دوره مجازی آیلتس

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دوره مجازی آیلتس
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دوره مجازی آیلتس

دوره مجازی آیلتس – کلاس روزهای جمعه بهمن 1396

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای فقط جمعه بهمن ماه کلاس مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست که در تاریخ 20 بهمن 1396 آغاز میشود. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکالیف جلسه های دهم و یازدهم

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه نهم

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه هشتم

تسک 1 زیر برای زبان آموزان آکادمیک

تسک 1 زیر برای زبان آموزان جنرال

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه هفتم

نمونه پاسخ مدرس بدون واژگان دشوار

Exotic and unusual places has gain popularity among tourists during the past decades. While they can gain benefits from such journeys, there might be some threats too. This essay will examine these two points (34 words).

There are benefits for tourists visiting exotic places. First of all, there is more excitement to enjoy because unlike five-star hotels around the globe that offer excellent but very predictable and undeniably similar services, unusual places break the norm of taking sunbath and eating fancy foods. This alternative would be more appealing especially to younger generations who do not share the eagerness for peace and quiet of famous hotels. Secondly, travelling to an odd destination as a tourist would be a new experience for travelers. Having such experience is perhaps able to change one’s perspective and give the life a new meaning. This, undoubtedly, is worth much more compare to a tedious and predictable summer vacation. (116 words)

On the other hand, there is a reason why not everybody fancies such journeys. First of all, there are some threats to the visitors’ health and even lives. Places such as Arctic or Sahara deserts or islands of uncharted territories have skillful predators who know those regions very well and can attack any second. Not only large and small animals but even insects, parasites or seemingly harmless plants may pose a threat to the travelers’ wellbeing or lives. Secondly, facilities and amenities that a visitor to such places can enjoy is undoubtedly inferior to that of other tourist destinations. Services such as air conditioners in the middle of the deserts or spacious and pleasantly warm suits in Polar regions may never be possible to be delivered (126 words).

In conclusion, tourists in faraway places with extreme weather may enjoy some benefits but admittedly there are disadvantages to deal with (21 words).

Total Words: 297

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه ششم 

 نمونه پاسخ نمره 7 نوشته شده توسط مدرس

The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.

In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90  in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.

At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.

The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.

Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to  diminish and at the final year all these categories had  very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)

نمونه پاسخ نمره 7 تا 8 نوشته شده توسط مدرس

The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.

The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.

Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed  an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.

Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)

نمونه سوال رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک (Chart) بهمراه جواب – پاسخ Band 9

در اینجا پاسخی که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد نهم بعنوان پاسخ کامل نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر ارائه شده را میبینید. نمره این پاسخ نمره کامل یا 9 میباشد.

نمونه سوال رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک (Chart) بهمراه جواب

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف گرامر جلسه هفتم 

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گفتار چهاردهم: افعال Modal در زبان انگلیسی بخش دوم

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گفتار پانزدهم: تبدیل جملات سوالی مستقیم به غیر مستقیم

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه پنجم

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه چهارم + نمونه پاسخ مدرس

Sample Answer by Pouya Abolqasemi

The graph shows the average weekly time spent by children at the age of 10 to 11 on two different leisure activities (TV and computer) at home. (27)

Schoolchildren spend just under 4 hours a week on computer at the beginning of the period in 2000. This number increased steadily for the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. Then it increased more slowly during the following 4 years to 2008 to reach a peak of almost 22 hours per week. (54)

Time spent on TV was much higher compare to computer at the beginning of the period. It started at 21 hours in 200 and stayed the same until 2003. At this time it showed a downward trend and fell to 15 hours in 2004. During the next 4 years up to the end of period in 2008, despite some fluctuations, it remained stable at this level. (66)

Overall, it seems children’s preference for these two pastime activities changed dramatically and during this nine-year period they have reversed. (20)

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه دوم 

Happiest Time

Teenage years
#More free time
#spending time with friends

Adult life
#start a family
#having a career

دوره مجازی آیلتس – نمونه رایتینگ جلسه اول نوشته شده توسط مدرس

Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

There are better situation for work in a large city. First of all, the salary of employees is higher compare with a small town. Since the companies are bigger and more people work in them, their profit is more and these companies are able to pay higher salaries to their staff. Secondly, the number of companies and factories is much more when we compare them to a small town. there are thousands of companies in and around a large city. Each of them needs people to work in and as a result it is easier to find a job in a big city. (103 Words)
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There are also more facilities and services in a large city. First of all, governments around the world always provide more support for big cities. They allocate more budget to large cities and it is easier for people and corporations to ask for financial assistance for starting or improving their business. Secondly, big cities have large populations. when millions of people live in a city, demand for many services increases and also some people ask for high quality services. Business owners have to compete to provide better services and as a result there is a higher chance of finding modern facilities in a big city. (105 Words)

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکالیف گرامر جلسه دوم  

بعد از مشاهده صفحه مربوط در لینک های زیر و مطالعه دقیق توضیحات به زبان فارسی، چند ویدئو مربوط به هر فصل را مشاهده کرده و با ذکر نام برای هر مبحث دست کم 5 مثال در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد فرمایید.

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گفتار سوم: زمان حال کامل Present Perfect Tense

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گفتار چهارم: زمان گذشته استمراری و زمان گذشته ساده Past Continuous Tense and Simple Past Tense

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – نمونه های زبان آموزان

دوستان عزیز دقت بفرمایید در جلسات اول تمامی رایتینگ ها میبایست بصورت تایپ شده در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد شوند.

نمونه رایتینگ مورد تایید و کار بسیار خوبی از ایمان با رعایت تمامی موارد چک لیست و جمله بندی مناسب.

نمونه رایتینگ ایمان ???

نمونه رایتینگ عامر + #فیدبک ???

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه رایتینگ امیر حسین + #فیدبک

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه کنفرانس ریحانه از کتاب Select Readings با سرعت مطالعه 160 واژه در دقیقه

به ترتیب از فصل اول تا چهارم ???


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دوره مجازی آیلتس – وارد کردن لغات در سایت

زبان آموزان گرامی با ورود به این صفحه فهرستی از تمامی فصل های کتاب های Select Readings، Oxford Word Skills و Essential Words for IELTS را مشاهده خواهید فرمود. فصل مورد نظر خود را پیدا کرده و در بخش دیدگاه ها مشابه نمونه زیر مثال های خود از لغات جدید آن فصل را وارد کرده تا مورد بازبینی قرار بگیرد ???

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

دوره مجازی آیلتس – بانک فیدبک های اسپیکینگ و رایتینگ

بانکی از تمامی فیدبک های ارائه شده بر روی رایتینگ و فایل های اسپیکینگ ارسالی در کانال تلگرام زیر وجود دارد که از تمامی علاقمندان و زبان آموزان درخواست میشود در این کانال عضو شوند:

https://t.me/FeedbackParadise

کانال اصلی ما در تلگرام برای آگاهی از آخرین منابع و تازه های آیلتس:

https://t.me/ielts2com

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – بررسی آنلاین Collocation ها

دوستان برای نوشتن رایتینگ در صورت نداشتن دانش کافی در زمینه ترکیب ها و کالوکیشن ها حتما از دیکشنری زیر استفاده بفرمایید. کلمه اصلی یا کلیدی مثلا advice را وارد کرده و collocation مورد نیاز و مناسب را گزینش فرمایید:

http://collocations.enacademic.com

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس Task 1 و Task 2

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)

همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید

براورد سریع دایره لغات زبان انگلیسی شما بصورت آنلاین

عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها 

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دیدگاه ها

  • Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondly school?
    Due to advancements in communication system, the relation among nations has been increased markedly. Learning a foreign language at an early age has become a controversial issue in the world. Some people claim that primary school is the best place for learning another language instead of secondary school.
    Some people believe learning in primary school has alot of disadvantages. First of all, the most important disadvantage could be a waste of time since children need to focus on other subjects such as math, sience and their own mother tongue language, which they might need it more than the foreign one. Secondly, children many get confused because of learning many languages at the same time and this could have a negative impact on their development. For example, it is claim that bilingual children develop the ability to talk more slowly than monolingual kids.
    On the other hand, some people believe leaving new language in primary school has some advantages. Firstly, children learn faster at a young age because they are less self-concious and shy. So they can easily pick up the right pronunciation and try to copy it. Secondly, learning foreign language could a chance for learning literature and poems and also knowing the culture of others when the children spend childhood and it is the biggest advantage.
    In conclusion, it seems that the benefits of teaching children foreign languages as soon as possible outweigh the drawbacks.
    (258 words)

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  • Cambridge 9-test3:
    The diagrams show the population of two countries consist of: Yemen an Italy with different ages in 2000 and also a estimative for 2050.
    If we have a glance on diagram in 2000, will see the majority of people in Yemen between 0 and 14 years old, with 51/1% whereas in Italy the least of the population was between 0 and 14 years with 14/3%, on the other hand, the most population was included by the people that had 15-59 years. In Yemen, 3/6% of people was 60 years old, while in Italy, the diagram show with 24/1%. In 2050, the number of people with 15-59 years with 57/3% and also 60years or more with 5/7% will increase. Despite, in Italy, it is completly reverse, on the words, the population with 15-59 years will decrease to 46/2%, while people with 60 years or more will increase to 42/3%.
    Overall, the diagram show in the future(2050), the population 60 years or more trend on upward in both countries. (167 words)

    سلام و ادب. استاد چون تکلیفی که سر کلاس اعلام شد تکراری بود (کمبریج 12- تست 2)، من این تست رو انتخاب نمودم.

  • درود
    این هفته تکلیف اعلام نکردید استاد

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      درود

      ممنون از تذکر شما

      چند روزی درگیر بیماری بودم حتما برای 2 هفته رو وارد میکنم.

  • Over the past few decades, the figure of fast food consumption has increased tremendously in many countries around the world. Some people believe that this trend are beneficial to communities, others people think completely reverse.(35)
    Some people belive fast food is advantages. The most advantage of fast food is that it saves time. In today’s fast-paced life, there is nothing better than getting a ready meal. Besides the time an individual has to spend in the kitchen, cooking a meal, also requires one to make a trip to the supermarket to buy the ingredients for the dish. Secondly, saving money gives fast food an edge over the meal prepared in the kitchen. If one lives alone, then it is cheaper to buy a meal at the supermarket instead of cooking it at home. Also, certain fast foods like fries and burgers come pretty cheap.(110)
    Some people belive fast food is disadvantages. First of all, consuming fast food, which contains a huge amount of salt and fat, would lead to such health problems like high blood pressure, heart disease and obesity. Secondly, and more importantly, fast food has changed many people’s eating habit. Many children started to have fast food when they are kids. They will keep to eat and will not stop even they have grew up – this is what the fast food companies most wanted.(92)
    In conclusion, I believe that fast food will continue to become more popular as the pace of
    life increases. Given the health risks associated with this trend, I believe that public educationcampaigns warning people about the dangers of fast food would be warranted.(42)

    (279 words)

  • fast food- essay
    Over the past few decades, the way of fast food consumption has increased more than the past in many countries. While some people believe that this trend is beneficial, I completely disagree with this point of view which will be discussed in the following essay. (45 Words)
    There are various reasons to argue that consuming fast food is harmful for the body. Firstly, fast foods are not nutritious and healthy, they are full of fat and their nice flavor is just because of the spices that are used in making them. Eating junk foods have some detrimental effects on the body’s organism functionality and therefore the person would suffer diseases such as obesity and blood pressure. Secondly, people who eat fast foods out, separate from their family little by little and they don’t understand the concept of family gathering or they don’t learn culture of their country which our ancestors passed them to us. (107 Words)
    On the other hand, there have been a number of positive aspects in expansion of fast foods in different nations. Nowadays, people are almost always out of home and they do not have enough time for a proper sit down meal, then fast foods are one of the best choices for those who are always in hurry or outdoor. In addition fast foods are usually cheaper than other kinds of food such as fish and kebabs, so that could be a better choice for younger people. Furthermore, fast food industry provides more job opportunities and it causes rich people to invest in this field which had an impressive impact on food chain in recent years. (115 Words)
    By way of conclusion, there are some benefits of eating fast food but the negative impact outweigh. I believe the amount used of fast food should be limited especially for the next generations. (33 Words)

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  • در مورد پارت 2 اسپیکینگ میخواستم اینو بپرسم:
    تو سوال اگر بپرسن
    describe a famous building in your home town or country
    اگر در جواب در مورد یه سازه تاریخی مثل تخت جمشید صحبت کنم نمره ای کم میشه؟ و غیر مرتبط به حساب میاد؟

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      فکر نمیکنم مشکل خاصی باشه ولی باید توجه داشته باشید که تخت جمشید در حال حاضر ساختمان نیست بقایای یک اثر تاریخی هست.

