کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷
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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی 1397

کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷

کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷

این صفحه مربوط به دوره مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ماه مهندس ابوالقاسمی است که از ۲ شنبه سوم دی ۱۳۹۷ آغاز میشود. در این صفحه تمرین های مربوط به لغات، جمله سازی و رایتینگ زبان آموزان در بخش دیدگاه ها درج خواهد شد. این کلاس همچنین از یک کانال اختصاصی تلگرام برای بایگانی فایل های صوتی ضبط شده جلسات و یک گروه خصوصی تلگرام برای تمرین و گفتگو بین زبان آموزان بهره خواهد برد.

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۱ ام

Tactics for listening Developing unit 7 8 9 

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 11 12 13

Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 9 10 

Grammar Unit  شرطی ها و مجهول 

Oxford Word Skills Unit 11

Speaking Questions from 76 to 85 از این صفحه ببینید

Writing Topic 

What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۰ ام

Tactics for listening Developing unit 5 6

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 9 10 

Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 7 8 

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 41 42  از اینجا ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Unit 10 

Speaking Questions from 66 to 75 از این صفحه ببینید

Writing Topic 

Do you prefer to read newspaper or watch news on tv?

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۹ ام

Tactics for listening Developing unit 3 4

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 7 8 

Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 5 6 

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 34 39  از اینجا ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Unit 9 

Speaking Questions from 56 to 65 از این صفحه ببینید

Writing Topic 

Do you think it is better to stay in one company all your life or move from one to another every few years?

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۸ ام

Tactics for listening Basic unit 23 24 

Tactics for listening Developing unit 1 2 

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 5 6 

Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 3 4 

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 31 32  از اینجا ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Unit 8

Speaking Questions from 46 to 55 از این صفحه ببینید

Writing Topic 

Nowadays we are producing more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۷ ام

Tactics for listening Basic unit 20 21 22

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 3 4 

Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 1 2

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 24 25  از اینجا ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Unit 7

Speaking Questions from 38 to 45 از این صفحه ببینید

Writing Topic 

Some people believe celebrities such as actors and football players have a very high salary and this is unfair. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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They earn too much 

#Do not help the society to make progress
#Their jobs are not very important

It is not too much 

#they work only for a short time
#they have to work very hard
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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط مدرس 

Some people believe that celebrities have a very high salary and this is not fair. First of all, they do not help the society make progress and their task is simply to keep people amused. Compared with researchers or scientists, these people should receive a much lower salary because celebrities do not make the society a better place. Secondly, the occupation of a football player or a showman is not very important. They do not make important decisions and not many people benefit from their jobs. When we consider the career of a president or a policymaker, we clearly see that they have a very important role and deserve a much higher salary. (113 words)

Other group of people think that celebrities deserve a high salary. First of all, their careers are usually short and they cannot stay on top for more than a few years. This means the salary that they enjoy will also disappear after a few years and unlike most occupations, they soon have to find other jobs with much lower salaries. Secondly, there is a lot of competition for being a celebrity, so being famous needs a lot of hard work. It seems popular athletes, for example, have to practice very hard and this effort is much more than any other normal job, so they deserve a very high salary too. (110 words)

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۶ ام

Tactics for listening Basic unit 17 18 19 

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 1 2 

Select Readings Elementary Unit 11 12 

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 19 21 23 از اینجا ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Unit 6

Speaking Questions from 31 to 37 از این صفحه ببینید

تسک ۲

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۵ ام

Tactics for listening Basic unit 14 15 16 

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 13 14 15 

Select Readings Elementary Unit 9 10 

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 13 14 16 

Oxford Word Skills Unit 5

Speaking Questions from 20 to 30 از این صفحه ببینید

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Writing Topic

Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

نمونه پاسخ مدرس برای این سوال را اینجا ببینید

 

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۴ ام

Tactics for listening Basic unit 10 11 12 13

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 9 10 11 12

Select Readings Elementary Unit 7 8 

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 10 11 12

Oxford Word Skills Unit 1 2

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Writing Topic

Do you think it is better to make a decision alone or after talking with others? 

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۳ ام

Tactics for listening Basic unit 7 8 9 

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 6 7 8 

Select Readings Elementary Unit 5 6 

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 6 7 8

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Writing Topic

Do you think it is better to marry before or after the age of 30 ?

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Speaking Questions for 3rd Session

۱۷٫ What did you study in university?

۱۸٫ Was is a difficult major to study?

۱۹ Why did you choose this major?

۲۰٫ Tell me about your university.

۲۱٫ Is your major a popular one in your country?

۲۲٫ Tell me about the most difficult university majors in your country

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه دوم

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Tactics for listening Basic unit 5 6

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 4 5 

Select Readings Elementary Unit 3 4

Speaking Questions در همین صفحه

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 4 5 

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Speaking Questions for 2nd Session

۱۲٫ Do you prefer to live in a house or in an apartment?

۱۳٫ What is your favorite job?

۱۴٫ What do you do at work everyday?

۱۵٫ Do you like to change your job?

۱۶٫ Is your job important for people?

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه اول

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Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 1 2 3

Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 2 

Speaking Questions در همین صفحه

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۶٫ Tell me about your house/apartment. 

۷٫ Do you like your house/apartment?

۸٫ What do you dislike about your apartment?

۹٫ What do you do?

۱۰٫ Do you have a full time or a part time job?

۱۱٫ Where do you work?

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه اول + نمونه پاسخ مدرس

Writing Topic

Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

I prefer to live in a big city for some reasons.

First of all, It is easily to find a job. There are many companies and factories in a big city and all of them need people to word for them. So, people in large cities have a good chance of starting a job there compare to a small town. (49 words)

Secondly, in big cities there are more services. Millions of people live in a large city and they need a lot of things for their lives, so you can see many stores and shopping centers. Also, people in big cities have more money and as a result can pay for many services. (52 words)

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – چند تمرین برای Warm-up

Speaking Questions

۱- What is your full name?

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۲- Where do you come from?

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۳- Do you live in a house or in an apartment?

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۴- Tell me about your daily routine(what do you do every day?)

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۵- What do you like about your daily routine?

