دوره مجازی آیلتس

دوره مجازی آیلتس

دوره مجازی آیلتس – کلاس روزهای جمعه بهمن 1396

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای فقط جمعه بهمن ماه کلاس مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست که در تاریخ 20 بهمن 1396 آغاز میشود. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکالیف جلسه سوم

 

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکلیف رایتینگ جلسه دوم 

Happiest Time

Teenage years
#More free time
#spending time with friends

Adult life
#start a family
#having a career

دوره مجازی آیلتس – نمونه رایتینگ جلسه اول نوشته شده توسط مدرس

Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?

There are better situation for work in a large city. First of all, the salary of employees is higher compare with a small town. Since the companies are bigger and more people work in them, their profit is more and these companies are able to pay higher salaries to their staff. Secondly, the number of companies and factories is much more when we compare them to a small town. there are thousands of companies in and around a large city. Each of them needs people to work in and as a result it is easier to find a job in a big city. (103 Words)
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There are also more facilities and services in a large city. First of all, governments around the world always provide more support for big cities. They allocate more budget to large cities and it is easier for people and corporations to ask for financial assistance for starting or improving their business. Secondly, big cities have large populations. when millions of people live in a city, demand for many services increases and also some people ask for high quality services. Business owners have to compete to provide better services and as a result there is a higher chance of finding modern facilities in a big city. (105 Words)

دوره مجازی آیلتس – تکالیف گرامر جلسه دوم  

بعد از مشاهده صفحه مربوط در لینک های زیر و مطالعه دقیق توضیحات به زبان فارسی، چند ویدئو مربوط به هر فصل را مشاهده کرده و با ذکر نام برای هر مبحث دست کم 5 مثال در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد فرمایید.

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گفتار سوم: زمان حال کامل Present Perfect Tense

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گفتار چهارم: زمان گذشته استمراری و زمان گذشته ساده Past Continuous Tense and Simple Past Tense

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – نمونه های زبان آموزان

دوستان عزیز دقت بفرمایید در جلسات اول تمامی رایتینگ ها میبایست بصورت تایپ شده در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد شوند.

نمونه رایتینگ مورد تایید و کار بسیار خوبی از ایمان با رعایت تمامی موارد چک لیست و جمله بندی مناسب.

نمونه رایتینگ ایمان ???

نمونه رایتینگ عامر + #فیدبک ???

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه رایتینگ امیر حسین + #فیدبک

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#فیدبک ارائه شده به این رایتینگ در کانال تلگرام کلاس ???

نمونه کنفرانس ریحانه از کتاب Select Readings با سرعت مطالعه 160 واژه در دقیقه

به ترتیب از فصل اول تا چهارم ???


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دوره مجازی آیلتس – وارد کردن لغات در سایت

زبان آموزان گرامی با ورود به این صفحه فهرستی از تمامی فصل های کتاب های Select Readings، Oxford Word Skills و Essential Words for IELTS را مشاهده خواهید فرمود. فصل مورد نظر خود را پیدا کرده و در بخش دیدگاه ها مشابه نمونه زیر مثال های خود از لغات جدید آن فصل را وارد کرده تا مورد بازبینی قرار بگیرد ???

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

دوره مجازی آیلتس – بانک فیدبک های اسپیکینگ و رایتینگ

بانکی از تمامی فیدبک های ارائه شده بر روی رایتینگ و فایل های اسپیکینگ ارسالی در کانال تلگرام زیر وجود دارد که از تمامی علاقمندان و زبان آموزان درخواست میشود در این کانال عضو شوند:

https://t.me/FeedbackParadise

کانال اصلی ما در تلگرام برای آگاهی از آخرین منابع و تازه های آیلتس:

https://t.me/ielts2com

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – بررسی آنلاین Collocation ها

دوستان برای نوشتن رایتینگ در صورت نداشتن دانش کافی در زمینه ترکیب ها و کالوکیشن ها حتما از دیکشنری زیر استفاده بفرمایید. کلمه اصلی یا کلیدی مثلا advice را وارد کرده و collocation مورد نیاز و مناسب را گزینش فرمایید:

http://collocations.enacademic.com

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دوره مجازی آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس Task 1 و Task 2

دانلود نمونه برگه رایتینگ آیلتس

فهرست کامل لغات مورد نظر برای تمرین (Oxford Word Skills/ Select Readings/Essential Words for IELTS)

آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)

همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید

براورد سریع دایره لغات زبان انگلیسی شما بصورت آنلاین

عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها 

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  1. مسعود ابراهیمی- جمعه بهمن
    مسعود ابراهیمی- جمعه بهمن says:

    University education has direct effect on people’s job. Although some people believe you should study whatever you like, others say you should study subjects that are useful for future. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay. (39words)

    Students should study whatevere they like at university. Firstly they have more enthusiasm in field of studying. it provide better motivation for students and have More positive response specially in courses that are hard. when a student have more enthusiasm in the subject that studying, things become so much easier. Secondly they feel better when they study whatevere they like. it create more activity and more purposeful in the way of education. they can boost their happiness while they study. surely happy students tend to be better students. When someone is feeling good about themselves and their life then they are more likely to experience greater creativity and mental clarity as well as better relationships.( 115 words)

    Students should studying the subject more useful for future. First of all they get better job during the changes in technology and science. peoples behivour in purchase and social medias has changed recently. It can be a reason to create new job titles and actually markets are looking for new staffs with new abilities. Secondly they have more income when they study the subject are useful for future. There are big demands in the hot field in different countries for instance during these days markets need to have IT and ICt specialist in their staffs and any subject related to computer. CEO’s of professional firms determine what the hottest jobs are based on supply and demand and choose qualified candidates for the jobs. (124 words)

    In conclusion, I prefer to study whatevere I like, howevere another would like to study subject that are useful for future.

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  2. مسعود ابراهیمی - جمعه بهمن
    مسعود ابراهیمی - جمعه بهمن says:

    happiest time

    Scientific researchers say: Happiness effect on people’s lifespan directly. Although some people say happiest time is in teenage life, others say it is in adult life. My point will be discussed both in this essay. (35 word)
    Some people say Teenage life is happiest time during human’s life. First of all there are more free time during these days. Teenagers can play sport especially as a profession for their future. It is very particular opportunity to learn a new language so they can practice and do exercise more than others. Secondly At teenage years they spending more time with friends. They can more time to travel a lot with group of friends. Also they can start a team working in a special field. These teams come together for a common purpose. These teams may have a long-term goal for working together or short-term goal such as completing a unit together for some specific skills. (119 words)

    Other people say adult life is happiest time in a person’s life. First of all it is time to start a family. They have better understanding of social issues and well known of the opposite gender feelings. Love is all you need to be happy especially after getting married also people saw a sharp increase in their level of wealth. Secondly you have a career when you adult. Acquiring a new skill or developing an existing one can help improve and maintain our mental well-being also it makes people independent from their families. Those with more active social lives are twice as likely to outlive those who lead solitary lives. (111 words)

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  3. کیوان
    کیوان says:

    سلام استاد وقتتون بخیر من نمیتونم فید بک مربوط به رایتینگ ها که به صورت عکس هستن رو ببینم در گوگل کروم هم امتحان کردم ولی نشد

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      admin says:

      درود

      متاسفانه موقتا سرور بخش دانلود از کار افتاده چون 5 شنبه شب هست یکم بیشتر طول میکشه تا عیب یابی بشه.

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  4. forough amini
    forough amini says:

    Everybody experience a lot of happy time in their life. Although some people believe that you have the happiest time when you are a teenage, others think an adult has more happy time. Both of sides will be discussed in this essay. (42 words)
    First group believe that a teenager experiences more happy time. First of all, you have more free time in teenage years. You have no responsibility to do something except studying. It means that, it is not necessary for you to find a job or earn money. In addition, you do not worry about provide facilities for yourself. Your parents have provided you with all them. Secondly, you are spending time with your friends. They have same morale with you and your recreations have a same style. Also, your energies are similar to each other and can make yourself good moments. In addition, you can talk easily about different topics with them without embarrassment. (113 words)
    Other group think an adult have the happiest time in his life. First of all, you can start a family. You are a witness to their birthday and grow up and spend most of your time on them, because they give you a reason to live. You love them and good memories with them are made for you. Secondly, you are having a career. You have finished your education and now, you are working in your favorite job. You earn much money a year and can do your favorite activities like traveling, getting married and etc. Also, you get to be a prominent social character and have a beneficial effect on your society. (113 words)