      بهتر بود مثلا کاخ گلستان یا یک ساختمان دیگه رو اننخاب میگردید ولی نمره خاصی هم کم نخواهد شد.

  • سلام مجدد.
    در مورد پارت 2 اسپیکینگ سوال داشتم با کیو کارتی مثل این مواجه شدم:
    describe a piece of art you like
    در جواب می تونم در مورد یه تاج که ارزش هنری بالای داره و در یک موزه واقع شده صحبت کنم؟

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    دوستان گرامی

    دیدگاه های پیشین رو میتونید در اینجا ببینید:
    https://ielts2.com/%D8%AF%D9%88%D8%B1%D9%87-%D9%85%D8%AC%D8%A7%D8%B2%DB%8C-%D8%A2%DB%8C%D9%84%D8%AA%D8%B3/comment-page-2/#comments

  • C12-T2:
    The maps show the center of the cities of Islip. And also that given information about the city will change in the future.
    Firtly, according to the map, countryside is lie in the center. A main road consist of: a school, houses, several shops and park. If we have a look precisely, the second map predicts a lot of modifications development of the cities in the future. And also, in an oval shape the size of the center will increased. At the first of change, the countryside will disappear. A pedestrian way will build in the center. And also new houses and new facilities will be built such as a parking and a bus station. As the school will be bigger because, the city will have a lot of people.
    Overall, according two maps of Islip city, there are many modifications are predicated in the future. In other words, the city will be deserve with variation facilities. (156 w0rds)

  • Dear sir, Madam
    I heard from news that your company is going to spend some money either to sponsor a children’s sports team of our town or to pay for two open air concerts. As I am interested in my city progress, I am writing to describe my point of view on how you should spend the money.
    I know most of the children’ family who live in this city cannot pay money for their sports activities either their schools do not support them. So if the money is spent on sponsoring the children’s sports team, it will help the team and makes the children happy.
    In this city there are several music hall but some people cannot afford a concert ticket. If the money is used to paying for two open air concerts, many of people who do not enough money will have an opportunity to enjoy music.
    I believe the money should be spent on sponsoring the children’s local team. All children love sport and they exercise very hard. They can get new equipments or even better coach to bring them to a higher level so they can compete in the national tournament. You can change their live forever and it is more important that the children’s dream come true.

    Yours Sincerely
    Mahnaz Tofigh
    (209 Words)

  • Given are two maps of islip town center that reveals the different zone and transportation route.
    Before the renovation in the north of the map illustrates the shops in a small ground and a countryside in a wide area that covered somewhere in the vicinity north of the terrain. In the south just behind the main road, As well as northern part there is a modest shop and a park that is located in southeast. The figure represent a school next to the dead end. In the southern place, housing cover most of the area.
    After the development of islip town different facilities will be constructed in northern area. There will be a new housing northeast of pedestrians and next to that part including car park, shopping center and a bus station in the west. Around the islip will be a dual carriageway. The shop in the south approximately will not be changed. The park is on the edge of carriageway as shown in the figure and it will be smaller than before. Arterial road seen in the middle of the housing in the southern zone. (186 word)

  • استاد سلام.
    در مورد اسپیکینگ پارت 2 سوال داشتم در مورد دوتا موضوع:
    مثلا تو سوال از ما میخواین که در مورد هنر art صحبت کنم. آیا می تونم در مورد یه تاج که ارزش هنری بالای داره و در یک موزه واقع شده صحبت کنم؟
    و مثلا در مورد یه building میگه توضیح بدید. آیا اونو می تونم بسط بدم به سمت مثلا یه سازه تاریخی مثل تخت جمشید؟
    میخواستم لطف کنید بفرمایید این موارد ارتباط موضوعی پیدا می کنه. یا نه اگه بگم نمره کم می شه

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      درود

      در هر دو مورد لطفا بک نمونه سوال بفرمایید که بتونم دقیق توضیح بدم خدمتتون.

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  • Human being is such an interesting creature who seeks on unknown places and things. Although some people think about such places have negative effects, others entertain positive impacts of difficult journeys. This essay will discuss both of these points.
    Being in a difficult situation as a tourist have some advantages. First of all it can be a most exciting journey. Tourists often books hotels to ensure that these places are safe. But for those who would like to be in an unexpected condition in heart of nature can be exciting. For instance it has lot of fun and fascinating when people jump off a bridge to the river or walking through amazon jungle. Secondly it has some new experiences when people far from facilities. Their cell phones are remote access and internet to communicate to others and maybe need to live in a tent for some days. Without oven or microwaves cook a meal can be a challenge. Under the circumstance they should make condition better as well as possible.
    One problem and more importantly, though, visiting exotic places has some disadvantages and create difficulties. Tourist encounter with dangerous situations. For instance in deserts there are so many wild animals or insects that hurt people. Another negative aspect is in such places relief operation are not enable and people may have high risk of death. Tourist’s physical and psychological health problems can be a issue as a result of the environment. If the suitable vehicle does not have a first-aid kit to treat immediate injuries, there is possibility that the wounds and infections caused as a result of the injury can become life-threatening
    By way of conclusion, isolated places for tourists has some benefits and also might have some difficulties. (290 words)

  • Many agencies have different tours for many places where conditions are difficult. Although some people believe that it has some advantages others think that it has disadvantages. In this essay both of these views will be discussed.(37 word)
    Visiting places as tourists are a opportunity to improve your experiences that they might have many advantages for you. First of all when you visit places which conditions are difficult, you can obtain specific profession that are worthwhile. In this visiting you envisage many steps or rules that are individual condition that you catch it. Secondly, you can accustom life style in unknown places. You can see the people‘s foods which use or eat. You infer the food‘s constructions which are produced by people who live in and you can see special vegetation and fruits that people can eat them.(100 word)
    Places that are difficult to visit, have some disadvantages. First of all perhaps you have many problems. For instance you may be sick on trip. Difficult conditions can affect your body and change balance of water in your body. Therefore this lack can influence your body and it can be treacherous. Secondly when you go journey which is difficult condition, perhaps you lose your way and it can be expensive trip. For these trip usually you cannot bring your children that are important on your itinerary. Therefore you should select a professional leader who explain all steps of trip and all adventures. Usually difficult places do not have soft or good access roads thus you should pay more money to take special vehicles for visiting them.(126 word)
    In conclusion, visiting places where conditions are difficult have some advantages and disadvantages. Therefore you can deliberate about your program and know their steps or obstacles that you have good trips in vacations. (33 word)

  • Nowadays many visitors are showing their interest to visit troublesome places, like Sahara deserts or the Antartic. Tourists could get exciting experiences from an adventurous trip, but there are many drawbacks to be taken into account.(36)
    This kind of trips have many disadvantages. First of all, these kinds of travels are risky and can put the travelers’ life in danger. A major problem of traveling in an awkward place is that there could be no facilities for tourists. Not only the transportation is a chief problem, but also the telecommunication system is very poor in this area. Secondly, In some places, other facilities like food or security are totally difficult to provide. There is no doubt that the travelers need to be prepared mentally to face any unwanted situations.(96)
    On the other hand, travelling to difficult places has advantages. Firstly, One of the biggest benefits of undertaking difficult journeys is that they improve one’s confidence in one’s abilities. Secondly, an extreme place often offers the opportunity to enjoy the natural beauty closely. For example, to see the Royal Bengal Tiger in Sunderban, one might have to stay in the deep wood for a couple of days which could be very interesting but not out of danger. So, it is clear that dangerous places have many things to offer for the fearless sightseers.(92)
    In conclusion, I believe adventurous journeys have more benefits than usual trips. traveling to unsafe places requires physical wellness in addition to a different viewpoint. In other words, traveling to unusual places brings a unique experience that a typical travel can never give such a valuable experience.(47)
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  • nowadays tourist agencies have a lot of tours to places with difficult situation.although some people think this kind of journeys have difficulties for tourists,others believe this journeys have a lot of advantages.in this essay both sides will be discussed.(40)
    this kind of trips have some benefits,first of all, in real life we have a lot of facilities and services in different and harsh situation for example in hot and cold climate we have air conditioner to regulate temperature and this kind of journeys help people to be thankful to what they have in real life.secondly,they can visit somewhere that we can not see in our routines and it is adventurous and memorable for all whole lives.they also can take amazing photographs and record this adventure as a memorable experience to review in the future or share it with pleasure in social media like Instagram.(107)
    in other hand,this kind of traveling have some disadvantages for tourists. first of all,they are always facing with unpredictable situation like unknown diseases and may incompatibility with harsh situation.for example people who have allergy to hot weather may have some problems in Sahara desert and there are not enough hospital and other services in this conditions.secondly some of this areas are not completely protect from wild animals like snakes or cancers and it may threat tourist security and there are not enough mobile coverage to report some problems to emergency services and this is can be dangerous in some situation.(102)
    in conclusion,visiting this kind of places may has a lot of adventurous and it’s usually exiting but tourist must be aware of unpredictable situation.(25)

    total words(265)

  • درود استاد
    i have got to go back for treatment on Tuesday
    تو این جمله چرا از got استفاده شده؟ بدون got همون معنی مجبور بودن برای درمان رو نمیده؟

  • Nowadays there are many tourists who like to travel to inhabitable places. Although some people enjoy and consider the benefit of this kind of journies , others believe these places have a lot of difficulties. In this essay both sides will be discussed. (42 Words)
    Travelling to difficult places has many advantages for some one who enjoys adventure . First of all, one’s can see, touch and experience a lot of new things who did not know before that can not be describe in word. In addition, unknown experiences increase the secretion of hormones like Adrenaline in their body and give a good feel to them. Secondly staying at uncommon areas has physically and mentally exhausting and succeed in such difficult conditions cause to improve one’s self-confidence. Having this abilities and high self confidence make them stronger in their lives than past. (97 Words)
    This kind of trips also have many disadvantages and can be extremely dangerous. First of all, there is some area in the world, like Sahara desert or the Antarctic, that is not secure and could have difficulties like sand storm or snow storm. In this conditions nothing can help the tourists however sufficient and professional equipments be with them . Secondly, harsh weather conditions can effect on human body and make serious health problems for people. Spending long hours in hot or cold weather may causes diseases such as dehydration or frostbite with the worse and harm consequent. (97 words)
    In conclusion, undoubtedly traveling to around the world especially places where conditions are difficult has many excited experiences and will be beneficial, but unpredictable events can be detrimental that many tourists are eager to visit this places. (37 words)
    (274 Words)

  • درود به استاد عزیز
    لطفا نظرتون را درابطه با این ایده پردازی بیان کنید.
    سپاس
    موضوع رایتینگ:benefits and disadvantages of places where condition are difficult for tourists
    ایده پردازی:
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    more experience
    more adventure

    more dangerous
    more expensive

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    فایل های استاد liz فایل Liz.IELTS.Advantages.Disadvantages.Essays چند بار دانلود کردم ولی در زمان اکسترکت فایل هشدار خرابی فایل میدهد.
    ممنون میشم راهنماییی کنید.

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  • The bar graph demonstrates the incidence of three different phone calls in the UK between 1995 and 2002.
    According to the chart the cardinal calls were local calls by fixed line and in the beginning of the period were about more than 70 billion minutes. Which started to go up over 4 years about 20 billion minutes to reach the summit of 90 billion minutes. And then there was a slump in demand for the next 3 years until 2002 and it has been reached to 70 billion minutes
    The number of minutes spoken throughout national and international by fixed line differs from local call for popularity and started to less than 40 billion minutes. It increased slightly during 7 years peaked at 60 billion minutes in 2002.
    There was a sudden rise in mobile calls it started from 2 billion to 46 billion minutes. There has been a dramatic went up between 1995 and 2002.
    Overall, the local fixed line were still the most popular phone call in the UK. Mobile calls and national and international fixed calls shows more popularity than before. (181 words)

  • The chart illustrates the total length of spending on telephone calls in the UK which is divided into three categories: local line, national and international fixed line and mobile from 1995-2002. (30)
    At the beginning of this period, local calls were more popular approximately 70 billion minutes. This number increased up to 90 in 1998. So it started to fall to 70 billion minutes again in 2002. (30)
    In 1995, using national and international fixed line was limited. It grew steadily from 40 billion to 60 billion in this period, from 1995-2002. Though the growth slowed over the last two years. (30)
    Mobile calls increased dramatically from 2 billion to 46 billion minutes.this addition was noticeable from 1999-2002 which time of using mobile increased. (23)
    Overall, at the beginning there was high variation among all three categories but the differences become less at the final year that all these categories had very similar level of popularity. (30)

  • dear sir,
    we met each other in a flight to London about one week ago.we had a great conversation and you talked about your restaurant and its branches. you told me about your activities in that restaurants and you suggested me to cooperate with you and i would like to accept that.(50)
    actually two year ago I worked in a restaurant as an accountant and i have a sufficient experience in this filed and how to communicate with people.so, I am ready to work as an accountant with you.i also have enough knowledge to design great websites for your restaurant and its branches.(51)
    as i mention before, i have enough experience about communicating with clients and I am so fast in accounting job.i am so responsible and handy in different ways .for example I can advertise your restaurant in attractive websites and social media and it will help your business to be well-known in the city .(53)
    your faithfully
    ali bahmanabadi

  • Internet has altered people behaviors in different ways internet have had effect on people lives first of all in the years 1995 mobiles calls most of 70 bilion minutes but in the 1999 most of 90 bilion minutes but next year in the years 2000 allmost 80 bilion minutes couse improve industry mobile

    Erfan tabatabaie

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      تکمیل کنید بفرستید

  • The bar chart indicates the total length of the time spent on three categories: local line, national and international fixed line and mobiles between 1995 and 2002.
    In 1995, local calls were more than 70 billion minutes, which started to increase gradually and to reach a peak of 90 million minutes in 1998, and then to decreased to 70 billion minutes in 2002.
    At the beginning, the number of people that spent time on the national and international fixed lined were 40 billion minutes and this number risead near 70 billions minutes in 2002.
    This growth for mobile calls for the first was a few billion in 1995, next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes end of period in 2002.
    Overall, the number people spent time on all three categories at the beginning started to diminish and then these categories were increased.

