دوره مقدماتی زبان انگلیسی مردادماه 1399

Some people believe that it is better to make a decision by their own. First of all, when they reach a decision alone, they choose it rely on their abilities and their situations. Hence they will be well_matched with the new situations after their decition and they can go on well with difficulties and problems. Secondly, they accept the result easier, because they don’t blame other people for their wrong advice and they know that if they achieve the desired result or if the result is disastrous, they are personally responsible for it. But when they get other people’s advice,… ادامه مطلب »

10ths Some people believe to make decision a loan is better. First of all, they can save time someone makes a decision a loan without getting other’s help can save time and they make decision faster. They don’t need discuss with others about each issue. Secondly,we get new experience. They can make a lot of decisions that are good or bad.some people able to make crucial decisions besides,others are that cannot make a decision at all.in fact,it’s important that makes right decisions and they have correct selections.so, they face to a new challenge and an new experience.(100) On the other… ادامه مطلب »

Some people prefer to move from one company to another every several years. Others think it is better to stay in one company for a long time. On the one hand, some people think it’s better to change their workplace every several years. First of all, when some one enters a new place, almost to selecting new position is higher than before position that work. So, these position and new place can encourage creativity. Secondly, some people if change workplace, they can learn new things and enjoying work.so, they can find other talents or develop their talents. Basically, new place… ادامه مطلب »

9th session Some people say that it is better to move from one company to another every several years.First of all, when people start working in a new company ,every thing is new and they are motivated. When employees work in one place for a long time, they are assigned to repetitive tasks and their job seems dull so their motivation will disappear after awhile. Secondly, when they work in a new place, they will have new colleagues and new managers, so they can make new friends. It is important for people to have many friends at work because they… ادامه مطلب »

9st session Some people think it’s better that staying in one company for a long time. First of all, they have more supports.when they work in a company can know to each other and manager realize their attitude and their responsible for doing their duties.so,company confidents to them and give more convenient such as getting insurance and getting a loan . Secondly, they earn more salary.who work for a long time in a company , they making more skills and working expertly.it is causing that they will make progress in their job and they will receive more salary.(100) On the… ادامه مطلب »

Mohadeseh khesali 9st session Staying in one place Move every few years #a wide range of relationship #experience in various fields Stay for a long time #higher salary # improving job position On the one hand, there are some people who prefer to change the workplace every few years. First of all, it seems in this situation a person can have a wide range of relationship which is the sign of success. In fact, each place has new people with different features and abilities and they would help their coworker if it is necessary. Secondly, who work for different companies… ادامه مطلب »

If they work in a company that have a lot of facilities and high financial condition, they will tend to promote and have more successful
وقت بخیر ،استاد این جمله درسته؟

8th session On one hand, fast foods have several advantages. First of all, fast food dishes take just a few minutes to prepare. Nowadays, people are so busy and it takes a lot of time to cook a traditional meal, so they find it much more convenient to eat fast food, hence they buy it from a restaurant or they buy frozen packs from supermarkets. Secondly, they are tasty. Companies that produce fast food packs and restaurants which serve fast foods, add some ingredients which cause them taste and smell well so even fussy eaters and kids like to eat… ادامه مطلب »

Mohadeseh khesali 8st session Fast Food + #fast # Cheap – #unhealthy #missing traditional foods Some people argue about fast food advantages. First of all, fast food tends to be cheaper so a person can save money. At the beginning, fast food cooked for middle and lower class of society. Usually, they couldn’t go home for eating or spend much money on restaurant for their rest time .to be a good offer for them, by origin, fast food costs cheaper than traditional. Secondly, as the name implies, fast food can save the time for a busy person. Generally, the first… ادامه مطلب »

8ths I think there are more disadvantages in fast foods. First of all,fast food has effect on your appearance and you getting over weight.in fact, they are more unhealthy and contain higher amount fatty,salt,sugar and additives that seriously harm for your body.people who eat fast food regularly, they have more disease than others who eat homemade foods especially,children and elderly. Secondly,these days fast foods change our eating habits.some people use them rather than traditional foods while, they have low guality and nutrition value that is harmful for growing children.besides,you can buy them wherever or offer them easily.people eating them too… ادامه مطلب »

