کلاس آیلتس فشرده بهمن 1398

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کلاس آیلتس فشرده بهمن 1398

کلاس آیلتس فشرده بهمن 1398

کلاس آیلتس فشرده بهمن 1398

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به دوره غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای شنبه 4 شنبه ساعت 6 تا 8 می باشد که در تاریخ 5 بهمن 1398 آغاز میشود. در این صفحه تکالیف و توضیحات وارد شده و زبان آموزان رایتینگ ها و پرسش های خود را در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد خواهند کرد و از این راه با مدرس آیلتس آنلاین در تماس خواهند بود.

این دوره شامل دوره رایتینگ آیلتس نیز می باشد و زبان آموزان مجموعا 24 تصحیح کامل رایتینگ دریافت خواهند کرد. عزیزانی که نیازمند کلاس آنلاین اسپیکینگ آیلتس میتوانند علاوه بر خدماتی این کلاس به صورت جداگانه از جلسات خصوصی استاد با نمره 8.5 اسپیکینگ آیلتس بهره مند شوند. از تمامی زبان آموزان درخواست داریم حتما پیش از آغاز دوره صفحه سوالات متداول زبان آموزان را با دقت کامل مطالعه نمایند تا از طرح سوالات تکراری جلوگیری شود.

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کلاس آیلتس فشرده بهمن 1398 – تکالیف

Assignments of the 9th and 10th Sessions

Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 1 to 10 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 22 23 24 25 26  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Tactics for listening Developing unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Open Forum 1 Unit 2 3 4 5 6 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Essential Words for IELTS Part 1 Unit 1, 2 and 3    چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 9 10 از این صفحه ببینید

#9 and #10 of Most Common Grammatical Mistakes از اینجا ببینید

10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

#5 Examples from Structures for Writing از اینجا ببینید

Writing Topic Task 2  نمونه پاسخ مدرس را با دقت در اینجا بررسی کنید

نمونه رایتینگ In spite of Advances in Agriculture People Around World Go hunger

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Assignments of the 7th and 8th Sessions

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 91 to 120 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 17 18 19 20 21  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Tactics for listening Basic unit 17 18 19 20 21 22 23  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Open Forum 1 Unit 1

Select Readings Pre intermediate Unit 6 7 8 9 10   چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 7 8 از این صفحه ببینید

#7 and #8 of Most Common Grammatical Mistakes از اینجا ببینید

10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

#5 Examples from Structures for Writing از اینجا ببینید

Writing Topic Task 1  نمونه پاسخ مدرس را با دقت در اینجا بررسی کنید

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Writing Topic Task 2  نمونه پاسخ مدرس را با دقت در اینجا بررسی کنید 

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Free Share Information

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Assignments of the 5th and 6th Sessions

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 61 to 90 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 11 12 13 14 15 16 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Tactics for listening Basic unit 11 12 13 14 15 16  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 11 12 13 14 15 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Select Readings Pre intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 5 6 از این صفحه ببینید

#5 and #6 of Most Common Grammatical Mistakes از اینجا ببینید

10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

Writing Topic Task 1  نمونه پاسخ مدرس را با دقت در اینجا بررسی کنید 

نمونه رایتینگ Average Time Spent School Children on TV Computer 

Writing Topic Task 2  نمونه پاسخ مدرس را با دقت در اینجا بررسی کنید 

رایتینگ آیلتس Large Population Young Adults Older People Advantages

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Assignments of the 3rd and 4th Sessions

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 31 to 60 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 6 7 8 9 10 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Tactics for listening Basic unit 6 7 8 9 10  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 6 7 8 9 10 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Select Readings Elementary Unit 5 6 7 8 9  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 3 4 از این صفحه ببینید

#3 and #4 of Most Common Grammatical Mistakes از اینجا ببینید

10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

Writing Topic Task 2  نمونه پاسخ مدرس را با دقت در اینجا بررسی کنید 

رایتینگ آیلتس Island Before After Construction Tourists Facilities Task 1

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Writing Topic نمونه پاسخ مدرس را اینجا ببینید

Tourists in Difficult Places Sample Writing Task 2

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Assignments of the 1st and 2nd Sessions

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 30 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3 4 5  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 1 2 3 4 5 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 2 3 4  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 2 از این صفحه ببینید

#1 and #2 of Most Common Grammatical Mistakes از اینجا ببینید

10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

نوشتن مقدمه برای سوال زیر

نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس برای این سوال

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Writing Topic  چک لیست را ببینید نوشتن 2 پاراگراف اصلی 

Some people prefer to live in a big city. Others think it is better to live in a small town.

Discuss both views.

Big City
#Facilities
#Job opportunity

Small Town
#Less pollution
#Less Stress

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نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط مدرس 

Some people think it is better to live in a big city. First of all, there are more facilities in big cities. People can enjoy more facilities and services when they live in a big city because more people live there and as a result government spends more money in big city. There are big shopping malls and advanced public transport such as subway or rapid bus system but in small towns people only travel by taxis and traditional bus. Secondly, people who live in large modern cities can easily find a job. There are thousands of companies and factories, so they need many employees. Every day, there are new places and there is a chance to find a job. (120 words)

On the other hand, there are people who believe it is better to live in a small town. First of all, there is less pollution in small towns. Because there are only a few factories and a few cars in a town, air pollution is not a big problem and the environment is always clean. Secondly, people have less stress in such places. People have a simple life and they do not want a lot of things and as a result they do not need to work long hours every day. Moreover, cost of living is not very high, so people have more time to spend with their families or have fun. (112 words)

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دوره فشرده آیلتس آذرماه 1398 – لینک های سودمند

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

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200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

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بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

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چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

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آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته

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همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

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The graph illustrates the consumption of energy in the U.s by six categories of fuel between the time period 1980 to 2030.(22 words) In 1980,petrol and oil consumption began with 35 quadrillion units (qu) . It rose after some fluctuation to 43 qu in 2008 and it is expected to increase and reach a peak of 50 qu.(35 words) The coal and natural gases consumption started with 15 and 20 qu in 1980 and it rose moderately to about 23 qu in 2008. It will increase to 30 and 25 in 2030.(33 words) The nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower have the… ادامه مطلب »

