کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده – صفحه کلاس روزهای زوج تیرماه 1397

این صفحه مربوط به دوره فشرده آیلتس روزهای شنبه چهارشنبه ساعت 4 تا 6 است که در تیرماه 1397 آغاز شده. در این صفحه تکالیف و توضیحات وارد شده و زبان آموزان رایتینگ ها و پرسش های خود را در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد خواهند کرد و از این راه با مدرس در تماس خواهند بود.

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده زوج تیرماه – تکالیف جلسه 5 ام و 6 ام 

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 78 to 110  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 13 14 15 16 17

Tactics for listening Basic kill

Tactics for listening intermediate unit 1 2 3 4 5

Real 2 Listening and Speaking Unit 5 6 7 8 9 10

Select Readings Pre-intermediate unit 1 2 3 4

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 3 4  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 31 to 40 (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده زوج تیرماه – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 5 ام و 6 ام

سوال و نمونه پاسخ تسک 1 آکادمیک 

آموزش صوتی رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بخش اول

در اینجا کوشش شده یک نمونه پاسخ با جمله ها و ساختار هایی کمابیش دشوار ارائه شود. پیشبینی میشود این پاسخ نمره ای در سطح 7 تا 7.5 دریافت نماید.

Two maps depict a tropical island of a few hundreds square meters before and after the construction of some leisure facilities for tourists.

It appears that two sites for tourists accommodation have been built, which are connected to each other and to other areas with footpath. There is also a reception in the middle of the island, which is accessible by a vehicle track from the southern part, where a pier is constructed for some pleasure boats. The other significant change is a single restaurant in the northern part of the island that can be also accessed by vehicles. The beach in the western side can be used for swimming after this development. There are also some palm trees in the western and eastern regions of the island, which seem to be untouched by this change.

Overall, the development which appears to be more concentrated on the western side and the center, has dramatically changed the face of the island in a way that it can accommodate a few hundreds of tourists at the same time. (177 Words)

آموزش صوتی رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بخش اول

نمونه پاسخ در سطح نمره 7

Two maps show the construction of facilities in an island. One map show the situation before and one map after the construction.

In the first map there is not much for possible tourists to enjoy except a swimming area in the left side of the island. How ever in the second map there is a restaurant in the middle of the island on the left close to a reception. There is a vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. Other important change is the construction of several accommodation sites for tourists not far from the reception. Other important facilities for enjoyment of tourists are the boats for sailing in the southern side of the island,where a pier can be seen and a beach for swimming in the left side.

Overall, it seems the island is totally different after the construction of tourist facilities and especially the western and middle parts can be a good place for tourists to enjoy their stay. (167 Words)

آموزش صوتی رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بخش اول – نمونه پاسخ نمره 7

نمونه پاسخ زیر که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد 9 بعنوان نمونه جواب نوشته شده توسط شرکت کننده در آزمون برای نمره 7 نوشته شده را بهمراه توضیحات اگزمینر(تصحیح کننده) مشاهده میفرمایید.

آموزش صوتی رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بخش اول

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تسک 2

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده زوج تیرماه – تکالیف جلسه چهارم

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 57 to 77  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 11 12

Tactics for listening Basic Unit 14 to 17

Real 1 Listening and Speaking Unit kill

Real 2 Listening and Speaking Unit 1 2 3 4

Select Readings Elementary Unit 9 10

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 2  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 21 to 30 (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده زوج تیرماه – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه چهارم

تسک 1

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده زوج تیرماه – تکالیف جلسه سوم

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 36 to 56  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 8 9 10

Tactics for listening Basic Unit 9 to 13

Real 1 Listening and Speaking Unit 10 to 14

Select Readings Elementary Unit 7 8

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 2  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 11 to 20 (اختیاری)

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده زوج تیرماه – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه سوم

رایتینگ کامل با مقدمه و نتیجه گیری

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده زوج تیرماه – تکالیف جلسه دوم

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 21 to 35  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 6 7

Tactics for listening Basic Unit 6 to 8

Real 1 Listening and Speaking Unit 6 to 9

Select Readings Elementary Unit 5 6

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 2  از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Practice Grammar Unit 1 to 10 (اختیاری)

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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده زوج تیرماه – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه دوم

ایده پردازی و نوشتن پاراگراف مقدمه برای رایتینگ Task 2 زیر: 

 

کلاس آنلاین آیلتس فشرده زوج تیرماه – تکالیف جلسه اول 

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 20

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  1. Mohammadali-A-Even Tir 97
    Mohammadali-A-Even Tir 97 says:

