۸۳۴بازدید
کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷
کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷
صفحه پیش رو مربوط به دوره فشرده آیلتس روزهای زوج شنبه ۴ شنبه ساعت ۶ تا ۸ که در تاریخ ۳ بهمن ماه ۱۳۹۷ آغاز میشود می باشد. در این صفحه تکالیف و توضیحات وارد شده و زبان آموزان رایتینگ ها و پرسش های خود را در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد خواهند کرد و از این راه با مدرس در تماس خواهند بود.
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۵ و ۱۶
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Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 41 to 50 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 35 to 50
Tactics for listening Developing Kill
Tactics for listening Expanding Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Open Forum 1 Unit 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 3 Unit 4 Full
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 15 16 17 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
تمرین با لغات نمره بالای ۷ رایتینگ از اینجا ببینید
Writing Topic
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۳ و ۱۴
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Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 31 to 40 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 32 to 34
Tactics for listening Developing Unit 17 18 19 20 21
Open Forum 1 Unit 1 2 3
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 2 part 2 part 3
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 13 14 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
Writing Topic
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تاپیک رایتینگ تسک ۱
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پاسخ مدرس(نسخه طولانی ۲۳۴ کلمه ای)
There are two blueprints showing a current university sport center and a new one with some changes for the future.
Overall, it seems the center is going to transform radically and much more indoor space for doing sport along with more facilities will be made available for students.
At the present time, there is a 25-meter swimming pool in the middle of the layout, which is surrounded by a reception in the south, some seats in the east and a changing room in the west. All these will remain untouched in the second plan but a gym in the north of this swimming pool will expand to the east and will double in size.
The eastern Outdoor courts in the current plan will give its place to two dance studios on the eastern end of the complex and a large sports hall adjacent to the seats of the swimming pool. However, in the western side, a leisure pool with a random shape will replace the Outdoor courts.
In both maps there is an entrance to this sport complex in the south. While currently this entrance will immediately lead to the reception and it is limited to swimming pool and its facilities, in the second layout its access will expand to a cafe in the east and a sports shop in the west along with two changing rooms on both ends of the complex. (۲۳۴ words)
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پاسخ مدرس(نسخه استاندارد ۲۰۲ کلمه ای)
There are two blueprints showing a current university sport center and a new one with some changes for the future.
Overall, it seems the center is going to transform radically and much more indoor space along with more facilities will be available.
Currently, there is a 25-meter swimming pool in the middle of the layout, which is surrounded by a reception in the south, some seats in the east and a changing room in the west. In the second plan, there is a gym in the north of this swimming pool which will expand to the east.
The eastern Outdoor courts will give its place to two dance studios on the eastern end of the complex and a large sports hall adjacent to the swimming pool. However, in the western side, a leisure pool will replace the Outdoor courts.
In both maps there is an entrance in the south. While currently this entrance will immediately lead to the reception and it is limited to swimming pool and its facilities, in the second layout its access will expand to a cafe in the east and a sports shop in the west along with two changing rooms on both ends of the complex. (۲۰۲ words)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۱ و ۱۲
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Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 21 to 30 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 27 to 31
Tactics for listening Developing Unit 12 13 14 15 16
Real Speaking and Listening 2 Kill
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 part 3 Unit 2 part 1
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 11 12 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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تسک ۱
نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۶٫۵
The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.
In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90 in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.
At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.
The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.
Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to diminish and at the final year all these categories had very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷
The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.
The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.
Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.
Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)
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نمونه پاسخ اگزمینر در سطح نمره ۹
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۰
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Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 17 to 20 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 25 to 26
Tactics for listening Developing Unit 10 11
Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 8 9
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 part 2
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 10 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس
The graph shows the average weekly hours spent by schoolchildren on two different leisure activities at home over a period of nine years from 2000 to 2008.
Schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 years old spent less than 4 hours per week on computer in 2000. This number increased considerably over the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. At the beginning of the same period (2000), the time spent on watching TV was 21 hours per week, which remained the same over the nest three years. Next, it fell rapidly from 21 to 15 hours weekly in 2004.
Schoolchildren continued to spend more time on computer from 2004 and 2008 and the number reached a peak of just under 22 hours. At the same time despite a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006, the time spent on watching TV remained stable at the level of almost 15 hours per week.
Overall, While TV was much more popular than computer at the beginning of this period, it seems the time schoolchildren spent on them has reversed. (۱۷۵ words)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۹
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Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 6 to 16 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 21 to 24
Tactics for listening Developing Unit 6 7 8 9
Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 4 5 6 7
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 9 10
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 part 1
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 10 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۸
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Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 96 to 110 از این صفحه ببینید
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 1 to 5 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 16 17 18 19 20
Tactics for listening Basic Kill
Tactics for listening Developing Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 1 2 3
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 5 6 7 8
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 8 9 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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تسک ۲
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۶ و ۷
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Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 67 to 95 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 11 12 13 14 15
Tactics for listening Basic unit 17 18 19 20 21 22
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Kill
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 6 7 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
نمونه پاسخ رایتینگ را اینجا ببینید
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۴ و ۵
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Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 36 to 66 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 8 9 10
Tactics for listening Basic unit 13 14 15 16
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 8 9 10 11
Select Readings Elementary Unit 7 8 9 10
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 4 5 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۴ و ۵
تسک ۱
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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۶ تا ۶٫۵
Two maps depict a tropical island of a few hundreds square meters before and after the construction of some leisure facilities for tourists.
It appears that two sites for tourists accommodation have been built, which are connected to each other and to other areas with footpath. There is also a reception in the middle of the island, which is accessible by a vehicle track from the southern part, where a pier is constructed for some pleasure boats. The other significant change is a single restaurant in the northern part of the island that can be also accessed by vehicles. The beach in the western side can be used for swimming after this development. There are also some palm trees in the western and eastern regions of the island, which seem to be untouched by this change.
Overall, the development which appears to be more concentrated on the western side and the center, has dramatically changed the face of the island in a way that it can accommodate a few hundreds of tourists at the same time. (177 Words)
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پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷٫۵
Two maps show the construction of facilities in an island. One map show the situation before and one map after the construction.
In the first map there is not much for possible tourists to enjoy except a swimming area in the left side of the island. How ever in the second map there is a restaurant in the middle of the island on the left close to a reception. There is a vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. Other important change is the construction of several accommodation sites for tourists not far from the reception. Other important facilities for enjoyment of tourists are the boats for sailing in the southern side of the island,where a pier can be seen and a beach for swimming in the left side.
Overall, it seems the island is totally different after the construction of tourist facilities and especially the western and middle parts can be a good place for tourists to enjoy their stay. (167 Words)
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پاسخ ارایه شده در پایان کتاب در سطح نمره ۶
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷ تا ۷٫۵
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه دوم و سوم
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Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 11 to 35 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 5 6 7
Tactics for listening Basic unit 8 9 10 11 12
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 4 5 6 7
Select Readings Elementary Unit 3 4 5 6
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 2 3 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه دوم و سوم
رایتینگ جلسه سوم؛ تسک ۲: فقط مقدمه و نتیجه گیری
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷
Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times. First of all, they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Secondly, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. Spending time on activities that they truly love can create a sense of satisfaction for them A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.(121 words)
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. First of all, the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy is mentioned as an important reason. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Secondly, adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step.(112 words)
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نمونه پاسخ اگزمینر در سطح نمره ۹
کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه اول
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Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 10 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 1 2
Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 1 2 3
Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 2
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه اول
Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?
ایده پردازی
More facilities
#More population
#Investment
More jobs
#More companies and factories
#Different types of jobs are available
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس به این سوال
There are more facilities in a big city. First of all, there is a large population in a big city and they need many different services for everyday life. For example, they need a modern transportation system to go to work every day and using bicycles or personal cars alone is not enough anymore, so government have to provide such facilities for large cities. Secondly, there is more investment in a large city because there are always more customers. This means a new shopping mall or a hospital will be successful and investors will benefit from their projects. (۹۸ words)
There are also more jobs in a big city. First of all, more companies and factories exist in a big city and as a result, thousands of jobs are available for people who live in and around big cities. Also, several companies start to work every day and many more people find the opportunity to be employed there. Secondly, job seekers can find various types of work in a large city because factories and companies need simple workers as well as specialists with a university degree. There is a competition among companies and they have to employ the best staff to have the best results. (105 words)
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کلاس آنلاین آیلتس بهمن ۱۳۹۷ – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس
نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها
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۲۰۰ نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)
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بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS
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چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2
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آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته
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همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!
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۸۳۴بازدید
سلام استاد ممکنه نظرتوت رو در مورد این conclusion بدین؟
By way of conclusion i once again reaffirm my position that international tourism would have positive effects on every country .Although some people agree with this point ,nevertheless, there remain some opposite views about this subject.
درود
به شیوه تدریس شده نوشته نشده و مناسب نیست.
سلام استاد. وقت شما بخیر.
میخواستم ازتون خواهش کنم اون توضیحاتی که فرمودید مربوط به انواع سوالات رایتینگ و نحوه پاسخگوی هست رو محبت کنید اینجا بفرستید. ممنونم
درود حال شما
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خیلی ممنونم
The plans illustrate two layout of university’s sport centre at present and after reconstruction in the future. (17 words)
At present time, behind the reception area, there is 25 meter swimming pool which is surrounded by a gym located in the north of pool moreover there are seating area and changing room in the east and west of the pool. There are two separate outdoor courts in west and east of the main building. (55 words)
According to the redevelopment plan, there are remarkable changes will occur. The current pool, changing room and seating area will remain as it is however the gym is going to expand to the east. In the west wing, there is outdoor court which going to replace with leisure pool. Another outdoor court which is located in the east side will replace with sport complex including sports hall adjacent to seating place in the pool, beside the sports hall will give its place two dance studio on the eastern. There are also suggestions for a sport shop a café and changing rooms for both sides in reception area.(107 words)
Overall, the university sport centre will convert to a modern complex which has more facilities and more conveniences. (18 words)(197 words)
There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
-describe the complaints that have been made
-say why the reception area is important
-suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear Sir
I would like to inform you of some complaints about the reception area. The most important issue is that some visitors announced it is not spacious enough and sometimes they had to wait outdoor until some people came out and then they could enter the room. Meanwhile, there are also some other complaints about air conditioning and seats which can be fixed by expanding the area.(66)
Since the first look is very impressive and has long term effects on customers’ mind, the reception area should be as perfect as possible. It is the first place which visitors come to and if it is spacious and comfortable, they can have a better perception of our company and may trust our services more.(55)
Since we rarely use the front room, it would be great if we adjoin it to the reception area by removing the partition wall. Thereafter, more seats can be added and also we can use its windows for more fresh air. Thank you very much for your consideration.(48)
Yours faithfully
Samira Ghasemi
Cambridge 12 general, Test 4
Dear sir
I am writing this letter to inform you about my situations and my skills to employee in your chain restaurant that you suggest me. .(24words)
If you remember we had a plane journey together a bout 2 weeks ago and also when we drank a coffee we had a discussion about your chain restaurants and you suggested me a job in your company.(38words)
If I want to talk about my favorite job I can mention I have some indicator for have a pleasant feeling in my work environment. For example I prefer don’t work with female counterpart because I think its due to disturb my care in my tasks, also its so significant for me to have a good manager with good treatment. .(60words)
I think I can be one of your selection for this job because i have adequate skill for accept it and additionally I am a tolerant man with honest and you can give me any tasks that you think its important and I can promise you i will do them successfully .(51words)
Thank you very much for your attention.
Yours faithfully
There are two blueprints showing a current university sport center which will Alter to another one in future.
In the center of both layouts there is a 25-meter pool where is surrounded by a reception in the south, a sitting place in the east and a changing room in the west. But there is a gym in the north of it now which will expand to the east in future.
The outdoor courts in the west of first plan will give its place to a leisure pool with a changing room in the south of it. A sports shop will be built in the south of that, right side of the changing room.
The eastern outdoor courts in first layout will be replaced by two dance studios and a changing room in their low on the eastern end of the complex. A cafe is going to be built next to this changing room. There will be a large sports hall adjacent to swimming pool.
The only change for entrance will be the access which is going to be expanded from the reception to the sports shop and the café and then to the other facilities.
Overall, the center will be an indoor complex with much more available facilities.(208)
Evidence suggest that in some countries youths outnumber older people .Despite the arguments of some people that such considerably condition is helpful for development of every country , others including me believe there are lots of drawback which could be created by this condition.
Some people argue that there some drawbacks associated with this issue .First of all this is a simple fact that developing countries couldn’t thrive without older people experiences which is an inevitable part of such societies and increasing population of young adults might be a major
impediment to benefiting from their experiences . secondly, one the most serious consequences of such issues is that it might pave the way for a executive system in which callow youths are prioritized over experienced people which such issue would confront every country with serious challenges .
On the other hand , some people argue that this is a positive aspect of a society .First of all, this is an undeniable fact that youth force would fire their enthusiasm and enable them to overcome the problems of society better than older people. Secondly increasing population of adults would create a social system in which hierarchy of occupation is based on innovation and skills. I am an strong advocate of this approach and believe that presence of large number of young adults compared with older people is considerably helpful for every country .
By way of conclusion, i once again reaffirm my position that increasing population of youths is helpful in developing various aspects of any society some people agree with this fact .Nevertheless, there remains some oppositions and some people disagree that this issue could be positive for society.