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پرهام زارع

Agriculture has been developed significantly and it is becoming increasingly advanced these days. however, many people around the world don’t have access to the food and they deal with starvation problems. (31 Words) Lack of food can affect poor people. First of all, Agriculture has not been developed in some countries, because they have limited knowledge resources and knowledge is also important to have better agriculture. Many farmers don’t have access to modern technology and knowledge of agriculture, therefore, the farmers are facing many crops failure. Secondly, the unequal distribution of food causes people to face hunger problems. Some countries… ادامه مطلب »

sima
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sima

Nowadays agriculture change form and develop in the world. although many people still hungry around the world. many factors cause a problem but there are also an effective solution for them )(30 word) there are many reason for global hunger. First of all, population is very important issue in the world. population increase in the world very fast. when population increase so there are more request for food resource. population need food for life so increasing population is exactly equal increasing demand for food. secondly, when increase war in the world. more people have afraid of famine because war completely… ادامه مطلب »

loghman kazempour
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loghman kazempour

It’s true that there are many new different methods and strategies in the agriculture. still, many people don’t have adequate food supply. Many various factors paly role in this problem and also some solutions could be debate. (37). The scarcity of food has many different reasons. First of all, lack of modern technologies and ways in poor countries can play a part in this situation, because in developing countries, particularly, in Africa and some places of Asia, farmers don’t have access to new technologies and new methods of agriculture. Therefore, poor farming practices have led to erosion of soil and… ادامه مطلب »

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

Nowadays, there are a lot of developments in farming while some people in many countries have not enough food. Although it’s because of some reasons, there are some solutions for solving this problem. (33 words) Not having enough food in many countries related to some causes. First of all, no poverty leads to no food. Agriculture has had a lot of advantages in producing food but it is impossible having food without enough money. The poor people can not buy food. Secondly, lack of food, spite of all improvement in agriculture, is related to lack of water. Although some plants… ادامه مطلب »

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

While there is advance agriculture around the world, global hunger is one of the main problems for governments. Many reasons create this situation but solutions can help the government for solving that.(32) There are many reasons that create global hunger. First of all, global warming can change climate. In many poor countries, farmers cannot plant anything, because of drought. This situation causes a lack of water in summer and pour and flash floods in winter and spring that lasts for several weeks. This impress the government especially rural areas. Global warming dies crops and people may starve to death, Secondly,… ادامه مطلب »

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام استاد بیزحمت. این جملات را بررسی نمایید. تشکر
It’s true that there are many new different methods and strategies in the agriculture.

2.. Many various factors paly role in this problem and also some solution could be debate.

3. because many resources particularly, rich farmlands belong to privileged few in these societies

4. . .they’ll provoke to produce crops not only for their needs, but also can grow crops for market and it can make profit for them too.

they’ll have a high- yielding crops. 5

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

ام استاد. این برای نتیجه گیری خوبه؟:

In conclusion, it is clear that hungry is a global phenomenon. In many ways this is the result of inequality between rich people and poor ones in developing countries. Often time, they can redistribute resources and also can provide basic needs for their poor populations.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد ببخشید این دو جمله را بررسی کنید، دوتای قبلی را نادیده بگیرید. پوزش

, they only have a piece of land which is too poor and it soil has eroded

in fact, these kinds of agriculture lands are not accessible to poor people there

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

سلام استاد، نتیجه گیری زیر خوبه برای نوشتن؟
In conclusion, despite the various problems of global hunger create many problems in the whole of the world, there is a lot of solution for solving them, that governments by using them can destroy famine and global hunger.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد این دو جمله درسته:
and many people, especially, poor people don’t have rich land and also soil in their farmlands is very poor and it has eroded ,
thus, there won’t be plants and crop productions over there..

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام استاد. این جملات درستن:

There are both some reasons for this issue and some solutions for that.

and also these tools could be expensive for them.

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

سلام،استاد همه پیام های دوستان رو پاسخ دادید به جز پیام های من! چرا؟

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

برا مقدمه آیا درسته؟
Nowadays agriculture change form and develop in the world. although many people still hungry around the world. many factors cause a problem but there are also an effective solutions for them.

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

سلام استاد برا ایده خوبه این؟
reasons
# increase population
#reduce food resource

solution
#control population
#increase food resource

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

سلام استاد متن زیر برای مقدمه مناسب هست؟
While there is advance agriculture around the world, global hunger is one of the main problems for governments. Many reasons create this situation but solutions can help the government for solving that.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام استاد این برای ایده خوبه:
Problem Solution Global hunger

Reasons
# lack of advanced technologies in poor countries
# highly unequal distribution

Solution
# provide new technologies
# redistribution land

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

The presented bar chart illustrates total number minutes phone call UK in 3 different categories Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles call from 1995 to 2002. At the beginning, the most known way of calling was local call with slightly over 70 billion minutes in 1995. It fluctuated over the time period and it reached hit a peak of 90 billion minutes in 1995. In addition, the number minutes of national and international fixed line was less than 40 billion minutes in 1995 and it gradually increased approximately 25 billion minutes in the time period. However, the… ادامه مطلب »

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

together between 1995 to 2002. It is divided to three categories: fixed local telephone calls, national and international fixed telephone calls and mobile calls. In 1995,total minutes fixed local telephone calls began above 70 billion minutes (BM). It rose slightly from 1995 to 1999 and it had a peak of 90 BM in 1999. After that it fell to the same amount in 1995 from 1999 to 2002 . The national and international fixed calls increased steadily from a little less than 40 BM to just above 60 BM between 1995 to 2002. In last category, mobile calls, the number… ادامه مطلب »

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

The graph indicates time spent on phone calls in three different ways: local calls, National and International fixed lines and mobile calls in UK over a period of 8 years. In 1995, local calls were around 70 MB. This level rose slowly between 1996 and 1997 and it reached a peak of 90MB in 1990. Between 2000 and 2002, it showed a downward trend and it gradually reached under 80 MB. National and International fixed lines was under 40MB in 1995. later, it showed slowly growth and it reached around 60 until 2000. But this number increased more than 60… ادامه مطلب »

