دوره مجازی آیلتس

دوره مجازی آیلتس
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دوره مجازی آیلتس

دوره مجازی آیلتس – کلاس روزهای جمعه بهمن 1396

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای فقط جمعه بهمن ماه کلاس مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست که در تاریخ 20 بهمن 1396 آغاز میشود. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکالیف جلسه نهم

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه نهم

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه هشتم

تسک 1 زیر برای زبان آموزان آکادمیک

تسک 1 زیر برای زبان آموزان جنرال

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه هفتم

نمونه پاسخ مدرس بدون واژگان دشوار

Exotic and unusual places has gain popularity among tourists during the past decades. While they can gain benefits from such journeys, there might be some threats too. This essay will examine these two points (34 words).

There are benefits for tourists visiting exotic places. First of all, there is more excitement to enjoy because unlike five-star hotels around the globe that offer excellent but very predictable and undeniably similar services, unusual places break the norm of taking sunbath and eating fancy foods. This alternative would be more appealing especially to younger generations who do not share the eagerness for peace and quiet of famous hotels. Secondly, travelling to an odd destination as a tourist would be a new experience for travelers. Having such experience is perhaps able to change one’s perspective and give the life a new meaning. This, undoubtedly, is worth much more compare to a tedious and predictable summer vacation. (116 words)

On the other hand, there is a reason why not everybody fancies such journeys. First of all, there are some threats to the visitors’ health and even lives. Places such as Arctic or Sahara deserts or islands of uncharted territories have skillful predators who know those regions very well and can attack any second. Not only large and small animals but even insects, parasites or seemingly harmless plants may pose a threat to the travelers’ wellbeing or lives. Secondly, facilities and amenities that a visitor to such places can enjoy is undoubtedly inferior to that of other tourist destinations. Services such as air conditioners in the middle of the deserts or spacious and pleasantly warm suits in Polar regions may never be possible to be delivered (126 words).

In conclusion, tourists in faraway places with extreme weather may enjoy some benefits but admittedly there are disadvantages to deal with (21 words).

Total Words: 297

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه ششم 

 نمونه پاسخ نمره 7 نوشته شده توسط مدرس

The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.

In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90  in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.

At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.

The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.

Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to  diminish and at the final year all these categories had  very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)

نمونه پاسخ نمره 7 تا 8 نوشته شده توسط مدرس

The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.

The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.

Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed  an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.

Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)

نمونه سوال رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک (Chart) بهمراه جواب – پاسخ Band 9

در اینجا پاسخی که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد نهم بعنوان پاسخ کامل نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر ارائه شده را میبینید. نمره این پاسخ نمره کامل یا 9 میباشد.

نمونه سوال رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک (Chart) بهمراه جواب

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف گرامر جلسه هفتم 

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گفتار چهاردهم: افعال Modal در زبان انگلیسی بخش دوم

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گفتار پانزدهم: تبدیل جملات سوالی مستقیم به غیر مستقیم

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه پنجم

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه چهارم + نمونه پاسخ مدرس

Sample Answer by Pouya Abolqasemi

The graph shows the average weekly time spent by children at the age of 10 to 11 on two different leisure activities (TV and computer) at home. (27)

Schoolchildren spend just under 4 hours a week on computer at the beginning of the period in 2000. This number increased steadily for the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. Then it increased more slowly during the following 4 years to 2008 to reach a peak of almost 22 hours per week. (54)

Time spent on TV was much higher compare to computer at the beginning of the period. It started at 21 hours in 200 and stayed the same until 2003. At this time it showed a downward trend and fell to 15 hours in 2004. During the next 4 years up to the end of period in 2008, despite some fluctuations, it remained stable at this level. (66)

Overall, it seems children’s preference for these two pastime activities changed dramatically and during this nine-year period they have reversed. (20)