Mohadeseh khesali 7st session Happiness Adults #more freedom to choose #financial independence Teenagers #more free time #healthier There are some people who believe that teenagers are happier. First of all, teenagers have more free time for any activities they want. They have less duties and concern for life. So they have both more free time and freedom in mind. Thus, teenagers can easily follow their interest and, in fact, this situation can makes them happier. Secondly, it seems that teenagers are happier because they are healthier. Mental and physical health directly affects happiness. Teenagers are more flexible and stronger and… ادامه مطلب »

Some people argue that adulthood is the happiest time in the whole life. First of all, the adulthood is a person whatever wants to do and not needing other people to choose whichever ways. They haven’t need parents to planning how to get, save and use money for ever thing. They can be able to do some thing that are unimaginable of youngsters. Secondly, some people in adulthood have the stark choice of job and relationship. Then having more control over life and they are independent at life, cause know what to do or not to do in their life.… ادامه مطلب »

Seventh Some people have discussion about the teenagers enjoy the happiness times. First of all,teenagers don’t have responsibility. They have less duties in their life and their parents financial help them.for example:food,clothes,education and their entertainment so, they don’t need to work . Secondly,teenagers have a lot of free time. They can go out with their friends and they do a lot of things in free time that adults can’t do their .for example:listening to music,learning new languages and participating in art groups so, they are happy in their life.(100) On the other hand,others believe that adults are the happiest time… ادامه مطلب »

7th session Some people believe that teenage years are the happiest time in our life. First of all, their parents meet all their needs. They are not requested to find a job hence they’ve really got no need to worry about a low- paid job or their work hours or the stress of an overcrowded workplace, because they are financially supported by their parents. Secondly, teenagers can learn all new skills. They don’t have a lot bad experiences in their lives so they are ready and willing to learn. They can start various careers such as playing music, learning new… ادامه مطلب »

Seventh session Students have to study more to achieve goals.
Big cities need more to use transportation.
Students who study in online universities use more from computers and cell phones.

Air pollution is a major problem in many large cities around the world. What are the causes of this problem? What are possible solutions? There are different reasons why air pollution is a big problem in large cities. First of all, air pollution outcomes to more making harmful gasses such as carbon dioxide or NO2 and etc, that can come from old vehicles and nearly factory. In some big cities are old cars and transportation so, they produce many solid and liquid particles and certain gases in the air. Secondly, tall buildings make stable air between buildings so, when having… ادامه مطلب »

Bahareh Sixth There are different reasons for air pollution that is a serious problem in big cities. First of all, there are a lot of vehicles in big cities .there are more cars that have just a driver and there is a car for per member of the family.for example,a family has four members that minority three persons of them have cars.old buses and cars produce much more smoke that they are a serious reason air pollution in big cities.more over,air pollution is very dangerous for people especially children. Secondly,factories are a other reason for air pollution in big cities.there… ادامه مطلب »

Mansoureh saniee section 6th Reason #old cars #fossil fuels Air pollution is a major problem in many large cities world .many government in around world ,want to know ,what are the causes and what are possible solutions. First of all ,that is clear,many old cars and old bus,usually produce much more smoke,which are dangerous for very young people and old people. Secondly,factories who that use fossil fuels and they are near of cities can the major reason of pollute.ln the other hand , house and building that use fossil fuels are major reason of pollute,too.they have kept their house many… ادامه مطلب »

Mohadeseh khesali 6st session Air pollution Reasons #Factories and Industries #Fossil Fuels Solution #move factories and industries out of big cities #using public transport One of the major problems facing a big cities is the air pollution which is the result of several destructive activities. First of all, the impact of factories that located inside or near by the big cities on air pollution is significant. Almost, factory’s exhausts have two effects on air pollution, making the air warmer and releasing harmful gases. Locating inside big cities, make these factories more dangerous. Secondly, burning fossil fuels release some gases which… ادامه مطلب »

There are different reasons why air pollution is a big problem in large cities. First of all, cars produce a lot of pollution and car exhausts emit pollutant gases and solid particles which are very dangerous for human health, but a large number of people use their private cars and they prefer to commute with their cars instead of public transportation. Secondly there are many large factories in big cities. These factories are producing foods, clothes and other products that are essential for people. They use a lot of fossil fuels to operate so they are air pollution sources and… ادامه مطلب »

There is a huge number of reasons why air pollution is a major problem in big cities. First of all, using more private cars instead of public ones. when everyone wants to have their own car so the number of cars that have existed in the city is increased. Each car uses many types of fuels and produces toxic gas in the air which can be dangerous and unsafe especially for people who are elder than others. Secondly, air pollution is caused by the burning of fuels which are mostly from factories and industrials and can release different kinds of… ادامه مطلب »

hi. for the previous subject of writing, can we talk about “cars and trucks”
for the”first of all” phrase,then write two sentence about cars and two sentence about trucks just for first of all phrase?

