دوره مجازی آیلتس

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دوره مجازی آیلتس

دوره مجازی آیلتس – کلاس روزهای جمعه بهمن 1396

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای فقط جمعه بهمن ماه کلاس مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست که در تاریخ 20 بهمن 1396 آغاز میشود. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکالیف جلسه های دهم و یازدهم

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه نهم

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه هشتم

تسک 1 زیر برای زبان آموزان آکادمیک

تسک 1 زیر برای زبان آموزان جنرال

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه هفتم

نمونه پاسخ مدرس بدون واژگان دشوار

Exotic and unusual places has gain popularity among tourists during the past decades. While they can gain benefits from such journeys, there might be some threats too. This essay will examine these two points (34 words).

There are benefits for tourists visiting exotic places. First of all, there is more excitement to enjoy because unlike five-star hotels around the globe that offer excellent but very predictable and undeniably similar services, unusual places break the norm of taking sunbath and eating fancy foods. This alternative would be more appealing especially to younger generations who do not share the eagerness for peace and quiet of famous hotels. Secondly, travelling to an odd destination as a tourist would be a new experience for travelers. Having such experience is perhaps able to change one’s perspective and give the life a new meaning. This, undoubtedly, is worth much more compare to a tedious and predictable summer vacation. (116 words)

On the other hand, there is a reason why not everybody fancies such journeys. First of all, there are some threats to the visitors’ health and even lives. Places such as Arctic or Sahara deserts or islands of uncharted territories have skillful predators who know those regions very well and can attack any second. Not only large and small animals but even insects, parasites or seemingly harmless plants may pose a threat to the travelers’ wellbeing or lives. Secondly, facilities and amenities that a visitor to such places can enjoy is undoubtedly inferior to that of other tourist destinations. Services such as air conditioners in the middle of the deserts or spacious and pleasantly warm suits in Polar regions may never be possible to be delivered (126 words).

In conclusion, tourists in faraway places with extreme weather may enjoy some benefits but admittedly there are disadvantages to deal with (21 words).

Total Words: 297

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه ششم 

 نمونه پاسخ نمره 7 نوشته شده توسط مدرس

The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.

In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90  in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.

At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.

The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.

Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to  diminish and at the final year all these categories had  very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)

نمونه پاسخ نمره 7 تا 8 نوشته شده توسط مدرس

The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.

The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.

Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed  an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.

Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)

نمونه سوال رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک (Chart) بهمراه جواب – پاسخ Band 9

در اینجا پاسخی که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد نهم بعنوان پاسخ کامل نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر ارائه شده را میبینید. نمره این پاسخ نمره کامل یا 9 میباشد.

نمونه سوال رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک (Chart) بهمراه جواب

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف گرامر جلسه هفتم 

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گفتار چهاردهم: افعال Modal در زبان انگلیسی بخش دوم

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گفتار پانزدهم: تبدیل جملات سوالی مستقیم به غیر مستقیم

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه پنجم

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه چهارم + نمونه پاسخ مدرس

Sample Answer by Pouya Abolqasemi

The graph shows the average weekly time spent by children at the age of 10 to 11 on two different leisure activities (TV and computer) at home. (27)

Schoolchildren spend just under 4 hours a week on computer at the beginning of the period in 2000. This number increased steadily for the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. Then it increased more slowly during the following 4 years to 2008 to reach a peak of almost 22 hours per week. (54)

Time spent on TV was much higher compare to computer at the beginning of the period. It started at 21 hours in 200 and stayed the same until 2003. At this time it showed a downward trend and fell to 15 hours in 2004. During the next 4 years up to the end of period in 2008, despite some fluctuations, it remained stable at this level. (66)

Overall, it seems children’s preference for these two pastime activities changed dramatically and during this nine-year period they have reversed. (20)

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه دوم 

Happiest Time

Teenage years
#More free time
#spending time with friends

Adult life
#start a family
#having a career

دوره مجازی آیلتس – نمونه رایتینگ جلسه اول نوشته شده توسط مدرس

Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

There are better situation for work in a large city. First of all, the salary of employees is higher compare with a small town. Since the companies are bigger and more people work in them, their profit is more and these companies are able to pay higher salaries to their staff. Secondly, the number of companies and factories is much more when we compare them to a small town. there are thousands of companies in and around a large city. Each of them needs people to work in and as a result it is easier to find a job in a big city. (103 Words)
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There are also more facilities and services in a large city. First of all, governments around the world always provide more support for big cities. They allocate more budget to large cities and it is easier for people and corporations to ask for financial assistance for starting or improving their business. Secondly, big cities have large populations. when millions of people live in a city, demand for many services increases and also some people ask for high quality services. Business owners have to compete to provide better services and as a result there is a higher chance of finding modern facilities in a big city. (105 Words)

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکالیف گرامر جلسه دوم  

بعد از مشاهده صفحه مربوط در لینک های زیر و مطالعه دقیق توضیحات به زبان فارسی، چند ویدئو مربوط به هر فصل را مشاهده کرده و با ذکر نام برای هر مبحث دست کم 5 مثال در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد فرمایید.