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه دوم 

Happiest Time

Teenage years
#More free time
#spending time with friends

Adult life
#start a family
#having a career

دوره مجازی آیلتس – نمونه رایتینگ جلسه اول نوشته شده توسط مدرس

Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

There are better situation for work in a large city. First of all, the salary of employees is higher compare with a small town. Since the companies are bigger and more people work in them, their profit is more and these companies are able to pay higher salaries to their staff. Secondly, the number of companies and factories is much more when we compare them to a small town. there are thousands of companies in and around a large city. Each of them needs people to work in and as a result it is easier to find a job in a big city. (103 Words)
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There are also more facilities and services in a large city. First of all, governments around the world always provide more support for big cities. They allocate more budget to large cities and it is easier for people and corporations to ask for financial assistance for starting or improving their business. Secondly, big cities have large populations. when millions of people live in a city, demand for many services increases and also some people ask for high quality services. Business owners have to compete to provide better services and as a result there is a higher chance of finding modern facilities in a big city. (105 Words)

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکالیف گرامر جلسه دوم  

بعد از مشاهده صفحه مربوط در لینک های زیر و مطالعه دقیق توضیحات به زبان فارسی، چند ویدئو مربوط به هر فصل را مشاهده کرده و با ذکر نام برای هر مبحث دست کم 5 مثال در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد فرمایید.

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گفتار سوم: زمان حال کامل Present Perfect Tense

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گفتار چهارم: زمان گذشته استمراری و زمان گذشته ساده Past Continuous Tense and Simple Past Tense

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – نمونه های زبان آموزان

دوستان عزیز دقت بفرمایید در جلسات اول تمامی رایتینگ ها میبایست بصورت تایپ شده در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد شوند.

نمونه رایتینگ مورد تایید و کار بسیار خوبی از ایمان با رعایت تمامی موارد چک لیست و جمله بندی مناسب.

نمونه رایتینگ ایمان ???

نمونه رایتینگ عامر + #فیدبک ???

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه رایتینگ امیر حسین + #فیدبک

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه کنفرانس ریحانه از کتاب Select Readings با سرعت مطالعه 160 واژه در دقیقه

به ترتیب از فصل اول تا چهارم ???


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دوره مجازی آیلتس – وارد کردن لغات در سایت

زبان آموزان گرامی با ورود به این صفحه فهرستی از تمامی فصل های کتاب های Select Readings، Oxford Word Skills و Essential Words for IELTS را مشاهده خواهید فرمود. فصل مورد نظر خود را پیدا کرده و در بخش دیدگاه ها مشابه نمونه زیر مثال های خود از لغات جدید آن فصل را وارد کرده تا مورد بازبینی قرار بگیرد ???

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

دوره مجازی آیلتس – بانک فیدبک های اسپیکینگ و رایتینگ

بانکی از تمامی فیدبک های ارائه شده بر روی رایتینگ و فایل های اسپیکینگ ارسالی در کانال تلگرام زیر وجود دارد که از تمامی علاقمندان و زبان آموزان درخواست میشود در این کانال عضو شوند:

https://t.me/FeedbackParadise

کانال اصلی ما در تلگرام برای آگاهی از آخرین منابع و تازه های آیلتس:

https://t.me/ielts2com

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – بررسی آنلاین Collocation ها

دوستان برای نوشتن رایتینگ در صورت نداشتن دانش کافی در زمینه ترکیب ها و کالوکیشن ها حتما از دیکشنری زیر استفاده بفرمایید. کلمه اصلی یا کلیدی مثلا advice را وارد کرده و collocation مورد نیاز و مناسب را گزینش فرمایید:

http://collocations.enacademic.com

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس Task 1 و Task 2

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)

همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید

براورد سریع دایره لغات زبان انگلیسی شما بصورت آنلاین

عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها 

252 پاسخ های ایجاد شده:
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  1. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    Over the past few decades, the figure of fast food consumption has increased tremendously in many countries around the world. Some people believe that this trend are beneficial to communities, others people think completely reverse.(35)
    Some people belive fast food is advantages. The most advantage of fast food is that it saves time. In today’s fast-paced life, there is nothing better than getting a ready meal. Besides the time an individual has to spend in the kitchen, cooking a meal, also requires one to make a trip to the supermarket to buy the ingredients for the dish. Secondly, saving money gives fast food an edge over the meal prepared in the kitchen. If one lives alone, then it is cheaper to buy a meal at the supermarket instead of cooking it at home. Also, certain fast foods like fries and burgers come pretty cheap.(110)
    Some people belive fast food is disadvantages. First of all, consuming fast food, which contains a huge amount of salt and fat, would lead to such health problems like high blood pressure, heart disease and obesity. Secondly, and more importantly, fast food has changed many people’s eating habit. Many children started to have fast food when they are kids. They will keep to eat and will not stop even they have grew up – this is what the fast food companies most wanted.(92)
    In conclusion, I believe that fast food will continue to become more popular as the pace of
    life increases. Given the health risks associated with this trend, I believe that public educationcampaigns warning people about the dangers of fast food would be warranted.(42)

