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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده

 

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – صفحه کلاس روزهای زوج مهرماه ۱۳۹۷

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به دوره فشرده آیلتس روزهای شنبه چهارشنبه ساعت ۴ تا ۶ که در مهرماه ۱۳۹۷ آغاز شده می باشد. در این صفحه تکالیف و توضیحات وارد شده و زبان آموزان رایتینگ ها و پرسش های خود را در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد خواهند کرد و از این راه با مدرس در تماس خواهند بود.

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه ۲۴

 

Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 111 to 125 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 61 to 65

Listen Here Unit 11 to 17 

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 8 kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 24 از این صفحه ببینید

 از این صفحه ببینید یک مثال برای هر یک از واژگان مربوط به نمره ۷ بنویسید

Objective IELTS intermediate Kill فقط لیسنینگ و ریدینگ ها

Common Mistakes at IELTS intermediate Kill

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه ۲۲ و ۲۳

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Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 91 to 110 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 57 to 61

Open Forum 3 Kill

Listen Here Unit 1 to 10 

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 7 kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 22 23  از این صفحه ببینید

 از این صفحه ببینید یک مثال برای هر یک از واژگان مربوط به نمره ۷ بنویسید

Objective IELTS Page 52 to 80 فقط لیسنینگ و ریدینگ ها

Common Mistakes at IELTS Units 14 to 22

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۲۲ و ۲۳

تسک ۱ 

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تسک ۲

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه ۲۰ و ۲۱

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Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 61 to 90  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 52 to 56

Open Forum 3 Unit 6 7 8 9 10  

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 6 kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 20 21  از این صفحه ببینید

 از این صفحه ببینید یک مثال برای هر یک از واژگان مربوط به نمره ۷ بنویسید

Objective IELTS Page 31 to 51 فقط لیسنینگ و ریدینگ ها

Common Mistakes at IELTS Units 8 9 10 11 12 13

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۲۰ و ۲۱

تسک ۱

 

 

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه ۱۸ و ۱۹

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Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 31 to 60 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 47 to 51

Tactics for listening Expanding Kill

Open Forum 2 Kill

Open Forum 3 Unit 1 2 3 4 5 

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 5 kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 18 19  از این صفحه ببینید

 از این صفحه ببینید یک مثال برای هر یک از واژگان مربوط به نمره ۷ بنویسید

Objective IELTS Page 8 to 30 فقط لیسنینگ و ریدینگ ها

Common Mistakes at IELTS Units 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱۸ و ۱۹

تسک ۱ 

تسک ۲

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه ۱۶ و ۱۷

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Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 1 to 30  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 41 to 46

Tactics for listening Expanding Unit 13 to 20

Open Forum 2 Unit 6 7 8 9 10 

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 4 kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 16 17  از این صفحه ببینید

 از این صفحه ببینید یک مثال برای هر یک از واژگان مربوط به نمره ۷ بنویسید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱۶ و ۱۷

تسک ۱

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تسک ۲

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه ۱۴ و ۱۵

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Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 36 to 47  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 36 to 40

Tactics for listening Expanding Unit 5 to 12

Open Forum 1 kill

Open Forum 2 Unit 1 2 3 4 5 

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 3 kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 14 15 از این صفحه ببینید

 از این صفحه ببینید یک مثال برای هر یک از واژگان مربوط به نمره ۷ بنویسید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱۴ و ۱۵

نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۷٫۵

Advantages: more workforce / less medical expenses

Disadvantage: Lack of experience / Unemployment

Population makeup of each country offers hidden and obvious perils and opportunities. While there are advantages for a country when the number of its young people outnumber the older ones, there are also a downside to think of. In this essay I will examine the issue and discuss positive and negative consequences. (52 words)

A surge in the number of young citizens in a given society will undoubtedly create some opportunities. First of all, there will be more workforce for the industry and other sections of the country and this is a good news sine since these employees will be able to produce desired goods and services and consequently the economy will be more prosperous. Secondly, young people will not demand much medical care because they live the period in which their body can fight many disease-causing organisms or the illnesses of a chronic nature simply have not been yet surfaced. They need far less medical attention and related expenses and this gives the chance to the government to invest for more productive purposes. (120 words)

However this change can not be all good and there is a downside to think of. First of all, the experimental experience of young people who are about to get employed in different sections are inferior to that of those who live their forties and fifties. This means the overall delivery of the same result at different fields in simply unrealistic. Secondly, a glance a the economy of many developing and even developed parts of the world reveals that such changes poses the threat of unemployment. Economies simply fail to manage the ever growing percentage of young population and ultimately a sizable chunk will be rendered unemployed. (107 words)

In conclusion, I believe the fact that the population in some countries are made of more young citizens these days offers both benefits and disadvantages for those countries and needs to be exploited or dealt with by those societies. (39 words)

Total: 318 Words

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه دوازدهم و سیزدهم

Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 21 to 35  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 31 to 35

Tactics for listening Developing Kill

Tactics for listening Expanding Unit 1 2 3 4

Open Forum Unit 9 10 11

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 2 kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 12 13 از این صفحه ببینید

 از این صفحه ببینید یک مثال برای هر یک از واژگان مربوط به نمره ۶ از گروه اول بنویسید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه دوازدهم و سیزدهم

تسک ۲

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه دهم و یازدهم

Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 8 to 20  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 26 to 30

Tactics for listening Developing Unit 15 to 20

Open Forum Unit 4 5 6 7 8

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 kill

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 10 11  از این صفحه ببینید

 از این صفحه ببینید یک مثال برای هر یک از واژگان مربوط به نمره ۶ از گروه اول بنویسید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه دهم و یازدهم 

تسک ۱

نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۶٫۵

The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.

In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90  in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.

At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.

The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.

Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to  diminish and at the final year all these categories had  very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)

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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷

The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.

The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.

Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed  an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.

Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)

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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۹

نمونه سوال رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک (Chart) بهمراه جواب

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تسک ۲

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه هشتم و نهم

Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 1 to 7  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 21 to 25

Tactics for listening Developing Unit 8 to 14

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Kill

Open Forum Unit 1 2 3 

Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 8 9 10

Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 Part 1 

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 8 9  از این صفحه ببینید

 از این صفحه ببینید یک مثال برای هر یک از واژگان مربوط به نمره ۶ از گروه اول بنویسید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه هشتم و نهم

نمونه پاسخ مدرس

The graph shows the average weekly hours spent by schoolchildren on two different leisure activities at home over a period of nine years from 2000 to 2008.

Schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 years old spent less than 4 hours per week on computer in 2000. This number increased considerably over the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. At the beginning of the same period (2000), the time spent on watching TV was 21 hours per week, which remained the same over the nest three years. Next, it fell rapidly from 21 to 15 hours weekly in 2004.

Schoolchildren continued to spend more time on computer from 2004 and 2008 and the number reached a peak of just under 22 hours. At the same time despite a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006, the time spent on watching TV remained stable at the level of almost 15 hours per week.

Overall, While TV was much more popular than computer at the beginning of this period, it seems the time schoolchildren spent on them has reversed. (۱۷۵ words)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه ششم و هفتم

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 76 to 100  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 16 17 18 19 20

Tactics for listening Basic Kill

Tactics for listening Developing Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 5 6 7 8 9 10 

Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 4 5 6 7

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 6 7  از این صفحه ببینید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ششم و هفتم

تسک ۱

 

تسک ۲

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه چهارم و پنجم

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 46 to 75  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 11 12 13 14 15  

Tactics for listening Basic unit 12 to 17

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit kill

Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 1 2 3 4 

Select Readings Elementary Unit 9 10 

Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 1 2 3 

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 4 5 از این صفحه ببینید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه چهارم و پنجم

آموزش صوتی رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بخش اول

نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷

Two maps depict a tropical island of a few hundreds square meters before and after the construction of some leisure facilities for tourists.

It appears that two sites for tourists accommodation have been built, which are connected to each other and to other areas with footpath. There is also a reception in the middle of the island, which is accessible by a vehicle track from the southern part, where a pier is constructed for some pleasure boats. The other significant change is a single restaurant in the northern part of the island that can be also accessed by vehicles. The beach in the western side can be used for swimming after this development. There are also some palm trees in the western and eastern regions of the island, which seem to be untouched by this change.

Overall, the development which appears to be more concentrated on the western side and the center, has dramatically changed the face of the island in a way that it can accommodate a few hundreds of tourists at the same time. (177 Words)

نمونه پاسخ ساده تر در سطح نمره ۶

Two maps show the construction of facilities in an island. One map show the situation before and one map after the construction.

In the first map there is not much for possible tourists to enjoy except a swimming area in the left side of the island. How ever in the second map there is a restaurant in the middle of the island on the left close to a reception. There is a vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. Other important change is the construction of several accommodation sites for tourists not far from the reception. Other important facilities for enjoyment of tourists are the boats for sailing in the southern side of the island,where a pier can be seen and a beach for swimming in the left side.