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  5. برات علی
    برات علی says:

    Humans seek for happiness in all the stages of their life. Although some individuals believe teenage years are the happiest time, others believe adult lives are even more joyful. In this essay, both the viewpoints will be discussed. (38)

    On one hand, many people argue that adolescents’ lives are packed with countless leisure activities. First of all, teenagers have more free time. They have no responsibilities – or their responsibilities are much less than the older ones – and serious tasks which result in having a lot of spare time. Therefore, they can enjoy playing games, exploring the nature, and having fun all the time. Secondly, the early stage of life is the phase of spending time with friends and the age of friendship. Both the boys and girls have many close friends to share their secrets with them, to create many memorable occasions in different journeys, and to enjoy the life all together. (113)

    On the other hand, some others claim that adults take pleasure in their life even more. First of all, mature individuals start their own family. They fall in love, choose their spouse, and have their sons and daughters. Undoubtedly, falling in love is among the happiest events in everyone’s lifetime and having fun with babies is another joyfulness, thus, everybody has more happiness in this stage of life. Secondly, people start a professional career in adulthood. Either they get employed or start a new business, they can earn more money and social prestige which lead to more acceptance and respect for them in the community. (106)

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  6. Sajjad Gh
    Sajjad Gh says:

    Sajjad Gh: 962 Fridays Bahman
    Being happy is one of the most important factors that affect the physical and mental health of the individuals. Although, some people believe that adult person has happier time than younger. Others, like me, think that young people spend more time on happy things than older individuals (47).

    First of all, some people believe that having a career can improve the self-confident and peaceful feeling of people. Therefore, older individuals without any stress and anxiety can spend happy times. having a job also promote the financial strength of people, and they usually have enough money for making good times like travel, concerts, etc. Secondly, older people can start a family, and family can enhance the happy times of life from different ways, one of them is the entrance to the new lifestyle with many new experiences and happiness like romantic actions, dancing together and having a child, etc. In addition, after marriage, the rate of some hormones increase in the body that usually have positive effects on mood and happiness (122).
    On the other hand, some individual says that younger people have more happiness time. First of all, young people have more free time, because they have not usually a job and other responsibilities, and this subject give them more opportunities to have much fun. Even when they are in college/school they are many free times for having a fun. Secondly, young people through the club and school get to know with many people and generally have more friends. Having the more friend allow them to anytime, they can connect to one of them for hobby and fun. Also, by increasing the number of people in a party or other funny activities, the happiness time can be more enjoyable (118).

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  7. علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه
    علی بهمن آبادی-دوره جمعه ها-بهمن ماه says:

    people all around the world try to improve the quality of their life and feel happier.although some people believe that teenager are happier,other think that adult have better situation for happiness. in this essay both of sides will be discussed.(41)
    first group think that teenagers have more free time .first of all ,most of them have no responsibility and do not need to make money by self and their parents support them in financial problems.so it help them to feel free to manage their spare time in way that they want without any concern.secondly they have so many friends that they can spend their free time and have fun and share their idea with them and behave in a informal way with them without any concern to lose them.also they do not need an exact schedule for their routine and their activities .so,they have flexible diary.(107)
    in other hand some people believe that adult have more enjoyable life.first of all they can have a job and make money to buy their needs and they do not need to describe to their parent how they spend that money .also they can manage this budget in many ways like buying a car or a house and feel independently .secondly they can make family and spend time with their partner and children and share their emotional feeling with them.for example The happiness a father feels while playing with his sons and daughters is unimaginable for a teenager.also your spouse is partnership time can help you in difficult situations.(109)

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  8. Elmira Alif
    Elmira Alif says:

    It is undoubtedly true that everyone has had a happy time during their lifetime. Although some people believe that teenage years are the most valuable and happiest time spent in one’s life, others feel adult life might be more joyful. In this essay we will discuss both perspectives. (48 words)
    Some people assume that teenagers are most likely in the best stage of their life. Firstly, it is often true that young people have more spare time. Many of them do not have crucial responsibilities which could be challenging and stressful even for adults. The high number of teenagers are probably unemployed. Thus, they might spend their time doing leisure activities. Secondly, most of the time adolescent people are surrounded by their best and more specifically close friends. For instance, girls usually go shopping with other girls in to enjoy themselves. Moreover, some boys do computer games with each other to have more fun. In other words, being young means to have more energy and unleash it with friends around.(120 words)
    Other people might argue that adulthood is the most enjoyable periods of lifetime. Firstly, one of the good points about being adult is that it is possible to start a new family and expand it after a while. As an important factor, many needs to have a partner in order to share fulfilling moments with. Furthermore, having children leads to an objective lifestyle. Secondly, having a career which is related to our skills is a must for an adult. It gives people not only the opportunity to communicate with colleagues and be sociable, but also to be more independent in different aspects of life. As we know, this may happen at the ages of over 18 known as adulthood. (119 words)