    (279 words)

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  2. Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday
    Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday says:

    fast food- essay
    Over the past few decades, the way of fast food consumption has increased more than the past in many countries. While some people believe that this trend is beneficial, I completely disagree with this point of view which will be discussed in the following essay. (45 Words)
    There are various reasons to argue that consuming fast food is harmful for the body. Firstly, fast foods are not nutritious and healthy, they are full of fat and their nice flavor is just because of the spices that are used in making them. Eating junk foods have some detrimental effects on the body’s organism functionality and therefore the person would suffer diseases such as obesity and blood pressure. Secondly, people who eat fast foods out, separate from their family little by little and they don’t understand the concept of family gathering or they don’t learn culture of their country which our ancestors passed them to us. (107 Words)
    On the other hand, there have been a number of positive aspects in expansion of fast foods in different nations. Nowadays, people are almost always out of home and they do not have enough time for a proper sit down meal, then fast foods are one of the best choices for those who are always in hurry or outdoor. In addition fast foods are usually cheaper than other kinds of food such as fish and kebabs, so that could be a better choice for younger people. Furthermore, fast food industry provides more job opportunities and it causes rich people to invest in this field which had an impressive impact on food chain in recent years. (115 Words)
    By way of conclusion, there are some benefits of eating fast food but the negative impact outweigh. I believe the amount used of fast food should be limited especially for the next generations. (33 Words)

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  3. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    در مورد پارت 2 اسپیکینگ میخواستم اینو بپرسم:
    تو سوال اگر بپرسن
    describe a famous building in your home town or country
    اگر در جواب در مورد یه سازه تاریخی مثل تخت جمشید صحبت کنم نمره ای کم میشه؟ و غیر مرتبط به حساب میاد؟

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    • admin
      admin says:

      فکر نمیکنم مشکل خاصی باشه ولی باید توجه داشته باشید که تخت جمشید در حال حاضر ساختمان نیست بقایای یک اثر تاریخی هست.

      بهتر بود مثلا کاخ گلستان یا یک ساختمان دیگه رو اننخاب میگردید ولی نمره خاصی هم کم نخواهد شد.

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  4. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    سلام مجدد.
    در مورد پارت 2 اسپیکینگ سوال داشتم با کیو کارتی مثل این مواجه شدم:
    describe a piece of art you like
    در جواب می تونم در مورد یه تاج که ارزش هنری بالای داره و در یک موزه واقع شده صحبت کنم؟

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  5. elena payandan
    elena payandan says:

    C12-T2:
    The maps show the center of the cities of Islip. And also that given information about the city will change in the future.
    Firtly, according to the map, countryside is lie in the center. A main road consist of: a school, houses, several shops and park. If we have a look precisely, the second map predicts a lot of modifications development of the cities in the future. And also, in an oval shape the size of the center will increased. At the first of change, the countryside will disappear. A pedestrian way will build in the center. And also new houses and new facilities will be built such as a parking and a bus station. As the school will be bigger because, the city will have a lot of people.
    Overall, according two maps of Islip city, there are many modifications are predicated in the future. In other words, the city will be deserve with variation facilities. (156 w0rds)

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  6. Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday
    Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday says:

    Dear sir, Madam
    I heard from news that your company is going to spend some money either to sponsor a children’s sports team of our town or to pay for two open air concerts. As I am interested in my city progress, I am writing to describe my point of view on how you should spend the money.
    I know most of the children’ family who live in this city cannot pay money for their sports activities either their schools do not support them. So if the money is spent on sponsoring the children’s sports team, it will help the team and makes the children happy.
    In this city there are several music hall but some people cannot afford a concert ticket. If the money is used to paying for two open air concerts, many of people who do not enough money will have an opportunity to enjoy music.
    I believe the money should be spent on sponsoring the children’s local team. All children love sport and they exercise very hard. They can get new equipments or even better coach to bring them to a higher level so they can compete in the national tournament. You can change their live forever and it is more important that the children’s dream come true.