Age composition of the population affects the society a lot. Some countries have high ratio of young adults to the elderly. Although it has some advantages, there are some disadvantages too. This essay will discuss both views.(37)
There are some advantages for countries with large number of young adults. First of all, the youth are far more dynamic, creative and active than older staff which makes great improvements in many aspects. Also young workforce are very energetic and highly enthusiastic about achieving their goals and making great changes so that they dare to try new methods and take its risk and eventually find new solutions. Secondly, when a country’s population is young, expenses of insurance and pension are seriously low and this saving helps government and employers allocate this amount of money to expand their future plans.(100)
On the other hand there are also some disadvantages. First of all, societies with young population have to spend a lot of money on training and providing job opportunities for the youth. Obviously, about the former issue it takes a lot of energy and time other than money to educate the young and make them ready start a job and about the latter subject it is one of the most crucial issues even in developed countries and need long- term plans and investments. Secondly, the lower age average of the workforce is the less human resources are experienced and skilled.(98)
In conclusion, I think although having young population is beneficial, it also has some drawbacks and it depends on how countries plan to turn the situation to their advantage. It can be an excellent opportunity or a serious peril.(39)
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young generation in each country is a most important event for the growth in each society. although some people believe being more young adults have more benefit for community than older people but some people has an against opinion.in this essay I will discuss a bout this matter and negative and positive consequence of it. (55words)
when the society have young generation there are some benefits, first of all in that countries the rate of growth the industry so high because the recent research suggest young adults usually have a great source of energy and talent that they can use them to improve the country ability in industrial and farming. Secondly the young people usually less than elder need to the medical care than elder and it has a very helpful for the government expenditure and they can expend the sources for improve the health index in society or each part of country that have been lack. ( words)
In the other side some people believe if the number of young adults more than elder people it has many disadvantages for feature of country. first of all when the young adults get an important task without adequate acquire skill and do it its probably led to unsuccess and waste of money and time. secondly when the number of older people so less than young adults we absolutely face to the problems in managing. Because in each company we need a some older man or woman to going to manage the workers and also learn and transfer his experience to the next generation. its impossible achieve a goal in companies if they haven’t older people with huge of knowledge and experience.(122 words)
In conclusion some people believe growth up the number of young people than older people have many disadvantages in society but in the other hand some people with me believes it’s the young people work force that can turn the wheel of economy in this situation. (46 words)
Human management and human capital has always been one of the most significant issue for the government nowadays. Although some people believe the advantages of existing more young population are more, others feel the drawbacks of this subject are considerable. In this essay I will examine negatives and positives of this topic.(52)
There are some people who think it is really important for a country to have more young adult population. First of all, they believe young people are more efficient and skillful and they are more prepared to acquire new skills too. A fundamental reason for this is that the younger generations have more contemporary information about technologies and sciences. Secondly, there are numerous concerns about the rate of labor forces in future. A large number of young adults could minimize these worries and help to refine the countries. They also might be a good alternative for older people in terms of vitality.(102)
On the other hand some people argue about the downsides of outnumbering the young adults. First of all, they think that group have less experience compare with older people and they are unsatisfactory to some important positions and jobs. Therefore the older people are in need of being for those susceptible situations. Secondly, the evidence suggest that older people who live in forties and fifties are more stable in their jobs and have less tendency to change their situations or jobs to that of those who are in inception of their works. These people are a strong advocate of this approach and believe older people are more reliable.(108)
In conclusion, I believe that the population of some countries which are made of more young adults has both perils and opportunities that needs to be considered by those countries so that to be exploited or dealt with.(38)(300)
At one glance of the chart can be understood, how many minutes use of 3 different type of telephone call between from 1995 to 2002 in the UK. (28 words)
In 1995, most people use of local fixed line; it was about 70 billion minutes. This number went up to 90 billion in 1999. Next, the number fell slightly to 70 billion until 2002. (34 words)
At the same time in 1995 national and international call was used just under 40 billion. It can be seen an increasing trend just over 60 billion until 2002 (29 words)
The amount of spoken using mobile at the beginning was approximately 3 billion and this number grew slowly to 10 billion minutes till 1998 and then suddenly we have significant increasing to about 45 billion in 2002. (37 words)
Overall, we can see after all these changes between years from 1995 to 2002 , in different type of categories, the most popular used by people in UK to communicate with each other’s , was local fixed line. (38 words)
Total (166 words)
The bar chart compares entire quantity of different kinds of telephone calls in the uk according to minute, categorized into three section ,between 1995 and 2002.
In 1995 local fixed line was the main source of telephone calls .provided around 71 billion minutes.National and international fixed lines provided just under 40 billion minutes of calls and mobiles provided a negligible amount.
Between 1995 and 1998 the quantity of local calls rose dramatically to a peak of around 90 billion minutes and remained at this level for one year and after that fell to around 71 billion minutes in 2002.National and international calls grew up to 61 billion minutes over the period shown . and mobile calls saw only a small rise to approximately 45 billion minutes by 2002.
Overall, it is clear that local fixed line was by far the most important means of telephone calls over the period shown .Mobiles provided lowest quantity of calls in each years.
استاد entire اشتباهه یا quantity?
آیا provide call اشتباهه کلا؟
جمله درست نوشته شده
A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
-describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
-summarize the benefits of paying for the concert
-say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam
I really appreciate your decision and think sponsoring the sports team of children motivates them and makes them to spend more time on their favorite sport which is beneficial to both their physical health and future improvements. The more they attend sport the more they will feel healthy and also will gain self-confidence. In addition being active in a sport team helps offspring to socializes and acquire many skills.(69)
Meanwhile, holding open-air concerts has some benefits too. Since most of the people go through the same routine every day, it can be very refreshing and helps people feel more energetic.(31)
Overall, since it is not affordable for families to sponsor children’s sports team but most families can afford concert tickets I would recommend to allocate this budget to children’s sports team. It is also kind of long term investment for our society and thank you again for your consideration.(49)
Yours faithfully
Samira Ghasemi
Candridge12 General, Test3
The chart illustrate britishers how long spent on telephone calls in the three categories from 1995 to 2002. (19)
In 1995 local calls were about 70 billion minutes. After a year increased to 80 billion minutes. Then, between 1990 and 1999 remained constant about 90 billion minutes, after that every year this rate had a drop till 2002 that reached to the least rate over 70 billion minutes. (49)
Other category national and international calls at the first were about 40 billion minutes and every year had a surge and in 2002 reached to peak to 60 billion minutes. (30)
Mobile calls in 1995 had a minimum rate less than 5 billion minutes in the years to come Mobil calls got speed and in 2002 reached a peak of use almost 45 billion minutes.(34)
Overall, it seems mobile and national and international calls compared to the beginning had a growth and local calls after a period of increasing reached to the first level again. (30)
The chart below illustrates how much time the UK residents have spent on telephone calls in three categories between 1995 and 2002.
The number of local fixed line calls started from about 70 billion minutes and gradually reached its peak of 90 billion minutes in 1999 and again gently fell back to its start point in 1995, 70 billion minutes, by 2002.
The amount of national and international fixed line calls increased slightly from 37 to 61 billion minutes during the 8-year-period of 1995 to 2002.
Mobile calls on the other hand, were just about 3 billion minutes in 1995. Meanwhile, it grew dramatically and reached 45 billion minutes by 2002.
Overall, using local calls was at the highest level and was the most popular. In addition, the second highest was national and international fixed line calls and although using mobile calls was at the lowest level, it showed the most growth and by 2002 all three categories had roughly similar level of popularity.(164)
The chart shows the call duration which was carried by the British over three different types of categories between 1995 and 2002.
Local fixed line calls were the highest during this period. It had a steep increase between 1995 and 1999 from about seventy billion minutes to ninety billion minutes. Then it had a steep decrease to approximate selfsame seventy billion minutes between 1999 and 2002.
National and international fixed line calls had a steady surge from less than forty billion to about sixty billion during this period, however this growth was insignificant over the last two years.
Mobile calls had a dramatic growth from two billion to forty five billion during this period time. This rise was increased sharply between 1999 and 2002.
Overall, although there was a considerable gap between these categories in 1995, it dropped in 2002. But local fixed line calls were still the highest and the mobile calls were still the lowest ones.(158)
dear my friend
I am writing this letter to inform you about my opinion about your decision for traveling to my city to get a job or to go to college…28 words
I should mention that I think you don’t enjoy of learning in college because I know your personality and your abilities and I believe you would not be successful in college. because in college you have to learn the matters that possible they don’t any used in your feature job…50 words
I believe Nowadays finding a good job that has a good pay with match with your personality so better than learning in college without any plan for getting a job in a feature, imagine that if you get a good job with good salary you can also study and do work together…52 words
I have an offer for your job, one of my close friend has a construction company and he need a person that has an ability in supervising in his detective and a think you can conveniently do this task because you have an experience look like this task in your town…51 words
Tank you so much for your attention
Your faithfully
The food industry has been significant changes in latest decades; there is growing tendency for people to eat fast food. Although some people believe it’s a good idea to eat fast food sometimes, others disagree. This essay will discuss both of views (42 words)
Some people prefer to eat fast food sometime, first of all fast food can be prepared and served quickly. For those people who don’t have much time to prepare healthy food, fast food is good option. Also fast food could be eaten in restaurant, in car, or when you are on the way to your office. Secondly when people spend their time in fast food restaurant to eat something, it can be communicate with others and knowing each other and make friends, also the younger generation prefer to set dates with their friend in fast food restaurant and eat fast food which is more friendlier than others( 107 words)
In other side of view most people believe fast food is bad choice for us. First of all, the major risk of eating fast food is obesity and blood pressure in our immobile lifestyle, fast food have high sodium and saturated fat trans-fat and cholesterol. Eating too much over a long period of time can lead to health problem. Secondly in most family people like to eat together at meal time; when parent comeback to home of work, they like to see all family together and eat dinner or launch, fast food make people away from each other specially offspring, they prefer eat fast food on the computer in their room.(111 words)
In conclusion, fast food is very popular than traditional food these days, which is unhealthy option for people but some fast food restaurant have healther option in their menu (29 words)
nowadays fast foods are populare and people show lots of enthusiasm to them.Although some people believe the popularity of such foods has been a negative trend , others believe these foods are useful. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.
Some people argue that this kind of foods are harmful .First of all they believe body health is most important issue in life and fast foods have confronted people’s health with serious challenges because in fast food restaurants the low quality and prices are prioritized over the level of food health and this issue would detrimental to health and infect people with a variety of diseases .Secondly popularity of these foods also promotes dramatic changes in food tastes of younger generation and evidence indicate that their taste runs more to fast foods than other foods such traditional foods or vegetable foods .
On the other hand some people argue that fast food popularity has been useful .First of all costs could be decreased by this kind of foods and this important issue could fire people’s enthusiasm further for consuming of such foods because lots of people are dealing with shortage of financial resources and another kinds of foods are outrageously expensive. Secondly with consuming of such foods an opportunity has existed to people could spend most of their time for more important works rather than cooking and this issue would decrease the people’s wasted times. i am a ardent advocate of this approach and believe time is one the most important subject in our life and it isn’t until we lose our times that we realize the value of it .
