کلاس آنلاین آیلتس آذر ۱۳۹۷

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   beheshteh

Advantages of young adults
Number1
More workforce
# the number of employed people is higher than those who retired
#young adults are not very demanding and they do every job

Less budget for health problem
# less disease
#physical activities and exercising among young people is greater

Number2
Economic development
# being adapt with technology
# Young people are more energetic and creative in their work
Young are better leader
#they are free from traditional belief
#they are more flexible than old leader

Advantages of old people
Number1
Old people make the community more relaxed
#they know ways of problem solving better
#they know how to reduce stress
Old people are better leader
#more experience
#they are mature enough to give young people space to grow

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   mehdi pirani

Positive reasons :
More delicious and spicy.
Convenient.
Negative reasons:
Health problem
Harmful ingredients .
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Positive reasons:
Save time
Job opportunity
Negative reasons:
Low nutritional value
Oblivion of traditional cusine

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   سیمین صولتی

(۱) POSITIVE
# saving time
# Easy access

NEGATIVE
# most of them are unhealthy and with low quality
# cause of obesity
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(۲) POSITIVE
# create a job opportunity
# varied, healthy and organic food

NEGATIVE
# reduce the average time to gather the family members
# addiction to consumption
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(۳) POSITIVE
# saving money
# It collects together friends or family

NEGATIVE
# dangers for people with high blood pressure and cardiovascular disease
# damage the genital system and harm the reproduction system

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   Asiyeh.S

(۱)
POSITIVE
# Convenient food (free from routine home cooking)
# can find everywhere easily

NEGATIVE
# lead to obesity
# Artificial ingredients and flavour = high risk of diseases (high blood pressure)
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(۲)
POSITIVE
# save time for those time-minded people (fast+ everywhere)
# very delicious (richness of flavour )

NEGATIVE
# forget the traditional and ethnic foods (loss of culture)
# bad diet habit (gaining weight)

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   mehdi pirani

The graph gives an information about the regularity of weekly hours among the school children who spend their time on two different types of leisure activities during the years of 2000 to 2008 .
In 2000 the hours devoted to computer by school children in ages from 10 to 11 is less than 4 hours per week then it rose significantly during the next four years to 15 hours in 2004. This time continued to rise and reaches the higest point of about 22 hours per week.
The time spent on watching tv was 21 hours per week ,it remaied constantly during the next three years ,then it drope dramatically from 21 to 15 hours per week in 2004.this time experienced the stable trend over the next 4 years except a fluctuation between 2005 to 2006.
Overall,at the first there was a hight difference between the popularity of two different leisure activities but it show the gradually substitute in time spent on them .

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   beheshteh

Dear Mr. Anderson
I am writing this letter to let you remember your last journey. Throughout that journey our seats were next to each other and you happened to talked about a vacancy in one chain of your restaurants. (36)
The plan journey that we met each other was on 21 of October about 15 days ago. I was on a mission and you were coming back from a trip to Duesseldorf. (32)
As I told you previously, I am enthusiastic about working with you. I have 15 years experience in field of management in a well-known food company. Moreover I have university degree in public relation. I would like to work as an internal director but if that position is occupied I am willing to work in your proposed position. (58)
I have an easy-going attitude. Actually I can be tolerated in difficult and stressful situation. These characters will help me to have proper relationship with other people. This is a positive point in your business because it is important to communicate with customers in a way that suits them. I assure you that your customers and your staffs will be happy with my management. (64)
Best regards

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   سیمین صولتی

The line graph illustrates two different leisure activities of average weekly hours spent home by schoolchildren between 2000 and 2008, a period of nine years.
Schoolchildren age between 10 to 11 years old spent about 21 hours per week on TV in 2000. After three years stability in 2003, it abruptly fell to 15 hours per week in 2004. In period of last four years it reached to a plateau except between 2005 and 2006 it has a fluctuation.
Schoolchildren spent time with computer about 4 hours a week in 2000. This graph illustrated an upward trend, but to reach a peak, it didn’t have fixe speed of surge. Over the period of four years the graph surged significantly to 15 hours in 2004 and it increased slightly in the last four years to less than 22 hours per week in 2008.
Overall, it seems spent time on TV decline and time of spent on computer dramatically increased. Therefore, spent time on computer is more popular at the end.
All words 170

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   Behrouz N

The graph demonstrate different popularity of TV and computer amount schoolchildren between 2000 to present.
Time school children spend on computer rose steadly between 2000 until now. The hours per week was increased slightly from a little under four in 2000 to a little over 4 in 2001. After that there were increased dramatically in 2002 about eight hour per week to a little over 20 hours per week in 2007, and this rang increased about twenty-two in present.
Watching TV fell during seven years. There was a little over 20 hour per week in 2000 that this range stabilised for three years, but it fell in 2003 to about 14 in 2004. After that it was stabilised until 2005 .there was a variation slightly between 2005 to 2006, after that it to stabilised unitil 2007 and now.
Overall, students’ home activity changed during years, in finally it increased popularity of Computer, and fell popularity of watched TV

