کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس
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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 ساعت 6 تا 8 می باشد. تمامی سوالات زبان آموزان گرامی، رایتینگ ها و تکالیف در این صفحه درج میشود و گفتگوی میان زبان آموزان و مدرس در همین صفحه انجام خواهد گرفت.

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 15 ام و 16 ام

Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 1 to 20  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 41 to 45 

Tactics for listening Expanding unit 9 to 15

Open Forum 2 Unit 4 5 6 7 8 

Essential Words for IELTS  Unit 3 Kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 13 14  از این صفحه ببینید

Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Kill

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 15 ام و 16 ام

تسک 2

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 13 ام و 14 ام

Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 21 to 30  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 36 to 40 

Tactics for listening Expanding unit 1 to 8 

Open Forum 1 Kill

Open Forum 2 Unit 1 2 3 

Essential Words for IELTS  Unit 2 part Kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 11 12   از این صفحه ببینید

Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 13 to 20 

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 13 ام و 14 ام

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 11 ام و 12 ام

Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 11 to 20  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 31 to 35

Tactics for listening Intermediate Kill

Open Forum 1 unit 5 6 7 8 9 10 

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 part 3 and Unit 2 part 1

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 9 10   از این صفحه ببینید

Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 7 to 12

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 11 ام و 12 ام

تسک 1

تسک 2

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 9 ام و 10 ام

Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 1 to 10  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 25 to 30

Tactics for listening Intermediate unit 5 to 14

Open Forum 1 unit 1 2 3 4 

Select Readings Pre intermediate Unit 10 

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 part 1 and 2

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 7 8   از این صفحه ببینید

Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 9 ام و 10 ام

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نمونه پاسخ نمره 6 تا 6.5

The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.

In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90  in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.

At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.

The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.

Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to  diminish and at the final year all these categories had  very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)

 نمونه پاسخ نمره 7

The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.

The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.

Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed  an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.

Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)

نمونه سوال رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک (Chart) بهمراه جواب – پاسخ Band 9

در اینجا پاسخی که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد نهم بعنوان پاسخ کامل نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر ارائه شده را میبینید. نمره این پاسخ نمره کامل یا 9 میباشد.

نمونه سوال رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک (Chart) بهمراه جواب

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 7 ام و 8 ام

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 91 to 120  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 20 21 22 23 24

Tactics for listening Basic kill 

Tactics for listening Intermediate unit 1 2 3 4

Real Speaking and Listening 2 kill

Select Readings Pre intermediate Unit 5 6 7 8 9 

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 5 6   از این صفحه ببینید

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 5 ام و 6 ام

تسک 1 آکادمیک 

 

نمونه پاسخ مدرس به این سوال

The graph shows the average weekly time spent by children at the age of 10 to 11 on two different leisure activities (TV and computer) at home. (27)

Schoolchildren spend just under 4 hours a week on computer at the beginning of the period in 2000. This number increased steadily for the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. Then it increased more slowly during the following 4 years to 2008 to reach a peak of almost 22 hours per week. (54)

Time spent on TV was much higher compare to computer at the beginning of the period. It started at 21 hours in 200 and stayed the same until 2003. At this time it showed a downward trend and fell to 15 hours in 2004. During the next 4 years up to the end of period in 2008, despite some fluctuations, it remained stable at this level. (66)

Overall, it seems children’s preference for these two pastime activities changed dramatically and during this nine-year period they have reversed. (20)

(167 Words)

تسک 1 جنرال

تسک 2 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 5 ام و 6 ام

 

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 61 to 90  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 14 16 17 18 19

Tactics for listening Basic unit 17 to 22

Real Speaking and Listening 2 unit 1 to 10 

Select Readings Elementary Unit 10 

Select Readings Pre intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 3 and 4   از این صفحه ببینید

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 5 ام و 6 ام

تکلیف تسک 1 جنرال

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تکلیف تسک 1 آکادمیک

آموزش صوتی رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بخش اول

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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7

Two maps depict a tropical island of a few hundreds square meters before and after the construction of some leisure facilities for tourists.

It appears that two sites for tourists accommodation have been built, which are connected to each other and to other areas with footpath. There is also a reception in the middle of the island, which is accessible by a vehicle track from the southern part, where a pier is constructed for some pleasure boats. The other significant change is a single restaurant in the northern part of the island that can be also accessed by vehicles. The beach in the western side can be used for swimming after this development. There are also some palm trees in the western and eastern regions of the island, which seem to be untouched by this change.

Overall, the development which appears to be more concentrated on the western side and the center, has dramatically changed the face of the island in a way that it can accommodate a few hundreds of tourists at the same time. (177 Words)

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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 6

Two maps show the construction of facilities in an island. One map show the situation before and one map after the construction.

In the first map there is not much for possible tourists to enjoy except a swimming area in the left side of the island. How ever in the second map there is a restaurant in the middle of the island on the left close to a reception. There is a vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. Other important change is the construction of several accommodation sites for tourists not far from the reception. Other important facilities for enjoyment of tourists are the boats for sailing in the southern side of the island,where a pier can be seen and a beach for swimming in the left side.

Overall, it seems the island is totally different after the construction of tourist facilities and especially the western and middle parts can be a good place for tourists to enjoy their stay. (167 Words)

آموزش صوتی رایتینگ آ

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نمونه پاسخ زیر که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد 9 بعنوان نمونه جواب نوشته شده توسط شرکت کننده در آزمون برای نمره 7 نوشته شده را بهمراه توضیحات اگزمینر(تصحیح کننده) مشاهده میفرمایید. در صورتی دقت بیشتر متوجه خواهید شد هر 3 بخش اصلی توضیح داده شده در فایل صوتی و آورده شده در بالا به روشنی در پاسخ این شرکت کننده در آزمون رعایت شده است.

آموزش صوتی رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بخش اول

فقط تسک 1 نامه

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه چهارم

 

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 46 to 60  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 13 14 

Tactics for listening Basic unit 13 to 16 

Real Speaking and Listening Unit 14 to 20 

Select Readings Elementary Unit 8 9 

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 2   از این صفحه ببینید

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه چهارم

فقط Task 2 نوشته شود

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نمونه مقدمه و نتیجه گیری نوشته شده توسط مدرس

Tourism is a major leisure activity around the globe. Although visiting places with harsh conditions may bring some advantages, its harmful consequences are undeniable. This essay will discuss the favorable and unfavorable factors relating to this new trend. (38 words)

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In conclusion, while there are benefits in travelling to places with hostile environments, there are some disadvantages for tourists who choose these sort of places as well. (28 words)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه سوم

 

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 26 to 45  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 9 10 11 12

Tactics for listening Basic unit 8 9 10 11 12

Real Speaking and Listening Unit 9 10 11 12 13

Select Readings Elementary Unit 6 7 

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 2   از این صفحه ببینید

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه سوم

تسک 2

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه دوم

 

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 16 to 25  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 7 8 

Tactics for listening Basic unit 5 6 7 

Real Speaking and Listening Unit 6 7 8 

Select Readings Elementary Unit 5

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1   از این صفحه ببینید

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه دوم 

تسک 2

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف جلسه اول 

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Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 15  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 1 2 5 6

Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3 4

Real Speaking and Listening Unit 1 2 3 4 5

Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 3 4

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1   از این صفحه ببینید

10 more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۶

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Some people believe that teenage years are the happiest time in life. First of all, they have a lot of free time. Teenagers normally do not have full-time jobs and their time of study is also limited so several hours a day. A a result they have many hours to spend with their friends and on leisure activities. Secondly, teens have less responsibility compare with adults. They are financially supported by their parents and it is too early for them to start a family and become a breadwinner. So, instead of hard work they can spend their time the way they wish.(102 words)

Other people, however, believe in adult life people can achieve more happiness. First of all, adults have career and not only they can enjoy a good salary, they can also have the respect of other people around them. Having money gives everyone the power to make changes that they like and buy the items to have a better life. This gives adults a sense of satisfaction and happiness. Secondly, when a person reaches maturity, they enjoy independence and do not need to follow their parents’ orders anymore. they can make decisions and feel happy and pleased when they see good results of their actions. (104 words)

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نمونه دوم نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره 6.5

 Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times mainly because they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Moreover, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.

On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. This group tend to mention the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step.

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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر(ٍExaminer) آیلتس که در سطح نمره 9 براورد میشود:

Sample Answer of IELTS Writing Task 2 by Examiner band 9

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج مرداد 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه اول 

Do You Prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

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Better situation for work

#more companies and factories

#more income

More welfare

people’s income is more #

more investment #

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نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس

There is a better situation for work in a large city. First of all, there are more companies and factories. Thousands of people can find a proper job in these factories and companies because each of them several people as staff and provide job for many other indirectly. As a result it would be much easily to start to work for one of them. Secondly, the salary in big cities is considerably more. Companies will give huge amount of money as salary to their employees because they need their manpower and their skills to win the competition with their rivals. (100 words)

There is also more welfare in a big city. First of all, people have higher income. When people make more money, they can spend more on goods and services, so service providers can hire more skillful staff. As a result, better services will be available for citizens. Secondly, there is more investment in large cities. Both government and people always choose to invest in mega cities and large towns because there is more chance for benefit and making more money. This investment will provide more facilities such as shopping malls, hospitals or entertainment and people can enjoy them simply by living in these places. (104 words)

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از تمامی دوستان تقاضا داریم صفحه های زیر را حتما مطالعه نمایند:

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

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200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

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بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

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چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

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آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)

همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

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  • Mahshid    Mahshid

    In modern day sharing Information is common among people. Although some people believe that there are some negative aspects in sharing information, others including me believe it has considerable advantage for human society. In this essay I will discuss both view side and I also give my opinion.
    Sharing information has brought considerable advantage. First of all, rapid knowledge has increased due to sharing information. When people access to desired information easily, they can gain experience and knowledge of other people and can save their time and spend it for other new knowledge, so knowledge has promoted easier. Secondly, sharing information helps people to live consciously. Accurate information about anything helps people to do better choices. For instance if people obtain some information about something that they want to do it, it is help them for better decisions and waste of money and time reached as low as possible.(104)
    In contrast, there is some disadvantage in sharing information. First of all, some information is very important in business and they should not share with other people. In business world it is considerable that you are first one for new product because of competitive advantages, so time of release information and amount of it is very substantial. Secondly, scientific Inventors always worried about their information. It is logical a person who dedicate whole of life for her or his achievement do not like to share it freely with other people. This kind of information is appreciated by many people and they are available to all people at the right time.(110)
    In conclusion, while sharing information has some disadvantage for some people, it has a lot of benefit that we do not ignore them and I believe in today’s world transparency and availability of information is more important than other aspect of it.