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  9. Elena Payandan
    Elena Payandan says:

    Happiest time
    It is no boubt reliable that majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. Happiness is difficult to define it means it could be rely on different to each people age. In this essay I want to describe two idea about happinet time for adult life and teenager yeares. (52)
    Nobody can to totally understand a sense of satisfication between these groups. For first reason, it may be associated with the idea of people age, for example, teenager group are supported financially and emotionally by their parents, in other words, they recive some basic preconditions of their parents. And also they have less responsibilities in family, actually they do not have to make a important decision. Secondly, they have more social activites with each other and take more pleasure. In fact, one of the key factor for teenager years could be individual freedom for instance, fall in love and communicate easily.(101)
    On the other hand, some people believe adult course is the happiest time in their life. firs of all, some people have a sense of satisfaction from earning money or achieving success career. Increasing professional skills and earning a lot of experience provide a highly satisfaction feeling for adult life. Secondly, adults have stronger emotional relationships. They enjoy could be spouse, father or mother, and also the majority of people are so happy for spending more time and sharing emotion with their spouse. As a matter of fact, having a family could give them a chance to be happiest.(101)

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  10. amin behzadnia
    amin behzadnia says:

    Happiest time:
    The one of challenging context in the world is happiest time or you be happy all time. Although some people believe the teenager years are enjoyable, others prefer the adult life. In this essay, both of them will be discussed.(40 words)
    Teenager years are between 13 and 19 years and this period time you have more free time. Therefore, you can program your time to go movies, gym, club and other places; thus, you can be happy in this period. Those activities can influence your mood and change your feel to have happy time. In this period time, teenager can spend time with their friends; therefore, they have good chance to be happy by friends. Girls or boys friends to be able to increase teenager ‘s courage in order to start new study or improve their progresses. The teenagers can play football, volleyball and etc games with friends and enjoy to their life because exercising can help teenagers have happiest time and be healthy.(123 words)
    Adult life is happiest time because of starting a family and having a career. Adulthood have potential for thinking about marring; therefore, the goal of their life are specified. They can try to achieve their purpose and develop the level of their life; thus, they can enjoy their life. Secondly adults can start or have job. People who have job, they can spend money or buy something; in addition, they go to the travel by their salary. They can purchase car and travel by their cars to other places; thus they enjoy their life. Having a career can influence to expand adult ‘s friendship and then they can improve the level of life by friends for having happiest time.(119 words)

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  11. Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96
    Mohsen Abbaspour-Friday Bahman96 says:

    happiness is one of the most important factor in human life.Although some people believe that teenagers feel more happy in their period of time,others think that adult life can bring happiness. My points will be discussed in this essay.{39

    Some people believe that they have the best possible chance of happiness during in their teenage years. First of all, teenagers have more free time than adults to do what they love. Young people need their parents’ permission to live in their parents’ home till they get a job. Their parents support and expect them to be one of the best students in their class.Secondly, young people have more opportunity to spending a lot of time with friends. They generally share their emotional experiences and have opportunity to talk abut dreams with their friends. They explain that how they can set targets and achieve their goals.106

    Some other people believe that adult life is happiest time in their life.First of all, research consistently shows that marriage and long-term relationships are good for your physical, mental and financial health. Married people tend to smoke less, drink less alcohol, and eat more healthily. Social roles that can give husbands and wives a stronger sense of their own identities.Secondly, Many people think that having a career will bring them lots of happiness.Recent researches have shown that a good job can be better for your mental health because you can solve maney problems.Salary and happiness suggests that satisfaction with life does increase with salary.104

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  12. ناشناس
    ناشناس says:

    Erfan tabatabaee
    کلاس جمعه ها
    Im not very religious but i do go to church at wester
    I choose to learn english rather than spanish
    He is birde groom
    I started to get anxios they had not arrived at 9 oclock
    Jordan had very energy in the basketball

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      admin says:

      درود

      لطفا اسمتون رو در بالا در بخش مربوط به نام وارد بفرمایید.

