دوره مجازی آیلتس اسفند 1398

ممنون میشم استاد نظرتون رو برای مقدمه بفرمایید

These days self- employment is more popular compered with working for a company.Such selection can have various reasons,as well as diverse challenges.

High school years play an important role in everyone’s life. I believe sending high school students to perform voluntary community work is a good idea, however, obligating teenagers to do extra task has some drawbacks. (35 words) The recommendation of mandatory unpaid community service for high school students has some benefits. First of all, it may inculcate a sense of responsibility in pupils. It will teach them not only to concern about themselves but also to feel responsible about others. For instance, cleaning the neighborhood can help them take care of environments and be socially responsible people. Moreover, it provides… ادامه مطلب »

با تشکر اصلاح شد: The high school stage is a golden opportunity for gaining valuable experience. I believe that unpaid work as a curriculum can be beneficial to both individuals and society. However, I believe that it should be quite voluntary. (37 words) Teenagers can benefit from unpaid work on voluntary basis and even as a part of their education. Firstly, they obtain a real vision of the working relationship between worker and employer and they will be held personally responsible for their performance and this can the first experience of the future they will encounter as an adulthood. Secondly,… ادامه مطلب »

High school years play an important role in everyone’s life. I believe sending high school students to perform voluntary community work is a good idea, however, obligating teenagers to do extra task has some drawbacks. (35 words) The recommendation of mandatory unpaid community service for high school students has some benefits. First of all, it may inculcate a sense of responsibility in pupils. It will teach them not only to concern about themselves but also to feel responsible about others. For instance, cleaning the neighborhood or the seaside can help them take care of environments and be socially responsible people.… ادامه مطلب »

استاد این جمله درسته؟ اگه نه، چه جوری بگم ؟ میخوام بگم وقتی دانش آموزان حق انتخاب نداشته باشن ممکنه نتیجه ی عکس بده .

When students have no options to give them a chance to choose to be volunteers or not, it can eventuate conversely

Many children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of a television or computer screen. The chart illustrates the average hours a week which children at the age of 10 to 11 spent time on 2 activities between 2000 to 2008. Children spent 21 hours in week on watching TV in 2000. This remained stable until 2003. From 2003 to 2004, it showed a decline to 15 hours. After this time until 2008, the chart was constant with a variation in 2006. At the beginning of chart, children spent time on computer is lower than watching TV. But… ادامه مطلب »

استاد توو سوالات رایتینگی که اخرش به این صورت نوشته شده حتما باید مثال هم بزنیم؟ و اگه مثالی ننویسیم نمره کم میشه ؟

To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

The graph shows number of hours per week on average that school children spent watching TV and computer. The graph covers the period between 2000 and 2008. From 2000 to 2003, there was a period of stability in the average number of hours children spent on watch TV. This was followed by a fall from 21 hours to 15 hours between 2003 and 2004. Then, over the next 4 years, except some fluctuations between 2005 and 2006, the graph remained stable around 15 hours on average. The number of hours spent by children on computer began with 3 hours in… ادامه مطلب »

The high school stage is a golden opportunity for gaining valuable experience. I believe that unpaid work as a curriculum can be beneficial to both individuals and society. However, I believe that it should be quite voluntary. (37 words) Teenagers can benefit from unpaid work on voluntary basis and even as a part of their education. Firstly, they obtain a real vision of the working relationship between worker and employer from these activities and they will be held personally responsible for their performance. this may be the first sense of performing tasks out of their home and can be the… ادامه مطلب »

It is argued that volunteer services should be mandatory in the high school curriculum. I strongly agree to this ,but some people believe that it should be a personal option. Unpaid community services in high school can be part of education. Firstly, these services can improve valuable skills and start out as a social experiment. Teenagers also can do real work and gain opportunities to face the difficult challenges of their career. In addition, a lot of people will have access to the services offered by the community of high schools. Lastly, governments can save a considerable amount of budget… ادامه مطلب »

سلام. ببخشید نظرتون راجع به این مقدمه:The high school stage is a golden opportunity for gaining valuable experience. I believe that unpaid work as a curriculum can be beneficial for both individual and society, however scheme like this comes with drawbacks too.