  • Advantages:
    # Saving energy
    # Saving time
    # Effective collaboration
    # simultaneous progress of people in around the world
    # helping to science improvement
    Disadvantages:
    # abusement of information
    # research and production of science and information are careers for some people and their productions should be sold not freely shared.

    It is true that the production of science and information has found an incredible pace in the world. Although, questions have been raised regarding the free sharing of information to many, others opine that information should be available when someone needed them. In this essay, the both of viewpoints will be examined. (52 words)
    First of all, it is apparent that there are psychiatric patients in each community that instead of using the information correctly, they are abusing them. For example, a terrorist knowing the TNT instructions can take many lives. In this digital era, information spread like wildfire and for the sake of maintaining global peace, they should be delimited, according to many. Secondly, the information production is a job for some people and they earn money by producing data. Free sharing of this information will spoil their troubles and can harm their lives. (90 words)
    On the contrary, scientific researches largely depend on available data and previous discoveries. If valuable information and past findings are not shares openly to academics and researchers, the global progress will standstill. For instance, the Internet is probably the most significant invention in the modern world and if this technology had not been shared by the US government, we would still be living in the pre-internet era with all its deficiencies. Moreover, the limited information has no value if they are not implemented in the real world and thus curbing them is like slaughtering the potential for progress. Finally, world history suggests that the human race has advanced due to discoveries and inventions shared with the world as each finding went through profound modification and advancement. Therefore, I personally favor the free information for all. (133 words)
    In conclusion, the information is not valuable when they are curbed and not shared with other minds. For the real universal progress, limitation on precious information should be inhibited and people must be allowed to know the truth instead of keeping them in darkness. (43 words)
    (318 words)

  • sajad    sajad

    Nowadays significance of free flow of information is accepted by everyone. While, some people believe that it is generally beneficial for everybody to access the information about diverse subjects, others emphasize the restriction on worthwhile information. In this essay I will examine both viewpoints and give my own opinion. (49 words)
    Sharing valuable information with others is associated with plenty of advantages. First of all, researchers from all over the world are able to apply the relevant data and past findings in their scientific projects to avoid performing the same operations and speed up the progression in order to get accurate results in a short period of time. Secondly, human beings steadily need to exchange their recent discoveries in technology, medicine and other fields and develop them through extra optimization. So, it is possible to benefit from modified inventions and practical methods to effectively overcome a wide range of difficulties that we encounter during our life. (105 words)
    On the other hand, if some confidential information is openly shared, it will have disastrous consequences for all nations. First of all, accessing the information about the latest technologies especially military ones enables extremists and terrorist groups to threat the national security of different countries and cause irreparable damages and huge expenses for them. Secondly, today many companies around the world invest lots of money on experimental studies to design modern products and equipment which better satisfy the needs of their customers. Therefore, disclosing their secret data to opponent companies makes their efforts inconclusive and prevent them from achieving their commercial goals. (102)
    In conclusion, although availability of sensitive information may endanger people’s individual and social life, I assert that providing various sort of information can lead to global development and a substantial improvement in living standards. (34 words)
    (290 words)

  • In today’s word, the latest information has a lot of values. Although there are lots of companies or scientists from universities that share their data or knowledge, others try to keep data to themselves. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.

    On the one hand, there are a number of reason why people are reluctant to share knowledge with others. Firstly, when it comes to business, some information related to new products or designs is regarded as valuable assets. By developing this knowledge and skills, a company could make a great hit in the market. Secondly, some information about science may turn into a pattern of lethal weapon if it is owned by vicious aimed people. For instance, if research on new technologies of a missile or nuclear power of governments popularly disclosed, it could lead to potential national security threats.

    On the other hand, scientific research largely depends on available data and previous discoveries. Firstly, If valuable information and past finding are not shares openly with academics and researchers, the global progress will standstill. For example, the internet is probably the most significant invention the modern word has produced and if this technology had not been shared by the US military, we would still be living in the pre-internet era. Secondly, the global spread information over the world can rescue other countries from poverty, people need the latest information as much as water, food, medicine, or shelter and information can save lives, livelihood and resources.

    In conclusion, although there is some specific information that should be kept as a confidential, I argue that our society could benefit greatly by sharing a lot of knowledge as much as possible and collaborating with each other using it. (285 words)

  • Agree
    ability to cross-check the information#
    useful for other field studies#

    Disagree
    confidential information can be revealed#
    breaking copyright law#

  • farzane    farzane

    The shown diagram illustrates how plastic bottle reused again for making product by detail in whole process.
    First of all, the plastic bottle which consumed, dropped into special garbage called recycling bin. Then all of these trashcan gathered by trunk and sent to the factory for reproducing.
    Washing plastic bottle totally by a special machine, is the first step in recycling plant. In next step it be shredder to small pieces by another machine. Then these fragments changed to pellets automatically by an extruder. Finally these pellets used to producing several products such as toys, bottle and caps.
    Overlay, recycling is a process that not only decline the amount of trash as an environmentally issue but also changes into new practical form for using again.

    • admin    admin

      درود به شما

      رایتینگ ارسالی شما بسیار کوتاه و کمتر از حداقل 150 واژه تعیین شده برای این تسک هست. دقت داشته باشید این نمونه در آزمون رسمی نمره پایینی دریافت خواهد کرد. میزان پیشنهادی ما 170 واژه هست.

