دوره غیر حضوری آموزش و تصحیح رایتینگ آیلتس

some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives other think that adult life brings more happiness ,in spite of greater resposibilities . It is absolutely obvious that happiness critical for teenages and adults life . It is often belived thata teenager is spending the best and the most enjoyable step of her or his/her life . however ,I personaly belive that happiness does not necessairly depend on age and everybody can be happy regardless of his/her age and responsibilities. The first and the most substantial that I would like to express , is… ادامه مطلب »

Writing 9 The graph reveals some information about the USA energy consumption by fuel over the period from 1980 to 2030. Overall, petrol and oil are the most popular fuels during these years, and it is anticipated that energy consumption by all fuels is going to climb by 2030. According to the graph, people in the USA consumed 35 quadrillion unit (QU) petrol and oil in 1980. This amount rose dramatically by around 10 QU in 2015. It is predicted that this fuel will stay in first place with under 50 QU consumption in 2030. Moreover, over 15 QU energy… ادامه مطلب »

1398/12/23 9:00 AM duration: 37min Writing no.1 Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of our lives. First of all a teenage circle of responsibility is very small and limited. In that period of life everybody has duties about making his own life, but by getting older they have many responsibility about their family and society that push them to move in the field of being supportive, and that also make stress in this manner. Secondly teenagers have much more free time to do what they want to do, but when getting older a big part… ادامه مطلب »

Submission 10…… The two sets of data give information about Ashdown Museum before and after refurbishment. Overall, it can be seen that since refurbishment the total number of visitors has been increased , and also the majority of them became very satisfied. At first glance, it is evident that the museum had 74000 visitors before refurbishment. However, after the renovation, the visitor number increased noticeably and reached a peak of 92000. In regard to the survey, it is obvious that a great number of visitors were dissatisfied before the renovation (40%), and less than a third were satisfied. However, after… ادامه مطلب »

Writing 8 A glance at the chart provided reveals some information about the UK telephone calls by three categories over the period from 1995 to 2002. (24) The total number of local- fixed lines can be divided into two categories by years. From 1995 to 1999, this type of call increased by 6 billion minutes in each year, from 72 billion minutes in 1995 to 90 billion minutes in 1995. In contrast, after 1995, the local- fixed lines became less popular such that in 2002, it reached to the same number as in 1995. It is apparent that mobiles had… ادامه مطلب »

Submission 9….. The given line graph compares the consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 from different sources with projections through 2030. Overall, it can be seen that the consumption of energy from all sources increased over the period shown except from hydropower, and it is expected that this trend continues until 2030. In 1998, petrol and oil were consumed more than the other sources, almost 35 quadrillion(35q) units, over the following ten years it experienced some fluctuations before rising to 40q in 2005, and it is expected to reach a peak of nearly 50q in 2030. The consumption… ادامه مطلب »

Wring 7 A glance at two maps provided reveals some information about the appearance of an island before and after the construction of some facilities for tourists. (24) The island has changed noticeably after adding new facilities. At the centre of the island, a restaurant and a reception were built that are connected to each other and to a pier, on the south of the island, by vehicle track. Tourists can use boats to get around from the pier. Besides, many accommodations were constructed for tourists on two sides of the reception. These accommodations are linked together by footpath. Also,… ادامه مطلب »

وقت بخیر، میشه لطفا بگید که جمله زیر درست هست یا نه؟
Only 34% of adults from Angola were literate, while in Peru it was twice.

مخصوصا اون قسمت twice . میشه با double جایگزین کرد؟

Submission 8…..The given bar chart compares how many minutes British people used mobiles and landlines for local, national, international calls, between 1995 and 2002. Overall, the total number of minutes of local calls was higher than the other types of calling throughout the period. Also, while the landline usage for local calls drops over the period shown, the other two categories experienced a rise in their usage. At first glance, it is evident that in 1995 the total number of calls by landlines was approximately 71 billion minutes. It increased gradually over the following five years, and it reached a… ادامه مطلب »

Submission7 The two maps compare an island before and after some facilities were constructed for tourists. Overall, the island turned into a touristic place after development with several accommodation and recreational facilities. To initiate, before the development , on the west side , the island consist of a beach and a few palm trees. However, on the east part, the island had nothing except some planted trees. Turing to the after development, first of all in the center of the island a reception was built which was connected to a restaurant in the northern part and to a pier in… ادامه مطلب »

Writing 6 Today, people, particularly the young, would prefer to set up their own business, as opposed to working for others. Although there are many causes for this preference, there are also various ways that can be done to tackle it. (39) Being self- employed has several disadvantages that tempt people to run a new business. First of all, they will earn more money. When people work for an organization, a large part of that organization’s profit will be allocated to companies’ owners. Thus employees’ income is much less than the owners. Secondly, entrepreneurs are able to apply their opinion… ادامه مطلب »

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سلام ، وقت بخیر
یه سوال دارم ممنون میشم پاسخ بدین .
جمله ی زیر درسته؟!!
At the centre of the island, a restaurant and a reception were built that are interconnected.