AGREE #Gain experience #help them to find social personality Disagree #waste time #negligent of doing obligatory work Some high schools for their students run a program that oblige them to do free obligatory services.Some people think it is necessary for their children and I have many reasons to agree and disagree about this idea.(37 word) Doing free mandatory services by high school students can be useful .First of all,with such activities students can gain considerable experience. Presumably,some of these experiences will help them that choose their future job.For instance, a student that choose to teach his friend how to study… ادامه مطلب »

سلام وقت بخیر. لطفا نظرتون راجع به ایده پردازی زیر بیان کنید ممنون
Agree
# get valuable experience
# become more sociable
Disagree
# being abused
# sense of frustrating

سلام استاد نظرتون رو میفرمایید
Unpaid community service
Agree # government can save money for other construction #gain valuable skills Disagree # abuse from students
#delay from joining college

Maximum sharing #raise awareness #share experience freely Sharing with limitation #more competition #prevent abuse information These days,sharing information is normal and inevitable.Although I believe we should prevent sharing information, others think sharing information is a good idea.(21 word) Some people think sharing information about some subjects are necessary .First of all,this idea lead to people get a lot of information easily specially information that have access to them is hard .For example,a student that living in Asia require to give lecture about Italy it can be clear that she would rather utilize information that are shared about such it.Secondly,with sharing… ادامه مطلب »

Sharing information is a crucial issue in modern societies. While some people argue maximum sharing information in various areas of academic research and business is inevitable, others think some information should only be shared in particular circumstances. In my opinion both approaches should be considered. (45 words) Advocates of sharing information freely believe that there are some benefits in it. First of all, they consider it as a global collaboration with developing technology for both academic and business world. The exchange of information among people can easily lead to update their background knowledge and promote remarkable developments which make the… ادامه مطلب »

maximum sharing # saving money and time # More innovations Sharing with limitation # Abuse of information # poor competitive power ***************************************************************** nowadays, almost every organization share their information under special rules. although, some people believe that scientific, academic and business information should widely shared, others, including me think some information has considerable importance to be shared widely. some people assume widely information sharing might causes good results. First of all, other organizations, especially newly established ones, can save money and time. Many organization spend a lot of money and time to conduct an experiment. However, it’s possible that like… ادامه مطلب »

سلام توو جمله زیر استفاده از either …or درسته یا both … and ?

they consider it as a global collaboration with developing technology for either academic or business world.

این جمله از لحاظ گرامری درسته ؟

One of the crucial issues is sharing information in the modern age.while some people believe that it is good in the maximum level, others including me prefer limitation in sharing information. Some people support the maximum sharing information.First of all, as you know information is generated From the data aggregation and this process consumes a lot of resources such as time, money and etc. Since some resources are irreparable, sharing information lead to access easily to other researches and save the resources .Secondly, when we share information without any limitation, this causes people don’t repeat the ways that others try… ادامه مطلب »

The capability of Information sharing globally, is a result of impressive progress in science and technology. While some people believe in maximized sharing with no restriction, others assume that the accessibility of information should be controlled. (36 words) Some people argue for unlimited access to information. For one, this approach saves money and time impressively by avoid of repetitive. For instance, Access globally to scientific and academic research means that a great deal of money and time will be saved by avoid doing unknowingly same researches around the world. It would be possible to coordinate alike researches globally through sharing… ادامه مطلب »

درود برشما
سال نو مبارک
لطفا نظرتون رو در مورد ایده پردازی های زیر بفرمایید.

1/Maximum sharing of information

#develop technology
# avoid repetition

Sharing with limitation

# create more privacy
# prevent abusing info

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2# rapid development of science
# access information easily

2# increase competition
# earn money
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3# raise global awareness
# save money and time

3# increase security
# reduce cost of researches

سلام ضمن تبریک سال نو میشه لطفا نظرتون رو راجع به این ایده پردازی بدین
Maximum sharing
# save source such as money, time,…
# prevent to repetition
Sharing with limitation
# to stop to publish unreal information
# protect to abuse information

Nowadays, in some countries the range number of young population has increased compared with its old ones. There are some reasons that support the benefits of this issue while some others remind its drawbacks. young population structure brings remarkable advantages to the countries. For one, they can use the benefits of numerous young labor force obviously. Besides that, new young generation often have higher education and this means a generation with specific skills comparing with elderly people. So, high growth of young population leads to an appropriate workplace rivalry and the industries and other sections of the society can be… ادامه مطلب »

It is well known that a large number of population is young adult in some countries. I believe this situation has advantages and disadvantages. There are certainly several benefits to have more young people.First of all, one of the significant advantages there will be more workforce. This cause to develop industries, products, services and other sections. It lead to economic growth of the countries and increase to produce good. Secondly, young adults can have more innovation because they have active brain. Developing the innovative potential of young people can create new technologies. This affects productivity which means countries can generate… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays, many countries have a large population of young adults in comparison with the population of old people. This circumstance has some benefits and disadvantages. (25 words) First of all, increasing population of young generation can have lots of advantages in terms of economic development for their countries. Since there are more educated workforce who they are more productive and creative than elderly people, so the companies and the industries do not face the trouble of finding the talented ones for promoting their economies. Secondly, having a large population of young adult has the benefits of being more updated with… ادامه مطلب »