      حتما نمونه ارایه شده در بخش تکالیف و نمونه های نوشته شده توسط دیگر زبان آموزان را بررس یفرمایید و نمونه خودتان را زیر همین رایتینگ ارسال نمایید بریا فیدبک.

  • Mahshid    Mahshid

    Dear Mr. Rezaei,
    I am writing in connection with some dissatisfaction with our reception area and making my suggestion about this issue.
    As you know, some of our visitors have made claim about the condition of our reception section. Many of them were irritated by lack of space and crowded in this area. Another thing that they have mentioned is setting. There is not enough comfortable seating in this area and some visitors have to stay on feet for a long time.
    As you aware, many of visitors are our loyal customer and it is better to improve our reception area conditions as soon as possible. This area is first place where our customer familiar with our company and I think it is better to more attention on it.
    A good suggestion to improve this situation is to change the location of reception area to another place where have more open space. Moreover we should consider adding some setting near this area.
    Yours sincerely,
    Mahshid

  • The flow diagram illustrates the process of gathering and recycling used plastic containers such as plastic bottles. (17 words)
    At the first stage in the accumulation of the plastic bottles, the consumers put the empty bottles in the recycling bin. Next, the recycling garbage including all kind of materials is transmitted to the factory by the garbage trucks. According to their substances, the recycling materials are then sorted in the plain; especially the plastic materials are separated from the other ones. (62 words)
    Plastic recycling continues with the washing of used plastic products in order to remove any impurities. At the fifth stage of recycling, the plastic is chopped into the small pieces using a special machine. In the next step, the small pieces of plastic are melted and extruded into the plastic pellets. And finally, the plastic pellets are used to produce the new yields. (63 words)
    Overall, we can see how the plastic bottles are carried to the factory and that the moving process consists of three distinct steps. It needs four stages to turn used plastic bottles into the new plastic products. (37 words)

  • با سلام
    ببخشید بنده در خصوص این تیپ سوالات تسک 2 به کلی گیج شدم با این فیدبک اخیری که دریافت کردم. سوال این است که
    Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
    What are your opinions on this?
    یعنی مزایا و معایب آن را برشمرده و نظر خودتون رو در این خصوص بیان کنید. بعد از مقدمه، بنده در پاراگراف اول در خصوص مزایا و در پاراگراف دوم در خصوص معایب توضیح دادم و در پایان پاراگراف دوم راه کار برای رفع معایب داده ام و در ضمن آن نظر خود را بیان کردم.
    در نتیجه گیری نیز تنها گفته ام که با وجود معایب (costs )، مزایای توریسم بین المللی بر ایراداتش برتری دارد.
    اما هنوز متوجه ایراد کارم نشده ام . فکر میکنم به هدف سوال درست نپرداخته ام ؟؟؟ اما واقعا درک نمیکنم هدف سوال را ؟؟ ممنون میشم بیشتر توضیح بفرمایید؟

    • admin    admin

      درود

      این مدل تست یک سوال استاندارد کمبریج نیست و اگر متوجه نشدید هم جای نگرانی نیست چون چنین چیزی در آزمون شما مطرح نخواهد شد اما هم میتونید فقط در مورد مزایا بنویسید یا فقط در مورد منابع یا هر دو طرف رو بررسی کنید.

      ضمنا میتونید فایل صوتی جلسه مربوطه زمانی که در مورد این سوال صحبت کردیم رو هم بشنوید اونجا هم صحبت کردیم.

      باز هم اگر متوجه نشدید در آغاز جلسه بعدی مطرح بفرمایید حتما صحبت میکنیم بیشتر.

  • hamideh    hamideh

    This figure shows the stages of reusing plastic bottles.This process consists of several steps recovering and reprocessing the materials into new and useful products.
    The first step is when consumers drink content of the bottles and throw those in trash bins which are separated from normal trash bins and marked with recycle symbol. Then, special trucks go and pick up recycle bins from different places of city and transport to a recycle plant for the rest of stages.
    After the plastic bottles are collected , they are sorted in ways to wash. Most of bottles have labels, adhesive or even food residue that must be removed and just plastic waste remains. Next, the bottles go into shredder machines to be converted into small pieces. After that, plastic particles are smashed and melted together into the pellets by extruder machines. At the final step of recycling process, the pellets are used to make plastic products such as toys, boxes, bottles, … .(158 words

  • This diagram represents the steps a plastic bottle has to pass and be reformed to a new plastic product. Recycling the plastic bottles begins at the moment it is used by a consumer. Bottles should be separated from the other materials and be thrown in a recycling bin which is specialized for plastics. Third step of the diagram shows that the vehicle which is considered for carrying the plastic trash should be different and even marked with an identifiable name as recycle. In recycling plant, bottles are put on a roll to be washed carefully with water and some detergents and get ready for being smashed into tiny parts. This process is handled by a shredder and then after they reach to the extruding step wherein the small pieces are reformed to pellets. These small rounded particles are the basic material and are gathered in a container to be used in producing a new bottle, a plastic box, a toy or many things else.

    • admin    admin

      درود

      در این رایتینگ پاراگراف بندی وجود ندارد و به استناد برخی منابع رایتینگ هایی که بدون پاراگراف بندی نوشته شوند نمره بالاتر از 5 دریافت نخواهند کرد. این مورد در چک لیست هم توضیح داده شده که حتما بین پاراگراف ها باید فاصله وجود داشته باشد تا برای اگزمینر قابل تشخیص باشد.

