کلاس آنلاین آیلتس خصوصی اسفند 1397 – عاطفه

2019/04/17 در 14:42

   Atefeh Shaabani

writing number 13
Migrating and adapting with a new society is a laborious and complex process for immigrants. Although some think that integrating into destination community is not required an adaptation to local customs and norms, others including me don not believe so. This essay will discuss my opinion. (46)
Primary reason confirming people should follow new country’s pattern of behavior is that adaptation process could help immigrants to communicate effectively with other people. First of all, if they observe societal norms, they will be able to improve their personal life. In other words, there would be more chances for them to make friends or maybe loved ones who can help them not to feel homesick. Secondly, it is more likely to develop their social life. In fact more job opportunities will be available for them due to influential coordination among them and behavioural standards of workplaces. Thus it could play a critical role on both side’s success by creating a win-win relationship between the host country and immigrants. (117)
Another aspect making a comprehensive adaptation important and essential is that old life style may sometimes be against new social standards. First of all, if emigrants behave opposite a country established customs, it might be a taboo. Not only the community does not accept unaccustomed behavior, but also may decisively reject it. Secondly, some of codes of behavior are supported by laws, religions and etc. So if someone wanted to beak them, it is not permitted by government and authorities. For instance, nevertheless people tend to have gun in the United States, it considers as an offence in most parts of the world. (103)
In conclusion, if newcomers want to be a member of a homogeneous society, it is needed to respect its norms which could revolutionise their private and social life and harmonise them with their surroundings. (34)
(300 words)

2019/04/13 در 12:32

   Atefeh Shaabani

writing number 11
Tourism popularity has been increasing over the past few decades. Although some people think it could have detrimental effects worldwide, others including me believe that considerable positive results can be achieved. This article will discuss both views. (37)
On the one hand, some emphasise the disadvantages of tourism from an international perspective. First of all, environmental pollution would be raised not only on the land but also in the oceans and air. More travels by plane, train and cars emission greenhouse gases in Earth’s atmosphere. Secondly, global holiday making could have adverse impact on societies. Traveling to over vast distances may increase the risk of diseases outbreaks, which can leads into epidemics. In other words, a great number of diseases particularly infections for example influenza would be spread around the world, responsible for disability and death for a large amount of population and inevitable social consequences. (108)
On the other hand, opponents intend to argue that not all aspects of tourism are negative. Firstly, tourism can revolutionise the local and global economy and provide prosperity especially for destination countries, if officials and authorities set realistic and achievable goals based on theirs potentials and facilities and plan effectively. It means that a variety of industries related to tourism such as hoteling, traveling and even retailing can benefit. Secondly, when the various nationalities from different backgrounds communicate to each other, it would be a good opportunity to develop harmonious relationships and lasting peace between nations and countries. (98)
In conclusion, nevertheless tourism environmental and social adverse impact may be a cause for concern, its significant role in developing world economy and peace cannot be neglected. (27)
(270 words)

2019/04/08 در 13:10

   Atefeh Shaabani

writing number 9
Selecting among a variety of choices is a controversial topic. Although, some think that people face different options these days, others including me believe many factors may limit everyone’s choosing. Both views will discuss in this essay. (37)
On the one hand, some cite that people can select their ideal items between large numbers of possibilities. First of all, the significant progress and evolution in science and technology provides the opportunity to produce a wide range of products. In other words, professional services are supplied by expert knowledge and sophisticated equipment. Secondly, if companies cannot coordinate their trade with customers’ diverse needs and interests, they will lose their market share, especially in international market. So intense competition between businesses leads to a great deal of products which are produced in order to appeal and keep more customers and earn substantial profit. (103)
On the other hand, opponents intend to argue that decision making process could be restricted by several factors. First of all, scarce resources such as money and time would decrease the number of choices. It means that it is not important how many options there are in front of consumers if they cannot afford to purchase. A range of leisure time activities from adventurous sports to luxurious holidays cannot attract people when they stick in hectic life. Secondly, products and opportunities are not distributed equally among population. Inequality between people from various nationalities, races, religions and even genders might affect their access dramatically even to critical services. (107)
In conclusion, nevertheless the drastic increase in quantity and quality of products and services is inevitable, in my opinion, their accessibility and customers’ buying power and freedom in decision making are not expanded considerably. (34)
281 words