سلام لطفا نظرتون رو در مورد ایده پردازی های زیر بفرمایید .
1#Large population young adult
+more productive
+more healthier

-more unemployment
-more crime

2#
+updated with technology
+more energetic

-not enough experience
-not well-equipped

3#
+help economic development
+more innovative

-irresponsible
-high demanding

It is well known that a large number of population is young adult in some countries. I believe this situation has advantages and disadvantages. There are certainly several benefits to have more young people.First of all, one of the significant advantages there will be more workforce. This cause to develop industries, products, services and other sections. It lead to economic growth of the countries and increase to produce good. Secondly, young adults can have more innovation because they have active brain. Developing the innovative potential of young people can create new technologies. This affects productivity which means countries can generate… ادامه مطلب »

سلام. این جمله مناسبه؟
The high index of young population brings some significant advantages

Two maps compare significant differences of a certain island before and after some touristic facilities construction. (16 words) According to the first map related to the previous situation, majority part of the island is unused. the sole noticeable point is some scattered trees in both east and west sides. There are no imperative facilities to attract tourists just a beach on the western part of the island. (49 words) The second map shows a remarkable improvement in the island. (second map shows the island in its remarkable improvement). A reception center is defined as the central part of the island.… ادامه مطلب »

سلام. این جمله از لحاظ گرامری درسته؟ درسته که مجهولی نوشته بشه؟
the island is expanded about 200 meters length and roughly 100 meters whidth

سلام استاد نظرتون رو راجع به این ایده پردازی میفرمایید؟
# Large population young adult
+more workface
+more innovation
-Low experience
– need to provide more job opportunities

In the following map, changes in an island before and after adding some facilities for tourists are shown. In the western part of the island, some accommodations are made. all of them are connected to beach from right side and also to reception from left side which is located in the center of island. there are a restaurant in the northern part of the island and also a pier in the southern part of it. tourist can go to the restaurant or pier to enjoy a boat trip around the island using vehicle track. By comparing the western part of… ادامه مطلب »

A same tropical island is shown in two different maps which are in two different times, one before and the other one after building some tourist services and facilities. (29 words First of all, it can be seen that the majority of the island is unused. And there is only small beach on the west part of it. On the other hand, the face of the island has changed after constructing numerous facilities. As it is clear, there is a reception in the central area which all geographical sides of the island are joined to it by both vehicle track… ادامه مطلب »

the newspaper emphasized (on) the need for urgent action. حرف اضافه on لازم هست یا نه؟

این جمله از لحاط دستوری درسته؟ when i started the work i was very enthusiastic and motivated

سلام وقت بخیر. نطرتون در مورد این مقدمه چیه؟
The changes of a certain island due to touristic facilities construction are been compared with its previous situation through two illustrated maps.

There are two maps which show the difference of the island before and after building touristic facilities. In the first map, it is clear that the island is not suitable place for accepting tourists. However in the second map, there are more facilities are constructed later. There is a reception in the middle of island which is connected with a vehicle track to a pier where is a pleasure place for boating. A restaurant is built at the top of the reception and connected to reception with footpath.Another interesting facility is a beach for swimming in the left side. The… ادامه مطلب »

Big city #More health services #More transportation Small town #More communication #Less air pollution Some part of character of each person depend on location that who lives in there. Although some people like live in a small town, others including me believe big cities are better place for living. Some people prefer to live in a big city. First of all, there are more health services in big cities. People can use these facilities when they need them. Health services in the big cities have covered many diseases, so when you need a specific health service you don’t have to… ادامه مطلب »

Happiness can directly increase the quality of our life at any age. Although a group of people believe adult life would be the happiest period of our life, others including me think having more happy time is one key advantage of being a teenager. some people think during adult life they can have more happy time. first of all, they have job to make money. So they will be more capable to spend money on things that they want for themselves or for people they love. for example they can their favorite car, house or jewelry. This can lead to… ادامه مطلب »