By way of conclusion i once again reaffirm my position that fast foods are useful and some people agree with this opinion.Nevertheless, there remains some disagreement and certain people believe popularity of fast foods is positive
استاد جمله دوم رو که علامت گذاشتین منظورتون چیه؟ من ساختار جملشو در دیکشنری دیدم آیا برای این موضوع غلطه ؟به این معنا که سلامتی رو با چالش جدی رو برو کرده
In recent decades the most amazing in people’s taste change is tendency to fast food. Although, some people believe consume fast food is good, other including me think fast food is bad food. This essay will discuss both views. (39)
Some people suppose that fast foods are good food. First of all, nowadays time saving is very important because some people are employed and don’t have enough time for many things especially cooking food. Cooking Fast foods like traditional foods don’t have a waste time; therefore, fast food is the most proper for them. Secondly, for majority people save money is a specific issue. Traditional foods often have a lot of costs. Although fast foods have high calorie, don’t have cost a lot then can be better for many people.(90)
On the other hand, some people think fast foods are not good. First of all, healthy diet is one of concern some people. Fast foods opposite of attractive appearance are harmful. Research shows diet and kinds it are risk factors for many physical disorder. Fast foods due to having much oil and salt are enemy of health so persons are interested in health with consume fast foods are opposite. Secondly, with enhance peoples information junk food opponents are increasing. Fast foods are fried then they are a big source of oil and calorie and the main cause put on weight and fattening is main risk factor for cardiovascular disease. I think fast foods are unhealthy food and consume them should reduce and limited particular situation. (125)
In conclusion, on one hand some people argue fast foods are good food, on the other hand some people including me believe fast foods are harmful.(26)
Changes in lifestyle because of today’s fast life have made fast food more popular than ever. Although some people are advocate of this tendency, others disagree. This essay will discuss both views.(32)
Some people think fast food is a good alternative to traditional food. First of all, they say it saves time. In today’s busy life where in most families both men and women work, they do not have as much spare time as previous generation and cannot allocate adequate amount of time on some activities like cooking. So they choose some pre-made dishes or rapid meals. Especially for commuters or wage workers it can be a good choice. Secondly, fast foods are usually inexpensive and many people afford it even for several times per week while going to a regular restaurant is not affordable often for many people.(107)
There are also some people who believe families should use healthy traditional recipes to prepare daily meals and unpleasant with popularity of fast food. First of all, they think it does not contain nutritious ingredients. Mostly parents are concern about this issue for children love foods such as fries, pizza or pasta and if they use it occasionally their body won’t receive essential substances which can be detrimental to their health. Secondly, it is full of fat and extremely unhealthy. It results in fat accumulation and weight gain and eventually obesity. These kinds of food are filled with harmful carbohydrates and lack fiber. Therefore, it can be reason for some diseases like heart attack or digestive disorders. (117)
In conclusion, some people disagree with having fast food as a part of our diet, while others agree and believe in many cases it can be a good alternative.(29)
سلام استاد
بسیار ممنونم
در مورد اول اگر به جای disagree از do not استفاده کنم جمله صحیح هست؟
As speed is one of the features of modern life, fast food is going to be more admired by people. Although some people argue about positive aspects, others including me believe that it is not a useful trend. This essay will examine these views.(44)
There is a few people who doesn’t like fast food, so having that, is appealing and enjoyable for most of them. First of all, fast food can be accessed convenient because the quantity of fast food restaurants have increased dramatically. Ordering, delivering and eating fast food are all speedy, therefore people is more interested in eating fast food because it helps them to save time. Secondly, there are numerous and various choices in fast food menus with reasonable and affordable prices. Some people think this variety of choices is attractive and leads customers to try and eat much fast food.(100)
On the other hand, the negative impacts of fast food are irrefutable. First of all, it has chronic health problems in long-term. Not only fast food doesn’t usually contain nutritious ingredients but also they are higher in fat, calories, cholesterol and so on which can rise risk for health problems such as high blood pressure, heart disease or obesity. A fundamental reason for spreading these diseases among of young people is a high intake of this kind of food. Secondly, it has a bad effect on family gatherings. People Often tries to keep their food traditions by eating traditional food with each other but nowadays it has changed because of consumption of fast food and it causes traditional food to be going to be forgotten.(125)
In conclusion, although fast food is going to be more popular, the repercussions of this prevalence should be considered.(19)(288)
Now a day eating a fast food is one of the most popular hobbies in many countrie . although some people believe this hobbit cause to some patient and disturb the diet but some people saying this hobbit has some benefit in society and people lifestyle… ۴۶ words
First of all its undeniable fast food usually make by huge of oil with hot fire and these two matter can destroying all nutrients that exist in food ingredients .this reason can decrease the nutritional value and when people have them its possible to cause the sickness and have a treats for heart health. Secondly as I said fast foods usually make by a lot of oil and when people eating this greasy food they are involving with obesity and unfortunately they have to get hard diet with o lot of exercise to come back the previous weight also this happen is detrimental for health…۱۰۵ words
In the other side some people have an opposite view, first of all they believe when we have a fast food in restaurant or coffee shop we have communication with a many people with many personal and believes and it can improve our self confident in society. secondly the recent research suggest we usually pay less money for fast foods than the house food because the fast foods make by industrial ingredients that produce with machines and there for they are cheaper than natural crops .for example we can easily buy a hotdog sandwich but if we want to have a chicken barbecue we should pay money in the amount of 3 sandwich…۱۱۱ words
In conclusion some people believes having a fast food has a some benefits,in the other side some people including me think these foods have a more disadvantage than benefit for the health…۳۲words
Dear Sir
It was great to be your fellow traveler last Sunday during the plane journey to India. Actually it was an enormous opportunity to visit you and I really surprised when you suggested to be part of your team and start a job in one of your restaurants.(47)
Although I have been worked as both a confectioner and a chef for last 7 years, I prefer working as a cook and it is more interesting for me. We talked about two branches one in a five star hotel and another one in the city center in New Delhi and I think the first one is a better choice for me.(62)
As I am a well-trained chef with international certificate of Asian dishes I think I can be suitable for this job and also since I love cooking and enjoy spending time on making new recipes I have no problem with working in two shifts in the hotel. I would be grateful I you let me know your decision as soon as possible. (62)
Yours faithfully
Samira Ghasemi
Cambridge 12 ,general Test 2
The line graph illustrate the number of hours per week spend by schoolchildren in period of time from 2000 to 2008 (21 words)
Schoolchildren who have roughly 11 years old spent leisure time approximately 3 hours per week on computer in 2000 and the number has increasing trend for next years to 15 hours per week in 2004. This number continued significantly rise of 22 hours per week to 2008. They spent most of their free time on computer at present time. (59 words)
Schoolchildren at the same time in 2000 spent more than 20 hours per week on TV, this number was stabilized until 2003 and the number suddenly decreases to 15 hours per week in 2004.and then there was a vibration between 2005 and 2006, time was spent by children remained on 15 hours per week in 2008.(56 words)
Overall, in 2000 most of schoolchildren spent their leisure time on TV but this popularly was decreased
But most favorite activities is computers until 2008 (25 word) (163 words)
This line graph sets out the time that secondary students spent on two different home activity during a week over a period of nine years between 2000 and 2009. .
In 2000 watching tv was the main activity for secondary students , watching around 21hours per week.they used to spend just under 4 hours per week for computing .Just 8 year later computing overtook the watching tv as a primary activity of pupils.
Between 2000 and 2008 computer activities rose dramatically to a peak of 22 hours per week .By contrast the figure for watching tv after a relatively stable between 2000 and 2003 saw a considerably fall to approximately 15 hours per week by 2004 and remained at this level for the rest of the period .
overall ,it is clear that contrary to the beginning of the period between 2000 and 2004
,computing was by far most important activity over a period of 4 year from 2004 to 2008 and schoolchildren spent lower amount of time on the watching tv than computing.
استاد در آموزش سایمون این کلمه watching یا generating رو به کار برده آیا غلط هست یا بهتره بنویسم whatched around?
The graph shows the hours that schoolchildren spent on two different home activities per week from 2001 to present.(19)
There was a period of stability for watching TV from 2001 to 2003 by Schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 which was about twenty one hours per week. From 2003 to 2004 this activity had an impressive drop to about fifteen hours per week. In spite of some fluctuation between 2005 to 2006, spending time on TV remained constant from 2004 till now.(62)
These schoolchildren spent less than four hours on computer per week in 2000 but it has had a dramatic growth from beginning to present and now they are almost spending twenty two hours per week on this activity.(38)
The graph of two these activities have a cross point at about fifteen hours per week in 2004.(18)
Overall, although there was a dramatic distance between these activities at the beginning of this period, it has changed in 2004 and computer has been become more popular than TV.(30)(167)
The graph shows a period of time between 2000 to 2008 schoolchildren what hours per week spent on two different favorite home activity.
In 2000 schoolchildren aged 10-12 years old spent 21 hours per week on watching TV. In the same year the average time for using computer was 3 hours. While the time spent on watching TV for 3 years in 2000 to 2003 had a period of stability, the time spent for computer had an impressive growth.
In 2003 to 2004 spent time on watching TV had a drop and got in 15 hours and 2004 to 2005 this time remained stable and 2005 to 2006 had a short variation time between 14 to 16 hours. The time spent in 2006 to 2008 on watching TV remained constant about 15 hours.
Trend of increase the time spent on computer in 2004 got in 15 hours approximately the same hour that schoolchildren spent time on TV. Years later Schoolchildren Spent the most time on computer and in 2008 reached a peak about 22 hours.
Overall, in 2000 most popular schoolchildren activity was TV. It seems along 8 years computer became the most favorite activity in home. )198(
CAMBRIDGE IELTS 12 GENERAL TEST 4
TASK 1
Dear sir/madam
I am writing this letter to inform you about my suggestion for resolve and improve some problems that happen in our reception area.
We had a many complaints of reception area for 3month and unfortunately majority of these complaints were about our reception and her behavior with visitors. she usually has a bad treatment and does not any responsibility about her tasks in reception area.
As you know in each company reception area is one of the most important places that when the visitors or customer coming for the first time going to the reception area and talking with receptionist to get some essential information about companies.
I analyzed this problem and have a some suggest for resolve and achieve to a better situation than now.at first we should change our receptionist and then try to redecoration in reception area for make a pleasure and interest environment. I hope .(160 WORDS)we can be one of the best companies after these alterations
Thank you very much for your attention.
Yours faithfully
In modern world sharing information has the main role. Although some people including me believe sharing information is undoubtedly important for our world others think information should be limited. In this essay both views will be examined. (37 words)
Some people believe there are some benefits to share information. First of all there are many people for obtaining information spend a lot of time to achieve some valuable experiment and information also they have made many mistake during the examination. If information is available for everybody might to prevent others, from waste of time. Secondly by sharing information everyone in the world involved benefit and received information back. If other people do not allow accessing their knowledge and information, we will not to be able to develop our world, so people in all around the world should share information to have modern and developed world. (106 words)
On the other hand, a few people think information should be limited. First of all the major risk to sharing information is abuse of information somehow. The information might be stolen by some terrorist and use of them to build weapons for political purpose and destroy other country and people in that country have died. Secondly financial issues are one of the biggest problems in every one life. For those people who earn money of their information and knowledge they have obtained, sharing information is a disaster. For example a journalist all properties have are their information if their information accessible, they can’t earn money. (105words)
In conclusion, undoubtedly sharing information help to people to improve their quality of life, but if we be able to manage sharing information and prevent abusing of them, we can build safe and secure world.( 34 words)
سلام استاد
وقت بخیر
اگر امکانش هست فیدبک رایتینگ من رابدهید
ممنون از شما
in recent years having access to different types of information has resulted in an increase in specialized activities .Although some people believe that lots of information should share for people freely , others are disagree and believe some information is very valuable to be published freely.This essay will discuss both viewpoints.
Some people are passionate advocate of free information approach and argue that information should be shared freely .First of all shortage of financial ability of some people can be a major impediment to attracting them to using of that information because for some people challenges of being in a hard financial condition is beyond our imagination.Secondly it is a simple fact that if information doesn’t share freely can render useless for doing the practical activities because this kind of information would have many effects for revolutionizing .
On the other hand ,however, there are those who argue that this information are too valuable and shouldn’t be shared freely.Firs of all because this notion would discourage researchers from continuing the further activities and financial issues can fire their enthusiasm further since these issues are prioritized over most other issues for more people.Secondly the evidence suggest that it’s not until we pay the cost for valuable information that we realize value of it and I’m strong advocate of this approach and believe that valuable information shouldn’t be published freely.
In conclusion i once again reaffirm my position that information are more valuable than to be published freely and some people are agree with this viewpoint ,however , others are disagree and advocate of freely published information .
Information plays an important role in our lives. Although some people think information should be shared as much as possible, others believe that some kind of it is far more important or valuable than it could be published freely. This essay will discuss both views.(45)
There are some people who believe that sharing information freely without any limitation is very beneficial. First of all, they think in this way public awareness will rise. For example if scientists were free to publish results of their research about food industry, many people would alter their daily diet in order to live more healthful. Secondly, they think it helps scientist to be on cutting edge of science. It prevents doing same projects simultaneously or spending money and time on doing a research which had done before in another place. They believe it helps to make great improvement in different fields.(102)
On the other hand there are also people who believe some information is too worthy to be shared freely. First of all, they mention financial aspects. Actually many scientific research and business projects take place to improve different kinds of industries from the military to the food industry. So their exclusive access to information helps them to achieve to bigger markets and more benefits. Secondly, some information can be used for non-peaceful purposes. For instance some countries like North Korea may use high technology knowledge to reach weapons of mass destruction such as nuclear bomb which can be a global threat.(101)
In conclusion, some people are advocate of sharing information freely and believe it should be shared as much as possible but others including me think some information is too important to be published without any limitation.(36)
Information management is an essential issue in this modern life. Although some people argue sharing information is useful, others think that there should be limitation on valuable information. This essay will discuss both views.(34)
What are the benefits of sharing as much information as possible? First of all, maximum sharing causes to avoid repeat some research in different contexts. Expenses of a research should be considered by companies, faculties, and so on, because some resources will be allocated to doing research and it can be waste them. Therefore information sharing prevents wasting resources. Secondly, information sharing is a crucial method for businesspersons or people who researches, to improve their information and it also helps them to extend and develop the achieved information according to their situations and adjust them with themselves information and research.(100)
On the other hand there is a discussion to limit sharing precious information. First of all, important information may be abused by competitors or enemies. Some companies have a team which looks for information of their competitors to figure out what they are researching on, what the next product of them is, what the next innovation is, And so on. Thus they think a limitation on valuable information sharing is necessary. Secondly, some private information can be accessed in the interest of information sharing. So people should consider that there is an important different between private information which are important for most of research institutes or companies and those that can be shared and they shouldn’t mix them with each other.(121)
In my view maximum information sharing is useful and has its own beneficial, but people should be careful what kind of information are going to be shared.
In conclusion, despite information sharing is helpful, it also can carry its own consequences.(15)(296)
Knowledge plays a crucial role in the improvement of human societies. Although some people believe there is more benefit in maximum sharing of information, others think knowledge shouldn’t be shared easily. This essay will discuss both views. (37 words)
Some people choose the maximum sharing of researches. First of all, this helps societies to use those researches for better improvement, there is plenty of not shared information in many countries in medical, technology, business and etc. that can be very useful in others countries, such as saving people lives by effective drugs. Secondly, by more sharing of knowledge, there is more chance in creating new knowledge, because others can use those in their experiment and researches and hence reach their goals faster and easier, and also poor people and countries can access this useful information. (96 words)
Other people believe that limited sharing of information is more reasonable. First of all, there are financial purposes, governments and companies investigate huge budget and allocate a lot of time for researches, and they expect the return of their money and time. Secondly, by limited sharing of information, bad people can’t access crucial information that can hurt other people easily. For example, if there is knowledge about “the fatal effects of mixing some chemical substances”, or “how to create a man-made explosive” those people can use these researches to hurt others. (91 words)
In conclusion, some people including me prefer the idea of maximum sharing of information for the improvement of all countries. In another side, some think, it’s better to not sharing information easily. (32 words)
(۲۵۶ words)
Nowadays Information is a crucial factor in the international community. Although some people believe in maximum sharing of information, others including me think limited sharing of information is better. This essay will discuss both view.(35)
Some people believe in maximum sharing of information. First of all, sharing of information is a need for modern society. Access to more information can be cause the spread sciences and business. Expanding of sciences lead to achieve more sciences and this cycle go on and global sciences day by day make progress. According this progress if previous information is incomplete or mistake can be corrected. Secondly, enough information about anything lead to more prosper that and with having more information in a lot of fields like business and sciences relater on, may happen more economic boom. With money rotation people economic situation get better and society will be witness people convenience.(112)
On the other hand, some people believe in limited sharing information. First of all, sharing all information can lead to misuse. Tricky persons with specific approach and with having exist enough information can access to a lot of valuable and private sources of people, companies and governments. Secondly, with limited sharing of some information and determining cost for gaining them owner this information like government or private companies can earn more income. More income can be important factor for continuing life of society. I think publication of some valuable information must be limited and cautious. (96)
In conclusion, on one hand some people have impression that sharing information is the best approach and on the other hand some people don’t believe in sharing all information.(29)
۲۶۹ words
سلام استاد
وقت بخیر
میخواستم خواهش کنم زحمت بکشید و نمونه رایتینگ جلسه نهم رو ارسال بفرمایید.