      مورد دوم اینکه عبارت Overall و پاراگراف Overview در رایتینگ شما قابل مشاهده نیست.

      آپدیت بفرمایید همینجا ارسال بفرمایید برای فیدبک.

  • It is true that the global tourism has experienced a major boom in the recent decades. Although, questions have been raised regarding the negative impacts of the growth in the overseas travelling, these definitely do not outweigh the associated benefits. In this essay, the both of benefits and their related cost will be examined. (54 words)
    There are various reasons why people believe that the international tourist is beneficial for each country. First of all, the millions of foreign dollars brought in by these tourists enforce the government to investment in their welfare. These national and subsequent international investments lead to infrastructures improvement and numerous prospects in the local entrepreneurship & employment generation. Secondly, the tourism industry and holidaymakers need to hospitality, security and healthcare that should be prepare by government and local people. This can cause to sociality growth, improvement security and promotion better health of the local people. For instance, the entire economy of Thailand revolves around tourism and the country has uplifted its socio-economic status through its flourishing tourism industry. (115 words)
    On the other hand, the rising number of exterior travelers is accompanied with raised incidences of crimes and antisocial activities like prostitution, drugs, human trafficking and gambling, which affect the values of the indigenous (domestic) society. Also, construction the necessary infrastructures for accommodation, transportation and shopping malls for more attraction of international tourists can destroy all pristine nature. In addition, tourists can spread diseases into & from the destination country. In this context, it is worth mentioning that, by performing tough law and order and implementing strict legislations, governments can control most of these negative impacts of tourism. (97 words)
    In conclusion, I believe that if we look at the overall picture of international tourism when doing the cost-benefit analysis, we will see that its benefits are more than harms. (31 words)

  • farzane    farzane

    Nowadays, the tourism industry has become more popular among all people around the world. Although some people claim that this globalization has few drawbacks, others including me consider it as a definitely positive impact which cannot be ignored. In this essay both of these views will be discussed.
    Global tourism has positively affected our life in a few ways. first of all, it is economically worthwhile.by improving this industry not only the local markets will burgeon and outcome of handicraft sales increase but also it can be a proper alternative for other profits such as oil outcome which lead to our resources diminish .secondly, it dramatically affected international communications .people be more aware of various cultures and customs as a result they will be closed to each other and the boundaries of nations will be disappeared.
    On the other hand, the negative impact of tourism is not negligible. First of all, by increasing the number of tourist who visit archaic places the risk of its damage or erosion will be climbed. This places are very sustainable to touching or exposing to flash camera .although these preventions, there are always some people who don’t obey the rules. Secondly, there are always some drawbacks in every culture that transfer without purpose to local people. For example using alcohol and cigarette is more common in western countries as well as disobeying of rules in developing countries .This negative custom affected community especially juveniles who are learning of their surroundings.
    In way of conclusion, despite of some negative impact of global tourism on environment and culture .Its financial and communicational advantages is
    . words 269) remarkable).

  • farzane    farzane

    سلام مجدد
    a. Some people believe that children should listen to and obey their parents. Others
    believe that children should think and do things on their own.
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
    این نمونه سوالی که گفته discuss both view خوب طبیعی هست که باید یه پارگراف مثبت یه پاراگراف منفی بنویسیم اما در مدل سوال های مثل:
    Some people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle.
    Others believe that governments should take care of it.
    What are your views on this?
    که نظر شخصی ما رو خواسته ما در مقدمه موضع مثبت یا منفی خودمون رو اعلام میکنیم و در ادامه نباید هر دو پاراگراف ما درباره اون نظر ما باشه یعنی هر دو پاراگراف یا باید مثبت باشه یا منفی?!

    • admin    admin

      در موردی که گفتید طبیعی هست……..به نظر من اشتباه کردید چون صحبت مثبت و منفی نیست اصلا. باید در هر پاراگراف یکی از 2 دیدگاه اشاره شده بررسی بشه. اصلا مثبت و منفی وجود نداره که بخواد بررسی بشه.

      در مورد دوم که گفته شده What are your views بهترین کار نوشتن دقیقا به صورت قبلی هست. یعنی در هر پاراگراف یکی از دیدگاه ها بررسی بشه.

      پاراگراف جداگانه برای نظر شخصی هم در مورد دوم لازم نیست.

  • farzane    farzane

    سلام استاد
    یه سوال درمورد فرمت کلی writting دارم
    در مورد سوال هایی که میگه نظرات رو بحث کنید این منطقی هست که هر دو نظر مثبت و منفی رو بیاریم
    اما در سوالاتی که نظر شخصی ما رو میپرسه و ما در مقدمه موضع خودمون رو اعلام میکنیم نبایستی هر دو پاراگراف در ادامه مرتبط با نظر ما باشه (یا مثبت یا منفی) ؟!

    • admin    admin

      درود

      متوجه توضیح شما نشدم. لطفا نمونه سوال رو دقیق بنویسید.

  • Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Although some believe global tourism can experience different cultures, others think it has some drawback. This essay will examine both of viewpoints.

    On the one hand, the two main advantages of developed global tourism are a boost in the country’s economy and create a large number of new job opportunity for the local people. Firstly, tourists spend money on a wide range of services, including hotels, amusement, transportation and food. This way, tourism yields an additional income, greatly supporting the countries’ economies. Secondly, tourism increases the level of employment by bringing in new jobs. For instance, a rush of tourists traffic results in a large demand in restaurants workers, tour guides, hotel staff and so on, encouraging business owners to hire more people for those positions.