Overall, it seems the island is totally different after the construction of tourist facilities and especially the western and middle parts can be a good place for tourists to enjoy their stay. (167 Words)

نمونه پاسخ نمره ۶ ارایه شده در پایان کتاب 

نمونه پاسخ زیر که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد ۹ بعنوان نمونه جواب نوشته شده توسط شرکت کننده در آزمون برای نمره ۷ نوشته شده را بهمراه توضیحات اگزمینر(تصحیح کننده) مشاهده میفرمایید. در صورتی دقت بیشتر متوجه خواهید شد هر ۳ بخش اصلی توضیح داده شده در فایل صوتی و آورده شده در بالا به روشنی در پاسخ این شرکت کننده در آزمون رعایت شده است.

آموزش صوتی رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بخش اول

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تسک ۲

نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۶

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Some people believe that teenage years are the happiest time in life. First of all, they have a lot of free time. Teenagers normally do not have full-time jobs and their time of study is also limited so several hours a day. A a result they have many hours to spend with their friends and on leisure activities. Secondly, teens have less responsibility compare with adults. They are financially supported by their parents and it is too early for them to start a family and become a breadwinner. So, instead of hard work they can spend their time the way they wish.(102 words)

Other people, however, believe in adult life people can achieve more happiness. First of all, adults have career and not only they can enjoy a good salary, they can also have the respect of other people around them. Having money gives everyone the power to make changes that they like and buy the items to have a better life. This gives adults a sense of satisfaction and happiness. Secondly, when a person reaches maturity, they enjoy independence and do not need to follow their parents’ orders anymore. they can make decisions and feel happy and pleased when they see good results of their actions. (104 words)

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نمونه دوم نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۶٫۵ تا ۷

Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times mainly because they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Moreover, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.

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On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. This group tend to mention the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step.

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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر(ٍExaminer) آیلتس که در سطح نمره ۹ براورد میشود:

Sample Answer of IELTS Writing Task 2 by Examiner band 9

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه سوم

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 37 to 45  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 9 10 

Tactics for listening Basic unit 9 10 11

Real Speaking and Listening Unit 12 13 14

Select Readings Elementary Unit 8

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 3 از این صفحه ببینید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه دوم

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 16 to 36  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 6 7 8 

Tactics for listening Basic unit 5 6 7 8 

Real Speaking and Listening Unit 6 7 8 9 10 

Select Readings Elementary Unit 5 6 7 

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 2 از این صفحه ببینید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه دوم

تسک ۲

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Separate

# more concentration

#more safe

Mixed

#more competition

#learn about opposite s..e…x

نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۷ تا ۷٫۵

Some people believe that separate schools are a better place for children to educate. First of all, since distraction is proven to be a challenging issue in schools, students who receive single-s…e..x education will have the privilege of being more concentrated on their studies due to the fact that other pupils are of the same s…e…..x and not appealing to them. Secondly, school compound will be a less dangerous environment and the chance of s.e..x…u…a.l abuse will diminish drastically. For that it will be less likely for students to be romantically involved and the hostility stems from terminating such relationships will minimize. (102 words)

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Yet others argue that mixed schools will be more beneficial to students. First of all, the presence of both genders and this dissimilarity can in fact create a competition among them for a better results and higher achievements. Boys and girls would find ways to attract the opposite s..e….x and those who perform better in schools will stand a better chance to be admired in front of everyone. Secondly, the fact that both genders are present in a same place is a perfect opportunity for each one to learn a great deal about the other and this precious knowledge will ultimately be useful in later stages of their lives. (109 words)

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نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۶

Some people believe separate schools are better for students. First of all, they can have more concentration. Because girls and boys are not in the same classroom, they do not spend time with each other or do not have the chance to talk and never become close friends. So, they only focus on their lessons and try hard to get good results. Secondly, schools will be safer for them because there are only boys or girls in the yard or the classrooms and if they start to fight, they can defend themselves. Furthermore, boys will not fight to get the attention of female students. (104 words)

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Other people argue that mixed schools are more helpful for students. First of all, when male and female students are at the same classrooms, they start to compete with each other to show off and get the attention of opposite s…e…x. At very young age or even teenage years, students really want to be better than others and getting better results will be their goal. Secondly, when both genders study together and spend time at the same place, they start to learn about each other and this way they can be better husbands and wives in the future especially those who are the only child and do not have brothers or sisters.  (۱۱۲ words)

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – تکالیف جلسه اول

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 15  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 1 2 5

Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3 4

Real Speaking and Listening Unit 1 2 3 4 5

Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 3 4

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 از این صفحه ببینید

۱۰ more units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)

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تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه اول 

Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

Better situation for job

#more companies and factories
#higher salary

more facilities

#more investment
#more demand

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Big cities provide a better situation for job. First of all, there are thousands of small and big factories around large cities and thousands of companies inside them. These companies and factories need people to work in them and as a result they employ hundreds of thousands of people and there is a higher chance for finding a job. Secondly, it is easier to have a higher salary in big cities because companies and factories are bigger and they need more managers and supervisors. It may take ten years for an employee to go to next level at work in a small town but in a big city it may take only a few years. (115 words)

There are more facilities and services in a big city compared to a small town. First of all, there is more investment a big city and as a result more services are available. This investment makes it possible to build many more clinics and hospitals or large universities with modern laboratories. Secondly, many more people live in a big city and they need many things for their everyday lives. They need transportation and thousands of schools for their children. They also need parks and cinemas to spend their free time after their work and because of these needs, facilities should be available for them.(104 words)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

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۲۰۰ نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

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بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

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چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

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۱۵۶۲۹بازدید

دیدگاه ها

  • استاد ببخشید اواخر کلاس گفتین دوتا رایتینگ بنویسید ، ولی فیربکشو دریافت نکردیم

  • In a number of countries some peole think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on construting new rail way lines for very fast trains between cities , others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport .
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .
    Fast train
    # more comfortable and relaxing
    # less dangerous

    Existing poblic transport
    # more available
    # more variety of vehicles to travel

  • سلام استاد خسته نباشید ، ایده پردازی هایی رو توی سایت برای تسک های ۲ گذاشتید ، لازمه خودمون دوباره ایده پردازی کنیم یا همون ایده پردزی ها رو بخونیم و بسط بدیم ؟ مرسی

    • admin    admin

      درود

      نه ایده پردازی ها رو باید خودتون انجام بدید.

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    خسته نباشید استاد
    من برای ۲۵ بهمن ماه ثبت نام کردم، حدودا یک ماه فرصت دارم
    برای لیستنیگ الان بین ۲۴-۳۰ کتاب کمبریح ۱۱ رو زدم، در هر آزمون غلطهای دیکته ۲-۳ ، غلط تله حدودا دو تا، عدم درک به دلیل سرعت حدودا چهار عدد هست. چه راهکاری رو بروی بهبود شرایط پیشنهاد
    میدین؟ الان شروع کردم به ترنسکراپ کردن برای افزایش سرعت، برای دیکته منابع لغت رایج لیستنیگ زیاده؛ کدوم رو پیشنهاد میدین؟
    بیشتر غلطها در بهش چهارگزینه ای هست.
    ممنون

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    سلام استاد، میشه لطف کنید نظرتون رو در مورد جمله زیر بدین،
    فارسی این جمله میخواستم بگم، دلیل اساسی برای تخصیص بودجه دولت به خطوط راه اهن، میتواند افزایش گازهای الاینده ماشینها باشد.
    The other fundamental reason for allocatiing governmental budget to railway could be the raising the car emission.
    ممنون از لطفتون

    • admin    admin

      درود

      به فارسی ترجمه نمیکنیم.

      جمله مورد نظرت رو بفرست که بگم درست هست یا نه.

      ترجمه ها رو میتونی اینجا بنویسی که ربطی هم به آیلتس نداره. روشو غلطی هست برای آیلتس و در نهایت نمرت رو کم میکنه چون قالب فارسی به ذهنت میده و اگزمینر جریمت میکنه:
      https://ielts2.com/سایت-جواب-دادن-به-سوالات-انگلیسی/

      • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

        سلام استاد، جمله دقیقا برای test 1- task2-cambridge 11 هست. میشه بگین ساختار این جمله صحیح هست یا خیر؟ من به این شکل زیاد استفاده می کنم ولی برای خواننده درکش چون مشکل بود گفتم ساختارش رو با شما چک کنم.
        فارسی رو صرفا براتون نوشتم تا منظورم رو از جمله اگر متوجه نمیشید رسونده باشم.
        The other fundamental reason for allocating governmental budget to railway could be the raising car emission
        ممنون

        • admin    admin

          raising car emission چه ربطی به allocating governmental budget to railway دقیقا؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟

          گرچه که خود واژه raise اینکه اشتباه هست ولی از نظر معنی و منطق هم وضعیت وخیمی داره.

          • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

            خسته نباشید و ممنون از نظرتون
            در پاراگراف اول گفتم دولت باید بودجه تخصیص بده وسایل نقلیه ریلی به دلایل کاهش هزینه های خانواده ها در استفاده از وسایل نقلیه جاده ای که گرانتر از ریلی هست
            در پار گراف دوم هم به دلیل افزایش گازهای آلاینده ماشینها باید اختصاص بده
            بازم منطقی نیست؟ چطوری بگم چنین جمله ای رو؟

  • Inspite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry .
    Why is this the case ?
    What can be done about this problem?
    Reasons
    # they suffer from poverty .
    # the accumulation of wealth in some countries .
    Solutions
    # governments must attempt to eradicate poverty with a best policy .
    # the inequitable distribution of wealth throughout the world

    • admin    admin

      مورد اول در دلایل خوب نبود. مورد دوم دلایل هم خیلی کلیه ولی غلط نیست. بقیه خوب هستند.

  • In conclusion , some people presume history is the most essential major , while others believe technology and scientific subjects have considerably importance . I am a strong advocate of the second approach .
    ببخشید استاد ، نحوه آوردن نظر شخصی توی بخش نتیجه گیری درسته ؟ مرسی

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      بد نیست ولی اگر در سوال مشخصا گفته نظر خودتون رو هم بگید بهتره یک مقدار توضیح بیشتری داده بشه یا در پاراگراف جدا بنویسید.

  • Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects . Other people think that in todays world , subjects like science and technology are more important than history .

    History
    # to have a better analysis of issues and topics
    # to make a right judgement about different events and traditions

    Science and technology
    #they are more practical majors
    # much more necessary for development and growth in the society

    • Discuss both views and give your own opinion . Cambridge 13

  • Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal . Some people , however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country .
    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .
    Economic progress
    # provide more financial investment opportunity for country
    # increase gigantic constructions
    Others types of progress
    # strik balance between different sections in progress
    # being necessary for country ‘s development

  • Cambridge 13 test 2

    these days , people are faced with too much more selections . although some people presume there are a large range of options for them , others differ about this attitude . this essay will discuss both of these views . (36 words

    some people suppose they have a wide selections nowadays . first of all , a large variety of products have manufactured recently since the number of companies has considerably increased compare with past ; besides , there are an intense competition between companies so they attempt to produce many different items . as a result , more goods will be produced . secondly , there have been major new developments in technology . as scientific achievements have dramatically grown , plenty of technologies have been invented , moreover , since technology provides the facilities to do every thing in a comfortable way , it encourages people to use much more modern technology . thus , it has developed and eventually has given people much more selections . (111 words
    nevertheless , others differ about this approach which was expressed . first of all , the financial problems make people have very limited selections . since majority of people have low-paid job , they can not afford to purchase whatever they require such as an expensive items .
    in addition , there are also some people who were made bankrupt so they do not have many different options in purchase . secondly , governments impose some strict rules in the society to be able to manage perfectly well the country and also reduce the infringements and juvenile delinquency . the repercussion of this government’s decisions makes people do not have many selections . (103 words

    in conclusion , some people believe there are too much more selections for them these days , while others disagree with this issue . (271 words

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    خسته نباشید استاد
    در کتاب common mistake اینترمدیت، درس ۲۵
    کلمه illustrate رو گفته برای زمانی که به شواهدی از چیزی میخواین ارجاع بدین از این فعل استفاده کنید. من تقریبا همه چارتها رو با این کلمه شروع به توضیح می کنم. متوجه نشدم این استفاده درست هست یا نه؟
    ممنون

    • admin    admin

      درست هست مشکلی نیست.

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    cambridge – test1–task1

    The two maps depict some traffic roads which have been constructed around the city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010. (21 words)
    The considerable changes in the bus station and parking lot were performed in 2010. In other words, the bus station has had development, and a widespread area has devoted to it. The public and staff car park have been separated from each other, and a vast area on the right hand of the city hospital has become a public car park. (61 words)
    In addition to these significant changes, two roundabouts have been built to reduce the traffic jam. The first one connects city road to hospital Rd, while the second roundabout declines the traffic congestion in the streets exactly near to the city hospital. To clarify, it is between the bus station, hospital Rd, and Ring road. Therefore, it is inessential to drivers stop for a traffic light, completely. (67 words)
    Overall, some corrective actions in order to reduce the traffic jam and also supporting public transportation have been performed in 2010 including changes in the bus station, parking lot, and roundabouts. (31 words)
    (۱۸۰ words)

  • Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choises . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? ( Cambridge 13 test 2

    Agree
    # variety of products
    #to develope technology

    Disagree
    # financial problems
    # restrictive rules

    • A Large variety of products

    • admin    admin

      درود

      to develop technology رو متوجه نشدم

      بقیه موارد خوبه

      • Development in technologys makes us have many choices.

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    Cambridge 13-test1-task2
    Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

    Dealing with daily life in different language new home country could make complicated social and practical problems. Although some people are opponent with this idea, others including me concur with it. This essay will discuss the second viewpoint. (38 words)
    The practical challenges that people who move to a foreign country should attempt to solve are finding and keeping a job. First of all, taking the first work opportunity will be a tough job. For that the lack of language skills, most of the clients wish to employ someone who has had work experience before to confirm their language ability. Secondly, the language barrier leads to some misunderstanding in the workplace. In other words, understanding of slangs and some expressions which are told by colleagues and customers could be the controversial matter for the one who does not know the language well.(102 words)
    Social communications could be the other underlying issues that foreigners have to acquire skills. Firstly, social values and customs should be learned in order to get familiar with the new community and communicate or interact with them to live and find friends. Therefore, if foreigners want to combat social communication problems, the language barrier should be eliminated. Secondly, social behaviors should be taught to someone who does not know the language. The fundamental reason is that some attitudes might have happened without knowing about the meaning which leads to the person becomes alone, and consequently faces to grave illness like depression and some mental disorder or psychological problems.(108 words)
    In conclusion, I am a strong advocate of the existence of some troubles which people who do not know the language in a foreign country deal with them. These kinds of problems have not only social aspects but also practical points.(41 words)
    (۲۸۹ words)

  • شرمنده استاد ، ایده میفرستم ، این آخریه ، در مورد ایده پردازی Cambridge 11 test 4 چطور ؟

    Economic progress
    # more facilities
    # more investment
    Other types of progress
    # More innovation and creativity
    # more development in different feild

    • admin    admin

      خواهش میکنم. برای ایده پردازی محدودیتی نیست.

      دقت کنید باید ساپورت شما این باشه که چرا هر کدام از این پیشرفت ها مهم تر از دیگر پیشرفت ها هستند. دلیل مهم تر بودن باید ذکر شود نه نتیجه این پیشرفت ها.

      بنابراین ایده پردازی شما غلط نیست اما کمی کلی هست.

  • ببخشید این ایده پردازی Cambridge 8 task 1 چطوره ؟ اخه سخت بود
    family
    # parents shape their children character
    # parents are pattern for children
    school
    # learn knowledge
    # gain practical skills

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      درود

      ایده پردازی خوبی برای اون سوال نیست. مواردی رو باید بگید که اگر برای مثلا مدرسه درسته برای والدین درست نباشه

  • استاد این رایتینگ ، Cambridge 8 task 2 بود

  • recently , technology has had a crucial role to alter the way of communication . it has considerably impacted the different interaction between people and it can be considered as a positive advance . this essay will discuss these points . (37 words

    in fact , technology has had a dramatic influence on relationship between people . first of all , applying technology for communication makes it quite convenient throughout the country , because , people are able to establish an interaction with everyone without any constraint , besides , it provided facilities for people to interact with each other in every situation in a comfortable way . secondly people are always available through technology since there are plenty of means of communication which are easy to access nowadays , as a result , people respond by using them , moreover , communication tools are not too expensive so everybody can perches the one and establish contact with each other .(105 words

    this alternation has had a positive progress recently . first of all , people can exchange different information worldwide since technology provides a golden opportunity to communicate well with one another in a convenient way , and it creates a favourable condition for people to swap information and ideas in a short time . secondly , people can widely spread the latest news and events because some technologies such as tablet and mobile phone give them a chance to spread all news and events among each others , furthermore , these modern communication tools are designed to be highly portable , hence , they are more appropriate to spread the news easily . (103 words

    in conclusion , these days technology has had the significant influence on the way of relationship between people which also has had a positive progress .(269 words

  • سلام استاد روزتون بخیر
    برای بین نظر شخصی در بخش نتیجه رایتینگ ؛ مورد زیر درسته ؟
    in conclusion , although some people believe children must be taught in school , others think children whom parents teach are more useful for a society . I am an advocate of this approach and believe children should train in the family .(39 words

    ببخشید استاد بعد از approach میشه which به جای and believe اورد ? ممنون

    • admin    admin

      درود

      از نظر ساختار خوبه ولی مشکل دستوری داره جمله.

      ضمنا بجای this approach بنویسید second approach بهتر هست.

  • سلام استاد ، روزتون بخیر ، ببخشید، امکانش هست تا چهار شنبه که جلسه آخره ، یه رایتینگ تسک ۲ کامل کنیم و بفرستیم ؟ مرسی

    • admin    admin

      درود

      بله حتما مشکلی نیست. به عنوان تکلیف جلسه آخر میتونید این کار رو بکنید.