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Writing Questions

Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

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Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 1 2

Select Readings Elementary Unit 1

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کلاس آنلاین مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی دی ۱۳۹۷ – لینک های سودمند کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع  در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

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کتاب Tactics for Listening Basic

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کتاب Select Readings Elementary

Select Readings Elementary

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۲۰۰ نمونه سوال مکالمه زبان انگلیسی با جواب

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

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۵۳۶بازدید

دیدگاه ها

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    سلام استاد وقت بخیر .دو تا سوال داشتم .اول اینکه جلسه دوازدهم به جز Writing تکلیف دیگه ای نداریم ؟ و اینکه امکانش هست speaking questions جلسه یازدهم رو همراه با تکالیف جلسه اخر بفرستم؟

    • admin    admin

      درود. نه امروز آپدیت میکنم.
      بله میتونید بفرستید.

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?
    There are advantages to studying abroad. First of all, studying abroad can promote students ability to live independently and their characters. Because students have to deal with many problems when they study abroad. They have to learn how to be adapted to a new environment and how to get along with the teachers and classmates. Secondly, studying abroad can provide a good language environment for students. Because, foreign language is a tool employed to communicate with each other. It can remove language obstacle and make international cooperation much easier. As a result, they can earn some interpersonal skills. (98 words)
    There are disadvantages to studying abroad. First of all, difficulty in communicating with people. Because communication is one major of the major hurdle for most of the students studying in abroad. Sometimes students might not understand what lectures speak and trying to communicate. This is also a reason for some students not choosing abroad for education. Secondly, it is very expansive and costly. Because, you will be face the financial problem in the middle stage of your study, it can badly effect your dreams, study, future, career and life as well. This is one major reason students unsure to take up education abroad. (103 words)

    • admin    admin

      رایتینگ شما کپی شده از سایت های انگلیسی زبان هست و فیدبکی دریافت نخواهد کرد.

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?
    There are some advantages of studying abroad .first of all, high grade professor are an important advantages. Always they teach in best universities around the world so students try to study in this universities .when someone graduate from these universities he or she can find a better job .secondly you learn life style and living alone in another country. you have to make decision in hard situation when you are single. So after graduate you can decide alone ,you can do all of your personal works without others help and you become independent. But there are some disadvantages of studying abroad. first of all, away from family is difficult. May be you don’t return to your country soon enough. For some reason, like high ticket price. you May be alone at home for many days without another person who talking to you. And when you sick there aren’t person to help. secondly, in another country you should learn a new language and if you don’t speak that very well so you have a lot of problem in your life and Communicate with others . so if you don’t learn a new language before go to another country you should try very hard to study.

  • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

    Do you prefer to read newspaper or watch news on tv?
    I prefer to watch television . first of all , watching the news on television is easier for some people and is more comfortable than reading it on paper .we can usually see all happens and news in every time on the day in the home. secondly , there are many channels for options on news ,I can see the latest and the newest and updates happenings and news on every time .tv reported news and event demonstrate whit moves that some people example older that can’t ready an news.
    I prefer to ready newspapers . first of all . I am busy for works .i can ready article about importance Events as headlines and I can ready whenever I want. . secondly , Newspapers give me more information about an article with more detail and it is important for some people want know more information for a event because author try to focus on an subject

  • Do you prefer to read newspapers or watch news on tv?
    I prefer to watch news on tv , first of all people can get the news faster in tv than reading it in newspaper and it’s more updated, i think tv news is more effective and when people are busy they prefer watch tv. Secondly tv is entertaining and when people watch news on tv they feel good after a boring day. Sometimes when they have free time at home they can watch news on tv with their family, they can choose news and they can change the channel and at the same time they can watch different opinions about the news.(100 words
    Other people prefer to read newspapers,first of all newspapers are portable and have no time limited , this have the advantages that people can read them whenever they want,they can buy newspapers in the street and read newspapers in the bus and subway easily. Secondly when people use newspapers they can read many articles at the same time, one of the benefits of reading newspapers is providing different news such as weather news, sport news and entertainment. Most popular daily newspapers are reliable source for people more than tv news so people prefer to get their news straight from newspapers.(105 words

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    Do you think it is better to stay one company all your life or move from one to another every few years?
    Some people think it is better to stay one company all their life for more salary .first of all, if you work at one company, each year your salary will be more than before year. and some one which has more years ,receive more salary. that mean a salary person after 5years work at a company is less than another person after 10 years at same company. secondly, after some years each person has a lot of experience so could do some things which other dont .so their level be higher than past and their salary is more than others .
    in the other hand some people prefer stay one company because they like their situation .first of all, after years coworkers are friendly together. sometimes they talk to each other about everything instead of work so they tired less than other times. They laugh , fun together and they help other to do some things. Secondly, some person like stay because their company in near than their home so their cost is lower especially if they dont have car and they want to go to work with taxi or bus.at the end, They go to work on time without delay.

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    Do you think it is better to stay in one company all your life or move from one to another every few year?
    There are different reasons why it is better to move from one to another every few year.
    Frist of all, we need to give us the opportunity to follow bigger challenges. Because, it is can expand our view in the new environment. We can meet different people and learn many things to develop our mind from them. Secondly, we need to familiar with all types to increase our skill and knowledge at our field. Because, if you want to promote or develop yourself you should have optimal knowledge. For example, if you are a computer engineer there are need a back hand developer or network software engineer. As a result, you need to familiar with all types at your field to promote your task. (107 words)

    • admin    admin

      دقت بفرمایید که گفته بودیم ۲ پاراگراف به اندازه ۱۰۰ واژه

  • neda    neda

    I think this problem at this time is inevitable , because everything that we
    .use during the day made of plastic or carton packing. this matter for observing the sanitation in today’s world. I think for sanitizing and keeping health of foods and animal products and another things, using of hygiene packing it’s necessary. there was one another reason too for this problem it’s consumerism and surfeit. today we buy lots of things that most of them may not be necessary’ and this causes a lot of things we bought to be discounted due to the time of consumption.(100)
    the governments can resolving this problem with designing a program for waste reduction and recycling. the most effective waste reduction and recycling programs start with careful planing and willingness to learn what works best. there is no one right way to develop a program, but the objectives are clear: first reduce as much of your waste as you can,then reuse or recycle.
    one way it’s implementating separation rubbish system. this action ultimate to reducing volume of wet rubbish because heft of rubbishes is dry rubbish. also the government can produce compactor machins to compact wet rubbish and reducing volume of this(100)

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    Nowadays we are producing more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
    Nowadays we are producing more rubbish for some reasons first of all, the population has increase.so people need more food, clothes and every things. all of this have bottle ,packet ,carton ,plastic and this mean more rubbish. More population need more building and built new house has rubbish. Secondly, the lifestyle of people has changed and people be going to easy life . They cocked less than before and they would like to buy ready stuff with a lot of carton and package.
    So the government have to find out some resolve to reduce the amount of rubbish produced. first off all, education is important for this. Especially education in schools .so childes can tech their parents about reduce the amount of rubbish. on the other hand education about each subject during childhood is more effective. Secondly government can reduce that through encourage and prize. Experience has shown encouragement has always been fruitful. so they can In the neighbourhoods each family produced less rubbish in mount so they get prize. Or they pay less taxes.

