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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷
کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷
صفحه پیش رو مربوط به دوره فشرده آیلتس روزهای زوج شنبه ۴ شنبه ساعت ۴ تا ۶ که در تاریخ ۱ دی ماه ۱۳۹۷ آغاز میشود می باشد. در این صفحه تکالیف و توضیحات وارد شده و زبان آموزان رایتینگ ها و پرسش های خود را در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد خواهند کرد و از این راه با مدرس در تماس خواهند بود.
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۲۴
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 121 to 150 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 58 to 68
Tactics for listening Expanding Kill
Open Forum 3 Unit 5 6 7 8 9 10
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 5 Unit 6
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Review از این صفحه ببینید
Common Mistakes at IELTS Advanced Kill
IELTS Objective Intermediate Kill فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
Writing
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۲۲ و ۲۳
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 91 to 120 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 54 to 57
Tactics for listening Expanding Unit 16 to 19
Open Forum 3 Unit 1 2 3 4
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 4 part 2 3
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 23 24 از این صفحه ببینید
Common Mistakes at IELTS Advanced Unit 6 7 8 9 10
IELTS Objective Intermediate Page 56 to 80 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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تاپیک رایتینگ تسک ۱
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پاسخ مدرس(نسخه طولانی ۲۳۴ کلمه ای)
There are two blueprints showing a current university sport center and a new one with some changes for the future.
Overall, it seems the center is going to transform radically and much more indoor space for doing sport along with more facilities will be made available for students.
At the present time, there is a 25-meter swimming pool in the middle of the layout, which is surrounded by a reception in the south, some seats in the east and a changing room in the west. All these will remain untouched in the second plan but a gym in the north of this swimming pool will expand to the east and will double in size.
The eastern Outdoor courts in the current plan will give its place to two dance studios on the eastern end of the complex and a large sports hall adjacent to the seats of the swimming pool. However, in the western side, a leisure pool with a random shape will replace the Outdoor courts.
In both maps there is an entrance to this sport complex in the south. While currently this entrance will immediately lead to the reception and it is limited to swimming pool and its facilities, in the second layout its access will expand to a cafe in the east and a sports shop in the west along with two changing rooms on both ends of the complex. (۲۳۴ words)
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پاسخ مدرس(نسخه استاندارد ۲۰۲ کلمه ای)
There are two blueprints showing a current university sport center and a new one with some changes for the future.
Overall, it seems the center is going to transform radically and much more indoor space along with more facilities will be available.
Currently, there is a 25-meter swimming pool in the middle of the layout, which is surrounded by a reception in the south, some seats in the east and a changing room in the west. In the second plan, there is a gym in the north of this swimming pool which will expand to the east.
The eastern Outdoor courts will give its place to two dance studios on the eastern end of the complex and a large sports hall adjacent to the swimming pool. However, in the western side, a leisure pool will replace the Outdoor courts.
In both maps there is an entrance in the south. While currently this entrance will immediately lead to the reception and it is limited to swimming pool and its facilities, in the second layout its access will expand to a cafe in the east and a sports shop in the west along with two changing rooms on both ends of the complex. (۲۰۲ words)
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Writing Topic Task 2
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۲۰ و ۲۱
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 66 to 90 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 49 to 53
Tactics for listening Expanding Unit 11 to 15
Open Forum 2 Unit 9 10 11 12
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 3 part 3 Unit 4 part 1
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 21 22 از این صفحه ببینید
Common Mistakes at IELTS Advanced Unit 1 2 3 4 5
IELTS Objective Intermediate Page 36 to 55 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۸ و ۱۹
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 36 to 65 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 45 to 48
Tactics for listening Expanding Unit 6 7 8 9 10
Open Forum 2 Unit 6 7 8
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 3 Part 1 part 2
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 19 20 از این صفحه ببینید
Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate kill
IELTS Objective Intermediate Page 8 to 35 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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Writing Topic:
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تسک ۱
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۷
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 1 to 35 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 41 to 44
Tactics for listening Developing Kill
Tactics for listening Expanding Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Open Forum 2 Unit 3 4 5
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 2 Part 2 part 3
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 17 18 از این صفحه ببینید
Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 19 to 25
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۵ و ۱۶ ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 37 to 47 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 36 37 38 39 40
Tactics for listening Developing Unit 17 18 19 20 21 22
Open Forum 1 Kill
Open Forum 2 Unit 1 2
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 Part 3 and Unit 2 Part 1
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 15 16 از این صفحه ببینید
Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 11 to 18
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
۱تسک
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس به این سوال در سطح نمره ۷
The line graph illustrates the power produced by four different sources in France over a period of 32 years from 1980 to 2012.
Overall, it seems that over this period the nuclear power has produced electricity much more than any other source in this country and other sources of power production have negligible shares by comparison and all remained relatively stable.
At the beginning of the period in 1980, thermal energy produced about 120 Terawatt hours (TW-h) of electricity. This figure started to fall and alongside hydroelectric, it remained constant at the level of 50 TWh till the end of the period in 2012.
Nuclear energy produced about 75 TW-h of electricity in 1980 but showed a marked increase during the next two decades and peaked at 430 of TW-h in 2005, before fluctuating at the same level up to the end of the period in 2012.
As it appears, renewables did not contribute any electricity up to 2000 when it started to grow very slowly. By 2012, the renewables produced roughly 40 TW-h of electricity and remained the least contributing source of power in France during given period.
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ویدئوی آموزشی و نمونه پاسخ دوم برای این سوال
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تاپیک رایتینگ
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۳ و ۱۴ ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 26 to 36 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 32 33 34 35
Tactics for listening Developing Unit 11 to 16
Open Forum 1 Unit 8 9 10
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 Part 1 2
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 13 14 از این صفحه ببینید
Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 1 to 10
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱۳ و ۱۴ ام
تسک ۱
Cambridge IELTS 12 Academic Test ۳
پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷٫۵
Cambridge IELTS 12 Academic Test ۳ Sample Answer
The chart illustrates six categories based on the frequency of fast food consumption in USA in three different years over a decade between 2003 and 2013.
It was most common for American people to consume fast food once a week or once or twice a month since about 30 percent of the population is reported to have these habits in 2003. In 2013, however, this number decreased by about 5 percent for the former and increased by a similar amount for the latter.
In 2003, those who had fast food several times a week and few time annually constituted slightly over and under 15 percent of the population respectively. A decade later in 2013, the first group seems to had increased by a few percent before falling closer to 15 percent and the second group, despite showing a few percent of increase, finally stabilized at its starting level. Only a negligible percentage (almost 5 percent) of Americans ate either everyday or never and both showed a downward trend to form an even smaller percentage.
Overall, eating every week and every month seems to be the most popular eating habits for fast foods during this period and it appears in all categories there is a tendency to remain unchanged.
(Total 208 words)
نمونه پاسخ ها را اینجا ببینید.
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۱ و ۱۲ ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 16 to 25 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 27 28 29 30 31
Tactics for listening Developing Unit 7 to 10
Open Forum 1 Unit 5 6 7
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 8 9 10
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 11 12 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱۱ و ۱۲ ام
تسک ۱
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تسک ۲
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رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط مدرس
Thanks to remarkable improvements in medical science people live much longer than a century ago. Although there are benefits in this development, the downside should not be overlooked. This essay will examine both of these sides. (36 words)
There are advantages when people live longer than before. First of all, the average years that a citizen is active increases when they live longer. In countries where the life expectancy is higher, employees retire later in their lives and work a couple of years more. This creates the opportunity for them to contribute more to their country and the society will directly benefit from these extra years of work. Additionally, when people grow older, they make wiser decisions. For instance, those who enjoy their 60s or 70s are less likely to take financial risks and tend to lead a more stable and predictable lives, creating a peaceful and calm environment. (111 words)
Living longer, however, has inevitable drawbacks too. First of all, those who are about to retire and live on pension are understandably more dependent on others to live their lives. From medical care to emotional support of their loved ones, they make reasonable demands more than they have ever had. Secondly, living longer may create unemployment since longer they stay employed less vacancies will be left for fresh workforce to be filled. Secondly, a sizable chunk of older population may resist change. Elderly are renown for preferring the status quo, so when their share of the population increases, their preferences or votes may not be a favorable one for youngsters who desire transformation and innovation. (115 words)
In conclusion, I personally believe there is a trade-off between favorable and unfavorable consequence of an extended life expectancy and neither one outweighs the other. (25 words)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۹ و ۱۰ ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 1 to 15 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 22 23 24 25 26
Tactics for listening Developing Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6
Open Forum 1 Unit 1 2 3 4
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 4 5 6 7
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 9 10 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۹ و ۱۰ ام
تسک ۱
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تسک ۲
نمونه پاسخ مدرس را اینجا ببینید.
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۷ و ۸ ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 81 to 110 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 17 18 19 20 21
Tactics for listening Basic Kill
Real Speaking and Listening 2 Kill
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 1 2 3
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 7 8 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ -تاپیک رایتینگ جلسه ۷ و ۸ ام
تسک ۱
نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۶٫۵
The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.
In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90 in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.
At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.
The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.
Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to diminish and at the final year all these categories had very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷
The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.
The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.
Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.
Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)
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نمونه پاسخ اگزمینر در سطح نمره ۹
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۵ و ۶ ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 51 to 80 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 12 13 14 15 16
Tactics for listening Basic unit 13 to 19
Real Speaking and Listening 2 unit 1 2 3 4 5
Select Readings Elementary Unit 8 9 10
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 5 6 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۵ و ۶ ام
تسک ۱
نمونه پاسخ مدرس
The graph shows the average weekly hours spent by schoolchildren on two different leisure activities at home over a period of nine years from 2000 to 2008.
Schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 years old spent less than 4 hours per week on computer in 2000. This number increased considerably over the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. At the beginning of the same period (2000), the time spent on watching TV was 21 hours per week, which remained the same over the nest three years. Next, it fell rapidly from 21 to 15 hours weekly in 2004.
Schoolchildren continued to spend more time on computer from 2004 and 2008 and the number reached a peak of just under 22 hours. At the same time despite a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006, the time spent on watching TV remained stable at the level of almost 15 hours per week.
Overall, While TV was much more popular than computer at the beginning of this period, it seems the time schoolchildren spent on them has reversed. (۱۷۵ words)
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷ تا ۷٫۵
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۳ و ۴ ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 21 to 50 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 8 9 10 11
Tactics for listening Basic unit 8 to 12
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Kill
Select Readings Elementary Unit 4 5 6 7
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 3 4 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۳ و ۴ ام
فقط تسک ۱
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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۶ تا ۶٫۵
Two maps depict a tropical island of a few hundreds square meters before and after the construction of some leisure facilities for tourists.
It appears that two sites for tourists accommodation have been built, which are connected to each other and to other areas with footpath. There is also a reception in the middle of the island, which is accessible by a vehicle track from the southern part, where a pier is constructed for some pleasure boats. The other significant change is a single restaurant in the northern part of the island that can be also accessed by vehicles. The beach in the western side can be used for swimming after this development. There are also some palm trees in the western and eastern regions of the island, which seem to be untouched by this change.
Overall, the development which appears to be more concentrated on the western side and the center, has dramatically changed the face of the island in a way that it can accommodate a few hundreds of tourists at the same time. (177 Words)
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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷٫۵
Two maps show the construction of facilities in an island. One map show the situation before and one map after the construction.
In the first map there is not much for possible tourists to enjoy except a swimming area in the left side of the island. How ever in the second map there is a restaurant in the middle of the island on the left close to a reception. There is a vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. Other important change is the construction of several accommodation sites for tourists not far from the reception. Other important facilities for enjoyment of tourists are the boats for sailing in the southern side of the island,where a pier can be seen and a beach for swimming in the left side.
Overall, it seems the island is totally different after the construction of tourist facilities and especially the western and middle parts can be a good place for tourists to enjoy their stay. (167 Words)
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پاسخ ارایه شده در پایان کتاب در سطح نمره ۶
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۷ نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره
The changes that all people go through during different stages of their lives can directly affect how happy they consider themselves. Although some people argue that teenage years are the time we grade ourselves the happiest, others maintain that adult life is actually the happiest stages of the whole life. In this essay I will examine the issue and provide reasons for both of these viewpoints.7
Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times. First of all, they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Secondly, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. Spending time on activities that they truly love can create a sense of satisfaction for them A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.(121 words)
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. First of all, the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy is mentioned as an important reason. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Secondly, adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step.(112 words)
I personally believe that the happiest time of life can not be rigidly attributed to certain age or stage of life and can be greatly influenced by myriad external factors. However, since teenagers normally take everything easy and have a simplistic and prettier picture of the world around them, they can be deemed to have a less challenging lives with more to enjoy and less to worry about.
All in all, while some point out that less responsibility in adolescents’ lives can be translated to more happiness, adult lives have considerable potential for one to lead a happy and fruitful life.
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نمونه پاسخ اگزمینر در سطح نمره ۹
کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۲ ام
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Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 13 to 20 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 6 7
Tactics for listening Basic unit 5 6 7
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 5 6 7 8
Select Readings Elementary Unit 3
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 2 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۲ ام
فقط ایده پردازی و مقدمه
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه اول
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Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 12 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 1 2 5
Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3 4
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 1 2 3 4
Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 2
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?
More Facilities and Services
# More Demand
# More Budget
Better situation for work
# More companies and factories
# More income
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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط مدرس
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There are more facilities and services in a big city compared to a small town. First of all, there is more budget in a big city and as a result more services are available. This budget makes it possible to build many more clinics and hospitals or large universities with modern laboratories. Secondly, many more people live in a big city and they need many things for their everyday lives. They need transportation and thousands of schools for their children. They also need parks and cinemas to spend their free time after their work and because of these needs, facilities should be available for them.(104 words)
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Big cities provide a better situation for job. First of all, it is easier to have a higher salary in big cities because companies and factories are bigger and they need more managers and supervisors. It may take ten years for an employee to go to next level at work in a small town but in a big city it may take only a few years. Secondly, there are more companies and factories. These places need people to do the work and as a result many more people get the chance of finding a job. Many companies need also managers and specialists and not only simple workers, so situation will be better for educated people too.(116 words)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس دی ۱۳۹۷ – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس
نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها
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۲۰۰ نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)
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بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS
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چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2
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آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته
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همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!
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۱۷۷۰بازدید
Writing Task 2
Laws are needed
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# acceptable way
Laws are not needed
# more stress
# difficult to monitor
Nowadays, waste is one of the most substantial issues around the world. Although some people argue that there is not enough household waste recycled and the main responsibilities for government are to make laws on recycling, others believe that government should not enforce recycling laws on households. I will discuss both viewpoints.
To begin with, there are some merits to enforce laws on recycling. First of all, it is the easy solution to force people to think carefully before throwing things out with the garbage. In fact, if recycling is made a legal requirement more and more people will definitely adopt that practice. Because there are certainly some people who will act only if they are bound by the law. Secondly, it is an acceptable way in many countries and has brought an unpredictable result. In many countries have introduced laws asking people to recycle their household waste. If people want to break the laws, they will have to pay heavy fines. Therefore, they try to make sure that all recyclables are put in correct bins.
Afterward, if recycling is not made a legal requirement there are some demerits. First of all, although stricter rules and regulations can be imposed to mandate recycling, such laws could be more stress for people. Clearly, this enforcement of laws may cause people to resent them and even react them that they do not nothing. Secondly, if recycling is made a legal requirement, it finds difficult to monitor weather recycling household waste is made a common task or not. In fact, there is not any means of identification to detect the people who do not separate wastes. There are many who still not separate wastes into degradable and non-degradable bins.
In conclusion, some people say that recycling is not made a legal requirement, while others including me maintain that the government should enforce recycling laws on households.
The charts compare changes in the shares of other languages which were spoken in addition to English by British students at one university in England between 2000 to 2010.
Overall, while shares of three items experienced rises, there were declines in two items, as well as no change in the remaining one. Moreover, Spanish contributed the largest proportion of other languages spoken, whereas German remained stable.
Speaking Spanish accounted for the most significant proportion of languages in 2000 (30%) and increased by 5%. In comparison, French was as large as Another language (15%), but whereas the share of French dropped by 5%, the percentage of Another language had grown by 2010, reaching 20%.
The percentage of students who spoke only English was 20% before halving in 2010. In contrast, the share of German was initially as high as that of Two other languages (10%), but while the Two other languages increased by 5%, German remained unchanged.
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Writing Task 1
A glance at the graph provided reveals the proportion of households in owning and renting accommodation in two countries England and Wales during the period from 1918 to 2011.
Increasing from approximately 22 percent in 1918 to 50 percent in 1971, the proportion of these families that owned accommodation gradually rose nearly 70 percent in 1991. Moreover, it reminded at 70 percent in 2001. The figure, however, slightly declined approximately 64 percent in 2011.
The household in rented house, meanwhile, demonstrated the highest percent approximately 78 percent in 1918. However, this proportion brought a sustained decline in this figure after high. The figures, moreover, plunged to somewhere over a little bit 30 percent between 1991 and 2001. Afterward, it saw a rapid climb in the percentage about 35 percent in 2011.
Overall, it is interesting to note that the information supplied that the rented houses showed a significant decrease while there was an increase in the percentage of owned houses.
Writing Task 2
Agree
Better place in society
# Better job
# Less problems with law
More peaceful life
# more friends
# Enjoying celebrations and events.
These days, it can be seen that a vast amount of people choose to migrate to other countries due to many targets. Some people consider that it is the immigrants’ responsibilities to adapt to the rules and culture in the host country. Personally I totally agree with this point of view.
To begin with, people migrate in pursuit of better place for themselves and their families. First of all, to succeed in better job, the newcomers should avoid the culture conflicts especially in the workplace and should consider the adaptable change. Because job prospects often vary from one country to another. Besides, the more familiar migrants are, the better the job they will obtain. Secondly, for the sake of declining the problem with law, it is the immigrants’ duties to obey the rules and customs regardless of the difference to the law in their home country. Because, some rules may permit in some countries while they prohibit in others. As a result of being familiar with rules, immigrants find it easy to adapt to their life in the host county.
Afterwards, immigrants need to learn and respect the societal custom and cultural of their adopted country in order to have a peaceful life. First of all, the key factor of having peaceful life is that migrants make a relationship with local inhabitants in order to have more friends. As a result, it is crucial that immigrants learn native language and adapt themselves into a new environment. Secondly, there is no better opportunity to enjoy celebrations and events than adapting into a new environment. A pleasant celebration atmosphere can make immigrants happy with their lives. Besides, by attending events, they can integrate and respect the cultures of local inhabitants.
In conclusion, I believe that new immigrants need to adapt and integrate into new country. It is always the immigrants’ responsibilities to show their respect to the local cultures and obey the new regulations.
مقدمه به شیوه تدریس شده نوشته نشده است
پیشرفت منطقی و گام به گام از ایده اصلی به ساپورت ها خیلی مناسب نیست
پاراگراف نتیجه گیری با شیوه تدریس شده نوشته نشده است
Agree
Good condition for living
# improve the level of safety
# make friends
Monetary reasons
# get a job
# reduce the cost of living
The number of people who migrate to other countries is increasing these days. I strongly agree that they should not follow their own traditions when they relocate to foreign countries. This essay will discuss this point.
There are good conditions for living when immigrants don’t continue their traditions. First of all, they can improve their level of safety in adopted countries in many aspects. For instance, there is racial discrimination in each country and such groups carry out a wave of violent attacks on minority groups. Furthermore, religious discrimination is one of other points that happen for immigrants if they defend and spread their religion. Secondly, they can make friends easily in their new environment using local culture due to their similarities to native inhabitants. As a result, they have better place in the society and they have a good communication.
There are monetary reasons for people who don’t maintain their traditions in adopted countries. First of all, getting a job with traditional culture which belongs to a different country is rather difficult and immigrants cannot adapt themselves to new situation in the workplace. Moreover, law can put tough restriction for their culture and even their behavior in the society. Secondly, they have different appearance that shows they come from other countries and all these differences effect on the cost of living. For example, the sellers buy their goods and products with a higher price compare with local people owing to their attitude. Most of them think immigrants don’t have much information about the prices.
In conclusion, I personally believe that accepting new culture and adapting with new laws in a new country can play a significant role in having a good, happy and peaceful life.
۲۸۶ words
مقدمه به شیوه تدریس شده نوشته نشده است.
در این رایتینگ دیدگاه شخصی پرسیده نشده.
توضیح پاراگراف ها منطقی است اما گاهی تمرکز بر موضوع و خط منطقی از یک جمله به جمله دیگر کمرنگ شده.
استاد وقتی میگه
do you agree or disagree
نباید نظر بدیم؟
حتما باید بگه
what is your own opinion
؟؟؟
فایلی که در مورد اونها سوالات رایتینگ صحبت کردم رو بشنوید چند کامنت قبل ارسال شده.
بله. ممنونم
نمره رایتینگم رو میشه بفرمایید. ازتون خواسته بودم قبلا
باید زمانی که رایتینگ رو ارسال میکنی درخواست کنی چون من نمیتونم دوباره با دقت بخونم زمان کلاس شما نیست.
These days, great number of people are relocating to abroad compared the past. I strongly believe that immigrants should give up their old methods and accept domestic customs and acceptable behaviors, considering local laws and customs.
Nowadays, there are a lot of law which are different from country to country and are accepted by their people and governments and immigrant should follow and understand them. Newcomers have less issues in their everyday lives such as driving rules since they adapt to domestic laws, which can result in more peaceful life. Also, settlers can avoid minor crimes which are not offence and are normal operations in their home countries. This lead newcomers to face less challenges. For example, drinking alcohol is a crime in Iran and some other Islamic countries while in other nations isn`t forbidden.
Integrating into community also has favorable effects on immigrant`s life since they learn and respect the social custom and culture of host country. They can find more local resident friends and communicate with them as they learn native language, as well as they acknowledge beliefs, traditions and old culture. This may cause them to understand native people`s behavior and language, which can contribute to happier life. It can also result in better place in society and good job.
Some may argue that integrating into a society whose culture is so different from settler`s own can be harmful for cultures as they forget their old methods and traditions, which can destroy the cultures. However, there are many other ways that can protect and extend those.
In conclusion, I believe that newcomers are positively impacted by accepting local customs and common behaviors of the society considering integrating into community and leaving their old beliefs as they observe the law and respect customs.
Total Words: 295
مقدمه از شیوه تدریس شده پیروی نمیکند.
طرف دوم سوال نباید بررسی شود.
پاراگراف دوم از یک روند منطقی پیروی نمیکند و گسسته تر از پاراگراف دوم هست.
استاد ولی توی مایندست که مال کمبریجه گفته باید طرف مقابل رو هم یه گریزی بزنی و ردش کنی
قبلا راجع به این موضوع صحبت شده.
ممنون.ممکنه نمره رایتینگ رو براساس چرتا بند اسکور بگید؟
روی رایتینگ تسک ۲ بعدی یک نمره کلی میتونید داشته باشید. اگر روی ۴ تا بخواید میتونه بجای فیدبک شما باشه.
استاد سلام. وقت بخیر
یک سوالی داشتم. تایپ تمرین لیسنینگ در صفحه ۳۹ کتاب objective intermediate استاندارد هست؟
تا به حال این مدلی ندیده بودم که با جای خالی یک باکس داده بشه.
درود
شما به عنوان استاندارد در نظر بگیر و انجام بده. ذهنت رو با اینکه استاندارد هست یا نیست درگیر نکن و روی تست تمرکز کن.
سلام روزبخیر
استاد عزیز
اگر امکان دارد لینک یا فایل دسته بندی نمونه سوالات مربوط به رایتینگ را در اختیارمان بگذارید.
ممنون
درود به شما و روز به خیر
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Agree
Better place in society
#Better job
#Less problems with law
More peaceful life
#more friends
#Enjoying celebrations and events.
Writing Task 1
The two maps given reveal the different way to get into a city hospital over a three-year period from 2007 to 2010.
As is observed from the first map, there was a main road named hospital road running from the south to the north. Along the hospital road, three bus stops were constructed on the both side of this road. There was a car parking area for both staff and public on the east of the hospital road. At the end of this road, the city hospital is located which was surrounded by the ring road.
After the development, in 2010, two roundabouts were constructed at the beginning and the end of the hospital road. On the west side of this road, the preceding bus stops has been transformed into a bus station. On the other side, bus stops and car park were built only for staff car park. At the northeast of the city hospital, public car park was constructed.
Overall, it is obvious that the road access to the city hospital has significantly changed for convenient people especially in parking facilities after the development. However, the city hospital, ring road and city road were remained the same.
This figure illustrated accessibility of a city hospital where patients receive treatments in 2007 and 2010.
In 2007, there is a city hospital in the northern part of the map which is surrounded by ring road in a rectangular shape. In the southern part of the city hospital, the ring road is connected to the hospital road that there are three bus stops. Moreover, there was a car park in the east of the hospital road for staff and public. In 2010, parking of the staff and public separated with building a car park only for public use in the right side of the city hospital.
In 2007, there is an intersection between hospital road and city road after bus stops. In 2010, a bus station created rather than bus stops in the hospital road opposite the staff car park. Two roundabouts were built at the first and end intersections of the hospital road with ring road and city road which both of them are connected to the bus station.
Overall, there were only a parking, ring road, hospital road and city road around the hospital city in 2007, while provided more facilities in 2010.
استاد سلام
وقت بخیر
از بین ژورنال هایی که موجود هست مانند science، nature، readers digest و … کدام رو برای مهارت ریدینگ به اولویت پیشنهاد میکنید.
ممنونم
درود
برای برنامه های فشرده زیر ۶ ماه خیر مگر قبل از خواب برای ۱۰ دقیقه مطالعه بشه و تاثیری بر روی زمان شما نداشته باشه.
کدامیک بهتره ؟
فرقی نداره. مساله جذابیت شخصی برای شماست.
تشکر
Given are two maps illustrating changes of road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
As shown in the maps, in 2007 and 2010, there was a main road which was extended from the south to the north for connecting City Road to City Hospital that named Hospital Road and also City Hospital was surrounded by ring road. In 2007, 6 bus stops were located on both sides of the Hospital Road and car parking area for both staff and public was situated the east of this road and at the south corner of the hospital whereas in 2010, public car parking was separated from staff car park and new public car park was constructed the east of the hospital next to ring road.
In 2010, two roundabouts were constructed at the entrance and the exit of the Hospital Road. Also, in contrast with 2007, the bus stops were replaced by bus station which was connected to two roundabouts and was placed the west of the Hospital Road.
Overall, there was extensive development with regards to access to the hospital and in spite of some significant changes, the dimension of the hospital did not alter.
Total Words: 197
The two maps show a city hospital access to a city provide between 3 years. One map show the road access to a city in 2007 and one map show after the some changed in 2010.
In the first map there is not much for possible patient and staff such as car park and bus station. The north of the map is city hospital and road access a round the city hospital , that’s name is ring road.there is a bus stop to the both side a hospital road and right side the road is car park for staff and public in the middle of map in 2007.how ever, in the second map there is a city hospital top of the map. In 2010constraction the car park right side a city hospital for public used.there is a bus station in the middle of the map on the left close to a hospital road and right side the road is staff car park.the south of the map is round bout with 5 exits to the bus station and hospital road and city road.
Overall,it seems the city hospital roads are totally different after the construction of some changed.
چشم
ممنون از توجهتون
Ending world hunger is one of the greatest challenges of our time. Despite all agriculture development, there is still an enormous number of people around the world who suffer from hunger. In This essay, I will provide the causes of the issue followed by a reasonable solution.
The main reason for the starvation is that the majority of people live below the global poverty line. In other words, They can’t afford their basic needs including food. Being in hunger, as a result, make them physically and mentally weaker and less able to earn money necessarily to escape poverty and hunger. Secondly, War and conflict in society. Countries which are involved in conflict cause distraction and lacking in food for their society. Because earning money in those situations is more difficult and people are less able to supply their needs. For instance, civil war is one of the fundamental factors of hunger in African countries.
There are two effective solutions for the problem of starvation. One way to tackle this is to provide the possibility for education for people who live in poverty. Being able to read and write, count and know a little about science and languages such as French and English is going to be useful for everyone. As a result, With education, people can improve their own conditions in order to have a reasonable income and be protected against poverty and hunger. Another method of dealing with starvation is helping farmers in developing countries to use new technology and progressing at speeds in order to produce more ingredient and solve the issue of hunger.
In conclusion, although agriculture knowledge has been developed significantly, the issue of hunger is still obvious in many countries. It is clear that Solving mentioned issue requires world cooperation.
In new decade, there are many new methods for farming. Although some new methods can be increased foods, others there are many people that they don’t access to enough food. In this essay, I will look at some of the problems of lack of food and how we can be overcome.
These days, we can see that the population has dramatic changes. First of all, some countries have a crisis of population for example india and China have lots of population and government can’t produce enough wheat and corns for more population. This reason has caused most of the population are hungry. Approximately 50% of women are in this group. Secondly, environmental is very sensitive and there isn’t enough quantity land for farming while there are many new methods in farming but there are n’t enough fertilize land for farming. It is very necessary that land able to cultivation if we produce more harvest.
There are some solutions for solving this problem. firstly, the governments should try to control population because some countries have lots of population such as China and India . for example every year lots of food importe to India from far away countries but there is crisis’s food in India. Secondly, the government should be protected of the farmer for cultivation because some farmers don’t have enough land . in every country, there are many lands that the land doesn’t use correctly .some lands located to building .this reason has cause decrease cultivation. wrong politics has caused that we see lots of people are hungry.
To sum up, I think this problem is very complicated and government pay attention and people learn how they use correct land and government protection of farmer.
Reasons:
# capitalism
# job losses (machines and automation)
Solutions:
# produce good and import
# change of agriculture methods
Starving is one of the serious issues around the world. Although there are some progressions in agriculture, many people suffer from starvation. This essay will discuss the reasons and solutions of this problem.
There are countless reasons why many people suffer from starvation, however, some of them are more common than others among countries. First of all, the number of people who lose their jobs is increasing every day and we can hear about these subjects in the news. Industrial innovations such as machines, computers and so on are replaced with workers. Consequently, they haven’t any job and income and then, they don’t able to buy food. Secondly, capitalism control the economic situation around the world and they don’t care about starvation level. For instance, some countries restrict export their extra foods to countries that they are at war.
However, there are practical solutions to solve this issue. First of all, we should change our agriculture methods using agricultural engineering if we consider the lack of enough water resources in many countries and this is especially true for such places that there is severe famine. Moreover, governments can offer rewards for specific proposals to concentrate finding some solutions. Secondly, if countries develop their cultures and people only buy such goods that made in their countries, employment opportunities will certainly improve. Additionally, they can even form business relationships with other countries and export such goods that they can’t provide for their people.
In conclusion, there are many developments in agriculture, while the number of people who face starvation is still numerous.
Writing Task 2
Problem
# be the production cost
# food is wasted by people
Solution
# assist the farmers financially
# raise public awareness about the consequences of discarding
Nowadays, despite the fact that farming methods have made great progress, numerous people are still deprived of the basic needs like food. In this essay I will discuss the main reasons of this case and some viable approach to the problem.
To begin with, there are several reasons why people do not have enough food to eat according to the advance in agriculture. First of all, the main reason for scarcity of food is the production cost involved in agriculture. Many tools and machines used for sowing and harvesting are expensive for the farmers and they raise food prices. As a result, people do not have the purchasing power. Secondly, food is wasted by people on daily basis, which ultimately leads to shortage food for other people. According to bad habits, most people do not completely consume their food and they discard their leftover food to avoid any problems caused by stale food. As result, some people may suffer with hunger pains.
In order to solve the problem, there are many factors which need to be tanking into consideration. First of all, the government should assist the farmers financially to control the prices. The government could offer low interest loans to the farming community for providing advance tools and machines. These facilities will aid farmers to supply quality food for society. Secondly, government can raise public awareness about the consequences of discarding the leftover food. The government can prepare plans targeted at consuming adequate for people. These plan can avoid discarding leftover food.
In conclusion, although some people believe that the progress of agriculture would not create a world without poverty, others including me argue that this situation could be resolved with the appropriate solutions.
سلام روزبخیر
استاد ممنون .
امکان دارد نمونه ایی برای مقدمه و نتیجه گیری برای این مدل تاپیک ها گذاشته شود.
درود
بله ولی خطایی که شما دارید ناشی از بی توجهی به توضیحات و نمونه های قبلی هست. هیچ چیز اسرار آمیزی در این سوال و شیوه نوشتن پاسخ وجود ندارد.
Despite the fact that cultivation strategies have progressed significantly recent decades, providing enough food is a pressing issue for countless number of people. This essay will explore the reasons of this distressing trend and propose practicable solutions. 37
There are reasons for this issue that many people still do not have enough food to eat. Firstly, famine and food scarcity impact on the poor. Food prices are gradually increasing undoubtedly. Also, the poor do not have enough purchasing power and do not own any land for farming. As a result, they have to buy their food and when food prices are rising, they can`t buy food. Secondly, a fundamental reason for this, is climate changes. In this decade, many African and Asian countries involve with drought that afflict people who are dependent on to grow agricultural yields and therefore they can`t grow any agricultural crops and these people will have to go hungry. 115
However, in order to solve this problem, there are some solutions. Firstly, the governments must allocate more budget to assist the poor and also have to scrutinize nutritional situation of poor people. The governments have to ensure that all people access to food and if necessary, give food to the poor free or pay subsidy to them. Secondly, affluent countries should help the farmers who are living in developing and poor countries, financially and technologically. Advanced countries should assist government of countries who are afflicted by drought to learn modern methods of irrigation of agricultural crops by way of transferring of knowledge and technology and also supplying of financial resources. 110
In conclusion, despite the fact that agricultural has developed, many people all over the globe, still suffer from hunger. It`s responsibility of governments and the rich to supply primary needs for the poor such as food. 36
Total Words: 298
استاد سلام
درباره اخباری که مرتبط با گرسنگی هست باید به چه صورت در رایتینگ ها استفاده کنیم. به صورت یک حقیقت یا خبری که چند پیش در اخبار اشاره شده؟
چون ممکنه مثلا ما خبری رو شنیده باشیم اما fact نباشه و از طرفی روی گرسنگی تاثیر باشه.
درود
از اخبار استفاده نکنید.
استاد در تمرین رایتینگ دو قسمت مهم در سوال اشاره شده یکی پیشرفت در کشاورزی و دیگری قسمت دوم که اشاره به گرسنگی میکنه. ما اگر ایده ها رو بر مبنای گرسنگی مردم در جهان بنویسیم، کامل سوال رو پوشش میده؟
به نظر بنده واژه still hungry مهمترین بخش تسک هست ولی درباره درک درست از سوال مردد هستم. نمیدونم باید این contrast رو به صورت اجباری باید در رایتینگ اعمال کنیم یا اختیاری هست.
درود
باید به همین مورد Still hungry اشاره کنید و مبنای کار شما باشه.
با سلام
استاد لغت زیر در سایت کمبریج بدون هایفن نوشته شده اما در دیکشنری لانگمن با هایفن. کدام املا درست هست؟
semifinal or semi-final
درود
هر دو درست هست
تشکر
In the past decade, international tourism has seen an incredibly increased in the world. international tourism has both positive and negative effect in the world, I’ll discuss both of view in this essay(33 words).
International tourism has brought positive effects to some countries. First of all, improved tourism helps economic’s country and it has a dramatic effect in some countries. for example, turkey is a country that tourism has caused positive changes in turkey also every year lots of tourists come from in turkey such as Iranian, German, etc. this reason caused the increased quality of life and progress economy in turkey. Secondly, tourism can create a new job for local people and it decrease unemployment in each country . each part of tourism needs lots of workers, for instance, a hotel has lots of employees in every part such as receptionist, a simple worker, etc(110 words).
On the other hand, international tourism has a bad effect on some countries. Firstly, every tourist has a different idea and religion that it can very contrary with host’s country namely Iran is an Islamic country and alcoholism is ban in Iran or women should wear the scarf in society but in western country alcoholism is free for a drink. It is very important so that tourists accept rules in each country and respect all of the rules and ideas. secondly, progress international tourism can increase the price of something. For example in the summer Iranian travel to the north of Iran and in the summer go up the price of food or habitat(107 words).
To sum up, international tourism has lots of effect on economic, culture and society. If international tourism performs correctly, it will change positively for the country and society(29 words).
Advantage:
# job opportunities
# experience different cultures
Disadvantage:
# destroy the habitat and wild animals
# a rise in the cost of living for local people
Global tourism has become a popular leisure activity these days. Although there are disadvantages in global tourism, there are benefits too. This essay discusses both viewpoints.
There are some significant advantages in global tourism. First of all, global tourism brings job opportunities to nations with providing a wide range of services. For instance, tourists need hotel facilities, means of transportation, entertainment and so on. Therefore, multinational and national companies invest in fascinating countries and subsequently, employment prospects will increase. Secondly, people who travel abroad can experience different cultures which ancient traditions is a salient example in their destination countries. Naturally, they apply some of them to improve their life in many aspects. Moreover, they learn a new language to speak with native people. Thus, tourists grasp a general concept of traditional cultures.
However, there are negative effects in global tourism. First of all, it has harmful effects on natural environment. For example, building of facilities and infrastructure can destroy the habitat and wild animals and we can see consequences of this issue in the news about China’s pandas these days. Additionally, luxury hotels are built in the beaches and pollute them. Secondly, cost of living for local people will rise when tourist industry grows in countries. In fact, local people have to pay more money than used to in the past and this is especially noticeable in accommodation’s prices. As a result, only groups of people can afford living expenses who are wealthy.
In my opinion, we can use global tourism to change economic situation because there are countless historical places in my country that tourists would like to visit them.
In conclusion, there are some substantial benefits in global tourism, while there are drawbacks that we can’t overlook.
۲۸۹ words
Writing Task 2
Tourism
+
# creates more job opportunities
# to encourage people to be familiar with other nations
–
# to make more amenities such as hotels
# be detrimental to the environment
Nowadays, international travelling has increased significantly in many countries around the world. Although some people argue that this trend has several drawbacks, others including me believe that the positive aspect of this trend by far outweigh the negative ones. I will discuss both viewpoints.
To begin with, there are several reasons why some people believe that the international tourism would be beneficial. First of all, tourism industry creates more job opportunities for local people. In fact, people can find better job in their own country instead of immigration to other country. The employees can earn more income and use their income to purchase goods and services. Therefore, the money is invested in the home country. Secondly, this trend has the great potential to encourage people to be familiar with other nations. Thus it provides an opportunity for countries to introduce their culture, custom and traditions to other people all over the world and this would be a positive propaganda for the host country.
On the other hand, the negative impacts of expansion of international tourism should not be neglected. First of all, due to popularity of tourism, countries have to make more amenities such as hotels, restaurants, roads. Thus, many natural habitats of animals will spoil. This kind of construction can gradually destroy the environmental resources and it cause many species animals and plants to become endangered. Secondly, the biggest threat tourism poses to the environment. There are many exotic places like forest, mountain range and desert where are fabulous landscapes and many tourists tend to visit these places. As consequence of phenomenon called overtourism, these places are destroyed by many adventures. It is detrimental to the environment.
In conclusion, although the tourism industry brings some detrimental effects for countries, it could enhance the average level of life.
Nowadays, by the globalization and development of tourism industry people willing to travel abroad frequently. Some people argue that the growth of world travels is far more beneficial to countries while on the other hand, others think that there are some negative aspects. This essay will discuss both these standpoints. 50
Some people believe that increase of global travels is beneficial. First of all, many tourists from affluent countries visit developing countries in their holidaymaking and they have to pay their costs, so a huge amount of money is contributed to local residents of host country. As a result, global tourism industry brings more income for people who are living in host country and bring prosperity for them. Secondly, visitors who go abroad have demands which should be supplied immediately. Consequently, governments have to create more jobs for residents to satisfy tourists. As a result, increasing of international travels creates new and more job opportunities. 104
However, other people think that the growth of global tourism could be detrimental to local cultures and environment. Firstly, governments have to build constructions for international tourists and provide more facilities such as hotels. roads and restaurants and due to this, natural habitats of animals and vegetation can be damaged seriously. In addition, visitors aren`t careful as much as local residents about the environment and they care less about it. Secondly, foreign tourists from affluent countries – with western culture – afford to go abroad on vacation. Often, developing countries are host country for them and western culture impact on local culture and the repercussions of it can be serious. 110
I believe that expansion of global tourism is far more beneficial for countries and bring prosperity for societies. 18
In conclusion, although there are countless advantages in growth of global tourism, the drawbacks and risks
استاد سلام
کدام یک از جمله بهتر هست.در هوک؟
international tourism is became a popular leisure activity.
international tourism has became a popular leisure activity
has become
استاد سلام
وقت بخیر
سایتی که برای پیدا کردن کالوکیشنها معرفی کردید بالا نمیاد. منبع آنلاین معتبر دیگه ای میشه معرفی کنید؟
درود
دیکشنری لانگمن نسخه ویندوز
گزینه دوم گوگل در همون جستجو
The graph compares the amount of produced electricity in France using four different sources over a period of 32 years from 1980 to 2012.
At the beginning of the period in 1980, electricity production by thermal power stations was more common method than others and it was about 120 terawatt hours of electricity. After that, it decreased to 50 TW-h of electricity in 1985, and then it remained constant at the same level in 2012 despite some fluctuations until the end of the period.
Nuclear energy provided less than 100 TW-h hours of electricity in 1980. Then, it rose dramatically and reached a peak of almost 430 TW-h of electricity in 2005. In 2012, it stood at just over 400 TW-h of electricity. In contrast, the figure for hydroelectric power maintained stable between 50 and 80 TW-h of electricity over the whole period. Additionally, the figure for renewables was a negligible amount until 2005. Following this, it increased steadily to approximately 30 TW-h of electricity in 2012.
Overall, the amount of produced electricity in France from nuclear energy was by far over the period shown and renewables as a source of energy was least amount.
Writing Task 1
The line graph given reveals the amount of electricity produced in France by four different sources between 1980 and 2012.
In 1980, thermal energy produced around 120 Terawatt hours of power. Nuclear and hydroelectric energy were just under 75 Terawatt hours of power each, and renewable provided a negligible amount. Just one year later, unclear energy overtook thermal energy and it became the primary source of electricity. Between 1980 and 2005, unclear energy rose dramatically to a peak of 430 Terawatt hours. While the figures of thermal fell down under 50 Terawatt hours of power in 1985 and stabilized at the level of 50 for the rest of period. Hydroelectric energy remained steadily stable at between 50 and 80 Terawatt hours for the whole period. As can be seen, there was only a small rise in renewable energy about 25 Terawatt hours by 2012.
Overall, it is obvious that nuclear energy was the most important energy over the period shown. By contrast, renewable energy produced the lowest amount of electricity in the whole period.
The line graph demonstrates the electricity generated in France using four different sources of power over a period of 32 years from1980 to 2012.
The amount of energy produced by Thermal was about 120 terawatt-hours of electricity, which was the first major source energy in 1980, but then it fell to a third of all energy produced over the period shown. The number of energy from hydroelectric power remained stable at 50 TW till the end of the period.
Nuclear energy generated about 75 KW-h of energy in 1980 but it has increased considerably in the following years to peak at 430 kw-h and be the first major source power in 2015. Renewables energy as the minor source power, on the other hand, did not contribute any energy but there was a slight growth starting by 2000 and it reached to about 40 KW-H of energy in the end of the period.
Overall , nuclear energy constituted the main source of energy over the period of shown while renewable power produced the least energy. the other two sources of energy remained relatively stable in the all period given
The graph compares the amount of electricity created from four different sources of fuel in France in 1990 and 2012.
In 1980, the number of electricity production by thermal power was 120 terawatt hours approximately. In the same year, the amount of electricity which was produced by nuclear and hydroelectric sources was around 75 terawatt hours. One year later, nuclear energy overtook thermal energy as the main source of electricity.
From 1980 to 2005, the electricity production from nuclear power rose steadily and reached a peak of about 430-terawatt hours then it leveled off. By contrast, the amount of thermal energy decreased gradually and reached 50 terawatt hours in 1985 and after that It remained fairly constant. Despite relative fluctuations, the number of electricity produced by hydroelectric stayed fairly stable at around 50 terawatt hours and 80 terawatt hours, over the period. The amount of renewables energies as a source of electricity production had a slight growth from 2005 to 2012 and reached 30 terawatt hours approximately.
Overall, it`s obvious that nuclear power was by far most important source of electricity production, however, renewables energies as a source of electricity production was less than other sources over the period.
Total words: 199
While it is thought by some people that history is one of the most significant subject at school .others believe that it is better to concentrate more on essential subjects like science and technology rather than history . This essay will examine both of these sides.
Some argue that history is one of the most important subject . First of all, learning history helps to prevent repetition the same mistakes in the past. It has been always said that history repeat itself. So that if there are similarities between events in the past and those at the present time, learning from the action of the past can help us to take a better action at the present and getting better results. Secondly, Learning history develops critical thinking and analytical. Seeking for the reasons behind the events in the past and analyse that particular events lead us to improve those skills which are essential skills for study’s such as Law and politic.
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for science and technology as subjects with more importance’s than history. first of all, they can use in whole the world. Because they are world knowledge and are the same in every part of the world. For instance, science helps to understand how the world works and how to develop that.Secondly, sciences and technology help to develop lifestyles. There are variety of possibilities that can develop through learning this subject. For example, communication is one that has been developed by invention of cell phones.
In conclusion, although some people point out that property of world use of science and technology make these subjects more important, the empowerment getting by history shouldn’t be ignored.
These days important of the subject in school is one of the most issues between people. Although, some people think that history is more important subject, others believe that technology and science are more important, This essay will discuss both of view(45 words).
History is identified card for each person and country. First of all, history helps us that we know about our ancestor and we learn about what they did in the past, for example, we can learn how they learn writing or how they live with low facilities, etc.secondly, history cause that we don’t repeat Ancestor’s mistake also it helps for progress science and technology . History is a good collocation for our lives and teaches positive notice, for instance, some people use of Ancestor’s experiment for therapy. History is surrounding all of the topics that accrued in the past such as geography and science, etc(103 words).
Technology and science have been dramatically changed in the world. first, of reason , science can be basically changed in life, for example, improve technology increase creative person and it improved abilities person for doing work. pay attention to science subject can be effected on lifestyle. Secondly, there are many facilities in the land that we use all of them with technology, for instance, there are many mineral mines which we can expand mineral mines from the mountain with modern technology.all of the limitation is broken by progress technology. scientist innovate new and modern technology with science(100 words).
In conclusion, I think that history and science are important subjects and it is necessary for children to learn both of them. Science and history have the same effect on our life(29 words).
Writing Task 2
History
# gain a wealth knowledge about where they come from
# can positively improve our characteristic
Science and Technology
# gives the students an essential knowledge
# allows students to make discoveries
Nowadays, students study an array of subjects like history, science and technology in schools. Although some people argue that history is of paramount importance, others tend to have a strong preference for subjects such as science and technology. I will discuss both viewpoints.
To begin with, those who believe that studying history should be regarded as a crucial subject. First of all, every student needs to gain a wealth knowledge about where they come from. By studying history students can find a sense of identify and learn about lifestyle and mindset of their ancestors. It will be unreasonable if you are a successful scientist but having not a single definition about your ancestors. Secondly, learning history can positively improve our characteristic. According to a proverb history repeats itself and if we learn from our ancestors’ failures, we will not repeat that mistake again. History lessons make a great amount of moral lessons in gratefulness, patriotism and appreciation for what we have obtained.
On the other hand, some people think that science and technology are important. First of all, science subject gives the students an essential knowledge that adjust themselves with the modern live. Nowadays, our daily routine does by using a variety of technological and scientific breakthroughs that provide our basic needs. Smartphones are great testaments to this explanation as it is unthinkable for people. Secondly, studying science allows students to make discoveries in order to improve their living conditions. They can work on new vaccines and pills to make our life longer and happier. Because this kind of knowledge human gives an opportunity us to live better.
In conclusion, although some people argue that history is a significant subject, others maintain that other fields are more important than history. I think that it should be considered a balance between them to develop every student.
history:
# national identity
# avoid repeating people’s mistakes in the past
science and technology:
# better lifestyle
# improving the economic system
The school subjects are a key issue in the developing countries. Although some people think that history is one of the most important subjects in schools, others claim that science and technology is more important than that in the school curriculum. This essay discusses both viewpoints. (45 words)
Some people believe that history is prime in the school curriculum. First of all, we should study history to avoid repeating people’s mistakes in the past. For instance, there have been a lot of people in the history of each country and they had lived in a period of time. To add to this, they have experienced problems in their lives and similarly, we might have such difficulties one day. Secondly, national identity has always been one of the main issues for everybody. Subsequently, everyone wants to know their ancestors and where they come from. As a result, we could have a united nation in the future. (107 words)
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue that science and technology is the main area of study in subject schools. First of all, economic performance can improve in the future of the country and consequently the rate of international trade will increase. Moreover, students get interested in research and developing and this trend lead to produce goods. Secondly, science and technology transform people’s lifestyle to a better one over time. To illustrate, scientists able to cure fatal diseases, discover new methods and even find effective remedies for common diseases among older people. Furthermore, technology and science provide facility and people have a comfortable lifestyle. (107 words)
In my opinion, technology and science is the most crucial subject school for kind of societies that they want to create employment. In contrast, history and identity for a nation is never unforgettable. (33 words)
In conclusion, some people think that history is the most essential part as a subject in schools, while others believe that technology and science has more importance than history. (29 words)
Nowadays some people think that students should pay more attention to the topic of History while others argue that in this modern world, some other objects such as Science and Technology are more significant compared with History. This essay will explain both these standpoints. 44
Some people believe that History and its topics are of great importance to students. First of all, people can learn from History and they can avoid mistakes which happened in past. Actually, History is made by repetitive mistakes and it is full of repeated mistakes which can be kept away from them. History teaches people about these mistakes and teaches to select true way in same problems. Secondly, young people understand their own culture and traditions. They recognize that how their country and culture have evolved and they realize why their country is advanced or hasn`t progressed and their main reasons. 101
On the other hand, others argue that topics like Science and Technology are essential for students and our life. Firstly, nowadays, we see a growing trend towards technological advancements. Every day, people use a wide range of things which are made by Technology and our everyday life is very difficult without them such as smartphones thus Technology has impacted on our life significantly. Secondly, studying of science provide better conditions for people health. New drugs are produced by researches and studies based on science. Also, science helps researchers to find new and better cures for unknown, new and difficult diseases, as a result many lives are saved. 107
I believe that Science and Technology are more important compared with History but topics of History shouldn`t be completely ignored. 20
In conclusion, we need to study subjects which are related to History to recognize historical mistakes and avoid them. However, topics of Science and Technology are necessary for future and improve of our lifestyle and are of great importance to our live. 42
Total Words: 314
History;
#Avoid repetition of mistakes made in the past.
# a good foundation for study’s such as law
Sience and technology
#variety of work
#make a better life
history:
# discover national identity
# avoid of people’s mistakes in the past
science and technology:
# better lifestyle
# improving the economic system
استاد سلام
این جمله داخل نرم افزار دیکشنری لانگمن آمده. به نظر غلط میاد. حرف A که در جمله آمده با s جمع بعدش خوانایی نداره. میشه توضیح بدید؟مربوط به کلمه market در حالت noun هست.
اگر antique صفت باشه قابل قبول هست اما روی کلمه antique که کلیک میکنم اسمش باز میشه نه صفتش
There’s a good antiques market here on Sundays.
Writing Task 1
The bar chart given reveals the six categories of American people who have meals in fast food restaurant during the 10-year period from 2003 to 2013.
According to the graph, the majority of people consumed fast food “once a week” was 31% and 33% of people in 2003 and 2006. This pattern followed by people who consumed fast food “once or twice a month” accounted 30% and 33% in 2003 and 2013. In 2006, 20% of people chose to have fast food “several time a week”, while the figures were a gentle decline about 15% for their counterparts who did few time annually. With regard to other three frequencies, the percentage of “never” and “every day” were all less than 5% during the whole ten years.
Overall, it seems the frequencies for “once a week” and “once or twice a month” are the major choice for people who have fast food, while the percentage of people who never eat or eat on daily basis remain unchanged.
This chart compares the amount of fast food consumption among American people in six different categories over a decade between 2003 and 2013.
The most people who ate fast food once a week and once or twice a month was reported just over and a little less than 30 percent for the former and the latter in 2003. In contrast, the percentage of people who consumed fast food once or twice a month was more than people who ate fast food once a week in 2013 and it was nearly 35 percent.
In 2003, the percentage of people who went fast food restaurants several times a week and a few times annually was a little more than and less than 15 percent respectively. In despite of some variation in 2006, this amount was remained constant in the same percentage in 2013 and similarly, this was happened for the people who are interested to eat fast food every day and never and it was less than 5 percent.
Overall, although the popularity of fast food consumption seems to be more in once a week and once or twice a month during this decade, American people avoided to eat it every day or never.
The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of fast food.in this essay i intend to argue that this kind of food is detrimental to the both side love cost and unhealthy . There are two deals one of both viewpoints .44
Some people believe this kind of food has a positive role in the world because of it’s convenience and low cost.first of all, it’s an undeniable fact that eating fast food to excess result to in serious health problems. Fast food is affordable to buy and available for single person or student or engaged people but fast food be incredibly high in fat. Secondly,fast food is a affordable and convenient, further and even importantly for in this time of life people are incredible engaged and they are prefer to buy fast food . As a result thats easy to prepare. Though, fast food in contain a great deal of fat. 111
On the other hand believe fast food is unhealthy kind of food and its major health problems. First of all, food such as hamburger, fried chicken and chips which are incredibly high in fat and salt are responsible for such ailment as diabetes and heart disease. Secondly, population is developed are increasingly overweight . Although, usually some people consuming a fast food with very different kind of sauce such as ketchup and mayonnaise.they are in a high risk for overweight and major health problem.84
In my opinion, fast foods are consume fact it’s delicious but good for short time of life unsuitable for very day using . That’s undeniable it’s nice and affordable for consuming.31
۲۷۰
تاپیک رایتینگ این جلسه شما تسک ۱ نمودار میله ای مربوط به مصرف fast food در آمریکا است.
سلام استاد بله درست میفرمایید
رایتینگ جلسه قبل رو فرمودید مقدمه درست نیست ودرستش کنم دوباره بفرستم
درود دوباره
مقدمه شما همچنان با شیوه تدریس شده هماهنگ نیست.
مقدمه این رایتینگ رو به عنوان الگو ببینید:
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البته پاراگراف نتیجه گیری شما هم باید با in conclusion شروع بشه. در این سوال نظر شخصی پرسیده نشده.
The chart shows the frequency of the Americans consumed fast food in restaurants during the 10-year period, from 2003 to 2013.
In 2003, 31 percentage of people approximately ate fast food once a week, while 5% of Americans never used fast food restaurants and around 4% of them ate fast food there every day.
In 2006, there are a slight change in frequency of eating in fast food restaurants. More people went to these places once or several times a week, about 20% and 33% respectively. The percentage of people who used fast food restaurants once or twice a month dropped from 30% in 2003 to 25% in 2006.
At the end of course, 2013, the percentage of people who went to fast food restaurants once or twice a month was around 33%, while the number of people who ate fast food once or several times a week was less compared to the 2006 and 2003.
Overall, between 2003 and 2013, most Americans went to fast food restaurants one or two times a month. The percentage of people who never ate fast food or ate those every day, was under 5% over the period.
Total words: 194
استاد جمله زیر مربوط به تمرین شماره ۴ درس ۳۵ آکسفورد هست. کلمه property به صورت مفرد استفاده شده. در ساختار زیر جمع میشه استفاده بشه البته به شرطی که بعدش were بیاد
property was stolen from several houses in the street last night
استاد تشکر.رفع شد.
خواهش میکنم
In the past few decades, the world has seen a dramatic increase in the amount of using fast food. Some people believe that this increase has the advantages for society while the others think that there are some negative impacts. This essay will discuss both these standpoints.
There are some positive aspects of growth of fast food in different countries. First of all, nowadays, people often are busy and spend more time outside and they don`t have enough time for cooking and eating food, as a result fast food seems to be first choice for them who are in hurry and they spend less time for eating food. Secondly, development of fast food into the big business creates big companies and provide more job opportunities and many people who are looking for a job could work in the fast food shops and it will reduce the unemployment rate.
it is undeniable that the increase in eating fast food meals has many negative impacts on our life. Firstly, most fast food has a lot of calories, fat, sugar and salt which are main reason for many health problems such as diabetes and high blood pressure and many people become overweight. Secondly, conventional meals need more time for cooking and eating that provide opportunities for family members to spend more time together and be happy while with rising of fast food meals, each of them eat their food alone and parents have less time for resolving their children’s problems, thus fast food decrease family bond.
I personally think that fast food using should be restricted because it improves physical and mental health of people.
In conclusion. although there are many useful aspects of consuming fast food but its negative effects should not be ignored.
Total words: 292
the past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availiblity of fast food.in this assay I intend to argue that this kind of food is detrimental both to the individual that consume it and society at large. there are two primary reasons of this.
some people believe that this kind of food has a positive role to play in the world because of it’s convenience and low cost. first of all, it’s an undeniable fact that eating fast food to excess result in serious health problems. fast food is affordable to buy and available for single people or student or people don’t have spend of time but fast food be incredibly high in fat .secondly, fast food is affordable and convenient ,further and even importantly for this time of life people incredible engaged and they are prefer to buy fast food . as a result that’s easy to prepare . though , fast food in contain a great deal of fat.
another hand , people believe fast food is unhealthy food and its major health problem. first of all, food such as hamburger fried chicken and chips which are incredibly high in fat and salt are responsible for such aliments as diabetes and heart disease .secondly , populations is developed are increasingly overweight. although, usually some people consuming a fast food with very different kind of sauce such as ketchup and mayonnaise . they are in a high risk for overweight and major health problem.
in my opinion, fast food is consumed fact and its delicious but good for short time of life un suitable for long term of life. that’s undeniable its nice and affordable for consuming . 262
مقدمه شما با شیوه تدریس شده هماهنگ نیست. ویرایش کنید و ارسال بفرمایید
Advantages:
# wide range of tasty foods
# save time in preparing food
Disadvantages:
# serious health problems
# addiction
Advent of fast food has created a growing industry in contemporary life. Albeit there are disadvantages in consuming the fast food, there are some benefits too. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.
۳۲ words
There are some great advantages in fast food. First of all, you can save time in preparing food because most of them make in high temperatures based on their recipes and ingredients will cook in a shorter time than the other foods need. Moreover, you can even use convenience food to spend less time the cooking when you hurry. Secondly, kinds of fast food have formed a wide range of tasty foods and they are rather delicious. Hence, People can have pleasant experience owing to their rich flavors. For instance, Italian foods such as pizza, hamburgers and so on can be a good meal.
۱۰۴ words
However, there are negative effects in eating fast food. First of all, it can become addiction and people lose their interest in other types of food. In fact, they don’t replace any foods with fast food and this is increasingly common between children and teenagers who they have sedentary lifestyle with passionate about modernism. Secondly, eating fast food has led to serious health problems. and it is one of the crucial factors of poor diet. There aren’t any symptoms among people who consume fast food in short period of time while they require a special regime in their medical care in later life.
۱۰۳ words
In conclusion, there are some benefits in popularity of fast food in most countries, while there are drawbacks that we can’t overlook.
۲۲ words
Writing Task 2
Fast food
+
# do not need to consume the time or energy to prepare the meal
# provide with extensive varieties of ready meals
–
# can be caused dangerous health problems
# an important factor for overweight and obesity
In the recent years, the consumption of fast food is significantly increasing. Some people assert that it is convenient and fruitful, by the contrast others including me argue that it is detrimental. I will discuss both viewpoints.
To begin with, there are some advantage of fast food. First of all, people do not need to consume the time or energy to prepare the meal. Since home cooked requires time for shopping and cooking as well as washing the utensils. However, such challenges do not exist when people opt for fast food. Especially for single person it is a better choice. Secondly, fast food menu usually provides with extensive varieties of ready meals and drinks to choose. People can choose what they like taking for meals according to nutrition information of the food served. They can order certain fast food that are healthy.
On the other hand, fast food has drawbacks. First of all, fast food can be caused dangerous health problems. In fact, it is rich in fats, salts, artificial substances and oil which increase cardiovascular diseases or affect the overall health of individuals. Furthermore, it may contain amount of unwanted nutrients and harmful bacteria. Secondly, consuming this kind of food is an important factor for overweight and obesity among the next generation. According to the people’s sedentary lifestyle, most people and children tend to serve large portion of fast food and they also do not do enough exercises to burn these calories thus, obesity is on the rise among people.
Be way conclusion, although some people argue that fast food has got bunch of advantages, others including me maintain that it has some negative effects which should be carefully considered.
In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the number of fast food outlets in both developed and developing countries.Although there are benefits in this increase, the downside should not be overlooked. This essay will examine both of these sides.
There are some advantages when fast foods are more available. First of all, fast food industry offers more job opportunities to the people in local areas. For instance, existing of some large restaurant chains such as Macdonald has decreased unemployment specially between young people. secondly, Many people in the world like fast food because of its convenience. Some people believe that the modern living style should be responsible for fast food overconsumption. It has always been reported that people nowadays are struggling with the overwhelming busy work which results in less leisure time for meal. There fore, time saving attraction is one of the important reason for these busy consumers. Furthermore, fast foods such as hamburger and pizza are cheap and majority of people can afford that to consume.
On the other hand, this increase in outlets, has resulted some serious consequences.Firstly, fast foods can cause overweight. People who eat fast food have a greater calorie intake than those who do not, and therefore have a greater risk of overweight or obesity.secondly, fast foods have harmful effects on the health of people. It has always been shown that fast foods such as hamburger and pizza have high amounts of calories, fat and salt which can cause some ailments such as high blood pressure, diabetes, and heart disease . Therefore, fast food eaters are at higher risk of getting illness than their non-fast food eating counterparts.
In conclusion, although there are a number of advantages of increase outlets. I personally believe that this increase has more cons than pros in society.
پاراگراف دوم شما ۱۳۰ واژه است و با چک لیست هماهنگ نیست.
In the past few decades, the world has seen a dramatic increase in the amount of using fast food. Some people believe that this increase has the advantages for society while the others think that there are some negative impacts. This essay will discuss both these standpoints.
There are some positive aspects of growth of fast food in different countries. First of all, nowadays people often are busy and spend more time outside and they don`t have enough time for cooking and eating food as a result, fast food seems to be first choice for them who are in hurry. Secondly, development of fast food into the big business provides more job opportunities and many people who don`t have any job could work in the fast food shops and it will reduce the unemployment rate.
it is undeniable that the increase in eating fast food meals has many negative impacts on our life. Firstly, most fast food has a lot of calories, fat, sugar and salt which are main reason for many health problems such as diabetes, overweight and high blood pressure. Secondly, conventional meals need more time for cooking and eating that provide opportunities for family members to spend more time together while with rising of fast food meals, each of them eat their food alone, thus fast food decrease family bond.
I personally think that fast food using should be restricted because it improves physical and mental health of people.
In conclusion. although there are many useful aspects of consuming fast food but its negative effects should not be ignored.
Total words: 262
هر دو پاراگراف اصلی شما بیش از اندازه کوتاه است و با چک لیست مغایرت دارد.
استاد ویرایش کنم بفرستم فیدبک دریافت میکنه؟؟؟
بله بفرستید
Fast food
Advantage
They are cheap to buy
Very easy to prepare
Disadvantage
Population developed countries are increasingly overweight
Obesity,diabetes and heart disease are on the increase
Good work
استاد سلام
حرف اضافه بکار رفته در جمله زیر صحیح هست؟
من فکر میکنم in درست باشه.
He is good at French but weak at history.
درود
اگر بعد از حرف اضافه فعل باشه باید in به کار بره و اگر اسم باشه باشه at به کار بره.
توضیح زیر رو ببین:
It should be you are good At, but weak In doing something. Good “in” used when the phrase is followed by verb, whereas Good ‘at’ is used when the phrase is followed by a noun. E.g. – A person is good in writing poems A person is good at poetry.Feb 16, 2015
منبع:
https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/49823/difference-between-good-at-and-good-in
سپاسگزارم
Fast food;
Advantages;
#job opportunities afferd by Fast food companies
#the convenience of fast food
Disadvantages;
# Some illness caused by fast food
#fast food can lead to overweight
Good work
سلام استاد
رایتینگها و لیسنینگ های کتاب essential word برای استفاده کاربردی هستن یا روشون وقت نگذاریم؟
درود اگر زمان دارید مشکلی نیست میتونید کار کنید.
سلام استاد در قسمت overall رایتینگ من to steam production electricity بین production و electricity حرف اضافه احتیاج داره؟
درود
جمله رو باید کامل بنویسی. رفرنس به رایتینگ ها نده
سپاس
The diagram shows electricity produce provided by geothermal energy 5
steps in this process and the begins as a cold water . (21
Firs level is cold water in the large container on the surface of the ground.the cold water pumped down in 4.5 km depth an underground.after that , water is heated by hot rocks by geothermal zone although one side is cold water the injection rapidly and another side hot water the production well in order then then hot water pumped up for 4.5 km to be condenser in a big container. After the process in condenser, hot water transformed to steam and that put. In the turbine. Finally cold water after the 5 steps of process get power also powered by turbine and produces electricity in order to the electric tower for general use.(115
Overall,the geothermal power plant by cold water with geothermal zone and the hot water transformed to steam protection electricity .(20
در overall قسمت آخر اشتباه تایپ کردم protection
من میخواستم production بنویسم
ببخشید
This diagram shows five main stages of electricity production from converting cold water to electricity by means of geothermal power.
(۲۰)
The process begins with a cold-water container which is pumped from the surface of the earth down into injection well in 4.5 km depth. From there, it is transferred to the geothermal zone, an underground region which is composed of hot rocks and following this, it is reached the production well which it is a vertical pipe similar to injection well but a bit wider.
(۶۵)
In the stage that follows, hot water pumped up through the production well into the condenser where it is located on the surface of the earth and it is transformed to steam. Then, steam is used to power a turbine and run it in circular movements. During the next stage, the turbine is connected to a generator and when it rotates, electricity produces. Finally, electricity is transferred to an energy tower for consumption.
(۷۰)
Overall, the continuous process of electricity production is done using five stages that starts with storing cold water in a tank and ends with transferring electricity to an energy tower from a generator.
(۳۳)
۱۸۷ words
استاد این اشکالات کوچک گرامری در جلسات آخر که گرامر کامل مطالعه میشه رفع میشه؟خیلی آزار دهندس. هر قدر زمان میگذارم هر هفته از این غلط ها دارم.
تا حدودی بله اما نه ۱۰۰%
شما اگر نمره ۷ رو هم بگیرید همچنان خطاهایی دارید اما تقریبا بیشتر جمله ها خالی از خطاهای سیستماتیک خواهد بود.
حتی انگلیسی زبان ها هم جمله های بد نوشته شده یا اشتباه های دستوری ناخودآگاه دارند و ۱۰۰% بدون ایراد نیستند!
Writing Task 1
The given diagram reveals the production of electricity from geothermal energy in five steps.
In the first stage, cold water is pumped down to the injection well which is located at 4.5 kilometers underground. Then, the cold water is transformed from the injection well to geothermal zone which consists of hot rocks in order to heat the water up. The third step, once the water has been heated up, the condenser pumps up hot water through the production well.
The following steps take part in the ground level at the power plant. First of all, the steam provided from the hot water in the condenser travels to the turbine and the turbine makes it spin. Finally, the turbine provides energy for the generator and the generator produces electricity and the current is delivered.
Overall, there are five steps in the process, starting with injecting cold water and ending with electricity is being generated.
The diagram illustrates the way that Geothermal power works in order to product electrisity.
Initially, the cold water is sent into the ground with about 4,5 km of depth, then it runs down into the injection well.after that water is passed to hot rocks which called Geothermal zone.once the water has been heated by moving on the hot rocks, it continues along the production well.
Following, The hot water is pomped up to the condeser in which hot water is turned into the steam and sent to the Turbin. In the final steps and after a process of a circle movement in Turbin, the steam is trasferred to Generatore and products the electrisity. Finally, the electrisity is moved to an energy power to fill the demands for electrisity.