Happiness have several different meanigs which is ralated to mind and it makes people feel better.In my opinion, happiness is not part of our lives but some people assume that the teenage part of our life is the happiness and others believe that adult part is more happier. Some people belive that the teenage years is the happiest. Firstly, teenagers dont have to earn their living because they are usually supported with their family and their living rely on their family.secondly,teenagers have more free time and they can do as many activities as they want; for example playin games,watching movie,etc.… ادامه مطلب »

Happiness is a imperative factor of human’s life. Some people assume teenage years as the happiest time in life while others believe that grownups are happier despite their responsibilities. The assumption that teenagers experience the happiest time in life is a common one that supported by array of people. For one, lack of responsibility makes them free of routine problems like finding job, supporting a family and other related life affairs. Due to parental supported, there are no serious obligations for them just their studying. their sole responsibility is to study. Secondly, teenagers are full of vitality and energy literally.… ادامه مطلب »

The majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. Although some people believe that the happiness can be achieved in teenager age, others including me think that the happiness can be achieved in adult age. This essay will discuss both views. There are some people who believe that adults are happier. First of all , when a child grows older,They can feel the independence increasingly. This feeling of independence may the cause of happiness, since adults can travel everywhere they want. Also adults can do whatever they’ve dreamed about it. So when a child grows older, he… ادامه مطلب »

– Happiness is an imperative factor which is unconsciously seeked by human during life. Some people assume teenage years as the happiest time in life while others believe that grownups are happier despite their responsibilities. If independency and stability are considered as two factors of happiness, the proposition that teenage years are more fulfilling than adulthood is dubious. It’s quite obvious that teenagers in most aspects are dependent. for one, due to have no carrier they have no choice than to rely on their parents monetary. above that they are quite chained to their study tables due to their school… ادامه مطلب »

Having happy life is one of the most important requirements for every person at any age. Although, there are many peoples how believe adults can be more happy, others include me believe teenagers have this opportunity to be more happy.

every person in his/her life needs to feel happiness and enjoys it. although, some people assume getting older is equal to being more happy, others include me believe we can have more happy time during teenage years.

– Happiness is one of an imperative item that everyone seeks it unconsciously. Some people assume that teenagers experience the happiest time in life, while others believe adulthood are happier although they have more responsibility.

– Seeking happiness in life is one of human’s characteristic. Although some people assume teenage years as the happiest time in life, others including me believe that adulthood is a happier time.

Happiness have several different meanigs which is ralated to mind but the result of it makes people feeling good, exited and satisfied.In my opinion, happiness is not part of our lives but some people think the teenagers have happiness life and others believe that the life is happier in adult part.

SOME people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. First of all, there are more energy in the teenage years. People can enjoy more energy because they the teenage year are the young time and people are almost health and can do more activity and in this period often they fall in love for the first time in their life and can marry. Secondly, based on scientists research the best time learning about new problems is about 19th to 30th years of life because after this period of time people often involved with many… ادامه مطلب »

Some people prefer to live in a big city. Others it is better to live in a small town. Discuss both views. Big City # Career Opportunities # Facilities Small Town # Less Stress # Fresh air & Nature Some people believe that a big city provides some considerable benefits. First of all, there are more career opportunities which are the most important reason to migrate from rural area to urban area. People can find lots of places to work with higher income. And if they lose their job for some reason, there will be more chances to find a… ادامه مطلب »

Big cit # apportunities work #modern lifestyle Small town # healthy lifestyle #having relaxing Som people would rather live in the big city.First of all,there are a lot of new works in big cities for this reason finding appropriate job is almost easier than small town.In big city there is subway and it creats a wide range of apportunities for hiring for instance subway driver,security gaurd,ticket seller.There ara alot of companies that hiring teenage boys and girls and help them for gainnig experience for finding better job in thier future.Secondly,in the big cities almost everythings are modern and that is… ادامه مطلب »

Some people prefer to live in a big city. Others think it is better to live in a small town. Discuss both views. Big city # Economic opportunity # Educational opportunity Small Town # Less Costs # More Free time Some people prefer to live in a big city. First of all, there are many companies and industries in the big city. People have access to more suitable alternative to choose a job. As a result they can choose a position with higher standards and higher income. Secondly,all of big cities are almost crowded and they have large population. Therefore… ادامه مطلب »

Some people believe that big city is better for living. First of all, it is obvious that big cities have more facilities than small town. According to requirement and taste, people can use these facilities. More there, people have more entertainment options and they are not limited about their selection. Secondly, big companies, factories, many kinds of shopping malls are in big cities and they can create more opportunity for finding the job. People can find the right job in their specialties, earn more money and improve level of their living. On the other hand, some people prefer living in… ادامه مطلب »