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    Nowadays we are producing more rubbish.
    Why do you think this is happening?
    What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
    There are different reasons why more waste in produced. First of all, we have more population than the past. Because, people become more consumer than the past. In the past people try to find a new way to use all old thing. But now they are just looking for new and better devices. We do not like reuse old device especially old electronic device, so just throw out them. Secondly, unfortunately plastic is not biodegradable. Once it reaches the soil, it remains there for millions of years. Rubbish causes several health problems. It pollutes the air, water and soil. It affects the productivity of the soil. (106 words)
    The government should to reduce the amount of garbage, first of all, they can do it in some simple ways one of these ways is, and Hefty fines should be imposed on shops that offer plastic carry bags. It is also important to sensitize people about responsible to use and the importance of reducing the production of rubbish. Secondly, they can educate people for example, teach people to use paper bag instead of plastic bag in supermarkets. Also they can teach people to dividing their rubbish into natural parts, bottle part and so on. As result, all natural material can reuse again. (102 words)

  • There are different reasons why more waste in produced first of all in a modern countries with a more people a lot of waste is produced definitely because people use many resources for example food and paper. Due to this every year the worlds population are more than before so trash is more than before in the world. Secondly in a modern world for comfortable and quick life of people disposable items are produced and this items are very cheap but this items such as plastic and material that are hazardous to the environment can’t easily decomposed, thus our surroundings are full of garbage. (103 words
    The government should to reduce the amount of garbage , firstly the government can educated people with advertisements in the tv, radio and newspapers and educated students in schools so students learn about the efficacy of waste in the entertainment and the impact of these advertisements in the future. Secondly to control the waste the government can reuse and recycle the garbage and the government should to provide recycling facilities to manufactures . With the recycle waste the government can leads to high profits . The government must create products that can be recycled. The government can placing garbage bin on in the cities and they can reduce waste.(108 words

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    Select Reading pre-intermediate
    Unit 1:
    NOUNS
    ۱٫ Brain: She died of a brain tumour.
    ۲٫ Effects (of): My parents’ divorce had a big effect on me
    ۳٫ Purpose: What is the purpose of your visit?
    ۴٫ Researcher: medical researchers
    ۵٫ Sleep: Did you sleep well?
    ۶٫ Stress: all the stresses of public life
    VERBS
    ۱٫ find out: I found out that my parents had never been married.
    ۲٫ Have (trouble): I still have trouble expressing myself.
    ۳٫ Nap: I took a nap after lunch.
    ۴٫ Spend (time): many people spend time surfing social networking sites.
    ۵٫ Stay (awake): I decided to stay home.
    ADJECTIVE
    ۱٫ blurry: a few blurry photos of their holiday
    ۲٫ Dangerous: laws about dangerous dogs
    ۳٫ normal: A normal working week is 40 hours.
    ۴٫ Sleepy: her house was sleepy.

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    Some people believe celebrities such as actors and football players have a very high salary and this is unfair.to what extent do you agree or disagree?
    Some people believe celebrities have a very high salary and this is unfair .first of all, some of them don’t have any university degree .but some of the people Although like this fields and they have university degree Unfortunately haven’t chance and everything to be celebrities and famous so This persons study for many years but they don’t Achieve to their goal .secondly, their salary is more than some of the people such as employees and professors .they study hard and now they work a lot of time of day but some of them after years haven’t any home or car.
    In other hand Some people believe celebrities haven’t too much salary .first of all, they practice hard and sometimes they sleep less than others and they should try and practice from morning to night. Sometime their body damage when they are playing and they have to continue their practice. Secondly, most of the time they are far from their family. like, soccer player. when they go to other country for math . after days or even after a few hours they miss their family . when they aren’t at home their partner manage home and child . so maybe she or he tired and nervous.

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    Some people believe celebrities such as actors and football players have a very high salary and this is unfair.
    To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    #not help the country to progress
    #they don’t working hard
    First of all, it’s too much in my opinion that people working in the industry such as actors, football players they do not help the county to progress. For instance, teachers should be very good high salary because they always teach many person and they are student in the future maybe are doctors or Scientists.
    Secondly, celebrities do not working hard and get more salary in compare with other jobs in the world. Because, an actor especially famous actor don’t working hard for a new film but get a high salary. On the other hand a miner would be working hard and get lower high salary.

    #entertainment is important
    #work for a very short time
    First of all, it’s not too much, in my opinion entertainment is a very important part of our lives. Because, movies, music and sports they motivate us. We can watch people stories in movie or listen a good song when we are deep or take a concert and time to spend with our friends.
    Secondly, it’s not too much, in my opinion they are not long time to work as a celebrities. Because, a professional football player can play football about five or ten years.as a result he or she can’t have very high salary for 30 year. So when they are retirement they should be start a new job.

    • admin    admin

      ایده پردازی ها نباید داخل رایتینگ نوشته شود و در وسط پاراگراف نباید سر خط بروید. لطفا در موارد بعدی دقت کنید:

  • Some people believe that celebrities have a very high salary and this is not fair . First of all , people try to live like celebrities specially young people do this so when they have high salary they will very important in society and young people try to copy their behavior , in the event that young people can go to university and they can useful to the community and deserve a much higher salary with other jobs .secondly , the government pay a lot of money to celebrities but this isn’t necessary , the government can spend this money for necessary things for example schools and libraries (107 words

    Other group of people think that celebrities deserve a high salary . First of all, entertainment is a very important industry in the world and this is a very important part of our lives and celebrities save us from boring life , their work is popular between people, and people are willing to give them money for their activity, because of this industry many people have a job,”. Secondly celebrities spend a lot of time for practice, they have to practice very hard, they have short time oftenly . Sometimes they are very tired but they should have a lot of energy every time. So they deserve a very high salary (106 words)

  • They earn too much
    # people don’t move to scince
    # it’s better to spend this money for necessary things in society
    It’s not too much
    # entertainment is very important industry
    # celebrities spend a lot of time for practice

  • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

    سلام استاد
    وقت بخیر
    استاد نوشتن رایتینگ باید به چه صورت باشد؟ من اول با توجه به تاپیک رایتینگ متن فارسی آن را مینویسم .سپس متن فارسی را به انگلیسی بر می گردانم .با توجه به سطح زبان انگلیسی من نوشتن رایتینگ برای من زمان بر است . .طی یکی دو تا فیدبکب که گرفتم متوجه شدم که درجملات من ساختار انگلیسی رعایت نمیشود . و سعی کردم که از دیکشنری استفاده کنم . اما مسیله اینجاست که مثلا در مورد تغییر جمله فارسی که مد نظر من هست چطور آن جمله را با استفاده از دیکشنری به ساختار انگلیسی تبدیل کنم ایا باید از کلمه کلیدی مدنظر در جمله ، رجوع کنم به دیکشنری انگلیسی ؟
    آیا این روش کرا من صحیح است؟

    • admin    admin

      درود.

