نمونه های رایتینگ آیلتس نمره 7

نمونه های رایتینگ آیلتس نمره 7

نمونه های رایتینگ آیلتس نمره 7

نمونه های رایتینگ آیلتس نمره 7

در این صفحه یک سمپل رایتینگ استاندارد آیلتس از کتاب کمبریج 9 تست سوم به همراه 2 نمونه پاسخ در دسترس زبان آموزان گرامی قرار داده میشود. یک نمونه توسط مهندس ابوالقاسمی مدرس آیلتس در سطح نمره 7 نوشته شده و نمونه دیگر تنظیم شده توسط اگزمینر هست و در سطح نمره 9 یا نمره کامل براورد میشود. امیدواریم این نمونه ها راهنمای عزیزان برای به دست آوردن نمره ای بالاتر در آزمون اصلی باشد.

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نمونه پاسخ برای نمره 7 تا 7.5 در پاسخ به سوال بالا

In many parts of the world, the overweight and unhealthy population has reached an alarming proportion. While I believe providing new facilities for the public to have more physical exercise can be the first step, it cannot be enough and other approaches are needed. (44 words)

There are different reasons why increasing the number of sport centers can directly improve people’s health. First of all, many residents especially in large cities, where obesity is believed to be a widespread issue, have very limited spare time, and when commuting to a gym or sport center takes more than a couple of minutes, it is unlikely for most of them to even ever enroll. Moreover, an increase in the number of sport venues and centers will encourage competition among different neighborhoods. This is particularly true in our time and with the power of social media which in turn can develop interest in young people and attract more members from different socioeconomic backgrounds. (114 words)

There are, however, reasons to believe that having an unhealthy population is a complicated issue and cannot be dealt with increasing the number of sport centers alone. First of all, proper education about health and the need for doing sports seems to be more effective for forming a new habit. While doing sport is rewarding and fun, it is still a hard decision since it requires motivation and effort. If people feel that it is crucial to stay in shape, they find a place and a way to do exercise even in a form of a long everyday walk. Moreover, these are forms of physical exercise that can be done at home, such as running on a treadmill without the need to use a public sport facility. (127 words)

I personally believe that having more sports facility around us can be encouraging to enroll and enjoy our favorite sport while benefiting from its long-term health effects. But for many people the issue is not simply the lack of facilities since they can also have some equipment at their residential buildings and education in fact changes the decisions a population make for its health. (62 words)

Total = 347 words 

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نمونه پاسخ در سطح نمره 9 تنظیم شده توسط اگزمینر

برای اندازه بزرگتر روی تصویر کلیک کنید

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نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط زبان آموزان دوره فروردین 1399 (سطح نمره 7 تا 7.5)

In today’s modern societies, the level of health is alarmingly declining on a global scale. Some believe that an effective solution to this problem is to provide people with more sports facilities. However, in my opinion, improving public health requires more than that. 43

There are various reasons why providing more sports centers leads to the improvement of people’s general health. First of all, it means they’re easily accessible to everyone, which could encourage some to exercise regularly even in workdays. Since hectic work schedules and stressful lifestyles are inevitable these days, easy-to-reach local facilities can save residents’ time and motivate them to engage in more physical activities. Secondly, the diversity of sports which could be offered would attract different interests because not everyone shares the same taste in sports also their fitness levels are different therefore the variety helps them to choose the program that suits them. 105

However, approaching such a problem is not that simple, and there are other ways to tackle it. First, by imposing a ban on advertising unhealthy food which persuades people to consume more high-calorie food products, the overwhelming desire for them would not be awakened. Although most people do not need those extra calories, watching colorful commercials convinces them to eat more fat-laden meals, which causes obesity and endangers their health. Second, improving access to healthy food would encourage more people to change their eating habits. If nourishing food becomes available for more groups, especially students, they would naturally adapt a healthier lifestyle, as nutritious meals on restaurant menus and healthy street food are more pleasurable than long-cooked vegetables at home. 123
To conclude, I am convinced that focusing on sports facilities is not necessarily an effective method and people should be influenced to make healthier choices and change the way they eat. 31

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Being overweight or obesity is one of the prevalent problems in the world. While some people believe we should provide more sports facilities to tackle this problem, I think there are various ways to do. (35) There are two reasons why being equipped with more sports facilities would have a remarkable effect to improve public health. First of all, when there are many sports tools in parks, people will be motivated to use them and do sports. For instance, when they go to a park to have a walk or when they are talking to their friends at the park,… ادامه مطلب »