    Dear Mr. John Smith,
    This is Mohammadali who sat next to you on the flight from India to Canada on April. 20, 2018. It was such a pleasure meeting you and talking to you about your carrier. I am writing this letter in connection with your offer about a master chef position in one of your restaurants in Canada. (53 word)
    I am very enthusiastic about the possibility of joining your team. I started cooking since adolescence when I was a college student. As a matter of the fact, my family always encouraged me to continue cooking to have better cuisine. For this reason, I have attended the culinary academy to improve my cooking skills. (54 words)
    I have more than 10 years of experience working as a chef in Ocean Pride restaurant in Rome, Italy. Honestly, my specialty is cooking different types of Italian foods, specially seafood and pizza and I have also won the best cook award couple of times. I am confident that I will try my best to meet your expectations. (58 word)
    I am eagerly looking forward to hearing from you.
    Yours Faithfully,
    Mohammadali

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  2. Negar_Eb
    Negar_Eb says:

    OXFORD word skills
    Gradual: Recovery from the disease is very gradual.
    Extreme: The heat in the desert was extreme.
    Disappear: Her nervousness quickly disappeared one she was on stage.
    Famine: A million people are facing famine.
    Spread: The cancer had spread to her liver.
    Disaster: They called for an international program to prevent the disaster happening again.
    Violent: Children should not be allowed to watch violent movies.
    Erupt: The volcano could erupt at any time.
    Crop: Sugar has always been an important crop on the island.
    Starve: The new gob doesn’t pay as much but we won’t starve.
    Collapse: The roof collapsed under the weight of snow.
    Evacuate: During the war he was evacuated to Scotland.
    Considerable: We’ve saved a considerable amount of money.
    Crucial: The next few weeks are going to be crucial.
    Maintain: The two country have always maintained close relations.
    Rescue sb: You recued me from an embarrassing situation.
    Supply: Our supplies were running out.
    Vary: Test scores vary from school to school.
    Lifespan: Men have a shorter lifespan than women.
    Sting: He was stung by a bee.
    Plenty of sth; Make sure she gets plenty of fresh air.
    Cut down on sth: Cut down on fatty foods if you want to lose weight.

    Select Reading
    Replenish: Allow me to replenish your glass.
    Relieve: Drugs helped to relive the pain.
    Schedule: We’re working to a tight schedule.
    Reasonable: Any reasonable person would have done exactly as you did.q
    Fee: She chose Oxford House College mainly because it had reasonable fees.
    Volunteer: Schools need volunteers to help children to read.
    Decent: I need a decent night’s sleep.

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      مثال های خوبی هستند. کوشش کنید اون ها رو در حد امکان حفظ کنید و به حطاهای کوچکی که داشتید دقت بفرمایید:

      Her nervousness quickly disappeared one she was on stage
      Her nervousness quickly disappeared once she was on stage
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      to prevent the disaster happening again
      to prevent the disaster from happening again
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  3. soroormoradi
    soroormoradi says:

    There is two maps of an Island in this picture that show the difference between before and after the constructions.

    In western part of the Island there is a beach. there was not any facilities, but the second map show the changes like camping places, some cottages and accommodations. The central part of Island there are two buildings restaurant and reception, and a residential area after construction. Also, picture show some difference in the south, there is a pier that constructed for boating. There is not any special difference in the eastern part of the Island.

    Overall, the most parts of the Island have been changed that make it an interesting Island. (112 words.)

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    • soroormoradi
      soroormoradi says:

      There is two maps of an Island in this picture that show the difference between before and after the constructions.
      In western part of the Island there is a beach. there was not any facilities, but the second map show the changes like camping places, some cottages and accommodations. The central part of Island there is a reception building, and a residential area after construction that tourists can stay there for how long they want. Also, picture show some difference in the south, there is a pier that constructed for boating. There is not any special difference in the eastern part of the Island yet. The picture show restaurant building in the north that many tourists go there to have their different meals.
      Overall, the most parts of the Island have been changed that make it an interesting Island. So many people go there to visit this Island. (148 words.)

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  4. Maliheh Shahabi
    Maliheh Shahabi says:

    Cambridge Grammar

    3.1. Present Perfect Simple
    I’ve made a decision to be the best runner.
    I’ve got help from you to do my works.
    I’ve already paid the money.
    I’ve been sick for months.
    Have you ever seen a Koala bear?
    3.2. Present Perfect Continuous
    I’ve been swimming hard in different pools for 4 years.
    I’ve studied in this university since 2015.
    She has been working in full time basis in this workshop.
    I’ve been walking for the past two days.
    I’ve been waiting for physician for 2 hours.