سلام استاد .گفتن چنین جمله ای صحیح است؟
heavy taxes should be imposed on those who overuse private card .

Mohadeseh khesali 5st session Type of University Online University #learn whatever you want #more comfortable Traditional University #face to face communication #access to libraries and research materials There are several people who believe that online university has many advantages. First of all, you can learn whatever you want. With online university, everyone can take any program or course that present and learn everything that is necessary. Although, in traditional university you can learn all courses you want, but most of the time it would involve traveling away from home and living in another city; actually it is difficult situation in… ادامه مطلب »

Some students think online universities are more effective. First of all,students can save their time . They sometimes are far from university and they spend more time in the way. online universities don’t have problem for transportation and they can study in their home or wherever. Teachers usually save video and themselves voice in online universities that students can use them every time. Secondly,students pay less cost. registration costs are low because online universities don’t need building,more facilities that all of them are expensive.there aren’t fees for transportation.so ,they can study in other city or other country.(105) On the other… ادامه مطلب »

Online universities have supporters for several reasons. First of all, some of the time, many conditions are created that can’t go somewhere or it’s very hard. For example, right now, spread epidemic viruses or distance between the university and student’s place to live. Although, education didn’t stop with this educational method while learning whatever you want and more speed than the traditional method. Secondly, most of the online class is recording when to be held so they can save their time and can work full time. Actually, about save energy is applied too, because of no need to use transportation… ادامه مطلب »

Not5: some people tend to study in online universities. first of all, they have fewer problems with commuting. sometimes they have more satisfaction with some majors that do not exist in their cities. So they have to travel to other cities for choosing that. So it can be tough for them because in the middle of commuting they maybe have an accident or stuck in heavy traffic. secondly, studying online can be better for self-confident people. As everyone knows there are some people who are embarrassed to talk in public and always they are afraid to express their problems and… ادامه مطلب »

My mother was doing housework yesterday and I was. calling on the phone.
When my parents were arguing about their problems,l leaved house.
When soldiers were preparing for war ,government made plan for peace.
Fifth session

Some people think it’s better to have a few close friends. First of all,if you have a close friend,you can say your secrets easier.every body has a lot of secrets in his (her)life that we cannot talk with everyone about our secrets even with our parents.our close friend who we have complete confidence in his (her) and we have a good relation and friendly. Secondly,our close friend can help us honestly because she (he) who knows us well.she(he) knows our personality,our behavior and she(he) understands all of the problems that there are in our life.a close friend always wants to… ادامه مطلب »

Online universities have supporters for several reasons. First of all, there is no need to commute. If a traditional university is not in their city or a particular subject is not tough in that university, students should travel to another city or if they study at a local university, they will be stuck in traffic during commuting, so by studying at online universities, they don’t waste time for commuting. Secondly, there is no need to be in a special place. They can participate in classes either they are at home or they are at workplace. If students are employed, they… ادامه مطلب »

Some people say it is better to have only a few close friends. First of all, Close friendships are a step above casual friendships. You have bonded over shared interests, goals, or struggles, and put effort into making time for one another. you seek advice from your close friends, celebrate successes with them, and kick back and relax with them. these are probably the friends you spend the most time with them. Secondly, true friends are pretty easy to spot, and knowing the signs of a true friend will help you figure out who to get closer with and who… ادامه مطلب »

some people believe it is important to have close friends. First of all, it will be possible to make a major decision with them more easily. Because they do not decide according to their feelings and also your decision has no effect on their lives. So they can help in the best way. Secondly, having close friends has an extremely powerful effect on your mental health as every bode knows some close friends release lots of energy from themselves which can be useful and make an improvement in your mood. How ever, some other people think that having causal friends… ادامه مطلب »

mohadese khesali Close friends #make happier life #trust worthy to talk about mysteries Many casual friends #having a friend for every occasion #reduce the risk of mental illnesses There are some people who believe a few close friends are more beneficial. First of all, having a close friend around, can makes anyone happier. Actually, because best friends recognize each other, so in any situation of life, they can get suitable advice and make their pal’s thought more positive. Thus, spending quality time with them, help to decrease stress level. Secondly, close friends are totally trustworthy to talk about mysteries. Always,… ادامه مطلب »

Some people say it is better to have a few close friends. First of all, when people have a few close friends they can handle their relationship easily. Their ideas are quite similar and they get along well with each other, so they have fewer arguments and they do not trouble each other. Secondly, close friends can rely on each other in difficult situations. They have a great responsibility when one of them is going through a crisis. In this situation it is not a good idea to make a call to a friend who is not very close. On… ادامه مطلب »

سلام و درود . استاد من فیدبک دریافت نکردم 🙏

This sentence is true?
This permit will not have given to them to interfere in your life?