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گفتار سوم: زمان حال کامل Present Perfect Tense

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گفتار چهارم: زمان گذشته استمراری و زمان گذشته ساده Past Continuous Tense and Simple Past Tense

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – نمونه های زبان آموزان

دوستان عزیز دقت بفرمایید در جلسات اول تمامی رایتینگ ها میبایست بصورت تایپ شده در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد شوند.

نمونه رایتینگ مورد تایید و کار بسیار خوبی از ایمان با رعایت تمامی موارد چک لیست و جمله بندی مناسب.

نمونه رایتینگ ایمان ???

نمونه رایتینگ عامر + #فیدبک ???

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه رایتینگ امیر حسین + #فیدبک

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه کنفرانس ریحانه از کتاب Select Readings با سرعت مطالعه 160 واژه در دقیقه

به ترتیب از فصل اول تا چهارم ???


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دوره مجازی آیلتس – وارد کردن لغات در سایت

زبان آموزان گرامی با ورود به این صفحه فهرستی از تمامی فصل های کتاب های Select Readings، Oxford Word Skills و Essential Words for IELTS را مشاهده خواهید فرمود. فصل مورد نظر خود را پیدا کرده و در بخش دیدگاه ها مشابه نمونه زیر مثال های خود از لغات جدید آن فصل را وارد کرده تا مورد بازبینی قرار بگیرد ???

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

دوره مجازی آیلتس – بانک فیدبک های اسپیکینگ و رایتینگ

بانکی از تمامی فیدبک های ارائه شده بر روی رایتینگ و فایل های اسپیکینگ ارسالی در کانال تلگرام زیر وجود دارد که از تمامی علاقمندان و زبان آموزان درخواست میشود در این کانال عضو شوند:

https://t.me/FeedbackParadise

کانال اصلی ما در تلگرام برای آگاهی از آخرین منابع و تازه های آیلتس:

https://t.me/ielts2com

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – بررسی آنلاین Collocation ها

دوستان برای نوشتن رایتینگ در صورت نداشتن دانش کافی در زمینه ترکیب ها و کالوکیشن ها حتما از دیکشنری زیر استفاده بفرمایید. کلمه اصلی یا کلیدی مثلا advice را وارد کرده و collocation مورد نیاز و مناسب را گزینش فرمایید:

http://collocations.enacademic.com

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس Task 1 و Task 2

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)

همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید

براورد سریع دایره لغات زبان انگلیسی شما بصورت آنلاین

عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها 

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  1. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondly school?
    Due to advancements in communication system, the relation among nations has been increased markedly. Learning a foreign language at an early age has become a controversial issue in the world. Some people claim that primary school is the best place for learning another language instead of secondary school.
    Some people believe learning in primary school has alot of disadvantages. First of all, the most important disadvantage could be a waste of time since children need to focus on other subjects such as math, sience and their own mother tongue language, which they might need it more than the foreign one. Secondly, children many get confused because of learning many languages at the same time and this could have a negative impact on their development. For example, it is claim that bilingual children develop the ability to talk more slowly than monolingual kids.
    On the other hand, some people believe leaving new language in primary school has some advantages. Firstly, children learn faster at a young age because they are less self-concious and shy. So they can easily pick up the right pronunciation and try to copy it. Secondly, learning foreign language could a chance for learning literature and poems and also knowing the culture of others when the children spend childhood and it is the biggest advantage.
    In conclusion, it seems that the benefits of teaching children foreign languages as soon as possible outweigh the drawbacks.
    (258 words)

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  2. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    Cambridge 9-test3:
    The diagrams show the population of two countries consist of: Yemen an Italy with different ages in 2000 and also a estimative for 2050.
    If we have a glance on diagram in 2000, will see the majority of people in Yemen between 0 and 14 years old, with 51/1% whereas in Italy the least of the population was between 0 and 14 years with 14/3%, on the other hand, the most population was included by the people that had 15-59 years. In Yemen, 3/6% of people was 60 years old, while in Italy, the diagram show with 24/1%. In 2050, the number of people with 15-59 years with 57/3% and also 60years or more with 5/7% will increase. Despite, in Italy, it is completly reverse, on the words, the population with 15-59 years will decrease to 46/2%, while people with 60 years or more will increase to 42/3%.
    Overall, the diagram show in the future(2050), the population 60 years or more trend on upward in both countries. (167 words)

    سلام و ادب. استاد چون تکلیفی که سر کلاس اعلام شد تکراری بود (کمبریج 12- تست 2)، من این تست رو انتخاب نمودم.