  • the graph illustrate the performance of students with bachelor and master’s degrees in UK after finishing university in 2008. ( 19 words

    in the first chart , the graduate students were categorize into four groups . it shows part-time workers were about 17,735 , also , students who stayed unemployment were approximately the same number . about 29,665 students chose further study which contained the biggest group compare with other categories in 2008 , and people who prefer voluntary work were slightly under 5,000 number .

    second graph shows similar categories for master degree . about 2,724 students decided to pursue their studies which was the largest number in this category , while students who chose voluntary work were slightly under 500 figures which contained a tiny number among other groups and students who did part-time job were slightly over 2,500 number and unemployed people were just a little over 1,500 students in 2008 .

    overall , in both charts , majority of graduate and post graduate students chose to continue their studies and minority of students did voluntary work in 2008 . (169 words

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    The bar charts illustrate what the UK graduate and postgraduate students did in 4 categories after leaving college in 2008. (20 words)
    As it is mentioned, in both graduate and postgraduate degree, the majority of students wished to further study, the number of students was exactly 29665 and 2725 respectively. Also, in both charts, the minority tent to voluntary work, it was about one tenth of students in each level of study. (50 words)
    In two other destination of students, in spite of the fact that the total number of postgraduate students were 10000 times more than graduate students, the proportion of students who chose the Part-time work and Unemployment categories were approximately the same in each level of academic study, and the priority was at first part-time work and then unemployment. However, the postgraduate students had more trend to part-time work than graduate ones. (71 words)
    Overall, the number of UK students who did not have the full-time work has been shown in 4 different parts of Part-time work, Voluntary work, Further study and Unemployment in each chart. (32 words)
    (۱۷۳ words)

  • استاد ، پرسش ۲۷ از پارت ۲ :
    Describe an interesting story that you heard or read about in the news .
    Why story was in the news ?
    منظور این سوال رو نفهمیدم و اشتباه جواب دادم اگه ممکنه کمی توضیح بدید که چی میخواد . مرسی

    • admin    admin

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      فکر میکنم بیشتر با واژه story مشکل داشته باشید که در اینجا خودش به معنی خبر هست. در مورد یک خبر جالبی که در اخبار شنیدید باید صحبت کنید.

  • سلام استاد ، ببخشید چند سوال داشتم : لینک مجموعه کامل منابع لغت رو که فرستادید ، تعدادشون زیاده ، کدوم موارد رو توصیه میکنید که بخونیم ؟ مرسی
    -استاد قرار بود منابع تکمیلی رو در صفحه کلاس وارد کنید .

    -بعد از اتمام کلاس، اسپیکینگ رو چطور تمرین کنیم ؟ چون سوالات پارت ۱ و۲ رو تموم کردم ، وقتی پارت ۳ رو هم تموم کردم آیا دوباره از اول روشون کار کنم و بخونمشون ؟ ممنون و سپاسگذارم .

    • admin    admin

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      برای برنامه آیلتس بجز منابعی که در فهرست کلاس خودتون در آغاز کار دریافت کردید فقط ۲ کتاب دیگه هست که پیشنهاد میشه اون هم فقط در صورتیکه زمان داشته باشید

      Essential Words for TOEFL
      Focus on Vocabulary 2

      و در مورد اسپیکینگ اگر بخواین به صورت خودخوان ادامه بدید باید رکورد کردن رو ادامه بدید. پارت ۳ رو ادامه بدید تا آخر و در صورتیکه تموم شد یا تکرار کنید یا با منابع تکمیلی که معرفی میشه کار کنید.

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    خسته نباشید، گفتین استاد نمونه رایتینگ برامون میذارید، میشه لطف کنید؟
    برنامه پیشنهادیتون اگر بخوام دو ماه دیگه امتحان بدم و با در نظر گرفتن ریدینگ ضعیف رو میشه بفرمایید؟
    ممنون

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      بله نمونه گذاشته میشه ولی نه برای کپی کردن. بعد از این تعداد جلسه و رایتینگ هایی که نوشتید به هیچ عنوان نباید منتظر نمونه برای نوشتن باشید.

      زمان آزمون دادن رو باید از روی نمره ای که از کمبریج ها دریافت میکنید تعیین کنید البته اگر مهلت مشخصی به شما تحمیل نشده.

      منابع تکمیلی برای واژگان و تست ها اعلام میشه که میتونید با توجه به تایم آزادی که دارید باهاشون تمرین کنید. البته اگر بخواین خودخوان ادامه بدید.

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    سلام، استاد میشه لطف کنید فهرست منابع رو که گفتین برای کسایی که با برنامه پیش رفتن میگین، لطف بفرمایید؟
    ممنون

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      درود

      کتاب های پیشنهادی محدود هستند و بیشتر هم کتاب های تست هستند.

      IELTS Plus 3
      Essential Words for TOEFL
      Focus on Vocabulary 2
      IELTS Testbuilder 2
      Official Guide to IELTS
      Collins Practice Test for IELTS

  • the growth of crime is inevitable in an enormous number of societies . there are different reasons for this phenomena and it can be solved in different ‘s ways . this essay will discuss these points . (33 words

    there are different reasons behind growing crime throughout the world . first of all , majority of people annoy severe poverty . because of rising inflation and economic recession , most of the people can not meet their requirement . besides , governments do not adopt a deliberate policy to eradicate poverty . the repercussion of these conditions is people have to commit crime to survive . secondly , there are some people who have psychological problem and it is really enjoyable for them to commit crime since they grew up in a family where parents themselves suffer from psychological problem , furthermore , some of them involve in drugs which create attitude problem. for them . (107 words

    this thorny dilemma can be solved with some effective solutions . first of all , government must create the job opportunities , particularly for people who have a poor living condition since they can find a well paid job and earn much more money . as a result , they do not display a tendency to carry out a crime . secondly , all parents must be taught how to behave with their children since they play crucial role in their children’s destination . additionally , the family forms the human character , therefor , if parents attempt to behave in the appropriate manner with the children , the number of people who have a psychological problem will dramatically decrease .(108 words

    in conclusion , although crime level has recently risen for several reasons in a lot of countries , there are some feasible solutions for this issue . (272 words

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    Nowadays, the rising rate of committing the crime is not negligible globally. This matter has several fundamental reasons, and the way of combating them are various. This essay will discuss some of them. (35 words)
    The evidence indicates that delinquency is increasing all around the world in some high-lighted issues. First of all, destroying the traditional family structure which leads to eliminate some between moral values in the society. In other words, the definition of the relationship between guardians and offspring has altered, and the children do not respect to parent’s advice. Also, parents are not responsible for their children as much as before. Secondly, the widespread poverty could have drawbacks like growing crime rate in the countries. When people cannot afford their basic needs, the initial solution comes to their mind is generally stealing food and some valuable goods in order to sale. (109 words)
    Some effective solutions could recommend dealing with offenses, firstly, is supportive policies and rules of family structure. Thus, both governments and parents should make an attempt to keep the family relationship healthy and strong for particularly juveniles by appropriate policies such as subsidizing for newborn babies. Secondly, governments need to take a drastic measure to combat poverty. However, the budget should be allocated to cope with unemployment and homeless people. When governments were able to alleviate poverty in their communities by building some accommodation or some supportive rules for entrepreneurs create job opportunities, the main reason for the growing crime would be removed. (103 words)
    In conclusion, to fight the rising crime rate in modern societies, their responsible people should think about causes and solutions in order to limitation. (24 words)
    (۲۷۱ words)

  • Tara    Tara

    Nowadays,a lot of crimes are increasing dramatically in many countries. plenty of reasons are affected that we will explain some of them in this essay.(24)
    researches suggest that it is not different whether you are living in first level countries or in developing countries, the crime is increasing fast and frightening people a lot. first of all,after consideration on this issue we come to know, one reason is poverty. many children can be seen on fourth way in the street that began to beg since they were four years old.it shows how weak the government can be. because they should be under the best training courses to be succeed in future. (87)
    secondly, when the students graduated from university they deal with no job vacancy. they apply for many different companies but they rejected as do not have enough experience. it is a really worst matter as they should start and all experts have started one dat. actually people are not supported from their childhood till become adult.it could be detrimental for youth future. one of them is that they wont be interested in education and working so they may follow crimes. but some solutions that helps to decrease the crime. in each solution government palys an important role in society. first of all, government must make job vacancy more and more and start to employee graduated pupils when they work with experts after one or two year they become experienced.secondly, government must control inflation in country then people in different level could live easily. otherwise, the rich people become richer and others become poor. they will not support their families and offspring.so at this time begging, theft and crimes will be increased fast.
    (۳۰۴)

    • admin    admin

      متاسفانه رایتینگ شما به هیچ وجه با شیوه تدریس شده و چک لیست هماهنگ نیست و در آزمون رسمی اگر به این صورت بنویسید نمره بالاتر از ۵ به شما داده نخواهد شد.

      مقدمه بسیار کوتاه و ناهماهنگ با شیوه تدریس است.

      پاراگراف اصلی کوتاه تر از میزان پیشنهادی است.

      ایده های اصلی در پاراگراف های اصلی قابل شناسایی نیست.

      پاراگراف نتیجه گیری قابل شناسایی نیست.