Overall, Geothermal power,makes the electrisity in a process of several steps in which water turned into the gas.
رایتینگ شما زیر ۱۵۰ کلمه است. در آزمون اصلی به این دلیل نمره از دست خواهید داد.
تعداد خطاهای املایی در رایتینگ شما بسیار زیاد است.
من همه ی سعی ام رو می کنم ولی متاسفانه سطح رایتینگم پایین هست.به نظر شما بهتره که با جمله سازی بیشتر تمرین کنم یا املای کلمات؟
املای کلمات ربطی به سطح نداره. شما در هر سطحی که هستید لغاتی که مطمئن نیستید رو باید ۱۰۰% چک کنید.
تمرکز باید روی جمله سازی باشه و ۱۰۰% کلمات از نظر املایی چک بشه.
با سلام
استاد در پاراگراف اورآل در فلوچارت ها باید چه چیزی شرح داده بشه؟
در همه نمونه های قبلی ما به تغییرات اشاره میکردیم اما اینجا با یک فراِیند که در حال تکرار و بدون تغییر مواجه هستیم.
درود
فایل صوتی تدریس رایتینگ تست ۱ رو بشنوید. دقیقا توضیح داده شده.
The figure illustrates the process which is used by geothermal energy in the production of electricity.
As shown in the figure, there are five steps. In the first step, the cold water is pushed into geothermal zone and in this zone, water is heated by hot rocks which are in the depth of 4.5 km. Then after that, hot water is sent into the tank which is known as condenser.
The last two steps are performed above earth’s surface at the power plant. First of all, the steam which is produced by hot water, is put into the turbine and so the turbine is spun by steam. Finally, the generator which is powered by turbine, makes electricity and after that the electricity is moved to electric grid as energy power which supplies electricity to each household.
In conclusion, the electricity making process involves different steps: heating the water by hot rocks, sending the water into the condenser and then passing steam into the generator to create power energy.
Total words: 168
select reading chapter 8
Brain:
We learned about the structure of the brain today.
rack your brains – use your brain
Future:
What are you plans for the future?
predict the future – plan for the future
Invention:
The dishwasher is a wonderful invention.
Knowledge:
We have gained considerable knowledge about the earth and our solar system.
increase/ improve your knowledge – broaden/ expand your knowledge – general/ scientific knowledge
Routine:
Make exercise a part of your daily routine.
sb’s daily/ usual/ normal/ regular/ morning routine – break a routine – disrupt/ upset sb’s routine
Stress:
Your headaches are due to stress.
suffer from stress – reduce/ relieve stress – be under stress
Keep away:
Keep away from that dog, he can be vicious.
Plan:
Talks are planned for next week.
plan for the future
Personal:
His latest toy is a personal computer.
sb’s personal view/ opinion/ life/ problem/ question – personal experience
Possible:
Is it possible to get tickets for the game?
is it possible to do sth – make it possible to do sth – theoretically/ perfectly possible
Scientific:
We believe in investing in scientific research.
Daily:
The zoo is open daily.
Forever:
I like the house but I don’t imagine I’ll live there forever.
Regularly:
It’s important to exercise regularly.
Lean:
Tofu:
Supplement:
The payments are a supplement to his usual salary.
Advantages:
# more experiences
# more money
Disadvantages:
# population’s increase
# joblessness
Longevity has significantly increased in some countries owing to raise awareness of health and food. Although, there are privilege in this development, more pressing matters stem from itself. This essay discusses both viewpoints.
(۳۳ words)
There are serious drawbacks in longer lifespan that we can’t overlook them. First of all, population will be raised. Then, there are enormous demands and amount of energy consumption and fuels will go up. Therefore, environment will be heavily polluted. Moreover, this problem is one of the reasons for global climate change. Secondly, this issue will negative impact on economic prospects in a country and joblessness will be risen. Obviously, there are less job opportunities for young people because old people still eager to work. Actually, careers have always limited capacity and proportion of workforce have interrupted by the aged employment. Thus, Economic instability will be happened.
(۱۰۷ words)
There are also advantages when people live longer than before. First of all, longevity brings a wealth of experience for them. They able to manage perfectly their family and work and as a result, they maintain a balance in their lives. These people apply their experiences to reduce risk and strain and build a new life in old ages. Secondly, they can make more money because their healthy profit let them do work even over the age of retirement. Additionally, they will have wider recognition of their customers after early years of starting their job and this information help them to pursue career progression. Therefore, they have more financial rewards and bonuses.
(۱۱۲ words)
Overall, I believe longevity is highly beneficial and it enhances enjoyment, health and productivity in some countries but we must control negative effects of this development.
(۲۶ words)
Writing Task 2
Life expectancy
+
# get benefit from the wisdom and experience of the older people
# benefit from people to develop the society
_
# put a high pressure on the economic system
# increase the population
Nowadays, thanks to the advances medical the average life expectancy had significantly increased. Although some people think that life expectancy can have some drawbacks, other including me maintain that it can be more beneficial. I will discuss both standpoints.
It is believed that increasing life expectancy has many advantages to individual, their family and government. First of all, young people can get benefit from the wisdom and experience of the older people. They can give valuable advice and support to next generation in difficult times. They can also take care of their grandchild and teach them life skills. Secondly, the government can benefit from people to develop the society. When people live longer, the government raise the retirement age and most of them have a vast experience and can contribute effectively than the youngster to the development of a society.
On the contrary, there are some drawbacks to increasing life expectancy. First of all, it puts a high pressure on the economic system because the government have to spend on pension schema and other welfare services instead of investing in other sectors of the economic system. Secondly, a longer life is more likely to increase the population. As a result, the less the supply, the more the demand, in other words the government needs to spend more money on preparation of basic needs. This may have adverse consequences on the future of a country since the money is invested on basic needs not education.
By way conclusion, although some people argue that longer life expectancy has brought many problems, other including me believe that the advantages of this development far outweigh the disadvantages.
In a recent decade that improved technology about disease its help people for increasing life expectancy. Longer life had advantages in some countries. On the other hand, this issue had disadvantages for some countries(35 words).
People live longer than others, they have a fabulous chance in their life. First of all, they have an exciting chance because they gain more time enjoying their life. In addition, they spend more time with their children, grandchild and friends.maby when they were young, they didn’t have enough time for spending with a family member. secondly, there are other important advantages for more life that old people can help their family about solve the problem because they have more experience in their life. furthermore, they teach really valuable life such as generosity, patience, tolerance, etc(100 words).
More life can be some disadvantages in some parts of countries. Firstly, more life expectancy effects on job’s opportunity and young people can’t find a suitable job easily. moreover, this topic influence on country’s economic. Also, this issue has dissatisfaction young people because they can’t find a job with enough salary. Secondly, an increasing life expectancy needs more budget for taking care of old people because, in old age, they can’t take care of themselves. an old person needs more health facilities such as a hospital, drug, etc. there for the government should more budget for taking care of old person every year. this factor has lots of budget for a family member and government(108 words).
In conclusion, a rise in life expectancy has some advantages and disadvantages for countries .in my opinion advantages more than disadvantages. In addition, life expectancy is an important factor for developing countries(31 words).
مقدمه شما با شیوه تدریس شده نوشته نشده.
بسیاری از جمله ها با بی دقتی نوشته شده اند. با بررسی و ویرایش و تصحیح یک رایتینگ کم خطا بنویسید. با عجله و بدون بررسی نوشتن رایتینگ تاثیری بر نمره شما نخواهد داشت.
Nowadays, average life expectancy has increased significantly rather than last century due to the fact that medical care has improved and new drugs have produced. Although there are some advantages in this improvement and its drawbacks shouldn’t be overlooked. This essay will explain both of them.
There are some disadvantages of an ageing population due to the growth of living years. First of all, when people live long time, the number of senior citizens go up and the governments have to allocate lots budget for the retirement fund and so medical care increase automatically and a lot of money should be spent by insurances and government. Secondly, living longer increases demand for the housing and therefor the price of residences rises, so young people who don`t have significant savings can`t own house easily and it would be problem for them and government.
Average human lifespan is clearly increasing continuously and this brings benefits for people. Firstly, there are many elders by increase of life expectancy and they have a lot of experience thus they use tact and avoid risky situations. They obey the rules of law and this makes society more peaceful and so it reduces crime rate in the community . Secondly, it is obvious that people like to live more enjoyable in their retirement and these days, they can enjoy more and more by improving of medical care In their old age. So, increase of average of lifespan makes families happier.
In conclusion, I personally think that there are many drawbacks in increase of the number of aged people but we can`t ignore influence of them on our life and society.
Total words: 273
Advantages:
# more experiences
# more money
Disadvantages:
# population’s increase
# rise in the number of people’s unemployment
Good
oxford word skills u 28
Let:
My parents let me stay out until 11 o’clock.
let out a scream/ cry/ roar
Trim:
I have my hair trimmed every six weeks
trim cost
Keep sth:
He kept his hands in his pockets.
keep calm/ awake – keep fit
Hairstyle:
Do you like my new hairstyle?
oxford word skills 27
Cloth throw away broom mop bucket
Task:
Our first task is to gather information.
carry out/ perform/ do a task – something is not an easy task – difficult/ simple/ impossible task
Do the washing up:
Make the beds and do the washing up.
Wipe something:
Wipe the dirt of your shoes.
Grease/greasy:
You’ll need very hot water to get all the grease off those pans.
Greasy fingers
Tidy:
If you keep your room tidy, it is easier to find things.
keep … tidy – neat and tidy
Sweep:
Could you sweep under the table too?
sweep into office
Mud/muddy:
He came home from the football game covered in mud.
The ground was still very muddy.
Dirt/dirty:
How did you get so dirty?
Wipe that dirt of your face.
be covered/ black with dirt – remove the dirt (from something)
Vacuum sth:
Vacuum the carpet.
Vacuum cleaner/hoover
create/ fill/ leave a vacuum – power/ political/ moral/ policy vacuum
Dust sth/dusty:
I was dusting in the bedroom when the phone rang.
Everything’s really dusty.
Polish:
Don’t forget to polish your shoes.
The line graph compares the most important motivations that people migrate to countryside from the city in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Looking at the details, in 1990, 65000 people moved away from city to countryside because of rising costs of living and it was the most important reason for migration. The number of people who left due to this had a gradual rise and reached 85000 in 2000 and after that, in 2010 it decreased slightly and reached 80000.
In 1990, the number of people who departed from city due to traffic was similar to lifestyle and it was 20000. Both categories increased over the period but the traffic category had more growth rather than lifestyle category. Traffic leavers rose steadily in 2000 and reached 35000 and after that it surged more sharply and reached 6000 in 2010. The number of lifestyle leavers had a steady rise over period and in 2000 was 30000 and in 2010 was 40000.
Overall, it is clear that people moved away from city for three reasons and the number of three category -rising costs, traffic and lifestyle- increased over period between 1990 and 2010.
Total world: 192
This graph illustrates the main reasons why people relocate to countryside from a specific capital city for the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.
The number of people left the city owing to rising cost of living was more than 60000 in 1990. It gradually increased until 2000 and reached a pick about 85000. This was the highest number of people’s relocation throughout the graph. Then, it decreased slightly to less than 80000 in 2010.
The rate of rise in the number of people settled in countryside because of traffic and lifestyle was remarkably similar in 1990 and it was 20000. Although lifestyle remained its process’s surge, traffic rose faster after 2000. There was a growing gap between traffic and lifestyle over next years and the number of people moved to countryside was roughly 60000 and 40000 respectively.
Overall, the number of people relocated to countryside was steadily increased due to traffic and lifestyle. In contrast, growth of rising cost of living as a reason for moving people to countryside was stopped in 2000 and it started to fall lightly.
۱۷۹ words
The line gragh demonstrates that people decided to replace from a city to contryside through three essential reasons (traffic,rising cost of living and life style) in the years 1990,2000 and 2010.
It is clear that The main reason of moving to rural areas is rising the living cost in urban areas. The number of people who left the city increased from 65000 in 1990 to 85,000. However in 2010 this number dropped dramatically to about 80,000 people.
In 1990, over20,000 of people left the city because of traffic and lifstyle. However both of the categories rates rose over the period shown but the figure traffic first grew steadily between 1990 and 2000 and then even more significant and peaked at about 60,000 people. Lifestyle leavers grew consistency over the whole period and reached a number of 40,000 in 2010.
Overall,alhough increasing the cost of living in urban areas is still the main reason of leaving the city for people. there is also seen a significant rise in the number of city leavers because of traffic and lifestyle.
The line graph gives information about the main reasons people gave for moving away from a particular capital city to the countryside between 1990 and 2010(27 words).
In 1990, the main reason for left capital city rising cost of living also over than 80000 people left the capital city in 2000 after that fell gradually and in 2010 reached fewer than 85000.
Second important reasone was traffic . in the beginning (1990), this reason had a dramatic increase. From 2000 to 2010 was increased sharply over than 35000.
A third important reason was the lifestyle, there was a sharp drop in lifestyle from 1990 to 2010 . more than 30000 in 2000 changed lifestyle(85 words).
In conclusion, traffic and lifestyle increased sharply between 1990 and 2010 but the rising cost of living in 1990 went up slightly then in 2000 decreased gradually. the number of rising cost of living changed between 65000 and 80000(37 words).
Writing Task 1
The line graph reveals the main reasons why people are willing to move to the countryside rather than city in the years 1990 and 2000, 2010.
According to the graph, due to rising cost of living, 65000 people relocate to countryside in 1990. The number of people moving was a dramatic increase to 85000 in 2000. After over 10- year period, the figures declined slightly from 85000 to 80000 between 2000 and 2010.
Two reasons why people relocated to the countryside from the city were traffic and lifestyle. Initially, both had the same number of city leaver namely 20000 in 1990. Subsequently, both categories rose, but the traffic was a significant rise compared with lifestyle between 2000 and 2010. The lifestyle leaver also rose consistently over the whole period, from 30000 to 40000.
Overall, the number of people relocating to the countryside increased across the period. But rising cost of living was the main reason for relocation. After traffic and lifestyle had a significant rose respectively.
The line graph compares the most important motivations that people migrate to countryside from the city in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.In this period, the number of people who moved away from city increased steadily.
Looking at the details, in 1990, 65000 people moved away from city to countryside because of rising costs of living and it was the most important reason for migration. The number of people who left due to this had a gradual rise and reached 85000 in 2000 and after that, in 2010 it decreased slightly and reached 80000.
At the beginning of the course, the number of people who departed from city due to traffic was similar to lifestyle and it was 20000. Both categories increased over the period but the traffic category had more growth rather than lifestyle category. Traffic leavers rose steadily in 2000 and reached 35000 and after that it surged more sharply and reached 6000 in 2010. The number of lifestyle leavers had a steady rise over period and in 2000 was 30000 and in 2010 was 40000.
Overall, it is clear that people moved away from city for three reasons and the number of three category increased over period between 1990 and 2010. Rising costs of living was first reason by some distance, traffic was second reason and lifestyle was third reason.
Total world: 223
رایتینگ های تسک ۱ نباید بالاتر از ۲۰۰ واژه باشند.
ویرایش کنید و برای فیدبک ارسال بفرمایید.
The line graph compares the most important motivations that people migrate to countryside from the city in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Looking at the details, in 1990, 65000 people moved away from city to countryside because of rising costs of living and it was the most important reason for migration. The number of people who left due to this had a gradual rise and reached 85000 in 2000 and after that, in 2010 it decreased slightly and reached 80000.
In 1990, the number of people who departed from city due to traffic was similar to lifestyle and it was 20000. Both categories increased over the period but the traffic category had more growth rather than lifestyle category. Traffic leavers rose steadily in 2000 and reached 35000 and after that it surged more sharply and reached 6000 in 2010. The number of lifestyle leavers had a steady rise over period and in 2000 was 30000 and in 2010 was 40000.
Overall, it is clear that people moved away from city for three reasons and the number of three category -rising costs, traffic and lifestyle- increased over period between 1990 and 2010.
Total world: 192
oxford word skills unit 26
Hammer nail screwdriver drill hole
Needle pin scissors cotton/thread string
Rope wire sellotape glue
Nail:
To hammer a nail into a wall
long/ short nail
Screw:
A screw is like a nail.
Drill:
A dentist’s drill
Hole:
The sidewalk is full of holes.
digging … hole – full of holes
Tools:
A cellular phone is an indispensable tool for journalist.
Needle:
To thread a needle
thread a needle – use a needle
Cotton:
This shirt is 60% cotton and 40% polyester.
fine/ pure/ raw cotton – cotton cloth/ fabric – cotton shirt/ dress/ jacket
Sewing:
I can’t sew.
String:
I need some string to tie around this box.
piece of string
Rope:
We need some rope to tie up the boat.
Wire:
A wire fence
thin/ fine/ thick wire – a wire fance/ rack – a coil/ loop of wire
Glue:
You can make glue from flour and water.
Isn’t working:
The lamp isn’t working.
Leak:
There’s a leak in the pipe.
Crack:
A pane of glass with a crack in it
Cracked window
Replace:
We will replace any goods that are damaged.
Properly:
The shower didn’t work properly.
quite/ very/ perfectly properly – properly speaking
Faulty:
A faulty switch
Decorate a room:
The bedroom needs decorating.