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      ممنون از تذکر شما

      چند روزی درگیر بیماری بودم حتما برای 2 هفته رو وارد میکنم.

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  3. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    Over the past few decades, the figure of fast food consumption has increased tremendously in many countries around the world. Some people believe that this trend are beneficial to communities, others people think completely reverse.(35)
    Some people belive fast food is advantages. The most advantage of fast food is that it saves time. In today’s fast-paced life, there is nothing better than getting a ready meal. Besides the time an individual has to spend in the kitchen, cooking a meal, also requires one to make a trip to the supermarket to buy the ingredients for the dish. Secondly, saving money gives fast food an edge over the meal prepared in the kitchen. If one lives alone, then it is cheaper to buy a meal at the supermarket instead of cooking it at home. Also, certain fast foods like fries and burgers come pretty cheap.(110)
    Some people belive fast food is disadvantages. First of all, consuming fast food, which contains a huge amount of salt and fat, would lead to such health problems like high blood pressure, heart disease and obesity. Secondly, and more importantly, fast food has changed many people’s eating habit. Many children started to have fast food when they are kids. They will keep to eat and will not stop even they have grew up – this is what the fast food companies most wanted.(92)
    In conclusion, I believe that fast food will continue to become more popular as the pace of
    life increases. Given the health risks associated with this trend, I believe that public educationcampaigns warning people about the dangers of fast food would be warranted.(42)

    (279 words)

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  4. Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday
    Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday says:

    fast food- essay
    Over the past few decades, the way of fast food consumption has increased more than the past in many countries. While some people believe that this trend is beneficial, I completely disagree with this point of view which will be discussed in the following essay. (45 Words)
    There are various reasons to argue that consuming fast food is harmful for the body. Firstly, fast foods are not nutritious and healthy, they are full of fat and their nice flavor is just because of the spices that are used in making them. Eating junk foods have some detrimental effects on the body’s organism functionality and therefore the person would suffer diseases such as obesity and blood pressure. Secondly, people who eat fast foods out, separate from their family little by little and they don’t understand the concept of family gathering or they don’t learn culture of their country which our ancestors passed them to us. (107 Words)
    On the other hand, there have been a number of positive aspects in expansion of fast foods in different nations. Nowadays, people are almost always out of home and they do not have enough time for a proper sit down meal, then fast foods are one of the best choices for those who are always in hurry or outdoor. In addition fast foods are usually cheaper than other kinds of food such as fish and kebabs, so that could be a better choice for younger people. Furthermore, fast food industry provides more job opportunities and it causes rich people to invest in this field which had an impressive impact on food chain in recent years. (115 Words)
    By way of conclusion, there are some benefits of eating fast food but the negative impact outweigh. I believe the amount used of fast food should be limited especially for the next generations. (33 Words)

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  5. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    در مورد پارت 2 اسپیکینگ میخواستم اینو بپرسم:
    تو سوال اگر بپرسن
    describe a famous building in your home town or country
    اگر در جواب در مورد یه سازه تاریخی مثل تخت جمشید صحبت کنم نمره ای کم میشه؟ و غیر مرتبط به حساب میاد؟

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    • admin
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      فکر نمیکنم مشکل خاصی باشه ولی باید توجه داشته باشید که تخت جمشید در حال حاضر ساختمان نیست بقایای یک اثر تاریخی هست.

      بهتر بود مثلا کاخ گلستان یا یک ساختمان دیگه رو اننخاب میگردید ولی نمره خاصی هم کم نخواهد شد.

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  6. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    سلام مجدد.
    در مورد پارت 2 اسپیکینگ سوال داشتم با کیو کارتی مثل این مواجه شدم:
    describe a piece of art you like
    در جواب می تونم در مورد یه تاج که ارزش هنری بالای داره و در یک موزه واقع شده صحبت کنم؟

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  7. elena payandan
    elena payandan says:

    C12-T2:
    The maps show the center of the cities of Islip. And also that given information about the city will change in the future.
    Firtly, according to the map, countryside is lie in the center. A main road consist of: a school, houses, several shops and park. If we have a look precisely, the second map predicts a lot of modifications development of the cities in the future. And also, in an oval shape the size of the center will increased. At the first of change, the countryside will disappear. A pedestrian way will build in the center. And also new houses and new facilities will be built such as a parking and a bus station. As the school will be bigger because, the city will have a lot of people.
    Overall, according two maps of Islip city, there are many modifications are predicated in the future. In other words, the city will be deserve with variation facilities. (156 w0rds)

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  8. Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday
    Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday says:

    Dear sir, Madam
    I heard from news that your company is going to spend some money either to sponsor a children’s sports team of our town or to pay for two open air concerts. As I am interested in my city progress, I am writing to describe my point of view on how you should spend the money.
    I know most of the children’ family who live in this city cannot pay money for their sports activities either their schools do not support them. So if the money is spent on sponsoring the children’s sports team, it will help the team and makes the children happy.
    In this city there are several music hall but some people cannot afford a concert ticket. If the money is used to paying for two open air concerts, many of people who do not enough money will have an opportunity to enjoy music.
    I believe the money should be spent on sponsoring the children’s local team. All children love sport and they exercise very hard. They can get new equipments or even better coach to bring them to a higher level so they can compete in the national tournament. You can change their live forever and it is more important that the children’s dream come true.

    Yours Sincerely
    Mahnaz Tofigh
    (209 Words)

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  9. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    Given are two maps of islip town center that reveals the different zone and transportation route.
    Before the renovation in the north of the map illustrates the shops in a small ground and a countryside in a wide area that covered somewhere in the vicinity north of the terrain. In the south just behind the main road, As well as northern part there is a modest shop and a park that is located in southeast. The figure represent a school next to the dead end. In the southern place, housing cover most of the area.
    After the development of islip town different facilities will be constructed in northern area. There will be a new housing northeast of pedestrians and next to that part including car park, shopping center and a bus station in the west. Around the islip will be a dual carriageway. The shop in the south approximately will not be changed. The park is on the edge of carriageway as shown in the figure and it will be smaller than before. Arterial road seen in the middle of the housing in the southern zone. (186 word)

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  10. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    استاد سلام.
    در مورد اسپیکینگ پارت 2 سوال داشتم در مورد دوتا موضوع:
    مثلا تو سوال از ما میخواین که در مورد هنر art صحبت کنم. آیا می تونم در مورد یه تاج که ارزش هنری بالای داره و در یک موزه واقع شده صحبت کنم؟
    و مثلا در مورد یه building میگه توضیح بدید. آیا اونو می تونم بسط بدم به سمت مثلا یه سازه تاریخی مثل تخت جمشید؟
    میخواستم لطف کنید بفرمایید این موارد ارتباط موضوعی پیدا می کنه. یا نه اگه بگم نمره کم می شه

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      در هر دو مورد لطفا بک نمونه سوال بفرمایید که بتونم دقیق توضیح بدم خدمتتون.

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  11. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    Human being is such an interesting creature who seeks on unknown places and things. Although some people think about such places have negative effects, others entertain positive impacts of difficult journeys. This essay will discuss both of these points.
    Being in a difficult situation as a tourist have some advantages. First of all it can be a most exciting journey. Tourists often books hotels to ensure that these places are safe. But for those who would like to be in an unexpected condition in heart of nature can be exciting. For instance it has lot of fun and fascinating when people jump off a bridge to the river or walking through amazon jungle. Secondly it has some new experiences when people far from facilities. Their cell phones are remote access and internet to communicate to others and maybe need to live in a tent for some days. Without oven or microwaves cook a meal can be a challenge. Under the circumstance they should make condition better as well as possible.
    One problem and more importantly, though, visiting exotic places has some disadvantages and create difficulties. Tourist encounter with dangerous situations. For instance in deserts there are so many wild animals or insects that hurt people. Another negative aspect is in such places relief operation are not enable and people may have high risk of death. Tourist’s physical and psychological health problems can be a issue as a result of the environment. If the suitable vehicle does not have a first-aid kit to treat immediate injuries, there is possibility that the wounds and infections caused as a result of the injury can become life-threatening
    By way of conclusion, isolated places for tourists has some benefits and also might have some difficulties. (290 words)

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  12. امین - کلاس جمعه ها
    امین - کلاس جمعه ها says:

    Many agencies have different tours for many places where conditions are difficult. Although some people believe that it has some advantages others think that it has disadvantages. In this essay both of these views will be discussed.(37 word)
    Visiting places as tourists are a opportunity to improve your experiences that they might have many advantages for you. First of all when you visit places which conditions are difficult, you can obtain specific profession that are worthwhile. In this visiting you envisage many steps or rules that are individual condition that you catch it. Secondly, you can accustom life style in unknown places. You can see the people‘s foods which use or eat. You infer the food‘s constructions which are produced by people who live in and you can see special vegetation and fruits that people can eat them.(100 word)
    Places that are difficult to visit, have some disadvantages. First of all perhaps you have many problems. For instance you may be sick on trip. Difficult conditions can affect your body and change balance of water in your body. Therefore this lack can influence your body and it can be treacherous. Secondly when you go journey which is difficult condition, perhaps you lose your way and it can be expensive trip. For these trip usually you cannot bring your children that are important on your itinerary. Therefore you should select a professional leader who explain all steps of trip and all adventures. Usually difficult places do not have soft or good access roads thus you should pay more money to take special vehicles for visiting them.(126 word)
    In conclusion, visiting places where conditions are difficult have some advantages and disadvantages. Therefore you can deliberate about your program and know their steps or obstacles that you have good trips in vacations. (33 word)