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

The chart shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in 3 different categories in the UK over a period of 9 years between 1995 and 2002. At the beginning of the period in 1995 local calls were just above 70 billion minutes. This number grew roughly 20 billion minutes in 1999. This number dropped slightly and it fell back to the level of 1995 (72 billion minutes) at the end of the period. The number of minutes spent on Mobile calls was only two billion in 1995. This figure increased gently for the next 4 years to just… ادامه مطلب »

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

The chart illustrates the amount of time that UK citizen spent time on three different kinds of phone call in the over a period of 7 years, from 1995-2002. (29) The amount of local fixed line was slightly above 70 billion minutes in 1995.Then this figure increased gradually for the next 4 years until it reached hit a peak of 90 billion minutes in 1999.It started to fall steadily at the same year and after 4 years it fell back to the level of 1995. 55 The figure for national and international was just above 30 billion minutes at the… ادامه مطلب »

لقمان کاظم پور
مهمان
لقمان کاظم پور

استاد خسته نباشید این جمله به نظر شما خوبه: the figure for mobile calls were negligible amount in 1995.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد این میتونه برای overall خوب باشه:
it appears that there were three levels telephone call in this graph and each of them showed a different number. but local calls and mobile call were the highest and the lowest between them at the beginning, respectively. But, all of them didn’t have lots of different with each at the end.

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

سلام استاد
جمله زیر ایرادی نداره؟
but two other categories
every year softly closer and at the end of the period, chart showed small difference between three categories.

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

سلام
دو تا جمله زیر کدوم بهتره استفاده کنیم و اصلا هردو درست هستند؟
The chart illustrates the amount of time that
The chart illustrate the quantity of time that

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد عزیز خسته نباشید. این برای مقدمه مناسب هست؟

The graph indicates the minute quantities of using telephone calls in the Uk in three levels over a period of 8 years.

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

استاد جسارتا این دومورد رو هم اشکالاتش رو بفرمایید ممنون میشم:
1-In 1995 national and international calls started just under 40 billion minutes.
2-In the end of period it reached the highest level to 60 billion minutes in 2002.

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

استاد این جمله زیر برای مقدمه خوبه؟
The chart shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in 3 different positions in the UK for 9 years between 1995 and 2002.

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

Nowadays, sharing information is incredibly important for improving knowledge. While some people believe sharing data should be in public, others argue important data should not share in public. I agree with both argument. (33 words) Sharing information is some scientists’ primary goal to improve knowledge. So it is necessary to share all the discovers. First of all, share researches can access other scientists to expand and improve that to reach the better result and advance researches. So it can assist society to increase the level of knowledge and culture of community. Secondly, sharing experience and researches can help people of… ادامه مطلب »

Parham Zare
مهمان
Parham Zare

The sharing information can increase the possibility of growing knowledge, some people believe the information about technical and business and scientific should be shared freely. However, others think that it is better to keep information private. In my opinion, both ways have their advantages and disadvantages. (45 words) On the one hand, some people advocate sharing information freely. First of all, many students and companies around the world can easily access the latest information and they need this information to go forward in their field, and share information avoids wasting the time of people. So they can reach the best… ادامه مطلب »

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

Sharing information increase between people in the world. While some people believe the sharing information freely, others believe information too important. I agree both of them. (26) Some people believe there are more advantages in sharing information. First of all, when people share information they can easily use the result of works of others. They don’t need spend more time on different website. They stay at home and pushed the button so they receive different information just a minute .secondly, when people share different and important information people access to information and use their. When people share their work and… ادامه مطلب »

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

Nowadays sharing the information is one of the best ways for increasing knowledge. Although some people agree that sharing information freely. Others believe important informations should be under control, because they are so valuable. I agree with both of views. (40) Some people think sharing information freely have benefits for everyone. First of all information access easily and all people can use them without paying and difficult. People spend less time to achieve necessary information. Because they always can be available. Accessing easily help all strata of society to use the information in the same similar, Secondly by using sharing… ادامه مطلب »

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

سلام استاد
نظر خودمون رو می تونیم مشروط اعلام کنیم مثلا بگیم اگر اطلاعات قبل از نشر بررسی بشن و فیل…………….تر بشن من با نشرشون موافقم؟

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

Sharing the information is an important and discursive article in these days. In my opinion, it is necessary to share the information. Although some people agree with me, others disagree with sharing information freely. (34 words) Some people believe that it is a logical solution to share the information. First of all, it can help to improve the knowledge. Because researchers can use these information as a base of their knowledge and expand and improve the knowledge. There are a lot of scientists that their theories are discussed and it leads to newer and more effective theories that they are… ادامه مطلب »

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

این چطوره استاد؟
sharing information increase between people in the world. wile some people believe the sharing information freely , other believe information too important and I agree booth of them.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

Today, sharing information is becoming increasingly common. Some people say that information should be widely shared in the society. Others believe that it must be along with lots of limitations. I agree with both of them. (36). Some people think that sharing information has lots of advantages. First of all, many researchers have more possibilities for doing research in this situation. Because they can find new sources in their field researches. Therefore, they can collect their data very easily by using of other works and results which are accessible to them. In fact, this has less cost for them. Secondly,… ادامه مطلب »

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام استاد. این جمله درسته:

researchers can make less mistakes in their researches, because, in spite of using other studies, also, other explorers might make constructive comments about their works

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام استاد گرامی. این برای مقدمه مناسب هست؟
Today, sharing information is becoming increasingly common. Some people think that high level of sharing information should be persuaded. Others believe that it must be far away the reach of people.