      فایل صوتی جلسه اول و دوم رو بشنوید توضیح کامل برای نوشتن یک رایتینگ بدون عیب و نقص ارایه شده.

      زبان فارسی در پروژه آیلتس وجود نداره و نباید وجود داشته باشه.

  • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

    Behavioral change and development is one of the essential requirements of life. First of all, when someone decides to change their habits. He opened the door to a purposeful life, because he is knowing with new people who have the necessary knowledge and expertise in his field of work. And they can learn knowledge and skill from new people . therefore it possible they formed a humans chain to move to golds.
    Secondly, when a person decides to change, he or she will experience new social situation and new job opportunities after that he is knowing with new people and obtain the new needed skills. With jobs related to his or her interest and knowledge. Someone experiences a job, maybe succeed or maybe fail, but The person decision making to change , he continues a new career and more new experience.
    people do something and avoid change. First of all, they cannot risk, and they are frustrating, boring and frightening . therefore They afraid to take risks. They prefer to pursue their previous lifestyles.
    Secondly, people who avoid change prefer to tolerate less stress. They believe that change is very difficult because it may not be closely aligned with their goals and lead to failure. Thus, according opinion psychologists, they try to will not be separated from their own safe space and will not experience a new experience in order to have a relaxed,. They are afraid of the future.

  • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

    Select Readings (chapter 11)

    Condition : the house was in a terrible condition .
    Life :he has lived here all his life .
    Feel : do you still feel hungry ?
    (get) married : are you married or single ?
    Show: figures showed a 90% rise in inflation .
    Comfortable : I was so comfortable and warm in bed I didn’t want to get up.
    Hard :the exam was very hard.
    Rare :pandas are rare animals.
    Regular :the company holds regular meeting with employees.
    Actually :labor costs have actually
    Enough : he’s a nice enough young man.
    Select Readings (chapter 12)
    Competition entered the painting competition and won first prize.
    Culture :I love working abroad and meeting people from different culture.
    Event :the next event will be the 100 meters.
    Festival :do you like jazz festival .
    Region :
    Shape : you can recognize a tree by the shape of its leaves.
    Celebrate :if you do well on your exams we’ll have a party to celebrate.
    Include :the team is stronger now they’ve included roscoe .
    Join in :
    Protect : physical exercise can protect you against heart disease .
    Favorite :my favorit music is pop.
    Local :I usually have a pin or two at my local on Friday nights.
    Skillful: ali is a very skillful tennis player

  • Doing the same thing and avoid change
    Less stress #.less stress is what all people like but
    the unpredictability of a change can create a stressful situation and it can be threat to the job
    Position,marriage is now a person .for this reason many people may be avoide change ,because any change in life can be the begining of a new stress
    #
    Change is always good
    New opportunity# any change can be a golden opportunity always positive minded people create a new position.a new opportunity can help to make money,make progress and ultimately enjoy a good change .change cause more effort is that be a success.

    • admin    admin

      درود

      پاراگراف های شما اصلا به شیوه تدریس شده نوشته نشده.

      ایده اصلی رو با هشتگ نباید در آغاز پاراگراف بنویسی. ضمنا پاراگراف ها بسیار کوتاه هست.

      بجز این موارد بد نیست ولی طبق شیوه تدریس شده بنویسید که فیدبک مناسب دریافت کنه برای پیشرفت در این مهارت

  • Some people avoiding chang in their life because they prefer following their daily habits in life and they don’t like to learn new things and they don’t take a risk. Such people do things in the sane way every day , they like doing routine practices all the time and they feel satisfied for life or maybe they are very lazy for that matter they don’t like change in life. They fear change their life because they believe that changing habits create stress and they will not excellent in new situations there for they are afraid of that their family and their friends, don’t love their in a new situation.(107 words
    Change is unavoidable and necessary if someone wants to keep up with the fast of modern life. Some people think that change is always a good things. People achieve progress and success in their life with create new situation and this changing beneficial to their life , in addition people with new ideas and change the old way create new opportunities which make their to leap forward.especially young people think that change is very important and changing make a better life for their and they always want new experiences, for instance when people chance find new job better than their previous job, they progress in the professional life.(108 words

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    Mixed Schools
    # learn about opposite s_e_x
    # decrease the total education budget
    First of all, it can improve students’ communication skills. So, having a better relationship with the opposite s_e_x, they will have a closer relationship not only during their study but during their future life. Actually have fewer marriage problems with their parents due to having better experience before.
    Secondly, to divide girls and boys, governments have to spend more money on education because they cannot use empty spaces of a female school for a male one, so they would build a new school for girls or boy. As a result, less educational facilities provided for researchers.

  • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

    Some of investing in scientific research show that separate school is better. First of all, Separate schools could have made more effective to improve student’s access to education. And students can have more concentration in learning hence they got the good score in some tests in Compared to mixed schools
    Secondly, student can have more discipline when they are In separate schools, because students have more disciplined in group activities and laboratory work. So teacher knows how he manages your student with effectively. Therefor they take greater advantage and a better understanding of them teacher

  • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

    Select Readings elementary 9
    Dish: I’ll just do the dishes before we go
    Idea : the idea for the book come from an old war movie.
    Personality :he was a dynamic personality in the business world.
    Programs:
    Secret: his secret fear was that jenny would leave him.
    Series :the series of events that led to the outbreak of war.
    Star :the sky was filled with stars
    Combine :different amino acid combine to form proteins.
    Create :same people believe universe was created by a big explosion.
    Prepare : schools should do more to prepare children for the world of a course that prepares students for English examination .
    Busy :Mr. hones is busy with a customer at the moment.
    Famous: many famous people have stayed in the hotel.
    Modern: computers are an essential part of modern life .
    Select Readings elementary 10
    Beach :there is a beautiful sandy beach .
    Mountain :I have great fail in the power of love to move mountains.
    Transportation : the city needs to improve its public transportation.
    Vacation : I think I have four vacation day left .
    Carry :
    Connect :I didn’t connect the two event in my mind.
    Hire :they were so poor they had to hire themselves out on the farms.
    Cheap : this coast was direct cheap .
    Easy : the test was easy
    Great :the movies was a great success.
    Heavy :the apple tree were heavy with fruit.
    Noisy :the kinds have been really noisy today .
    However : I really want the car , however much it costs .

