کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس
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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج بهمن 1396

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای زوج کلاس مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست که در تاریخ 30 دی 1396 آغاز میشود. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تکالیف جلسه 20 و 21

 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه 20 و 21

 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه 17 ام

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه 16 ام

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه 15 ام

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه 13 ام

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تکالیف گرامر جلسه 11 ام 

بعد از مشاهده صفحه مربوط در لینک های زیر و مطالعه دقیق توضیحات به زبان فارسی، چند ویدئو مربوط به هر فصل را مشاهده کرده و با ذکر نام برای هر مبحث دست کم 5 مثال در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد فرمایید.

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گفتار پانزدهم: تبدیل جملات سوالی مستقیم به غیر مستقیم

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گفتار شانزدهم: بعد از چه فعل هایی ing می آید

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه نهم

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نمونه پاسخ نمره 7

The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.

In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90  in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.

At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.

The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.

Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to  diminish and at the final year all these categories had  very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)

نمونه پاسخ نمره 7.5

The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.

The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.

Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed  an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.

Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)

نمونه پاسخ نمره 8.5

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه نهم

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه هشتم

Sample Answer by Pouya Abolqasemi

The graph shows the average weekly time spent by children at the age of 10 to 11 on two different leisure activities (TV and computer) at home. (27)

Schoolchildren spend just under 4 hours a week on computer at the beginning of the period in 2000. This number increased steadily for the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. Then it increased more slowly during the following 4 years to 2008 to reach a peak of almost 22 hours per week. (54)

Time spent on TV was much higher compare to computer at the beginning of the period. It started at 21 hours in 200 and stayed the same until 2003. At this time it showed a downward trend and fell to 15 hours in 2004. During the next 4 years up to the end of period in 2008, despite some fluctuations, it remained stable at this level. (66)

Overall, it seems children’s preference for these two pastime activities changed dramatically and during this nine-year period they have reversed. (20)

(167 Words)

 

تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه ششم 

 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه پنجم

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه چهارم + نمونه پاسخ

 نمونه نامه نوشته شده توسط مدرس  ???

Dear Amin

I hope everything is fine with you. If you remember I had a bicycle that you really adored and the truth is I no longer use it much. In fact I am going to sell it because I don’t think I would have time for this sort of leisure activities anytime soon. Currently I am a full-time employee in Webster Company and I try to prepare myself for university entrance exam in less than three months.

The bicycle as you know is a road one with a nice black color and powerful brakes which gives it a professional look. Its tires are original and still under one-year warranty. It also has a lock which comes handy in case you want to lock it up somewhere on your campus.

I know you have always wanted to own a bicycle like that and I believe this is a wonderful opportunity for you to purchase the favorite vehicle of your own at a very reasonable price.

Let me know what you think.

Best Wishes

Pouya

(174 Words)

 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه دوم + نمونه پاسخ

Advantages: more workforce / less medical expenses

Disadvantage: Lack of experience / Unemployment

Population makeup of each country offers hidden and obvious perils and opportunities. While there are advantages for a country when the number of its young people outnumber the older ones, there are also a downside to think of. In this essay I will examine the issue and discuss positive and negative consequences. (52 words)

A surge in the number of young citizens in a given society will undoubtedly create some opportunities. First of all, there will be more workforce for the industry and other sections of the country and this is a good news since these employees will be able to deliver desired goods and services and consequently the economy will be more prosperous. Secondly, young people will not demand much medical care because they live the period in which their body can fight many disease-causing organisms or the illnesses of a chronic nature simply have not been yet surfaced. They need far less medical attention and related expenses and this gives the chance to the government to invest for more productive purposes. (120 words)

However this change can not be all good and there is a downside to think of. First of all, the experimental experience of young people who are about to get employed in different sections are inferior to that of those who live their forties and fifties. This means the overall delivery of the same result at different fields is simply unrealistic. Secondly, a glance a the economy of many developing and even developed parts of the world reveals that such changes poses the threat of unemployment. Economies simply fail to manage the ever growing percentage of young population and ultimately a sizable chunk will be rendered unemployed. (107 words)

In conclusion, I believe the fact that the population in some countries are made of more young citizens these days offers both benefits and disadvantages for those countries and it cannot be either black or white. (36 words)

Total: 317 Words

 

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج بهمن ماه – نمونه Voice ها

این نمونه ویس های ضبط شده از پارت اول اسپیکینگ آیلتس در نخستین روزها از طرح ریحانه ضبط شده و بعنوان یک نمونه خوب بهمراه فیدبک ارسالی در اینجا قرار داده میشود:

نمونه ویس های ارسالی ریحانه پرسش 4 تا 10 + #فیدبک 






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نمونه ویس های ارسالی امیرحسین سوالات 20 تا 25 پارت اول






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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای زوج بهمن ماه – نمونه های زبان آموزان

نمونه رایتینگ مورد تایید و کار بسیار خوبی از ایمان با رعایت تمامی موارد چک لیست و جمله بندی مناسب.  ?????

نمونه رایتینگ ایمان ???

نمونه رایتینگ عامر + #فیدبک ???

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه رایتینگ امیر حسین + #فیدبک

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه کنفرانس ریحانه از کتاب Select Readings با سرعت مطالعه 160 واژه در دقیقه

به ترتیب از فصل اول تا چهارم ???


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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – وارد کردن لغات در سایت

زبان آموزان گرامی با ورود به این صفحه فهرستی از تمامی فصل های کتاب های Select Readings، Oxford Word Skills و Essential Words for IELTS را مشاهده خواهید فرمود. فصل مورد نظر خود را پیدا کرده و در بخش دیدگاه ها مشابه نمونه زیر مثال های خود از لغات جدید آن فصل را وارد کرده تا مورد بازبینی قرار بگیرد ???