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

Is this correct?
sharing information about scientific research , business in the world is good idea. Although , some people agree and other disagree that.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام استاد. وقت شما بخیر. این ایده ها درستن:
Maximum sharing of information

Agree
# use of sharing experiences
# exchange information

Disagree
# restriction on wrong information
# try to keep personal and secret information

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

Hi teacher
is this correct?

share information
+ save time
+more access to different resources

_ more comfort for access information
_ more access to value information

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

The diagram shows the average time that schoolchildren, who are between 10 to 11 years old, spend on using computer and watching TV from 2000 until now. (26 words) Schoolchildren spent average 4 hours per week on computer and it increased sharply until 2004. It rose slower from 2004 to present time. The average time between 2000 to 2004 increase from 4 to 15 hours per week and from 2004 until now it increased from 15 to 22 hours per week. (50 words) On the other hand, the average time spent on TV is much more in 2000. It is… ادامه مطلب »

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

The chart shows, when children at the age 10-11 years old spent time on TV and computer at home between 200 and 2008. (25) Time spent on TV was around 20 hours per week at the start of 2000 and stayed the same until 2003. After this period, to show a downward trend and fell to 15 hours in 2004. After that between 2005 and 2007 despite some a fluctuation. It remind stable at the level in 2008. (55) Schoolchildren spent time on computer was around 4 hours per week in 2000.after this number increased for 4 years to 15… ادامه مطلب »

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

The chart shows the amount of time per week which schoolchildren at the age of 10 to 11 spent on TV and computer at home. (25) At the beginning of the period in 2000 schoolchildren spent 21 hours per week on TV, and this time reminded until 2003 without changes. In 2004 it showed a downward trend and dropped to 15 hours per week. After that despite some fluctuations this time it to remained constant to the end of period in 2008. (56) At the starting of the period time spent on computer was lower than TV. Using the computer… ادامه مطلب »

پرهام زارع
مهمان
پرهام زارع

The line graph illustrates the schoolchildren at the age of 10 to 11 years old spent hours on home activities (TV and computers) from 2000 to 2008 (27 Words) In 2000 the spent time on the computer is nearly 4 hours. That rate increased sharply for the 4 years to 15 hours, exceeding the TV rate in 2004 and increased more slowly during the following 4 years. Finally, the spent time reached almost 22 hours per week at the end of the period. (54 Words) At the begging of the period, spent time on TV was much higher compared to… ادامه مطلب »

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

The chart elaborates the rate of using computer and tv by schoolchildren at the age of 10- 11 years old in their free time. (23) time Spent on computer was around 4 hours a week at the start of 2000. this level rose slowly and it reached more than 15 hours between 2003 and 2004. Then, this number increased gradually until 2006 and later it reached a peak around 22 hours per week in 2008. (50) time spent on tv was more than on computer by schoolchildren ate the beginning of 2000. It began at 21 hours in early 2000,… ادامه مطلب »

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

The graph shows how many hours per week spent by children at the age of 10 to 11 on two types of home activities (TV and computer) at home. (29) Time spent on computer was between 2 and 4 hours per week in 2000. This average increased steadily for the next 4 years until 2004 and it reached almost 15 horses per week. Then it more slowly rose and reached a peak of almost 22 hours per week in 2008. (50) Schoolchildren spent more than 20 hours a week on TV at the beginning of the period in 2000.This average… ادامه مطلب »

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد اینم بررسی کنید لطفا: use of tv was more than use of computer at that time

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام استاد. این جملات درستن: it to reached a plateau about 22 hours per week in 2008.
2. later, it grew steadily in 2005

Elham.kh
مهمان
Elham.kh

با سلام و خسته نباشید
#استاد من برای جنرال باید امتحان بدهم لطفاً تکلیف روز شنبه task1 را بفرمایید.
#در ضمن ممنون میشم آموزش task1 جنرال رو هم در کانال بذارید.

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

سلام،استاد این جمله برای مقدمه خوبه؟
The chart shows the amount of time per week which schoolchildren at the age of 10 to 11 spent their rest
time on TV and computer at home in 9 years(2000 to 2008).

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

Now days in some countries the population of young adults are more than old people. This situation brings benefits and problems for these countries. (24) There are advantages for countries with young adults. First of all, they will have more workforce for building and improving their country opposite of other countries. Because young people have strong motivation and more energy for work and development. This is obvious that they are cheerful and they have a great passion for raising their country’s economic system. Secondly, young adults hope for the future, this idea makes them happier and they can have a… ادامه مطلب »

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

Nowadays, in some countries, the population of the younger people comparatively is more than older ones. This situation has both advantages and disadvantages. (25 words) There are some virtue when young people are more. First of all, young people help improving industry. Obviously young people are better human resource because they are more energetic and motivated. So they work more efficient and it lead to developed industry. Secondly, younger people help increasing population because most of them are not married after a while they get married and their children will be born. In conclusion the population will grow. (73 words)… ادامه مطلب »

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

Population of community consists of variety of age categories that young adults and olders are included. Nowadays, number of young adults society is more than older which has some benefits and drawbacks. (32 words) In one hand, there are lots of advantages for youthful population. First of all, societies with young workforce have more opportunities for development. Because young employees just hire after education, they still remain to absorb new training as before and they are eager to learn more to obtain experience. So it can create dynamic community to go forward in the adaption and use new technology and… ادامه مطلب »

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

Population is important issue in the world. Some countries include large number of young adults. This situation makes both advantages and disadvantages. (22 words) When the population of young people increases there are advantages. First of all, they graduate of university they need job so they search work. They are young and active. The young people want to create family and support them. Sometimes they should support parents. They search work because they need job so workforce increases in society. Secondly, the young people have strong body in front of illness so they are more healthiness. The young people have… ادامه مطلب »

Ali Gahvareband
مهمان
Ali Gahvareband

in some countries number of young adults has outweighed the number of older people. There are reasons to believe this situation has both advantages and disadvantages.(26 words) There are benefits caused by growth in number of young adults in a society. First of all, by increasing the young population there will be more people who are ready to learn and work for long time. With the aim of these young workforces and by using these young sprits in a right way economy in a country can grow faster. These adults in such ages are so naive, all they need to… ادامه مطلب »

پرهام زارع
مهمان
پرهام زارع

Today, in some nations, populations are getting younger and decreasing the number of older people. There are may have many benefits and disadvantages in their countries. (25 Words) On the one hand, the younger population who could develop their country in a faster time. First of all, motivation will help them to build their country, in this way they face many problems and sometimes they will be tired, therefore it is not an easy way and they need to keep their motivation to deal with these. Secondly, the younger peoples are healthy and they need less health care. They are… ادامه مطلب »

Elham.kh
مهمان
Elham.kh

Having society with young and active force is terrific .While such conditions have advantages and disadvantages . There are a lot of disadvantages about young people . First of all , having more younger people could lead to a lack of professionals in the community . Certainly older population have earned more experience during their lives because old people have had more time to study for professional career . Secondly, in younger population are likely higher rate of Crime. Young people have more energy to commit Crime than old people .So rate of robs and crimes in the young society… ادامه مطلب »