2019/04/05 در 16:43

   Atefeh Shaabani

writing number 8
Junk food is an internationally famous topic. Although, some people think the appearance of these foods could be a positive alteration, others including me believe its adverse impacts would be more significant. (32)
On the one hand, the popularity of fast food around the world could be noticed as a positive modification. First of all, it is delicious, accepted and welcomed by most people with various taste in eating. So if people in different countries have the same dietary habit, agriculture and food industry can utilize this opportunity thoroughly for making and developing substantial profits based on a universal trade. Secondly, fast food can be prepared promptly with basic equipment. So it is an attractive option for hectic lifestyle, meant that by spending less time on cooking, everyone will have more chance to do other important and essential tasks. (106)
On the other hand, opponents argue that fast food is usually unhealthy and the result of sedentary lifestyle. Suggesting that a large amount of oil, salt and sugar with speedy cooking process leads into a kind of food which has a great deal of calories and maybe toxic materials and less amount of nutrients. If people tend to eat this food along with the low level of physical activity, it will increase the rate of physical and mental illnesses such as obesity and depression. Secondly, fast food can be eaten everywhere in a short time, consequently, people spend less time on meals, relating and communicating with their families and friends on the table. Not all social relationships are built during meals, but improving emotional connections can be accomplished. (128)
In conclusion, nevertheless fast food is usually flavourful and suit a variety of taste and busy lifestyle, in my opinion, having a healthy diet and enjoying life with loved ones is much more valuable.(34)
(300)

2019/04/01 در 19:26

   Atefeh Shaabani

Writing number 6
Starvation and malnutrition is one of the most serious issues in the world. Although, there are some reasons for this challenge, several influential remedies can be taken to tackle it. This essay will discuss these points. (36)
Some factors are involved in hunger of a huge number of population in the world despite the astonishing developments in science and technology. First of all, state-of-the-art facilities are not distributed equally across the countries, meaning that affluent and developed countries are equipped with the considerable knowledge and modern technology which permit them to cultivate organic produce, while less developed countries employ inefficient methods which lead into poor harvest. Secondly, various types of agricultural products such as honey bees who have critical role in natural ecosystem are destroyed due to human activities and overuse or misuse of environmental resources and polluting them with chemical pesticides. (105)
Despite the fact that the number of hunger people especially children has been increasing, some practical solutions can be addressed. First of all, not all sophisticated equipment should be exported to low-income countries by spending a fortune. If thorough knowledge and farming methods according to local potential transmitted, it would increase the cost benefit of investment in cultivated fields. For example drip irrigation system would be an alternative technique for dry areas. Secondly, if educational programs and preventive measures adapted, protecting and preserving the natural resources would be possible, which provide a safe habitat and sufficient food for creatures. Attention to organic agriculture principles and eco-friendly approaches should be taught and followed by all people. (115)
In conclusion, however a great deal of world population suffer from famine and hunger due to unequal access to knowledge and technology and misuse of natural resources, some coordinated actions can be done to provide adequate food and protect earth at the same time. (44)

2019/03/27 در 21:13

   Atefeh Shaabani

writing task 4
The internet has dramatically altered our live over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
The internet has an inevitable role in human societies. Although some believe its disadvantages are more noticeable rather than the benefits, others including me argue that the internet can be seen as the most influential invention in this century. This essay will discuss both views. (45)
On the one hand, some people think the internet cannot be considered as a useful tool. First of all, information hacking is more likely to occur, meant that a great deal of critical information could be stolen by criminals who may misuse it illegally. In many cases people’s privacy or organizations’ benefits will be attacked if high security measures are not being employed. Secondly, the internet contribution in all aspects of modern lifestyle worries authorities seriously. The reduced control on nation’s ability in data gathering and networking leads to an increase in the number of offenders and decrease in the sense of social security. (104)
On the other hand, opponents mention that the internet can be as a multi-purpose object when it utilize properly. Firstly, it is a valuable source of information transferring data among domestic, academic, business and government networks. Suggesting that it provides opportunity for growth and development in various fields. Secondly services are more accessible for both providers and beneficiaries. Job responsibilities can be done from long distances, while customers are well supplied by full time services. Sophisticated information systems which are equipped by World Wide Web allow local and international suppliers offer efficient and comprehensive options in public and private sectors. (100)
By way of conclusion, despite the indisputable fact that data hacking and less possibility for monitoring people can be cited as the negative side effects of this technology, wide availability of information and considerable ability for accomplishing a variety of duties from faraway places would be contended as its positive impact.(51)

2019/03/23 در 10:51

   Atefeh Shaabani

Writing task 2
Having a happy life is a big subject for everyone the whole time. Although some believe that adolescence is a blissful time, others including me cite that adults feel happier in their life. This essay will discuss both views.
On the one hand, some argue that teenage years are the happiest and most enjoyable time in one’s life. First of all, less responsibility indoors and outdoors is mentioned widely. Adults face with difficulties and dilemmas putting strong pressure on their body both physically and mentally, while adolescents’ decisions mostly do not have complicated and long-term consequences. So they rarely experience this situation. Secondly fewer duties tend to minimize youth responsibilities, while maximize their free time. However, not all teenagers would simply be able to benefit from ease of life due to schools’ assignments or maybe part-time job, but leisure activities are more available for them rather than their parents.
On the other hand, some people believe that adults are more likely to be content with life. The first reason can be seen in economic effect of getting older. In spite of adults hectic lifestyle, having well-paid job provides opportunity for them to create a sense of satisfaction by owning possessions or doing luxury activities. Feeling of individual and social independence is the second reason. They would have the considerable freedom of choice. If someone decides freely not only about major topics but also on routine matters, it could have an important role in joy.