    4. 1. Past perfect simple
    My brother had rung me and told me the truth, before I heard it from the others.
    Everybody had lined up in front of the store before the extraordinary sale.
    He had bought the ticket before I arrived there.
    Three athletes was out of competitions, when your brother had won.
    She was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen.

    4.2. Past perfect continuous
    I had been working at this company for ages.
    She had been caring about her daughter for some times.
    The writer had been writing the book for years.
    He had been studying English for IELTS exam for months.
    She had been hoping to get married with him but he broke up with her.

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    • admin
      admin says:

      این مورد رو جزء مثال های حال کامل استمراری نوشتید که اشتباه هست
      I’ve studied in this university since 2015.

      معن این جمله چی هست؟؟؟؟
      My brother had rung me and told me the truth, before I heard it from the others.

      پیشنهاد من این هست که مثال ها رو مستقیما از ویدیوها و از کتاب کمریج آیلتس انتخاب کنید. جمله ها شباهت بالای 90% داشته باشند و عملا اونها رو به عنوان الگو حفظ کنید.

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  5. yekta golpazir
    yekta golpazir says:

    Tow maps show an island before and after the construction of some facilities for tourists.
    A pier has been built in the south part of the island that tourists can go sailing from this place. There is a vehicle track that connect the pier to a reception building that is located in the central part and the restaurant which is placed in the northern part of the island. In both sides of the reception building, some places has been built to accommodate tourists. In west direction, the accommodation has been placed in round shape and there are some palm trees. A footpath connects the reception building to this accommodation. At the end of this footpath, in the western part of the island a beach and swimming area will appear. On the right of the reception building, there is more accommodation. There are more palm trees in the eastern part of the island and it is completely unspoiled.
    Overall, the west and the center of the island have changed dramatically while the eastern part has remained untouched. (176 words)

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  6. Maliheh Shahabi
    Maliheh Shahabi says:

    Two maps demonstrate the status of a tropical island after constructing some welfare facilities for tourists in comparison to before.
    It emerges that in western part of the island several accommodations have been built that tourists can use the footpath to go to their temporary places of residence, tourists can go to swimming area of beach which is located on the western side of the island by footpath, too. At the northern and central parts of the island there are a restaurant and a reception respectively which are connected to pier of boats in southern part of the island by a vehicle track. The eastern part of the island is still intact in appearance and they can enjoy a virginal nature beside a developed and an equipped one.
    Overall, many basic changes can be seen in the tropical island according to these two maps which indicates the island has been developed for tourists’ comfort and satisfaction.
    Totally: 156 words

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  7. Javadeb
    Javadeb says:

    These two maps show an island, before and after the developments for tourists.
    There is a reception in the center of the island which is connected to the pier, located on the southern side of the island, through a vehicle track. Across from the reception and on the northern side of the island, there is a restaurant that is accessible from the reception through a vehicle track and from two accommodation sites through foot paths.
    There are two groups of accommodations on both sides of the reception. In the west side of the island, some accommodations have been built for tourists to stay there and also there is a footpath from each house to the beach. Along the beach there is a new area suitable for swimming and its close to the western accommodations. In the east side of the reception there is another group of houses which are connected to each other by foot paths.
    On the far east side of the island, no improvements have accrued.
    Overall, some facilities were built for the tourists and turned it into a more livable island.
    184 words

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  8. Negar_Eb
    Negar_Eb says:

    Writing Task 1 Academic
    There are two maps that illustrate an island before and after some tourist facilities were provided.
    By comparing the two maps, it can be seen that six accommodations were built in the west of the island surrounding trees. These houses are connected to each other by a footpath which leads to the western shore. Also a swimming area was developed near the western beach of the island. In the center of the island, a reception and a restaurant were constructed with a vehicle track between them and another path leading to the western accommodations. In addition, there is a vehicle track from the reception to the pier, where boats can stop and load passengers. To the east of the reception and the restaurant, there is another group of nine accommodations. These accommodations are linked to each other by a footpath as well. However, these houses do not have a vehicle track to the reception or the restaurant. The far east side of the island has remained untouched.
    Overall, the island has changed dramatically in order to attract more tourists. (179 Words)

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  9. delaram
    delaram says:

    سلام و خسته نباشید.
    در درس یک کتاب select reading، این جمله ها هست . میخوام گرامرش رو بفهمم. خواستم بپرسم کدام درس کتاب گرامر مربوط به این ها می شود؟ خیلی ممنون
    جمله ها این ها هستن:
    Gardner started having trouble reading .
    he was having trouble doing sth with his hands.
    he had trouble remembering things