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

It is determined that some countries have a population with more young people than old people. In fact there are advantages and disadvantages for (27)both of them. There are benefits when the population of young people increases. First of all, when members of the young workforce increase they can build up different businesses from nothing and develop them, since young adults have strong motivation for creating the work. They always full of energy that cause they put all of their energies into improving the situation. Secondly, responsibility is one of the best trait and young adults feel a strong sense… ادامه مطلب »

لقمان کاظم پور
مهمان
لقمان کاظم پور

These days, many countries have more young population in their whole societies. This condition has both benefits and threats them. (20) Many countries have many opportunities when they have young population. First of all, they’ll have many workforces for their factories and other sector of their society and economy. Because this can help them have a thriving industry and therefore, they will have a successful economy compare with other countries. Secondly, countries will have a dynamic society when they have young population. their young population have more energy. Because, they want to participate in all aspects of their societies. Particularly,… ادامه مطلب »

علی.م
مهمان
علی.م

لطفا لینک مربوط به صفحات کلمات جدید و ارسال جمله را ارسال بفرمایید

لقمان کاظم پور
مهمان
لقمان کاظم پور

سلام استاد. این جمله درسته:

Therefore, the unemployment rate among their young populations will always be high.

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

سلام استاد، اشتباه این جمله کجاست؟
Studying in online universities are better for making friends.
یعنی دانشگاه فاعل هست یا study?

علی.م
مهمان
علی.م

Nowadays, it can be seen in some countries that the population of young adults outnumbers the old one. Despite the fact that this issue can bring benefits, it may have some negative impacts. The growth of young adults in a country may be a chance for the people who live there. First of all, Young people have more energy which speeds up the development of society in every field. They devote more energy to their jobs and will achieve better results. They would put much energy into their children and family and this ploy would be great for the next… ادامه مطلب »

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

این جمله درسته:
, they might come under pressure from their populations for providing these infrastructures

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام. این جملات درستن: 1. these days, many countries have more young age people in their whole population.
2. this condition has both advantages and threats them

پرهام زارع
مهمان
پرهام زارع

سلام استاد به نظرتون این جمله خوب هست؟
In some countries, the population of young people is more than elder people.

لقمان کاظم پور
مهمان
لقمان کاظم پور

سلام استاد. این ایده پردازی درسته:
Large number of young adults

Advantages
# more workforce
# more competition

Disadvantages
# more expectations
# generation gap

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

سلام خسته نباشید.میشه بفرمایید این جمله درست هست یا خیر؟
Population of community consists of variety of age categories that young adults and oleders are included.

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

These two maps illustrate changing before and after get more facilities. The provided maps illustrate the changes made to an island before and after the construction. (26 words) Looking at the second map, it is clear that the previous sea side has been equipped with a pier which provides access to the island for tourists. In addition, reception is built in the middle of area above a pier that can be reach by vehicle track. On either side of this area, there are some tourists accommodation are provided for those who want to relax that can be reach by footpath.… ادامه مطلب »

علی.م
مهمان
علی.م

جهت overview میتونیم متن زیر رو بنویسیم؟
Overall, the map shows the changes in the island have been done perfectly for the tourists. These changes prepare this island a better place for the touristic goals.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

There are two maps which compare the facilities in an island in two different situations. The first one indicates the conditions before building and the second one illustrates after building. (30) The first one doesn’t have many possibilities. there is only a beach in the west of island and also there are some tress in the east of it. but, in the second one, many infrastructures are concentrated later. There is a reception in the center of island which other parts are linked to it. The restaurant is built in north of island which is accessible by vehicle tracks from… ادامه مطلب »

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

The maps show an island in two different times. One of them is before the construction and the second map is after building facilities for tourists. There is a reception in the middle of the island, it connected to a restaurant in north of it by vehicle track. In the west and northwest of reception there are many roundish accommodations, and they connected together and reception by footpath. The other significant changes are boats in the south for sightseeing the island, also have been built pier that connected to reception by vehicle track, and a place for swimming near the… ادامه مطلب »

علی.م
مهمان
علی.م

سلام،آیا این دو مقدمه مناسب نمونه تسک 1 ارائه شده هست ؟
#1

These two maps show how an island can be prepared for tourists by providing them some places and
(21)building construction.

#2
These two maps show the first step and the final one of construction which provides tourists a better place to visit.(20)

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

Two maps below observe an island. One map Show Island without facilities for tourists and other map show same island after the construction. (23) The first map doesn’t have facilities for tourists and the other map show island after the construction. In the second map there is reception in the middle of the island and the north of reception is restaurant. There is vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. The big change is the construct of several accommodation for tourist they connect with footpath together.as well as, the swimming part built in the… ادامه مطلب »

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

These two maps compare the facilities of tourist for a certain Island. The first map shows the situation before and the second map shows after the construction. Firstly, on the first map there are some trees, also a small beach in the western part of island. It can be clearly seen there is Empty Island without any facilities for tourist. On the other hand, second map depict a large number of facilities are built during time. There is vehicle track for tourists who want reach reception. Reception connected to pier and restaurant by vehicle track. There are two groups of… ادامه مطلب »

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

سلام استاد
رایتینگ رو زحمت میکشید تصحیح کنید.ممنون

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

what is synonym of located?
میخواستم بدونم بجای located بهتره از چه کلمه ای استفاده کنیم که سطح رایتینگ رو بالا ببره

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

A Reception is built in the middle of island which surrounded by restaurant, accommodations and pier. ?

جمله درستیه برای این رایتینگ

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد اینم درسته:

A pier has constructed in the south of island that has located in front of reception and it also near to other sites of island and tourists can use it for sailing boat.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد عزیز این هم بررسی نمایید:

. Also, a pier has constructed in south of island which tourist can reach there by vehicle track from reception

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد این جملات درستن؟
it can be clearly that the first one doesn’t have many possibilities.