  • سلام استاد.
    قسمت دوم اسپیکینگ، بعد از سوال 19، حدود 20 سوال هست که شماره نداره و بعد از آن وارد پارت سوم میشه. تکلیف اینبار ما، از سوال 11 تا 20 بوده. میشه توضیح بدین تا کدام سوال رو باید جواب بدیم؟

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      اگر تکلیف تا سوال 20 بوده و تا سوال 19 هم شماره داره تمامش رو ضبط میکنید و در ادامه یکی از اونهایی که شماره نداره.

  • Dear sir,
    I am writing this letter to you regarding your suggestion about a job in one of your restaurants. Since we have met each other at that journey to Iran one week ago, I have thought about your suggestion and kind of job that I am interested in.
    I used to work for a hotel as a chef for 7 years. I cooked traditional Iranian food especially North foods. As my mother is originally from Gilan _ a big state in the North of Iran_ she taught me cooking this kind of foods and I know all the recipes for this traditional foods very well. After I got married and moved to Shiraz, where one of your restaurants is located, I had to change my job, against my wishes.
    I heard about your good name chain restaurants before, and I think you deserve better future. As I know the ropes, if you hire me, I am sure your restaurant will be full of satisfied customers.
    I am looking forward to seeing you.
    Yours faithfully. (174 words)
    Mahnaz Tofigh

  • The internet has significant effects on people lives. Although some people thinks of negative influence, others including me thing of positive impact of internet. This essay will both of these points.(31 words)
    There are Positive impacts of internet on societies. First of all is easier to do research through the internet. In earlier times which technology doesn’t developed students and researchers need to visit different library and university professors to find relevant material to their research topics. Nowadays they just subscribe a website or browsing online to search for their sightly subjects. Secondly communication with family, friends and relatives is faster. The homesick can easily contact their parents, son or daughter online. Different services such as skyp, telegram, imo and whatsapp enable loved ones to communicate in most any part of the globe where internet service available. (105 words)
    There are some negative view on people’s lives. First of all its possible to access personal information by hackers. This can have devastating consequences for a user, especially when the attacker starts targeting important aspects of their lives such as insurance, bank and credit card information. Secondly is abandonment of family. People become insensitive as they are absorbed by the hidden hand of the internet. Technology have provided children with an independence in their communications with family and friends. In previous generations, if children wanted to be in touch with a friend, they had to call them on the home phone which might be answered by a parent.(108 words)
    By way of conclusion internet have some negative and positive impacts on people lives.

  • The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent year.Although some people believe that these changes are positive, others are disagree.I will be discussed both of these views in this essay.33

    Sometimes, the internet can have negative effects. First of all,Internet overuse can lead to sedentary lifestyles. We live in the internet world. An average person spends at least 13 hours online every week. The internet has become so available that we can do it anywhere from work, home, while on holiday, taking a dump, etc.Secondly, Among people who heavy use of platforms was associated with feelings of social isolation. unrealistic portrayals on social media may give people the impression that others are living happier, more connected lives, and this may make users feel more socially isolated in comparison. Another reason is the fact that people sometimes use it to replace physical social interactions.113

    The Internet has some great positive effects.First of all,the Internet and social media provides many benefits to its users. It allows us to keep in touch with friends from high school that we would have lost contact with. It lets us communicate with people on the other side of the world.Secondly,there is a great possibility to earn while working from home.It is now possible to earn online through writing, filling up forms, or even just clicking away on advertisements in the internet. Information is a valuable thing that people are willing to pay. Through advertisements posted online, manufacturers and sellers are able to increase the possibility of having their products purchased.111

    In conclusion,The Internet has some great positive and negative effects on our lives.270

  • internet has altered people behaviors in different ways.although some people think it has had positive effect in their life,some other criticize first group .in this essay both sides will be discussed.(31)

    internet have had positive effect on people lives.first of all it has had a huge effect on internet marketing.in this days companies and self employees all around the world can introduce their provides and services by advertising them on their websites or social media to find new customers out of their cities and expand their business. people also can pay for received product by online payments.secondly internet has provided easy access to information.there are lots of internet books that you can purchase online and read them.there are lots of remote classes that you can register and learn about every thing you like.also you don’t need to buy newspapers every days,for example you can to subscribe in a news agency and receive last news every day.(128)

    there is also some negatives effect on people behavior.first of all people don’t visit each others in real life and they prefer to visit each other on messaging applications like Skype and other software and it has made a gap between relatives.also people make friendship without any mental background and it is sometimes dangerous because as soon as they visiting each other they would be disappointed. secondly some people spend too much time on social media.it has some negative effects on their body structure and it is cause of overweight in people most of all teenagers because they need to be more active and allocate much time to real life.(108)

    in conclusion,internet has had lot of positive and negative effects in people behaviors and their lives,and its depend on that way they are using it.and i think it is more positive for modern life.(36)

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  • Recently, the growth of the internet has been spectacular. There are a big challenge between two group of people in the world. Some people believe that this phenomenon causes many benefits, I agree with this point of view. Some people are completely disagree. (40 words)

    There are numerous drawbacks that the development of the Internet has caused. First of all, Internet users spending almost their time on interacting with each other and also losing their abilities to communicate with other persons in reality. In addition, many people worry about the negative influence. They believe not all of the information available on the Internet is helpful, and also media exert a negative effect on children and young people. There is particular concern about depictions of violence in the media.(82 words)

    On the other hand, Social media is a phenomenon that has transformed the communication of individuals throughout the world. Firstly, social networking websites are very popular and have become daily practice in a lot of people’s lives. It also cause to create new business opportunities. Secondly, the internet keeps almost the information in the world available and easy. In the earlier time, we had to find many information in the library and stepped in a thousand of books. We can Revolutionize our knowledge everywhere with internet.(86 words)

    I agree with second group because, joining to global network could provide opportunities to meet people with multicultural backgrounds and sharing of knowledge and information among the different groups of people.(30 words)

    In conclusion, Although more the information available in the internet is helpful, but there are some offence and dangerous materials, we should regard this subject.(30 words)

    Total=270 words.

  • The Internet has changed our lifestyle over the past few decades. Although most of people around the world get benefit this huge revolution, but there is some disagreement about positive or negative impacts of the Internet. In this essay both side will be discussed. (44 words)
    First of all, it is an udeniable fact that the speed of accessing to data is very useful for human life. In earlier years exchanging of information was prominent for a few jobs and occupations rather than the other ordinary people, but in age of communacation all people need this technology. Secondly, the way of marketing has alterned and it is completely depends on Internet connection. This way of marketing is positive side of Internet because many goods or services are simply available to the general public without spending too much time and can be received at the click of buttom. (101 words)
    On the other hand Internet has some negative points. First of all, There are many people who spend too much time on the Internet or communicate with others by a hard and souless device rather than relating to people who lives in the real world. So a phenomenon has occurred to the society and that is nothing except social isolation. Secondly, loosing or hacking data, especially private information by people who benefits from confidential life of others, are negative points of this kind of technology. Alhough all banks, companies or government’s data is very important, but public people do not have any arrangements for avoiding this matter. (107 words)
    In conclusion, regardless of negtive or positive points of Internet, life without the Internet is not imaginable for all the world and the overall influence of this technology is positive. (30 words)

  • سلام استاد
    ببخشید کتاب رایتینگ دکتر معمارزاده رو بخونم یا خیر ؟

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      دزود به شما

      خیر به هیچ وجه.

      بجز منابع معرفی شده از هیچ کتابی استفاده نفرمایید. در پایان دوره منابع تکمیلی معرفی میشه که البته کتابی که فرمودید به هیچ عنوان در بین اونها نیست.

  • سلام استاد وقتتون بخیر .مطالب کلاس در اسکایپ مربوط به جلسات چهارم و قبل تر حذف شده؟

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      درود.

      مطالب اسکایپ ملاک ما نیست. فایل های صوتی داخل تلگرام و مطالب داخل سایت تنها موارد مد نظر ما هست. ممکنه پاک شده باشه من چک نکردم. اهمیتی نداره.

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  • The line graph represent the weekly time of school children at the age of 10 to 11 expended time on TV and computers at home. 25
    School children spent less than 4 hours a week on computer at the beginnig of chart in 2000.the Next a constant went up in 2001 and then there was increased dramatically between 2001 to 2004. After that it had a slight growth between 2004 and the present time.49
    time spent on TV began with more significant time in 2000. It started with the highest time about 21 hours and it remained steady between 2000 and 2003. It had a sharp plummetted from 2003 to 2004. There was a plateau in 2004 and it countinued to 2005. It showed a fluctuation and after that it is remained steady to the present. 62
    Overall, it reflects that children preference’s changed and they spent time with computer more than TV during 9 years. 19

  • درود به استاد عزیز
    اخرین لینک که در تلگرام گذاشته اید صفحه کلاس اسفند ماه باز میشود

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      درود و سپاس از شما

      بله متاسفانه اشتباه وارد کرده بودم.

  • A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking differences between the average weekly hours were spent on computer and TV at home by 10 to 11 years old school students during the period from 2000 to 2008. (38)

    Starting from 21 in 2000 and having a stability period for the next three years, spent time on TV then declined to 15 in 2004. Regardless of a fluctuation, it remained nearly at the same level as before until 2008. (40)

    The computer usage time, meanwhile, started from a bottom of 4 hours a week in 2000, before increasing significantly to 15 in 2004 – when TV and computer reached the same number. The following four years saw a steady rise in this rate, to somewhere in the vicinity of a peak of 22 in 2008. (54)

    Overall, it is evident that computer attracted more admiration and had an approximately six-fold increase in its average time, while, TV’s popularity decreased by one third. (26)

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      لطفا هرگز یک رایتینگ رو دو بار نفرستید.
      فیدبک این رایتینگ قبلا ارسال شده.

      • سلام.
        قبلا گفته شده بود بعد از فیدبک اول اگر اصلاح کردید (خوبه که اصلاح کنید) می تونید بفرستید ولی دوباره فیدبک نمی گیره.