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  13. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    Nowadays many visitors are showing their interest to visit troublesome places, like Sahara deserts or the Antartic. Tourists could get exciting experiences from an adventurous trip, but there are many drawbacks to be taken into account.(36)
    This kind of trips have many disadvantages. First of all, these kinds of travels are risky and can put the travelers’ life in danger. A major problem of traveling in an awkward place is that there could be no facilities for tourists. Not only the transportation is a chief problem, but also the telecommunication system is very poor in this area. Secondly, In some places, other facilities like food or security are totally difficult to provide. There is no doubt that the travelers need to be prepared mentally to face any unwanted situations.(96)
    On the other hand, travelling to difficult places has advantages. Firstly, One of the biggest benefits of undertaking difficult journeys is that they improve one’s confidence in one’s abilities. Secondly, an extreme place often offers the opportunity to enjoy the natural beauty closely. For example, to see the Royal Bengal Tiger in Sunderban, one might have to stay in the deep wood for a couple of days which could be very interesting but not out of danger. So, it is clear that dangerous places have many things to offer for the fearless sightseers.(92)
    In conclusion, I believe adventurous journeys have more benefits than usual trips. traveling to unsafe places requires physical wellness in addition to a different viewpoint. In other words, traveling to unusual places brings a unique experience that a typical travel can never give such a valuable experience.(47)
    (269 words)

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  14. علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه
    علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه says:

    nowadays tourist agencies have a lot of tours to places with difficult situation.although some people think this kind of journeys have difficulties for tourists,others believe this journeys have a lot of advantages.in this essay both sides will be discussed.(40)
    this kind of trips have some benefits,first of all, in real life we have a lot of facilities and services in different and harsh situation for example in hot and cold climate we have air conditioner to regulate temperature and this kind of journeys help people to be thankful to what they have in real life.secondly,they can visit somewhere that we can not see in our routines and it is adventurous and memorable for all whole lives.they also can take amazing photographs and record this adventure as a memorable experience to review in the future or share it with pleasure in social media like Instagram.(107)
    in other hand,this kind of traveling have some disadvantages for tourists. first of all,they are always facing with unpredictable situation like unknown diseases and may incompatibility with harsh situation.for example people who have allergy to hot weather may have some problems in Sahara desert and there are not enough hospital and other services in this conditions.secondly some of this areas are not completely protect from wild animals like snakes or cancers and it may threat tourist security and there are not enough mobile coverage to report some problems to emergency services and this is can be dangerous in some situation.(102)
    in conclusion,visiting this kind of places may has a lot of adventurous and it’s usually exiting but tourist must be aware of unpredictable situation.(25)

    total words(265)

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  15. علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه
    علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه says:

    درود استاد
    i have got to go back for treatment on Tuesday
    تو این جمله چرا از got استفاده شده؟ بدون got همون معنی مجبور بودن برای درمان رو نمیده؟

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  16. Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday
    Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday says:

    Nowadays there are many tourists who like to travel to inhabitable places. Although some people enjoy and consider the benefit of this kind of journies , others believe these places have a lot of difficulties. In this essay both sides will be discussed. (42 Words)
    Travelling to difficult places has many advantages for some one who enjoys adventure . First of all, one’s can see, touch and experience a lot of new things who did not know before that can not be describe in word. In addition, unknown experiences increase the secretion of hormones like Adrenaline in their body and give a good feel to them. Secondly staying at uncommon areas has physically and mentally exhausting and succeed in such difficult conditions cause to improve one’s self-confidence. Having this abilities and high self confidence make them stronger in their lives than past. (97 Words)
    This kind of trips also have many disadvantages and can be extremely dangerous. First of all, there is some area in the world, like Sahara desert or the Antarctic, that is not secure and could have difficulties like sand storm or snow storm. In this conditions nothing can help the tourists however sufficient and professional equipments be with them . Secondly, harsh weather conditions can effect on human body and make serious health problems for people. Spending long hours in hot or cold weather may causes diseases such as dehydration or frostbite with the worse and harm consequent. (97 words)
    In conclusion, undoubtedly traveling to around the world especially places where conditions are difficult has many excited experiences and will be beneficial, but unpredictable events can be detrimental that many tourists are eager to visit this places. (37 words)
    (274 Words)