    On the other hand, international tourism also has some major disadvantages like the destruction of popular tourists destinations and development of illegal economic activities. Firstly, ancient buildings, temples, and monuments struggle to cope with a vast amount of visitor’s traffic and get damaged. Also, the large number of tourists can cause environmental problems. For instance, when places of interests are overcrowded, natural resources often became overexploited. Secondly, tourism can create more serious situations where criminal issues are involved. The presence of a considerable number of tourists with a large number of money to spend and jewellery increase the attraction for robbers.

    In conclusion, global tourism has certain disadvantages like the destructive effects and grows of the crime rate, it has an extremely positive impact on countries’ economy. I believe that these benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks. (271 words)

  • hamideh    hamideh

    1.++
    #being familiar with unique tourism attractions
    # being familiar with culture of foreign people

    #spread of diseases
    #expensive
    //////////////////////////////////////////

    2.++
    #gain new job opportunities in other countries
    #improvement of local economy

    #spread of bad behavior patterns of tourists
    #pay no attention to domestic tourism
    //////////////////////////////////////////
    3.+++
    #improvement of global business
    # learn about progress of other countries
    ——
    #Increase rate of crime
    #damage to the enviornment

    • admin    admin

      درود
      ایده های خوبی هستند.

  • Mahshid    Mahshid

    Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am writing to provide my feedback regarding your decision to sponsor a children’s sports team or pay for open-air concerts in my area.
    In my view, there are various valuable advantages of sponsoring the sports team. Children will more encourage to sports activities and it will help them to find their talents in this field. Moreover residents of this area are young and many of them like sport and it will be great to support them.
    On the other hand, performance of live concert will have some benefit too. This event will help people to feel happier and they will have this opportunity to see live concert in them self area .Since many people of here are young, it will help them to reduce their daily stress too.
    Finally, both sports and music are essential for healthy lifestyle. I suggest it is better to sponsor sports team and live concert base on your budget and create balance for both of them.
    Hoping that you will consider my suggestion.
    Yours faithfully,
    Mahshid

    • admin    admin

      درود

      نامه بسیار خوب هست. دقت بفرمایید برای نمره بالاتر باید کوشش کنید به صورت موثر و چشمگیر تعداد واژگان سطح بالاتر آکادمیک و ساختارهای پیچیده تر گرامی مثل ساختار مجهول یا جمله های Complex و شرطی ها رو در نامه ها وارد بفرمایید. حتما با مطالعه دقیق نمونه ها کوشش کنید نامه های قوی تری از این نظر بنویسید.

  • The line graph compares how many school pupils registered in two distinct schools over the period between 2011 and 2014. (20 words)
    Starting with about 950 students in 2011, registration in Litchfield School grew steadily up to 1200 students in 2013. Then, by an increased rate, it reached to approximately 1500 students in 2014. In other words, the popularity of Litchfield School among the students rose within the period of three years. (50 words)
    Enrolling the students in Riverside school, on the other hand, saw a slow growth from 800 students in 2011 to just over 800 in 2012. Afterwards, it descended to 800 students again in 2013 and continued to fall to approximately 700 students in 2014. The figure shows that the popularity of Riverside School did not alter noticeably in comparison with Litchfield School. (62 words)
    Overall, not only Litchfield school remained more popular, but also the gap between popularity of these two schools had widened considerably during the period in question. (28 words)

  • hamideh    hamideh

    This graph illustrates the number of students who admitted into Riverside and Litchfield schools over a three-year period from 2011 to 2014.
    The student enrolments in Litchfield schools showed an increase over all period. At the begining, in 2011, the enrolment number was just under 1000 and increased slightly to just over 1000 in 2012. Next, it surged steadily to 1200 by 2013 and then showed a more rapid increase and reached 1500 in 2014.
    On other hand, the number of students who enroled at Riverside schools was 800 in 2011. Then, it started to rise a little to just over 800 in 2012, before falling back to the level of 2011 by 2013. Since then, it showed a steady decline for the next year to reach about 700 in 2014.
    Overall, the number of students who enroled in Litchfield was much higher than Riverside throughout the period and increased by 2014. While the enrolment at Riverside decreased at the end of period.(163 words).

  • با سلام
    بنده فکر کردم در مقدمه به خوبی
    essay statement
    را توصیف کرده ام . اما الان که نگاه می کنم تنها مطلبی که ا قلم افتاده است مثالهایی از سوالاتی است که از جویندگان کار می شود. تنها به این مثالها در مقدمه اشاره نکرده ام .
    آیا باید کاملا تمام سوال و مثالهای مطرح شده در عنوان Question Statement
    را در مقدمه ذکر کنم؟ منظور شما همین است یا من درست متوجه نشدم؟؟

    • admin    admin

      درود

      حتما فایل صوتی مربوط به نوشتن مقدمه که فکر میکنم جلسه دوم صحبتش شده رو با دقت بشنوید توضیح کامل ارایه شده خدمتتون.