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  10. امین سپهری
    امین سپهری says:

    توی جلسه ی 5ام فرمودین که examiner توی برگه ی پاسخ یه جایی مینویسه “جمله های حفظ شده” و “جمله های کپی شده” و نمره کم میکنه. بنابراین حفظ کردن قالب های آماده برای task2 کار اشتباهیه، درسته؟

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  11. waleid raissi
    waleid raissi says:

    In recent decades,sharing information is absolutely controversial.some people believe in infinte sharing,oheres including me argue in limited information,this essay will discuss both of this viewpoint. (25)
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    The shared rate of information is one of more discussed issue .First of All,sharing information can increase people`s information about any topic.for instance, some persons require to specific researchs.and there are lot of researchs that have been done by another individuals.and if they share their researchs for exaple in scientific or academic world another people cand reach them and can save their time and money.
    Secondly,sharing information mostly cause rapid progress.everyday a great number of individuals have spent their time to knowing about academic topics therfore if they be share by anothers they can read more information about their special subject and can reach a much better progress in less time. (111)
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    In contrast to,limited information sharing have some benefits.First of all,limited sharing can avoid crucial failure in bussiness,for example,some information is vital for bussiness and sharing this information cause come downing in bussiness world and rivals can use them.secondly,there are a lot of information that have investigated by anothers and we do not have sufficient time for considering all of this data.in addition limited information can help us to having better management on purposes.and find the important information that are usefull for our targets. Because of limited information persons can reach rapidly to significant information (94)
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    In conclusion,some people are agree with sharing information in maximum size,others belive that sharing information is much better to be limited.(21)

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      رایتینگ شما پس از تایم تعیین شده ارسال شده و فیدبک کلی دریافت میکند:

      ایده اصلی در پاراگراف اول نادرست هست.

      بقیه موارد مشکل بزرگی ندارند.

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  12. Mohammadali. Even tir 97
    Mohammadali. Even tir 97 says:

    In a modern world, availability of information plays pivotal role in science development. Although some people believe in restriction on sharing of information, others including me think the opposite. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (37 words)

    Some information are notably important and valuable in nature. First of all, restriction must be put on specious data owing to prevent from any leakage. In case of any abused in private information such as weaponry secrets and also nuclear power, devastating effects on global would be achieved. Secondly, the excellence in scientific fields can be preserved for the prior country. Since superpowers are in serious competition with each other, any leak of information and access to bulk of data, make the country lag behind the other rivals. For instance, in mobile competing market, the leakage of some special information related to the construction as well as its internal equipment will reduce the market for the sale of products. (119 words)

    The role of scientific information on development of technology is inevitable. First of all, numerous researchers around the world can access these data. This certainly contributes to save more time and energy, and then fewer efforts must be done in order to access such bank of valuable data. Secondly, science is a knowledge based on observation and experiment. Therefore, greater amount of available source of information leads to achievements of the best scientific knowledge. Consequently, not only various products and by-products will be produced in companies, but also more employment creates for selling of manufacture’s products. (95 word)

    In my opinion, release of useful scientific information via internet or publication exclusively leads to advanced achievements that may bring prosperity to mankind. (23 words)

    In conclusion, it is something argued that sharing information and knowledge even in academic or business field is beneficial but some others think the opposite. (25 words)

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  13. Negar_Eb
    Negar_Eb says:

    Brainstorming
    Maximum information
    # Help inventions
    # Help businesses grow
    Limited information
    # Prevent copying
    # Prevent dangerous people from misusing information

    Sharing information is a global problem. Although some people think sharing limited information in the fields of science, business and academics is better, some others including me believe in unlimited information sharing. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (40 Words)
    Some people think limiting information sharing is safer. First of all, it can prevent copying. By limiting the information share, scientists and businesspeople can be sure that their data will not be used by their competitors. For example some companies could not copy important data and use them against each other. Secondly, it prevents dangerous people from misusing information. Some valuable information such as nuclear data could cause historical disasters if they were used by unreliable people like terrorist groups. Therefore, some people believe some information should not be shared with everyone. (92 Words)
    Some people consider maximum sharing to be more useful. First of all, it helps the development of new inventions. Scientists can use previous results of another experiment so it affects their outcomes. When researchers get their results faster, it can lead to better inventions. Secondly, it helps businesses to grow faster. Some information related to new products and designs is regarded as valuable. By developing these knowledge and skills, a company could produce successful products, which might result in a big success in addition to huge profit. (87 Words)
    In my opinion, it is better to share the maximum amount of data because it will help countries to develop. (20 Words)
    In conclusion, there are good reasons to share limited or maximum amount of information. This decision depends on the type and importance of information. However, I prefer unlimited sharing of information. (31 Words)

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    • admin
      admin says:

      پاراگراف های اصلی شما طبق چک لیست و توضیحاتی که بارها در کلاس ارائه شده نباید زیر 100 واژه باشند. اصلاح کنید زیر همین کامنت بفرستید.