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  17. Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96
    Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96 says:

    درود به استاد عزیز
    لطفا نظرتون را درابطه با این ایده پردازی بیان کنید.
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    موضوع رایتینگ:benefits and disadvantages of places where condition are difficult for tourists
    ایده پردازی:
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    more experience
    more adventure

    more dangerous
    more expensive

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  18. Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96
    Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96 says:

    سلام استاد
    فایل های استاد liz فایل Liz.IELTS.Advantages.Disadvantages.Essays چند بار دانلود کردم ولی در زمان اکسترکت فایل هشدار خرابی فایل میدهد.
    ممنون میشم راهنماییی کنید.

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      درود

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      دوباره دانلود کن و پسورد رو درست وارد کن. نباید مشکلی باشه.

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  19. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    The bar graph demonstrates the incidence of three different phone calls in the UK between 1995 and 2002.
    According to the chart the cardinal calls were local calls by fixed line and in the beginning of the period were about more than 70 billion minutes. Which started to go up over 4 years about 20 billion minutes to reach the summit of 90 billion minutes. And then there was a slump in demand for the next 3 years until 2002 and it has been reached to 70 billion minutes
    The number of minutes spoken throughout national and international by fixed line differs from local call for popularity and started to less than 40 billion minutes. It increased slightly during 7 years peaked at 60 billion minutes in 2002.
    There was a sudden rise in mobile calls it started from 2 billion to 46 billion minutes. There has been a dramatic went up between 1995 and 2002.
    Overall, the local fixed line were still the most popular phone call in the UK. Mobile calls and national and international fixed calls shows more popularity than before. (181 words)

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  20. arefe.962FB
    arefe.962FB says:

    The chart illustrates the total length of spending on telephone calls in the UK which is divided into three categories: local line, national and international fixed line and mobile from 1995-2002. (30)
    At the beginning of this period, local calls were more popular approximately 70 billion minutes. This number increased up to 90 in 1998. So it started to fall to 70 billion minutes again in 2002. (30)
    In 1995, using national and international fixed line was limited. It grew steadily from 40 billion to 60 billion in this period, from 1995-2002. Though the growth slowed over the last two years. (30)
    Mobile calls increased dramatically from 2 billion to 46 billion minutes.this addition was noticeable from 1999-2002 which time of using mobile increased. (23)
    Overall, at the beginning there was high variation among all three categories but the differences become less at the final year that all these categories had very similar level of popularity. (30)

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  21. علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه
    علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه says:

    dear sir,
    we met each other in a flight to London about one week ago.we had a great conversation and you talked about your restaurant and its branches. you told me about your activities in that restaurants and you suggested me to cooperate with you and i would like to accept that.(50)
    actually two year ago I worked in a restaurant as an accountant and i have a sufficient experience in this filed and how to communicate with people.so, I am ready to work as an accountant with you.i also have enough knowledge to design great websites for your restaurant and its branches.(51)
    as i mention before, i have enough experience about communicating with clients and I am so fast in accounting job.i am so responsible and handy in different ways .for example I can advertise your restaurant in attractive websites and social media and it will help your business to be well-known in the city .(53)
    your faithfully
    ali bahmanabadi

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  22. عرفان طباطبایی کلاس جمعه ها
    عرفان طباطبایی کلاس جمعه ها says:

    Internet has altered people behaviors in different ways internet have had effect on people lives first of all in the years 1995 mobiles calls most of 70 bilion minutes but in the 1999 most of 90 bilion minutes but next year in the years 2000 allmost 80 bilion minutes couse improve industry mobile

    Erfan tabatabaie

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  23. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    The bar chart indicates the total length of the time spent on three categories: local line, national and international fixed line and mobiles between 1995 and 2002.
    In 1995, local calls were more than 70 billion minutes, which started to increase gradually and to reach a peak of 90 million minutes in 1998, and then to decreased to 70 billion minutes in 2002.
    At the beginning, the number of people that spent time on the national and international fixed lined were 40 billion minutes and this number risead near 70 billions minutes in 2002.
    This growth for mobile calls for the first was a few billion in 1995, next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes end of period in 2002.
    Overall, the number people spent time on all three categories at the beginning started to diminish and then these categories were increased.