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – بانک فیدبک های اسپیکینگ و رایتینگ

بانکی از تمامی فیدبک های ارائه شده بر روی رایتینگ و فایل های اسپیکینگ ارسالی در کانال تلگرام زیر وجود دارد که از تمامی علاقمندان و زبان آموزان درخواست میشود در این کانال عضو شوند:

https://t.me/FeedbackParadise

کانال اصلی ما در تلگرام برای آگاهی از آخرین منابع و تازه های آیلتس:

https://t.me/ielts2com

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – بررسی آنلاین Collocation ها

دوستان برای نوشتن رایتینگ در صورت نداشتن دانش کافی در زمینه ترکیب ها و کالوکیشن ها حتما از دیکشنری زیر استفاده بفرمایید. کلمه اصلی یا کلیدی مثلا advice را وارد کرده و collocation مورد نیاز و مناسب را گزینش فرمایید:

http://collocations.enacademic.com

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کلاس غیر حضوری آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس Task 1 و Task 2

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)

همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید

براورد سریع دایره لغات زبان انگلیسی شما بصورت آنلاین

عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها 

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  1. zinat even bahman 962
    zinat even bahman 962 says:

    WRITING TASK 2 WRIGHT RIGHT : TOURISM

    Nowadays tourism has become a global spread industry . Although some people including me believe It brings many benefits to the countries, others think the disadvantages outweigh its advantages. In this essay both view will be discussed. (36 words)

    It is an indisputable fact that tourism industry has many economic contributions for the host countries. First of all, It provides many job opportunities for local people. The tourism industry can be divided into different career areas such as accommodation, food, entertainment, transportation and travel services. All of these areas involve many job positions for employment or starting a business. Secondly, most of the governments gain significant revenues from international tourism. For example, the tourism businesses must pay taxes on their incomes. moreover,according to the countries’ policies, travellers who decide to visit a foreign country are required to pay tourists taxes depending on their destinations. (106 words)

    On the other hand, tourism always has some negative impacts for the countries. First of all, we can not deny that irresponsible visitors cause many damages to the environment like traffic congestion, air pollution, erosion and litter. under these circumstances, the government has to expense a lot of budget to solve these kinds of environmental problems. Secondly, tourism industry might be a reason for increasing the inflation rate in a country. For instance, local goods can become expensive because tourists will pay more for them. similarly demand for holiday accommodations makes housing too expensive for local people.therefore, the price for most of the things will go up due to tourism. (110 words)

    in conclusion, tourism industry has many social development for the countries. at the same time , there are some drawbacks of this trend which can not be neglected. (27 words)

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  2. بهرام سبوکی
    بهرام سبوکی says:

    task 2 (small shops or mall) 12 test writing Cambridge
    positive
    #customers are satisfied
    1.things are cheaper
    2.you can find every thing in one place
    #more job opportunity
    1.malls are big and divided in different parts
    2.malls working 24 hours
    سلام میخواستم بدونم این ایده پردازی خوبه

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  3. نورالدین مقدسی
    نورالدین مقدسی says:

    mehdi moqadasi:
    These days countrysides are chosen by newcomers for living. While some people agree with developing countrysides, others including me disagree. My point of view will be discussed in this essay. (30 words)

    There is, certainly, less security in countryside, first of all, vast majority of people live in small area in countryside and control of them by police and other security forces is truly difficult, also aware the inhabitants about the social norms and advise them to observe the laws, is greatly challenging, secondly, in suburbs houses are constructed in small size and also are built with simple and affordable materials furthermore not only safety standards and requirements that stablished by city council are not met but also some building may be formed illegally ,thus burglary is facilitated spontaneously and thieves are tempted for robbery (102 words)

    There is, indeed, less facilities in countryside in comparison with city center, first of all in that region, as large number of people who inhabit there and residents have a lot of requests and demands for facilities and those services are not satisfactory, and people most of the time struggle with availability or shortage of facilities, therefore the demands are not completely responded or totally ignored, secondly those parts are not developed, infacct countrysides are neither well- designed nor well-organized, thanks to lack of enough investment by government or private investors in social projects which are necessary for evolving that area or vitally important for people’s convenience, suburbs often have low-grade level of urban living principles. (116 words)

    By the way of conclusion, in my perspective developing the countryside and also living there has some negative points which could not be neglected (24 words)

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  4. بهرام سبوکی
    بهرام سبوکی says:

    Nowadays, overpopulation demands developing construction and there is not enough space in the city. Although some people believe we should not build new homes in rural areas ,others including me claim that it is good idea. The second view will be discussed in this essay.(40)

    Build house and live in countryside has advantage for health . First of all ,as the advantage we can consider the fact that, the countryside is less polluted. Because in the countryside the air and water are so clean .In the rural areas there are many plant species and mountains also there aren’t any huge traffic jams or cars, so you can inhale oxygen enriched air. Secondly ,in countryside people are happier and have less stressful life. When you live in rural area you are away from hectic pace of modern lifestyle. Listening to birdsong and catching a whiff of freshly cut grass, the sounds and smells of nature are enhanced in the countryside and they help you to be happy and calm. (120)

    Furthermore, living in countryside is economical . First of all , you may easily build a big house and the garden, because charges for ground are much lower than in the suburbs .In rural area because of low construction tax and many opportunity , you can find low price grounds for build. Secondly ,living in the countryside is cheaper than city so you probably may afford many other things, because the prices are lower . People live in rural area have access to cheap and fresh food and vegetable and the charge of buildings for example charge of Repairs are less than city.(103)

    In conclusion ,it is true to say that our population become growing and people need new houses so they build in rural area and it has advantage for health and economical.(31)

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  5. بهرام سبوکی
    بهرام سبوکی says:

    Writing General task 2 test 2
    سلام میخواستم بدونم این ایده پردازی خوبه?
    build new homes in countryside
    #healthy
    less polluted
    people are happier and they have less stressful life
    #economical
    charges for ground are much lower than city
    living in the countryside is cheaper than city

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  6. ناشناس
    ناشناس says:

    سلام میخواستم بدونم این ایده پردازی خوبه?
    build new homes in countryside
    #healthy
    less polluted
    people are happier and they have less stressful life
    #economical
    charges for ground are much lower than city
    living in the countryside is cheaper than city

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  7. نورالدین مقدسی
    نورالدین مقدسی says:

    سلام جناب استاد، این ایده پردازی برای تکلیف این هفته مناسبه ؟
    Countryside
    Agree
    #less security
    large number of people live in small area and control of them is hard
    Small houses which are built with simple materials

    #less facilities
    more demands
    countryside is not developed

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  8. zinat even bahman 962
    zinat even bahman 962 says:

    WRITING TASK 1 : ELECTRICITY PRODUCTION

    The flow chart illustrates the method of electricity manufacturing from geothermal energy by the use of water, steam turbine and generator.