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  • The above linear graph, indicates average time of two different leisure activities, watching TV and working on computer, which spent by schoolchildren per week from 2000 to 2008. (28)
    According to the times of watching TV, it went down slowly in this period. It began at about 21 hours a day in 2000 and maintained its position until 2003. After that, it fell to 15 hours in 2004. Despite the fluctuations, it was stabled up to the end of this period in 2008. (55)
    On the other hand, schoolchildren spent approximately 3 hours a week on computer at the beginning of this research in 2000. However, the chart illustrated that the curve increased steadily to about 15 hours in 2004. Afterwards, it kept increasing in more slowly speed to peak of almost 22 hours in a week. (53)
    Overall, at the beginning of this period in 2000, watching TV was most popular home activity for the first 4 years, declined steadily, and it was replaced by computer from 2004. (31)

  • dear sir

    last week i bought an ADSL router from your shop and your technician installed it and it worked perfectly. but after two days , i had some serious problem with it.for example sometimes it doesn’t work properly and those LED’s turn off and I need to turn device off for a while and turn it on after five minuets.(58)

    it made a huge effect in my business ,because I work online and this problem takes effect on my remote clients and they are always complaining about this disconnection.I usually need to reboot the router and it takes time to start again .sometimes I have to keep my customers waiting for five minutes during this process and I’m losing my clients(61)

    it would be great if you send a technician to resolve these problems and resolve them as soon as possible.
    because I’m so busy for coming to your shop and change this device .maybe you can send a new adsl router for it replacement.please config your device before you send it.(51)

    your faithfully

  • Writing task 1
    Cambidge 12 General
    Test1, task1

    Dear manager,

    I am writing this letter to your company to inform you that my recent shopping was not work properly.
    I bought a lap top from your company yesterday. Your programmer installed all of applications that I need. I examine some important application and it was perfectly alright. However when I started to work at home, an abnormal error was seen. This problem occurs when I want to open an application quickly , then a message appears on the screen and all applications are closed and I have to open each program very slowly.
    This problem is affecting speed of my work and I must deliver my tasks to my Master 2 days later. If I work very slowly, none of my plans not go on, and my boss will not pay my salary.
    I would appreciate if you could send out your programmer to my house to repair softwares. Because I can not spend time to heavy traffic. I believe this matter deserve your attention.
    Looking forward to your prompt action.
    Yours faithfully. (174 words)

  • This graph shows the average hours per week that spend on two different home activities (TV and computer) by children at the age of 10 to 11. (27 words)
    At the beginning of the period in 2000, schoolchildren spend about 21 hours a week on TV. During the first four years, this number remained stable. Between 2003 and 2004, this number had a sudden decline until 15. From 2004 through to the end of the period in 2008, it remained stable with a gentle fluctuation between 2005 and 2006. (60 words)
    Time spent on computer was a lot less than it on TV at the beginning of the period. It was about 3 hours a week in 2000. The period between 2000 and 2004 saw a steady growth in the hours from approximately 3 to 15. Then, during the last four years it had a gradual rise from 15 to almost 22 in 2008. (63 words)
    Overall, it is clear that the time spent on computer shot up dramatically and the hours of watching TV had a gradual decline from 2000 to 2008. (27 words)
    (177 words)

  • The graph shows high school children who spent time on an average of hours over per week on leisure activities (including TV and computer) at home. (28)

    Between 2000 and 2003, the time high school children spent weekly watching TV to stablised , at a average of 21 hours. Then, this figure declined, To hit the low point of 15 hours per week in 2004. After that, from 2004 to next years, regardless of some fluctuation, the graph has stabilised at this level. (56)

    , on the other hand, Computer use, indicates beginning in 2000 at under 4 hours a week and then, increased relatively to 15 hours per week in 2004. After that, was countined by a growth which attained almost 22 hours a week by 2008. (44)

    Overall, according to this graph, at the start of the period, watching TV was more popular than computer use, while it was changed by computer in 2008.(28)

    (156 words)

  • The line graph illustrates the hours of two different activities spent at home per week by those who aged 10-11, over the span of 8 years (from 2000 to 2008).
    With regards to the hours of watching TV, it began at around 21 hours in 2000 and maintained the same level for three years. In the following year, it went down dramatically to 15 hours and then there was a fluctuated plateau to just over 14 hours in the final years.
    On the other hand, only approximately 3 hours was spent using computers at the beginning of the period given. However, the figure experienced a significant increase by 12 hours from 2001 to 2004. Afterwards, it rose more slowly and reached a high of nearly 22 hours in 2008.
    Overall, the hours of watching TV, which was the most popular home activity at the start of the period, declined steadily, while it was replaced by computers in the last 4 years.

  • درود به استاد عزیز
    احتراما آیا این امکان وجود داره که فیدبک های داده شده از طرف شما به طور اتوماتیک یک نسخه در ایمیلی که درج شده از طرف دانش آموز فرستاده شود.

    سپاس

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      درود به شما

      خیر متاسفانه چنین امکانی وجود ندارد. اولویت ما ارسال فیدبکی با کیفیت بالا بر روی رایتینگ های تعیین شده و ارسالی زبان آموزان هست.

      گرچه فیدبک ها هرگز پاک نمیشوند، میتونید بعد از دریافت بصورت فایل تصویری فیدبک ها رو ذخیره بفرمایید.

  • Task 1 Academic

    A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking differences between the average weekly spent hours on computer and TV at home by 10 to 11 years old school students during the period from 2000 to 2008. It is evident that computer had an approximately six-fold increase in its average time (3.5-22), while, TV’s popularity decreased with a 6 hours drop per week (21-15). (66)

    Starting from 21 in 2000 and having a stability period for the next three years, spent time on TV then declined to 15 in 2004. Regardless of a fluctuation, it remained nearly at the same level from 2004 to 2008. (40)

    The computer usage time, meanwhile, started from a bottom of 4 hours a week in 2000, before increasing significantly to 15 in 2004 – when TV and computer reached the same number. The following four years saw a steady rise in this rate, to somewhere in the vicinity of a peak of 22 in 2008. (54)

      • Thanks for your review and feedback.

        I have a question regarding second item in feedback and some more details to mention on first and third items please.

        in “average weekly spent hours on” I wanted to use “spent” as an adjective but not as a past form of verb. can I use it as an adjective or I must use it as a verb?

        for more details regarding overview, after introduction in first sentence of 1st paragraph, I wrote following sentence as an overview: “It is evident that computer had an approximately six-fold increase in its average time (3.5-22), while, TV’s popularity decreased with a 6 hours drop per week (21-15)”

        and last item, “it remained nearly at the same level from 2004 to 2008”. I mentioned the level in its previous sentence: “declined to 15 in 2004”. should I mention it again or just avoid from repetition?

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    تو تکالیف جلسه چهارم نوشتین
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  • Tertiary education can have an enormous impact on everyone’s future life. Although some people prefer future based and more beneficial majors to study at university, others including me believe that choosing interests will be a better decision. Both perspectives will be discussed in this essay. (45)
    There is a correlation between people’s life style and technology. For this reason, many argue that it is essential to study in a more advantageous field specifically related to science and technology. Firstly, a wide range of job opportunities are available in these areas. Each community has its own requirements which may differ from the others. But, a large number of countries have always needed to be innovative in high technology to make life easier for people. Thus some special majors are much in favor with corporations. Secondly, better job positions leads to more earnings for well-trained people. More facilities and services such as profitable amounts of income are provided for those who have competence in areas which businesses mainly require.(120)
    Some other people would rather having a degree in a major that is associated with their talents and interests. Firstly, the ones whose aspiration is to work in careers connected to their desires are more satisfied about themselves. They can gain enough self-confidence in order to play an active role in the society. Secondly, these people are likely to be more energetic and enthusiastic while they cope with the heavy workload. Some researches done on people’s behavior while working have shown that the more an individual has motivation to deal with different responsibilities, the more they will be successful in chosen occupation. (102)
    In conclusion, both arguments are valid but I strongly feel that students should opt to study in a field which fascinates them the most. (24)

  • Education choice factors effects in people life. Although some people believe that students should study whatever they love, others including me think that students allow to study only practical subjects.I will be discussed both of these views in this essay.( 41

    Some people believe that students should educate whatever they wish.First of all, the major field of study has been selected by students bring enthusiasm and motivation for them.Enthusiasm is a divine energy you will feel as a reward for pursuing your dreams and staying on your own path. Secondly,students should be allowed to decide the subjects taught at university so make them feel better.When you study , your body makes chemicals called endorphins.Students discuss the future of the field of study and talk about whatever they love to do and share their emotion with each other.Education allows people to develop their talents to the full.(105

    On the other hand,some people believe that students should study practical science.First of all, they have more opportunities to find and get a job that related to the field of study.Some employees will lose their job in the future because their skills is not useful and nobody will pay money for the impractical task .Secondly,they have a relatively high income after university education.Employer pay money to everybody that solve their problems and improve business and organization by technical knowledge.Government provide them by financial assistance to stop immigration to another countries.If they lose their jobs there are some opportunity to get another jobs.(102

    In conclusion, I believe university students should study only useful subjects. However others believe they should be free to choose whatever they like.(270

  • Whatever they like
    #more enthusiasm
    #feeling better

    Useful for future
    #better job
    #more income

    people around the world often looking for the best major for studying.although some people like to follow their heart,some others prefer to find a major to earn more benefits in the future.in this essay both sides will be discussed.(40)

    first group think that they are enthusiastic about a likable study filed.first of all they like to spend time to learn more and more about this filed and expand their knowledge and share it with their classmates.they wake up everyday intensively and study like a fun activity without any Boredom.secondly they are happy about what they study .this help them to spend more time to be better and better and they don’t feel boring and this help them to make more progress in their way.also they can visit some student like themselves who are passionate about this common major. so they feel positive about what they do.(107)

    another people believe different and prefer to study a major suitable for the future.first of all,if you choose an industrial major you have more opportunities to find a better job because huge companies are looking for educated employees to update their process of making products for today’s world .they also need to expand their branches to make more money and be able to stay in market.secondly a popular major help you to make progress in you career .so you can make more money because most of companies pay more salary to their stuff who graduated in their related filed and can help company to grow up and earn more income.(111)

    In conclusion,some student believe they must follow a major related to future market and other group including me believe the we must follow our heart and study what we love.(31)

  • choosing a major for studying is the one of the most challenging decisions that everyone could make
    درود استاد در جمله بالا میتونیم به جای could از can استفاده بشه؟دلیل استفاده ازcould رو میخواستم بدونم متشکرم

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  • University education

    One of the most effective choice in our life is choosing the major of university education. Although some people are agree with choices based on whatever students like to study,others including me believe studying science majors should be more useful.both views and my opinion will be discussed in this essay. 52
    Some people assume that students should study whatever they like. First of all, students have more enthusiasm in their education. So they are delight in spending time with their lessons book, because they enjoy of studying lessons which they are interested to know more about without any frustration. Actually in this way student attempt to achieve their future desire more. Secondly, student feel better and also are more happy of spending time on a major they like. So in this way they actually try to improve their ability and also they want to prove their authority to other people.students who track their interests in education also enjoy of all the adversity and try more to sole their mistake. So they become disappointment rarely. 124
    Other people believe that university education should be useful for future. First of all, students can find better job and also there is more opportunities to work. Governments invest in industrial parts of their country and extend them to make more profit. Therefore students should improve themselves in this field to find a job in factories and popular companies. Secondly, student can have more income. Today countries need professional members to work in their industrial parts of companies. So if students improve their knowledges in these fields they can employe in factories and earn more salary. 96
    In conclusion,some people including me prefer to study a major that is useful for future, however others believe they should be free to study whatever they like. 28

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    Field of study due to many effects on your future is very important. Although, some people suggest that student should study only subjects which are useful in the future. Others, including me, believe that it’s better for everyone to study their favorite fields. This essay will discuss both opinions (49).
    Some individuals believe that students should only study useful academic majors. First of all, they say that useful fields help to people to find a better job, because usually there are many job situations in relation to science and technology, therefore, this subject increase chance of getting the better job. Secondly, they opinion that there is high level of income in useful fields because of people’s needs. Indeed, needs of people are high in related to science and technology area that these needs affect the level of salary. As well, income is higher in these subjects because of dealing with high technology service (103).
    On the other hand, other people opinion that students should study whatever they like. First of all, they believe that study in favorite subjects is accompanied by enthusiasm, thus this enthusiasm will help them to endure hardness in the study and future job, finally due to these interesting and endurance that increase their likelihood of success. Secondly, they say that people with study in their interesting subjects will be have feeling better in the future because they follow their interesting, and they usually don’t regret in the future. Indeed, work for them are more enjoyable. And generally, they will feel that have chosen the right and correct path (108).
    Inconclusion, some people, like me, suggest to study in favorite academic majors, while some others believe that study in useful subjects is better (23).