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  24. Mahnaz tofigh- fridays Bahman
    Mahnaz tofigh- fridays Bahman says:

    سلام استاد.
    قسمت دوم اسپیکینگ، بعد از سوال 19، حدود 20 سوال هست که شماره نداره و بعد از آن وارد پارت سوم میشه. تکلیف اینبار ما، از سوال 11 تا 20 بوده. میشه توضیح بدین تا کدام سوال رو باید جواب بدیم؟

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      درود.

      اگر تکلیف تا سوال 20 بوده و تا سوال 19 هم شماره داره تمامش رو ضبط میکنید و در ادامه یکی از اونهایی که شماره نداره.

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  25. Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday
    Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday says:

    Dear sir,
    I am writing this letter to you regarding your suggestion about a job in one of your restaurants. Since we have met each other at that journey to Iran one week ago, I have thought about your suggestion and kind of job that I am interested in.
    I used to work for a hotel as a chef for 7 years. I cooked traditional Iranian food especially North foods. As my mother is originally from Gilan _ a big state in the North of Iran_ she taught me cooking this kind of foods and I know all the recipes for this traditional foods very well. After I got married and moved to Shiraz, where one of your restaurants is located, I had to change my job, against my wishes.
    I heard about your good name chain restaurants before, and I think you deserve better future. As I know the ropes, if you hire me, I am sure your restaurant will be full of satisfied customers.
    I am looking forward to seeing you.
    Yours faithfully. (174 words)
    Mahnaz Tofigh

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  26. masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96
    masoud ebrahimi- bahman 96 says:

    The internet has significant effects on people lives. Although some people thinks of negative influence, others including me thing of positive impact of internet. This essay will both of these points.(31 words)
    There are Positive impacts of internet on societies. First of all is easier to do research through the internet. In earlier times which technology doesn’t developed students and researchers need to visit different library and university professors to find relevant material to their research topics. Nowadays they just subscribe a website or browsing online to search for their sightly subjects. Secondly communication with family, friends and relatives is faster. The homesick can easily contact their parents, son or daughter online. Different services such as skyp, telegram, imo and whatsapp enable loved ones to communicate in most any part of the globe where internet service available. (105 words)
    There are some negative view on people’s lives. First of all its possible to access personal information by hackers. This can have devastating consequences for a user, especially when the attacker starts targeting important aspects of their lives such as insurance, bank and credit card information. Secondly is abandonment of family. People become insensitive as they are absorbed by the hidden hand of the internet. Technology have provided children with an independence in their communications with family and friends. In previous generations, if children wanted to be in touch with a friend, they had to call them on the home phone which might be answered by a parent.(108 words)
    By way of conclusion internet have some negative and positive impacts on people lives.

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  27. Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96
    Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96 says:

    The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent year.Although some people believe that these changes are positive, others are disagree.I will be discussed both of these views in this essay.33

    Sometimes, the internet can have negative effects. First of all,Internet overuse can lead to sedentary lifestyles. We live in the internet world. An average person spends at least 13 hours online every week. The internet has become so available that we can do it anywhere from work, home, while on holiday, taking a dump, etc.Secondly, Among people who heavy use of platforms was associated with feelings of social isolation. unrealistic portrayals on social media may give people the impression that others are living happier, more connected lives, and this may make users feel more socially isolated in comparison. Another reason is the fact that people sometimes use it to replace physical social interactions.113

    The Internet has some great positive effects.First of all,the Internet and social media provides many benefits to its users. It allows us to keep in touch with friends from high school that we would have lost contact with. It lets us communicate with people on the other side of the world.Secondly,there is a great possibility to earn while working from home.It is now possible to earn online through writing, filling up forms, or even just clicking away on advertisements in the internet. Information is a valuable thing that people are willing to pay. Through advertisements posted online, manufacturers and sellers are able to increase the possibility of having their products purchased.111

    In conclusion,The Internet has some great positive and negative effects on our lives.270

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  28. علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه
    علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه says:

    internet has altered people behaviors in different ways.although some people think it has had positive effect in their life,some other criticize first group .in this essay both sides will be discussed.(31)

    internet have had positive effect on people lives.first of all it has had a huge effect on internet marketing.in this days companies and self employees all around the world can introduce their provides and services by advertising them on their websites or social media to find new customers out of their cities and expand their business. people also can pay for received product by online payments.secondly internet has provided easy access to information.there are lots of internet books that you can purchase online and read them.there are lots of remote classes that you can register and learn about every thing you like.also you don’t need to buy newspapers every days,for example you can to subscribe in a news agency and receive last news every day.(128)

    there is also some negatives effect on people behavior.first of all people don’t visit each others in real life and they prefer to visit each other on messaging applications like Skype and other software and it has made a gap between relatives.also people make friendship without any mental background and it is sometimes dangerous because as soon as they visiting each other they would be disappointed. secondly some people spend too much time on social media.it has some negative effects on their body structure and it is cause of overweight in people most of all teenagers because they need to be more active and allocate much time to real life.(108)

    in conclusion,internet has had lot of positive and negative effects in people behaviors and their lives,and its depend on that way they are using it.and i think it is more positive for modern life.(36)