Nowadays some people prefer to work for themselves instead of working for a company. There are some reasons for this decision and it has some benefits. There are understandable reasons why some people have chosen to run their own businesses in recent years. Frist of all, they have more flexibility to set their own work schedules; thus, it is a healthier lifestyle, both mentally and physically because they can organize their life better. To exemplify, they can work a few days at their office and do the rest from home; thus, they can spend more time with their family members… ادامه مطلب »

Writing 5 These days, by the growth of technology, agricultural systems have developed, but in poor countries, people still suffer from starvation. Although there are several causes for this problem, many ways can be done to tackle it. (37) Lack of food and nutrients is a significant issue in many countries. This problem has some reasons. First of all, some countries do not have suitable weather to cultivate. It rains rarely in some nations, most of the days are sunny and hot, so water shortage occurs or the soil does not have good quality for cultivation. Therefore, food is scarce… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays, Famine is one of the most important reasons of people’s death around the globe despite the advances made in agricultural sectors. There are several reasons for this and some measures can be taken to tackle the issue. There are several reasons why people are dying around the world in spite of the progress made in agriculture. To begin, the change in climate is the first and foremost reason that many countries around the world can not produce crops as much as they produced in the past. For instance, the majority of African countries, especially on the south east, were… ادامه مطلب »

Writing 4 Music is part of people’s lives and there are various types of music worldwide. Although some people believe that music can make people united of different ages and cultures, I partly agree with them and I think sometimes it cannot do so. (42) Some people think music is a good way to gather different cultures and ages. They have some reasons. First of all, music is an international language. It affects people’s sentiment directly. When individuals listen to good music, they will be motivated, because music deals with human beings’ feeling. Secondly, music is far from political and… ادامه مطلب »

It has been argued that unpaid community service should be made mandatory in high school curriculum. Although, it can be a good chance for teenagers to gain real valuable experience and improve their abilities, it also has some drawbacks. Experience is one of the most beneficial effect of volunteer work during high school. Finding jobs specially permeant types can be difficult for those who have finished their academic education but still have no experience of working in relative fields. Therefore, doing community service as a volunteer can make them familiar with the real work environment. It would help them a… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays, schools offer a wide range of disciplines. Some People hold various opinions about adding unpaid community service as a mandatory program to the school curriculum. While I agree that this plan has some drawbacks, I believe both students and society z can benefit from this program. First, there are some reasons why students should not work for free during school hours. One of the most important reasons is that they should spend their time to learn academic subjects. Since they have a limited time during an academic year, working as a volunteer would negatively impact their study. Therefore, instead… ادامه مطلب »

WRITING 3 In some countries, young adults’ population outnumber the old people’s population. Although it creates several advantages, it has also some drawbacks. (21) The population of young adults in some countries is more than the older population. This overcrowding has many advantages. First of all, these countries are more productive than other countries. Since young people desire promotion at their job, they work hard and attempt to do their best. Consequently, the rate of productivity of societies will increase. Secondly, life expectancy will grow. Young people have more energy and are happier than old people. They give happiness to… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays, some countries have proportionally more youngsters than the elderly. While there are benefits for a country with a young age population structure, it has also some drawbacks. I would argue that this trend has merits and demerits in equal measure. First, in regard to the disadvantages of the higher number of youth people in comparison to the elderly population in a country. To begin, in most countries’ governments are legally responsible to provide free education up to some levels. Thus, governments should channel a huge sum of budget for education of teenagers while this money can be directed for… ادامه مطلب »

استاد من تاپینگ جلسه سوم را به اشتباه با اسم جلسه دوم ارسال کرده بودم. که الان دو رایتینگ ارسالی از من که مربوط به جلسه دوم و سوم هست با اسم جلسه دوم ارسال شده.
گفتم اینجا بگم که دیدید بدونید هر دو را جلسه دوم به اشتباه نوشتم و تاپینگ دو جلسه ارسال شده.
ممنون.