  • University Education
    Whatever they like
    Useful for future

    Education is an important part of life. Although some people believe all students should study whatever they like, others think students must choose a major for studying that is useful for future. In this essay both of ideas will be discussed. (41 words)

    Students should choose whatever they like. First of all choosing a major that they wish, generate more enthusiasm and this essential matter provide a powerful motivation for them. Definitely anyone who has a strong feeling of interest and enjoyment about doing something, does it as the best way. Secondly when they do something as their wish make them feeling better in their life. It is quite similar to a circle. Without any doubt happy students are more active and more creative in their life. Living happy directly affect their job and when they do their best they will be happier. (100 Words)

    Students should study the subject more useful for future. First of all, during these years people want a special services and only special major and having knowledge can provide this request for them. So there are intelligent students who know this require and choose special fields for studying. When they earn professional knowledge they have more opportunity for finding a good job. Secondly, Working in each professional field cause of earning money. Who have high level of proficiency in work, get what they deserve. The courses like medical or computer engineering that are more beneficial major for society, provide more income. (101 Words)

    In conclusion, choosing a major for studying is one of the important decisions. While someone believe university student should study useful courses. Others including me, believe students should study whatever they like. (32 Words)

  • Today, university education has a positive effect on the quality of human life. Although some people including me believe that education should be based on personal interests. Others, think education needs to select based on how much it is useful in the future. In this essay, both of sides will be discussed. (52 words)
    Some people think students should study whatever they like. First of all, it causes them to have more enthusiasm. Students who are interested in a particular field of the study, try their best to learn it perfectly. Sometimes they get into some difficulties with understanding. But they can eagerly solve the problems. Secondly, students feel better if they study whatever they like. Studying has a key role in their life and enjoy every minute of it. Also, nobody need to worry about their future career because it will be according to their interests. In addition, students think that they should carry out their task and study hard to increase their education level. (112 words)
    Others believe that, it is so important to select university education which will be useful in the future. First of all, students can have a better career prospect. Each country has a thriving industry and needs to develop it. Intelligent students know that and choose their college education based on it. So, these educated students can have a steady job and serve his country to develop its industries. Secondly, students can have a relatively high income. When the need arises in an industrialized country, students who have a related education can get a permanent job and earn good annual salary. So, they can provide more facilities for yourself and their families. (111 words)
    In conclusion, I prefer to study whatever I like but others choose subject that will be useful in the future.

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  • Education:
    Choosing Academic majors in university are important these days. Although, some people believe students should study whatever they like. Others people including me think they should opt majors that will be practical in the future. In this essay, I will discuss both views and my opinion.(44)
    Many people believe students should study in favourite fields. It including some logical reasons, first of all, they are more enthusiastic and motivated. Because the subject of study is very interesting for them. They study for long hours without feeling tired. So, they make an attempt for hard study to receive their goals. Secondly, if students are passionate about their field, they will feel better in the future. It means, they will become more creative with innovitive idea and also they do not feel regret and have more satisfaction in the future because, they choose favourite their field. (96)
    On the other hand, some people have different idea, they express that students should spend their time on practical subjects such as science and technology. First of all, useful fields provide more opportunities job and they won’t have be jobless. So, they can make progress in the future. Secondly, they do not need to worry about their financial future. Because , they have better social situation and society paid more money for professional skills and practical fields. If they could not find a good job they will launch own business and find income.(94)
    In conclusion, I prefer to choice practical fields and useful subjects. However , other people believe they should study whatever they want to become success. (24

  • University education has direct effect on people’s job. Although some people believe you should study whatever you like, others say you should study subjects that are useful for future. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay. (39words)

    Students should study whatevere they like at university. Firstly they have more enthusiasm in field of studying. it provide better motivation for students and have More positive response specially in courses that are hard. when a student have more enthusiasm in the subject that studying, things become so much easier. Secondly they feel better when they study whatevere they like. it create more activity and more purposeful in the way of education. they can boost their happiness while they study. surely happy students tend to be better students. When someone is feeling good about themselves and their life then they are more likely to experience greater creativity and mental clarity as well as better relationships.( 115 words)

    Students should studying the subject more useful for future. First of all they get better job during the changes in technology and science. peoples behivour in purchase and social medias has changed recently. It can be a reason to create new job titles and actually markets are looking for new staffs with new abilities. Secondly they have more income when they study the subject are useful for future. There are big demands in the hot field in different countries for instance during these days markets need to have IT and ICt specialist in their staffs and any subject related to computer. CEO’s of professional firms determine what the hottest jobs are based on supply and demand and choose qualified candidates for the jobs. (124 words)

    In conclusion, I prefer to study whatevere I like, howevere another would like to study subject that are useful for future.

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  • happiest time

    Scientific researchers say: Happiness effect on people’s lifespan directly. Although some people say happiest time is in teenage life, others say it is in adult life. My point will be discussed both in this essay. (35 word)
    Some people say Teenage life is happiest time during human’s life. First of all there are more free time during these days. Teenagers can play sport especially as a profession for their future. It is very particular opportunity to learn a new language so they can practice and do exercise more than others. Secondly At teenage years they spending more time with friends. They can more time to travel a lot with group of friends. Also they can start a team working in a special field. These teams come together for a common purpose. These teams may have a long-term goal for working together or short-term goal such as completing a unit together for some specific skills. (119 words)

    Other people say adult life is happiest time in a person’s life. First of all it is time to start a family. They have better understanding of social issues and well known of the opposite gender feelings. Love is all you need to be happy especially after getting married also people saw a sharp increase in their level of wealth. Secondly you have a career when you adult. Acquiring a new skill or developing an existing one can help improve and maintain our mental well-being also it makes people independent from their families. Those with more active social lives are twice as likely to outlive those who lead solitary lives. (111 words)

  • سلام استاد وقتتون بخیر من نمیتونم فید بک مربوط به رایتینگ ها که به صورت عکس هستن رو ببینم در گوگل کروم هم امتحان کردم ولی نشد

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  • Everybody experience a lot of happy time in their life. Although some people believe that you have the happiest time when you are a teenage, others think an adult has more happy time. Both of sides will be discussed in this essay. (42 words)
    First group believe that a teenager experiences more happy time. First of all, you have more free time in teenage years. You have no responsibility to do something except studying. It means that, it is not necessary for you to find a job or earn money. In addition, you do not worry about provide facilities for yourself. Your parents have provided you with all them. Secondly, you are spending time with your friends. They have same morale with you and your recreations have a same style. Also, your energies are similar to each other and can make yourself good moments. In addition, you can talk easily about different topics with them without embarrassment. (113 words)
    Other group think an adult have the happiest time in his life. First of all, you can start a family. You are a witness to their birthday and grow up and spend most of your time on them, because they give you a reason to live. You love them and good memories with them are made for you. Secondly, you are having a career. You have finished your education and now, you are working in your favorite job. You earn much money a year and can do your favorite activities like traveling, getting married and etc. Also, you get to be a prominent social character and have a beneficial effect on your society. (113 words)

  • Humans seek for happiness in all the stages of their life. Although some individuals believe teenage years are the happiest time, others believe adult lives are even more joyful. In this essay, both the viewpoints will be discussed. (38)

    On one hand, many people argue that adolescents’ lives are packed with countless leisure activities. First of all, teenagers have more free time. They have no responsibilities – or their responsibilities are much less than the older ones – and serious tasks which result in having a lot of spare time. Therefore, they can enjoy playing games, exploring the nature, and having fun all the time. Secondly, the early stage of life is the phase of spending time with friends and the age of friendship. Both the boys and girls have many close friends to share their secrets with them, to create many memorable occasions in different journeys, and to enjoy the life all together. (113)

    On the other hand, some others claim that adults take pleasure in their life even more. First of all, mature individuals start their own family. They fall in love, choose their spouse, and have their sons and daughters. Undoubtedly, falling in love is among the happiest events in everyone’s lifetime and having fun with babies is another joyfulness, thus, everybody has more happiness in this stage of life. Secondly, people start a professional career in adulthood. Either they get employed or start a new business, they can earn more money and social prestige which lead to more acceptance and respect for them in the community. (106)

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    Being happy is one of the most important factors that affect the physical and mental health of the individuals. Although, some people believe that adult person has happier time than younger. Others, like me, think that young people spend more time on happy things than older individuals (47).

    First of all, some people believe that having a career can improve the self-confident and peaceful feeling of people. Therefore, older individuals without any stress and anxiety can spend happy times. having a job also promote the financial strength of people, and they usually have enough money for making good times like travel, concerts, etc. Secondly, older people can start a family, and family can enhance the happy times of life from different ways, one of them is the entrance to the new lifestyle with many new experiences and happiness like romantic actions, dancing together and having a child, etc. In addition, after marriage, the rate of some hormones increase in the body that usually have positive effects on mood and happiness (122).
    On the other hand, some individual says that younger people have more happiness time. First of all, young people have more free time, because they have not usually a job and other responsibilities, and this subject give them more opportunities to have much fun. Even when they are in college/school they are many free times for having a fun. Secondly, young people through the club and school get to know with many people and generally have more friends. Having the more friend allow them to anytime, they can connect to one of them for hobby and fun. Also, by increasing the number of people in a party or other funny activities, the happiness time can be more enjoyable (118).

  • people all around the world try to improve the quality of their life and feel happier.although some people believe that teenager are happier,other think that adult have better situation for happiness. in this essay both of sides will be discussed.(41)
    first group think that teenagers have more free time .first of all ,most of them have no responsibility and do not need to make money by self and their parents support them in financial problems.so it help them to feel free to manage their spare time in way that they want without any concern.secondly they have so many friends that they can spend their free time and have fun and share their idea with them and behave in a informal way with them without any concern to lose them.also they do not need an exact schedule for their routine and their activities .so,they have flexible diary.(107)
    in other hand some people believe that adult have more enjoyable life.first of all they can have a job and make money to buy their needs and they do not need to describe to their parent how they spend that money .also they can manage this budget in many ways like buying a car or a house and feel independently .secondly they can make family and spend time with their partner and children and share their emotional feeling with them.for example The happiness a father feels while playing with his sons and daughters is unimaginable for a teenager.also your spouse is partnership time can help you in difficult situations.(109)

  • It is undoubtedly true that everyone has had a happy time during their lifetime. Although some people believe that teenage years are the most valuable and happiest time spent in one’s life, others feel adult life might be more joyful. In this essay we will discuss both perspectives. (48 words)
    Some people assume that teenagers are most likely in the best stage of their life. Firstly, it is often true that young people have more spare time. Many of them do not have crucial responsibilities which could be challenging and stressful even for adults. The high number of teenagers are probably unemployed. Thus, they might spend their time doing leisure activities. Secondly, most of the time adolescent people are surrounded by their best and more specifically close friends. For instance, girls usually go shopping with other girls in to enjoy themselves. Moreover, some boys do computer games with each other to have more fun. In other words, being young means to have more energy and unleash it with friends around.(120 words)
    Other people might argue that adulthood is the most enjoyable periods of lifetime. Firstly, one of the good points about being adult is that it is possible to start a new family and expand it after a while. As an important factor, many needs to have a partner in order to share fulfilling moments with. Furthermore, having children leads to an objective lifestyle. Secondly, having a career which is related to our skills is a must for an adult. It gives people not only the opportunity to communicate with colleagues and be sociable, but also to be more independent in different aspects of life. As we know, this may happen at the ages of over 18 known as adulthood. (119 words)

  • Happiest time
    It is no boubt reliable that majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. Happiness is difficult to define it means it could be rely on different to each people age. In this essay I want to describe two idea about happinet time for adult life and teenager yeares. (52)
    Nobody can to totally understand a sense of satisfication between these groups. For first reason, it may be associated with the idea of people age, for example, teenager group are supported financially and emotionally by their parents, in other words, they recive some basic preconditions of their parents. And also they have less responsibilities in family, actually they do not have to make a important decision. Secondly, they have more social activites with each other and take more pleasure. In fact, one of the key factor for teenager years could be individual freedom for instance, fall in love and communicate easily.(101)
    On the other hand, some people believe adult course is the happiest time in their life. firs of all, some people have a sense of satisfaction from earning money or achieving success career. Increasing professional skills and earning a lot of experience provide a highly satisfaction feeling for adult life. Secondly, adults have stronger emotional relationships. They enjoy could be spouse, father or mother, and also the majority of people are so happy for spending more time and sharing emotion with their spouse. As a matter of fact, having a family could give them a chance to be happiest.(101)

  • Happiest time:
    The one of challenging context in the world is happiest time or you be happy all time. Although some people believe the teenager years are enjoyable, others prefer the adult life. In this essay, both of them will be discussed.(40 words)
    Teenager years are between 13 and 19 years and this period time you have more free time. Therefore, you can program your time to go movies, gym, club and other places; thus, you can be happy in this period. Those activities can influence your mood and change your feel to have happy time. In this period time, teenager can spend time with their friends; therefore, they have good chance to be happy by friends. Girls or boys friends to be able to increase teenager ‘s courage in order to start new study or improve their progresses. The teenagers can play football, volleyball and etc games with friends and enjoy to their life because exercising can help teenagers have happiest time and be healthy.(123 words)
    Adult life is happiest time because of starting a family and having a career. Adulthood have potential for thinking about marring; therefore, the goal of their life are specified. They can try to achieve their purpose and develop the level of their life; thus, they can enjoy their life. Secondly adults can start or have job. People who have job, they can spend money or buy something; in addition, they go to the travel by their salary. They can purchase car and travel by their cars to other places; thus they enjoy their life. Having a career can influence to expand adult ‘s friendship and then they can improve the level of life by friends for having happiest time.(119 words)

  • happiness is one of the most important factor in human life.Although some people believe that teenagers feel more happy in their period of time,others think that adult life can bring happiness. My points will be discussed in this essay.{39

    Some people believe that they have the best possible chance of happiness during in their teenage years. First of all, teenagers have more free time than adults to do what they love. Young people need their parents’ permission to live in their parents’ home till they get a job. Their parents support and expect them to be one of the best students in their class.Secondly, young people have more opportunity to spending a lot of time with friends. They generally share their emotional experiences and have opportunity to talk abut dreams with their friends. They explain that how they can set targets and achieve their goals.106

    Some other people believe that adult life is happiest time in their life.First of all, research consistently shows that marriage and long-term relationships are good for your physical, mental and financial health. Married people tend to smoke less, drink less alcohol, and eat more healthily. Social roles that can give husbands and wives a stronger sense of their own identities.Secondly, Many people think that having a career will bring them lots of happiness.Recent researches have shown that a good job can be better for your mental health because you can solve maney problems.Salary and happiness suggests that satisfaction with life does increase with salary.104

  • Erfan tabatabaee
    کلاس جمعه ها
    Im not very religious but i do go to church at wester
    I choose to learn english rather than spanish
    He is birde groom
    I started to get anxios they had not arrived at 9 oclock
    Jordan had very energy in the basketball

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      لطفا اسمتون رو در بالا در بخش مربوط به نام وارد بفرمایید.