  • farzane    farzane

    The line graph illustrates the frequency of student’s registration who has done by Litchfield School and Rivers school from 2011 to 2014.
    In 2011, the number of students who enrolled in LF school was around 900. While, for RS school this figure was 100 people less, 800. Between 2011 and 2013, the registration rate of LF school dramatically climbed to reach 1200 students. In contrast, this rate remained steadily state for RS school just it saw a negligible increase by 2012.
    From 2013 until 2014, the pace of changes in both schools was considerable. Lf school had an exponential increase in its enrolments and reach its peak 1600 people in 2014. In contrast, for RS school this rate gradually declined to reach its lowest numbers around 700 students.
    Overall, it is apparent that, The LF School was the most popular unit in the shown period. Despite of fact that the differences between 2 units was negligible at the beginning of the period, the gap between them grew dramatically and reach its highest amount at the end. 176 words

  • Some companies request private information from people who are looking for job. Although firms can use people`s individual data unfair, employees can fit perfectly for the job. This essay will discuss the two viewpoints.
    When companies seek to recruit people for their job vacancies, often ask for detailed personal information that sometimes conduce to an abuse finally. Factories have a good source of data from employees which bring a considerable power for them and they can share people`s information, if people do not obey the special company rules. For instance, a manager had begun to s.e.x offence when he knew his clerk is a single woman. In addition, a bad news leak out about put an employee under pressure because they had some personal information every now and then. So, people who share more information are susceptible to more danger.
    But not everyone on the danger list and sharing private information will be generally helpful for people. When firms know all aspects of people personality, habits, and other characteristic, they can offer appropriate job position. Therefore, an employee who take up post which perfectly fits him, can foster the development during his/her career. As an example, 5 years ago my friend found a job and his employer suggested a fitting assignment to him since the employer ask all personal information about him. My friend achieve a significant progress recently and he was very effective for his company. Thus having an accurate source of data from staff members not only good for employees but also is advantageous for factory.
    In conclusion, collect personal information become a controversial issue in organizations. Although sharing detailed information have a few risks, others including me believe that it could be essential and helpful for both sides. (291 words)

    • admin    admin

      درود

      رایتینگ شما بعد از مهلت تعیین شده ارسال شده و فیدبک کلی دریافت میکند:

      چهارچوب کلی رایتینگ خوب هست اما بعضی از ساختارها و جمله بندی ها بدون دقت و بدون چک کردن در گوگل یا لانگمن نوشته شده.

      در نوشتن جمله ها حتما باید یک الگوی مشخص از کتاب های مرجع یا مثال های دیکشنری در ذهن داشته باشید در غیر این صورت جمله خود به خود درست نخواهد بود!

      از مثال زدن خودداری کنید وبجای مثال به صورت منطقی و گام به گام ایده اصلی ذکر شده در آغاز پاراگراف را توضیح دهید.

      • Hoseyn    Hoseyn

        استاد به خاطر ۱۷ دقیقه تاخیر ؟!!

        • admin    admin

          درود

          بله من کار رو بسیار جدی میگیرم. شما هم باید خیلی جدی بگیرید و برای حفظ کیفیت فیدبک خودتون و دیگران به قوانین احترام بگذارید.

          بارها درخواست کردیم ارسال رایتینگ رو به روز آخر موکول نفرمایید. بعضی دوستان در ثانیه های پایانی موکول میکنند و برای حفظ کیفیت فیدبک به ما فشار زیادی وارد میشه.

          در 12 جلسه پیش رو از شما و تمامی عزیزان درخواست دارم پیش از مهلت تعیین شده ارسال کنند تا امکان ارسال یک فیدبک کامل و با کیفیت وجود داشته باشه.

          ممنون

  • farzane    farzane

    Nowadays, asking some private information of employees has become a custom. Although some people believe that this kind of requests certainly treat people’ privacy, others including me cite it as an extremely beneficial points for both sides. In this essay both views will be discussed.
    It is undeniable fact that, the positive points of this view is remarkable. First of all, job allocation properly is a grate duty of every managers with vital impact on company ‘future. The prerequisite of this achievement is being more familiar with employees and aware of their abilities and disabilities as much as possible. Secondly, the environment of job affected employee’s performance. Being aware of personal information, people comprehensive other’s situations better and makes sense of empathy and co-working at job atmosphere. In this way employee are more responsible for their company and theirs prosper will be assurance.
    On the other hand, the drawbacks of this view is not negligible. First of all, the risk of information abuse is always exist and also conflict between employees is indisputable. Gathering these 2 facts together may have negative consequence. Especially in competition atmosphere for getting high rank, people may use blind spots of their rival immorally. The last but not lest points, knowing from other people can affect our behavior and give us sense of judgment. In this environment people can’t be enough comfortable and all of these reactions impact the quality of their works.
    As way of conclusion, although some demerits exist in this kind of request, I personally believe that the benefits of these questions far outweigh its drawbacks. And gives 2 both sides’ worthwhile gifts.

  • Mahshid    Mahshid

    Personal questions are very common in interview questions these days. Although some people do not like these kinds of questions and try to dodge them, others including me believe these kinds of questions are very useful and important.
    Some people believe that personal questions are very crucial and useful. First of all, character of any person is very important in work environment because we want to communicate with them for many hours every day and if they have bad character for instance if they are always unsatisfied and nagging, they influence to our work too. Secondly, some people are very talented but they may have not enough experience to show their technical skill and when you ask them some personal questions you can determine their potential and how much they are appropriate for our work and we can trust them.(102)
    On the other hand, some people believe that personal interview questions do not relate to work and they do not like to answer them. First of all, everyone may has some problems in life and does not like to talk about them and theses kind of questions may bother some people who are more sensitive. Secondly, some people believe that personal question can affect to their technical life. For instance people who have different religious may have some opinion that are very different from other people and without consider their abilities they do not accept to a job that are suitable for it.(103)
    I believe that some simple questions about life of employees can help other staff to have better place for work and help companies to have profitable business but some personal question such as nation and culture as well as religion should not affect the choice of employee.
    In conclusion, while personal questions may bother some people and they do not like to answer them, they are very crucial and useful especially in big and crowded companies which have many employees.