    Overall, the geothermal power plant consists of five phases which starts with pumping the cold water into the ground and finishes with generating electricity by generator in the final stage. Each step does important work that lead to the electricity power.

    According to the Diagram, first of all, the cold water should be pumped down to the depth of 4.5 kilometres to reach the injection well. Next, the water flows through the hot rocks called geothermal zone. afterwards, hot water is pumped up from the production well to the condenser where the water steam is transferred to the turbine in order to spin it. At the end of the operation, by providing energy for the generator which is attached to the turbine, the electricity will be produced.

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      در رایتینگ شما مشکل خاصی از نظر دستور زبان یا واژگان و همچنین چهارچوب اصلی مورد نظر به چشم نمیخورد.

      برای بهتر شدن کار کوشش کنید سمپل های بیشتری مطالعه کنید و کوشش کنید ساختارهای گرامری قوی تری را در پاسخ خود بگنجانید.

      همچنین تیزبینی در گنجاندن اطلاعات یا حذف اطلاهات غیر ضروری باید در دستور کار شما باشد.

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  9. zinat even bahman 962
    zinat even bahman 962 says:

    WRITING 16th : IMMIGRATION

    Nowadays the number of people who migrate abroad is increasing. Although some people think immigrants should keep their own culture and traditions, others including me hold an opposite view. In this essay, second view will be discussed. (36)

    It is an indisputable fact that immigrants who assimilate the new culture can have a better relationship with other residents in the host country. First of all, they would avoid many conflicts and interactions with locals. For example, In Japan people are not allowed to talk on their phones on the public transports and If someone does, other people may count it as an offensive behaviour. Secondly, if immigrants adapt local culture and customs, they are more likely to be welcomed in the society. Moreover, they can find many friends and expand their relationship circle. Under this circumstances, they would not be isolated or affected by loneliness or depression. (113)

    From my point of view, If immigrants adjust to the new customs and culture they have more chance to succeed. First of all, newcomers to a country face many changes in their lives and everything might be unfamiliar for them such as weather, language, food and fashions. the sooner they get used to new circumstances and go through the process of culture shock, the sooner they will be able to manage their new lives. Secondly, by adjusting to the host country people can improve their work performance as they are able to communicate more with their employers and other coworkers which might lead newcomers to work effectively . In the same way, they will find better job opportunities in the future.(118)

    in conclusion, I believe that adapting to the local culture is very beneficial for immigrants as they will communicate with other people easier and make more achievements in their lives.(31)

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  10. Zinat
    Zinat says:

    با سلام و خستہ نباشید
    استاد میخواستم بدونم اگر تکالیف اسپیکینگ جلسات گذشتہ را بفرستیم فیدبکی دریافت میکنند یا باید فقط تکالیف مربوط بہ ھمین جلسہ فرستادہ شود؟

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      این مورد بارها در تمامی کلاس ها توضیح داده شده که تنها به تکالیف آخرین جلسه فیدبک ارایه میشود.

      البته غیر ممکن هست کسی زمان کافی برای انجام تکلیف 2 جلسه را در بازه زمانی یک جلسه داشته باشد.

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    • admin
      admin says:

      البته اگر رایتینگ اضافه بنویسید یک بررسی کلی روش انجام میشه و خطاهای بزرگش گفته میشه ولی فیدبک دقیق خیر چون تایمی وجود نداره.

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  11. zinat even bahman 962
    zinat even bahman 962 says:

    WRITING CAMBRIDGE 12 TASK 2 TEST 3

    Nowadays parents have more concerns about their children’s leisure activities. Although some people believe that children should participate in group activities in their spare times, others hold an opposite view. In this essay both views will be discussed.(38 words)

    It is an indisputable fact that children’s participating in team buildings activities has many advantages for them. First of all, It will help them to learn teamwork. children who work in a group with other children to achieve a common goal, are more capable to learn how to be a responsible person in the future .At the same time, they will learn to respect others’ views and ideas in a group .Secondly, all group activities involve human interaction, hence children can make new friends and expand their social circle. under this circumstances, they can develop themselves with good behaviours which can be shown in the other children. (107 words)

    on the other hand, there are some benefits for children in spending time on their own way. First of all, It leads them to become more confident. Children are able to follow their own interests and they do not compare their abilities with other children. In addition, they can improve their own talents and intelligences which help them to make more progress in their lives. secondly, It help them to be independent and stand on their own feet. children should learn to make new goals so they need to be creative enough to organise their own plans and stick on that without depending on others.(105 words)

    in conclusion, participating in group activities in spare time can promote many beneficial effects to children. In contrary, allowing children to explore themselves on their own, have many advantages as well which can not be neglected.(36 words)

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  12. نورالدین مقدسی
    نورالدین مقدسی says:

    جناب استاد سلام و درود
    این ایده پردازی برای تکلیف این هفته مناسبه؟
    parents encourage their children to take part in organized activities
    #make them more sociable
    #children would learn to fight for their rights
    parents let their children to spend their time by their own
    #children would learn to deal with their problems
    #more safety

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  13. نورالدین مقدسی
    نورالدین مقدسی says:

    mehdi moqadasi:
    Dear Mr. Smith
    I appreciate you are good, two weeks ago we have a great flight journey from Tehran to London and we sat next to each other and if you recall we had a conversation about some sort of job vacancies in your restaurants.
    As I said on that time I have studied accounting in Tehran university and I graduated last with best scores so I am a professional accountant furthermore I am expert in writing of accounting softwares with various types of programming languages even those one’s that based on networks moreover I am enquiring a job in my field of major also I really adore in accounting and absolutely love working in such excellent restaurants like yours.
    I believe that one of requirements of your career is having a powerful accounting unit also having a reliable software with a strong bank information to record all related data is necessary, thus thanks to the my skills and experiences in this field I think that I would be advantageous and beneficial for your business by upgrading your accounting systems to latest version.
    Yours faithfully
    Mehdi

    (180 words)

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  14. Iman
    Iman says:

    The two maps below show the small town called Islip in its current condition and the proposed changes contributing to its development.
    As it can be clearly observed, a host of alternations have been suggested. Initially, the whole town will be surrounded by highways and streets so that commuting would be facilitated for citizens. Moreover, the previous housing will be developed by adding two fresh projects. The other changes will be related to constructing bus station, shopping centre, car park which do not exist in the current town and will be built just above the row of shops. In addition, a pedestrian pavement will be stablished between the shops and the rest of mentioned venues. The countryside, which is located on the northern part of the existing town, will be eliminated from the developed city map. The only places, which will be remained in the current locations, are park and school.