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      • Negar_Eb
        Negar_Eb says:

        Brainstorming
        Maximum information
        # Help inventions
        # Help businesses grow
        Limited information
        # Prevent copying
        # Prevent dangerous people from misusing information

        Sharing information is a global problem. Although some people think sharing limited information in the fields of science, business and academics is better, some others including me believe in unlimited information sharing. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (40 Words)
        Some people think limiting information sharing is safer. First of all, it can prevent copying. By limiting the information share, scientists and businesspeople can be sure that their data will not be used by their competitors. For example some companies could not copy important data and use them against each other. So filtering or securing some data could be helpful. Secondly, it prevents dangerous people from misusing information. Some valuable information such as nuclear data could cause historical disasters if they were used by unreliable people like terrorist groups. Therefore, some people believe some information should not be shared with everyone. (101 Words)
        Some people consider maximum sharing to be more useful. First of all, it helps the development of new inventions. Scientists who have less experience in some subjects can use previous results of another experiment so it affects their outcomes. When researchers get their results faster, it can lead to better inventions and they will not repeat the same mistakes. Secondly, it helps businesses to grow faster. Some information related to new products and designs is regarded as valuable. By developing these knowledge and skills, a company could produce successful products, which might result in a big success in addition to huge profit. (102 Words)
        In my opinion, it is better to share the maximum amount of data because it will help countries to develop. (20 Words)
        In conclusion, there are good reasons to share limited or maximum amount of information. This decision depends on the type and importance of information. However, I prefer unlimited sharing of information. (31 Words)

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  14. Mojgan B_Even TIr
    Mojgan B_Even TIr says:

    Maximum sharing
    #use experience of others
    #improve your brand space

    Limiting sharing
    #avoid your idea being copy
    #some data are restricted
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    Maximum sharing
    # emerge new products
    # expanding knowledge

    Limiting sharing
    #avoid misuse of critical data
    # competitive advantage
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    Sharing information is very crucial for every company and brand in the modern world. Although some people believe information must be shared without any restrictions, others including me think critical information must be protected. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (42 words)

    Some people believe maximum data sharing about anything even through specialized field. First of all, they believe sharing information means sharing experiences. If you share your knowledge it will be useful for other people and help them to learn about it and do not repeat your mistakes. Secondly, sharing much more information makes it possible to emergence of new creative products. Innovation of new products needs long-term research and investigation. Shared information helps inventors and researcher to know about similar solutions and do not reinvent the wheel and find new method. (91 words)

    Other people believe it is necessary to limit data sharing in the today’s competitive world. First of all, any company and brand need competitive advantages to be success in marketplace. In any market there is important information that cannot share with competitors because in that case there will be no competitive advantage and everyone being copies their ideas. Secondly, by limiting information sharing, everyone can protect their critical data from misuse. It is really vital for some companies and research center to limit sharing information such as nuclear research center. (90 words)

    In my opinion only critical information and business data cannot share without any limitation. Other information can be useful for everyone. (21 words)

    In conclusion, some people believe maximum data sharing is necessary in the modern world, others include me, prefer to limit information sharing in the competitive world. (26 words)

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    • admin
      admin says:

      پاراگراف های اصلی شما زیر 100 واژه هستند. از دفعه بعدی بعد از اصلاح فیدبک دریافت خواهید کرد.

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  15. Javadeb
    Javadeb says:

    Grammar examples:
    Present perfect simple:
    We have gone to the beach many times.
    It has rained a lot this month.
    She has lost her wedding ring.
    He has broken his leg.
    They have written three letters already.
    Present perfect continuous:
    I have been watching the movie since 3 o’clock.
    He has been sleeping for five hours.
    She has not been studying her books for five days.
    They have been using their car for five years.
    Kids have not playing games for three hours.
    Past perfect simple:
    He had lent me his book.
    I had lost my camera.
    He had not finished his work.
    I had not visited him.
    They had bought a new car.
    Past perfect continuous:
    She had been watching the movie for two hours.
    They had been running their business since 1988.
    He had not been eating vegetables for three years.
    You had not been reading this book for ten months.
    I had been applying for jobs since December 2015.