  • hamideh    hamideh

    سلام
    استاد گرامی
    ۱- ترتیب زدن یک تست ریدینگ استاندارد کمبریج به چه صورت است؟ ابتدا باید تمام سوالات را سریع خواند و بعد متن و در ادامه سوالات را تک تک خواند و در متن بررسی کرد؟
    ۲- در صورت وقت داشتن برای تقویت اسپیکینگ به غیر از سوالات سایت چه تمرین دیگری می توان کرد؟
    ۳- آیا در مورد نحوه زدن تست های لیسینینگ و تکنیک های آن در کلاس صحبت خواهد شد؟

    • admin    admin

      درود

      لطفا در کلاس بپرسید که کامل صحبت کنیم.

  • sajad    sajad

    Employers usually gain personal information from job applicants as a reliable approach to choose their staff. While some people claim that additional information is beneficial for employers, others believe that this information is irrelevant. In this essay I will discuss both views and present my own opinion. (47 words)
    Personal information helps employers to make an appropriate assessment about job candidates. First of all, they can hire the right person for a vacancy which needs some specific requirements. For instance, many applicants may be suitable for a teaching profession according to their academic qualification but only those ones who have great communication skills can be fit for the profession. Secondly, organizations can utilize the individual details to acknowledge diligent employees by providing variant facilities and welfare which are related to their interests. As a result they can keep their employees motivated and enhance the efficiency to get a competitive advantage over their rivals. (104 words)
    On the other hand, providing the personal information which required for job applications has a few drawbacks. First of all, most employees prefer to keep personal information about various aspects of their life secret and not allow others to invade their privacy. Therefore disclosing such information like people’s marital status or leisure activities makes them feel uncomfortable in workplaces. Secondly, there is always a possibility that people are judged based on their personal background instead of their professional skills and work history. Consequently an inaccurate opinion will may be formed about people’s character that can considerably decrease their chances of promotion to higher ranks in organizations. (106 words)
    In conclusion, the valid reasons given by both sides should be considered. In my opinion, collecting personal information enables employers to form a balanced judgment about applicants and match more skillful ones to the vacancies in order to increase their business productivity. (42 words)
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  • hamideh    hamideh

    Selection of right staff by employers is a crucial issue. Although, some people including me believe requesting personal information from applicants brings beneficial effects, others think it has some demerits. This essay will examine both these viewpoints(37 words).
    There are some advantages for sharing private information with employers. First of all, the employers would be able to be familiar with character of people who applying for a job. The employers can realize character of applicants by asking their interests and hobbies and select the people that are suitable for job. Secondly, it makes recruitment process fast. There are many people who seek for a job and are going to take an interview that careful examination of their resume takes a long while. The employers can do a brief examination by asking personal information and reject unsuitable ones and accelerate employment(102 words).
    However, asking personal information has negative impacts. First of all, it may cause discomfort for employees. Everyone has individual information which do not like that others know. Sharing this information with employers make them feel uncomfortable and worried that their co-workers realize and it would impact on their performance and relationship with other staff. Secondly, some employers may judge quickly from personal information and may refuse or accept fast application of the people who seek for a job without examination of their skills and talents and so, highly skilful persons may not be employed or unfit ones be hired(101 words).
    In my opinion, it would be helpful for selection of right staff that the employers ask personal information of persons who take an interview for a job and its advantages outweigh drawbacks(32 words).
    In coclusion, the employers tend to ask private information in an interview because of its positive effects, but some negative effects are considered for it(25 words).

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  • Advantages:
    # inspection of morality qualification,
    # familiarity with other proficiencies and capabilities of the applicant
    Disadvantage:
    # familiarity with weak points of the employee
    # Dismissing capable and skillful aspirants,

  • Advantages:
    # choosing the people with less personal problems,
    # making the safer workplace,
    Disadvantages:
    # wasting the time,
    # sometimes can facilitate the employment despite inefficiencies

    It is true that roughly all employers request people looking for jobs personal information in their application forms. While I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of privacy, I believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks. (39 words)
    On the one hand, asking people seeking job personal information can get acquainted the employers with their probable weak points. It can reduce or eliminate self-esteem of job applicant especially when they are hired and commence to work. For instance, an unsuccessful marriage might change the look of boss and colleagues on the new employee. This information may affect the outcome of the interview and even can prevent hiring the applicant in spite of merit, or sometimes can facilitate the employment process despite the inefficiencies and incompetencies. Also, getting this information, preparing the enclosed supporting documents and their assessment can often be extremely time consuming and tedious. (102 words)
    On the other hand, it is perhaps more important to prepare a convenient place for all of the employees to perform their duties in fairly quiet. So the employers have to be somehow strict and need to inspect the morality qualification of the members of staff. By getting the personal information of people who would like to be employed, employers can hire the people with less or without personal problem to make the workplace peaceful and calm. In addition, I think that taking the precise personal information helps the employers to get more familiar with the job applicants and to know all of the capabilities and talents of the applicants that can even simplify their employment process. (111 words)
    In conclusion, I would argue the advantages of asking personal information of the society applying for jobs do outweigh the disadvantages. (21 words)

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