  • Cause
    # wrong beliefs
    # power
    Solution
    # education
    # choose nice people for positions
    ببخشید استاد solution برای psychological problem مورد زیر میتونه باشه ؟
    Treat them and teach parents how to behave with their children

    • admin    admin

      ایده ها کلی هستند ولی در مجموع خوبه

      بله این مورد هم میتونه مناسب باشه

  • Nowadays, many countries are engaged with increasing amount of crime. In order to find solutions to help alleviate this problem, main causes of this trend should be identified first. This essay will try to discuss some causes and related solutions for dealing with them. (44 Words)
    First of all, the role of poverty in breeding crime is not unknown to anyone. It is clear that a huge amount of crimes are committed by poor people or those who are in need and police department data can approve this proposition since more crimes are committed in poor neighborhoods compared to more affluent areas. Secondly, government policies play an important role in whether controlling criminals or giving them freedom to do what they want. European countries with least number of criminals like Switzerland or Denmark, have made appropriate laws that can confirm this hypothesis. As an example, southeastern cities of Iran like Zahedan, are dealing with high number of crimes like smuggling drugs or illegal immigrants and many authorities believe that is a result of poor government laws and investment in those areas. (135 Words)
    Stopping this increasing trend need drastic measures that mostly should be taken by government and authorities. First of all, poverty problem should be solved and this is possible through educating people in order to help them learn some trades which can bring them income and motivation to behave legally. It is expected that people who are busy with their job will not get engaged in criminal activities. Secondly, government investment can be an effective step in reducing crime rate since officials can make laws aimed at controlling criminals. In addition, investing in areas with higher crime rate results in cultural changes that can help reduce crime however, this will be a time-consuming process. (113 Words)
    In conclusion, poverty, education and government policies are key factor in increasing or decreasing crime rate and should be considered carefully in order to cut crime rate in today society. (30 Words)
    (۳۲۲ words total)

    • admin    admin

      درود

      طبق توضیحات و چک لیست رایتینگ شما نباید بالایتر از ۳۰۰ واژه باشد و طولانی ترین اندازه هر پاراگراف اصلی ۱۱۰ واژه است. ضمنا باید به کوتاه تر نوشتن مقدمه هم فکر کنید.

      رایتینگ ۳۲۰ واژه ای شما با توجه به اضافه شدن زمان مورد نیاز برای ایده پردازی و proofread کردن در ۴۰ دقیقه قابل نوشتن نیست و نمره زیادی از دست خواهید داد.

      بعد از ویرایش و کوتاه کردن رایتینگ ارسال بفرمایید.

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    خسته نباشید استاد،
    همینطور که تو کلاس گفتین، میخواستم برای فایل صوتی انواع رایتینگ که فرمودین میفرستین برامون، یادآوری کنم.
    ممنون

  • سلام استاد ببخشید، معادل کلمه قدرت طلبی به انگلیسی چی میشه ؟ برای پیدا کردن این معادل ها توی دیکشنری ، دامنه لغاتمون رو باید
    افزایش بدیم ؟

    بعد از کلاس ، هفته ای دوبار رایتینگ رو خوبه کارکنیم ؟ همینطور که در طول دوره کارکردیم ، یکی برای تسک ۱ و یکی هم برای تسک۲ یا بیشتر ؟

    تمام منابعی رو که در طول دوره معرفی کردین برای گرفتن نمره شش و نیم تا هفت خوبه و کفایت میکنه روی اونا تمرکز کنیم ؟ یا لازمه منابع تکمیلی رو هم بخونیم ؟ با سپاس فراوان

    • admin    admin

      درود

      ما ترجمه انجام نمیدیم. شما باید شکل ساده شده این واژه رو بنویسید یا کلا توضیح کوتاهی در موردش بدید زمانی که واژه مورد نظر رو نمیدونید.

      نظر من ۲ تا ۳ رایتینگ در هفته هست که ۲ تسک ۲ و ۱ تسک ۱ باشه.

      منابع کافی هست مگر کامل به پایان رسیده باشه که در اون زمان منابع تازه نیاز خواهد بود.

  • Cause
    # poverty
    # psychological problems
    Solution
    # create a job opportunity
    # cure or adopt the strict laws to control them

    • admin    admin

      ایده ها خوب هست اما معنی cure or adopt strict laws در اینجا نادرست است

      • Educate parents about raising and teaching their children in a right way .
        این مورد چطور؟

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    استاد در مورد رایتینگ قبلی چند مورد رو مشکل داشتم، زیرش سوالاتم رو پرسیدم. لطف میکنید جواب بدین؟

    یه سوال هم داشتم از خدمتتون، برای افزایش سرعت در تسک ۲ رایتینگ و یاد گرفتن نمونه ها در تسک یک چه منبعی رو استفاده کنیم تا آزمون؟ ۵۰ نمونه ای که از هر کدام در سایت گذاشتین مناسب هست؟
    ممنون

  • Tara    Tara

    Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am writing this letter to inform you that I am really interested in participating in marketing course for our overseas commercial department. as I have seen this advertisement I realized that it would be far beneficial for our communication and will be a great promotion for my position.(50)
    As a matter of fact this course included business training, business conversation, the ways of negotiation with customers and finally the certificate will be issued by famous international trading center. so it would be valid for all over the world.
    the fact is that if you grant me this opportunity and give me this permission to participate I will be incredibly thankful for this chance.it will be appreciated if you talk to financial manager to reduce all expenses from my salary.
    on the other hand as it is international certificate it will be helpful for my immigration to abroad.
    Many thanks for your prompt.
    (۱۵۴)

    Best regards,
    Tara Pourtavakol

  • the chart illustrate the five sort of mobile phones which are the most popular brands had worldwide sales in the years 2009 , 2011 and 2013 . ( 25 words

    it is appear that two popular brands , Samsung and Nokia considerably sold compere with other brands . in 2013 , Nokia sold close to 250 million mobile phones , while Samsung units which sold was almost double . however Nokia ‘s sales figures increased to just under 450 millions between 2011 and 2013 , Samsung became a brand leader in the global market with sales of 450 million mobile phones in 2013 . the other three brands were Apple , LG and ZTE . in 2009 , these manufacturers sold around 25 million , 50 million and 125 million units respectively . but in 2011 , the Apple sales reached approximately 95 millions and this number rose by 150 million units in 2013 , while LG sales fell by 75 millions and ZTE sales grew only slightly.
    overall , Samsung became a brand leader in the global market in 2013 . over the following four years , Apple and Samsung ‘s companies rose dramatically in sale. (173 words

  • Nasrin    Nasrin

    Moving to a new country is difficult .learning the cultural rules and meanings of the new home is especially challenging. Although Some people believe that immigrants should retain their natural culture and reject new one others like me think that they should abandon their old culture and adopt to new society .In this essay I will explain my reasons for accepting the second.(63)
    The first fundamental reason is that finding a good job in a foreign country needs to be adopted to new environment.firstly if a foreigner knows new customs and adjust to them ,will communicate with others effectively especially with employees and will be successful in interviews and get the perfect job.In this way the newcomers improve their job skills and make more money.secondly integration into the host society brings a lot of advantages for immigrants for example they can be business owner. For starting a business in a new country ,immigrants have to know new society’s needs and culture and laws and obey them.(103)
    The second reason is that everybody needs to live a calm life and this requires integration into new society.first of all an integrated immigrant knows the laws and follows them. It is not important what are the country of origin’s laws.Breaking law even involuntarily in a foreign country gets immigrants into trouble.Secondly trying to be a part of new society avoids argument with native people.the sense of being in home make immigrants adjust to other people and avoid to have relationship problems.good relationships help the newcomers feel better in a foreign country and have good opportunities to grow their lives.(100)
    In conclusion,I am a strong advocate of immigrants integration into host society because of finding a great job and improving job skills and income and also living peacefully in a foreign country.(32)

  • Nasrin    Nasrin

    Dear sir
    Last night I had a meeting at your hotel conference room and when I came back I found that I have lost some important papers which I think I have left in your hotel conference room. I was tired last night and when I waked up today I discovered that I have lost the papers.
    Those papers are very important for me and my company because of containing our new economic strategies which brings prosperity to our company. I have to study them and make corrections to them until tomorrow.I will have a meeting tomorrow with my boss to complain benefits of the new strategy so I need them today.
    Please send one of your staff to conference room immediately to pick up those papers. I would be thankful to you if you could package them and send to the address which is written on this letter.
    Sincerely
    Nasrin Mortazavi

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    The bar chart illustrates the units which are sold globally in the five most popular and famous brands of the mobile phone in three years. (25 words)
    As it is mentioned, the Nokia sales was a trend toward decreasing during the period. In other words, there were about 450 million sold units in 2009 while in 2013 the number of sold mobile phone became about 250 million approximately half of the number in 2009. (47 words)
    Conversely, the Samsung brand saw sales rise over the following four years. In 2009, it began with about 250 million handsets, however, the sold units were almost doubled in 2013. By 2013, Samsung had become the market leader with sales reaching 450 million units. (44 words)
    The other three well-known brands were Apple, LG, and ZTE. The number of sold mobile phone was around 100 million units in each one. Although the popularity of Apple increased during the period, the sold of LG brand declined steadily. (40 words)
    Overall, the meaningful comparison has indicated in the chart between especially 4 top brands in all around the world. (19 words)
    (۱۷۵ words)

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    سلام، خسته نباشید استاد
    میشه لطف کنید در مورد دو نمونه سوالات تسک ۲ رایتینگ، problem and solution و two part question هم تو کلاس صحبت کنید، تا حالا در این دو مورد ننوشتیم
    ممنون

    • admin    admin

      درود

      جلسات آخر یعنی از جلسه ۲۰ ام به بعد همیشه از بچه ها میخوایم اگر سوال خاصی مد نظرشون هست که تمرین بشه اعلام کنند. شما میتونید هر شنبه تا جلسه آخر یک نمونه از این مدل سوالات رو که از کمبریج آیلتس ها باشه اعلام کنی برای نوشتن.