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  16. elham. Khanjan
    elham. Khanjan says:

    Maximum sharing
    # increasing the knowledge of others
    #help to progress

    limiting sharing
    #more security
    #economic benefits

    In today’s world,information has a lot of value .although ,some people belive that should share their data or knowladge ,others try to keep data to themselves.This essay will discusse both of these viewpoint.
    sharing information makes increasing the knowledge of others.First of all ,when one’s knowledge grow society’s culture and dicipline will grow.It is belived the major progress in developed countries is that they share their information and experience with everyone.scondly,sharing information help to progress.there are people who share knowledge with others, they are people who push the world forward,because when the data or results from their work are avaliable ,others can extend the finding or even invent something new.from one side ,data and knowledge bring a lot of power with itself.
    Do not share information makes people to be in more security.First of all,there are several reasons for belief that some information ,if widely shared,could makes a lot of detrimental effects.For instance ,government research on newnuclear technologies,if this information disclosed could lead to national security threats.scondly,some argue that enhancing information is not easy to share with othersfreely,as money and time werespent that such data gained.Also people who work for organazations have salary and none of them work freely
    I belive that sharing ideas and information with others help us to progress more in our lives.I personally believe that sharing information is beneficial of course with the right copyrigt statement.
    In conclusion ,there are two types of people .some people think it is alright to share the data with the world,while others disagree.although it is fine to keep some information to yourself.(271 words)

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      دو پاراگراف اصلی شما به ترتیب 89 و 77 واژه هست که کاملا مغایر با چک لیست هستند. بارها تذکر دادیم که پاراگراف های اصلی نباید زیر 100 واژه باشند.

      اصلاح کنید زیر همین کامنت ارسال بفرمایید.

      ضمنا کوشش کنید تا حد ممکن از جمله های ساده که مطئن هستید درست هستند استفاده کنید. در صورتی که شک دارید در دیکشنری و گوگل بررسی کنید یا در سایت بپرسید. تک تک جمله ها را گوگل کنید تا دست کم از اشتباه های بزرگ و آشکار آن ها اطلاع پیدا کنید.

      نوشتن سریع و بدون تحقیق و بررسی یک رایتینگ تاثیری بر پیشرفت شما نخواهد داشت.

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  17. Javadeb
    Javadeb says:

    New vocabulary:
    Pour: It poured all night.
    Soaking: A soaking wet towel.
    Drizzle: The rain isn’t too bad – it’s only drizzling.
    Bitterly cold: It’s bitterly cold in Russia.
    Chilly: The bathroom is a bit chilly.
    Mild: A mild climate.
    Mist: He vanished into the mist.
    Frost: Young plants are often killed by the frost.
    Breeze: The lamp swung in the breeze.
    Gale: A gale was blowing from the east.
    Gradual: Education is a gradual process.
    Famine: Many people die of famine every year.
    Collapse: The storm caused the collapse of the roof.
    Death toll: The death toll of the plane crash has risen to 83.
    Considerable: I have saved a considerable amount of money.
    Crucial: He wasn’t there at the crucial moment.
    Symptom: Fever is a symptom of many illness.
    Lozenge: She offered me a lozenge when the dust irritated my throat.
    Blend: Leave the sauce to allow the flavors to blend together.
    Sprain: I fell down the steps and sprained my ankle.
    Inconsiderate: It was inconsiderate of you not to call.
    Vanish: All your troubles will vanish away when he returns safety.
    Hallucination: High temperatures can cause hallucination.
    Slurred: He was slurring her words as if he was drunk.
    Replenish: Allow me to replenish your glass.
    Mince: Minced lamb.
    Peel: Please peel an apple for me.
    Chop: He went out to chop some more wood for the fire.
    Stir: give the mixture a good stir.
    Intentionally: I would never intentionally hurt anyone.
    Decent: I need a decent night’s sleep.
    Affluent: Japan is an affluent country.
    Accustomed: He was well accustomed to hard work.
    Fulfillment: After many years, his plans have come to fulfillment.