2. there is only a beach in the east of island and there are some trees on the other part of it.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام استاد. میشه در رایتینگ جدید به جای facilities از possibilities یا capacities استفاده کرد؟

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

Nowadays, more tourist attend to discover particular landscape and natural wonders such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. However, visiting this such places have many advantages and disadvantages that are analysed.(31 words) On this hands, there are more benefit to travel uninhabitable places. First of all, explorer claim that seeing remote places can experience more and have more opportunity to learn about other culture and living style. Therefore, seeking out new places ,can progress people’s knowledge and make more confidence. It can make joys for people and create lots of exciting activities and trips. For instance, Sir Richard Burton said… ادامه مطلب »

sima
مهمان
sima

Nowadays tourists visit difficult places of the world. In some places conditions are difficult . Although, there pleases have their own advantages and disadvantages 2 (23) more tourists visit difficult places. these places have their own advantages. First of all, they can visit new and Wonderfull places also they can have more interest and excitement. tourists can enjoy the beauty of nature closely because more people can not visit the unusual pleases they need to go through some troublesome ways.unusual places are incredibly excitement they can enjoy that. Secondly, when tourists visit unusually places they get a lot of useful… ادامه مطلب »

پرهام زارع
مهمان
پرهام زارع

Today there are many places in the world which are difficult to access. But, people can have unforgettable experiences there. So many people are enthusiastic to travel to such places. (30 Words) There are so benefits for tourists to travel to unusual places. First of all, people travel to such places to get new experiences. Travel to there places help those to improve personal development because there aren’t more facilities and those should spend many times to provide basic things and these learn to be patient. Secondly, there are many natural places and they give a chance to people to… ادامه مطلب »

Ali Gahvareband
مهمان
Ali Gahvareband

in years number of tourists that are interested in visiting places with difficult conditions is increasing rapidly, there might be some benefits for such journeys but also tourists should be prepared for the worst.(34 words) There are some benefits for those who visit difficult places, first of all this can be so challenging for them, visiting dangerous and difficult places takes more courage and needs to be treated with caution because of the very poor condition, for so many it might be easy peasy but for sure this is also challenging for so many others. Secondly visiting these places has… ادامه مطلب »

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

Today travelling to difficult places is most popular with tourists, although there are many benefits for tourists, there are also some disadvantage for them.(24) There are more advantages for tourists in odd places, First of all, they get new experience from environment, Contrary to usual travels which are only for rest and welfare, the tourists experience living in harsh conditions in the travelling to strange places. This experience teach them to make a perfect level of life. Secondly traveling to exotic places give more excitement to enjoy their travel especially for young peoples, because fare away from mental conflicts and… ادامه مطلب »

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

Over the last few years, there has been a lot of tourists who enthusiast to visit unknown and unusual places. While travelers gain many advantages, they can be face to unpredictable and dangerous conditions. This article will survey these two points. There are benefits for tourists who visiting strange places. First of all, when visitors travel to exotic places they can have considerable experience. New generation of Tourists prefer to have different experience instead of like past mostly go to five-star hotels. They can gain wealth experience during their travels to inaccessible places that can share these experiences. Secondly, there… ادامه مطلب »

Elham.kh
مهمان
Elham.kh

با سلام خدمت استاد گرامی (بدون تصحیح رایتینگ)

Elham.kh
مهمان
Elham.kh

traveling is a wonderful life experience for every person.while travelers can enjoy dangerous places but there are threats for them That should be considered. Visiting strange places have a lot of advantage for travelers . First of all , traveling to the difficult places help to tourists so that evaluate their abilities . They learn how to set up a camp ,how store their foods and how fight with difficult conditions . They try to use from all of own abilities for survive .They enjoy adventure because nature challenges them with hot or cold weather ,wild animals ,no water and… ادامه مطلب »

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

Day by day many tourists show a strong desire to go to hard places. Meanwhile these such places have some benefits for them, they also have some disadvantages for them. This essay will analyze these two views. (38) There are Some benefits for tourists who want to visit exceptional places. First of all, they can experience new circumstances and situations in these places because when they are in typical places, they have access to everything especially more services, but when they are in difficult places, it can help them experience new conditions especially lack of services. Secondly, when they go… ادامه مطلب »

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

با سلام این جمله چطوره برا مقدمه استاد

Nowadays tourists travel to difficult places of world. In some places conditions are difficult. Although, these places have their own advantage and disadvantage

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام این جمله درسته:

some of these unknown places don’t have a right way ,that’s why, many people especially tourists can’t get back and they may die there.

Ali Gahvareband
مهمان
Ali Gahvareband

سلام استاد فایل های صوتی جلسه سوم تو تلگرام اپلود نکردید فقط نوشتید ولی فایلی نیست

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

برای مقدمه این خوبه؟
Now days in the world more tourists try to travel difficult places. Although, the places have advantage or disadvantage for them

پرهام زارع
مهمان
پرهام زارع

سلام استاد این متن به نظرتون خوبه برای مقدمه؟ ممنونم

Today the count of tourists who want to travel to a difficult place is raising. Also, these tourists looking for a different experience so there are benefits and disadvantages for these tourists

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

این میتونه برای نتیجه گیری مناسب باشه؟

in conclusion, tourists who go to bizarre places can have some benefits in such places but they may suffer some disadvantages in these places too

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد بی زحمت این هم درسته برای مقدمه؟

Day by day many tourists show a strong desire to go to hard places. Meanwhile these such places have some benefits for them, they also have some disadvantages for them.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

سلام این جمله مناسب هست؟
, but when they are in difficult places, it can help them experience new conditions especially lack of services.

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

سلام برای مقدمه این درسته؟
Nowadays many tourists visit difficult situation places.although travel to .difficult places include advantage and disadvantage

لقمان کاظم پور
مهمان
لقمان کاظم پور

استاد سلام و خسته نباشید. استاد ما بعد اینکه نوشتیم، ,
,inconclusion میتونیم بعدش از کلماتی مثه، hence, therefore, in fact, استفاده کنیم؟

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

everyone get a lot of experience of achieving happiness in the life. some people agree adult are the happiest, others including me agree teenager years achieve more happiness in the life.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

The pursuit of happiness is a serious matter for people. Although some people say adulthood is the best time of life, others including me think teenage years are the happiest period of time. (34)

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

every body feels happiness in the duration of his or her life.althogh some people think that teenagers are happier than adults,others including me
beilive that adulthood is the happiest time in people life.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

The pursuit of happiness is a serious matter for people. Although many people say adulthood is the best time of life, others (including me) think teenage years are the happiest period of time. (34)

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

سلام استاد ببخشید من متاسفانه جلسه قبل نتونستم در کلاس شرکت کنم مشکلی نداره writing تا چهارشنبه با جلسه بعدی بفرستم؟؟

پرهام زارع
مهمان
پرهام زارع

Is age important to a feeling of happiness? Some people believe the teenage years are the happiest, others including me believe that adult life brings more happiness.