  • Tara    Tara

    سلام من دو تاکتاب آبجکتیو دارم elementary و advance ولی هیچکدوم سی دی نداره؟

    • admin    admin

      درود.

      از جایی که خریدید قاعدتا باید جویا بشید.

  • assimilation is of crucial importance for thousands of immigrants these days . although some people presume immigrants must not forsake their folklore in immigration , others concur with integration into native inhabitants . this essay will discuss second view . (36 words

    definitely they can find a better job . first of all , it is easier to meet requirement because immigrants who can adjust to a new conditions and traditions are more successful to to establish great communication with native population , besides , natives far more respect ans aid them
    secondly , getting promotion is pretty straightforward for immigrants who assimilate into the community and adapt to native folklore since they have a great chance to acquire qualification in their field and put their trust in the natives ,as a result , they can be promoted to higher level in their work s place and other situations .(100 words

    on the another hand , they will have stronger relationship with natives . first of all , it is easier to agree with them . because immigrants accepted native folklore so they know how to behavior with them , furthermore , because of becoming assimilated into the new community , they are better able to concur with them in different conditions . secondly , immigrants have more opportunity to attend their meeting . since they have the capability to get alone really well with the native population , as a result , natives are encouraged to propound essential decisions with them , additionally , they become strongly optimistic about immigrants who cooperate fully with the natives of that country . and demonstrate their solidarity with them . (111 words

    in conclusion , some people suppose all immigrants need to assimilate with the native folklore , while others differ about this issue . (20 words

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    Nowadays, rising the rate of immigration, immigrants deal with some controversial issues. Although some people believe that newcomers should maintain home county beliefs, others including me agree with adapting with host country’s cultures and customs. This essay will discuss the second view. (42 words)
    The fundamental reason for adjusting to a new society is finding a suitable work position. First of all, determining how the hosts think and believe is vitally important which pertain to their value and cultural norms. In other words, if newcomers tend to have effective communication with customers or colleagues at the workplace, knowing about positive and valuable ritual will be essential. Secondly, the job opportunities belong to someone who gets familiar with workplace needs. Thus, in addition to some professional work skills and abilities which are significant in small societal workplace community of the new country, their behavior and attitude should be matched with it. (105 words)
    The next reason which leads immigrants to face desirable consequence in an adopted country is observing laws and regulations. First of all, the basic principles of countries’ legislation are in their people attitudes and ritual. Therefore, newcomers should be compatible with hosts and consequently their laws. Secondly, if following the home country rules continues, the immigrant will have challenges with the government in such underlying issues like the side of driving on the road or using drugs or alcohols in public place. For that, compatibility with a new community is not negligible, and it is compulsory to be conscious of their society in all different aspects. (106 words)
    In conclusion, I am a strong advocate of this approach and believe that people who move to a new country have to accept their cultural traditions and norms. (28 words)
    (۲۸۱ words)

    • admin    admin

      • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

        سلام استاد،
        – کلمه pertain به مفهوم related to توی کتاب essential هست، یعنی نحوه استفاده اشتباه؟
        – کلمه beliefs هم با دیکشنری چک کرده بودم برای religous استفاده میشه به خاطر همین اینجا اوردم یعنی نادرسته؟
        – برای i am a strong… هم با توجه به اینکه تمام متن روی agree هست باید بازم توضیح بدم نظر موافق رو ؟
        ممنون

  • Tara    Tara

    Dear Madam,
    I am writing this letter to inform you to consider not closing sports and leisure center.In recent years several magnificent program have been held by your organization that were enjoyable for people. in continuous I explain you some points that lead you to not close this center.(46
    the variety number of activities for different ages can be provided in this organization.for instance the youth spend their leisure time as well as adults.in this society.it shows, this organization has utility program for all ages.On the other hands, it is far more beneficial for our budget as it is steered by government so all expenses are proper for mid leveled families.we can consider it another aspect that helps to physically as well as mentality people can rejuvenate themselves when do activity and participating in same community. as you are aware of private sports complex it is nearly impossible for all member family to participate.
    I wish above mentioned points could be helpful before making any decision.

    Best regards,
    Tara

  • the charts illustrate energy consumption in Australian household and the greenhouse gas emissions . the consumption of energy was totally different in each of them .

    the largest energy consumed in Australian household were heating and water heating . forty-two percent of the total was used for heating and 30% for water heating . this accounted for well over half the energy and other appliances consumed 15% of energy , while the smallest amounts were for cooling 2% , lighting 4% and refrigeration 7% .
    in the second chart , energy consumption was completely different . water heating and other appliances accounted for the biggest energy . together they made up a little over half of total use .water heating which was about 15% of total was approximately equal to refrigeration , while cooling plus lighting just were 10% of greenhouse gas emission which was smaller amount compere to other items

    overall , the average energy consumption for heating and water heating was largest amount than other items in Australian household , while this amount dramatically altered in second chart . (176 words

  • Nasrin    Nasrin

    Dear Sara
    I am writing this letter to advise you to get a job instead of going to college.I think it is better for you.college can be incredibly expensive. Also you will not enjoy attending classes you do not like them.Instead ,you can start a career you are interested in without a college degree.
    I think Your family can not support you in college fees and college degree dose not cost much.
    Going to college takes your time and finally dose not improve your skills and maybe you will not obtain a suitable employment you want.
    I know you are interested in make up and fashion.you can build a brand which is for you.there are many people who making money as fashion designer.you are creative and have taken drawings classes and have a good eye for details. I believe strongly that you will be a successful fashion designer.It is better to get a job in this field and learn more about what is your passion.
    Your friend,
    Nasrin

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    The pie charts illustrate the proportion of used energy and emitted greenhouse gas in Australian’s house. (16 words)
    The biggest share of energy consumption is in heating and water heating which are consumed respectively 42% and 32% of the total energy while their greenhouse gas emissions have variation. The water heating gas percentage increases by 2% in comparison with energy usage, however, heating greenhouse gas falls dramatically from 42% to 15%. (53 words)
    The accumulation of energy which is used in cooling, lighting, and refrigeration are as much as other appliances usage which is about 14%. While the greenhouse gases emission of these categories grew steadily. In other words, the heating greenhouse gas emission declines noticeably and the other factors rise instead of it. Especially, other appliances category emits 28% , however, it has solely 15% energy consuming. (65 words)
    Overall, the percentage of energy which heating uses are extremely more than its gas emission, by contrast, other categories have more greenhouse gas compared with energy usage.(27 words)
    (۱۶۱ words)

  • Nasrin    Nasrin

    سلام استاد
    من هیچ جوری نتونستم این موضوع رو در کمتر از ٣٠٠ کلمه جمع کنم.علتش این بود که خود موضوع عنوان بزرگی داره.

    • admin    admin

      درود حال شما

      مقدمه و به ویژه نتیجه گیری شما بیش از اندازه بلند هست به همین دلیله.

  • Nasrin    Nasrin

    Allowing children to make their own daily decision or not is a training controversy .Although some people think parents should decide children’s daily matters, others believe that allow children to make their own decision is more beneficial .This essay will discuss both of these views and I will explain my opinion.(51)
    Some people argue that If children allowed to decide about their everyday life they will be socially immature people.first of all because they do not acquire social adjustment skill.they have earned everything they wanted and they can not adapt to other’s needs and this is detrimental to their relationships. Secondly though young children have some skills for making decisions, they do not yet have the experience to decide about the complex situations that adults must deal with. They can not think about all sides of an issue and if parents do their choices in childhood they will believe that parents always make the best decisions.(104)
    Some people think decision making is one of the most important skills that children need to develop because the decisions they make dictate the path that their lives take. Allowing children to make their own decisions has several benefits. first of all, they feel they are important .From something as simple as deciding which flavor of ice cream to buy, they can feel like they are a part of the family.Secondly they learn responsibility and find out not all decisions can be met with a successful experience. Perhaps a child picks a dessert which is disappointing in taste. This can help the child to learn from previous experiences and make better choice in future.(114)
    In conclusion, there are two main approaches to children’s decision making and I believe that allowing children to make their own decision under parent’s observation is crucial because socially maturation of children needs to teach them decision making and allow them to have a role in family decisions.(48)