استاد من ایده پردازیم ضعیفه اصلا ایده ای به ذهنم نمی رسید . رفتم یه مقاله خوندم و عناوینی که الان فرستادم از اون مقاله کمک گرفتم. این تقلب به حساب میاد؟ یا روش درستی هست؟

mohadese khesali
Close friends
#make happier life
#allow person to be himself
Many casual friends
#help to grow with sharing experiences
#give a sense of confidence
Close friends
#totally honest
#trust worthy to talk about mysteries
Many casual friends
#reduce the risk of mental illnesses
#having a friend for every occasion

A self-employed person is not often the same thing as being a business owner. First of all, the owner of a business, may hire employees and essentially become the manager – an employee-owner who operates and manages the business. Besides, a business owner has an ownership stake but may not be involved in the day-to-day operations of the company. In contrast, a self-employed person both owns the business, but they are also the primary or sole operator. Secondly, Self-employed people generally find their work rather than being provided with work by an employer. (96 words) There are, however, some disadvantages.… ادامه مطلب »

Being self-employed has some benefits. First of all, people have a very flexible schedule.people do not have to go work for long hours in an unpleasant atmosphere every day and also they can go on vacation whenever they want without worrying about their manager’s decision. Secondly, someone who works for him or herself try to choose their favorite jobs, so this can affect their work and make them progress. Each second is enjoyable for such people. And never makes them tired. In the other hand, being self-employed has some disadvantages. First of all ، people do not have fixed income.… ادامه مطلب »

There are several factors with the pros of being self-employed. First of all, they can schedule work hours. They can quit their job whenever they need and they can do extra work because they are managing their time. They can have more days off to have more time to spend with their family. Secondly, self-employed persons are able to choose the people they work with. They can hire expert people and it will help to self-employed people that they face with reduce workload and they will assign their responsibility to expert persons. They will be able to choose people with… ادامه مطلب »

Is this sentences true?
They are in charge of anything that will happen.

(common mistakes)
i went to work and explained to my manager.
i read hard and passed my exam.
there is useful advice in this book that i have to learn .
there is not enough water in my glass.
in big cities there is much pollution in compare with small towns.
go walking and go swimming can be useful for your health.

Being self employed has some advantages. First of all, self employed people will have higher income.  Someone who works for others has only a fixed salary per month and if this person works very hard, he/she will not earn a higher salary, but people who are self employed,  generate more profit  and they are motivated to work hard and they work tirelessly to make more money. Secondly,working time is flexible for a self employed person. Self employed people either can start and finish the work in their own time or  change their working time depending on the workload, but people who… ادامه مطلب »

سلام استاد
در تکالیف جلسه سوم برای کتاب oxford practice grammar فرمودین unit 5,6 انجام بشه. ولی این unitها انجام شده در تکالیف جلسه اول. 9و 10 را انجام بدیم؟ ممنون

I’m soory ,my name is mansoureh saniee ,I tried to correct it but I do not succesful

Some people beleive that students freely choose for field of study is better.first of all,that is very perfect because it is very good for sicolojy’s people and who was like her subject ,she try to get skill worker for the right jab.More people of Iran beleive that ,student must to study useful for the future because very students do not find a rightjobs for field of study .Any way everyone’s future is important and they must to have money for countinue live

Mohadeseh Study whatever they like #more enthusiastic #more encourage Something useful for future #guaranteed future #clear path to the goal Some people think there are several benefits for student’s future in choosing whatever they like. First of all, students also are more enthusiastic in what they selected. Mainly because they interested in and motivated about their favorite subjects. Though if they have problems or blockage, they don’t be frustrating. Secondly, choosing whatever they like, encouraged them to the future. This hopeful aim makes them life so happy and satisfied. Be successful in the future is almost relevant to how someone… ادامه مطلب »