Ali Gahvareband
مهمان
Ali Gahvareband

happiness through everybody’s life time is an important issue to discuss about.some people believe teenage years are the happiest, others including me think adults find more happiness in their life.

Elham.kh
مهمان
Elham.kh

In a particular decade of life ,the amount of happiness and joy a person feels is greater than ever time . Although, Some people believe teenager are happiest time while others including me think adult life creates more happiest .( با سلام بدون تصحیح رایتینگ)

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

There are some how maintain that adolescent period provide more opportunity of happiness. Some others argue adulthood make them gladder. I think happiness can happen in every moment of our life and it is not related to specific period of life. (41 words

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

سلام
ببخشید تو خوندن کتاب select reading گفتین واژه های کلیدی میشه مثلابرای ریدینگ اولش واژه های کلیدی رو بفرمایید ما چی و چطور باید بنویسیم؟
چون این روش برای من تازس و نمیدونم چطور باید انجام بدم.

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

Happiness is important subject in the world and many people looking for it during their life. Although some people believe that teenage years are the best time to be happy. Others think adult life is better time for being happy. I agree with both of them.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

استاد سلام این جمله درسته: people try to find happiness in their lives

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

سلام این جمله درسته؟
the name of cities must be writen by capital letter

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

Happiness is one of the main parts of life for everyone. Some people believe teenagers are happier. Although other think adults feel more happiness. I agree with second view, Adults are happier.

پرهام زارع
مهمان
پرهام زارع

سلام استاد روزتون بخیر ببخشید میشه این جمله ها رو چک کنید؟ کلمات oxford word skill unit1 هستن. ممنونم از لطفتون 1) Foreign: I See foreign people every day. 2) Gist: It is difficult to convey the gist of his ideas simply. 3) Text: My Mother sent me a text saying what the matter of earthquake? 4) Recognize: It is important to recognize problems because you can solve their easier 5) Go through : You can often go through the taxi to company 6) Identify: I Identified my old friend through the image 7) Guess: I can guess about the… ادامه مطلب »

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

Some people believe that it is better to live in big city. First of all, there are more job opportunities in big cities. It is because of more population. In crowded cities requirement for job is builded because huge city needs more factories, universities, and more equipment for life. It cause that people tend to immigrant big cities to maintain more chances to find a job and or find some training places to develop their background. Secondly, there are more facilities in big cities. The government extend environment and create more apartment, shopping centre, transportation. They also don’t need to… ادامه مطلب »

فرنگیس
مهمان
فرنگیس

Some people prefer live in a big city. First of all, they have an opportunity to improve knowledge. People can select the best university or work shop, and have achievement success by the sheer strength of them personality and skills. but in small towns people only one or two choose for select. Secondly people accesses to public transportation, in big city mayors try to provide public transport, because help to save money and reaching a destination early and effects on Road Traffic. But in small city limitation in public transportation (92 word) some people believe it’s better to live in… ادامه مطلب »

سحر امینی
مهمان
سحر امینی

تصحیح رایتینگ a few people belive ,living in big city is better than saml twon. first of all, facilities in big city is availibeland disposal and there are updaet and sophisticated in it , big city have vareital facilities and people do them. secondly, lot of job opportunity are in big city and every body with every skills can to find good job.mybe , some body missed job opportunity becase they cant to use them.job opportunity in big city is very good becase people can high level earnings.overal, people live in big city can to reach best job and best… ادامه مطلب »

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

Many people believe that living in the large town is better. First of all, the big cities have more facilities. Big cities are more populated so the government invest more in the big cities. There are a lot of shop centers, parks, entertainment centers ,college and universities in large towns. Secondly, people how live in the large cities can more improve. The big and developed companies invest in the big cities so people can have a job in these companies and learn many things when they are working there. Also, there are more relationships in large cities so people can… ادامه مطلب »

Ali Gahvareband
مهمان
Ali Gahvareband

تصحیح رایتینگ: Some people believe living in a big city is more beneficial than small town, at first there are more facilities available in big cities specially in capital city of every country because these places are important habitat for most of the people therefore government makes more investment there that leads to more facilities available. secondly based on what being said at first more investment causes more companies and more places that need workers and employees to expand their businesses so there will be a much better chance of getting a job in such condition. Others may think it’s… ادامه مطلب »

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

تصحیح + تعیین نمره Some people believe that it is better to live in big city. First of all, there are more job opportunities in big cities. It is because of more population. In crowded cities requirement for job is builded because huge city needs more factories, universities, and more equipment for modern life. So it cause that people tend to immigrant in big cities to maintain more chances to find a job and also it is easier to find some training courses to develop their knowledge and don’t commute every day to waste their time. Secondly, there are more… ادامه مطلب »

Fahime
مهمان
Fahime

تصحیح رایتینگ + تعیین نمره: On the other hand, some people think it is a good idea to live in a small town. First of all, there are less pollution in small town. In the society that not much crowded , don’t need always to be in hurry and stressed because there are less traffic jam and automobiles. So they are more healthy and have less risk for heart attack and other effect of air pollution. Secondly, there are more relationship in small town. It can help people to grow up in convenient and peace. People in small town more… ادامه مطلب »

Elham.kh
مهمان
Elham.kh

Some people believe urbanization is better than living in small town . First of all,there are job opportunities for work in a huge city .There are more companies and factories in such cities ,so most people prefer to move to a large city . Every year ,many more people are employed in small and big factories it shows economic climate is better than small town .In addition , pay increase in private sector is an important issue too . Secondly, there are more facilities in big city. Most people like living in there because of there are always more convince… ادامه مطلب »