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  13. ناشناس
    ناشناس says:

    Im not very religious but i do go to church at wester
    I choose to learn english rather than spanish
    He is birde groom
    I started to get anxios they had not arrived at 9 oclock
    Jordan had very energy in the basketball

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  14. مسعود ابراهیمی جمعه بهمن
    مسعود ابراهیمی جمعه بهمن says:

    استاد سلام. اميدوارم حالتون خوب باشه.
    يه سوالي داشتم از خدمتتون.
    براي اسپيكينگ اگر يه چهارچوب مكتوب داشته باشم كه از لحاظ متن و قواعد روش كار كنم و بعد اونو حفظ كنم ، ايا راه صحيحي هست براي تقويت اسپيكينگ؟
    البته كار راحتي نيست واقعا. متون وقتي زياد ميشه كار سختي ميشه.

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  15. مهناز توفیق- جمعه بهمن
    مهناز توفیق- جمعه بهمن says:

    Happiest time

    During the human life there is happy and sad moments and definitely feeling happy is most important for people. Although some people think that the teenagers have the happiest times, others believe that adult life brings more happiness. In this essay I will be explained both ideas. (47 words)

    First of all, those who believe teenagers are the happiest people consider more free time that they have. Young people can do every things as they wish. Even teenagers’ family don’t expect them to spend a lot of time together. Although they care of their child, but they give them individual freedom to enjoy every minutes of free times. Secondly, teenage years are the best years of life that making new friends is very easy and spending time with friends is very pleasant. Getting together, tell a jock, play games or anything like this keep them very happy with a deeply satisfying feeling. (103 words)

    On the other hand, there are people who believe adult hood is the happiest time in one’s life. First of all, an adult person has an opportunity of starting family. It is very important to some adult person get married as soon as possible and share time and emotions with spouses and their children. Therefore having a family give them a chance to be happiest and more pleasant. Secondly, having a job is the most important part of adult life. Earning money from a good career, having a social relationship and a good social condition at work makes a deeply satisfying feeling for adult life. (105 words)

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  16. مسعود ابراهیمی - جمعه بهمن
    مسعود ابراهیمی - جمعه بهمن says:

    استاد من قبلا فرستادم اینو ولی حذف شده. دوباره می نویسم رایتینگ جلسه اول رو:

    Do you prefer to live in a big city or small town?

    There are better situation for job in a large city. First of all there are more level of salary in a big city because there are more companies and organization and it caused better situation for their employees in terms of salary. Secondly there are more companies and factories in a big city rather than small town it caused better environment for find job. There are big demand to Recruitment around a big city. It has more chances to find job opportunities compare with those in small town. Thus, younger people can register to these industrial places to find their appropriate jobs and it reflects the practical experience they have gained. (111 words)

    There are also more facilities and services in a big city. First of all, there are more support from government in a big city. There are several types of public transportation; thus, people are able to move from one place to other place in a fraction of minutes. In addition it is not also necessary for young students to travel to other cities or abroad to continue their education; they can study in their own university and college, if they live in big cities. Secondly there are more population in a big city. Different people with diverse traditional backgrounds and cultures live close to each other. Therefore, settlers have the chances to get accustomed with unknown customs and cultures. (119 words)

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود. صد ها نفر در هفته رایتینگ ارسال میکنند و حتی 1 مورد حذف هم نداریم. بدون شک رایتینگ شما ارسال نشده بوده.

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  17. Sajjad Gh
    Sajjad Gh says:

    با سلام
    برای نوشتن رایتینگ باید زمان بگیریم؟ چقد باید روش وقت بزاریم.

    کلاس فقط جمعه ها. بهمن ماه

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود.

      البته این مورد رو در کلاس کامل صحبت کردیم.

      تا 1 ماه مونده به امتحان این زمان باید حدود 3 تا 4 ساعت باشد چون همراه با تحقیق و جستجوی اینترنتی و جستجو در دیکشنری خواهد بود.
      از یک ماه مونده به آزمون باید کوشش کنید در حدود 1 ساعت رایتینگ رو تموم کنید و هفته به هفته کوشش کنید این تایم رو به 40 دقیقه برسونید.