  • Im not very religious but i do go to church at wester
    I choose to learn english rather than spanish
    He is birde groom
    I started to get anxios they had not arrived at 9 oclock
    Jordan had very energy in the basketball

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    فیدبک های کلاس شما از ۴ شنبه هر هفته ارسال میشه که سری قبلی کامل فیدبک گرفته

    اگر تایمی باشه چند تایی زودتر فیدبک میگیره ولی این هفته فشار خیلی زیاد بوده. رایتینگ ها در نوبت هست

  • استاد سلام. اميدوارم حالتون خوب باشه.
    يه سوالي داشتم از خدمتتون.
    براي اسپيكينگ اگر يه چهارچوب مكتوب داشته باشم كه از لحاظ متن و قواعد روش كار كنم و بعد اونو حفظ كنم ، ايا راه صحيحي هست براي تقويت اسپيكينگ؟
    البته كار راحتي نيست واقعا. متون وقتي زياد ميشه كار سختي ميشه.

  • Happiest time

    During the human life there is happy and sad moments and definitely feeling happy is most important for people. Although some people think that the teenagers have the happiest times, others believe that adult life brings more happiness. In this essay I will be explained both ideas. (47 words)

    First of all, those who believe teenagers are the happiest people consider more free time that they have. Young people can do every things as they wish. Even teenagers’ family don’t expect them to spend a lot of time together. Although they care of their child, but they give them individual freedom to enjoy every minutes of free times. Secondly, teenage years are the best years of life that making new friends is very easy and spending time with friends is very pleasant. Getting together, tell a jock, play games or anything like this keep them very happy with a deeply satisfying feeling. (103 words)

    On the other hand, there are people who believe adult hood is the happiest time in one’s life. First of all, an adult person has an opportunity of starting family. It is very important to some adult person get married as soon as possible and share time and emotions with spouses and their children. Therefore having a family give them a chance to be happiest and more pleasant. Secondly, having a job is the most important part of adult life. Earning money from a good career, having a social relationship and a good social condition at work makes a deeply satisfying feeling for adult life. (105 words)

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  • استاد من قبلا فرستادم اینو ولی حذف شده. دوباره می نویسم رایتینگ جلسه اول رو:

    Do you prefer to live in a big city or small town?

    There are better situation for job in a large city. First of all there are more level of salary in a big city because there are more companies and organization and it caused better situation for their employees in terms of salary. Secondly there are more companies and factories in a big city rather than small town it caused better environment for find job. There are big demand to Recruitment around a big city. It has more chances to find job opportunities compare with those in small town. Thus, younger people can register to these industrial places to find their appropriate jobs and it reflects the practical experience they have gained. (111 words)

    There are also more facilities and services in a big city. First of all, there are more support from government in a big city. There are several types of public transportation; thus, people are able to move from one place to other place in a fraction of minutes. In addition it is not also necessary for young students to travel to other cities or abroad to continue their education; they can study in their own university and college, if they live in big cities. Secondly there are more population in a big city. Different people with diverse traditional backgrounds and cultures live close to each other. Therefore, settlers have the chances to get accustomed with unknown customs and cultures. (119 words)

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      درود. صد ها نفر در هفته رایتینگ ارسال میکنند و حتی 1 مورد حذف هم نداریم. بدون شک رایتینگ شما ارسال نشده بوده.

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        بررسی کردم ارسال شده و فیدبک هم امروز گرفت.

  • Sajjad Gh    Sajjad Gh

    با سلام
    برای نوشتن رایتینگ باید زمان بگیریم؟ چقد باید روش وقت بزاریم.

    کلاس فقط جمعه ها. بهمن ماه

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      درود.

      البته این مورد رو در کلاس کامل صحبت کردیم.

      تا 1 ماه مونده به امتحان این زمان باید حدود 3 تا 4 ساعت باشد چون همراه با تحقیق و جستجوی اینترنتی و جستجو در دیکشنری خواهد بود.
      از یک ماه مونده به آزمون باید کوشش کنید در حدود 1 ساعت رایتینگ رو تموم کنید و هفته به هفته کوشش کنید این تایم رو به 40 دقیقه برسونید.

  • نمونه اصلاح شده رايتينگ بعد از فيدبك
    Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?
    As we know, big cities provide better situation for job in comparison with small town. First of all, employees in the big cities get higher salary than the other people who work in a small town, because there are many big and famous companies that their wages are more. Sometimes people take on extra work to increase their income. Secondly, there is a huge number of companies and factories. Additionally with the passing of time the number and variety of factories increases. These organizations need people to work in, so many people who are out of job can have a job.(114)

    There are also more facilities and services in a big city such as education and transportation. First of all, governments around the world mainly concentrate on big cities and they allocate more budget to large cities and their companies.almost all of the companies prefer to run their business in developed cities. Secondly a lot of people are crossing over the city all day long and a large proportion of people live in the city. As a matter of fact each person has special interests. So it makes lots of different demands. Businessmen try to provide better services due to popular demand.(102)

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      سپاس. نیازی به ارسال نیست.

  • Do you prefer to live in a big city or small town?

    There are better situation for job in a large city. First of all there are more level of salary in a big city because there are more companies and organization and it caused better situation for their employees in terms of salary. Secondly there are more companies and factories in a big city rather than small town it caused better environment for find job. There are big demand to Recruitment around a big city. It has more chances to find job opportunities compare with those in small town. Thus, younger people can register to these industrial places to find their appropriate jobs and it reflects the practical experience they have gained. (111 words)

    There are also more facilities and services in a big city. First of all, there are more support from government in a big city. There are several types of public transportation; thus, people are able to move from one place to other place in a fraction of minutes. In addition it is not also necessary for young students to travel to other cities or abroad to continue their education; they can study in their own university and college, if they live in big cities. Secondly there are more population in a big city. Different people with diverse traditional backgrounds and cultures live close to each other. Therefore, settlers have the chances to get accustomed with unknown customs and cultures. (119 words)

  • عرفان طباطبایی کلاس جمعه ها
    اقای ابوالقاسمی اشکالات جملات رایتینگ من کجا بود؟

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      درود.

      در زیر رایتینگ شما بصورت فیدبک درج میشه.

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  • Sajjad Gh    Sajjad Gh

    He runs roughly 10 miles every day.

    Reading the chapter 1 lasted (went on) about 4 minutes

    Tehran derby is the most spectator game in Iran super league

    The building was originally used as a prison.

    I and my parents are alike in behavioral characteristics

    For your convenience, we provide for you a credit card

    My home is a two story apartment.

    I look just like my father.

  • The name of Allah
    Big city beaccuse: big situation and is important university and the best chance for different field , for better job or best busines . In the big city has different businees for every people in is important for start to capital city . Of course small city less chance for better job in the big city good salary and for buy house in the big city in the there is mall and mega mall and is beautifull modern view city center
    goverment tower of course in my openine
    Erfan tabatabaee کلاس جمعه ها

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      درود

      لطفا اسمتون رو کامل در بالا وارد کنید

      رایتینگ شما طبق توضیحات و چک لیسن باید 2 پاراگراف باشه هر پاراگراف بین 100 تا 120 واژه

      شما واژگان رو در انتهای هر پاراگراف وارد کنید

  • Sajjad Gh    Sajjad Gh

    I prefer live in big city, because there are better job opportunities in large cities. First of all, there are more companies and factories in big cities, these companies for reach to their goals and for win in competition with other companies need to employ more staff. Secondly, in the big cities there is large companies that these companies can have more profit, thus, they can pay more money for staffs. On the other hands, for win in competition with many other companies, companies had to spend more salary for employees.
    In addition, there are more facilities and services in big cities. First of all, governments usually spend more budget for improvement of facilities and services in large cities and have more supportive rules in progression of companies and factories and therefore these companies can have more quality and quantity products and services. Secondly, presence of more population in large cities resulted in more demand, with increasing the demand the new companies can be create, thus with increasing the companies, competition for production of high quality services increase and this competition improve quality of goods and services.

  • Present simple:
    1. I go to university twice a week.
    2. I never have dinner.
    3. I prefer to wake up early.
    4. I usually sleep by mid night
    5. Do you drink coffee?

    Present Continuous:
    1. I am doing my homework.
    2. I am always drinking tea.
    3. He’s not going to school.
    4. The train is arriving tonight.
    5. What is your brother doing?

    Past simple:
    1. My son won the match last year.
    2. We took a taxi to go home this morning.
    3. My classmate bought a pencil three days ago.
    4. I didn’t like my primary school.
    5. What did she do on last Monday?

    Past continuous:
    1. In the evening, Ali and I were shopping at the supermarket.
    2. It was snowing all the last night.
    3. What were you doing before going to school?
    4. They were talking on their problems.
    5. The old man was always drinking.
    6. His family members were having breakfast yesterday at 6:00 o’clock.

    Multiple:
    1. When you saw the dog, it wasn’t barking.
    2. While I was doing my homework, my friend called me.
    3. I was thinking about her while she was traveling.
    4. Sally went to bed after she had dinner.
    5. Where did you go before I came to you?

  • سلام استاد..یه سوال در مورد tactics for listening basic یونیت 1 لیستنیگ 2 قسمت 3

    برای رزرو کردن میز مسئول رستوران میگه: we do have a table for four at 7:00

    سوال این که چرا از do استفاده میکنه و نمیگه we have a table for four at 7:00
    چون تو گرامری که ما میخونیم do برای سوالی و منفی باید استفاده بشه

  • The big city has better situation for job rather than small city. First of all, you have more salary because of the big city has many opportunities for increasing your expertise. Therefore you can perform many duties and then you bring up your salary. Secondly, in big city exists many companies and factories. Therefore, you have better chance to have good job, even, you can select your favorite job and find your job interests.
    The big city has more facilities and services to camper with small city. First of all, the government in the big city have to get good services to the big city’s people. The big cities have high importance in the politics and economy. Therefore, the government should have more attention to the services. Secondly, the big cities have more population. Thus, improving the services and facilities are inevitable. There are high level transportation and communication services in big city.

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      درود.

      طبق توضیحات و چک لیست پاراگراف های اصلی نباید زیر 100 واژه باشه.