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  18. Javadeb
    Javadeb says:

    The amount of the information someone shares is a significant issue to all people. Although some people believe all the information about research, business and education, others including me prefer limited sharing. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (40 words)
    Some people think that all the information should be shared. First of all, sharing information helps other researchers to improve their research. When someone shares their research results, it would prevent other researchers from making possible mistakes and it would lead to more reliable outcomes. Also this would result in development and innovation in science. Secondly, sharing unlimited information would save time, energy and money in the business world. When someone wants to start a business, he/she can use the existing ideas and expand his /her business and save money by not spending huge sums of money on testing marketing strategies. (101 words)
    On the other hand some people prefer limited sharing of information. First of all, limited sharing of data would prevent the misuse of some information. If some people have access to some information it would be dangerous. For example, not fully sharing information about nuclear experiments will prevent nuclear bombs being built by the terrorists. Secondly, sharing limited information has economic benefits for businessmen/businesswomen. It means manufacturers make more profit by sharing limited information. For example, if a company doesn’t share full information, it can sell its information for big sums of money. (93 words)
    I think limited sharing is better because some people may abuse some information and use them in negative ways. (19 words)
    In conclusion, some people believe that unlimited information should be shared and some others prefer limited sharing of information but I think limited sharing information is safer. (27 words)

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  19. Javadeb
    Javadeb says:

    Maximum sharing
    #improve research
    #save time, energy and money
    Limited sharing
    #misuse of information
    #economic benefits

    Maximum sharing
    #important for going forward
    #promotes trust
    Limited sharing
    #improve competition
    #more safety

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    • admin
      admin says:

      ایده پردازی شما مشکل خاصی نداره.

      البته این مورد گنگ هست
      #promotes trust

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  20. بهشته
    بهشته says:

    The importance of pros and cons of sharing information is not obvious in most of the societies. Although some people believe in limiting sharing information, others including me have the opposite viewpoint. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay. (42)
    Some people believe in limiting sharing information. First of all, with sharing information we will face with abusing that. Some vital information will be accessible for people who are not trusty and they can use this information to harm systems or people and it is difficult to trace them. Secondly, every producer has to earn money for creating knowledge. The number of people who are able to generate knowledge is limited. Actually they devote their entire life to searching in their chosen field and they have to make money on this way. The society has to respect their ownership right and protect their right with limiting sharing information. (108)
    Some others believe in maximum sharing information. First of all, with sharing information the money and time will be saved. Every day around the world many students and scholars research topics which have been down by others before. With flow of information they will spend their time and money on new subjects. Secondly, the educational system will be progress. Much useful information will be accessible in the society. Thus students in college or university will use this valuable information easily. With this sharing not only the educational system will progress but also the common knowledge in the society will improve. (99)
    I personally believe in maximum sharing information for all because it will make many positive changes that we have been fortunate to experience. (23)
    In conclusion, there are two different viewpoints some people believe in limiting sharing information. Others believe that the maximum sharing information is more beneficial. (24)

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  21. Mojgan B_Even TIr
    Mojgan B_Even TIr says:

    درود
    با توجه به اینکه الان تمرینات جلسه پنجم و ششم باهم اعلام شدن، نحوه تحویل تمرینها و دریافت فیدبک به چه صورتی هست؟
    مثلاً برای اسپکینگ ها میتونیم همه رو با هم و روز جمعه ارسال کنیم؟ یا اینکه باید در دو پارت ارسال بشه؟ بیشتر منظورم برای فیدبک ها هست.
    یا برای رایتینگ، می تونیم ایده پردازی و مقدمه رو تا چهارشنبه ارسال کنم و متن کامل رو تا شنبه ارسال کنیم یا اینکه باید رایتینگ کامل ارسال بشه؟
    برای من، اینکه یه فیدبک روی ایده پردازی و مقدمه بگیرم خیلی کمکم میکنه تا متن بهتری رو بنویسم.
    ممنون

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      برای ویس ها به تعداد روزها تقسیم بفرمایید و ارسال کنید.

      ما هرگز فیدبک جداگانه روی مقدمه نداریم و یک جلسه استثنا بود.

      رایتینگ ها جلسه به جلسه اعلام میشه نه یکجا. تسک 2 روزهای شنبه اعلام میشه و تسک 1 روزهای 4 شنبه و تا پیش از آغاز جلسه بعد زمان ارسال هست همونطور که قبلا توضیح داده بودیم.

      عملا هیچ اتفاق تازه ای نیفتاده.