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  15. Alireza Ramezanpour
    Alireza Ramezanpour says:

    Cambridge 12 Academic Test 2 Task 1 map

    These two maps are the center of a small town called Islip which illustrate its present form and plans for its future. (22 words)

    In the middle of the developed map, it can be seen a row of shops that they will be placed from east to west of town center. At the north of shops, there will be a pedestrian walkway. Also the northwest of the map there will be a bus station. At the left of the bus station, there will be the shopping center, car park, and new housing, respectively. All around the map, it can be seen that there will be a dual carriageway. In the southwest of town, the school will be built. There will be a street in front of the school. On both sides of the street, there will be built housing area. There will be also built the park in the eastern of the map. (129 words)

    In general, after the development, we will see a lot of changes in the center of this city. (18 words)

    Total: 169 words

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  16. Zinat
    Zinat says:

    استاد خستہ نباشید، متاسفانہ من نتونستم فید بک ھارو ببینم با ۳،۴ تا دستگاہ مختلف و حتی مرورگر ھای مختلف امتحان کردم ، و اینکہ لینک ھم باز نمیشہ حتی وقتی کپی میکنم و جدا باز میکنم نمیدونم مشکل کجاست و کلا برای کلاس ھم اکثر عکس ھای صفحات باز نمیشد برای من

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      درود

      دیروز برای بهبود کارکرد سایت یک سیستم تازه نصب کردند ولی گویا با مشکل روبرو شده پیام دادم که پیگیری کنند در اولین فرصت رفع میشه اشکال از این سیستم هست.

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  17. zinat even bahman 962
    zinat even bahman 962 says:

    WRITING TASK 2 : CHILDREN DECISION

    Nowadays developing children’s personality is one of the biggest concerns of parents. Although giving freedom to children to make their own decisions seems beneficial, some people believe It makes them selfish. In this essay both views will be discussed. (39)

    This is an indisputable fact that allowing children to make their personal choices has many positive effects. First of all, If children can have input of the minor decisions, they can begin to feel important and have confidence in their abilities. From a child’s point of view, they really want to feel like they play an important role in the family and their voice can be heard. Secondly, It is a practice for children to be mature enough to make major decisions in the future. children who have the right of deciding for themselves, can experience the consequences of their decisions so it teaches them to think and make a plan which leads them to a good decision maker during their growth.(120)

    on the contrary, permitting children to decide their own preference on everyday matters has some drawback as well. First of all, It might impact on children’s personality and they might show some detrimental behaviour in long term. For example, they may not respect others opinion and only care about their own feelings. Secondly, children often take this freedom as a grant to do whatever they want and avoid to follow their parent’s advice. hence ,usually they make immoral decisions without parents’ permissions.(83)

    in conclusion, decision of children on their own matters is a very debatable issue which has both advantages and disadvantages.(21)

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      درود.

      خیر ویسی گذاشته نشده چون جلسه ای برگزار نشده. اگر ویس ها رو دنبال میکنید باید این رو بدونید چون چند بار جلسه گذشته راجع بهش صحبت شده.

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  18. Rasoul
    Rasoul says:

    با سلام
    منابع Writing اضافی برای نوشتن و ارسال برای شما را مشخص کنید ممنون میشم

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      درود.
      با توجه به توصیحات جلسه قبل از ۴ شنبه تا شنبه فقط تکالیف عقب افتاده جلسات قبل رو باید تکمیل کنید.

      چون تا شنبه جلسه ای وجود ندارد روی رایتینگ شما فیدبک ارایه نمیشود ولی بصورت شخصی میتونید برای یکی از تاپیک های ۱۲ جلد کمبریج برای خودتون بنویسید

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  19. امیرحسین کاشی (962 even bahman )
    امیرحسین کاشی (962 even bahman ) says:

    با سلام و خسته نباشید. استاد من برای ۲۲ اردیبهشت ازمون رو رزرو کردم. من از چه تایمی میتونم آزمون زدن رو شروع کنم ؟ حقیقتا استاد یه آزمون رندم زدم نتایجش ناامید کننده بود به نظر شما از چه تایمی ازمون رو شروع کنم ؟

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      درود

      شما بعد از تموم کردن کتاب آبجکتیو آیلتس تست زدن رو شروع کنید. از اون موقع میتونید یک براورد نسبی داشته باشید. در این زمینه به موقع در کلاس صحبت میکنیم. این کتاب به زودی استارت میخوره و تقریبا زود هم تموم میشه

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  20. reihaneh kalhor
    reihaneh kalhor says:

    سلام و وقت بخیر
    استاد من میخوام آخر خرداد امتحان بدم. به نظر شما از الان ثبت نامم رو انجام بدم؟ با توجه به تجربه شما این کار باعث افزایش انگیزه میشه یا استرس ایجاد میکنه؟
    سوال دومم این هست که هر دو موسسه پروشات و ایرسافام هر دو 3 خرداد و 9 تیر آزمون آکادمیک دارن با توجه به اینکه شما فرمودید ماک های پروشات بهتر هست، من پروشات ثبت نام بکنم یا ایرسافام؟
    پیشاپیش از پاسخ شما ممنونم

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      درود

      بله به نظر من شما میتونید برای ثبت نام اقدام بفرمایید و البته این کار هم باعت ایجاد انگیزه میشه هم استرس ولی اگر ثبت نام نکنید عملا وقت زیادی رو هدر خواهید داد.
      نظر من پروشات هست. برای ماک هم همینطور. البته سنتر ها تاثیر چشمگیری روی نمره شما ندارند توجه داشته باشید.

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  21. Maryam Hosseini
    Maryam Hosseini says:

    Globally, fast food centers are becoming more and more these days. Although some people believe that fast food has carried some advantages, others including me disagree. Both views will be discussed in this essay.(34 words)

    From the one hand, fast food saves time. Frist of all, in today’s fast-paced life, there is nothing better than getting a ready meal. Besides the time, an individual has to spend in the kitchen, cooking a meal, also requires one to make a trip to the supermarket to buy the ingredients for the dish. Secondly, fast food is readily available, convenient and is usually consumed on the go. This has led restaurants to come from every corner of the street. From traditional restaurants to fast food are everywhere. (90 words)

    From the other hand, fast foods cause several health problems. First of all, fast foods are made up of a high proportion of unhealthy ingredients such as unsaturated fats, oil and sugar. Frequent intake of these will cause obesity and health problems including diabetes and high cholesterol levels. In additional, fast foods have very low nutritional value and in the long are harmful to children and teenagers whose bodies are still developing. Secondly, Sweet and high-fat foods are very tasty. When they are eaten, they release the Dopamine at the center of the brain rewards. This makes the desire to eat that food more and go back to it.(105 words)

    In conclusion, fast food like everything has its own advantages, but disadvantages also exist. However, by making some choices what to order, it is possible to lessen the drawbacks of fast food.(32 words)

    Total:261 words

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  22. Alireza Ramezanpour
    Alireza Ramezanpour says:

    Write Right Question 12
    Fast Food

    Nowadays fast food has a special place in people’s food habits. Although some people believe that it has many positive effects, others including me admit that it has negative results. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay. (40 words)

    There are lots of positive aspects for fast food. First of all, people can save time a lot. Todays both wife and husband have to work out because of life condition. They don’t have any free time for cooking. Fast food can help them to save more time. Secondly, at the present time it has become very easy to access fast foods. Sometimes people are seek and tired of cooking or they may be in a position where they are not available for cooking. Now people can achieve prepared foods with just a call so easily. The restaurant answers people’s demands rapidly by sending a courier. (106 words)

    Furthermore, there are many negative facets of eating fast foods. First of all the overuse of fast foods may be responsible for people’s addiction especially children. Unfortunately, fast foods are kind of food that children like it a lot. This dependency and addiction result in no attention to the main courses and nutritious foods. Secondly, fast food has detrimental health effects. Sadly fast food is unhealthy and there are not nutrient facts in it that people should pay attention to them. As well as restaurants may not comply with health regulation. Lack of people’s knowledge and overuse of them makes a variety of diseases. (104 words)

    By way of conclusion, fast food has either lots of positives or many negatives effects. We should not be neglected the inevitable consequences of these habits. (26 words)

    Total: 276 words

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  23. Iman
    Iman says:

    In present-day society, fast food is becoming well-liked as a one of the major nourishment. While some people believe it has many beneficial effects, others have differing views on the subject. These point of views will be discussed in this essay. (41 words
    On the one hand, the merits of fast food are apparent. First of all, saving time is a key point of it because fast food eliminates the several time-consuming activities such as home cooking. For instance, it can be the first and immediate choice for managing the time for people working in the full-time job with a short break time. Secondly, easy accessibility is another positive point of fast food. Nowadays there are a number of places offering different services for delivering fast foods covering the wide range of areas by which, people who are in a hurry or have some transportation problems can access them. (106 words
    On the other hand, consuming fast food has several serious drawbacks. First of all, it is highly addictive. These days traditional food has been superseded by fast food especially between young generations so far as prefer to consume ready meals that are affordable in some cases, therefore, this issue has caused more problems in their eating habits. Secondly, detrimental health effect is another downside of fast food. Currently fast food is a key contributor to the development and progression of some ailments, moreover, it contains a great deal of fat can result in long-term effects such as obesity and lack of physical activity. (103 words
    By way of conclusion, although fast food has many advantages in its favour, consuming it has some disadvantages that should not be ignored. (23 words
    Total words = 272

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  24. مریم- روزهای زوج بهمن
    مریم- روزهای زوج بهمن says:

    از دوستانی عزیز در کلاس خواهش می کنم اگر می دونید بقیه سوالات پارت دوم یعنی از شماره ۲۰ به بعد رو کجا می شه پیدا کرد منو راهنمایی کنند. ممنون

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  25. نورالدین مقدسی
    نورالدین مقدسی says:

    mehdi moqadasi:
    Dear sir or madam
    I am writing in the hope that you can help me with problem regarding a laptop that I recently bought. On 24 February I purchased a laptop from your store, it is a Lenovo G50, but it does not work properly, unfortunately it has trouble with the internet connection, indeed it could not connect to wireless networks and any Wi-Fi s. Moreover it seems ralated hardware is the problem. (72 words)
    I am working in digital network marketing and the internet is vital part of my business, I always send regular emails to my clients and to my uplevels and to my subbranches, periodically I monitor progress of everyone who has been registered in my branch online. Furthermore, not only I follow trach of their activities but also give them pieces of advice. (60 words)
    I would appreciate if you could send one of your maitanance personnel to my home to repair the laptop, also I can arrange to find out another person to fix my laptop and you pay bill in return. (38 words)
    Yours faithfully.
    Mehdi,

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  26. امیرحسین کاشی (962 even bahman )
    امیرحسین کاشی (962 even bahman ) says:

    The chart blow illustrate the duration of minutes(in bilion ) of telephone calls in the UK , divided into three groups , from 1995_2002.

    In 1995, duration of local calls were aproximately 72 minutes bilion and then it increased steadily by 1999, Actually There was a peak in that year and the maximum duration calls were about 90minutes bilion. after that it decreased about to 72 minutes bilion in 2002.

    Duration of national and international calls were about 38 minutes in 1995 and it increased gradually by 2002. The maximum of call’s duration were about 60minutes milion.duration
    of mobile calls were about two minutes bilion in 1995 and after five years , it reached 10minutes bilion and after that it rose dramatically from 1999to 2002. The maximum calls duration were near 45 minutes bilion

    Overall, the figure shows all of them increased by 1999 and then local calls decresed steadily by 2002 but two others increased by 2002 gradually.(153words)

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  27. مریم حسینی- روزهای زوج بهمن
    مریم حسینی- روزهای زوج بهمن says:

    The bar chart outlines reveals how many minutes (in billions) of telephone conversations were made by British people, in three different categories over the eight-year period between1995 and 2002.