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

Some people discuss that living in big cities are better. First of all, there are more job opportunities in big cities. because most companies are concentrated in big cities. hence, they need to employ more workforce, that’s why people can get a job when they live in big cities. secondly, there are more infrastructures in big cities compare with small towns. Because, governments make more investment on infrastructures in big cities. in fact, people have more access to these facilities like better education, big shopping malls and like these. Therefore, they have good services when they live in a big… ادامه مطلب »

Sima
مهمان
Sima

Some people think it is better to live in a big city. First of all, big city has more opportunity for job. Big city has different companies and factories so . people have more chance to get a job. More companies gives you options you choose that work your love and enjoy it. Then this options let you enjoy your life. Therefore there are more opportunity for job because the company needs employee for work. Secondly, big city has more facilities such as advanced hospitals or modern transportation, airport so people can use their and they have life easily and… ادامه مطلب »

پرهام زارع
مهمان
پرهام زارع

Some people prefer to live in a big city. First of all, people immigrate to big city to get a job. Today many people don’t have the finances to achieve their aims and they can`t provide a good life for their family. So they immigrate to a big city, there are many opportunities and people can easily find a job also people can choose a favorite job. Secondly, there are more facilities in big cities. Living in a big city is stressful and people need happiness and exercise, there are many parks and people can go to the park and… ادامه مطلب »

Hadi Sharifzadeh
مهمان
Hadi Sharifzadeh

Some people believe it is better live in a big city. First of all, there are more facilities in a big city. Every time people can get taxi and transport between two places. Always the best universities are in big cities and people who live in big cities easily access to these universities. Secondly, people who live in large cities can easily find the job because in a big city there are companies with high and big finance turnover so they prefer hire more people in their companies. In big cities there are diversity jobs so people easily change their… ادامه مطلب »

Ali Gahvareband
مهمان
Ali Gahvareband

Some people believe living in a big city is more beneficial than small town, at first there are more facilities available in big cities specially in capital city of every country because these places are important habitat for most of the people therefore government has made more investment there that leads to more facilities.secondly based on what being said at first more investment causes more companies and more places that need workers and employees to expand their businesses so there will be a much better chance of getting a job in such condition. Other may think it’s better to live… ادامه مطلب »

لقمان کاظم پور
مهمان
لقمان کاظم پور

سلام استاد. این جملات درستن؟ governments make more investment on infrastructures in big cities. 2. People
have more access to thsese facilities like better education, better shopping and like these.

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

Is that correct?
people live in small town satisfied with the simple life they dont pay the cost of expensive things

Hasan Mosazadeh
مهمان
Hasan Mosazadeh

Some people believe that is better to live in a big city. First of all, there are more facilities in big city. All big shops and public transports are Available. People use them easily & spend less time to arrive destination. Government Offices are convenient. But is small town there are not Government Offices and People have to go to big city while is not faster bus or subways. Secondly, People immigrate big city because there are more jobs opportunity and they find their favorite jobs. Big cities have many factories with more wage. Some Jobs in big cities have… ادامه مطلب »

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

is that correct?
the companies wants to develop its technology operation so they search of skillful person so the companies make an offer of million person the site. therefore,there are more opportunity for job.

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

is that correct?
big city has different companies and factories so people have much chance of getting a job

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

سلام استاد.موضوع رایتینگ تا چهارشنبه چی هست؟

sima momeni
مهمان
sima momeni

The marriage after age 30 has some advantage. First of all, when people graduated university they search work and they can find job they earn money and they can support other people so they have opportunity to marriage because they have job and they can create suitable situation in society. They have opportuinty to support family. Secondly, they have more experience when people after age 30 they gain more experience in a society they made decision about different things. They earn useful experience their decisions. On the other hand, it is a good idea to marriage before 30. First of… ادامه مطلب »

Elham.kh
مهمان
Elham.kh

The age Which people can get married is always a conversation issue .While some people believe that it should be at least 30, others think this age should be less than 30 .In my opinion , getting married after the age of 30is the best choice. When people get married after 30 age, they become more mature . First of all, they can easily realize what is need for happiness like mutual understanding of each other . Therefore ,when they get married , they can build a family with stable happiness . Secondly, according statistics , couple who gets married… ادامه مطلب »

sahar amini
مهمان
sahar amini

I think marry before 30 years is better than becase we have hiegh level of energy , happiness , time , healthy.anybody disastrous marry in after 30 years becase they lack energy and ect. not only marry in after 30 years is not good , but also is predicment , becase fertility is risky.
choromoses are activity and better work in cells in befor 30 years in body and cuple have helthy baby in life.

loghman kazempour
مهمان
loghman kazempour

I think we have more energy and time when we marry before age of 30. First of all, we have more opportunity to spend much time with our family and we also have more motivation to talk with our wife compare when we marry after age of 30. Secondly, we can dedicate and concentrate more our time on real life when we marry at young age because this can help use determine our goals very soon. Therefore, it can help us have plan and order in our life without waste much more time than when we marry after age of… ادامه مطلب »

هادی شریف زاده،بهمن 1398
مهمان
هادی شریف زاده،بهمن 1398

Nowadays, the age of marry is problem for families and society in my country. Some people prefer to get married before the age of thirty on the other side some people prefer to get married after the age of thirty.in my opinion both of them has advantages and disadvantages that depend on conditions of life and cultural people they live in. First we talk about getting married before the age of 30.on the one hand from the age of 18 until 29 we are less logical and more emotional than after the age of 30.we fall in love and immediately… ادامه مطلب »

مریم مرجان
مهمان
مریم مرجان

مریم مرجان :The marriage after age 30 has some advantages .Firstly, people how are 30 or more years old are more mature than younger one. They behave in a reasonable way and don’t decide emotionally. They think better and more logistic .The younger people are more sensitive because of not having enough experience. For example, a man how is 20 years old when hear about bad news, however it is wrong , he immediately become angry and unhappy and he may do what is not true . Secondly, older people are more resistant because they suffer more hardship and they… ادامه مطلب »

پرهام زارع
مهمان
پرهام زارع

I think go marry is the wrong decision, but I like to express my idea about this question. I think age is a just number beacuse I know somebody to got married when they are 20 or younger and somebody they are 30 or older, sometimes I ask from my friends do yo get married again when you are 20? and I heard no and he continued, I was could to travel arounde the world and meet the new people but now I play a game every day with my childrens and cook every sunday for my family, I asked… ادامه مطلب »