    Yours Sincerely
    Mahnaz Tofigh
    (209 Words)

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  7. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    Given are two maps of islip town center that reveals the different zone and transportation route.
    Before the renovation in the north of the map illustrates the shops in a small ground and a countryside in a wide area that covered somewhere in the vicinity north of the terrain. In the south just behind the main road, As well as northern part there is a modest shop and a park that is located in southeast. The figure represent a school next to the dead end. In the southern place, housing cover most of the area.
    After the development of islip town different facilities will be constructed in northern area. There will be a new housing northeast of pedestrians and next to that part including car park, shopping center and a bus station in the west. Around the islip will be a dual carriageway. The shop in the south approximately will not be changed. The park is on the edge of carriageway as shown in the figure and it will be smaller than before. Arterial road seen in the middle of the housing in the southern zone. (186 word)

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  8. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    استاد سلام.
    در مورد اسپیکینگ پارت 2 سوال داشتم در مورد دوتا موضوع:
    مثلا تو سوال از ما میخواین که در مورد هنر art صحبت کنم. آیا می تونم در مورد یه تاج که ارزش هنری بالای داره و در یک موزه واقع شده صحبت کنم؟
    و مثلا در مورد یه building میگه توضیح بدید. آیا اونو می تونم بسط بدم به سمت مثلا یه سازه تاریخی مثل تخت جمشید؟
    میخواستم لطف کنید بفرمایید این موارد ارتباط موضوعی پیدا می کنه. یا نه اگه بگم نمره کم می شه

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      در هر دو مورد لطفا بک نمونه سوال بفرمایید که بتونم دقیق توضیح بدم خدمتتون.

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  9. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    Human being is such an interesting creature who seeks on unknown places and things. Although some people think about such places have negative effects, others entertain positive impacts of difficult journeys. This essay will discuss both of these points.
    Being in a difficult situation as a tourist have some advantages. First of all it can be a most exciting journey. Tourists often books hotels to ensure that these places are safe. But for those who would like to be in an unexpected condition in heart of nature can be exciting. For instance it has lot of fun and fascinating when people jump off a bridge to the river or walking through amazon jungle. Secondly it has some new experiences when people far from facilities. Their cell phones are remote access and internet to communicate to others and maybe need to live in a tent for some days. Without oven or microwaves cook a meal can be a challenge. Under the circumstance they should make condition better as well as possible.
    One problem and more importantly, though, visiting exotic places has some disadvantages and create difficulties. Tourist encounter with dangerous situations. For instance in deserts there are so many wild animals or insects that hurt people. Another negative aspect is in such places relief operation are not enable and people may have high risk of death. Tourist’s physical and psychological health problems can be a issue as a result of the environment. If the suitable vehicle does not have a first-aid kit to treat immediate injuries, there is possibility that the wounds and infections caused as a result of the injury can become life-threatening
    By way of conclusion, isolated places for tourists has some benefits and also might have some difficulties. (290 words)

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  10. امین - کلاس جمعه ها
    امین - کلاس جمعه ها says:

    Many agencies have different tours for many places where conditions are difficult. Although some people believe that it has some advantages others think that it has disadvantages. In this essay both of these views will be discussed.(37 word)
    Visiting places as tourists are a opportunity to improve your experiences that they might have many advantages for you. First of all when you visit places which conditions are difficult, you can obtain specific profession that are worthwhile. In this visiting you envisage many steps or rules that are individual condition that you catch it. Secondly, you can accustom life style in unknown places. You can see the people‘s foods which use or eat. You infer the food‘s constructions which are produced by people who live in and you can see special vegetation and fruits that people can eat them.(100 word)
    Places that are difficult to visit, have some disadvantages. First of all perhaps you have many problems. For instance you may be sick on trip. Difficult conditions can affect your body and change balance of water in your body. Therefore this lack can influence your body and it can be treacherous. Secondly when you go journey which is difficult condition, perhaps you lose your way and it can be expensive trip. For these trip usually you cannot bring your children that are important on your itinerary. Therefore you should select a professional leader who explain all steps of trip and all adventures. Usually difficult places do not have soft or good access roads thus you should pay more money to take special vehicles for visiting them.(126 word)
    In conclusion, visiting places where conditions are difficult have some advantages and disadvantages. Therefore you can deliberate about your program and know their steps or obstacles that you have good trips in vacations. (33 word)

