effect in people’s life. First of all, due to progress of internet and varied information that there are in the internet can conclosing that this can is attracted everyone to itself. This issue has resulted that there had concern that the internet can increase people addiction to itself that this is a negative score for the internet. Secondly, some people don’t have enough information about security for the use of internet and has resulted that the abuser use for people’s lock of knowledge and they abuse from people’s privacy and estates that this resulted some people say that using of the internet have the negative effect in their life.
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    In conclusion, although internet has the positive effect in people’s life but if Some tips about using the internet disregarded can be the negative effect in their life.
    (28w)

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  10. نورالدین مقدسی
    نورالدین مقدسی says:

    mehdi moqadasi:
    These days most of people dress to dazzle, although some people believe that it is not possible to judge other’s character and culture of their way of clothing, others including me disagree, what follows, I will examine my point of view. (41 words)
    everyone chooses clothes freely, first of all there are freedom to choose clothes, everyone has right to wear whatever they want and people are allowed to select difinit brands and special fabrics and bespoke textile and are free to choose clothes which are made by well-known designers as well, secondly there are couple of styles that are apeal for different people, two styles may suit and in favor of people not only from different ages and different graduation status but also from different skin colors, selecting a fashionable wearing even tight or loose or those which are in dark color or in bright ones, is not only fit for a significant category of society therefore anyone can choose them (120 words)
    What’s more, everyone knows about the effect of clothes, first of all people use way of clothing to promote their outlooks, infact clothes say who we are and what we believe in, and garments that everyone wears, express a deep understanding of their social status and ethnicity and level of income and therefore illustrate their desire to convince or seduce others and convay any messages related to special circumstances, secondly people utilize outfits to protest, and they send signals by wearing special clothes to others as a diplomacy to show their objections about things which are in progress inside of the society, people wear challenging clothes with special writing or drawing to attract attention of others to what they say, (120 words)
    In conclusion, choosing clothes and how people wear, say a lot about their character and their culture(17 words)

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  11. بهرام( even bahman962)
    بهرام( even bahman962) says:

    Clothes are the things that you wear to cover, protect, or decorate your body. Being judged by the clothes you are wearing is a very common issue and this view will be discussed in this essay.(34)

    There is no doubt that everyone chooses clothes freely. First of all, there is always some freedom in choosing clothes. Because we have the freedom to dress any way we please, I do believe that our clothes reflect our character. Secondly, there are a couple of styles that appeal to different people. Some people in our society have religious orientation and they prefer to wear covering clothes also some people are stylish and fashion follower ,so you can find many outfit like funky ,retro ,sleek or scant styles in society that all show the difference of people.(100)

    Another determining factor is that everyone knows about the effect of clothes. First of all, people use it to promote their view. Some people wear some clothes to declare there are follower some religions. For example there are Muslim countries like Turkey where a headscarf for women is common also in India Sikh people put on Dastar everywhere and it show they are believe in Sikhism .Secondly some people use it to protest .People use some colors or slogans on shirts to show their political or thinking and believing they have against society policy.in some revolution people wear orange shirts to show they are Opposition.(105)

    In conclusion, it is true to say that our clothes can show our personality and our believes and many people believe in this.(23)

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  12. عليرضا رمضان پور- روزهاي زوج بهمن
    عليرضا رمضان پور- روزهاي زوج بهمن says:

    Cambridge 11, General, Test 4, Task 2

    It’s true that we can speak about the personality and humanity of people from their wearing. I completely agree with this idea. This view will be discussed in this essay. (30 words)

    The main reason why I agree with this vision is that everyone chooses clothes freely. First of all, there is some freedom choosing clothes. In general, in most countries, there are no laws which prescribe what clothing is required to be worn. Therefore people can elect their clothes independently of anything they like. Secondly, there are a couple of styles that appeal to different people. Many people don’t like to wear any type of covering and they don’t feel comfortable in any clothes. That’s why they find clothes that match with their character and highlight aspects of their personality. (99 words)

    Another reason why I agree with this idea is that everyone knows about the effect of clothes. First of all, people use it to promote their view. Many people wear clothes that contain messages. These messages can be either advertising or promoting a culture. For example fashion can promote creativity, that it is very important in culture, society, and religion. Secondly, people use it to protest. Some people wear symbolic clothes for protesting functions of government or religious leaders. They announce their opposition to wearing these clothes. For example, if a student goes to school without an uniform, he certainly makes a protest against the laws of school. (108 words)

    In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who choose their wearing, they show their nature and this clothes represent their personality. (23 words)

    Total: 260 words

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  13. امیرحسین کاشی (962 even bahman )
    امیرحسین کاشی (962 even bahman ) says:

    با سلام استاد این جمله رو معنیش رو متوجه نمیشم امکانش هست کمکم کنید ؟
    Sequel :a book that continues the sory of an earlier one

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  14. بهرام
    بهرام says:

    سلام و درود .ایا فایل صوتی جهت اموزش روش مطالعه Essential words for the Ielts وجود داره در سایت؟

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود.
      خیر فایلی ضبط نشده ولی باید مشابه کتاب سلکت ریدینگز متن و واژگان اصلی را دقیق مطالعه کرده و تمرین ها را تا حد امکان انجام بدید.

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  15. امیرحسین کاشی (962 even bahman )
    امیرحسین کاشی (962 even bahman ) says:

    This graph gives information about time schoolchildren beween 10 and 11 years old and the avarage weekly time about their home activities (Tv and computer) over 8-year period.(30words)

    According to the figure , working with computer increased gradually during this period. Between 2000 and 2004 there was a dramatic increase from 3 to 15 hours per week but after that the figure rised steadily to about 22 percent.(39word)

    According to the graph , watching tv remined stable between 2000 and 2003 on 23 percent and after that there was a little fall (5 percent) between 2003 and 2004 and there was a gentle flactuation between 14 and 16 persent beween 2004 and 2006 and after that stabilized until present. (50 words)

    Overall , it seems children ‘s idea about this two activities changed siginificantly and during this time they preferred working with computer instead of watching tv so the growth of computer working is considerable!!(33word)

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  16. mona
    mona says:

    The graph gives information about schoolchildren how many times spent a spare time on different home activities such as computer and TV between 2000 and 2008.(26 words)

    According to the graph, there were very different trend for computer and TV. The average of hour uses the computer an increase steadily between 2000 and 2001 from about 3 to 4. After that, the hours grow significantly roughly 22 hours in 2008. (42 words)

    The TV started off using more hours than computer. Between 2000 and 2003, there was a period of stability approximate 21 hours. Although increase sharply of 21 to 15 in 2004 but it has variation in 2005 to 2006.in 2008 increase the lowest hours in a week roughly 14.(50 words)

    Overall at the first most of schoolchildren use TV in leisure time but at the end clearly computer use is becoming more popular then TV. (26 words)

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