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  22. امین سپهری
    امین سپهری says:

    Dear teacher,
    According to the last negotiation with you about sending previous sessions writing task, I’ll send the third session’s writing task.
    Thank you

    Tourism enters a new stage of its life. Nowadays places, where have a hard situation, has its own tourism. Although visiting bad situation places has its advantages, also it has disadvantages. In this essay, we will discuss both of these views.
    Visiting places with a hard and difficult situation has some benefits. Firstly, when a tourist wants to visit such these places, he/she will prepare him/herself for living in this situation. He/she would learn things which are really important to live like first aid, how to make a fire, or of course how to fight or scape. Secondly, tourists also would be thankful for the facilities that they already have in their daily life and can make the most of them. They may also change their point of view and be more thrifty, so they use these resources more efficiently.
    Places with the hard situation have disadvantages too. Firstly, because of in these places there is low or no population, there aren’t first initial facilities for life like water r food. So, it’s really dangerous to visit such these places without efficient and appropriate equipment. Secondly, there is a high risk of diseases or even death, because there are not good hospitals and healthcare centers in these places. So, it’s important for tourists to take care of themselves and be aware of this issue.
    In conclusion, there is both benefits and disadvantages of visiting places with a hard situation like Sahara or Antarctica. Tourists should be aware of both these issues and then get the right decision.
    257 words

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      • امین سپهری
        امین سپهری says:

        استاد ببخشید، (یه خورده آمار کلاسا از دستم در رفته) شما تو کلاس جلسه سوم موضوع tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult رو برای آموزشِ نحوه ی نوشتن نتیجه گیری مطرح کردین و من در مورد همین موضوع نوشتم متاسفانه. پس کامنت بالایی من اشتباهه کلا. و من رایتینگ جلسه سوم رو میفرستم.

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        • امین سپهری
          امین سپهری says:

          Third session writing task

          Method and place of education are one of the parents’ concerns. Although some people think it’s better to educate boys and girls in separate schools, others including me, believe that educating boys and girls together has more advantages. This essay will discuss both of these views.
          In some countries which have Islamic religious, there are separate gender schools. First of all, in separate schools there are fewer distraction factors because all students are in the same gender and they don’t want to attract anybody’s attention, so they can focus on their education, not other students. Secondly, in separate schools environment is stressless. For example, in these schools students can ask their questions freely and don’t have afraid of laughed by other students, because they are in the same gender, but in mixed schools, this issue may have a bad effect in learning.
          In most countries, schools are mixed and both genders are educating in one place. First of all, in these schools, students performance and learning rate are higher, because students have an unwritten competition with each other. So it makes students study harder and get better marks in school. Secondly, students can get to know the opposite gender better and more practical. They can work together and know in which way they can improve their connection with each other. This issue is very important and effective in everyone’s life because all of us need to know how to create a good connection with others.
          As far as I concerned, educating in mixed schools has more benefit to students. Students can know how to connect with the opposite gender and how to handle them better in their future life. Also, because of attracting the opposite gender’s attraction, they will study harder and better, which help them to get better grades.
          In conclusion, Some people believe educating in separate schools are better, but others including me, believe mixed schools have more advantages.
          319 words

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          • admin
            admin says:

            درود

            رایتینگ این جلسه در مورد sharing information هست. ضمنا در بالای صفحه هر جلسه تاپیک رایتینگ قرار داده میشه.

            این رایتینگ باید تا ساعت 12 ظهر ارسال بشه برای دریافت فیدبک.

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            • امین سپهری
              امین سپهری says:

              طبق صحبتی که من با شما در تلگرام داشتم، شما فرمودین میتونم رایتینگ های جلسات قبل رو بفرستم و در صورتی که مشکل بزرگی داشت، شما لطف میکنین و فیدبک میدین. و البته ذکر کردین که قبلا بارها فرمودین که در صورت عدم ارسال به موقع هم فیدبک دریافت نخواهم کرد.

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  23. waleid raissi
    waleid raissi says:

    Maximum sharing
    #increasing Awareness
    #Getting exprience
    #rapid progress

    #limited sharing
    #Better management
    #More concentration on purposes
    #avoid waisting time
    #financial benefits

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    • admin
      admin says:

      این مورد بی ارتباط هست
      #Getting exprience

      طبق توضیحاتی که دادیم میایست در هر طرف فقط 2 ساپورت وجود داشته باشه. در جلسات بعدی رعایت بفرمایید.

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  24. بهشته
    بهشته says:

    ايده پردازي
    maximum sharing
    #progress in educational system
    #improving common knowledge in society
    limiting sharing
    #abusing information
    #producer have to earn money.

    ايده پردازي دوم
    maximum sharing
    #save money and time
    # reduce false studies(mistake)
    limiting sharing
    #compete in producing valuable information
    #data ownership

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      این مورد رو متوجه نشدم
      reduce false studies(mistake

      این مورد هم خیلی کلی هست
      #data ownership

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