  • Tara    Tara

    How to train offspring is far more important issue for parental responsibilities. although some people believe that children can make their own choices, others including me concur with not allowing children to make decision by themselves. (36)
    Some parents letting their offspring be free to think and making decision for daily need. such as food, clothes and enternaiment and also for close future. first of all, children who try to do according to their idea and it leads them to be independent.there are several situations that the children are far away their parents so they need to think and make decision by themselves. the consequence is being independent. it leads them to be the pioneer and not to be an imitator. secondly, they find dare in themselves to be succeed . researches suggest that it is the best way to develop offspring s self confident. then in next future they may face with complicated matters easier. self confident is the skill which is acquired in childhood.all repercussion of parents affected on children behavior.(137)
    on the other hands, others including me agree that making decision by children turned them selfish and proud. they assume the parents are the last generation and could not upgrade themselves with new gadgets and could not understand youth condition.secondly, as they are not enough matured they may make mistakes alot. they are not experienced much. they could not understand the advantages and disadvantages in various situation. they can not evaluate situation as well as parents can. (79)
    In conclusion we have two side consideration about this subject but in my opinion parents play the main role in offspring s life. they think that can select the best way but it is impossible without parent s support. we must consult with out our elder people in different steps.(49)

    • admin    admin

      درود

      با توجه به چک لیست و توضیحات چندین باره ما در این زمینه، پاراگراف های اصلی شما باید بین ۱۰۰ تا ۱۱۰ واژه باشد. کوتاه تر یا دراز تر بودن پاراگراف ها به کاهش نمره شما در سنجه های Task Achievement و Coherence and Cohesion خواهد انجامید.

  • parents play crucial role in their offspring ‘s decisions about essential issues . although some people presume parents must make decision for youngsters , others including me assume it is better for children to make their own choice . this essay will discuss both of these views . (43 words

    some people believe parents must make decision for their children. first of all , children will obey orders since they learned not to be stubborn and selfish , moreover , they are dependent to their parents intellectually and do not have ability to choose their own way by themselves , as a result , they can not disobey orders of their patents . secondly , children do not make trouble for others since they listen to their parents ‘s advice carefully in different situations and carry out the orders of adults , besides , they are not obstinate and rude children therefore they do not trouble someone with their unwise decision . (102 words

    nevertheless , others presume allowing youngsters to make their own choice are infinitely preferable . first of all , they will be independent in their life , since they can make decisions without any help and their capability to deal with the problems will gradually increase , furthermore , they can successfully face up with different conditions by themselves in the future . secondly , children who make decisions independently are stronger. when parents let children make decision , they have to analyze every situation very carefully and this aid them in making essential decisions later and their cognitive development , additionally , they can more stand out in poor conditions . .

    in conclusion , some people believe parents need to make decision for their children , while others think parents must let children make their own choice . I agree with this opinion . (274 words

    • admin    admin

      رایتینگ شما بیش از ۳۰۰ واژه است.

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    The various number of parenting theories considers in the psychology. Although some people believe that parents should make a decision for their offspring, others including me concur with making a choice by themselves. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (41 words)
    Some guardians believe that they are responsible for choosing the way for children. The evidence indicates that this idea has some detrimental effects. First of all, children who always deal with the defined choices are reluctant to make a decision for themselves. In other words, the shortage of choosing skill will force them to be a follower instead of a leader. Secondly, these kinds of offspring mostly expect that everything was prepared for them. Therefore, their endurance would decline dramatically, and become impatient in difficulties. The fundamental result of this kind of upbringing could be an aggressive society with a lack of tolerance. (103 words)
    On the other hand, some parents tend to lead their children to find the choice. This parenting assumption has some beneficial aspects, firstly, children who grew up based on this approach gain self-confidence and self-assured. The main reason could be faced the consequence of their choice when the decisions are made on invaluable subjects. Therefore, if the significant issues happen, a decision will be made with noticeably enough confidence. Secondly, decision-making is a kind of social and business skill which is acquired during childhood. If somebody has this skill, they can achieve a high position as a manager or leader easily. (101 words)
    I am a strong advocate of this approach and believe that children should have chances to learn how to make a decision, thus, parents should define some dilemmas for them. (30 words)
    In conclusion, there are those who think children should chose on related personal matters, while the opponent believes that it is their own responsibility. (24 words)
    (۲۹۹ words)

  • Tara    Tara

    + # being independent
    # acquiring self confident
    _ # being selfish
    # not respecting their parents

    + # becoming mature
    # being responsible
    _ # they may think they are always correct
    #making mistakes

    • admin    admin

      مورد being selfish در خود سوال اومده. شما باید برای این مورد دلیل بیارید.

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    سلام استاد، خسته نباشید
    – میشه لطف کنید نمونه رایتینگ تسک ۲ رو بذارید؟
    – کتاب objectives منظور سطح advance هست؟ برای ریدینگ این کتاب بهتر هست که با دقت متون رو بدون در نظر گرفتن وقت بخونیم و تستها رو بزنیم یا با توجه به زمان انجام بندیم؟ (سطح ریدینگ من ۵٫۵ هست)
    – کتاب common mistake هم سطح intermediate منظورتون هست؟
    ممنون

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      درود به شما

      متاسفانه این هفته با آغاز کلاس روزهای فرد تداخل داشت و اصلا زمانی برای نوشتن رایتینگ نبود و عذر میخوام از این بابت.

      بله سطح پیشرفته کتاب مد نظر هست. اگر سطح شما پایین هست میتونید بجای ۱٫۵ دقیقه که تایم رسمی هست برای هر سوال ۲ یا ۳ دقیقه در نظر بگیرید ولی نه اینکه هیچ تایمی وجود نداشته باشه. لطفا در این زمینه در کلاس بپرسید توضیح دقیق تر میدم.
      برای کتاب common mistakes هم سطح متوسط مد نظر هست برای تکالیف جلسه بعدی اضافه میکنم.

  • the charts illustrate a poll of some visitors who went to see Ashdown Museum during two periods of time and people who visited it before were 74000 , while this percentage increased in 92000 people after renovation . (36 words

    in year before renovation , fifteen percent of visitors expressed a quiet satisfaction with the museum but thirty percent were only satisfied with visiting , while forty percent of them expressed only their dissatisfaction and ten percent were increasingly dissatisfied . in general , the level of dissatisfaction dramatically rose . nevertheless , this number considerably altered in year after refurbishment . according to chart , 75% of visitors appeared their satisfaction that 35% of them felt strikingly satisfied with the museum , in fact , the percentage of dissatisfaction substantially decreased by 15% , besides , the number of people who seemed deeply dissatisfied decreased from ten to five percent and some visitors who did not have opinion remained stable during before and after refurbishing .
    overall , there are some alternations during two periods . it appears that the level of satisfaction with visiting the museum has dramatically grown after the refurbishment (178 words.

  • Allowing children make decision
    # to be independent
    # to be stronger
    Parents make decision for children
    #to obey orders
    # do not make troubles for others

  • shoeib    shoeib

    The table illustrate amount of people who visited Ashdown Museum in the years before and after refurbishment. The pie charts display the satisfaction rate of visitors who participate in the survey during the same period.
    Overall, the number of visitors had significant increased after refurbishment. More tourists felt satisfied with their visiting experience after the museum was refurbished.
    According to the table information the number of people who visited to Ashdown Museum before and after renovation was 74000 and 92000 respectively. Result of survey display an extreme increase in the satisfaction rate of refurbishment; Satisfaction level rose by 30 to 40 percent after redecoration. Likewise, very satisfied visitor increased to two fifths.
    It accounted for a half before the refurbishment, with 40% dissatisfied and 10% very dissatisfied respectively. However, these data shrank dramatically in the next year, as the percentage of dissatisfied people dropped by one-quarter, and the very dissatisfied tourists declined to a half of its initial figure.

  • the pie charts illustrate a poll of some visitors who went to see Ashdown Museum during two periods of time and people who visited it before were 74000, while the percentage of them increased in 92000 people .(37 words

    in year before renovation , only fifteen percent of visitors expressed a quiet satisfaction with Ashdown Museum and thirty percent were only satisfied with visiting , while some people who expressed a dissatisfaction with this museum was 40% and only 10% of them were increasingly dissatisfied , additionally , 5% did not respond . in general , the number of dissatisfaction dramatically rose .

    nevertheless, this number has considerably altered in year after refurbishment . in fact , 35% of visitors felt great satisfied with visiting the museum ,also 40% seemed just satisfied . thus , 75% of people appeared their satisfaction , however , a mount of dissatisfaction substantially decreased to 15% and some people who were deeply dissatisfied with their visit reached from 10% to 5% and visitors who did not have opinion remained stable during before and after refurbishing .

    overall , there are some alterations during two periods . it appears that the level of satisfaction with visiting the museum has dramatically grown after the refurbishment (191 words

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      درود

      رایتینگ شما بالای ۲۰۰ واژه هست.

      میزان بهینه رایتینگ تسک ۱ برابر ۱۷۵ واژه هست.

      بعد از ویرایش ارسال بفرمایید.

  • با سلام ، فکر کنم به جای سمپل تسک ۱ ، سمپل برای تسک ۲ فرستادید .