  • The main argument for living in big cities is that more facilities have been provided for people. Firstly, governments tend to supply more services for the people who live in a large city. For instance, many business companies which are mostly located in urban areas are able to request financial aid from the government without much effort in order to expand their work line.
    Secondly, population growth occurs extensively in large cities, thus public facilities has to be able to meet people’s demand. Added to that, a wide range of people’s interests leads the community to provide different types of services to satisfy most requirements. Accordingly, it might be more beneficial to live in big cities rather than small towns. (120 words)
    One more good argument can be made for choosing big cities to live in. It should be noted that there are a number of job situations available. Firstly, as we mentioned above, it seems to be easier for most companies and corporations to run their business in developed cities which have been facilitated in greater areas. Therefore, people can have a variety of options to choose from.
    Secondly, more job opportunities contribute to higher levels of income. Since people have many choices to find a job in larger cities, they generally opt to work in places offering better job positions and conditions particularly higher salaries. For this reason, employers need to persuade well-informed people by suggesting profitable amount of money. (120 words)

  • سلام استاد ببخشید من می تونم رایتینگم رو اصلاح کنم و دوباره بفرستم. خیلی وقتتون رو نمی گیرم، فقط اینکه اگه ممکنه بگید خوبه یا نه . اگر هم نمی شه مشکلی نیست

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      درود

      اگر اصلاح بعد از فیدبک منطورتون هست خیر نیازی نیست

  • Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?
    As we know, big cities provide better situation for job in comparison with small town. First of all, employees in the big cities get higher salary than the other people who works in a small town, because there are many big and famous companies that their wages are more. Sometimes people take on extra work to increase their income. Secondly, there is a huge number of companies and factories. Additionally with the passing of time the number and variety of factories become more and more. These organizations need people to work in, so many people who are out of job can find employment.(114)

    There are also more facilities and services in a big city such as education and transportation. First of all, governments around the world mainly concentrate in big cities and they allocate more budget to large cities and their companies. By the way people can find a job with a suitable income and good opportunity. Secondly a lot of people are crossing over the city all day long and a large proportion of people live in the city. As a matter of fact each person has special interests. So it makes lots of different demands. Businessmans try to provide better services due to popular demand.(103)

  • Big city or small town
    Big cities provide better situation for job in compare with small town. First of all, companies and factories pay more salary to their employees because the employees of factories produce more materials, goods and so on, and the people who work in companies try to sell or give good services to the other people. So it provides good benefits for factories and companies. Secondly there are more companies and factories in a big city compare with a small town. Each company and factory needs special skills so the people who live in a big city have more opportunity to find a good job that is related to their skills.(109 words)

    Big cities also provide more facilities and services compared with small town. First of all, the people who live in a big city have more facilities such as transportation, security, good education system, great treatment and so on. So the government has to support and provide more services for a big city to satisfy the people. Secondly, big cities have large population that most of them have immigrated from small town or cities to this big place. So they expet having high quality services. Since each person has different idea then they can find every thing match with their requests in a big city. (104 words)

  • درود خدمت استاد
    سپاس از زحمات شما
    احتراما بنده جمله ها را در گوگل اسکالر سرچ میکنم ولی باز هم در پیدا کردن جمله درست مشکل دارم . در صورت امکان راهنمایی بفرمایید .

    سپاس از شما.

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      بدون شک باید در سطح پایین تر که مطمئن هستید درست هست بنویسید. دراینجا هم میتونید هر تعداد جمله بخواین بنویسید برای دریافت درست اون جمله ها البته باید به انگلیسی باشه نه فارسی

  • Big city provide better situation for job campare to small town. First of all, there are more companies in a big city and a strong relationship between universities and companies, that eventually lots of capable stuff can work in them. Secondly, there is more competion between well mannered and educated stuff for expressing new ideas and thoughts. As a matter of fact, large companies have been provided to progress for everybody. Because, large companies offer a lot of salary to their workers and encouragement to get the better. After all, every person knows better situation would be better of in the future. (101)

    Another advantage of big cities is more facilities and service. First of all, more financial support and large investment can be provided always by government. In fact, it is a direct effect between international and national business and also financial assistance. At the result, provide better job opportunities. Secondly, big cities have more populations. Thousands of people live in big cities and also need to more services. In other words, more population increasing demand for higher quality. For instance, medical service, public transportion, recreational and shopping centers. According to this, government have to provide a number of need of people for satisfaction them.(103)

  • استاد معذرت میخوام، من رایتینگ رو یکشنبه شب در این صفحه وارد کرده ام. دو سه تا سوال دیگر رو هم مطرح کرده ام که پاسخی نگرفتم! شما فرمودین احتمالا سایت رو اشتباه رفتم! منطقیه بنظرتون؟

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      درود

      امروز 3 شنبه هست و از جلسه اول روز جمعه شما 4 روز گذشته.

      شما در این 4 روز 13 کامنت در این صفحه درج کردید. 13 کامنت در 4 روز! از این 13 مورد به 4 مورد پاسخ کامل داده شده و چند مورد هم بررسی شده ولی پاسخی داده نشده چون کلا بخش واژگان اگر مشکلی نداشته باشد کامنتی گذاشته نمیشود.

      تقریبا تمامی پرسش های شما در جلسه اول توضیح داده شده و اصولا نیازی به طرح پرسش نبوده کمااینکه هیچیک از دوستان دیگر پرسشی در این زمینه نداشتند و ضمنا در هر زمان میتونید فایل صوتی تمامی جلسات رو هر زمان دوست داشته باشید بازبینی و مرور بفرماید.

      با وجود فعالیت بسیار زیاد شما در صفحه کلاس همچنان رایتینگ رو کامل و درست ارسال نکردید و حتی به نمونه های دیگران نگاه نکردید تا متوجه کلیت داستان بشید. با اینمه تاکید کردیم اولویت ما همیشه رایتینگ و ویس ها هستند.

      اولویت زمان ما با دوستانی هست که رایتینگ و ویس ارسال میکنند و هرگز تایم تصحیح و فیدبک رایتینگ یک زبان آموز را به پاسخدهی به سوالات تکراری بچه های دیگه نخواهیم داد. خود شما هم راضی نیستید رایتینگ شما فیدبک دریاف نکنه و به سوالات دیگران(که پاسخ اونها هم آشکار هست و هم با مراجعه به توضیحات و تکالیف قابل درک) پاسخ داده بشه.

      شما فرمودید هیچ پاسخی دریافت نکردید. از 13 پرسش شما در 4 روز گذشته 5 پرسش بررسی شده بنابراین کاملا منطقی هست به نظر من.

      در پایان نوبت فیدبک و بررسی کلاس روزهای جمعه از 4 شنبه ها هست معمولا گرچه من تقریبا تمامی رایتینگ ها رو فیدبک دادم تا 3 شنبه.

  • سلام استاد. در صفحه ی مربوط یه آکسفورد وورد اسکیلز، درس 3 و 4 را به دلیل مرتبط نبودن با آیلتس حذف کردید. ولی درس 4 جزو تکالیف ما هست! انجامش بدهیم آیا؟

    • admin    admin

      هر چیزی در فهرست تکایف هست رو انجام بدید. ممنون

  • GRAMMAR

    PRESENT SIMPLE:
    1-we often go out on Friday night.
    2-i don’t usually study at the weekends.
    3-i always work at home
    4-where do you live?

    PRESENT CONTINUOUS:
    1-what are you cooking?
    2-the price of car is rising regulary.
    3-I’m having a great time.(is experiencing)
    4-we’re meeting at 10:00 tomorrow in office.
    5-I’m living on Friday and coming back next day.

    PAST SIMPLE:
    1-we went there in 2002.
    2-i didn’t stay in a hotel.
    3-she got married last year.
    4-What time did you wake up this morning?

    PAST CONTINUOUS:
    1-was it raining when you got up?
    2-what were you doing at 11 o’clock last night?

    MULTIPLE:
    1-you can turn off the tv. i’m not watching it.
    2-last night I fell asleep while I was reading.
    3-listen. Somebody is playing the piano.
    4-the bill rang when I was cooking.
    5-I opened the window because it was hot.
    6-i was speaking with cellphone and surfing on the net.

  • Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

    There are more facilities and services in a big town.First of all, The government has invested a large sum of money in medical care and education . People use the located facilities and services in a big city to increase their creativity and have a better life style.People expect local government to be more responsible for policy on security services.Secondly, big cities have more population than small town so the money has invested in public facilities is logical for government. Increasing population in the big cities has improved the quality of human services. In the big town people have a big chance to meet interesting characters.(106)

    In a big city you have a better situations to get a jobs that relate to your careers.First of all, the salary of employees is higher compare with a small town. The owner businesses take the profits from investment so they pay their worker very well. After work you can have second job and increase your income.Secondly, big companies and factories are located in large towns and cities. Workers and employers have big chances to work with famous companies.These companies develop their business every year so they employ new employees and workers for goals of companies.If you do not like your job, you can try to get a new job.(110)

  • سلام. دیکشنری لانگمن که شما معرفی کردید، نسخه ی قابل اجرا در کامپیوتر هم داره؟ اگر داره میشه لطفا لینکش رو بفرستید؟

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      درود. وجود داره. گوگل بفرمایید.

  • End every sentence have stop
    In language english should name with capital letter
    Pouse in the necessary speak
    I didnt understand lesson physics but now i think i got the gist
    After waching the film the students wanted to express
    More motived for learning english
    Eat apples every day effectively in the healthy
    Im enthusiastice for arrive better future
    Im goal achieve advance english
    We usually use quotation marks between sentence
    The letters clark to boss omit headline

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      لطفا بدون اسم وارد نفرمایید که قابل پیگیری باشه.

  • Big city or small town
    Big cities provide better situation for job in compare with small town. First of all there are more companies and factories in a big city so they need more people to work and increase their benefits. Secondly companies and factories pay more salary to their employees because the employees of factories produce more materials, goods and so on, and the people who work in companies try to sell or give good services to the other people. So it provides good benefits for them .(70 words)

    Big cities also provide more facilities and services compared with small town. First of all, big cities have more population that most of them immigrated from small town or cities to this big place. Secondly, they need facilities such as transportation, safety, good teaching system, great treatment and so on. So the government support and provide more services for such a big population.(55 words)

  • سلام. رایتینگ در همین صفحه وارد شود؟

  • سلام به همگی دوستان
    کسانی که به هر دلیل نمیتونن دیکشنری لانگمن رو نصب کنن (مثلا آیفون دارن)
    میتونن از سایت زیر به سایت لانگمن وصل شده و کلمه مورد نظر خودشون رو سرچ کنن.
    همه امکانات نرم افزار در این سایت موجود هستش.
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  • استاد، وقتی پاسخی دریافت نمیکنیم در دیدگاه ها، یعنی خوب انجام شده؟

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      بله مشکل خاصی نباشه پیامی ارسال نمیشه. فقط خطاها گوشزد میشه

  • سلام.
    من دو ماه پیش ایلتس اکادمیک دادم و 6 گرفتم. (W5, R6, S6, L7.5) حداقل 7 احتیاج دارم. از کجا شروع کنم موادی رو که معرفی کردید و چطور برنامه ریزی کنم.
    تشکر

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      درود.

      تمامی منابع باید همسان باشند بجز کتاب های زیر
      Tactics نیازی نیست
      Select Readings از سطح اینترمدیت استارت بزنید و روی سرعت خواندن کار کنید. همزمان کتاب اسنشیال وردز آیلتس رو هم استارت بزنید.
      Real انجام ندید و بجاش با کتاب اوپن فورم 3 کار کنید
      نیازی به تست زدن نیست تا دست کم 2 جلسه دیگه

      • سلام
        متاسفانه کتاب Open Forum 3 رو نتونستم تو سایت پیدا کنم برای دانلود و همینطور دیکشنری American Wordpower رو. اگه میشه راهنمایی بفرمایید.

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          درود

          بله گویا این کتاب رو نداریم. باید زحمت بکشید گوگل کنید یا اگر نبود بخرید. 100% منابع رو برای دانلود نداریم. حدود 2 % باید خریداری بشوند.

  • استاد، مثالهای مربوط به لغات آخر کتاب تاکتیک فور لیسنینگ رو لازم نیست در سایت بنویسیم؟

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      درود.

      اگر زمان داری این کار رو بکن ولی برای لغت تمرکز شما روی کتاب آکسفرد باشه
      oxford Word Skills

  • سلام ببخشید در مورد اشکالات من ممنون می شم بیشتر توضیح بدین

    • admin    admin

      درود.

      توضیح کامل و دقیق درباره اشتباه شما دادم. لطفا هرچه سریعتر با سطح مقدماتی و به شیوه ای که در فایل صوتی راهنما توضیح داده شده کار رو استارت بزنید تا فیدبک ارایه بشه بهتون. زمان ارزشمند رو از دست ندید

  • Select Readings- Elementary- chapter 5
    Solar: In future we have to use solar energy.
    Shade: We are going to find some shade in this sunny road.
    Waste: I always ask my husband not to waste his time by serving the net.
    Company: There are many companies in Tehran that they don’t pay task.
    Energy: He was full of energy in the morning but he looks tired at the moment.
    Power: My cellphone seems out of power.
    Resource: My teacher introduced me many resources for learning English.
    Success: They are proud of their several success.
    Bring: My dog brings me his ball to shoot it for him.
    Another: This shirt is too small. Can I try another one?
    Cool: He ate a cool food but he didn’t nag not at all.
    Narrow: Our street is too narrow so it is very difficult for truks to pass.
    Possible: I have to do my homeworks as soon as possible. Because I’m going to go trip next day.
    Tired: Todays I’m quite tired so I can sleep for hours.
    Forever: My sister left us forever.
    In fact: My dreams will not in fact happen.

    • با سلام. پاسخ ها در صفحه ی مربوطه کپی شد.
      ممنونم از راهنماییتون

    • admin    admin

      درود

      جمله های اشتباه هستند. نمونه های درست آورده شده

      دقت بفرمایید به خطاهای دیکته ای توجه زیادی داشته باشید.

      جمله های شما دقیقا بر پایه جمله های دیکشننری باشد. حتما یک جمله از دیکشنری حفظ کنید.