ممنون
درود
برای همه رایتینگ ها نمونه وجود نداره. نباید برای همه رایتینگ ها منتظر نمونه باشید.
Recruiters believe personal information required to apply a job. For many people asking about personal information make them uncomfortable. Although some people believe this is good idea, others disagree. This essay will discuss these two points. (36 words)
Give personal information including hobbies and marital status is kind of personal, but it can be useful. First of all for those employees who are married and have children, employer can make some benefit for them for example maybe employer increase monthly payment and give them more leave; and obtain job satisfaction. Secondly there are some jobs which demand special skill and abilities with different condition, if employees give more information about personal abilities and knowledge they have, employer can suggest suitable position which is match with their ability and obtain positive feedback for both of them ( 97 word)
On the other hand some people believe this type of information is not relevant to their job. First of all ask personal information form employees are lack of privacy and make them worried and insecure, about their future life; because nowadays there are many crime robberies that happen through the personal information. (52 words)
عذرخواهی میکنم استاد من بیشتر از این نتونستم بنویسم
درود
رایتینگ شما باید ۲ پاراگراف ۱۰۰ کلمه ای و مقدمه و نتیجه گیری داشته باشد.
اگر قصد شما شرکت در آزمون آیلتس هست با بررسی نمونه های جلسه اول تا به امروز کوشش کنید پاسخ را بسط دهید.
When you asking for new job it may be employers request of you to give some your personal information. although some people believe this data can useful for provide the better situation in your work place but in the other side some people disagree with this request. This essay will discuss both of two view point(56 words)
Give a personal information in resumes be some benefit. First of all you can easily say each point a bout your favorite things and hate point that you want to inform a bout you and it is so helpful to provide the better situation in your work environment. Secondly one of the most significant point in founding a good job is a give a adjust information to the employers. Because a few work positions have a special condition and if they have not adequate information a bout you it may be annoying for you and them .for instance may be that job good for single people and there condition work hard for married people.(114words)
In the other hand some people has an against view point in this matter. first of all they believe give a some personal information can interferes there personal privacy ,in the other words if your personal information accessible for every one that can abuse from them. Secondly some people are insecure and when they have to giving the trust personal information may be in feature they usually anxious and can not doing there tasks accurately, and it is affect in there work and in general in the collection or company.(90 words)
In conclusion some people including me believes give a personal information is a unnecessary and more annoying the employees. In the other had some people says these data essential for manager to provide the best work conditions for staff.(39 words)—-
Totally 274 words
The employers are sometimes interested in private information of people who are going to work for them. Although some persons believe this kind of information is irrelevant to employers, others including me think they can be useful. This essay will examine both these views. (44)
Selecting employees is a significant issue for employers. First of all, the employers want to give their jobs to people who are more fitted with the environment of their companies and situations so they try to access to their personal information. Because they believe private information helps them to have the best selection. Secondly, having private information helps the employers to know better their employees in order to give them better job position and train them according their hobbies and interests. They also can provide them better facilities. I think these are persuading reasons for employers to ask the private information from their employees.(104)
On the other hand there are some people believing personal information is not helpful. First of all, asking for this information cause people feel insecure and therefor the employees give unreal information to them which causes the employers misunderstand and make wrong decisions. Secondly, some people believe this kind of information may be a tool for employer to abuse. The employees can be under pressure to do some things that they don’t like and may be illegal activities by the persons who have authority and know their personal information. Under these circumstances, these workplaces seem hesitant and there is no sense of security between employers and employees.(107)
In conclusion, despite personal information can be useful, the impacts of asking these information must be considered.(17)(273)
How to behave with employees is one of the crucial argues in a new subfield of marketing named internal marketing. Although some people disagree with asking private information from job candidates, others including me believe it can be helpful. This essay will discuss both sides.(45)
Some people think asking personal information is inapplicable. First of all, they mention gathering these kinds of information make people feel uncomfortable. For example when somebody has experienced an unsuccessful marriage he may lose his self-confidence by questioning about the issue. Secondly, they announce their worries about effects of irrelevant information on being chosen by employers or even on employee’s promotion in the future. They believe knowing about people’s interests, how they spend their free time or even their marital state and so on should not affect employers and the only effective factor must be their expertise.(97)
On the other hand some people are strong advocate of collecting additional information. They believe it has many positive effects on organization’s success so employers should collect information as much as they can. First of all, they say it help managers to know more about the personality of their team members in order to give them the best post which they can handle. Secondly, they think organizations can provide more facilities for their staff by knowing more about them and it motivates employees to do their best at work. They consider the whole set as a family in which the more members know about each other the more they feel close and tend to achieve the group’s goal.(118)
In conclusion, I think having more information is useful and helps employers to scrutinize new staff and do far more effective however some people disagree and think it is irrelevant.(30)
Offering many information for employment are ordinary and definitely essential, but some other information are completely personal. Although some people believe personal information are useful for employing, other think those are not useful, this essay will discuss both views.(39)
Some people with getting personal information are agree and know them useful. First of all, these information such as interesting and entertainment can help employer to know inner features of employees. Actually spirit’s everyone is determinative type of behaviors, therefore, employee inner feature can be effective on their treatment with customers and colleagues. Secondly, getting some personal information such as married or single ever having offspring, more can be useful for employees to acquire protective services, including insurance for all family, day care for children or even more holiday and some services else. Also employer can evaluate and get decide in according coasts for their employment that is affordable or not.(106)
On the other hand, some people think getting personal information are not useful. First of all, it’s possible misuse of personal information. There are bad people everywhere and may other employees of the same company steal these information and in especially time misuse them. secondly, some people are inner going and don’t love everyone know about their personal information and if they are forced give personal information, may get distress and make effect on their work’s function. But I believe it’s better employers for applying forms consider two items: general and essential questions and personal and not essential questions that not made them reply to personal information.(107)
In conclusion, on one hand some people are believe in being useful personal information by employee on the other hand some people are not agree with it.(27)
Dear Sirs,
I am writing this letter inform you about a problem with my new computer’s modem which I had ordered it last week of your company in an online way. (29 words)
My modem doesn’t work properly or it’s possible that I cannot good use it. All their lights of modem get blinking but after a while all lights get turn off, then speed of internet is decreased. I try saved times for solving its problem but I cannot succeed. (48 words)
Currently this problem has affected on my job. I am a teacher not only I work in the school but also I teach to many students in an online way. Because of if I don’t have a modem whit good activity and high internet pace I will face with mainly problems and definitely my students will be unsatisfied. (58 words)
In sum up, I want to say you how could solve my problem with modem as soon as possible. Would you please give it back or is it possible for your company that send a skilled expert for its repairing or each other way for solve it.(47 words)
Hope to hear from you very soon.
Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing this letter to inform you about my problem with the scanner I bought from your company last month. While I was scanning some documents it suddenly stopped. I tried to reconnect it to my laptop and despite the electric current flows and the power light is on, it is still out of work.(56)
As I am getting ready for my thesis lecture and preparing the power-point file, the scanner is an essential equipment to do my activity. Actually it really makes me nervous because I have to be ready by next two weeks and I fear that I won’t be able to use it.(51)
Perhaps it would be better if you could send a maintenance stuff to figure out the problem. Since I guess the maintenance stuffs have a very accurate schedule, I would be grateful if you could let me know the first time that one of them can come. Hope to hear from you very soon.(54)
Yours faithfully
Aliyeh Abbasi
(۱۶۹)
یسوال در مورد اسامی غیر قابل شمارش دارم
من قبلا خونده بودم که اسم غیر قابل شمارش رو با the گذاشتن قبلش میشه جمع کرد
مثلا people با فعل مفرد میاد ولی the people با فعل جمع
یا مثلا information و the information
این اشباهه؟
این عبارت رو اگر گوگل کنی
how to make information plural
این جواب رو دریافت میکنی:
In English the word “information” is an uncountable noun. You can never, ever, for any reason whatsoever, say “an information” or “informations”. Instead, if you need to use the word in the singular, you can say “a piece / an item of information”. But usually we simply use “information” for both singular and plural
خیلی خیلی ممنونم استاد
🙂
Dear sir or madam
I am writing this letter to inform you a bout a problem that I have with one of equipment I bought from your shop last week.
I am a civil engineer and usually use of electronic devices in my work for example laptop , camera etc .I bought laser meter in your shop and unfortunately its not working good now.(60words)
It device so significant in my job , because when I go to supervising in new building I have to meter the dimension of construction with laser meter and if this equipment not working good I cant do my tasks accurately. This problem can threat of safety each building in future .(52 words)
Luckily This device has a guaranty card in there box and I want to use that. therefore I get back it for you with this letter and I hope you can repair it and return to me as soon as possible.
Thank you very much for your attention.(48 words)
Yours faithfully
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing this letter to inform you about a problem I face with the laptop I bought last week from your central branch. Although it looked perfect at first, it seems there is something wrong with its monitor. The monitor screen blinks sometimes and it takes several seconds to become normal again.(53)
I am doing some statistical projects at home and this laptop is the most essential equipment to finish my work on time. Actually I think the problem is more serious while using a professional software for drawing accurate diagrams. It really bothers my eyes and makes impossible to focus on my job.(52)
I would be grateful if you would change this laptop for me or repair it. Since I guess the process will take several days, please let me know if you will provide me a backup one while I don’t have mine. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.(53)
Yours faithfully
Samira Ghasemi
با سلام به ۲۸۵ کلمه کاهش یافت
In current century, one of the most important changes in the people life is being the internet. Although internet has many benefits and positive effects in the people life, it seems there are some negative effects, too. This essey will discuss both issues(43
Impressive internet effects are undeniable in people life. First of all, the internet provide many information by databases and everyone according to their need, can gain information to want. As persons have ability for strong search, they can get more and more proper information. secondly, money and time managment are other positive internet effects. Being applications have decreased many commuts, therefore persons instead of waste time in routes, offices and factories by special applications and without persence many their office functions to do. Also easy access to information has decresed purchase many books, articles and other information sourced and they can get online the most of them and save their money.(110)
On the other hand, the internet always has some negative effect. First of all,many people who use the internet usually get decrease their interpersonal communications. This issue can be due to addiction to internet. These persons spend their total times on the computer. Many interpersonal communication these persons happen in cyberspace and spesific applications and after a while, mostly their relationshipes and communications get cut with real world. Secondly, misuse of the internet by mean people is very important issue. It possible make happen by hackers with access to personal information of people. Financial misuse often make happen by hackers threat for publishing personal information of people. (105
In conclusion, in the past few decades, the intentent have made changes in the people life, that on one hand many changes are posititive and on other hand (۲۷)
The Internet changes today’s lives completely. Although there are some cons about the internet, but also the internet provides people a lot of pros. This essay will discuss these two points. (31 words)
The Internet has a lot of advantages, First of all, it accelerates business growth; many companies rely on the power of internet today, they promote their product, connect their clients and also receive payment through this channel. To be honest if there isn’t internet such big firms like google, apples and etc. aren’t such powerful today. Also the internet helps to shape another firms that called startup which completely rely on the internet. Secondly learning is much easier than before with help of internet. Everybody can nearly access to numerous educational content in everything, this type of content can released as videos, audios and digital books and papers. Also the internet makes another concept that called e-learning which people can attend to university or other classes without physically be in them. (131 words)
The Internet has some disadvantages, First of all, it increases scam, that called cyber scams. There are people on the internet that try to cheat another people to steal their money in different ways, some direct you to a fake website for online payment that causes they achieve your private bank account information, some with hack your system or mobile do in this way. Secondly the internet is a virtual space, it’s not real. In social networks people can hide their identity easily and pretend as a another person, they can trick others people about their real name, s,e,x and age. (101 words)
In conclusion, I think there are more benefits in existence of internet in compare to its negative points . (18 words)
The internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of internet has been positive or negative.this essay will discuss both viewpoints.
there are some argue that internet has been useful technology .First of all , it is an indisputable fact that internet has revolutionized people
communication and people can easily communicate with each other and meet together even if they are away from each other .also people could be able to control their momentous places for instance shop , homes from a long-distance place. secondly this significant technology has
made easy global trade so merchants can trade with faraway places even without going to those places . Also traders could send money for buying goods by internet. (93
On the other hand ,nonetheless , there are some argue that internet has caused negative effects . First of all there are some program in internet environment that could provide a vast amount of virus to computer which would destroy it since protect of computer against viruses is a hard work and also would need to a professional engineer to repair it . secondly there are some people in internet network who have been called hacker .a vast amount of a person’s private information can be accessed for hacker that this act has been called hack. Admittedly ,information couldn’t been accessed if be encrypted .
By way of conclusion , however, i would contend that this accessibility to global networks has been beneficial .although some people believe this technology has had negative effect for human life.
مقدمه شما با شیوه تدریس شده هماهنگ نیست.
در پاراگراف ها نباید سر خط برید.
در این سوال دیدگاه شخصی پرسیده نشده و نباید عنوان شود. به فایل صوتی جلسه قبل و توضیح این سوال دقت کنید.