    According to the bar chart, at first, in 1995, British talked more than 70 billion minutes on fixed-lines while 37 billion minutes were national and international fixed line calls and they spoke only 3 million minutes on cell phones. The use of local fixed-line increased steadily until 1999 when it reached to 90 billion minutes and after that, the number decreased each year and finally reached to 72 billion in 2002.

    The national & international-fixed dialing increased each year and reached to 61 billion in 2002 from the initial figure of 38 billion.

    The number of cell phone calls expanded significantly each year, which shows its increasing popularity. In 1995, the mobile phone calls were only 3 billion minutes and in 1999 it reached to 13 billion minutes. Over the next 3 years this number witnessed a quick rise to more than 45 billion minutes.

    In summary, mobile phone calls gained a significant popularity among the UK callers and the local fixed-line calls remained the highest among three call types in the United Kingdom.
    (190 words)

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  28. بهرام سبوکی( even bahman962)
    بهرام سبوکی( even bahman962) says:

    Dear Sir or Madam
    I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about a malfunctioning USB memory that I bought from your company. I purchased a 16G , hard cover model 123 last Wednesday 12th February 2018 .(32)
    Before I paid for it, we had tested the USB, and it seemed to function well so I copped all my work reports on it and it seemed normal. Yesterday, I was working with my computer and used the USP that to my surprise it did not working. I insert the flash drive into a different USB ports but it did not working.
    These reports should be prepared by the end of this week and since I am working at home I do not access to the IT team to recover fills from the USB. This unfortunate happening may cause me lots of difficulties at work, since the company needs the reports to make some decision.(53)

    I would like to ask for your assistant in order to fix the problem. It would be great if you could manage to come and check the USB ; otherwise, in case of any difficulty in commuting to my place I can bring the USB myself .(46)
    I look forward to receiving a reply.
    Yours faithfully

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  29. عليرضا رمضان پور- زوج بهمن
    عليرضا رمضان پور- زوج بهمن says:

    Writing Cambridge IELTS 9 Academic – Test 2 Task 1

    A glance at the chart provided reveals some information about the time of UK inhabitants’ telephone calls during the period from 1995 to 2002. (24 words)

    As shown in the chart, there are different trends for three categories of telephone calls. In 1995, local fixed line was approximately 72 billion minutes in the country, and this rose to 90 billion minutes in 1999. This was the highest figure in the period. After this, the number decline considerably to less than 72 billion minutes in 2002. (59 words)

    During the same period, a comparison of the amount of national and international fixed line calls was a lot more than mobile calls time. In 1995, it’s only 2 billion minutes for mobile calls and 37 billion minutes for national and international fixed line calls. The amount of time calls spent by mobile climbed steadily between 1996 and 1999 from 5 to 13 billion minutes. After that, this amount soared to 45 billion minutes in 2002. Yet, the time of telephone calls for national and international rose gradually between 1995 and 2002 from 38 to 60 billion minutes. (98 words)

    Interestingly, unlike local fixed line calls which have a fluctuation trend, both of other categories have increasing trends. (18 words)

    Total: 199 words

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  30. زینت ( روزهای زوج بهمن ۹۶)
    زینت ( روزهای زوج بهمن ۹۶) says:

    IELTS WRITING CAMBRIDGE 9 ACADEMIC TEST 2 TASK 1 :

    The bar chart illustrates how many minutes British residents spent on telephone calls which is divided in three different types of calls from 1995 to 2002. (26 words)

    According to the chart, the duration of local calls was approximately 70 billion minutes in 1995. Local calls slightly increased during the next 5 years and it reached a peak to 90 billion minutes in 1999. Afterwards, the figure levelled off and decreased year on year to 73 billion minutes in 2002.
    In contrast, the quantity of national and international calls steadily increased from just under 40 billion minutes in 1995 to just over 60 billion in 2002. Similarly minutes spent on mobile calls sharply rose from approximately 3 billion minutes in initial point (1995) to around 45 billion minutes in 2002. It significantly doubled from 22 billion minutes in 2000 to 40 billion minutes in 2001.
    overall, local calls were the most popular among British citizens over the whole period.Although the duration of both international calls and mobile calls increased over the period, the growth of mobile calls was dramatically noticeable. (151 words)

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  31. ریحانه کلهر
    ریحانه کلهر says:

    The bar chart depicts the time spent by British citizens on phoning and it is classified into three clusters according to domestic, international and mobile calls. — 25 words
    The people in the UK spent 72 billion minutes on calling which used fixed line in 1995. This number increased steadily during next 4 years and it reached its pick of 90 billion minutes in 1999. Then the calls duration declined gradually to 73 billion minutes during next 3 years till 2002. — 53 words
    There was a consistent growth in values of 2 other groups. While international calls duration had a gradual increase between 1995 and 2000 and its figure reached from 37 to 56 billion minutes, the mobile calls duration rose sharply and its value reached from 2 to 22 billion minutes. In next 2 years the length of international calls grew gently to 60 billion minutes, but mobile calls rose dramatically and its value was doubled from 22 to 44 billion minutes. — 80 words
    Overall, it seems during this 8-year period the UK citizens not only spent a lot of times on local and international calls, but also were enthusiastic for calling by mobile. — 30 words

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  32. ایمان
    ایمان says:

    The bar chart compares three types of phone calls using in the UK in terms of entire number of minutes over a period of 7 years.
    From 1995 to 2002, Local – fixed line had the highest usage rate among the UK citizens, which was almost double the number of billion minutes of phone calls by the second most popular call type, National and international – fixed line. Since 1995 and for over the next 7 years, the second most popular call type saw a slight growth from approximately 38 to 61 billion minutes.
    In contrast, the other call category, Mobiles, had different trend throughout the period, it stood at the lowest level in 1995 when it was just around 2 billion minutes, it experienced a steady increase until 1999 after which it had a considerable surge during the subsequent 4 years that means it was grown up by almost 40 billion minutes.
    It is clear that Local – fixed line by far was the most popular way for making phone calls in the UK. However, Mobiles calls saw
    two folds dramatic rose in the years 1999 and 2000.
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  33. مریم
    مریم says:

    The Internet is a huge and global system of human, information and computer. Some people believe that using the Internet has many disadvantages. However, others have seen it as a positive change. I will try to discussion both views in this assay.(42 words)