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   Asiyeh.S

Given is a graph comparing the average hours (per week) spent on two main activities by students aged 10and 11 from 2000 to present.
With regard to popularity of leisure activities, it is evident that in 2000 watching TV by schoolchildren took approximately 21 hours of their time each week, and this figure remained steady over the next 3 years, however, one year later this number declined considerably to some 15hours, then this figure despite of a slight fluctuation, remained relatively stable at 15hours for the next following years.
Looking at the line graph, spending time on computer by pupils was nearly 3 hours per week in 2000. This figure, surprisingly, saw an upward trend over the next period of the time shown and crossed the figure of the TV in 2004, so this number stayed on 22 hours per week until present.
Overall, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure provided, is that although watching TV was by far the most popular activity among pupils at the first, the hours spent on computer overtook the figure of watching TV over the period shown. (185 word)

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   آرش محمدپور

سلام و درود.در ارتباط با تکلیف تسک ۱ آکادمیک این هفته به کرات ناچار به استفاده از عبارت زیر هستیم. آیا تکرار آن نمره منفی خواهد داشت؟
hours per week

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   beheshteh

Selecting the optimum school subjects in every educational system will prepare powerful students for the future. Although some people believe that history is the most important subject, others including me supposed that science and technology are more important than history. This essay will examine both of views. (47)
Some people believe that history is the most important item. First of all, students can get familiar with their ancestor and use their knowledge. It is obvious that in every society there is worthy traditional knowledge which has been gained during the previous generation’s life. And it has been recorded in historical books. Secondly, studying historical books will help us to avoid of repeating past mistakes. It is an undeniable fact that repeating same mistakes will waste our energy and our time. In addition, Studding history allows people to make more sense of current world because “history repeats itself”. (99)
Others people believe that science and technology are more important. First of all, science and technology make human’s life easier. Recent development of technology has been dramatically changed our life. For example, the distance is not as important as before. We can be in touch with our friends and relatives which are far from us, just by using a smart phone. Secondly, science and technology will protect human health more effectively. Technology Developed health care system and improved the quality of people life. Doctors perform most of major surgeries by advanced computers which have been designed for that operation. (99)
In conclusion, this is a controversial issue; some people believe that we have to major on history while another group of people believe that the science and technology are more vital than history. I personally agree with the second standpoint. (40)

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   Farideh Badichi

In today’s world, there is a controversial debate over the importance of subjects in the school curriculum. Although some argue that History should be prioritized compared to Science and Technology, others including me believe that Science and Technology are the most important subjects to be considered. This essay will examine both views. (52)
Studying History brings people some benefits. First of all, they can gain knowledge about where they come from. Indeed, History helps people especially youngers to understand more their own culture and how they have evolved. Study of History reminds people what their ancestors suffered and experienced to make their country what it is today. Secondly, students can be made aware of events which have occurred in the past. History is full of success and failures which most of them were outcomes of our ancestor’s decisions. Therefore, people via studying History not only prevent repeating mistakes that their ancestors had but also learn to make wise decisions in similar situations. (109)
On the flip side, some people believe that Science and Technology make future and bring undeniable benefits. First of all, with knowledge of Science and Technology, students learn to think logically and solve problems in modern society. In fact, these are lifelong skills and needed to succeed student in school and beyond. Secondly, Science and Technology provide favorable conditions for the development and growth of a country. In today’s world, the difference between developed and undeveloped countries is directly relevant to the level of development of Since and Technology. Therefore, most of the governments allocate an exclusive budget for these subjects. (101)
In conclusion, some think History is of paramount importance. However, others including me believe Since and Technology play a key role in today’s world. (24)
Total: 286

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   fatemeh pakdaman

The bar chart illustrates the total figure for minutes of telephone calls in the American, sorted into local-fixed line, national and international-fixed line and mobiles over a period of 7 years.
between 1995 to 1998, the figure for spoken who used of local-fixed line increased moderately from 70 billions to just under 90 billions. In the subsequent year, the number of minutes of telephone calls stood to nearly 90. Over the next 3 years, it saw a decline of over 70.
In 1995, the figure for spoken who used of national and international-fixed line was just under 40, whereas that of mobiles was nearly 5. The figure for the year 2002 rose to just over 60 and 40 respectively.
Also, the highest number of minutes that user made call, was belong to local-fixed line.
Overall, both national and international-fixed line and mobiles rose gradually, but the figure for user cell phone from local-fixed line increased first and then dropped between 1999 and 2002.
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   Asiyeh.S