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed school .discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
    Some people think separate schools are better for students .first of all educate for girls and boys are deference .so a teacher cant teach to them at the same time. some things related to boys or girls but not both of them. The girls are more sensitive so need to more attention .secondly stress is less than mixed school. usually persons have stress when see opposite s…..e…….x .so they don’t have show their ability in some things .may they speak less in class and don’t ask questions or they are embarrassed when they have mistake in class.
    Other people believe the mixed schools are better. First of all they get friends with opposite s……e…….x so they have a lot of experience about opposite s…..e…..x and these experience help them for future and marriage. also they have make better decision in some situation with that. secondly less building for schools need.so the countries cost are fewer and this countries can use extra cost building for educate. Finally with less cost more students can study.

  • Separate
    # focus on studies
    # less stress
    Mixed
    # learn about opposite s…e……x
    # more sociable
    Some people believe that separate schools are better place for children to educate. First of all in separate schools students tend to be more focused on studies so they succeed in the future when they want go to university they can choose favorite major and as a result they can find good job so I think is better for female because with higher education they more successful in the future . Secondly in separate school students have less stress because study with the opposite s……e……x they try do anything with any mistakes and when they can’t do this ,they have stress (100 words
    Other people believe mixed schools are better for students. First of all , when both genders are study in same school it’s more beneficial because between boys and girls create a healthy relationship so they free from shyness and they can to communicate with others they will be more sociable in the future. Secondly,having a better relationship with the opposite s…….e….x , they learn about the other so they have fewer marriage problems because they have a better experience before (77 words )
    I agree with mixed education because young students have better relationship with the opposite gender . When both genders ate educated together they are more successful in the future. (27 words)

    • admin    admin

      لطفا رایتینگ رو طبق توضیحات و شیوه تدریس شده بنویسید.

      رایتینگ ارسال شما باید ۲ پاراگراف اصلی ۱۰۰ واژه ای باشد.

  • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

    I think it is better to make a dicision after talking with other.
    First of all, information is one of the main elements of good and effective decision making. When deciding, there is a need for more complete and comprehensive information of the members of the group. So that they can predict lasso’s future events. Therefore, the use of information from other members of the group leads to with great interest.
    Second , in group decisions , all members of the group do extensive trying for search and research .while thay do further Research and research so that they can achieve the intended purpose with more speed and save time in order to make more importan matters .

  • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

    Select readings unit 8
    Capital: The government is eager to attract foreign capital.
    Pollution: the costs of pollution control must be considered.
    Tax: we all have to pay taxes.
    Traffic: there wasn’t much traffic on the roads.
    Commute: Jim commutes to Manhattan every day .
    Copy: he copied the number into his notebook.
    Cross: he crossed to the window.
    Nearly :Louis is nearly as tall as mother.
    Such as: large electrical goods such as television sets and washing machins .
    Only : Naomi was only 17 when she got marrid.

  • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

    Select readings unit 7
    Decision : we finally came to a firm decision on the matter.
    Desert : this area of the country is mostly desert.
    Environment : some of these chemical are very damaging to the environment children need a happy home environment .
    Heat : ice needs heat to melt
    Problem :dose she have any long term health problem ?
    Trip : did you enjoy your trip to Disneyland?
    Begin: the president begins talks with the prime minister tonight.
    Decide : it was decided that four hospitals sound close.
    Hurt : he hurt his knee playing football.
    Reset : you may rest assured that it will be ready on time .
    Seem : Ann didn’t seem very pleased .
    Last : it’ll be impossible to make up the lost time.
    Same :they want to the same school.
    Windy : ti’s too windy , there is a lot of wind .
    Across : we ‘ll have to swim across
    During : during the summer she worked as a lifeguard.
    Untile: the ticked is valid until march .

  • I think it’s better to make a decision after talking with others
    First of all, different people have different personal experiences so making a decision with others can have a positive effect on goal. and we can make a good decision because people share experiences with us and it’s useful because we can find a better way for our problems.(50 words
    Second of all , i think that making a decision alone more stress for us and stress often make us wrong in a making decision. When we have stress we can’t think about all the issue and when we talk about their problems with others,especially our family so our stress become less and we will make the best decision.(59 words

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    Select Reading unit 7:
    unit 7:
    ۱٫ decision: It was a good decision to change the name of the product.
    ۲٫ desert: This area of the country is mostly desert.
    ۳٫ environment: We need to do more to protect the environment.
    ۴٫ heat: Ice needs heat to melt.
    ۵٫ problem: She was older than me, but that wasn’t really a problem.
    ۶٫ trip: a business trip to Japan
    ۷٫ begin: As everybody’s here, let’s begin.
    ۸٫ decide: Tina’s decided to go to Rome for her holidays.
    ۹٫ hurt: Was anyone hurt in the accident?
    ۱۰٫ rest:I think we deserve a rest after all that hard work.
    ۱۱٫ seem: The last few days had seemed like a dream.
    ۱۲٫ lost: ‘Are you lost?’ the driver asked.
    ۱۳٫ same: They went to the same school.
    ۱۴٫ windy: It’s too windy for a picnic.
    ۱۵٫ across: the first flight across the Atlantic
    ۱۶٫ during (preposition): My father was killed during the war.
    ۱۷٫ until (preposition): I will wait until I hear from you.

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    Do you think it is better to make a decision alone or after talking with others?
    I prefer to make a decision after talking with others.
    First of all, it is useful for me because, I can use experience of other people about and we can talk together about my decision and find better ways. So, it is important to find some of people to help find better ways and they must be Experts in our decision.
    Secondly, it is reduces the chance of mistakes and failure. Because, Making good decision is crucial in every level of life. Also Risk level is reduced by advice from two or more people and also more alternatives are likely to be generated. For example, when people want to buy something expensive they do contact their friends to make a decision.