Wrong:
What’s wrong with the car this time?
completely/ totally/ quite wrong – get something wrong – there is something/ nothing wrong
Stick:
The car was stuck in the mud.
Out of order:
The toilet’s out of order.
Stain:
The blood left a stain on his shirt.
Remove:
Please remove your shoes before entering the temple.
Fix:
The electrician’s coming to fix the light switch.
Repair:
How much will it cost to repair the car?
where can I get my shoes repaired? (get … repaired)
Mend:
The management tried to mend relations with unions.
oxford word skills unit 25
Hospital:
He was rushed to the hospital in an ambulance.
go to hospital – come out/ leave of hospital – hospital stay/ bed/ ward/ room
Concerned about sb:
If you are concerned about your baby’s health, you should consult a doctor immediately.
Specialist:
My doctor sent me to see a heart specialist.
Consultant:
He quit his old job and now works as a computer consultant.
political/ financial consultant – management/ marketing/ fashion consultant
Test:
The doctor took a blood test.
take/ pass/ fail a test – do/ carry out a test – go for a test – test results
x-rays:
The x-rays showed that the bone was not broken.
Scan:
All luggage will be scanned before it is loaded onto the plane.
Treat:
The boy was treated for burns at the hospital.
Operation:
The surgeon performed an operation on her for a kidney problem.
have/ do/ carry out/ survive an operation – major/ minor/ emergency/ knee/ heart operation
Immediately:
We need an ambulance immediately.
Straightaway:
We need to start work straightaway.
Urgent:
It’s not urgent; I’ll tell you about it later.
an urgent need/ problem/ task/ job/ meeting/ message – urgent action/ attention
Surgeon:
A brain surgeon
Benefit:
Most parents want to give their children the benefit of good education.
have the benefit of something – bring/ provide benefits – get a benefit – enjoy the benefits
Risk:
There is no risk to public health.
eliminate/ avoid/ face a risk – be worth the risk – big/ great/ huge/ considerable risk
Patient:
A hospital patient
Treat/ see/ examine a patient – heart/ mental/ cancer patient
Take care:
I can take care of our son in the journey.
Care for:
He was cared for by a team of nurses.
Successful:
The operation was successful.
highly Successful
Well enough:
Does she speak Italian well enough to get the job?
When you are well enough, you can go home to recover.
Recover:
I took him two months to recover from the operation.
recover damages
Ward:
The children’s ward
Theatre:
I’m going to the theatre.
good theatre
Get over:
He still hasn’t gotten over his wife’s death.
Enough:
There aren’t enough doctors.
I haven’t got enough money.
She’s not well enough to go out.
He’s strong enough to get up.
استاد کتاب open forum هم باید مثل tactics ویسهایی که گوش میکنیم رو هر چند ثانیه یک بار pause کرده و جمله رو تکرار کنیم یا فقط تستها و تمریناشو بزنیم؟
درود
این کار رو اگر وقت داشته باشید و انجام بدید خیلی خوب هست.
استاد در جمله زیر هاوایی قسمتی از اسم فیلم هست یا قید مکانه؟
در این مدلها باید چطور متوجه بشیم؟ مربوط به کتاب tactics هست.
We watched a movie of Sam’s vacation in Havaii.
اینجا اصلا اسم فیلم خاصی اشاره نشده
منطور دیدن فیلمی هست که sam از تعطیلاتش در هاوایی گرفته
ضمنا گفته بودیم که تجزیه ترکیب و تحلیل گرامری لازم نیست.
استاد جمله پاراگراف دو سمپل دوم تمرین تسک یک گراف رو تفسیر کرده و گفته که افرادی که شهر رو ترک کردن نمیتونستن هزینه ها رو پرداخت کنن. ما اجازه تفسیر در سوالات تسک یک داریم یا این غلطه؟
تشکر
درود.
داخل گراف دقیقا همین مورد رو اشاره کرده تفسیر نیست. دوباره ببین دقیق
oxford word skills unit 24
Toothache:
He suffers from toothache.
got toothache – terrible toothache
Bite sth:
The dog bit me and made his hand bleed.
bite your nail – bite your lip
Chew:
You should chew your food carefully.
chew gum – chew your lips/ nails
Painful:
A wasp sting can be very painful.
painful memory/ experience/ process/ feelings/ truth/ decision
Check-up:
I wish mom wouldn’t keep checking up on me every five minutes.
have … check-up
Dental surgery:
Dental care
She required surgery on her right knee.
Make an appointment:
I’d like to make an appointment to see the manager.
Examine sb:
I’m going to have my teeth examined next week.
Filling:
A gold filling
Take out a tooth:
The doctor said he would have to take out the tooth which was causing the pain.
Cause:
The fire was caused by careless smoking.
Treatment:
A new treatment for HIV infection.
give somebody treatment – have/ get/ receive treatment – effective/ medical/ dental/ cancer treatment
Dread:
I dread going to the dentist.
I dread to think
Look forward:
My treatment finishes tomorrow. I’m really looking forward to that.
Agree:
# Save time
# growth in public knowledge
Disagree:
# Lack of copyright rules
# Abuse of information
Sharing information took off in various fields and it has gained remarkable discoveries in scientific research. Although some people believe that sharing should be controlled, others argue that it should be increased. This essay discusses both viewpoints. (37 words)
Some people think there are major benefits in the sharing information. First of all, this method helps them to save time. When a scientist has carried out one special study, he has results. Therefore, exploring and tests for the same results by others around the world is a waste of time if sharing information is possible. On the other hand, scientific research is a complex process and sharing the results is strictly necessary. Secondly, there will be a significant growth in public knowledge of society. They access information and exploit them in each aspect that they need. (97 words)
Others still argue that there should be a limitation due to outstanding value of some information. First of all, there is no copyright laws with sharing information. Everybody can discriminately use information despite the fact that they even don’t know the information and strategies belongs to who. Thus, large number of companies and industries especially small businesses will be broken. Secondly, abuse of information is common and it has serious risks for safety requirements. There are always terrorist groups and they want to get the information to carry out a wave of attacks using bombs and lethal weapons. (98 words)
In my opinion sharing information is enormously useful owing to we can follow past results until we obtain desired results. It has achieved more productivity, quality and accuracy in academic research. However, we should put tough restriction on access to information. (41 words)
In conclusion, some people argue that some information is too crucial to be shared freely, while others believe that it is practical to share information in scientific exploration, business and academic applications. (32 words)
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These days internet is one the most important source for many users. Internet created huge revolution in many of lives and many of researches some people are agreeing to share all contents in the internet others are disagreeing it is not right way and they believe some information is too valuable for free sharing. (54 words)
Some people are consonant to free sharing. First of all, convenient access to large number of information. Nowadays internet is available for most people and they have access to information easily. Many websites provide valuable information for users freely to raise awareness of people. Free sharing and easy access help users to improve their life style and thoughts. A generation that have free access to the Internet have more knowledge rather than who do not have. Secondly, prevent of wasting time for users that looking for information. Internet is wide world and people meet their needs in the shortest time without wasting time or high costs. (106 words)
On the other hand some people are disagree to free sharing. First of all, restrict audiences. Without free sharing reduce the number of audiences. Maybe this way helps them to control the users. Restrict audiences alternate the users to specialized group to search and other works. Secondly, monopolize the information. Exclusive information can make them money. They want to control the information and people and direct the thoughts to their ways that they want. Monopolize the information makes them fully aware of the data. Control the users and information prevent to publish the useless or inaccurate information for other users. (100 words)
In my opinion free access to the large number of important information is beneficial for users and makes people progress. (20 words)
In conclusion, some people believe is not good to free sharing the information. Others believe sharing the information must available for free to people. (24 words)
Writing Task 2
Share information
Agree
# inform more citizen and experts
# save time
Disagree
# abuse information
# cause less competition
Nowadays, knowledge is wealth and when it is shared its value multiplies. Although some people maintain that information sharing should be accessed without restriction, other including me argue that it must be limited. I will discuss both viewpoints.
To begin with, some people think sharing information is a good manner to knowledge development. First of all, it is important that information related to new technologies should be shared because it has the potential to inform more citizen and experts in a society. A society which is experts in many fields improves people’s literacy and lives. Secondly, there are a wide range of information to facilitate the knowledge development and the availability of data could help us save time. Thus, time saving help us enhance our knowledge in many domination and conduct other’s achievement in our research.
On the other hand, there are a number of reasons why some people are reluctant to share knowledge with others. First of all, some information related to new products or designs is regarded as valuable assets in academic world. By sharing these knowledge, unskilled people could make a great hit in the academic world and they might abuse this information for their purpose. Secondly, with regard to researchers, they devoted their entire life to investigating in scientific issues. By publishing their achievement, there is no a sense of competitive and creatives among scientists. Therefore, they will no longer have the motivation to improve unsolved issues.
In my viewpoint, everyone could publish their achievement, however they should be provided sufficient reward such as patent or copyright and access of specialized information should be restricted as well as.
In conclusion, although some people argue that by sharing a lot knowledge could benefit greatly, some people including me believe that some information must be under control.
Free share information
Agree
#Save time
# cheaper and more available
Disagree
# abused by some people
# plagiarism
It is true that nowadays due to new technologies,access to free information became far more widespread and easily. while some argue that information sharing should be maximized, Others including me believe that there should be a limitation for sharing. In the following essay I intend to explore both viewpoints.
Some people believe that information should be shared freely without any limitations. Firstly, it can save a significant time of researchers and help them to devoting time to continue the study rather than spending time to do the same research anew. Secondly, sharing information take undoubtedly lower cost for scientists to use and work further on it. Moreover, it can be also more possible to achieve to the final result more rapidly. As a consequence sharing information can make it more accessible for who are seeking for the academic and valuable information .Therefore, regarding to this view benefits of sharing free information is more considerable.
On the other hand, while others maintain that sharing free information has to be more controlled because of two essential reasons. Firstly, valuable information can be abused by some people in order to commit crime activities. For instance, using by terrorist associations to make raps or other serious crimes. Secondly, plagiarism can be another issue of sharing free information. Although almost every university make use of a kind of plagiarism checker to avoid plagiarizing in a academic environment but it is still a difficult issue for other gropes of users to distinguish the original research from the fake one.
In conclusion, in the recent time, there are significant and worthy information shared freely. although some people observe that as a considerable issue. I am personally invined that sharing information should be obliged to control by some limitations.
این جلسه هم ویس های شما ارسال نشده.
In today’s world,information has a lot of values.Although,some people believe that they should share their data or knowledge ,others try to keep data themselves.This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.
sharing research and science is one of the best ways to spread science among societies.First of all,sharing information will increases human knowledge.When knowledge grows society’s culture and discipline will grow.It is believed the major progress in developed countries is that they share their information and experience ,so increasing knowledge and data brings a lot of power with itself.Secondly,sharing information help to progress.There are people who they push the world forward,because when the data or results from their research are available,others can extend the finding or invent new something.
Limiting sharing information can also be verified.First of all,do not sharing information makes people to be in more security.There are several reasons for belief that some information ,if widely shared ,could makes a lot of detrimental effects.Government research on nuclear technologies ,for instance ,if disclosed could lead to national security threats.Secondly,some argue that enhancing individual information is not easy to share with others freely,as money and time were spent that such information gained.Also people who for organizations have salary and none of them work freely.
I believe that sharing ideas and information with others help us to progress more in our lives.Although,it is fine to keep some information to yourself.
In conclusion ,there are tow types of people .some people think that it is alright to share the information with the world while others disagree.
Sharing free:
+ improve health condition
+ more knowledge
Sharing limited:
+ more threat
+ decrease of income
Since the las century, the world has seen a massive growth in the amount of information in all subjects such as science and business. Some people believe that information should be shared freely, while others say that there are some kinds of information shouldn`t be available for all. I will discuss both opinion in this essay. 56
Some people argue for more sharing of information. First of all, information relevant to health and medicine researches can help to find new cures and drugs, so it causes to improve the health conditions and save many lives. Secondly, some students, researchers and scientists don`t have enough money for researches and new researches need a lot of money, therefor with sharing information, they can use the previous investigations and work on them without paying more money. 76
On the other hand, others believe in restriction of sharing information. First of all, information about sensitive and important matters such as nuclear researches can be used by terrorists and it leads to dead more people. Secondly, many companies and factories cost a lot for their new products and services and without limitation of sharing information, rivals can get their information easily and produce same services or products, in result in, their income decrease and they may get broke. 79
I think that information can be shared by everyone, of course with attention to copyright statement and checking significance of information. 21
By way of conclusion, the advantages of free sharing information are certain, benefits of limitation of information however are also undeniable and society must pay more attention to it and copyright statement. 32
Total words: 264
سلام استاد کتاب open forum یه سری از سوالات چند دقیقه راجع به جواب توضیح میده بعد ما باید او قسمتی که مد نظر سال هست رو به طورخلاصه تو جواب بنویسیم… اینکار رو انجام بدیم برای این سوالات؟
درود
والا سوال ها که در کتاب کامل توضیح داده شده که به چه صورت هست و چه چیزی رو دقیق میخواد. اگر مورد خاصی مد نظر شما هست عکس بگیرید در تلگرام برای من بفرستید یا صورت سوال رو تایپ بفرمایید همینجا که توضیح بدم خدمتتون.
صفحه ۱۳ پارت B
سلام استاد. کتاب open froum خیلی سخت هست. من از شنیدن به تنهایی متوجه نمیشم و نمی تونم سوالات رو جواب بدم و حتما باید با متن خط ببرم و کلمات رو ببینم تا متوجه بشم. چه کنم؟
درود
اگر به اندازه کافی روی کتاب های لیسنینگ قبلی کار کرده باشید نباید مشکل زیادی وجود داشته باشه. تمرین بیشتری روی این کتاب داشته باشید اگر نتونستید نتیجه بگیرید باید برگردید از کتاب های قبلی استارت بزنید و پایتون رو قوی کنید.
oxford word skills unit 23
Cap cotton blouse/shirt
belt waistcoat denim skirt
High-heeled leather boots earring bracelet
silk dress short sleeves
Necklace ring v-neck sweater
button suede shoes pocket
Bra material fabric jewellery
Knickers slip` underpants vest
Stylish:
Arash is quite stylish.
Suit:
That coat really suits Hamid.
suit the occasion – suit somebody perfectly/ fine/ well
Figure:
She’s almost 50, but she still has the figure of a teenager.
Fashionable:
A fashionable woman
fashionable area/ address
Neutral:
Neutral color
Elegant:
She looked very elegant in her new dress.
impossible/ extremely/ rather elegant
Versatile:
It’s a very versatile jacket. I can wear it on different occasion.
Match:
Those shoes aren’t a very good match with your dress.
Outfit:
She bought a new outfit for the party.
Transform:
The arrival of electricity transformed people’s lives.
Latest:
The latest news
Accessory:
Fashion accessory
select reading chapter 7
Blog:
They have an online blog to teach other people how to speak English.
Community:
There are a lot of communities in my country.
small/ large/ local/ rural/ village/ farming/ thriving community – business/ religious/ black community
Environment:
We need strong laws to protect the environment.
harm/ destroy/ pollute/ clean up/ protect the environment – fragile environment – physical environment
Farming:
Some soils aren’t suitable for farming.
organic/ sheep/ dairy farming
Neighborhood:
She grew in quiet neighborhood of Tehran.
whole neighborhood
Roof (top):
A cat was up on the rooftop.
Take care of:
Import:
In 2001, Britain exported more cars the is imported.
Get to know:
We’re still getting to know each other really.
Reach:
The kids have reached the age when they can care for themselves.
reach a point/ stage/ level/ age – reach the end – reach a decision/ conclusion
Average:
The cars were being sold at an average price of $10000.
average age/ cost/ price
Crowded:
The train was very crowded and we had to stand.
Fresh:
I’ll just make some fresh coffee.
fresh fruit/ vegetable/ fish/ bread
Overseas:
Most applications came from overseas.
Urban:
Most of the population is an urban population in my country.
select readings chapter 6
Company:
She works for an industrial company.
large/ big/ small/ international/ private/ state-owned company
Dream:
His dream is to make a movie.
have a dream – follow/ pursue a dream – big/ great/ childhood/ impossible dream
Manager:
He was the manager of a restaurant.
bank/ sales/ general/ middle manager
Profit:
The shop’s daily profit is usually around $500.
big/ huge/ quick/ good/ substantial/ small/ modest profit – make/ earn/ turn/ show a profit
End up:
He came round for a coffee and we ended up having a meal together.
Fail:
Doctors failed to save the girl’s life.
Hope:
I was hoped that the job would be filled by a local person.
I hope to God
Impress:
He borrowed his dad’s car to impress his girlfriend.
Improve:
The doctor say she is improving.
Succeed:
She wanted to be the first woman to climb Mount Everest and she almost succeeded.
Wonder:
What are they going to do? I wonder.
Successful:
The operation was successful.
highly/ very/ enormously/ spectacularly/ remarkably extremely/ hugely successful
(work) hard:
She has worked hard all her life.
tried her hardest
Started out:
I started out as a doctor in 2000.
To save money on food:
I’m going to take the bus to save money.
I always did the best I could
Greasy:
The food was heavy and greasy.
Remodeled:
The airport terminals have extensively remodeled.
select reading chapter 5
Advertisement:
The Sunday papers are full of advertisements for cars.