Almost everyone in the world has access to the internet in many countries. Although this technology has benefits and side effect for people who use of internet .in this essay we will discuss both of view. (36 word)
Many people believe Internet improved quality of their life. First of all, internet has brought significant changed in community, people around the world can access to each other by some application through the internet; such as Facebook and telegram, also some close friends who has lost their contact, maybe find each other and have communication again. Secondly every information we need has found in the internet and it’s available for free, internet is a good choice for those people who want to learn and have knowledge and don’t have many times and also don’t have much money .(98 words)
On the other hand access to the internet has some side effect, if somebodies have an internet bank account, and transport money through the internet maybe put them in dangerous situation, hackers can access their bank account and all the information they need to transport their money and when they have understood it have been very late. Secondly teenagers and children who access the internet maybe has some disadvantage.it has been negative effects of their social behavior and change their future. One of the biggest treat internet poses for teenagers is easy and available access to P.O.R.N pages and the result is increasing their violence in their behavior. (108 words)
In conclusion, internet has many changes to our daily life. Access to the internet had more benefits than disadvantage of use internet. People can choose what they want do in the internet. (32 word)
The Internet is the most important invention of the human for communication. Although it has brought many benefits for users, it also has had some disadvantages in recent years. I believe the beneficial impacts are more than them. This essay will argue both these views.(45)
Some people feel Internet has dramatically revolutionized their lives recently. First of all, the Internet has altered the communication in recent years and people are more near together from faraway places because it has improved the contact between them and the information and positions have been exchanged more comfortable nowadays. For example people can contact visually by some applications such as WHATSAPP or TELEGRAM on their private phones. Secondly, the needed information can be accessed faster than before. For example going to the libraries, organizations or statistics centers for most of the information that are required by users, is not necessary anymore and people can save their time and money.(110)
On the other hand, there are some negative attitudes towards the Internet. First of all, inappropriate content can be dangerous for those people who are under the legal age and aren’t able to protect themselves against those things. For example there are some treacherous challenges that encourage teenagers to face them and it might lead to undesirable happenings. Secondly, the security might be in jeopardy in the Internet. There is a vast amount of private information of users in applications. For example many banking operations have been done by the Internet these days and they can be abused by hackers and scammers.(102)
In conclusion, the internet has both advantages and disadvantages and it has entailed many people and many global trades in recent times. But, admittedly, the positive impacts of that on our lives is irrefutable.(34)(291)
مرسی استاد. حتما
میخواستم بگم تبادل اطلاعات و نظرات راحتتره
به جای positions اگر comments یا opinions بذارم درست میشه؟ یا کلا جمله ایراد داره؟
In current century, one of the most important changes in the people life is being the internet. Although internet has many benefits and positive effects in the people life, it seems there are some negative effects, too. This essey will discuss both issues
Impressive internet effects are undeniable in people life. First of all, the internet provide many information by databases and everyone according to their need, can gain information to want. As persons have ability for strong search, they can get more and more proper information. Also online classes and other internet facilities are ways for getting information.secondly, money and time managment are other positive internet effects. Being applications have decreased many commuts, therefore persons instead of waste time in routes, offices and factories by special applications and without persence many their office functions to do. Also easy access to information has decresed purchase many books, articles and other information sourced and they can get online the most of them and save their money.
On the other hand, the internet always has some negative effect. First of all,many people who use the internet usually get decrease their interpersonal communications. This issue can be due to addiction to internet. These persons spend their total times on the computer. Many interpersonal communication these persons happen in cyberspace and spesific applications and after a while, mostly their relationshipes and communications get cut with real world. Secondly, misuse of the internet by mean people is very important issue. It possible make happen by hackers with access to personal information of people. Financial misuse often make happen by hackers threat for publishing personal information of people. Also some misuses are hiden and .persons get realize them after long time that there is any way for solving them.
In conclusion, in the past few decades, the intentent have made changes in the people life, that on one hand many changes are posititive and on other hand some changes are negative.
رایتینگ شما بالای ۳۰۰ واژه است.
پاراگراف های اصلی باید بین ۱۰۰ تا ۱۱۰ واژه و کل رایتینگ زیر ۳۰۰ واژه باشند. حتما تعداد واژگان هر پارگراف را در انتها بنویسید.
چک لیست را با دقت بررسی کنید:
https://ielts2.com/چک-لیست-رایتینگ-آزمون-آِیلتس-آکادمیک/
سلام و عرض ادب. بله درست میفرمایید۳۲۶ کلمه بود. بررسی نمیکنید؟
خیر باید تصحیح کنید زیر ۳۰۰ واژه باشه. دوباره بفرستید برای فیدبک.
Adapting to new technology such as internet is one of the challenging issues these days. Although some people think internet impacts their lives negatively, others including me believe it has many positive effects on our lifestyle. This essay will discuss both of these views.(44)
Actually internet can have some repercussions. First of all, children access to harmful information through it. For example there are many websites with p..o..r..n..o..g..r..a..p..h..i..c or violent contents which have detrimental effects on offspring. So that many believe government should filter these kinds of pages in order to prevent violence in society. Secondly, sometimes it uncontrollably wastes time. Nowadays, almost everybody has its own page on social networks to be able to connect with friends, family members or even colleagues and the more people you are connected to the more time you should spend to manage your page. It may take several hours per day to read and answer all comments or check friends’ posts.(114)
On the other hand, in many occasions the comfort that people experience is the consequence of using internet. First of all, it has been become possible to start a successful business just by being creative. There are many one-man brands which sell their homemade products through their pages. They easily improve their activities without paying for expenses like rental costs which were inevitable before. Secondly, acquiring many different kinds of skills has been become easier. Many people in today’s busy life are strong advocate of virtual teaching. In this way there is no need to spend time and money on commuting to class and attendees should only adjust their schedule to be online then.(114)
In conclusion, present-day technologies like internet have both positive and negative effects on our life and I agree with those who believe positive impacts are far more than negative ones.(30)
nowaday internet and social networks has dramatically changed our lives and life style.researchers have a disparate views a bout the benefits and negative impacts internet in our live.i believe in personal view that positive points are more than negative in this times.
First of all, the most signification issue is free access to information in each branch for researchers,by the internet we have plenty of scientific matters and useful data for improvement our knowledge of around environment.in secondly one of the most interesting work in virtual space are web browsing and get to know the people that they live thousands kilometers far from our city. for instance once time I made a meeting with the one of the greatest companies in london by the get to knowing in FACEBOOK.i think while we accept the rules in virtual space we can give a most benefit of it.
In the other hand we know it can be some treatments in web browsing for children and adults.first of all is the trust to a strange people that they try to thief our personal information such as the account passwords or our personal family images. secondly when children surfing in the web it might be seen the pages accompany by unfit content and unfortunately it has a bad impact in there personal.i think it is necessary for parents to consider there children and learn them the safe ways to use the internet and there content.
In conclusion I believe that benefits of interenet and there positive points are more than the disadvantages and negative points , and we should the consider some rules to be safe of treatments.(270words)
مقدمه شما با شیوه تدریس شده نوشته نشده.
در این رایتینگ دیدگاه شخصی درخواست نشده. اگر متوجه سوال نشدید توضیحات کلاس رو دوباره بشنوید.
سایر موارد جی استاد؟بررسی نمیکنید؟چون بچه های دیگه که نظر شخصیرو هم نوشته بودند رو هم تصحیح کردید ولی مال من رو نه.
توضیح رو دقیق بخونید و ببینید چرا این اتفاق افتاده.
negative effects
#make a distance between people
#move away people from main goals in life
positive effects
# become people well_acquainted with recent happenings
# reduce the waste times for access to necessary resources
Good
Two maps in the picture indicate an island before and after construction of some vacation facilities for tourists.
It is shown in the second map that a pier is constructed in the south of the island which is connected to the reception building in the center by vehicle track. The track rounds the reception and reaches to the restaurant in the north of it. Also some accommodations are built on both sides of the reception building near the trees which are connected to each other by footpath. Accommodations which are located on the west of the island are circled around trees and have access to the swimming beach in the most western point of the island by footpath. It seems farthest east of the island has been stayed untouched.
Overall, the island has been changed dramatically and most of the constructions are concentrated in the central part tend to east where there is no trees.(155)
درود
رایتینگ شما بعد از مهلت تعیین شده ارسال شده و فیدبک کلی دریافت میکند
چهارچوب رایتینگ خوب هست و مشکلی از این نظر دیده نمیشود اما خطاهایی در جمله بندی و ساختارهای گرامری به ویژه ساختار مجهول وجود دارد که باید با دقت بیشتر در رایتینگ های بعدی برطرف شوند.
in this map we can see 2 maps of an island that make a construction of facilities for tourists in it.one map show the before and one other show he after this changes.
in the first map we can not see things except a few palm trees in the island but in the second map we see the dramatic changes and many facilities for convenience
tourists.in the middle side and left side build 2 series of traditional accommodations that each collection connect together by foot path.in the upside constructed the restaurant that connected to the reception in the middle by vehicle track.for the intestersting tourist made a pier for boating and tourist can access from reception to it by vehicle track.and in the left side of island preexist the beach near the accommodation that tourist can go swimming easily in it.
overall it seems this island has a many differents changes by make a constructions and convenience facilities for tourists and the middle site and left side better
improve than right side(190 words
بد نیست!
As it’s illustrated, there are two views of an island, before and after some constructions were founded on the island.
In the first image, it’s shown that there is nothing except some trees and a not-applicable beach for swimming in the west. It’s obvious that there are two accommodations camp were installed for tourists in the west and nearly the center of the island. Reception building is reachable by vehicles from the southern part of the island and also there is vehicle track to the restaurants located in the island top-center near the reception. There are also some aquatic leisure, in the south there is a pier that can be used to reach to the boats for booting, and in the farthest west a useable beach for swimming was established that must be reached throug1h footpath.
Overall, there are a lot of changes on the island that much of them located in the center and west of it, and also there is enough space to build new facilities in the east.
(۱۶۹ words)
There are two maps of before and after an island, which show has been built some bulding and convenience facilities for toursts.
It appears, reception located almost in the island middle. Around reception is place for vehicle track. In north, reception is joined to restaurant and in south that is joined to pier. both with vehicle track.
The other significant changes are some accommodations that have been exsited in western and eastern sides.
Relation among accommodations is with footpath only. In west side these accommodations get reach to beach with footpath,too, in east side there .is not any way for getting to beach,though
Overall, changes have been exsited for tourists convenience in an island. It appears more changes and developments have concentrated on middle and western side.
There are two maps of an island in different times which show some services that have been built for tourists at about a hundred square meters of it. (28)
A reception building is constructed in the center of the island that is surrounded by a vehicle track which extends to a restaurant in the north and a pier in the south.
There are some accommodations in west and east of the reception building with a footpath between them that tourists can stay there for some nights. The tourists can go to the beach for swimming in west of the island through footpath and they also can go sailing by the boats which are provided for them in south of the island.
The condition in right of the island is pristine and the palms are in the same situation as they can be seen in the first map. (118)
Overall, as illustrated, a considerable changes has been carried on in order to attract numerous tourists. (16) (162)
Two graph show development of equipment in an island. First map show the island was empty of facilities and the second one show how to increase equipment for visitors.
In first map there are some palm trees, not anymore, but in second one’s after construction add some facilities to the island for tourists. As you see a reception located in middle of the island, there are two accommodation sites in the island; one of the accommodation areas is in the east and the other one is in the west of the reception building; which is available by feet. Also another significant change, a restaurant has been built above the reception, which has access by vehicle. The western part of the island there is a swimming pool and beach after these changes. In the southern of the island provide some boats for tourists to enjoy of their trip.
Overall, most changes and construction are in the center and western of the island, in eastern of the island there are some palm trees and nothing change. (174 words)
As it’s ilustrating there are some constructions that after the changes have been made.There is a reception building
middle of this island that has been surrounded by lots of accommodation buildings on both sides of it .As well as perception building has been connected to a pier through vehicle track to get on the boats on southern side .there is a beach on the western side of the reception building that after crossing the some accommodation buildings through footpath is accessible for swimming .one of the significant changes that has been made is a restaurant just on northern side of reception that these have also been connected together through vehicle track . What’s more there are some palm trees more on eastern side than western side that haven’t been changed compared to before .
Overall , there are significant alterations which appear to be more concentrated on the west and middle of this island which have been made an usable island from an abandoned territory .
Trip to the attractive places with difficult condition has always been one of the most challenging experiences for any people .Although some people
believe trip to such places has lots of disadvantages ,others believe such .
trips could be so valuable.this essay will discuss both viewpoints
Some argue that there are benefits for tourists visiting such places .First of all they would become stronger for deal with life problems because the experience of hard conditions could become humans more patient and they will become ready for rest of their life.Secondly traveling to hard condition places would make people more familiar with the life methods of native people there.However it’s a bit away from reality that be able to comprehend that what problems are they living with..As well as travelers can use the local products and enjoy .What’s more native people would be glad if many people experience their own life even for a few hours.
On the other hand some argue that would have many disadvantages visiting such places .First of all there are many wild animals living in these
places and if they become aware that people are creating danger for their existence so hurt them .Considering such places are their own home so they’re right .Secondly these places are mostly wide and one of the insurmountable problems that any visitor would might deal with is lack of practical roadmap or a professional advisor so they would might get lost the main roads or even one another during way.What’s more getting lost in such dangerous places would might be finished with death one person or an group.
In conclusion some people believe dangerous and hard places aren’t proper for trip and others are disagree with this comments and believe visiting such places are momentous for life and so advantage.
درود
رایتینگ شما بعد از مهلت تعیین شده ارسال شده و فیدبک کلی دریافت میکند
چهارچوب کلی رایتینگ خوب است اما ایرادهایی در جمله بندی ها به چشم میخورد که در فیدبک های بعدی متوجه آن ها خواهد شید. تمامی جمله ها را به دقت بررسی کنید و هرگونه ایراد احتمالی را در گوگل، لانگمن و صفحه کلاس بررسی کنید.