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    select reading unit 6:
    ۱٫ disapproval: strong disapproval of the country’s human rights record
    ۲٫ group: group of children
    ۳٫ respect: I have the greatest respect for Jane’s work.
    ۴٫ believe: You shouldn’t believe everything you read.
    ۵٫ come across: I’ve never come across anyone quite like her before.
    ۶٫ criticize: We look at each other’s work and criticize it.
    ۷٫ poor: an area where poor people lived
    ۸٫ stupid: That was a stupid thing to say.
    ۹٫ young: He’s younger than me.
    ۱۰٫ so (conjunction): I was feeling hungry, so I made myself a sandwich.
    ۱۱٫ soon: It will be dark soon.
    ۱۲٫ while (conjunction): They arrived while we were having dinner.

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    Select reading unit 5:
    ۱٫ company: Which company do you work for?
    ۲٫ energy: The city is full of creative energy.
    ۳٫ power: The central banks have huge power.
    ۴٫ resource: a country rich in natural resources
    ۵٫ shade: a plant that needs a lot of shade
    ۶٫ success: The experiment was a big success.
    ۷٫ waste: excessive waste in state spending
    ۸٫ bring: Did you bring an umbrella?
    ۹٫ another: I’m going to have another cup of coffee.
    ۱۰٫ cool: The evening air was cool.
    ۱۱٫ narrow: You’ve got a very narrow view of life.
    ۱۲٫ possible: Heavy rain is possible later in the day.
    ۱۳٫ tired: I’m so tired I could sleep for a week
    ۱۴٫ forever: I wanted that moment to last forever.
    ۱۵٫ (in) fact: I know the mayor really well. In fact, I had dinner with her last week.

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    Select reading Chapter 4
    situation : in formal situations, I usually shack hands.
    way : what is the best way to learn an English?
    Change : changing your eating habits is the best way to decrease weight.
    describe : it is difficult to describe how accident
    shake hands : in formal situations, I usually shake hands
    touch : if your house has been stolen, you should not touch anything until the police arrive
    acceptable : I reached an acceptable level
    common : it is common for new sister to fell jealous of her sister
    formal : in formal situation, I never bow everybody
    traditional : Traditional Iranian food is a rice

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    select readings chapter6
    disapproval: mina look at my clothes with disapproval.
    respect: some of the child have no respect for their parents.
    believe: I believe that business will be a success
    came across: sahar came across her teacher on the street
    criticize: me and my friend look at each others work and criticize it
    while: i listen to the music while i m eating lunch

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    Do you think it is better to marry before or after the age of30?
    I think better to marry after the age of 30 for some reason. First of all after the age of 30 persons trust you for everything because they believe you have so much Experience in your live and you get better decision on hard situations .after 30 you understand some things which you didn’t know before.
    Secondly you can find a job with high salaries. Because you probably work at some offices or factories or some places and you have much Experience about every things .so with high salaries you can buy house and car soon. Marry has so much cost and you can pay them just by your salaries.

  • Hosna.m    Hosna.m

    I think the best age to marry before 30 years old
    First of all when you marry before 30 you have full of energy and happy . Then this energy share with your spouse . Also your spouse life lover gets also your life will be happy . When finish the your work you want coma back soon to home .
    Secondly marry before age 30 you matching soon with your spouse family’s and you have happy family when marry before age 30 you have close relationship with your baby and you have many time spend to game with your baby.

    • admin    admin

      پاراگراف دوم شما زیر ۵۰ کلمه هست با اینکه چندین بار توضیح داده بودیم. ۵۰ کلمه حداقل هست و کمتر از اون دیگه رایتینگ حساب نمیشه.

      آپدیت کنید بفرستید لطفا

  • Before 30
    First of all: you have more energy. Because younger and you can get more energy to accompany your wife. You’re so bored with playing kids. Also, because you have less age intervals with kids. You can understand it more.Time and energy for the family is one of the most important
    features of a successful marriage. ( 58 words
    Secondly : When you get married before 30 years old, to choose your wife in addition to selecting the right precision, it’s very important to love you too. But after 30 years, you are very hard choose your wife . You really like it and even if you have a good choice life is hard to live if love and interest are not. (62 words

  • select readings/unit6
    disapproval: she eats breakfast in disapproval
    group: a group of students are wearing red hat
    respect: i have much respect for my boss
    believe: do you believe she quit smoke?
    come across: we come across your parents in the party
    criticize: my mother criticize to my cooking all the time
    poor: he was poor to buy a car last year
    stupid: she is stupid in math
    young: my sister younger than me
    so: i do not like fish so i eat chiken
    soon: i go to school soon after seven
    while: I eat lunch while i am watching tv

    • admin    admin

      دقت کنید جمله هایی که مینوسید شباهت ۹۵% به جمله های دیکشنری داشته باشند.

      she eats breakfast in disapproval نادرست هست.

  • select readings/unit5
    company: I find a good job in an insurance company
    energy: solar energy is the new source in the world
    power: he dose not have power for this match
    resource: Afghanistan is poor in natural resources
    shade: she sits in the shade becuse the weather is very hot.
    success: is she a success woman in society
    waste: the goverment recycle waste
    bring: please bring your children tonight
    another: Does she have another car
    cool: the weather is cool in the winter
    narrow: the street is too narrow.
    possible: it is possible to use credit card for hotel
    tired: I am tired after the party
    forever: I want he stay at our home for ever
    in fact: i stay at home but in fact i want to go to the party with my friend

  • I stay at home today / she is staying in the hotel for a week
    she listen to the radio every day / i am listening to my favorite song
    he write the letter for his mother / i am writing my homework now

  • I think the best age to marry is after the age of 30
    first of all ,after thirties the people usually have a good job with a good salary and they also have a better financial savings for their children and other important spending in the future. with high salary young couples have comfortablr life together and they can save their money in the bank for the future.(50words
    secondly, young couples are more responsible and they have enough experiences to solve problems in their life and they can make better decisions in different situations both for their children and family issues at the same time. they spend their free times for their children becuse they understand that they will have better life with the family.(50words

    • admin    admin

      درود

      رایتینگ بسیار خوبی هستو

      تنها متوجه یک مورد نشدم:
      other important spending in the future.

      .
      در رایتینگ های بعدی هر پاراگراف را ۱۰۰ واژه بنویسید

      • ممنون استاد
        میخواستم بگم که بقیه مسائل مهم مالی که در آینده دارند

        • admin    admin

          مشکل همینجاست که از فارسی ترجمه کردید و جمله مورد نظر در فارسی هم جمله دشواری است.

          روش غلط هست و به جایی نمیرسه! باید کوشش کنید ساده ترین جمله ای که در زبان انگلیسی مطمئن هستید درست هست رو بنویسید تا بازتابی از ایده شما باشه. فارسی رو فراموش کنید!