Some people believe that it’s better if students choose every field of study they like in university. First of all, one of the important factors is deep interest in field of study that they will choose. when people have interest in field of study they can continue studying in upper level easily. It is rare to see that students decide to give up their studies before ending education. Secondly, students can work hard in major of study that they have chosen. They can make a new thing in theoretical or practical fields. When everybody tries hard, they can proud of… ادامه مطلب »

Choose favorite subjects # Enjoy learning # more efficiency Sth Useful for the future # support government # early return Some people believe that it is better if students study whatever subject they like at university. First of all, they will have to enjoy learning and study their favorite subject compare to a subject that someone else has chosen for them. Most students at a low level, then think about the future, have the best social status with more ideas and energy and they follow the news and read some books and magazines to gain more knowledge. Secondly, the researcher… ادامه مطلب »

Some people believe it is better that students freely choose whatever subject they like. First of all,the students thoroughly enjoy their classes.They are eager to learn more so they interact with their teachers actively, also they pay more attention to the subjects. Not only they focus on the homework but also they get good marks and pass courses successfully. Secondly, studying a favorable subject reveals their talent. They spend more time on this field and think up new ways; hence they could discover new concepts on their own. Also they will not give up easily because they are studying or… ادامه مطلب »

سلام .استاد امکانش هست رایتینگ یک جلسه رو جلسه بعدی فرستاد یک مشکل دارم و احتمال داره نتونم بفرستم .با تشکر از شما

#2(common mistake)
It’s important for me to choose big city for living.
I can stay calm by listening to music.
I usually use the motorcycle for going to work
I want to go to pool for swimming.
I often use my cellphone for reading the news website.
I studied several books before taking IELTS exam.
I’ll choose the modern city for living in future.
I’m going to choose this one bicycle for cycling.
I decided to buy a car for driving.

.is this sentence true? :they can provide essential needs of the society

#1 (common grammar mistake) I enjoyed the new technology. I enjoyed every minute of it. I enjoyed speaking with my friends. I enjoyed watching tv series. I am learning English because I want to live abroad. My brother helped me in my assignment work for 2 days. My family face some financial problem. I accessed source of central bank’s money. Daily different currency price has effect on everything. Daily different currency price affects everything. You can use my computer for your work. I can achieve deep knowledge in PhD level. I have visited China wall 5 years ago. I spent… ادامه مطلب »

Some people who believe big city is better than small town for living. First of all, there are more technologies. Because there are international companies that this matter can help the city to improve. In big city, there are several complex transportations like the metro. In big city with more technology people can be live easier than in small towns with each other. Secondly, one of the important factors for choosing big city is high income. Because there is population in big city and there are more expensive facilities, people that living in big city needs to pay high rate… ادامه مطلب »

NOT1 99/5/3 The majority of people prefer to live in big cities. Firstly, entertainment option in big cities is more than small ones. people have lots of places to go there. They have more fun and also they can hang out with their friends at the weekend and get rid of something that makes them tired so atmosphere for people is enjoyable whole the time. Secondly, public transportation is better in big cities. All people can not afford to buy a car in big cities. however, people specially poverty ones are not worried about this owing to the fact that… ادامه مطلب »

Mohadeseh Big City #modern lifestyle #well paid jobs Small Towns #slow rhythm of life #healthy lifestyle Some people think big cities are better place to live. First of all, most of the time, in the big cities we have modern lifestyle. This mode of life include better facilities and services, big business, special human relationships and also the attractive entertainment. Actually, young people prefer to live in big cities since these advantages. Secondly, in big cities people can find more well-paid jobs. Big cities have more varies company and job opportunity, so they can choose more employee .although, these company… ادامه مطلب »

Some people think it is better to live in a big city. First of all, the big city has a fantastic public transport system such as a train or busway So easy and speed to get around. There are many shopping centers which in the chain store you can recognize local brands as well or the internet’s service is better than a small tower and you can Daily shopping without leaving home. secondly, there’re full of an office block, so find the good jobs its easiest. Some people who live in a big city have a routine program so they… ادامه مطلب »

قسمتی که مثالهای جمله سازی به اشتراک گذاشته میشه کجا هست؟ من یک مثال برای sense of humour خواستم ولی این عبارت در longman dictionary نیست

Some people think it is better to live in a small town. First of all the cost of living is lower in a small town. The money people pay for renting an apartment or buying a building is less, also people can get services such as cleaning and washing cars at a lower price, so they can either save money and use it for going on a journey and have a happier life or work shorter hours to pay for their daily life. Secondly in a small town,people are kind to each other and help one another. In difficulties, neighbors… ادامه مطلب »