Traveling all around the world and see any kinds of lifestyle is a good piece of advice. Although some people believe visiting places that has difficult conditions are full of advantages, others think traveling to places in which tough conditions are, it has much benefit for tourists. This essay will discuss both views. (53 words)
Nowadays, tourists engage in visiting unusual places to enjoy the benefits. First of all, they experience new things in their life that they have never experienced. They can discover unknown lands and see different types of culture and diversity of animals and climates and enjoy the beauty of nature that isn’t destroyed or changed by human. Secondly, when tourist visit a harsh place, they can improve their abilities. They face a lot of challenges and major limitation that they have to overcome by themselves. They know their fear and try to fight against and control it. Therefore this kind of journeys make them stronger and more confident. (107 words)
On the other hand, traveling harsh places have some disadvantages. First of all, tourists faces lack of facilities. These places don’t have proper telecommunication and transportation systems. If tourists be in trouble or get injured, they confront lack of health support. In this situation the injury may be there with tourist for lifetime. Secondly, unknown places are too dangerous. Sometimes things can go against their plans or tourist go missing or find themselves in difficult places that has wild animals and insect or undiscovered plants and other unpredicted things that tourist not ready or not educated to face that and may die. (102 words)
In conclusion, on one hand some people argue that visiting difficult places have much benefit and advantages and on the other hand some people believe that harsh places have disadvantages for tourist.
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رایتینگ شما بعد از مهلت تعیین شده ارسال شده و فیدبک کلی دریافت میکند:
قالب کلی رایتینگ شما خوب هست. خطاهای کوچک دستوری و خطاهای کوچکی در جمله بندی به چشم میخورد.
Uncommon places are attractive for tourist nowadays. They choose unexplored destination for their journey although there are some benefit and disadvantage places with difficult situation, this essay will discuss the both view (33 words)
Absolutely travelling to unfriendly places with difficult condition some benefit. First of all one of the biggest advantage in difficult trip is that improve one’s confident and one’s abilities from physically and mentally point of view, their body become fit and strong. Also these tourists are able to face life’s challenges and completely overcome problems. Secondly people who visit unknown places are filling with incredible excitement to see scenery and natural view that might find in isolated places and untouched by human also enjoy seeing beautiful landscape of nature. In this type of journey tourist’s maybe find a connection to inner sense and change whole life. (106 words)
In other side of view visit these places might create rough condition and situation for tourists. First of all weather is very different, for example in Sahara desert weather temperature is over high, maybe 140 F and no one can live in desert and it’s not easy to stand against in this temperature. Secondly there isn’t convenience and facilities such as hotel, restaurant and Wi-Fi connection, for those tourist who depend on technology and modern world it’s not a good destination because these places are isolated there is no connection with routine life, visitors couldn’t check the telegram or E-mail and surfing in the internet and might be make them homesick and want to back home.(115 words)
In conclusion, tourist should considered unexplored places destination has some benefit and disadvantage and we discussed both side of view (20 words)
سلام استاد من متوجه نشدم چرا گفتید مقدمه با ساختار هماهنگ نیست؟ میشه توضیح بیشتری بدید؟
فایل صوتی جلسه مربوطه و نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس رو ببینید. بسیار ساده هست
these days many thourists interested to vistiting places that have difficult condition that are new and exciting.although some people believe there are alot of benefits to visit unusual places others think there are some disatvantages for tourists.
this essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.46
as a matter of fact there are many advantages for people who visit hard places.
firstly ,tourism strenghts the economic conditions of such places.
to support tourism many roads and hotels are built in remote areas.
Secondly, some tourists could have a unique experience travelling to these places because people never gain such exprience in their everyday life .
on the other side visiting places with dificult conditions might create a hug problem for tourists who are with weak and thin body such as childeren or elderly.also there are not enough facilities for treatment if the traveler need help.
moreover people might find the experience bored because in those places there are not internet connection or cafes and this can be abig drawbacks for these tourists.119
in conclusion ,exploring places that have an uncommon conditions could be a positive trip with more benefits .however visiting the places with difficult conditions have some disadvantages.27
رایتینگ شما تفاوت بسیار زیادی به چک لیست دارد.
یک پاراگراف اصلی بیشتر نوشته نشده و بارها سر خط رفتیذ.
بعد از اصلاح ارسال بفرمایید.
Nowadays the exotic journey have so popular among the young people.travel and visit this places have benefits and disadvantages for them and it is better to consider these
points before they decision for there trips.this essay will study of these two points..(44 words
in the first part we talk a bout benefits of visited the places where conditions are difficult .at first of all we should mention to original nature in these places because
they inaccessible for more people therefore you can visit the surprising scene that
you do not see them before,also you can enjoy to stay and sleep in the nature and pleasure to see the sky with millions of stars at night.secondly in unusual trips the tourists can promotion there courage and ability for face to the problems in nature,for instance they have to make a meals withe the primary tools (103 words)
on the other hand there is a some reasons to prohibited the tourists that they want to trip to these unusual places.first of all is the treatments that they face to it,for example if they go to the desert places it possible to encounter to dangerous reptiles
.as kobra snakes and hurt them.secondly if they do not good facilities fore there travel it might be so unsafe for own and there entourages ,for instance in the
antarctic they should have a express equipment and if one person do not them it make several problems and treatment for all of member in there groups. (107words)
In conclusion we discuss a bout tourists that travel to unusual places and there benefits and and disadvantages of these trips.(21 words)
Nowadays traveling to weird places is one of intresting programs for many tourists. Although there are befefits for visiting unusual places, there are some advantages for tourists who go these areas. This essay will discuss these points.
Visiting of difficult places have some benefits. First of all, this trips give tourists opportunity for gaining new experiences. In fact familiar with unknown areas less happen for everyone, therefore, more tourists try to use every opportunity for getting experiences. These experiences can be a new vehicle for reach areas or be even a new food and identify information of natural conditions. Secondly, seeing unusual places often would have much excitment for tourists. Often to located in unfamiliar situation can be with excitment and pleasure senses to them. Thereat and even nice sight stimulate sympathic system, therfore, excitment and joy get raise.
On the other hand, besides all of benefits, tourists should attention to disadvantages unusual places. First of all, in these areas often there are potential dangers. Changing weather is one of them, face with toxic bugs and wild animals are other dangers that the most of them are unpredictable. Secondly shortage of facilities, especially encounter with dangerious conditions is very significant, like some the injury have golden time fore tretment and survive, shortage or lack facilities in these conditions may due to deth. facilities shortage always are not related to particular things, sometimes shortage simple things including water, food or cloth can be extremely harmful and their outcomes may dont be compensable for tourists.
In conclusion, tourists should know during travel to unusual places, in addition enjoy, may occur .disadvantages events for them
Advantages
# having a wonderful adventure
# be able to confront difficulties
Disadvantages
# there is a possibility of being lost
# high cost
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Advantages
# chance to see odd things
# creating great contents for your social network
Disadvantages
# there are problems to find healthy food and water
# communication problems with family, police, etc
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این مورد # communication problems with family, police, etc با توجه به اینکه در این مناطق جمعیتی وجود ندارد باید با دقت بیشتری نوشته شود.
Visiting difficult places is one of the most exciting works that some tourists are interested in doing that. Although some people argue there are benefits, others think there are disadvantages for them. This essay will consider both these points. (39)
Some people believe there are many advantages for tourists to visit difficult places. First of all, they think visitors can enjoy the beauty of nature closely and see many things that you can only see them in the pictures or movies not in usual life. For example you can only see a polar bear in the North Pole and there isn’t any of them in any other place .Secondly, some people argue the visitors who go to difficult places are more ready to encounter the problems in their lives and it makes them stronger and more faster to make decision in complex situations. (103)
On the other hand there are some people who believe that disadvantages are more than benefits. First of all, those persons believe facilities in difficult places are less and it may be dangerous for visitors. The difficult places are not usually completely ready for tourists. For example medical or security facilities are not available soon. Imagine a person who broke his leg in the middle of Amazon jungles and he has to stand it for a while. Secondly, there might be mysterious and unexpected happenings like as avalanche and storm or finishing food and water in the middle of the travel because it takes time longer than the program and usually there aren’t normal foods or clean water in difficult places. (121)
In conclusion, despite tourists are more interested in visiting challenging places, both benefits and disadvantages must be considered.(18)
Nowadays tourism industry is going to be far more different than before and people prefer to visit strange places. Although visiting such places has some benefits, it also has some disadvantages. This essay will discuss both of these points.(39)
Obviously visiting harsh places has disadvantages. First of all, it can be seriously dangerous. For example in the case that somebody chooses a desert to visit it is very likely to be bitten by deadly animals like snake or scorpion which can wear an adult person down in several hours. Secondly, it can be very costly. A trip to Antarctica is a lot more different than a usual vacation in a summer beach. It takes more than ten days and other than accommodation and travelling costs which is thousands of dollars you have to provide very special clothes and equipment.(100)
On the other hand it also has some benefits. First of all, you can gain new experiences in these kinds of trips. Facing new situations by being in a very different place with severe climate and poor facilities teaches us a lot and make us not to take our living condition for granted. Secondly, it is very exciting to visit exotic sites. Especially for youth the more they encounter unexpected circumstances during their unusual trip the more energy and excitement they gain. It can be a very memorable trip which causes you feel powerful every time you remember it.(99)
In conclusion, choosing weird destinations by tourists which is more popular these days has both benefits and disadvantages.(18)
+Advantage
Visually attractive of natural beauty
Make people stronger for problem in their life
+disadvantage
#High risk places and situation
#lose convenience and facilities
Good
+Advantages
# to enjoy the beauty of nature closely
# help them to get ready for encountering difficulties in their lives
– disadvantages
# less facilities for tourists
# mysterious happenings
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Chidreen in the mixed school can improve there social personality and although some people bolive in the seprate schools students have a more attention in class and vthis matter can promotion there educatin.in this essasy discuss a bout these two viewpoint(42 words)
in conclusion we survey those pointview and in belive the mixed schools more better for student education and theye can improve there social personality and
awareness.although somme people have a against opinion and belive the seprate schools more better for there children(43words)
هوک نباید به جمله بعدی چسبیده باشه. نمونه و تدریس کلاس رو بررسی کنید.
عبارت we survey نباید در نتیجه گیری وجود داشته باشه!
بقیه موارد مناسب و خوبه
#Offspring:
Offspring will benefit more by attending mixed schools.
#To develop literacy skills:
Reading story books other than studying at school helps offspring to develop their literacy skills.
#Recent research suggests that:
Recent researches suggest that using vegetables such as soya can be a good alternative of meat.
#Detrimental to:
Some people believe studying in mixed schools is detrimental to children.
#Far more (beneficial/detrimental):
It is far more beneficial to use vegetables in our diet than meat.
#Strong advocate of this approach:
Law makers are strong advocate of this approach and vote for children’s right.
#A fundamental reason for this is that:
A fundamental reason for global warming is increasing of air pollution.
#To acquire any new skill:
With passion you can acquire any new skill.
#Repercussion:
About 40 workers lost their job and it was the repercussion of the company’s bankruptcy.
#Face the consequences:
We should face the consequences of our decision and try to find a way to overcome the problem
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The kind of education system can partly affect everyone’s identify. Although some argue that the education of boys and girls in mixed school is good, others, including me, believe that the boys and girls should attend in separate schools. This essay discuss both these views.
In conclusion, some people believe mixed education system is better and others, including me, consider separate educating far more beneficial for boys and girls.
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As a parent, it’s important to think about advantages and disadvantages of Separate and Mixed Schools. Although some people argue that educating their children in a Separate School have more benefit, others including me think Mixed Schools are better for children to educate. This essay will discuss both views. (49 words)
In conclusion, on one hand some people argue that attending Separate Schools have more benefit and on the other hand some people including me believe Mixed Schools are better place to educate. (32 words)
هوک شما جذابیت خاصی ندارد و در واقع دو سوی argument هست.
بقیه موارد خوب هست.
# Mixed school
Make a better competitive situation between students
Promotion the social temperament
#Seprate school
More attention to the teacher in class
Make a more calm felling for parent a bout there children in school
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Schools and children will make society’s future. Although some think mixed schools are better for education, others choose separated schools as the best choice. This essay will discuss both of views. (31 words)
In conclusion, I think mixed schools are better for children education since those help children to become more sociable and ready for real-life, although some people believe separated schools are better. (31 words)
Good work
Education is one of the most momentous issues for the progress of any country ,Although some people believe separated schools are better for educate ,others including me believe boys and girls can achieve more benefits with duty in mixed schools.(39).
In conclusion ,i believe separated schools could be more effective for progress , although some people would prefer enroll their children in mixed schools
مقدمه شما جمله تز ندارد. فایل های صوتی توضیح این بخش را بشنوید و نمونه را ببینید.
نتیجه گیری خوب هست.
Mixed school
#can be complementary together
#achieve experience for future life
separate schools
#religiously ,it’s more acceptable
#more focus on studying
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mixed school
#learn more about the ethical characteristic of each other
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separated school
#it’s better for their families to be peace of mind
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ایده پردازی باید به صورت کامل ارسال بشه
همچنین واژگان باید در زبان انگلیسی وجود داشته باشند!
ممنونم . ممکنه منظورتون رو واضح بگین از اینکه واژگان باید در زبان انگلیسی باشه. منظورتون کدوم واژه هست
دقت کنید متوجه میشید.
Educational environment is one of the most important things for students. Although some people believe that students benefit more in separate schools, others including me think mixed schools are more beneficial for boys and girls students. This essay will discuss these both views.(43)
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In conclusion, on one hand some people argue the separate schools are better on the other hand some people including me believe that there are more advantages in studying at mixed schools. (32)
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Choosing an appropriate education system for children is one of the most challenging decisions for parents. Although some believe children should study in single s…e…x schools, others including me prefer mixed ones. This essay will discuss both of these views.(40)
There are some people who argue that separate schools are better choices for offspring. First of all, they express their concerns about religious issues. They think girls and boys should not be in a relationship before marriage and being close of two genders has detrimental effects on children. So in order to prevent such a harmful connection they suggest studying and growing up separately. Secondly, they think in single s..e..x schools pupils are focused on their lessons and they can allocate more time to studying and eventually enter to top universities which is very important for their future successes.(99)
On the other hand there are some who believe mixed schools are more beneficial. First of all, they mention children can acquire more communication skills by playing and studying together. Also being in a group for doing some school projects from early ages help children to find out about dissimilarities and the ways which girls and boys express their feelings and announce their ideas. Secondly, they think children can get ready for real life as they age together. Being in contact with opposite s..e..x is what they will experience in future when they will start working or getting married so they can get precious knowledge in mixed schools.(108)
In conclusion, there are some who think separate schools are better, while I agree with those who prefer mixed schools.