  • Do you think it is better to marry befor or after age 30?
    I think after 30 because
    Frist of all# better economic sittuation :can be facilitate for family life.can be more time with family.with enough money to live on without having to worry a bout paying for things.a person rich looking forward to a comfortable there are not fears for the state of the countrys economy
    Secondly:emotional,provided emotional support at very distressing time for family .to do things that keeps something in a good condition.save to protect family when they are in danger of being harmed.stay calm and behave in a sensible way in difficult or frightening situation.
    The people have a very positive attitude to life.

  • Eat:
    ۱: We eat three times every day.
    ۲:He’s eating at the restaurant.
    Study:
    ۱: Arad studies story book every night.
    ۲: I’m studying in my room.
    Work :
    ۱: I work 24 hours a week.
    ۲: Sajad’s working on the project.

  • I prefer to big a company because
    Frist of all,it has more salary and better job opportunity .in a big company you will a able to becom more job intensive and with differnt people
    and cultuer company general have bigger busines
    benefit such as insurance or retirment insurance
    For their employee
    samall copmany are not enough to provide these condatins for their employ
    Seconly,higher job security and lower risk in poor economic conditions large company with stronger
    backing are less affect will small firms incomes are not so high that they can provid the same condation for their employee as large company to
    their size the vast majority of employed human beings are at the government attention and support

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    do you prefer to work in a big company or small company?
    I prefer to work in a big company for some reasons.
    First of all, in a big company, you will meet with different kinds of people, who are from different provinces or even different countries, having various educations, so you will be influenced by “multi-culture”.
    Secondly, in a big company you get to work with lots of clever people, because they enjoy what they do, they have families/ responsibilities and cannot take the risk of leaving.

    • admin    admin

      درود

      پاراگراف های شما حدود ۳۰ و خرده ای لغت هست. برای دریافت فیدبک باید حتما ۵۰ واژه به شیوه تدریس شده بنویسید.

  • I prefer working in a big company.
    I think that working for a big company has many benefits. First of all, in there, you have a security job.
    Because a big company has a lot of capital. Thus they don’t easily employee adjustment.
    So, employees don’t have stress and better work.
    Secondly, in a big company rules performance better than a small company. Because there is a regular structure and management is strong. Also i think that rules performance makes healthy competition.
    Therefor don’t worry from other partners. So you can hope to progressive in your company.

    • admin    admin

      دقت کنید هر دو پاراگراف زیر ۵۰ واژه است و در رایتینگ های بعدی فیدبک دریافت نمیکند.

  • neda    neda

    I prefer to work in a large company for some reasons.
    first of all it’s job security. the most of large companies have national budget and consequently there is less possibility of bankruptcy, in most large companies,recruitment’s are temporary. and as a result, there is the possibility of expulsion upon end of contract.
    secendly large companies have more advantages, including supplementary insurance and purchase bins ete…
    there advantages are as a result of having national budget.
    in large companies because all of them needs high budget and also supplementary insurance rulls not involving small companies.because in small companies low number of people works.

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    Do you prefer to work in a large company or small company?
    I prefer to work in a small company for some reason .first at all usually in small company stress is less than large company .you don’t have a lots of works so you can do everything without stress and worried .probably in small company you don’t have to prepare many reports to your boss everyday .
    Secondly in small company relationships is Friendly .usually they eat meals together .sometimes they joke and spend their time funny and They call each other with first name. in small company if you need to help you can ask for your coworkers without shame .because in fact she or he is your friend not Colleague.

  • select readings
    unit4
    situation: she is in a difficult situation
    way: can you tell me the way to youre home?
    change: i cant change my car becuse i dont have a any mony
    depend: every thing depend on your behavior
    describe:please describe your twon for me
    shake hands: we are shaking hands when meeting toghether
    touch: dont touch me
    acceptable: youre homework are acceptable
    common: they hve common language
    formal: i dont have any formal dress
    traditional:it is traditional go to parent s home in Norooz
    slightly: i am a slightly hungry
    though: she goese to work , she very tired , though
    together,: me and my sister have same car together

  • select readings
    unit3
    building: I like visite old building
    floor: my apartement is on the second floor
    garden: we dont have flower garden in the yard
    guest: they are having 100 guests for the wedding
    lake: she has a big house near the lake
    place: this wall is a good place for a picture
    seat: please take a seat.
    type : there are several type of fruit in tha basket
    view: our apartment has balcony with beautiful views.
    build: we build a new home in this twon
    own: she own new car
    beautiful: there is a beautiful room in her home
    expensive: we have a expensive car
    simple: do you have a simple apartment
    special: tomorrow is a special day for my parents
    close: my apartment close to the hospital

    • admin    admin

      جمله ها بد نیست اما دقت کنید باید شباهت کامل از نطر کالوکیشن و حرف اضافه با مثال های دیکشنری داشته باشد.

  • present simple
    ۱- I dont go to work every day
    ۲- she dosent start work at 6 AM
    present Continuous
    ۱-we are reading book ,in the afternoon
    ۲- they are coming to the cinema

  • I prefer to work in a big company.
    First of all, here’s the way to development. I can make big projects and get more money. Has more relationships than small companies. With these relationships you can do more. I have credit in big companies. With credit, can have a good resume. So I prefer the big company.
    (۵۱words)
    Secondly, big companies have better advantages. For example , we have insurance, we have a vacation and has more monthly salaries. So I can have a better future.
    (۲۷ words )

    • admin    admin

      درود

      تذکر داده بودیم که پاراگراف های اصلی نباید زیر ۵۰ کلمه باشند.

  • Simple present tense:
    ۱٫The bus leaves at half past three.
    ۲٫Every year it has 12 months.
    Present continuous tense:
    ۱٫I’m cooking lunch.
    ۲٫I’m going to the park with my family.

    • admin    admin

      Good

      کوشش کنید جمله ها شبیه به جمله های کتاب گرامر basic باشه

  • I perefer to work in a large company
    First of all , there is a different apportunities within the big company, big company provides better trainnig and by good training we can improve skills and there is a possibility that we can quicly progress in the work and increased job satisfaction levels. simple employee progress in the big company.(50 words)
    secondly i think in abig company my salary is high and with a good salary i living more comfortable and i can rent a better house and i can buy a good car. in addition high salary in a big company i insured so i work safely and i have job security.(50 words

  • I prefer living in a small town.
    First of all, speed of life in small town is slower than big town. In my opinion, this is a positive case. I think that people of small town are in peace. They have no stress also there is less competition than big town. Therefor relation between people is friendly. As a result, the people’s psyche is healthier than big town.
    Secondly, the weather is important reason for me. In small town, the cars and factories are less in there. Thus the weather is cleaner than big town and you breathe more easily. So they will live longer.