      Waste: I always ask my husband not to waste his time by serving the net.
      Waste: I always ask my husband not to waste his time by surfing the net.
      Company: There are many companies in Tehran that they don’t pay task.
      Company: There are many companies in Tehran that they don’t pay tax.
      Power: My cellphone seems out of power.
      Power: My cell phone seems to be out of power.
      Success: They are proud of their several success.
      Success: They are proud of their success.
      Cool: He ate a cool food but he didn’t nag not at all.
      این واژه باید درباره آب و هوا به کار گرفته شود. برای غذا نادرست هست.
      Possible: I have to do my homeworks as soon as possible. Because I’m going to go trip next day.Possible: I have to do my homeworks as soon as possible. Because I’m going to go on a trip next day.

  • عذر خواهی میکنم. در دیدگاه قبلی به اشتباه chapter 2 نوشتم. مربوط به chapter 3 هست.

  • Select Readings- Elementary- chapter 2
    Convenience: We use technology for our convevience.
    Guest: I invited 10 gusets for my son’s birthday.
    Emergency room: The emergency room of hospital in my city is very busy.
    Stories: Although he is rich but he lives in a two stories house.
    Building: The engineers damage many buildings to build high way.
    Floor: I moved from first floor to second floor.
    Garden: There were many trees in my garden’s friend.
    Lake: There is a biggest lake in Iran named Khazar.
    Place: This is a pleasant place to live.
    Seat: Is there any empty seat in this class?
    Type: There are many type of fruit in my country.
    View: From the top of Milad tower Tehran has a good view.
    Build: My son builds a beautiful park places for his cars.
    Own: My brother-in-law owns 3 cars.
    Beautiful: She was very beautiful in her wedding anniversary.
    Expensive: He buys expensive shoes for his wife.
    Simple: I always cook a simple food for my gusts.
    Special: Someone likes to wear special clothes.
    Close: She tells me all her secrets because we are closed friends.

  • Select Readings- Elementary- chapter 1
    Approximately: My son plays football approximately 1 hours in a day.
    Mainly: Free dogs live mainly in empty ground of Pardis.
    Roughly: I study English roughly 4 hours in a day.
    Goes on: My IELTS exam goes on 4 hours.
    Similar: The apartments in Pardis called Maskan_E_Mehr build similar.
    Fun: We have lots of fun in the past years.
    Game: Sometimes people play the game called Pantomim.
    Percent: In Tehran people have Pride automobile roughly 70 percent.
    Player: I recognize all of football players.
    Rule: The ruls of driving are similar to all countries.
    Different: Men and women are very different in terms of ideas.
    Feeding: Feeding free dogs and birds is very important to me.
    Popular: Ghorme Sabzi is a popular food for Iranian.
    Professional: DR. Samiee is a professional surgery.
    Top: My dog is a top footballist!!!
    About: I’m retired about 3 years ago.
    Especially: I always smoke especially after dinkink tea or coffee.

  • استاد سلام.
    من باتوجه به اينكه بريتيش اكسنت رو دنبال ميكنم بجز tactics for listening منبع جايگزين ديگه اي رو ميتونم كار كنم براي listening?

    • admin    admin

      درود.

      مزیت های بزرگ کتاب تکتیکس باعث شده این کتاب در فهرست شما جا داشته باشد. تاثیر لهجه بسیار کمتر از چیزی هست که تصور میکنید و برتری های کتاب تکتیس خیلی زیاد هست.

      به هیچ وجه هیچ منبعی رو با چیز دیگه جابجا نکنید در غیر این صورت شاهد کاهش چشمگیری در نمره مهارت مربوطه خواهید بود.

  • big cities offer more opportunities for having a better job.
    first of all,huge companies is built in big cities and
    they need to have big amount of staff to stay top in the market
    and extend their business and provide new products and present new services.
    they need a wide variety of worker with different capabilities and knowledge
    secondly companies and factories in big cities have financial activities.they usually export
    their products extremely to another cities and countries ,so they can make a lots of money
    and this outcome helps them to
    pay more to their employees who try harder and deserve better salary
    and make them satisfied about what they do.(113)

    big cities also have more facilities and services for their people.
    first of all, government for political reasons support big cities and they give more
    budget to different parts of the society to satisfy citizens for example help companies to grow up and make
    new job opportunities for people
    secondly big cities have more population and need more attention to have
    more facilities and services like medical services,shopping centers ,entertainment places like cinema and parks and restaurant
    and suitable universities and school for hundred or thousand student,
    and public transport must can cover population density and variety of people needs.(101)

  • رضا    رضا

    با سلام. عکس مربوط به تکالیف جلسه اول با تماما مرورگرها چک کردم باز نمیشه.

    • admin    admin

      درود. این عکس کوچکترین مشکلی ندارد و بیش از 100 زبان آموزان با همی میتن سایت و با همین سیستم کوچکترین مشکلی گزارش نکرده اند. من نشانی تصویر رو در همین کامنت منتشر میکنم میتونید بررسی بفرمایید.

      https://download.ielts2.com/962FBAssignment1stSession.jpg

  • ببخشید، صفحه مناسب برای کتاب پری اینترمدیت پیدا نکردم. مجبور شدم اینجا بگذارم، خودتون فرموده بودید برای من سلکت ردینگ نیازی نیست اما من سطح پری اینترمدیت رو دوست داشتم بخونم.
    CPT1:
    Expriment: he had designed an experiment and secessful.
    Effects of sleplessness: this project about sleeplessness and effect on body.
    A counting test: in my city we got stuck in traffic and it’s bothering me, for that I and traffic light start counting.
    Fur: for air pollution, a lot of people start losing fur.
    Eventually: I try again and eventually, I pass the exam.
    For sure: I don’t it’s true for sure.
    Replenish: sport and enough sleep make me replenish.
    Pass through: after this stages, we pass through another stage.
    CPT2:
    Homestay: I had amuzing homestay in London when I was a student.
    All alone: in boarding school, I annoyed about being all alone.
    Warm welcome: their ware welcome make me feel happy.
    Pub: at the weekend, some person go to favourit pub to spend their time.
    Points: it’s an important point and never forget them.
    Impression: my first impression of Alexander was that he was much smaller than me.

    • admin    admin

      درود.

      پیشنهاد من این هست بخاطر شمار بسیار بالای خطاها از همون سطح المنتری استارت بزنید.

      ضمنا طبق توضیحی که در فایل صوتی داده شده میبایست واژه مورد نظر را در دیکشنری استاندارد برای مثال لانگمن پیدا کنه و یک مثال حفظ کنید و سپس با کمی تغییر یک جمله متفاوت ترجیحا درباره خودتان بسازید.

      جمله های شما 80% نادرست هستند.

  • Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

    There are more convenient situation for work in a big city. First of all, salaries and employment’s benefits are much better due to higher rate of organizational revenue and more budget, therefore, employees will have more income in the city than they may have in a small town for the same job. Secondly, there are many factories and companies in various sizes across the city offering many employment opportunities for all kind of professions, hence, the people in a big city will have superior chances to find a position matching their field of expertise, skills, and preferences easier than in a small town. (102)

    Big cities are fully equipped with modern facilities and offer amazing services to the residents. First of all, considering the fact that the government provides more budget for development of such cities and offers more projects on building better infrastructure and providing facilities. So, people who live there, will have access to expedient facilities and services. Secondly, big cities have more population. The more population and demand a city has, the more investment it will attract and investors from that city or nearby cities will be encouraged to invest safely in services and facilities that cover various requirements of the citizens and to make a substantial profit. (107)

  • Mohsen    Mohsen

    درود خدمت استاد عزیز
    احتراما در صورت امکان در کانال فید بک رایتینگ ها ، موضوع رایتینگ ها به صورت هشتک ذکر شود تا به راحتی در کانال قابل جستجو باشد و زمان کمتری برای پیدا کردن رایتینگ مربوطه صرف شود.

    سپاس

    • admin    admin

      درود.

      دقت بفرمایید تنها منبع شما برای بررسی رایتینگ ها صفحه کلاس شماست. فیدبک ها تنها بصورت موردی در کانال رایتینگ ذکر میشود و به هیچ عنوان حالت بایگانی کامل ندارد.

      ضمنا با یا بدون هشتگ امکان جستجو وجود دارد.

  • سلام، وقت بخیر
    سطحم اینترمدیت است.
    من کتاب پری اینترمیدیت+ نصف از اینترمدیت (اینگلیش فایل)+ تکتیک 1 و 2+کمبریج 7 رو به طور کامل خوندم. به نظر شما از اپن فروم شروع کنم خوبه؟

    • admin    admin

      درود

      با توجه به اینکه شرایط شما همسانی صد در صد با شرایط خانم المیرا در کامنت قبلی داره زحمت بکشید دقیقا به همون صورت اقدام بفرمایید و نتیجه کار رو ارسال کنید.

  • با سلام
    استاد من ۲۵ فروردین باید امتحان آکادمیک بدم. سطح جنرال زبانم upper intermediate هست. ولی روی مهارتهای آیلتس تا به حال کار نکردم. برای مطالعه روزانه ۷ ساعت میتونم زمان بذارم. آیا باید کتابهای تست رو شروع کنم با توجه به زمان محدودم؟ چه برنامه ای رو خارج از assignment های کلاس پیاده کنم؟

    • admin    admin

      درود به شما

      تمرین با کتاب های تست کوچکترین تاثیری بر روی نمره شما نخواهد داشت. ضمنا سطح بالاتر از میانی که فرمودید برای آیلتس مناسب نیست.

      بهترین کار تمرین و انجام تمامی تکالیف داده شده در کلاس هست بجز کتاب های زیر
      Tactics. Select Redings و Real

      بجای اینها کتاب های زیر رو تمرین بفرمایید
      OPen forum و Essential Words for IELTS

      اگز سطح شما واقعا بالاست و واقعا تسلط دارید تمرین با کتاب تست زیر رو استارت بزنید و نتیجه تست ها رو همینجا درج بفرمایید

      Objective IELTS Intermediate

      20 صفحه اول رو تست بزنید و نتیجه رو اعلام بفرمایید.

  • amin    amin

    امین بهزادنیا-دوره بهمن-جمعه ها
    در یک پارت 3 ساعته برای مطالعه زبان ، باید شامل چه مباحثی باشد؟ و این برنامه در طول هفته شامل چه مباحثی باشد؟

    • admin    admin

      درود

      از اونجاییکه کلا 6 مبحث اصلی رو باید پوشش بدید باید هر تایمی که دارید رو به 6 قسمت مساوری تقسیم کنید. مبحث ها بصورت زیر هستند:

      ریدینگ، اسپیکینگ، رایتینگ، لیسنینگ، لغت و گرامر

      اگر برای هر کدوم 1 ساعت زمان بگذارید به روزانه 6 ساعت زمان نیاز خواهد داشت. 3 ساعتی که شما فرمودید به معنای نیم ساعت برای هر مبحث خواهد بود.

  • amin    amin

    امین بهزادنیا-کلاس بهمن ماه – جمعه ها
    به نظر شما خواندن ایلتس در حد نمره 6 تا 6.5 آیا بیشتر تکنیک است یا باید علم زبان داشته باشیم؟

  • amin    amin

    امین بهزادنیا- دوره بهمن ماه-جمعه ها
    با سلام ،می خواستم نحوه استفاده از کتاب های زیر را بدونم :
    common mistake at IELTS
    Essential word for IELTS
    Objective IELTs

    • admin    admin

      درود.

      هر زمان به این کتاب ها برسیم توضیح کامل در کلاس ارایه میشه.

  • با سلام و خسته نباشید
    شما برای آزمون اصلی مرکز ایرسافام رو پیشنهاد میکنید یا پروشات؟

    • admin    admin

      درود به شما

      لطفا اول تحقیق بفرمایید اصلا پروشات در تایم مورد نظر شما آزمونی برگزار میکند یا خیر چون تایم های پروشات به ویژه برای جنرال محدود هست.

      پیشنهاد شخصی من پروشات هست ولی تفاوت معناداری بین مراکز وجود ندارد.

  • علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها -بهمن ماه
    وقت بخیر استاد….تو لیست کتاب هایی که باید بخریم گفتین
    ielts cambridge 9-12 general and academic
    منی که میخوام جنرال شرکت کنم هم جنرال رو بگیرم هم آکادمیک؟

    • admin    admin

      درود

      اگر برای نمره 7 در تلاش هستید حتما تهیه بفرمایید چون تلاش اصلی شما برای بخش سوم ریدینگ جنرال هست که همسانی زیادی با آزمون آکادمیک دارد. اگر برای نمره زیر 7 تلاش میکنید میتونید فعلا تهیه نفرمایید تا ببینیم بعدا نیاز خواهد بود یا خیر.