Awareness of historical matters would help to broaden our horizons of today’s life.Although some people are of the view that one of the chief of school subjects is history,others including me think that science and technology are more important.This essay intends to examine both views.
Some people state that Knowledge of history is one of the remarkable school’s topics.First of all,knowing the ancestor and their knowledge provides us the ability of solving some insurmountable problems. Due to a salient instance,traditional medicine from previous generations helps us to cure some disease without any chemical medicines discovered or any ways of treatments.Secondly,undoubtedly,learning through the mistakes of previous generation helps us not repeat them again.For example,because of the racism in previous centuries,a major of Negros died under pressure of slavery.Fortunately,nowadays,most of people are in contrast to racism matters and believe the racial equality.
On the contrary, some others have the opinion that focus on teaching the science and technology is much more important than history.First of all,improving discoveries and inventions provides a numerous advantages to human’s life. For instance, inventing the engine, revolutionized the transportation,so people commute everyday remarkably faster than previous centuries. Secondly, science researchers are developing a host of ways to protect people and environment from loss.To precise,discovering a myriad novel treatments and specialized equipment in order to cure unknown diseases are considerable.Also evident is the fact that finding some excellent ways to conserve environment such as soil erosion or save endangered species not to become extinct are the consequences of Science research and technology.
In my view,science and technology perform a vital role in human’s life;however,we use the ancestor’s knowledge to achieve today’s innovations.
In conclusion,whereas some individuals think history is important subject, others including me believe that technology and science plays a significant role in people everyday lives.

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   سیمین صولتی

In today’s life, there are many important school subjects that built future of the country. Although some people imagine that history is one of the most important school subjects, others belief today subject like science and technology, are more important. This essay will examine both views.(45)
Some people imagine that history is one of the most important school subjects. First of all, it helps know the ancestors and use their knowledge. In the history there are many ancestors that they have strong and deep knowledge, it can be useful for the future life or maybe for the politics. Secondly, with study the history, reader can know the experiences of ancestors and prevent to repeat past mistakes. If someone knows the previous mistakes, it named a free experience for them and it can be useful for the society.

Another people believe today, subject like science and technology, are more important. First of all, with improving the science it can better control diseases and national disadvantages. Science improve, make the healthy society and it help to cure some disease that in the previous this cure disease was imagine. Secondly, with technology the life of human become simple. It can help people do their works faster and simpler. It can be used for medical science, agriculture, business, factories and etc. in addition in all parts of our society.
My opinion is that both of history and science and technology are important to study in schools. Because both of them are important as I said.
By way of conclusion, Some people imagine that history is one of the most important school subjects. But another people believe that in today’s world, subject like science and technology, are more important than history as noted. But I belief all of them are necessary and important.
All words:298

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   سیمین صولتی

The chart illustrate the time spend by UK people on three different types of telephone calls over eight years from 1995 and 2002.
First gram is local calls were have the highest throughout .It display local calls were around 70 billion minutes in 1995. It started to rise gradually from the next four years, it were around 90 billion minutes calls in 1999. These calls had fallen back like to the 1995 gram by 2002.
At the beginning, the minutes of spoken the national and international fixed line was less than 40 billion minutes. These increased all over the period of 8 years, but it growth slower over the last two years to 60 billion in 2002.
There was a considerable increase in mobile calls in 1995 from eight years till 2002. At the first in 1995 it was about two billon minutes, it growth slowed over the first four years and this rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002 over 45 billion minutes mobile calls.
Overall, at the first the gap between the three categories was really considerable but over the last four years the gap become decreased and in 2002 deferent between these categories had narrowed considerably.(200 words)

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   nazila kh

The chart shows information about how much people in uk used telephones in tree categories like National and international fixed line and mobiles between 1995 until 2002.
Local calls in 1995 are more than 70 billion minutes and the number increased about 90 billion minutes at 1999. National and international fixed line in 1995 is more than 30 billion minutes and the number increased about 60 billion minutes at 2002 and the mobile calls in 1995 were only a few billion minutes and this number are increased in 2002 about more than 40 billion minutes. This number only increased for the next 7 years. The number of local fixed line in 1999 is 90 billion minutes and more increased at this year and also the number of mobile calls are more increased at 2002 compare with another years.
Overall, there are more different number in the chart among all the beginning years and the final year is very similar level of these days.(163)

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   آرش محمدپور

Main idea1: History is more important
# To know about our ancestors and their experiences
# to avoid mistakes made by our ancestors.
Main idea 2: Science and technology is more important
# technology and science make our life easier
# they can save people life