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  11. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    Nowadays many visitors are showing their interest to visit troublesome places, like Sahara deserts or the Antartic. Tourists could get exciting experiences from an adventurous trip, but there are many drawbacks to be taken into account.(36)
    This kind of trips have many disadvantages. First of all, these kinds of travels are risky and can put the travelers’ life in danger. A major problem of traveling in an awkward place is that there could be no facilities for tourists. Not only the transportation is a chief problem, but also the telecommunication system is very poor in this area. Secondly, In some places, other facilities like food or security are totally difficult to provide. There is no doubt that the travelers need to be prepared mentally to face any unwanted situations.(96)
    On the other hand, travelling to difficult places has advantages. Firstly, One of the biggest benefits of undertaking difficult journeys is that they improve one’s confidence in one’s abilities. Secondly, an extreme place often offers the opportunity to enjoy the natural beauty closely. For example, to see the Royal Bengal Tiger in Sunderban, one might have to stay in the deep wood for a couple of days which could be very interesting but not out of danger. So, it is clear that dangerous places have many things to offer for the fearless sightseers.(92)
    In conclusion, I believe adventurous journeys have more benefits than usual trips. traveling to unsafe places requires physical wellness in addition to a different viewpoint. In other words, traveling to unusual places brings a unique experience that a typical travel can never give such a valuable experience.(47)
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  12. علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه
    علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه says:

    nowadays tourist agencies have a lot of tours to places with difficult situation.although some people think this kind of journeys have difficulties for tourists,others believe this journeys have a lot of advantages.in this essay both sides will be discussed.(40)
    this kind of trips have some benefits,first of all, in real life we have a lot of facilities and services in different and harsh situation for example in hot and cold climate we have air conditioner to regulate temperature and this kind of journeys help people to be thankful to what they have in real life.secondly,they can visit somewhere that we can not see in our routines and it is adventurous and memorable for all whole lives.they also can take amazing photographs and record this adventure as a memorable experience to review in the future or share it with pleasure in social media like Instagram.(107)
    in other hand,this kind of traveling have some disadvantages for tourists. first of all,they are always facing with unpredictable situation like unknown diseases and may incompatibility with harsh situation.for example people who have allergy to hot weather may have some problems in Sahara desert and there are not enough hospital and other services in this conditions.secondly some of this areas are not completely protect from wild animals like snakes or cancers and it may threat tourist security and there are not enough mobile coverage to report some problems to emergency services and this is can be dangerous in some situation.(102)
    in conclusion,visiting this kind of places may has a lot of adventurous and it’s usually exiting but tourist must be aware of unpredictable situation.(25)

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  13. علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه
    علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه says:

    درود استاد
    i have got to go back for treatment on Tuesday
    تو این جمله چرا از got استفاده شده؟ بدون got همون معنی مجبور بودن برای درمان رو نمیده؟

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  14. Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday
    Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday says:

    Nowadays there are many tourists who like to travel to inhabitable places. Although some people enjoy and consider the benefit of this kind of journies , others believe these places have a lot of difficulties. In this essay both sides will be discussed. (42 Words)
    Travelling to difficult places has many advantages for some one who enjoys adventure . First of all, one’s can see, touch and experience a lot of new things who did not know before that can not be describe in word. In addition, unknown experiences increase the secretion of hormones like Adrenaline in their body and give a good feel to them. Secondly staying at uncommon areas has physically and mentally exhausting and succeed in such difficult conditions cause to improve one’s self-confidence. Having this abilities and high self confidence make them stronger in their lives than past. (97 Words)
    This kind of trips also have many disadvantages and can be extremely dangerous. First of all, there is some area in the world, like Sahara desert or the Antarctic, that is not secure and could have difficulties like sand storm or snow storm. In this conditions nothing can help the tourists however sufficient and professional equipments be with them . Secondly, harsh weather conditions can effect on human body and make serious health problems for people. Spending long hours in hot or cold weather may causes diseases such as dehydration or frostbite with the worse and harm consequent. (97 words)
    In conclusion, undoubtedly traveling to around the world especially places where conditions are difficult has many excited experiences and will be beneficial, but unpredictable events can be detrimental that many tourists are eager to visit this places. (37 words)
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