    With internet, access to information has become very easy. Frist of all, the Internet is an important source of information and gives the user knowledge and information about everything. Search engines sites such as Google that provide information about any topic in the world. Secondly the Internet has helped people through chat and social networks communicate easily with each other, and instant messages become reciprocate between people. Video communication, also made possible to the replacement of many business trips, resulting in significant savings in expense and time.(100 words)

    On the other hand, anything related to the Internet can be addictive. Frist of all, The Internet and its addiction cause people to be isolated and ultimately make them obese or depressed. Online games and entertaining videos which are available online, are contributing to the online addiction among many teenagers. Secondly, receiving and sending emails has been a tool for abusers and hackers to spread viral programs on the Internet. They can make it difficult for the computer and laptop system to turn off some applications and access personal information. They may also play with the user’s feelings or even use the threat of disclosure of personal information.(109 words)

    In conclusion, it is evident that the Internet has brought advantages as well as disadvantages to the people’s life. I believe that individuals as a whole have faced much more benefits than drawbacks from using the Internet as a method of communication.(42 words)

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  34. نورالدین مقدسی
    نورالدین مقدسی says:

    mehdi moqadasi:
    Internet is a great tool that makes people’s lives in contemporary society much convenient. Although some people believe that internet has some advantages, others claim that it has negative points. Both views will be discussed in this essay (38 words)
    The internet has some positive consequences, first of all by using the internet all people can access information that they need, and people can dramatically enter and gain data from millions of online resources such online encyclopedias and data banks and searching motors as well, so internet creates a very easy accessible way to get information, secondly all people can communicate in more straight forward way with others from any places of the globe, and people can be in touch with their friends and relatives by Skype and other internet based applications and could talk with them even voice call or video chat in almost any part of the world where internet service is available (117 words)
    In the contrary, some people believe that internet has some negative feedbacks, first of all many of children and young adults and even adults get addicted to be in front of computer and laptop and cell phone and surf the internet or play online games and waste their time , and some of them miserably are addicted to the internet and no one can disconnect the internet, secondly the internet can result security problems, before the time that usage of the internet have been widely spreaded, people use to hold their personal information by themselves and deal with their financial problems by going to bank, but these days people normally are doing all the things online, thus hackers could acquire people’s profiles password and misuse their personal data (126 words)
    In conclusion, the internet and utilize it has some merits and some demerits(13 words)

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  35. عليرضا رمضان پور
    عليرضا رمضان پور says:

    Nowadays internet has changed a considerable part of people’s life. Although some people believe that internet has many negatives effects, others including me admit that it has positives more. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay. (39words)

    There are some positives aspects of using the internet in people’s lives. First of all, people can access information very easily. There are a lot of educational websites that everybody can visit and use the profitable web contents in their life. It’s a kind of place that everyone can increase their knowledge and get the latest international news and world events or follow information in their environment. Secondly, it’s became easier to communicate with one another. Nowadays there are lots of applications under network and internet that people can communicate with everyone everywhere on the planet. They can see and talk together emotionally lively. That’s why the present century is called “the Age of Communication”. (115 words)

    Besides, there are some negatives facets using the internet. First of all, it makes an addiction for people especially kids. There are a lot of interesting virtual games. These games can become a habit for children and it’s not good for them. Also, some adults are very addict to the internet. They waste lots of time for internet explorer. Secondly, there are many problems that they’re not safe for everybody. It’s true that internet has convenient information but it can’t be useful for every age, as well as sharing information by others may contain a harmful advertising about religion, culture or every other thing that makes convey misinformation on others. (110 words)

    In conclusion internet is a technology that it maybe has positives and negatives effects. It can be white and black. (20 words)

    Total: 284 words

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  36. ایمان
    ایمان says:

    It is a proven fact that in today’s society the internet plays a central role in all aspects of life. While such world-wild technology revolutionizes human being on different sides, there are some negative effects influencing by these changes. The merit and demerit of this issue including my opinion will be discussed in this essay. (55 words
    On the one hand, the internet has several positive points in its favour. First of all, accessing information through the global network is one of the most significant things, which is provided by the internet. With this service, people around the world can access to the needful information while they are moving between various places. Secondly, easier communication is another of services, which is offered by the networking technologies. Nowadays in every spot, the internet is accessible by numerous devices, which are working together around the world, therefore, communicating with other people who are already connected to the internet is much easier and faster than before. (106 words
    On the other hand, there are some potential drawbacks against the internet. First of all, addiction is one of the dangerous facts of this era. The Internet is expanding around the world such as jobs, daily life and many facilities altogether using the internet to offer their some of the primary and special services as a result using the internet is altered to a compulsory activity for those people influencing by these services. Secondly, another potential disadvantage of the internet is security problems. Thousands of companies and governmental institutions provide some of the online facilities through the internet when transferred information will be accessed by millions of people throughout the world consequently this information would be a potential condition for hackers. (120 words
    In my opinion, I completely agree that the internet is an inseparable part of today’s life while it has dozens of positive and negative points in its favour. (28 words
    In conclusion, whereas there are a number of benefits to support of internet, drawbacks of its changes in our life should be considered scrupulously. (24 words

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      admin says:

      درود

      مقدمه میبایست 35 تا 40 واژه باشد.

      همانطور که بارها در کلاس تاکید کردیم این پرسش دیدگاه شخصی را درخواست نکرده و پاراگراف جداگانه در این رایتینگ بی معنی و نادرست است.