    • admin    admin

      پاراگراف دوم شما تنها ۳۷ کلمه است. پاراگراف های اصلی نباید زیر ۵۰ واژه باشند.

  • neda    neda

    I prefer to live in a big city for some reasons.
    first of all, there is ease of access to facilities such as center’s of education, shopping center’s, gyms etc…
    In big cities we have many chance to select every things with many variety, therefore we have better choice for selecting and buy commodities and services.
    secondly, in big cities there are more entertainments for weekends. there are many cafeterias, cinemas in a big city that we can past weekend happily and friendly.

    • admin    admin

      درود

      متاسفانه پاراگراف ها کوتاه تر از ۵۰ واژه است.

  • Sahar.S    Sahar.S

    I prefer to live in a small town, like a Village، for some reason.
    First of all, when you live in a small town something are cheaper than big city like foods, the vegetables ,fruits ،etc. price of home or shop are less than big city so probably you can buy a house easily. But this things depend to, you have a job or not!
    Secondly, in small town the weather is very clean, don’t smoke or dust, so usually people in this towns don’t have any allergic, they can leave their home every day without afraid of pollution because in small city cars and factory are very less than big city.

  • somayeh    somayeh

    I prefere to live in a big city for some reasons ,First of all it is possible in big cities that well-education in valid university and personal education center with well equipment and also connection with (literate or prominent )professor. Finding friend with different culture of other city even with different nationalities of other countries is of benefits big cities. It is easier to find a related job with field of study for different people.
    Secondly, it is public transportation service such as the bus or metro system and taxi that reliable and available. Transportation service is inexpensive in big cities and needing is not to buy gas and many citizen do not have a personal car which eliminating cost insurance and (maintaine or repair ). In all of districts that people need to facility daily found consist of market, restorant,school .

    • admin    admin

      درود

      لطفا همیشه با نام کامل کامنت بگذارید.

      • somayeh.k    somayeh.k

        استاد پرانتز ها رو برای این گذاشتم که ازتون سوال کنم کدام لغت مناسب تر است.

  • Ahmad Mo    Ahmad Mo

    I prefer to live in a big city for some reasons.
    First of all, good medical care system because many good hospitals have been built in the city to take care people’s health. Also, new treatment methods and modern equipment with new technologies enable hospitals to cure many dangerous diseases.
    Secondly, a big city usually have a many interesting places with a lot of kinds of entertainment allow people to relax after working hard. Take Art Gallery as in example for this. Also, I can take cinema with my friends to see a new films on every Friday.

  • Farhad    Farhad

    I prefer to live in a big city, for some reasons. (11 words)
    First of all, there are more entertainment options in big cities compare with small towns. There are many Cinemas, theaters, live concerts, museums, historical sites and art collections there. Although some entertainments such as live concerts may be expensive, but there are options with lower costs too.
    (۴۷ words)
    Secondly, big cities often are multicultural and there are more social events and interactions, so people can know and discover new cultures to learn amazing hits of different lifestyles and use them. Following and improving interests like as paintings professionally is easy for people too in the big cities.
    (۴۹ words)

  • sahar.s    sahar.s

    text-1
    I prefer to live in a small town, like a Village، for some reason.
    First of all, when you live in a small town something are cheaper than big city like foods, the vegetables ,fruits ،etc. price of home or shop are less than big city so probably you can buy a house easily. But this things depend to, you have a job or not!
    Secondly, in small town the weather is very clean, don’t smoke or dust, so usually people in this towns don’t have any allergic, they can leave their home every day without afraid of pollution because in small city cars and factory are very less than big city.
    text-2
    I prefer to live in a big city to reason below
    First of all, business : there are a lot of work or job in this city and income in compare with small city is better, this city find job is comfortable. And big cities need to jobs by good income like doctor, engineering, and etc.
    Secondly, comfortable: there are many cinema, taxi, hospital etc in this city and all of them you need، this very important. for example if you sick you can go very quickly to clinic then reception .

    • admin    admin

      درود

      فقط یک رایتینگ باید ارسال بشه. در ۲ پاراگراف و هر پاراگراف حدود ۵۰ کلمه مشابه با نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس

  • I prefer to live in the big city
    Frist of all because the big city has a good job opportunity there are many factory,and clinicsand hospitals to work and have a chance to have a
    better life in the big city learn more salary and have a better chance of having a better social position than a small town.
    Secondly,they have height of level treatment of big city if disease there are many device for doing diagnosis for example ct scan,MRI,Xray and laboratory.there are many room in the ward of disease.

    • admin    admin

      درود

      دقت بفرمایید ۲ پاراگراف ۵۰ کلمه ای درخواست شده.

  • Hosna.m    Hosna.m

    I prefer to live in small.town for some reason , first of all there is very clean air because it isn’t have many population ,it’s haven’t company and factories , also it’s very quiet for relaxing , when you live in the small-town your mind is slow ,(less stress) in my idea when you see the shutout can see blue sky easily ,also many of the bird live .
    Secondly when you go to the work or or very where not need of the many time.

    • admin    admin

      درود

      رایتینگ شما باید ۲ پاراگراف ۵۰ کلمه ای داشته باشد.

  • I prefer living in a small town. I think that more human problems are away from nature. Living in small town causes people near to nature. Now there may be a question for you; “What is advantage living people near to nature?”
    First of all, there isn’t traffic and factory. Therefor the weather is cleaner than big town and you breathe more easily.
    Secondly, there is less population and less competition than big town. So you don’t have stress. Thus you will live longer. Is this a small reason!?

    • admin    admin

      درود

      ۲ پاراگراف ۵۰ کلمه ای با توجه به توضیحات و نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس که در همین صفحه قابل بررسی هست ارسال بفرمایید.

  • I prefer to live in a big city for some reasons
    First of all, in big city there is a lot of entertainment . there are good cinemas, theaters or restaurants .there are sports clubs such as swimming pools, tennis clubs,skate clubs and people can practis their favourite sports. there are a lot of shops, and people impossible to bored. I can with my friends going to the park and i can spend very good time.(60 words)
    secondly, in big city there are many appotunities educational,So people in large cities have good chance to study at the big university and good high school. So when people graduate from a good university in the future , they can find good job opportunities. so they can succeed in the future.(52words