مقدمه و نتیجه گیری شما مشکل بزرگی ندارد.
دقت کنید زمانی که از شما درخواست شده دیدگاه شخصی را مشخص کنید باید توضیح بیشتری در پاراگراف نتیجه گیری وجود داشته باشد یا یک پاراگراف جداگانه بنویسید.
Mixed school
# mutual learning of each others
# less attention to gender
Separate school
#More focus on the studing
# more convenience
Education in the school is initial step for learning. Although some peole believe separate school for girls and boys is better, others including me think mixed school is better for them. This essay will discuss both views.
In conclusion, some people believe education in separate school is better for both girls and boys, on the other hand some people including me think mixed school is better. 29words
واژه better در مقدمه و نتیجه گیری چندین بار تکرار شده. باید از معادل های بهتری استفاده کنید.
ایده پردازی خوب هست اما باید در کامنت جداگانه ارسال کنید.
Adulthood is the happiest
# more money
# More experience
Adulthood is the happiest
# free time
# irresponsible
Everybody is happy who’s can say “ I’m fortunate” because she hasn’t wasted her time although some people think that teenage years the happiest time of most people’s live other unlike first group believe that adult years have happy time discuss both these view (44 words)
Some believe the young teenage glow with happiness. Frist of all they have time who do deferent work some teenage waste them time by orgy and somebody spend time with work and study and they don’t have any hobby I believe if anybody have good planning for life in young period they can a feeling of happiness secondly they haven’t responsibility for main problem of family and the families don’t create expectation that involve young people of family in Financial issue so They don’t feel nervous. they can concern about them goal and move to achievement and enjoy life.(99 words)
In other hand many people believe adult that have happy time ,first of all in generally income has positive effect on person morale because everybody have good salary she can good plan for life, she has plan for free time and holiday. if the person has a good mood in free time and they don’t feel anxiety about financial. they can decide how to carry out their unenviable task .secondly this is to say a significant feature of adults is experiment because they’ve spent for all life time until they earn experiments. When you have high experiments and ability you can have more job opportunity therefore you earn more money and you get great comfort on the other hand more experiment help somebody to control your emotion and make a logical decision that it is happy life secret (138 words)
رایتینگ ها باید پیش از ساعت ۱۲ ظهر ارسال شوند.
پاراگراف های اصلی باید بین ۱۰۰ تا ۱۱۰ واژه باشند.
Teenage years and adulthood have own benefit in every one’s life. Although some people think adulthood is the happiest, other including me believes teenage years are the happiest time this essay will discuss the both view. (36 word)
Some people believe teenage years are the best years in one’s life. First of all, teenagers are generally full of energy and excitement; that means their body full of energy and their mind full of curiosity and want to discover any things in the world, when these both option merge together, teenager can do great work and reach success. Secondly, they don’t need accept any responsibility and just use the advantage when they need. On the other hand their parent supports them financially and emotionally, they don’t need looking for job even if they get a job its part time and it’s not very serious. (105 word)
In other people opinion adulthood is the happiest period of time in life. First of all, adult people has more independency that’s bring more free time and you can spent more time with your friend, also adult has more opportunity to learn new things from their friends and society. Secondly, they have more opportunity to find a job, which is stable and secure with high salaries that will allow them to achieve what are they want and don’t need parent support anymore even they can start a relationship and have own family also adult receive more respect between coworker and society. (101 word)
از جلسه آینده رایتینگ هایی که بعد از ساعت ۱۲ ظهر ارسال شوند فیدبک #کلی دریافت میکنند
In my opinion happiness has a special meaning for everyone.Although some people believe teenage years are unique times for everyone ,others including me believe adult life is more attractive and preferable .This essay will examine both view points.(39(
some argue that teenagers have most happiest time .First of all , they are indifferent to life problems if i want say what lies behind it i should say their parents are back of them in the whole of life’s ups and downs.Secondly they have low level of perception and will help them to don’t follow any significant issues seriously and most of their attention is to play and stuff like that however their nurture method by family is also influential .They couldn’t see the the life as adult look at because they haven’t yet entered the community practically so they haven’t enough experience .
On the other hand ,there are those who argue for adult life as significant period to being happy .First of all persons in the verge of adult life can achieve more independence than in the past because they have got experience and could decide for themselves for instance they are able to make a deal in car or house .Secondly they can find plenty of professional friends who can bring help to each other and they would make happy time together however choosing a type of friends is important to achieve big goals , some friends might lead a person to dream goals and others hurt him.
Happiness is an important factor of well-being. Although some people believe that teenage years are the happiest time, others (including me) believe that adulthood is the most happiest time in everyone’s life. This paragraph considers both sides of view. (37).
Some people consider teenage years are the happiest time. First of all, teenagers have less responsibility than adults. They are not responsible for family_relating and financial problems. They don’t have to think about life deeply, because they knows their parents support them and provide their needs.
Secondly, teenagers have more free time. Since they don’t usually experience work pressure and complexity of life, and no one is actually depending on them, they can spend most of the time enjoying their life and feel satisfied.
Some other consider adults as the happiest people. First of all, they are mentally mature and well-grown. Facing different kinds of problems, adults manage difficulties properly. They are more stable in making a decision. They control their behavior toward others.
Secondy, adults have more economic freedom in their hands. They can get much money from their job, so they can well afford to pay for themselves.
#Abandon:
Many great ancient cities turned to abandoned places now.
#Access:
You can access more facilities in big cities.
#Accommodate:
Many people plan to accommodate in big cities in order to provide better lives for their families.
#Accompany:
Will you accompany us on our next trip to India?
#Accurate:
Accurate researches are ongoing to find weather happiness in the childhood can prevent getting depressed during adulthood.
#Achieve (a goal):
You are trying to be successful in IELTS exam and to achieve this goal you must study hard.
#Acquire (skill/knowledge):
Acquiring some skills such as playing musical instruments is easier for children.
#Adapt:
Adapting to the new culture is a serious issue for migrants.
#Adequate:
The patient must have adequate amount of antibiotic to overcome this illness.
#Adjust:
Going to mixed schools help offspring adjust themselves with different activities.
#Allocate:
In order to be successful in IELTS exam, you should allocate adequate amount of time to studying English.
#Alter:
Nothing can alter the fact that parents always love their children, even if they become criminals.
#Alternative:
Home schooling is an acceptable alternative for children who cannot attend the classes at school.
#Analyze:
Researchers analyze the data accurately in order to come to a significant conclusion.
#Analysis:
Statisticians use variance analysis to find out about distribution of the sample.
Some people belive that teenage years are the happiest time durig life and they have 2 reaseons for that.first of all they don’t have serious tasks and nobody expect them to do hard works or resolve the complex problem in theire life and also they haven’t any responsibility ahead of society.they have a just one important task , it is learning the scince in school.secondly they have plenty of free time to do every interesting hobby and play game,during this times teenagers can go gym and play game with other friends and also theire parents try to make a best calm and pleasure situation
(for them.(105 words
On the other hand some people have aginst opinion and they saying the happiest time during the life is adulthood and also they have 2 significant reasons for these claim.first of all people during this time are doing all of there tasks ahead of society and they should have free time to do every thing that they haven’t opportunity for these in last for instance go travel and boating in calm and fascinating rever with there spouse or there best old friends.and secondly they usually have a sons and girls and also grandchild and it is one of the happiest happens in life because they can see the result of there attempt to make and growing the least bit of society
(means family.(125 word
رایتینگ شما مقدمه ندارد. بعد از تدریس مقدمه تا جلسه آخر باید تمامی رایتینگ ها مقدمه داشته باشند.
ضمنا میران قابل قبول واژگان در هر پاراگراف ۱۰۰ تا ۱۱۰ واژه است.
although,happiness is a collection of the lives of all individuals in a community and all of the pepole in the community can discover this inner sense. but today, most pepole think more happines are belong to teenager.others including me belive many pepole can find happiness at all ages.48 word
Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest time.first of all,they do not accept any responsibilities in thier family. actually they do not do anything at home.today, most teenagers are not able to help thier parents. actually, they are supported financially and emotionally by thier parents. although they are old enough to get a part time job so , they can enjoy thier free time. secondly, they have abundant free time because ,they recevie a variety of financial support from thier families until adulthood so, they can have a lot of free time during thier youth. with the financial support from thier families, they can plan for thier recreation.105 word
on the other hand, some pepole belive that they can be happier in adulthood.first of all, most adults have more financial independence so, they can enjoy more of thier lives and lets plan anything for the future .actually, when life is happier in an adult who has more financial independence.secondiy, the formation of a family , is full of joy and affection in adulthood.actually, this is a strange sense of joy .for example, adults, when they see thier kids growing up and are prosperous and successful that moment, they will be really happier.93word
مقدمه شما متاسفانه با شیوه تدریس شما اصلا هماهنگ نیست. بعد از ویرایش و هماهنگ سازی همینجا ارسال کنید.
استاد ببخشید فقط باید مقدمه رو تغییر بدم بقیه جمله مشگلی نداره
actually, happiness is one of the most important parts of human life.although most pepole belive that teenager years are happier than adults, .others, including me think that adult life is the happiest time. this essay will discuss both views.
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Being happy is really significance all over the life for everyone. Although some people believe teenage years are happiest, others including me think adulthood is the happiest age in life. This essay will discuss these both views. (37)
Some people daresay teenagers enjoy the life more than adults. First of all, they think teenagers have less responsibility so they don’t have to be responsive like as adult people. They are gaining experience for the life and be able to make mistakes easier. They are more comfortable to do anything in new way and that’s why they resemble weird people most of the time. Secondly, people in teenage years have more free time in order to learn something new which helps them to determine their path life and what they want to be. They can try arts, sports, sciences and many other things to find their favourite context. (109)
From the other side, there are some people who believes in happiest time in adulthood. First of all, in this period of life the people have numerous independence from many directions compare to before that. For example they have their own job and revenue and in addition to they can make decision with minus difficulties like as arguing with their parents. Secondly, adult persons have abundant experience and they have superior perception of the life so they are further appreciation and it helps them to be more satisfied in order to feel more fortunate. I think adult people look at the life as a treasure. (105)
سلام خسته نباشید استاد این فایل های صوتی از قسمت ۱۳ به بعد پخش نمیشه
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درود بله موقتا بدلیل تحریم اروپا حساب ها تک تک چک میشه امروز سر تایید ماهانه پرداخت سایت هست. دلیلش اینه.
Todays, being happy is one of most important factors in people’s lives. Although some choose teenage years as happiest times, others like me think adulthood can be more happier in everyone’s life. In this essay we will discuss both views.(40 words)
Some people think there is more happiness in teenage years. First of all, there are more times to have funs. They can hang out with their friends more and also have more exciting leisure times. They can spend a lot of times in social networks and hence more fun things provided to them through these ways. Secondly, in teenage years you have no or less responsibility, which definitely means less anxiety or stress. You are under support of your parents. And you don’t need to have jobs, make money or support anybody else. Their biggest responsibility is studying, to make their future more convenience.(104 words)
From the view of other people, adulthood is happiest times in contrast with teenage times. First of all, having family is a great choice in this ages. Adults can have a stable relationship with their partners and also they are supportive to each other. Children play an important role in family happiness despite of responsibility of neglect them. Secondly, they have more independency such as financial independence. They earn income through their occupation, they can spend money in things that they want or wish when they were younger. Also this financial independence gives them more confidence and power that are factors of happiness.(103 words)
Being happy is significant part in the people’s life. Although some people believe teenage years are happier than adults, others including me think adults are happier. This essay will dicuss both views. (32
Some people believe teenage years enjoy the happiest times. First of all, they believe due to teenage years dont have high age, most of them have less bad experiences , therefore their mental and spirit less have involved with unhappy issues then they are happier than others. Secondly, teenage years have more hope for the futures. They have positive sight to future life because they have have hope to gain proper job and gain much money. Also they have nice dreams fo themselves . This hope and dreams in the teenage years life improve their spirit and guide them for enjoy(ing) of happy times and gaining the success. 103 word
On the other hand, there is different point of view, first of all, some people belive money is one of scale for having happy. Therefore adults who usually have finincial indipendence are happier than others. They get everything to want., so they dont have concern about physiological needs that usually gain with money. Secondly adults have anility of decision for life and they can do everything to want. This sight say when a person have ability of decision for himself he is happier than a person who others decision for him. The according this sight adults cause having finicial independence and decision ability are happier than others.107 word
Aging is a natural part of life and it causes many changes in our life. Although some people believe the teenage years are the best time in the life. Others think that adult life is the happiest time. This essay will discuss both views. (43 words)
Some people discuss teenagers enjoy the happiest time in their life. First of all, teenagers don’t have any heavy responsibilities in family. They live with parents and have financial and emotional support of them. They don’t go to full time job, don’t get married and don’t have any children to have responsibilities for taking care of them. Secondly, they have a lot of free time to do their hobbies. They can just focus on school and whatever they want. Without any concern they can spend their time on activities are interested in and dreaming about future and making lots of pleaser time. (102 words)
However, some others discuss adulthood is the best time in every one’s life. Frist of all, in adulthood are more opportunities available. Opportunities to start an independent life or having a family. In early adulthood, you finish college and university and face many job opportunities that make you money. Secondly, adult are more independent. At this moment, they are graduate and according to their abilities and skills, have chance to get a full time job with high income. Adult could make decision about their working and life career by themselves and live separately from their parents. (96 words)
Happiness is an inner sense which influences the quality of life. Although some people think teenagers experience the happiest period of their lives, others including me believe people can find real happiness during their adulthood. This essay will discuss both of these views.(43)
Some argue that childhood is the happiest time of the life. First of all, they mention less responsibility of the children. Actually the more you are responsible the more your mind gets busy. So from this point of view a child whose mind is free from being worried about future can live at the moment and enjoy the lovely details of the life such as colors of butterflies or the nice smell of their favorite food. Secondly, they have full support of their family. All parents plan to make their children happy by providing the them a calm and happy environment at home or sending them to the best school they can afford.(113)
On the other hand there are some who believe during adulthood they can experience more happiness. First of all, the financial independence of adults allows them to make decisions and plan to do things which they like and make them happy. There is no force to follow your parents’ rules when you are an adult. Secondly, adults can face and overcome every hardship of the life having their life partner aside with the power of love. And if it really comes true to someone to find love in her/his life it can be the greatest happiness which a human being can experience.(102)
۱- Foreign :I study two foreign language at school
۲- Every student must write gist of a famous story
۳- Teacher tell student unit 6 , 7 set text in this term
۴- CR7 recognized by FIFA
۵- Every body wants to success must to be get recognition of your ability
۶- I’m not sure , I guess I’ll pass my mathematics exam
۷- The context of book is very difficult
۸- When I study for exams I try keep record of lectures
۹- I always make note of context of class
۱۰- The construction of essay has minor mistake
۱۱- Children learn in primary school how to they construct sentence
۱۲- Translation of historical book is very difficult
۱۳- If you want apply for foreign university you must all certificate translate to English language
۱۴- We have conversation with political context every Wednesday in university
۱۵- If you learn to English speaking you must repeat task every day
۱۶- My teacher explain how to ready for math exam
۱۷- Repetition is simple method of learning
۱۸- You must pronounce correct word
۱۹- The French word has difficult pronunciation
۲۰- Many people immigrate to USA because that has many opportunity
۲۱- He has experiment with alcohol
۲۲- I’m angry because I make silly mistake
۲۳- I revise essay and resend for you
۲۴- When I was started university I was enthusiastic
۲۵- I have high motivated that apply for university
۲۶- I want improve my carrier
۲۷- I’d like express my feeling about war Iran against Iraq
۲۸- I explain obvious problem
۲۹- My father is main my encouraging
۳۰- He answers to all question accurately
۳۱- Your father is aware of your problems
۳۲- I’m frustrating because I cant win a race
۳۳- All member of team has a same goal
۳۴- They want expand their business
۳۵- The main aim of government is expand small city
۳۶- They speak fluency English
۳۷- My friend solve complex problem of her life
There are more facility in a big city .first of all there is large population in big city so time is very important factor in a big city , the government must provided public transport system that this system have to large and modern till save money and time of people and also prevent from air pollution secondly there is more investment in a large city because there are very consumer and people needs to much private company for provide urgent requirements .