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  29. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    Recently, the growth of the internet has been spectacular. There are a big challenge between two group of people in the world. Some people believe that this phenomenon causes many benefits, I agree with this point of view. Some people are completely disagree. (40 words)

    There are numerous drawbacks that the development of the Internet has caused. First of all, Internet users spending almost their time on interacting with each other and also losing their abilities to communicate with other persons in reality. In addition, many people worry about the negative influence. They believe not all of the information available on the Internet is helpful, and also media exert a negative effect on children and young people. There is particular concern about depictions of violence in the media.(82 words)

    On the other hand, Social media is a phenomenon that has transformed the communication of individuals throughout the world. Firstly, social networking websites are very popular and have become daily practice in a lot of people’s lives. It also cause to create new business opportunities. Secondly, the internet keeps almost the information in the world available and easy. In the earlier time, we had to find many information in the library and stepped in a thousand of books. We can Revolutionize our knowledge everywhere with internet.(86 words)

    I agree with second group because, joining to global network could provide opportunities to meet people with multicultural backgrounds and sharing of knowledge and information among the different groups of people.(30 words)

    In conclusion, Although more the information available in the internet is helpful, but there are some offence and dangerous materials, we should regard this subject.(30 words)

    Total=270 words.

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  30. Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday
    Mahnaz Tofigh- Bahman - Friday says:

    The Internet has changed our lifestyle over the past few decades. Although most of people around the world get benefit this huge revolution, but there is some disagreement about positive or negative impacts of the Internet. In this essay both side will be discussed. (44 words)
    First of all, it is an udeniable fact that the speed of accessing to data is very useful for human life. In earlier years exchanging of information was prominent for a few jobs and occupations rather than the other ordinary people, but in age of communacation all people need this technology. Secondly, the way of marketing has alterned and it is completely depends on Internet connection. This way of marketing is positive side of Internet because many goods or services are simply available to the general public without spending too much time and can be received at the click of buttom. (101 words)
    On the other hand Internet has some negative points. First of all, There are many people who spend too much time on the Internet or communicate with others by a hard and souless device rather than relating to people who lives in the real world. So a phenomenon has occurred to the society and that is nothing except social isolation. Secondly, loosing or hacking data, especially private information by people who benefits from confidential life of others, are negative points of this kind of technology. Alhough all banks, companies or government’s data is very important, but public people do not have any arrangements for avoiding this matter. (107 words)
    In conclusion, regardless of negtive or positive points of Internet, life without the Internet is not imaginable for all the world and the overall influence of this technology is positive. (30 words)

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  31. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    سلام استاد
    ببخشید کتاب رایتینگ دکتر معمارزاده رو بخونم یا خیر ؟

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      admin says:

      دزود به شما

      خیر به هیچ وجه.

      بجز منابع معرفی شده از هیچ کتابی استفاده نفرمایید. در پایان دوره منابع تکمیلی معرفی میشه که البته کتابی که فرمودید به هیچ عنوان در بین اونها نیست.

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  32. کیوان
    کیوان says:

    سلام استاد وقتتون بخیر .مطالب کلاس در اسکایپ مربوط به جلسات چهارم و قبل تر حذف شده؟

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      admin says:

      درود.

      مطالب اسکایپ ملاک ما نیست. فایل های صوتی داخل تلگرام و مطالب داخل سایت تنها موارد مد نظر ما هست. ممکنه پاک شده باشه من چک نکردم. اهمیتی نداره.

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  33. Masoud Ebrahimi Friday bahman
    Masoud Ebrahimi Friday bahman says:

    The line graph represent the weekly time of school children at the age of 10 to 11 expended time on TV and computers at home. 25
    School children spent less than 4 hours a week on computer at the beginnig of chart in 2000.the Next a constant went up in 2001 and then there was increased dramatically between 2001 to 2004. After that it had a slight growth between 2004 and the present time.49
    time spent on TV began with more significant time in 2000. It started with the highest time about 21 hours and it remained steady between 2000 and 2003. It had a sharp plummetted from 2003 to 2004. There was a plateau in 2004 and it countinued to 2005. It showed a fluctuation and after that it is remained steady to the present. 62
    Overall, it reflects that children preference’s changed and they spent time with computer more than TV during 9 years. 19

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  34. Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96
    Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96 says:

    درود به استاد عزیز
    اخرین لینک که در تلگرام گذاشته اید صفحه کلاس اسفند ماه باز میشود

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