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      • ایمان
        ایمان says:

        The internet plays a central role in all aspects of life. While it revolutionizes human being on different sides, there are some negative effects influencing by these changes. The merit and demerit of this issue will be discussed in this essay. (40 words
        On the one hand, the internet has several positive points in its favour. First of all, accessing information through the global network is one of the most significant things, which is provided by the internet. With this service, people around the world can access to the needful information while they are moving between various places. Secondly, easier communication is another of services, which is offered by the networking technologies. Nowadays in every spot, the internet is accessible by numerous devices, which are working together around the world, therefore, communicating with other people who are already connected to the internet is much easier and faster than before. (106 words
        On the other hand, there are some potential drawbacks against the internet. First of all, addiction is one of the dangerous facts of this era. The Internet is expanding around the world such as jobs, daily life and many facilities altogether using the internet to offer their some of the primary and special services as a result using the internet is altered to a compulsory activity for those people influencing by these services. Secondly, another potential disadvantage of the internet is security problems. Thousands of companies and governmental institutions provide some of the online facilities through the internet when transferred information will be accessed by millions of people throughout the world consequently this information would be a potential condition for hackers. (120 words
        In conclusion, whereas there are a number of benefits to support of internet, drawbacks of its changes in our life should be considered scrupulously. (24 words

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        • ایمان
          ایمان says:

          استاد بسیار ممنون میشم اگر فیدبکتون را روی این رایتینگ داشته باشم
          با تشکر

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  37. مریم
    مریم says:

    The Internet is a huge and global system of human, information and computer that has had a lot of influence on the people over the past few years. Some people believe that using the Internet has many disadvantages. However, others have seen it as a positive change. I will try to discussion both views in this assay.(57 words)

    With internet, access to information has become very easy. Frist of all, the Internet is an important source of information and gives the user knowledge and information about everything. Search engines have provided various information to users. Examples include sites such as Google that provide information about any topic in the world. Secondly the Internet has helped people through chat and social networks communicate easily with each other, and instant messages become reciprocate between people. Also, video communication made possible through the Internet has greatly contributed to family relationships, as well as to the replacement of many business trips, resulting in significant savings in expense and time.(107 words)

    On the other hand, anything related to the Internet can be addictive. Frist of all, The Internet and its addiction cause people to be isolated and ultimately make them obese or depressed. Online games and entertaining videos which are available online, are contributing to the online addiction among many teenagers, because it does not allow them to be active or close to the family. Secondly, receiving and sending emails has been a tool for abusers and hackers to spread viral programs on the Internet. They can make it difficult for the computer and laptop system to turn off some applications and access personal information. This will provide an opportunity for online hackers and fraudsters to play with the user’s feelings or even use the threat of disclosure of personal information.(129 words)

    In conclusion, it is evident that the Internet has brought advantages as well as disadvantages to the people’s life. I believe that individuals as a whole have faced much more benefits than drawbacks from using the Internet as a method of communication.(42 words)

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      admin says:

      مقدمه میبایست 35 تا 40 واژه و پاراگراف های اصلی 100 تا 110 واژه باشند.
      شمار کل واژگان هرکز نباید بالاتر از 300 واژه باشد و میبایست در پایان رایتینگ نوشته شود.
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  38. زینت
    زینت says:

    IELTS WRITE RIGHT TASK 2: THE INTERNET

    Nowadays the internet plays a significant role in human’s life. Although this advanced technology has lots of benefits, the disadvantages are undeniable as well. In this essay both sides of this point will be discussed. (35)

    This is an indisputable fact that the invention of the internet made people’s lives easier. First of all, in today’s world everyone who accesses to the internet can find all kinds of information on that fast and easily while in the past people had to look for the information in the libraries. Secondly, the internet makes a very interesting form of communication. It is a virtual world that connects people from all walks of life. Besides the advantage of keeping in touch with acquaintances, There are many sites on which people can enter a chat room and talk privately or in a group with others by text, audio or even video. (112)

    Alternatively, there are some downsides of the internet which are worth considering. First of all, the internet can become an addiction.People might develop an emotional attachment to their online friends and activities under these circumstances, they are not able to manage their real life and It may impact on their job and significant personal relationship. Secondly, the huge amount of personal and vital information has been shared on the internet. It obviously puts personal privacy and security in danger of abuse. For example, when people share their holiday’s photo on the internet, burglars will find out that they are far away from home.(102)

    to conclude, the pros and cons of the internet show us that naturally it is either good or bad for people depending on how it is used.(28)

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  39. رضا
    رضا says:

    How effective have the internet in your life? Although, some people believe that the internet was positive altered in their life. On other hand, some other people say that effect of this had negative. These points will be discussed in this essay.
    (42 w)
    The internet certainly was positive altered in people’s life. First of all, the internet is the global system of interconnected computer network and since the internet is especially prevalent among peoples. Every one can share their information in the network and in the event that other people need to this information can to find their requist in the internet easily. However, easy access to informtaion can is helped to people’s life. Secondly, more of companies in field of network was achieved a new technology that can transfer a voice through the IP that this managed to careate an applications for communication through the internet and people can to establish a call with each other by lower price and easily.
    (115 w)
    The internet might had a negative effect in people’s life. First of all, due to progress of internet and varied information that there are in the internet can conclosing that this can is attracted everyone to itself. This issue has resulted that there had concern that the internet can increase people addiction to itself that this is a negative score for the internet. Secondly, some people don’t have enough information about security for the use of internet and has resulted that the abuser use for people’s lock of knowledge and they abuse from people’s privacy and estates that this resulted some people say that using of the internet have the negative effect in their life.
    (116 w)
    In conclusion, although internet has the positive effect in people’s life but if Some tips about using the internet disregarded can be the negative effect in their life.
    (28w)

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  40. نورالدین مقدسی
    نورالدین مقدسی says:

    mehdi moqadasi:
    These days most of people dress to dazzle, although some people believe that it is not possible to judge other’s character and culture of their way of clothing, others including me disagree, what follows, I will examine my point of view. (41 words)
    everyone chooses clothes freely, first of all there are freedom to choose clothes, everyone has right to wear whatever they want and people are allowed to select difinit brands and special fabrics and bespoke textile and are free to choose clothes which are made by well-known designers as well, secondly there are couple of styles that are apeal for different people, two styles may suit and in favor of people not only from different ages and different graduation status but also from different skin colors, selecting a fashionable wearing even tight or loose or those which are in dark color or in bright ones, is not only fit for a significant category of society therefore anyone can choose them (120 words)
    What’s more, everyone knows about the effect of clothes, first of all people use way of clothing to promote their outlooks, infact clothes say who we are and what we believe in, and garments that everyone wears, express a deep understanding of their social status and ethnicity and level of income and therefore illustrate their desire to convince or seduce others and convay any messages related to special circumstances, secondly people utilize outfits to protest, and they send signals by wearing special clothes to others as a diplomacy to show their objections about things which are in progress inside of the society, people wear challenging clothes with special writing or drawing to attract attention of others to what they say, (120 words)
    In conclusion, choosing clothes and how people wear, say a lot about their character and their culture(17 words)

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