There are also more job in big city, first of more company and factory are in big city that they need to people with deferent specialized therefor people by every education level can find job carrier secondly in addition to more company and factory in big city crowded and long distance cause of create many service company that it prevent from waste money waste time also create many job vacancy for all people .
پاراگراف های شما باید بین ۱۰۰ تا ۱۱۰ واژه باشند. در رایتینگ بعدی دقت کنید.
ضمنا بخش های دیگه پاراگراف هم با چک لیست هماهنگ نیست.
لطفا نمونه های بعدی رو با توجه به چک لیست و نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس بنویسید.
Gist: I’m not worried about all the details as long as I get the gist
Go through sth: I’m going through a relationship
Construction: the construction of new under ground way is really slowly
Make a note of: the police is making a note of last night events
Revise sth: he should revise his words
Experiment with sth: don’t be afraid to experiment with new language
Enthusiastic: I was enthusiastic about my holiday
Motivated: the students are all highly motivated
After a while: I’ve started doing sth about it after a while
Accurately: it’s impossible to predict the weather accurately
Frustrating: that was a frustrating trip
Progress: the slow progress of project makes me anxious
In detail: the issue will be discussed in more details next session
Appropriate: I need to get better at using appropriate language when I speak
Be quids in: if this deal comes off, will be quids in
Rack: all the drinks on this rack are sugar free
Despise: I despise my boss
Resemble: he resembles his mother in playing chess
Last: do you know how long a basketball game usually lasts?
Approximately: the company had total revenues of approximately 2 million dollars
Roughly: there were roughly twenty dogs with different breeds
There are more facilities in a big city. First of all, many people live in a big city. As increase population there are more mount of needs and supply and provide of facilities more happen. Also population and needs couse quality of facilities get improve. secondly population and need in a big city couse are determined more bodget. Follow that, it develops mount supply and provide facilities. many people try to increase their wealth and increase mount of investment. Turn and circulation in money systems due to exist many facilities upper level. Follow that different systeme like transportation, education that they are major needs should be better and level of life people get improve.(110
There are also more jobs in a big city.first of all, there are many company and factories in a big city. Therefore many pepole can select their favorite job and regarding their education and skill get more proper job. Secondly different type of job are available and if person is not succed in a job position he has this opportunity that experience other job position and the end person can be successin his job life.(76(
پاراگراف های اصلی شما باید بین ۱۰۰ تا ۱۱۰ واژه باشند.
There are more facilities in a big city .First of all there is more population vs small town, and people who live in big city need more services for their routine life, like public transportation health services and the government has to provide them for people. Secondly, in a big city there is more investment, because there are more customers, so investor comes to big city. This means more entertainment center for children for example amusement park, cinema and things like that. For adult shopping mall and everyone has own benefit in large city (94 words)
There are more jobs in big city. First of all, there are more companies and factories compare small town so the variety of jobs are available and the companies and factories try to be best. People immigrate to large city for finding a job secondly for those people who looking for job in big city there are different type of jobs with any specialize and degree as a result more companies more jobs and more investment. (76 words)
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برای آزمون اصلی و برای دریافت فیدبک پاراگراف های اصلی شما باید حتما بین ۱۰۰ تا ۱۱۰ واژه باشند.
There are more facilities and services in a big city. First of all, there is more population in a big city and they need many services and facilities for their lives. They need number of cinemas and parks to spend their free times with their family and they have to use public transport to go to work so government have to provide such facilities for large cities. Secondly, there is more investment in a large city.There are many shopping centers or hospitals in a big city and they will benefit from their investment because they have many clients.(99 words)
There are more jobs in a big city. First of all, there are more companies and factories in a big city. Also, several factories start to work every day in a big city. They need many workers so a lot of people can find job and gradually they earn a good money and increase them. Secondly, job seekers find various types of work in a large city because there is a competition among factories in a big city and try to be best so they should employ skilled workers and they have to improve level their workers to have the best results.(101 words)
There are more facilities in a big city. First of all, a significant expand in human population causes a noticeable increase in demands, people need many different services. For Example they need more hospitals with better health services or transportation systems with higher quality. So government takes hard effort to provide such facilities for big cities
Secondary there is more investment in a large city. When more population needs more housing or new shopping malls, there are more opportunities for investors to make money and benefit from these projects, so they are attracted to big cities. (96 words)
There are also more jobs in a big city. First of all, noticeable development of industry leads to a large number of companies and factories which have suitable vacancies in big cities. So there is larger labour market for people
Secondary based on various needs of people in big cities, different types of jobs with low or high salary are available. Everyday a wide variety of companies place advertisements to employ various type of work. So there is multitude of opportunities for people with different level of education, skill or even physical ability to find a suitable job. (96 words
There are more job opportunities in a big city. first of all, there is a large population in a big city .so most pepole need to have more income for life easier.today, governments have to establish large factories or companies for low income and unemployed pepole and provide the best service for them
secondly, there is the largest economic enterprises in large cities which reduce uneployment and provide more job opportunities for other pepole . for examplem,
establishing an economic enterprise leads to a commercial or industrial activity and )(95 words)starting to supply goods and services in the market and recive diffrant
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There are also more treatments facilities in a big city. first of all, there are more pollotion around the large and industrial cities. so hospital are forced to give best health care to patient. actually, most pepole need health care and medical services every day. they should recive the best medical services from the hospital and clinics.so there is the highes quality and health care services in a big cities and industrial.
Secondly,there are better scientific and medical centers in a big city. they provide the best scientific and educational services and helping science and research centers for patient health in a big cities.(104words
رایتینگ شما به هم ریخته هست. لطفا مثل رایتینگ های دوستان مرتبط کنید و ارسال بفرمایید.
تعداد واژگان باید در آخر پاراگراف نوشته شود.
در هر پاراگراف نباید سر خط بروید.
There are more facilities in a big city. First of all, there is more population in a large city compare to a small town and they need more services so that to be able to handle their life. Because the life is faster in a big city and people have to face many challenges. For example they need kindergarten or school near their house or their
work place for their children. So the government has to smooth the way for them. Secondly, there is more investment in a big city because there are more demands and that is why that the investors focuse on big cities and it always works and of (121course they benefit from their project in big cities. )
There are also more jobs in a big city. First of all, there are more companies and factories in a large city and because of that peaple have more options to find a job and the competition is between the componies to employ good employees instead of between the job hunters.Secondly, different types of jobs are available and if the people do not like their jobs they can easier decide to change it because there are more opportunities for them and they also have more chance to find their favorite jobs. (91)
There are more facilities in a big city. First of all,there is more population who live there that need more services in their life.For example,they need modern shopping malls to spend their free time after work.Also they need big hospitals to give them specializad health srvices.so government have to provide more facilities for big cities. Secondly,there is more investment in big cities cause there are many various projects for investors to wok on them.Also,there are more skilled experts in a big city that investors can use their experience and expertise to increase their benefit and have the best results.(107 words)
There are also more jobs in a big city compared to a small town. First of all ,there are more companies and factories in big cities that they need many employee.Moreover,several companies and factories start their activities perennial.It means lots of job opportunity will creat for people who live in and around city. Secondly,different types of jobs are available in a big city because the companies and factories need many types of staff with university degree or without it.So,many people with different types of experts and degree can find a job opportunity.it depends on their ability.(104 words)
I prefer to live in a big city, because there are more facilities than a small one. First of all, more population live in a big city and they need better level of transportation, education and health services, so big cities have to provide these facilities for their population’ welfare. Secondly, there is more investment because these cities need a high quality and large infrastructure for their population. Investors are eager to investing in these types of large projects because they gain a great benefit in investing. Thus a large amount of investment are flowing to these cities. ( 98 words)
Big cities also provide more jobs position for their people. First of all, more companies and factories are in a big city. Every day industries are developing then different types of factories are opening and more number of companies are set up that they need to employ new people, therefore more job opportunities are available. Secondly, there are different types of jobs are available. In large cities, there are large companies in which every works are highly especialized then need people with different types of skills and experts. People can apply for different types of jobs based on their abilities. (100 words)
one of the main reasons which attract people to choose big cities for living is availability of more facilities. First of all, in a big city there is more population which means more need and often amenities develop as much as population do. For example when there is a great demand for transporting, sooner or later there will be different kinds of fast and updated means of transportation to help citizens overcome their needs. Secondly, investors are more eager to invest in large cities because of more customers for their products and services so that they can get back more financial benefit.(103)
Another point is that there exist more jobs in a big city. First of all, there are many companies and industries which need to hire many employees and also new businesses increasingly pop-up every day so there are always many vacancies widely available for citizens of large cities. Secondly, different types of jobs with various work hours and salaries are available and everybody can eventually find a suitable work which matches his/her situation and abilities. People with different fields of education or skills can find their favorite job or even with being creative start their own occupation and improve it fast.(101)
سلام استاد پیرو ایمیل قبلی در voice ،استفاده از منابع قسمت کتاب select reading گرفتید، ” تصویر نوار کناری belts2.com یک عکس هستش که نوشته تقویت لغات آیاتی پیش آیلتس که به زمینه زرد رنگ هستش که عکس انسانهای نخستین نشان میده برای دیدن chapter bhaiها و انجام تکالیف، من اون لینک رو نمی تونم پیداش کنم
درود. متوجه شدم.
به اون صفحه در صفحه کلاس خودنون یعنی همین صفحه تمامی جمله سازی ها رو وارد کنید.
سلام استاد خسته نباشید ، من نمیتونم آدرسی که توی voice اول گفتید که برای انجام تکالیف هست رو پیدا کنم میشه راهنمایی کنید راستی از کلاس ۳ بهمن هستم با تشکر از شما
درود. لطفا در تلگرا پیام بدید کامل توضیح بدید متوجه نشدم کدوم لینک رو فرمودید
سلام من توی کلاس ۳ بهمن ثبت نام کردم میخواستم بدونم میتونیم یک روز قبل از کلاس Skype ر تست کنیم
درود به شما
بله در تلگرام کلاستون دقیقا توضیح داده میشه نگران نباشید.
سلام و خسته نباشید. من کانادا هستم می خواستم بپرسم که هزینه کلاسهاتون چقدر هست و این که حتما باید آنلاین شرکت کتیم چون اختلاف ساعت زیاد هست . امکانش هست که کلاس سیو بشه ؟
سوال آخر من آیلس ۶ دارم آیا امکان داره یا گدراندن این دوره ها و مطالعه روزی میانگین ۸ ساعت به آیلس ۷٫۵یرسم ؟ من منتظر جوابتون هستم چون میخوام دوره بهمن ماه رو شرکت کتم
سپاس
درود.
کلاس ها ضبط میشه ولی کلا از کانادا قبلا زیاد بودند بچه هایی که این کلاس ها رو شرکت کردند و در همین دوره های دی و آذر هم از کانادا یا آفریقای جنوبی زبان آموز داریم.
در تمامی مهارت ها بجز رایتینگ تا امروز نمره ۸ رو داشتیم و در رایتینگ بالاترین نمره ۷ بوده.
بدون شک با تلاش زیاد میتونید در این دوره به نمره بالای ۷ برسید البته کار ساده ای به هیچ عنوان نیست و عملا باید زندگی شما چندین ماه فقط به آیلتس اختصاص داشته باشه.
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