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  18. عارفه طاهري.جمعه بهمن ماه
    عارفه طاهري.جمعه بهمن ماه says:

    نمونه اصلاح شده رايتينگ بعد از فيدبك
    Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?
    As we know, big cities provide better situation for job in comparison with small town. First of all, employees in the big cities get higher salary than the other people who work in a small town, because there are many big and famous companies that their wages are more. Sometimes people take on extra work to increase their income. Secondly, there is a huge number of companies and factories. Additionally with the passing of time the number and variety of factories increases. These organizations need people to work in, so many people who are out of job can have a job.(114)

    There are also more facilities and services in a big city such as education and transportation. First of all, governments around the world mainly concentrate on big cities and they allocate more budget to large cities and their companies.almost all of the companies prefer to run their business in developed cities. Secondly a lot of people are crossing over the city all day long and a large proportion of people live in the city. As a matter of fact each person has special interests. So it makes lots of different demands. Businessmen try to provide better services due to popular demand.(102)

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  19. مسعود ابراهیمی - جمعه بهمن
    مسعود ابراهیمی - جمعه بهمن says:

    Do you prefer to live in a big city or small town?

    There are better situation for job in a large city. First of all there are more level of salary in a big city because there are more companies and organization and it caused better situation for their employees in terms of salary. Secondly there are more companies and factories in a big city rather than small town it caused better environment for find job. There are big demand to Recruitment around a big city. It has more chances to find job opportunities compare with those in small town. Thus, younger people can register to these industrial places to find their appropriate jobs and it reflects the practical experience they have gained. (111 words)

    There are also more facilities and services in a big city. First of all, there are more support from government in a big city. There are several types of public transportation; thus, people are able to move from one place to other place in a fraction of minutes. In addition it is not also necessary for young students to travel to other cities or abroad to continue their education; they can study in their own university and college, if they live in big cities. Secondly there are more population in a big city. Different people with diverse traditional backgrounds and cultures live close to each other. Therefore, settlers have the chances to get accustomed with unknown customs and cultures. (119 words)

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  20. ناشناس
    ناشناس says:

    عرفان طباطبایی کلاس جمعه ها
    اقای ابوالقاسمی اشکالات جملات رایتینگ من کجا بود؟

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  21. Sajjad Gh
    Sajjad Gh says:

    He runs roughly 10 miles every day.

    Reading the chapter 1 lasted (went on) about 4 minutes

    Tehran derby is the most spectator game in Iran super league

    The building was originally used as a prison.

    I and my parents are alike in behavioral characteristics

    For your convenience, we provide for you a credit card

    My home is a two story apartment.

    I look just like my father.

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  22. ناشناس
    ناشناس says:

    The name of Allah
    Big city beaccuse: big situation and is important university and the best chance for different field , for better job or best busines . In the big city has different businees for every people in is important for start to capital city . Of course small city less chance for better job in the big city good salary and for buy house in the big city in the there is mall and mega mall and is beautifull modern view city center
    goverment tower of course in my openine
    Erfan tabatabaee کلاس جمعه ها

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    • admin
      admin says:

      درود

      لطفا اسمتون رو کامل در بالا وارد کنید

      رایتینگ شما طبق توضیحات و چک لیسن باید 2 پاراگراف باشه هر پاراگراف بین 100 تا 120 واژه

      شما واژگان رو در انتهای هر پاراگراف وارد کنید

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  23. Sajjad Gh
    Sajjad Gh says:

    I prefer live in big city, because there are better job opportunities in large cities. First of all, there are more companies and factories in big cities, these companies for reach to their goals and for win in competition with other companies need to employ more staff. Secondly, in the big cities there is large companies that these companies can have more profit, thus, they can pay more money for staffs. On the other hands, for win in competition with many other companies, companies had to spend more salary for employees.
    In addition, there are more facilities and services in big cities. First of all, governments usually spend more budget for improvement of facilities and services in large cities and have more supportive rules in progression of companies and factories and therefore these companies can have more quality and quantity products and services. Secondly, presence of more population in large cities resulted in more demand, with increasing the demand the new companies can be create, thus with increasing the companies, competition for production of high quality services increase and this competition improve quality of goods and services.

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