در اینجا یک نمونه رایتینگ تسک اول آیلتس آکادمیک به همراه نمونه پاسخ در سطح نمره 9 در دسترس علاقمندان گرامی قرار میگیرد. این سمپل از کمبریج آیلتس 14 می باشد.
نمونه پاسخ در سطح نمره 9
نمونه نوشته شده توسط مهدی الف – زبان آموز دوره دی ماه 1401
Writing task 1 (Grange park)
These two maps illustrate changes which have happened in the current layout of the park in comparison with opening time in 1920.
The park has two entrances from Arnold Avenue in the north and Eldon street in the south. In western side, there was a stage for musicians in the center and two rose gardens with seats on both two sides of them. Now, they have been replaced with an Amphitheater for concerts and just north side rose garden remains.
The middle side consisted of just a fountain which is replaced with a rectangular rose garden with seats on all four sides.
In the eastern side, there was a rose garden, just left of the northern entrance, and a pond for water plants beside it. The rose garden has turned into a café is and the pond is converted to a children’s play area. In addition, in the south east of the park, a glasshouse had been located with seats near there which are replaced with a water feature. Entrance underground car park is prepared right there.
Overall, rose gardens and seats are concentrated in the central part and some old equipment is replaced with modern features.
سمپل نمره 9 نقشه رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک