سمپل رایتینگ Some People Accept Bad Situation Others Try to Improve

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سمپل رایتینگ Some People Accept Bad Situation Others Try to Improve
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سمپل رایتینگ Some People Accept Bad Situation Others Try to Improve

سمپل رایتینگ Some People Accept Bad Situation Others Try to Improve

سمپل رایتینگ Some People Accept Bad Situation Others Try to Improve

در این صفحه یک نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک بدون خطاهای دستوری به همراه واژگان مناسب و پیوستگی و انسجام متن در سطح نمره 7 تا 7.5 در دسترس علاقمندان گرامی می باشد. این سوال از کتاب کمبریج آیلتس 14 آکادمیک تست 1 بوده و پاسخ آن توسط مهندس ابوالقاسمی با نمره 8 آیلتس و بیش از 10 هزار ساعت تجربه تدریس تنظیم شده است.

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نمونه رایتینگ Some People Accept Bad Situation Others Try to Improve

نسخه بلند(340 کلمه ای)

Facing challenges is an inseparable part of life and everyone has to face it from time to time. Although some believe it is best to accept such hardships, others including me think we need to fight them in order to improve the situation. This essay will discuss both views. (49 words)

There are those who argue that the best approach is to accept unfavorable conditions in life. First of all, people will suffer less if they do not fight their problems very hard. Regardless of the real consequences of the challenges that someone faces in life such as the debts following redundancy or homelessness at the time of natural disasters, the psychological effects might be the cause of irreversible decisions such as suicide or self-injury. Secondly, a personal problem such as joblessness is mostly a part of a bigger picture and in many cases it is only a matter of time before a political party step in and take measures to deal with it. Therefore, a seemingly personal problem may be solved by the passage of time. (126 words)

On the contrary, however, there are those who suggest it would be better if we took a more active role in life and try hard to change the situation for the better. First of all, in the hectic and fast-paced life in today’s world, opportunities disappear quickly, so being passive and not making efforts to deal with problems is sometimes equal to losing unique opportunities. Secondly, reacting to difficulties can be beneficial by itself. When people do something and choose to take an active role to deal with their problems, they feel worthy regardless of what they achieve. There is more hope in this approach and it is more likely for people to both inspire others and receive help from them. (121 words)

In conclusion, while there are those who favor remaining passive toward challenges of life, others including me are the advocates of taking actions and changing the situation. I believe life would feel empty for those who give up and let problems transform their lives.  (44 words)

Total: 340 words

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نسخه کوتاه (294 کلمه ای)

Facing challenges is an inseparable part of life. Although some believe it is best to accept such hardships, others including me think we need to fight them. This essay will discuss both views. (49 words)

There are those who argue that the best approach is to accept unfavorable conditions. First of all, people will suffer less if they do not fight their problems very hard. Regardless of the real consequences of the challenges that someone faces in life such as the debts following redundancy, the psychological effects might be the cause of irreversible decisions such as suicide or self-injury. Secondly, a personal problem such as joblessness is mostly a part of a bigger picture and in many cases it is only a matter of time before a political party step in and take measures to deal with it and may simply be solved as a result. (111 words)

On the contrary, there are those who suggest it would be better if we try hard to change the situation for the better. First of all, in the fast-paced life in today’s world, opportunities disappear quickly, so being passive and not making efforts to deal with problems is sometimes equal to losing unique opportunities. Secondly, reacting to difficulties can be beneficial by itself. When people do something and choose to take an active role to deal with their problems, they feel worthy regardless of what they achieve. There is more hope in this approach and it is more likely for people to receive help from others. (122 words)

In conclusion, while there are those who favor remaining passive toward challenges of life, others including me are the advocates of taking actions and changing the situation. I believe life would feel empty for those who give up and let problems transform their lives.  (44 words)

Total: 294 words

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There are those who argue that the best approach is to accept unfavorable conditions in life. First of all, people will suffer less if they do not fight their problems very hard. Regardless of the real consequences of the challenges that someone faces in life such as the debts following redundancy or homelessness at the time of natural disasters, the psychological effects might be the cause of irreversible decisions such as suicide or self-injury. Secondly, the media always target general public and magnify some social problems for certain political gains. Consequently if people sincerely believe their endless disturbing stories and make them their own problems, it adds up and they might end up living a depressing life with a gloomy view of the future. (124 words)

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نمونه رایتینگ Some People Accept Bad Situation Others Try to Improve – بیشتر بخوانید

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