Car/ holiday/ shampoo/ job/ magazine/ TV/ internet/ advertisement – run/ carry an advertisement
Challenge:
The company is ready to meet the challenges of the next few years.
meet/ enjoy/ love/ accept a challenge – big/ huge/ serious/ real challenge
Customer:
We’ve had several letters from satisfied customers.
good/ loyal/ big/ large customer – keep/ retain/ attract/ lose a customer – customer complaints
Dial:
Marketing:
The direct marketing industry has become popular.
Privacy:
I enjoy of more privacy.
Ensure privacy – respect somebody’s privacy
Social networking:
Download:
He downloads a lot music.
Reject:
Sarah rejected her brother’s offer of help.
Digital:
Digital camera/ watch
Personal:
My personal view is that we shouldn’t offer him a job.
Somebody’s personal possession/ property/ view/ opinion – personal experience – personal relationship
Upset:
She was deeply upset about the way her father treated her.
Apartment complex:
Content:
The graphics are brilliant. It’s just the shame the content is so poor.
table of contents
Check out a website:
Click on a website:
Do a search (online)
Download music
Upload photos
Read a blog
Send e-mail
Add (someone) to my friends list
select reading chapter 5
Lifestyle:
Regular lifestyle is part of a healthy lifestyle.
healthy / active/ comfortable/ busy/ stressful/ simple lifestyle – maintain/ change your lifestyle
Organization:
The organization has a large annual budget.
international organization
Relationship:
I have quite a good relationship with my parents.
have/ form/ cement a relationship – make relationship – close/ good/ strong relationship
Volunteer:
We need a volunteer for this exercise.
Appreciate:
I appreciate your concern, but honestly, I’m fine.
Offer:
They offered him a very good job but he turned it down.
(keep in) touch:
I keep in touch with my friends.
Volunteer:
She volunteered to have thanksgiving at her house this year.
Close (relationship):
She has a very close relationship with her sister.
Uncomfortable:
This sofa is so uncomfortable.
In need: needing help
Decent housing: livable housing
Affluent:
Make a difference:
Sense of fulfillment:
Are you looking for greater fulfillment and satisfaction in your work?
oxford word skills
Trouble:
If I don’t get home by 11 o’clock, I’ll be in trouble.
big/ great/ serious – have/ cause truble
Held up:
We were held up by the traffic.
Get held up:
We got held up in traffic.
Delayed:
The plane was delayed for several hours because of bad weather.
seriously/ badly/ slightly delayed
Day return:
My day return was only valid after 9.
Valid:
This ticket is valid for Sunday’s game.
equally/ statistically/ scientifically valid – valid point/ reason/ argument/ excuse
Due:
What is the plane due?
Get in:
What time does your flight get in?
Cancel:
Because of the bad weather, the picnic was canceled.
Warning:
He gave me no warning of his arrival.
give/ deliver/ ignore a warning – without warning – flood/ gale/ tornado warning
Connecting flight:
I missed my connecting flight to Tehran.
Mean to do:
I’m sure she didn’t mean to upset you.
Pick up:
My sister is coming to pick me up at 10:00.
Turn up:
What time did they finally turn up?
I lost my glasses a week ago and they still haven’t turned up.
Trip:
Did you enjoy your trip to Tehran?
go on a trip – take/ make a trip – shopping/ skiing/ fishing trip – coach/ bus/ boat trip – a day trip
Overnight:
Why don’t you stay overnight?
Hire a car/rent a car:
We hired a car and drove up to Tehran.
We rented a car and drove up to Tehran.
Stop off:
We stopped off in Tehran to see some friends before coming home.
Via:
We flew to Tehran via Mashhad.
Nightmare:
Driving in rush-hour traffic can be a real nightmare.
absolute/ complete/ real/ personal/ private nightmare – nightmare/ journey trip
Get/be stuck:
We got stuck in a traffic jam for hours.
Traffic jam:
We were stuck in a traffic jam for two hours.
End up:
We got lost and ended up in a bad part of town.
The outskirts:
They live on the outskirts of Paris.
Heavy traffic:
There was more heavy traffic.
Rush hour:
Driving in rush-hour traffic can be a real nightmare.
Serious accident:
There’s been a serious accident on the road.
Occur:
The accident occurred late last night.
Van:
A van driver
Skid:
I skidded on a patch of ice.
Collide:
The truck collided with a bus, but fortunately nobody was injured.
Energy is released when the two atoms collide.
Crash into:
He crashed into the tree after he skidded on the wet road.
The van crashed into another car.
Vehicle:
The truck collided with other vehicles.
Block a road:
The accident blocked a road.
Lane:
You should signal before you change lanes.
fast/ slow lane – inside/ middle/ outside lane
Emergency services:
I have called emergency services.
Avoid:
I leave home at 7 o’clock to avoid the rush hour.
narrowly avoided
Ambulance:
The ambulance services
ambulance service – call an ambulance
Break down:
We had a breakdown on the freeway.
Injured:
Three people were seriously injured.
badly injured
استاد رایتینگ این نمونه ای که گذاشتید رو کار کنیم یا اون موضوعی که توی کلاس گفتید؟متفاوتن
درود
ممنون از تذکر شما. تصحیح شد. تاپیک sharing information مد نظر هست.
agree
#convenient access to large number information
#prevent of wasting time
disagree
#restrict audience
#monopolize
Good
The chart illustrates the time spent on three different soort of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years between 1995 to 2002.
Local fixed call was used in popularity during this period and it began at just above 70 billion minutes in 1995 and rose significantly to reach a slightly less than 90 billion minutes in1998. After peaking at 90 billion following year this call began to decrease significantly to just above 70 billion again.
The number of National and international fixed line calls climbed steadily from about 38 billion minutes in 1995 to reach a peak of over 61 billion in 2002. Likewise, the number of minutes spoken using mobile calls rose consideably from 2 billion to 46 billion minutes in the final year.
Overall,although UK residents spent still the most time on local fixed , it seems obvious that there were a slight difference between three categories at the end of the period and they had very similar level of popularity.
Verstuurd vanaf mijn iPhone
درود
رایتینگ شما بعد از مهلت تعیین شده ارسال شده و فیدبک کلی دریافت میکند:
چهارچوب کلی رایتینگ شما خوب هست. دقت کنید با توجه به نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس جمله های درست تری از نظر دستوری بنویسید.
The bar chart shows the minutes ( in billions ) of people that used in different categories in uk. The chart groups the people according to categories and divides these call type groups into local , national and international and mobile(41 words).
The number of local calls that achieved ranged from the highest number of 90 minutes (in billions) in 1999 to the lowest number of just over 70 minutes (in billions ) in 2002.
In 1995, national and international were fewer than 40 billion minutes. The range numbers increased gradually from 1995 to 2002. The national and international had same range of minutes from 2001 to 2002 .
At first , the numbers of minutes were fewer minutes than minutes in other years but, mobile call had very quickly grew for 7 years. In 2002 , the number of minutes was just over 40 billion minutes(105 words).
In conclusion, there are clear diffrences between the local , the national and international and mobile but, mobile calls had more rapidly improved than another categories(26 words).
This chart illustrates the whole length of time spent by people from UK on three different types of telephone calls over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.
The number of minutes in local fixed line were more than 70 billion minutes at the beginning of period in 1995 and it had the highest amount throughout the chart. Then, it started to increase gradually until 1999 and it reached 90 billion minutes. After that, it decreased gently to the same level of 1995 in 2002.
The rate of rise in National and International fixed lines and Mobiles is very similar. Although less than 40 and five billion minutes were spoken respectively in 1995, it peaked to about 60 and 45 billion minutes in 2002. There was a significant growth in the last three years for Mobiles.
Overall, it seems a huge gap in the ways of telephoning in UK at the beginning of period in 1995 but the popularity of these categories is alike with a slight difference in 2002.
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Writing Task 1
The bar chart illustrates an average time spent on different type of telephone calls in UK between 1995 and 2002.
According to the chart, the most popular telephone calls was local fixed line which rising from 70 to 90 billion minutes over a four-year period between 1995 and 1998. After a peaking at 90 billion the following years, the figures fall back to the level of 70 billion minutes in 2002.
The average of time spent on national and international fixed line was less than 40 billion minutes in 1995. After over a seven-year period the figures surged gradually from 38 billion to 60 billion minutes between 1996 to 2002.
At the beginning the growth for mobile cells was only less than 10 billion minutes in 1995. Then there was a significant rise from 5 to 46 billion minutes during year 1996 to 2002. As can be shown, the number of time spent on cell phone has been tripled.
Overall, although the fixed line was still more popular among three categories at the final year, other types of telephone calls were more common over the second half of the period in question.
The chart shows the time spent by uk telephone calls on three different way such as fixed line, national call and mobile call over a period of time from 1995 to 2002.
The most popular way of calls were local calls in 1995 to 2002.
In 1995, local calls were more than 70 billions minutes. This number increased after four years in 1999 also, reached to 90 billion minutes .the end of the period of time in 2002 this number falling back to the first level.
International calls and mobile calls were less than local calls .international calls were 37 billion minutes in 1995. This number increased all over the period of time .
Another categories eww mobile calls.it seems that was popularity calls in the uk. The spent on the mobile calls were less than 10 billion calls in 1995.next it surged dramatically from 2 billion to 40 billion minutes end of throughout the time.
Overall, although local fixed line calls were the popular calls until in 2002 .the gap between three categories were more at the first time in 1995 and after the eight years had the least diffrence.182
The charts shows the time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK between 1995 and 2002.
Local-fixed line calls were most popular way of telephone over the period. in 1995, these were more than 70 billion minutes. This number has a growth to 90 billion in 1998. then, it has a fall to 70 billion minutes again.
At the beginning, National and international fixed line calls were less than 40 billion minutes, then, this number increases slightly to 61 billion minutes at the end of period. This type of telephoning always was in second rank.
The lowest popular way of telephoning was mobile calls over the period but there were a significant growth from 2 billion minutes in 1995 to 42 billion minutes in 2002.
Overall, popularity rank of time spent on three categories of telephone calls didn’t change but the gap between these had narrowed. Mobile calls in comparison with other categories experienced most growth.(158 words)
This bar chart outlines reveals duration of phone calls by United Kingdom residents divided into three different type between 1995 and 2002.
Looking at the details, in 1995, people talked over 70 billion minutes on local-fixed line and it had a rise gradually and reached 90 billion minutes in 1999 and after that, the number had a drop year by year and fell back to level of 1955, about 70 billion minutes in 2002.
The national & international fixed line calls were about 38 billion minutes in the beginning of period in 1995, then this number surged each year regularly and reached a little more than 60 billion while the other category, Mobiles were less than two other types over the period. At the beginning of the course, the number of using mobiles were only 3 billion and it has a little growth in the first half of period but in the second half of period, from 1999, it increased significantly and reached a peak in 2001, at around 50 billion minutes before falling by 45 billion minutes in the next year.
Overall, this graph shows that the gap between three categories in 1955 was more than the end of course and the popularity of these types became closer to each other over the period.
Total: 215 words
رایتینگ های تسک ۲ باید زیر ۲۰۰ واژه باشند.
select readings chapter 3
Energy:
Experience:
You have got a lot of experience of lecturing.
have/ get experience – lack experience – relevant/ practical/ useful experience
Expression:
The letter was a genuine expression of sympathy.
expression of sympathy
Meaning:
I don’t know the precise meaning of this word.
precise/ specific/ exact meaning – understand the meaning
Wallet:
He took a credit card out of his wallet.
Expect:
We are expecting up to 100 people at the meeting.
as expected
Judge:
You can’t judge a person by what he’s wearing.
Pass (a test):
I passed all my exams.
Recycle:
We take all our bottles to be recycled.
Run into:
If you run into problems, just let me know.
Spill:
I’ve spilt all coffee all down my shirt.
Embarrassing:
This incident is deeply embarrassing for the government.
embarrassing questions/ situation
Negative:
He gave a negative answer without any explanation.
Negative response/ answer
On the negative side
select reading chapter 2
Advice:
You should have followed my advice.
get some advice – give somebody advice – ask for advice
Impression:
When we looked around the school, we got a very good impression.
create an impression – make an impression – take an impression
Do (research):
Find:
I can find the car keys.
(get) used (to):
He used to go to our school.
Realize:
I suddenly realized that the boy was crying.
Request:
He repeated his request that we postpone the meeting.
make a request – submit a request – refuse/ reject a request – receive a request
Select:
They selected the winner from 6 finalists.
Treat (someone like):
Worry (about):
I worry about my daughter.
Alone:
She lives alone/ by herself.
Delicious:
The main dish was absolutely delicious.
absolutely/ quite delicious
Native:
Native language
native species
Reasonable:
The rent is reasonable for this house.
oxford word skills unit 21
Tip:
Thanks for the tip.
Be prepared for sth:
Always be prepared for bad weather condition.
Brake:
Test your brakes after driving through water.
put the brakes on – release the brake – faulty brake – hand brake – the rear/ front break
Steer:
She was steering with only one hand.
Accelerate:
I accelerated and left the other cars behind.
Slow down:
Can’t you slow down a little bit? You are driving way too fast.
Skid:
The car skidded as she turned onto the highway.
Watch out for sth:
Watch out for snakes if you walk through the fields.
Overtake sb/sth:
Our company has now overtaken all its competitors.
Reverse:
Ali reversed into a parking space.
reverse a position/ decision
Rather than:
I think I’ll just have a sandwich rather than a full meal.
In place of:
You can use milk in place of cream in the recipe.
Speed limit:
Keep to the speed limit.
exceed/ break the speed limit
Close to sth:
Is our hotel close to the beach?
Keep:
I’m sorry to keep you waiting.
The chart illustrates the alternations of using the different call types in the UK of determined period.
Using of local-fixed line was more than 70 billion minutes in 1995. It increased gradually and reached to the peak of using approximately 90 billion minutes in 1999 afterward it decreased until 2002 and reached to the same results in 1995.
National and international fixed calls grew constantly .at firs in 1995 they were something about 40 billion minutes and registered index of more than 60 billion minutes in 2002.
Mobiles were less than of other index and had great difference compared to other major indicators. they experienced the most growth in particular period. At first they were fewer of 10 billion minutes in 1995 and recorded index of slightly more than 40 billion minutes in 2002.
Overall, although local fixed line calls were still the most popular in 2002 other indexes had the most accretion in the same period and they approached to the local fixed line. (165 words)
Internet:
+:
# Save time
# Better communication
-:
# Addiction
# Developing of p..o///r..n//o..g,,r/a..p..h..y industry
The internet has considerably transformed our lives in recent years. Although there are disadvantages in the use of internet, there are more benefits compare with them. This essay will discuss these points. (32 words)
There are many positive changes in the use of internet. First of all, people can save time with use the internet and they do a lot of their works in the internet rather than going to related places such as banks, shopping centers and so on. This was extremely difficult for old people and internet is highly beneficial for them. Nowadays, they don’t have to spend their time in traffic and deliver their orders through the fast delivery system. Secondly, people have better communication between each other in everywhere of the world and they have good contact with social networks even video contact and most of these networks are free. (110 words)
However, there are disadvantages in the use of internet. First of all, some people become internet addicts. They spend their time for hours in the internet without any purposes and they don’t even understand their starving. Unfortunately, a small number of these addicts die due to starving around the world every year. Secondly, p..o///r..n//o..g,,r/a..p..h..y industry has developed in the internet and there are a lot of sites. Regrettably, people can be accessed them easily and this is incredibly dangerous for children’s mentally healthy. They watch //p…o…r…n…/o/// videos and hurt themselves. Sometimes, they experience the first their ..s…e///x.. with their friends and interested to …g…/a…/.y…/s and l..e/.s..b..i..a..n..s.. (106 words)
Overall, there are some disadvantages in the use of internet for people, while there are more benefits in use it that they make us comfortable living. (26 words)
Todays our life is deeply affected by the internet.Although some of this technology results have been negative,others
mostly have positive effect
on our life.This essay will discuss about both of these viewpoints.
Advantages of using Internet are so much.First of all,facilities from distance in many fields,surgeries and different educational levels can be pointed.If you live in a farm far away from a big city you can access to any kind of educations and it causes you can live in any optional place beside your type of educating.Secondly,you can communicate with any beloved one.There is no problem.In any time and place you can connect to your family or your friends all around the world.
Of course there are many disadvantages.Firstly it is heard that Internet has caused bad effects on brain especially on kid’s brain.A sentence is heighlighted.Kids ‘brain is damper than adult’s brain and this kind ofhumidity absorb more rays.Because of this fact kids hurt much more than adults by Internet rays and it causes cancer in their young ages.Secondly difficulties in finding out ehat is reality or unreality.There is a problem of true or false in every thing,human,news,beliefs,relationship.There is a good and useful situation for offenders to bothet people in mental,educational,business and any field that you can think of.
In conclusion,many people think that Interney harms are much more than it’s benefits while others including me believe that the advantages should not be unseen.Using any technology in a right way can be so useful.(283 words(
جمله ها را با دقت بیشتری بنویسید. با ساده نوشتن و بررسی دقیق ساختارها کوشش کنید تعداد جمله های نادرست و نامفهوم را کاهش دهید
ممنونم استاد گرامى
oxford word skills unit 20
Burn:
The water was so hot that it burned my hands.
Cut:
This knife doesn’t cut very well.
Blood:
The heart pumps blood around the body.
Cover:
Could you cover the food and put it in the fridge?
Prevent:
Her parents tried to prevent her from going to live with her boyfriend.
Infection:
She is suffering from a chest infection.
An ear infection
Symptom:
What are the symptoms of the flu?
Develop:
To develop from a child into an adult
Thoroughly:
Do your homework thoroughly.
Wound:
Wash and bandage the wound.
The wound is healing well.
Temporarily:
This arrangement is only temporary.
Use my own pen temporarily.
Heal:
The cut will heal up in a few days if you keep it clean and dry.
Slip:
Don’t slip on that floor. I just mopped it.
Elbow:
Dizzy:
To feel dizzy
He had been to the doctor complaining of headaches and dizziness.
Faint:
She fainted from shock and loss of blood.
Bruise:
She had a badly bruised face.
I fell down and bruise my knee.
Nasty:
Nasty weather
Injury:
Injury to the head can be extremely dangerous.
Injure:
Three people were seriously injured.
Backward:
A backward step
Forward:
Keep going forward and try not to look back.
Bang:
As I was crossing the room in the dark, I banged into a table.
Unconscious:
She was found lying unconscious on the kitchen floor.
Conscious:
She was badly injured but conscious and able to tell the doctor what had happened.
Come round: opp pass out
when he came round he didn’t know where he was.
Swollen:
Her leg was badly swollen after the accident.
Bleed:
Is your finger bleeding?
Internet
+
#share information
#more communicate
–
#waste of time
#lake of movement
The internet can have a dramatic effect on our life.How ever, There is some argument between users about effect of the internet has been good or bad . in this essay I’ll discuss about contrary effect(36 words ).
There are many informations about every thing in the internet. First of all , the internet create convenience in sharing informations. We can share our information in the internet also we can create new website about interesting issue such as economical , cultrul and society also we can ask about our letter or photo also we can share opinion or feeling.secondly, we can make a friend in web chatt and commiunicate with people on far away countries. The internet has caused world similar to village also we can keep friends in far away for many years and know about them life , them good news or bad news(108 words).
These days most of people use the internet for every thing. First of all , every day the number of users have more than before because access to internet has been easily.improving technology such as mobile, quicly internet etc has caused most of people often use in the internet and wast time because some people spend most of time ine the internet and addict it.they often use internet for social net work,visiting websites etc. secondly, The internet has caused people more lake of movement because they can buy every thing that they need on websites without they will going out. This issue affect of directly in our healthy(108 words ).
Overall, some people are very worried about bad effect of internet in them life , while I restate my opinion that the internet has positively improved our life because its effect of our knoweledg(34 words).
رایتینگ شما با بی دقتی نوشته شده و فرمتی که تدریس شده در آن رعایت نشده.
همچنین خطاهای دستوری هم در این رایتینگ به چشم میخورد. لطفا با توجه به توضیحات و با ساه نویسی و چک کردن در دیکشنری رایتینگ های بعدی را ارسال فرمایید.
Internet
Advantages
# a variety of information
# better Communication
Disadvantages
# health problem
# privacy problem
Internet has been one of the most outstanding innovation in our modern life. Although internet has offerd extremely benefits there are Some drawbacks as well. In this essey I will examine the issue and provide reasons for both viewpoints.
There are significant advantages of internet. Firstly, Internet has provided a variety of information which make it simple and convenient for Every one to use and gather the informaion without going to large library’s and searching among the books. In addition, it save considerably time and also the money . Another advantage of internet is better communication . In other words internet has made the world as a global village. Consequently there is no limited for business comunicarions and the trade throughout the diffetent countries with long distances among. As a result there is a wide range of opprtunity’s avalible.
On the other hand, however there are Some disadvanages visible for this issu. Fitstly, health problem due to less physical activity and beeing addicted which is a common problem through the teenagers and can have serieus consequences for their study and their future life.Another negative aspect of internet is that internet can risk the privacy of the users of internet which has been a known problem since the early days of the internet and can cause criminal activities. Therefore, doing the criminial activities are became easier since innovation of internet.
In conclution, internet has affected the kwality of our life because of beter communication and easy access to a numerous of information however disadvanteges cannot be ignored.
Verstuurd vanaf mijn iPhone
Verstuurd vanaf mijn iPhone
Oxford word skills
Unit 17
Keep sth up: Keep up the good work.
Put on weight: I think I am putting on a little weight. I had better go on a diet.
Junk food: He eats a lot of junk food.
Plenty of sth: This car has plenty of power.
Fizzy drink: I don`t like fizzy drink.
Snack: I had a huge lunch, so I’ll only need a snack for dinner.
Fattening: I love desserts, but they’re so fattening.
Cut down on sth: I’m trying to cut down on the amount of sugar I eat.
Minced: The lamb is minced, mixed with spices, and formed into meatballs.
Flour: Add the flour to the eggs and milk
Recipe: For real South Asian food, just follow these recipes.
Peel: Could you peel the carrots?
Mash: Mash the potatoes and then mix in the butter and herbs.
Chop: Chop (up) the onions and carrots
Stir: Slowly add the flour, stirring until completely blended.
Ingredients: The list of ingredients included 250 g of almonds.
Stock: I prepared chicken stock with bouillon cubes
Boil sth: I’ve boiled some potatoes for dinner.
Bake sth: I made the icing while the cake was baking.
Unit 18
Afford sth: I don’t know how he can afford a new car.
Scratch: There was a scratch on the CD
Discount: They offer a ten percent discount on travel for students.
Reduction: Stores are offering big reductions this weekend.
Off: There’s 40 percent off this week on all winter coats.
Refund: I took the radio back to the shop and got a refund.
The sales: I got some shoes cheap in the sale.
Reduce sth: The plane reduced speed as it approached the airport.
Reduction: Stores are offering big reductions this weekend.
Bargain: She has a sharp eye for a bargain.
Change: I need to change my dollars for/into English money.
Income: Average incomes have risen by 4.5 percent over the past year.
Wealthy: He’s a very wealthy man
Worth: My house now is worth double what I paid for it.
Cost a fortune: The movie cost a fortune and flopped.
Value sth at sth: He bought a car valued at 9000$.
Own sth: They own 20% of the company’s stock.
Amount: He liked to carry a large amount of money around with him.
Broke: Many small businesses went broke during the recession.
Owe sb sth: Don’t forget! You owe me ten dollars.
Dept: He managed to pay off his debts in two years.
These days internet has changed our lives. although, there are advantages for internet, disadvantages can make negative effects on life. This essay discusses both side of these issues.
There are positive effects for internet users and it is the integral part of our lives . First of all, in many countries government provide internet access easily and users can connect to the internet without problem and search websites for their entertainments or work issues and scientific researches in valid resources. Secondly, people can share information in many websites and social programs for free and attract people for their sharing. It can approximate them together. free sharing has helped people to achieve recent information about many things which they need or want and it improved life style with its facility.
In other hand internet has some disadvantages for users. First of all, every person can share false information without valid sources and users find incorrect information in it. Some of people rely on contents and it gives them many problems and dangers in internet. Secondly, internet has destructive effects on person’s spirit especially addiction. Internet has addictive effect on people. they are wasting time on internet and it keeps people away from their life. countries give warning to people to avoid from dangers in internet and use it correctly and they are teaching people to use correctly also manage their time.
In conclusion, there are some disadvantages for internet, while the internet is more beneficial in current life and current expecting of life. (253 words)
متشکرم
The internet has caused dramatically changes to our lives in recent years. Although, presence of internet has made positive effects to our lives, but its expansion has brought negative effects. I personally believe its advantages are greater than disadvantages. These advantages are twofold. (43words)
First of all, from aspect of communication The Internet has transformed the large world into a small village, so that, people can be aware from news and events in all over the world and they can contact with their family and friends when they are in different places. secondly, invention of internet has made an opportunity for students, scientists and other person that they can search about different issues and they can use the knowledge of other people and improve their knowledge. For example, when you want to buy new production, you can ask other people about its performance, then make a decision about buying it. (106words)
Although internet has more advantage, it has disadvantages that it can’t be ignored. first of all, there are lots of information about different issues that some of these aren’t helpful and useful, also, there are gossips about celebrities, you should identify the correct information from false information. Secondly, nowadays with expansion of internet and social networks people share personal photos and ideas with each other, hackers and governments and the owners of the internet companies can access these information. for this reason, the security of persons are in risk. (90words)
By way of conclusion, internet has more advantages about achievement to information and better communication but it should be considered some disadvantages for use efficiency. (263 words)
رایتینگ شما با بی توجهی به شیوه تدریس نوشته شده و پاراگراف نویسی با شیوه تدریس شده و چک لیست هماهنگ نیست. نوشتن رایتینگ بدون توجه به تدریس انجام شده تنها وقت شما را هدر میدهد و تاثیری بر روی نمره شما نخواهد داشت.
Writing Task 2
The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
The internet has caused dramatic changes in our lives in recent years. Yet there is some disagreement about this technology as to whether it has impacted on our lives positively or negatively. I will discuss both positive and negative effects in this essay. (43 words)
There are some benefits of the internet and cyberspace. First of all, in the earlier times, student and researcher need to visit a library to access information relevant to their research subjects. Nowadays, they can use the internet and brows online to search information and access to them easily. Secondly, in past decades, managers and businessman had to travelled for their business with planes and it had high cost but, these days, by expanding the internet they do not need to meet others physically just to discuss matters. Thus, it leads to saving on a lot of travel cost with sitting in the internet conference room. (106 words)
On the other hand, negative aspects of the internet still remain and we can`t ignore them. Firstly, people absorb in their online activities and forget that they live with real people who need to their attention. As well as, social network leads to give more importance for virtual friends than real friends. Secondly, offspring, young adults and even adults can get addicted to online games and they don`t have any time for other useful activities. Also, so many children have decided to spend all of their expensive times in the internet and play online game rather than playing outside. (99 words)
By way of conclusion, the advantages of Internet are certain, the negative aspects however are also undeniable and it need to pay more attention by society. (26 words)
Total words: 274
استاد یعنی اگه از yet استفاده کنیم نمره کم میشه؟؟
لطفا در کلاس بپرسید
select readings pre.int chapter 1
Brain:
The driver suffered severe brain damage in the accident.
Effect:
My parent’s divorce had a big effect on me.
big/ major/ significant/ substantial/ marked/ powerful/ dramatic effect
Experiment:
Scientists often perform experiments on animals.
carry out an experiment – perform/ conduct an experiment – a practical experiment
Purpose:
The purpose of this meeting is to elect a new chairman.
the main/ primary/ real purpose – useful/ practical purpose – have a purpose – achieve your purpose
Researcher:
Sleep:
I didn’t get much sleep last night.
long/ little/ short sleep – deep/ heavy/ light sleep
Stress:
Your headaches are due to stress.
suffer from stress – reduce/ relieve stress
Find out:
I don’t know, but I’ll find out for you.
Have (trouble):
He began to have trouble with his right knee.
Nap:
I usually take a nap after lunch.
have/ take a nap – short/ little nap
Spend (time):
I want to spend more time with my family.
Stay (awake):
Blurry:
The words and pictures were too blurry.
His vision was blurred. (vision … blurred)
Dangerous:
Some of these prisoners are extremely dangerous.
very/ highly dangerous
Normal:
A normal working week is 40 hours.
Completely/ perfectly/ quite/ fairly/ pretty normal – in the normal way – a normal life
Sleepy:
These pills might make you feel a little sleepy.
The warmth from the fire made her feel sleepy.
Hallucinate:
The patient may hallucinate if she has a favor.
Slur:
She was slurring her words as if she was drunk.
slur your words/ speech
Sleeplessness:
He designed an experiment on the effects of sleeplessness for a school science project.
Speech:
Each child had to give a short speech to the rest of the class.
deliver a speech – long/ short/ brief/ powerful/ emotional speech
Eventually:
Eventually, she got a job and moved to London.
Replenish:
He replenished his supply of wood in preparation for the winter.
Pass through:
We pass through five stages of sleep.
Go to sleep:
He turned over and went to sleep.
Get to sleep:
Last night I couldn’t get to sleep.
oxford word skills unit 18
Yawn:
I kept yawning all through the lecture.
Pyjamas:
Striped pyjamas
Nightie:
You might put on pyjamas or a nightie.
Dream:
In my dream I was flying a helicopter.
Snore:
She heard her father snoring in the next room.
Sleepy:
These pills might make you feel a little sleepy.
Fall asleep:
I heard a snore and knew he’d fallen asleep.
Go to sleep:
He got into bed and went to sleep quickly.
Asleep:
The baby is asleep.
Nightmare:
I had a terrible nightmare last night.
Fast asleep:
She was fast asleep and I couldn’t wake her up.
She was in a deep sleep and I couldn’t wake her up.
Wide awake:
The kids are always wide awake at 6 o’clock in the morning.
Wake sb up:
She always has some coffee to wake her up when she gets to work.
Oversleep:
Sorry, I’m late. I overslept.
Have a lie in:
I don’t have to get up early tomorrow, so I think I’ll have a lie in.
Habit:
Biting your nails is a bad habit.
Sleep like a log:
I was exhausted and slept like a log.
Have a restless night:
If I eat late, I often have a restless night.
I was having a restless night last night.
Concentrate:
It’s important to concentrate on the road when you are driving.
Lack of sth:
Lack of sleep makes me angry.
It’s the lack of money that really frustrates him.
Irritable:
Mohsen was tired, irritable and depressed.
Exhausted:
You look absolutely exhausted.
I was exhausted from/by the journey.
Heavy sleeper:
He has always been a heavy sleeper/light sleeper.
Disturb sb:
Keep the noise down! You will disturb the neighbors.
Suffer from sth:
Younes often suffers from severe headaches.
Insomnia:
He suffers from insomnia.
Have a nap:
During the day, I often have a nap.
On my mind:
When there are things on my mind – I sleep really badly.
با سلام
بهترین راه برای سوالات ۹۱ به بعد پارت یک اسپیکینگ که ویس پاسخ ندارن چی هست؟ از چه منبعی استفاده کنیم. سایت خاصی رو پیشنهاد میکنید؟
تشکر
درود. بدون شک باید از معلومات خودتون استفاده کنید و همیشه به یک منبع متکی نباشید.
ضمنا فقط چند سوال پاسخ ندارند.
Writing Task 2
Internet
+
# contact faster and more efficiently other people in faraway places
# acquire more knowledge through e- learning
–
# spend excessive time on the Internet gaming
# can cause a threat to personal security
There is no doubt that the Internet has brought considerable changes in our lives these days. Although the Internet usage has a vast amount of advantages, there are disadvantages that must be considered along with the benefits. I will discuss the issue and provide some reasons for both advantages and disadvantages of the Internet usage.
Nowadays, thanks to the Internet, it has revolutionized communications. First of all, people can faster and more efficiently contact their family, friends wherever they are in faraway places. Most people have internet connection on their phone or computer, therefore they can communicate with their loved ones. Secondly, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet gives an opportunity for all of the students who want to acquire more knowledge. Admittedly, some students have full-time jobs and they find difficult to attend traditional classes. However, they can easily attend some distance-learning courses and they can also choose to take their classes through e-learning in other countries or cities.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks to using the Internet. First of all, people especially young people spend excessive time on the Internet gaming that can lead to eating disorders and sleeping disorders. As a result, it can increase individuals’ depression and many young adults suffer from chronic loneliness. Secondly, the Internet is an environment in which individuals can share personal information, photos or messages over it. Moreover, it can cause a threat to personal security and hackers can easily snoop vital data related to banking or office projects. Thus, the Internet can be a dark and dangerous place.
By way conclusion, although the Internet is more beneficial in different ways on modern life, it should be considered some negative impact.
استاد صفحه ۷۵ oxfordwordskill نوشته have an X-ray
چرا برای X-ray قبلش an آورده؟
سرفصل article ها در کتاب گرامر آکسفرد رو مطالعه کنید توضیح داده.
oxford word skills unit 18
Afford:
We couldn’t afford a TV in those days.
Scratch:
There was a scratch on the phone.
Discount:
Employees get a 20% discount on all merchandise.
Discount prices
Reduction:
A reduction in the numbers of employed people
Off:
This jacket was on sale for $10 off.
Receipt:
Can I get a receipt for that?
Refund:
Your travel expenses will be refunded.
The sales:
Do you often wait and buy thing in the sales?
Reduce:
Doctors have advised us to reduce the amount of fat in our diets.
Bargain:
At that price, it’s a real bargain.
Change:
If a cake costs $8 and you pay with a $10 bill, you will get $2 in change.
Income(gross/net):
It’s sometimes difficult for a family to live on one income.
Wealthy:
He returned as a wealthy man.
Worth:
How much is that house worth?
It must be worth at least $200,000.
Cost a fortune:
Value:
The thieves stole goods with a total value of $10,000.
Waste of money:
The house was a waste of money.
Own:
This is his own house.
Use your own pen.
Huge:
A huge building
There is a huge amount of work left to be done.
Amount:
I spent a huge amount of time preparing for the exam.
Broke:
I can’t go out tonight. I’m completely broke.
Owe sb sth:
We owe $50,000 to the bank.
Debt:
I’ll pay off all my debts first.