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      درود
      ashdown رو اضافه میکنم حتما

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    In both table and pie chart illustrate some information about Ashton museum in the years before and after the renovation. (20 words)
    According to the table, the number of visitors who visited the museum before the construction was 74000 while it had a dramatic increase in 92000 people after that. (28 words)
    The pie chart showed the noticeable result of a survey on the satisfaction of visitors before and after the refurbishment. The percentage of the people who were very satisfied was %10, by contrast, it became 5 percent after altering the museum. The percentage of the dissatisfied factor had to decline considerably from %40 to %15. Also, the desirable satisfaction in two other criteria, satisfied and very satisfied has been indicated. In other words, the proportion of these criteria had an upward trend during the period, it rose from %30 to %40 in satisfied factor and %15 to%35 in the very satisfied item. (102 words)
    Overall, during the year before and after of changing in the museum, the number of visitors who were satisfied grow significantly. (21 words)
    (۱۷۱ words)

  • Tara    Tara

    Dear Sir,
    I am writing this letter to inform you about some official papers where I left in your hotel.you will be appreciated to inform your staff to collect them. actually on Friday at 11 AM me and my colleague had sat in bar cafe next to window. we were there approximately 4 hours. my colleague was from Germany and a little obese.it may help your staff to remember us.(70)
    as you aware it was an official meeting and really important he was the owner of Nike brand in Berlin.we were there to negotiate about establishing first branch of Nike in Tehran.it was so embarrassing to acquire his attract about investing here and granting me this responsibility. I have written all necessary data on those papers but unfortunately I left some of them on the table. It took place when I checked the bill.(76)
    That was my great chance to invite him after six months communication through internet and phone finally he admitted and came.it will not repeat again in my life so that is your kindness to help me and find these papers. I will come on Saturday at 9 AM.(49)

    Yours Sincerely,
    Tara

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      Dear Sir…………Yours faithfully

      • Tara    Tara

        منظورتون را متوجه نمی شم.

  • سلام استاد میشه لطفا یه سمپل برای تسک ۱ توی صفحه کلاس وارد کنید . ممنون

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      درود بله حتما ممنون از یادآوری

  • Tara    Tara

    Nowadays, tourist industrial is growing up dramatically .although some people believe it has several negative points.others,agree it brings many advantages. in this essay will explain both of view points.(30)
    First of all, with the huge number of tourists in the country, sever economics improvement can be seen. the revenue of a country is increased fast. the tourists purchased plenty of stuff during their trip.such as food,transportation,intertaining expenses which affect on economics . secondly people from all around the world have one similarity that is language .if they can speak in same language , they can contact each other to outline their needs.language is such a connecting bridge to communicate overseas people.in this condition host people try to contact tourist to guide through their language skills.on the other hands, international tourism has several draw backs for instance with presence of foreigner in a country,many crimes can be seen.it provides a best situation for theft and make insecurity. secondly, with presence of tourist a lot of overcrowded will be appeared in the streets as well as in shopping malls.due to tourist attraction number of people is grew up so heavy traffic jam will be seen.it wastes our time in transportation and make us exhausted.also we could see raised cost in ticket during high season.(191)
    In conclusion, whether there are some disadvantages regarding tourist industrial but positive points are more important for country condition.it gives broad connection to world and effects to people s impression.(60).

  • international tourism is noticeable predominance throughout the world now days . although some people suppose it has more advantages , others presume overseas tourism has also some drawbacks . this essay will discuss both of these views . (34 word

    some people assume international tourism has some advantages . first of all , it results in the economic boom since tourists who travel a broad need to pay money for food , stuff , hotel , public transportation , perching souvenir and so on . in this way , all their living expenses raise currency in the country , additionally , plenty of goods will be produced . as a result , the economy will develop . secondly , it creates some job opportunity for the youth . when tourists flock to a foreign country , they need sufficient facilities . consequently , more hotels , shopping centers and recreation centres are built , moreover tourist sectors will increase . thus , a lot of young people will employ in different positions .(110 words

    nevertheless , others believe overseas tourism has some drawbacks . first of all , there will be a large crowds of people in an urban areas since the thousands of tourists come to visit all tourism attractions every year . in fact , an increase in population annoys local people , furthermore they are going to stay there for a period of time , thus , local people face up with adversities to do some routine activities . secondly tourists pollute the environment since the huge number of them go sightseeing together . consequently , different kinds of pollution will happen . in addition some tourists are dirty and throw their rubbish everywhere carelessly in fact they disobey the roles . (108 words

    in conclusion , international tourism is far more beneficial to country where tourists visit , while this phenomena has some demerits as well . (21 words

  • shoeib    shoeib

    سلام جناب ابولقاسمی
    من برای نوشتن رایتینگ خیلی مشکل دارم در حالی که دایره لغات ضعیفی ندارم ولی وقتی شروع میکنم به نوشتن اصلا نمیتونم جملات مرتبط با رایتینگ بنوسیم یا بهتر بگم نمیتونم ایده های اصلی رو بسط بدم بهترین راه حل برای این مشکل چیه
    با تشکر

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      درود

      لطفا سوال رو در آغاز کلاس مطرح بفرمایید صحبت میکنیم.

  • سلام استاد من فیدبک رایتینگ تسک ۱ رو دریافت نکردم .
    میشه لطفا بهترین روش برای حل درست و سریع تست های لیستنینگ رو معرفی یا بازگو کنید؟ مرسی

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      درود

      رایتینگ شما بعد از مهلت ارسال شده. فیدبک کلی ارسال شد.

      سوال رو در آغاز کلاس مطرح بفرمایید صحبت میکنیم.

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    Nowadays, international tourism as a dynamic industry is growing dramatically all around the world. Although it has the vast number of privileges on the society, the drawbacks are noticeable. This essay will discuss both of pros and cons as follows. (40 words)
    The positive points of tourism industry could have enormous effects on societies in different views. First of all, the economic prosperity of related industries could bring more revenue; in other words, it creates a couple of business opportunities to accommodate a tourist who travels to spend money for having a perfect time. Secondly, the fundamental reason for the positive impact on society is that people get familiar with other nations’ problems and difficulties more. Therefore, their situation and condition would be tolerable and acceptable. Moreover, they could have performed some new benchmarked solutions and defined new projects in their home countries’ troubles efficiently. (103 words)
    On the other hands, the disadvantages of global travelers could be considerable. Firstly, the wealthy people from affluent countries who can afford to travel abroad are willing to find some places to relax and enjoy in all aspects. Thus, the developing counties become their playgrounds which bring alcohol and drug abuse and so on. These kinds of countries face the consequence of changing cultures and customs gradually. The next negative influence is environmental degradation. The host countries are not tourist’s motherland, for that, they do not pay attention to valuable natural resources accurately, and use it inappropriate ways which increase the rate of destruction and erosion. (106 words)
    In conclusion, the positive and negative points of this new industry are controversial. However, it seems that the advantages overweigh the disadvantages. (22 words)
    (۲۷۱ words)

  • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

    سلام استاد،
    از گرامر report speach توی رایتینگ و اسپیکینگ اصلا استفاده نمیشه؟
    من از …it is said that تو رایتینگ زیاد استفاده میکنم، یعنی درستش اینه که زمان جمله بعدش رو حتما یه زمان عقب ببرم؟

    • admin    admin

      درود به شما

      میتونی استفاده کنی ولی به نظر من الان یک مقدار زود هست برای شما.

      مبحث مربوطه رو در کتاب Cambridge Grammar for IELTS مطالعه کن.

      روی نمونه هایی که میفرستی فیدبک میدم.

      • Elham Ch    Elham Ch

        ممنون،
        البته قبلا در راتینگ ها از it is said that زیاد استفاده کردم و چون معمولا بعدش حقایق گفته می شده اصلا زمان رو تغییر ندادم، شما هم ایراد نگرفتین. ولی با این وجود در رایتینگهای بعدی با دقت بیشتری استفاده می کنم و نظرتون رو دقیقا میپرسم.

  • the diagram illustrates how electricity is generated by geothermal power plant and it also shows this power can be processed in different ways . (23 word

    as this diagram shows , there is a large container of the cold water which is connected to a water pipe . in this way , the cold water is pumped down in depth 4.5 km underneath the ground surface . these cold water pipes are injected into geothermal zone to heat the water . after that , hot water pumped up directly to condenser which has a capacity of a large number of liters and then , the hot water starts to be condensed into steam in this huge tank . eventually , the steam goes to turbine through a narrow pipe where condenser is connected to a larger container then , steam blows in a turbine where the process of steam moves special wheel around . subsequently the steam is conveyed to electricity through generator . as a result , the electricity is produced .

    overall , the process of electricity production happen in five steps in which cold water turned to steam and then electricity . ( 176 word

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      درود

      رایتینگ شما بعد از مهلت تعیین شده ارسال شده و فیدبک کلی دریافت میکند

      مشکل بزرگی در این رایتینگ دیده نمیشود و تنها خطاهای کوچک دستوری یا استفاده نادرست کم اهمیت در واژگان وجود دارد.

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