نحوه نوشتن رایتینگ آیلتس جنرال Curfew Imposed Teenagers

Good idea
#more secure
#more time with family

Not a good idea
# Opens the way for more limitation
# cannot learn to be independent

نمونه مقدمه دو جمله ای

It seems some members of the society require more care and attention than others. While I believe certain restrictions for teenagers after a certain hour can be beneficial, how this negatively affects them and the society should not be overlooked. (40 words)

نمونه مقدمه دو جمله ای

There are places in the US where teens are required by law to stay indoor after hours unless the presence of an adult is ensured. However, I don’t believe this is such a rational approach. (35 words)

نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 6.5 تا 7

Teenagers usually face limitations of different sorts from their family. While I believe there are advantages in imposing curfew on teens, such decision may create some drawbacks too. (28 words)

There are advantages when teenagers have to be home before a certain time in late evening. First of all, they will be more secure. Evidently, when teenagers spend time at home, they are away from many problems such as drug abuse and unwanted pregnancy. These problems occur when they come across friends who take chances and try to show they are wild and different. Secondly, when they do not spend their evening outside, they can have more quality time with their family. Teenagers almost never choose to be at home for long hours but a curfew can help them spend time with family. This can be a final valuable experience to recall later as they are at the age of soon becoming adults and independent forever. (126 words)

There are, however, certain disadvantages in having curfews. First of all, it opens the way for more limitation. Not all teenagers are unable to keep themselves safe if they stay outside at night and the curfew may be an unnecessary limitation for them. It can give the family more power than they should really have and keep teens from valuable experience such as a part time job or meeting exciting people in another city. Secondly, this limitation simply stops them learning how to be independent. In cases when there is too much protection and limitation from the family, children may become reluctant to ever take any risk or even leaving the home even when they are grown-up and mature. (119 words)

In conclusion, I tend to agree that setting a curfew for teens may have some advantages, but it is evident that it certainly does create some problems for them in the years to come. (34 words)

Total = 307 words