writing 2 session 2 Nowadays more tourists prefer to visit places with difficult conditions. Although this type of traveling has some drawbacks, but there are some benefits which outweigh the disadvantages. Traveling to unusual places has some special advantages which persuade people to try it. First of all٫ individuals always enjoy adventuring. Traveling to special and unknown places will bring a lot of exciting experiences which they would not experience them in a luxury hotel in a defined resort. While this type of journey is dangerous and exhausting, the enjoyment of this adventure is indescribable. Furthermore, some people test their… ادامه مطلب »

استاد من یه سوال داشتم، ممنون میشم راهنمایی کنید
سوال زیر fact نیست چون opinion یه عده رو داره میگه؟ یعنی ما جمله hook رو مثلا یچیزی در مورد education بگیم؟
بعدش با توجه به قسمت دوم سوال، جمله دوم بخش مقدمه رو چطوری باید بنویسیم؟
Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times,
particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy.
Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it

In recent years , the visiting of harsh places of the world by tourists has gained popularity. Although these travels have merits for these tourists, they have also some drawbacks for them that should be addressed and in this essay I will discuss it. First, in regard to the negative consequences of travel to places like the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. Since zones are far from urban areas, in medical emergency conditions travelers may reach to hospital when it is not possible for medical team to save their life. For instance, the treatment of heart conditions has golden time… ادامه مطلب »

Writing 2 Second session The number of young people is significantly higher in some societies while in some other countries old people constitute large amount of population. Although increasing number of young people will have some benefits for the regions, there will be some drawbacks when the percentage of older people decreases. To begin, the young population will have many profits for society. First of all, youngsters play an important role in industry and workplace. They have fresh mind and well prepared to learn and use their knowledge to make improvements and innovation in various parts of industry. Secondly, the… ادامه مطلب »

These days, the number of tourists who tend to visit the places where are not so accessible is on the rise. Although this tending has some advantages, it has also several drawbacks. (30) On the one hand, tourists’ interest in places with difficult conditions has several positive effects. First of all, by going to these places, where tourists visit them rarely, people, particularly researchers, can be familiar with them and get a lot of new information from them which might make a breakthrough in science. Secondly, travel to a hard- access place gives tourists many new experiences. These places, like… ادامه مطلب »

People hold different views in regard the happiest period of the life. While some believe adolescent period is the happiest part of the life, adulthood is claimed by others as the happiest part of the life and I agree with the latter. There are various reasons why a group of people think that youngsters are happier than the other age groups. One of the reasons which make people feel sad is stress. This stress could be related to finding a permanent job. Nowadays, must adult are worried about finding an appropriate job to support their families. Since most teenagers are… ادامه مطلب »

People hold different views in regard the happiest period of the life. While some believe adolescent period is the happiest part of the life, adulthood is claimed as the happiest part of the life by others and I agree with the latter. There are various reasons why a group of people think that youngsters are happier than the other age groups. Frist of all, one of the reasons which make people feel sad is stress. This stress could be as a result of hard work, socioeconomical issues, and problem at the workplace. Since most of teenagers are students, they are… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه دهم The table indicates that how many visitors have visited the ashdown museum from one year before through one year after redecoration of it. The charts illustrate the results of a poll which had asked the visitors about their satisfaction during the same period. (43 The table shows that during the last year before refurbishment, the number of visitors of Ashdown museum was 74000 but it had substantially increased by about 24 percent and reached to 92000 during the year after refurbishment. (37 It is obvious that the trend of visitors satisfaction with renovation of Ashdown museum were… ادامه مطلب »

Happiness plays an important role in people’s lives. Although some people argue that teenage period is the happiest period for most of the people, others, including me, think adult time is the happiest time. (34) On the one hand, one group of people think teenage period is the best time in the majority of people’s lives. They have some reasons, first of all, teenagers do not have serious responsibilities in their family. The only duty of them, which ought to be prioritized, is studying also the only responsibility that they should be worried about it is doing school’s work. Secondly,… ادامه مطلب »

People can find happiness in every aspects of their life. I believe that happiness is not contributed to specific age or period. Individuals can have different kinds of happiness during their teenage times or adult times and none of them have more happiness than the other one. To begin, teenage years are one the best periods of our lives. In this time, people can become happy easily with every little things that may not seem happiness for adulthoods. They are not involved in society’s problems and they have no responsibility for making money or living costs. The have too much… ادامه مطلب »

The line graph illustrates the data on energy consumption from 1980 to 2012 and what it will be in 2030. (20 Petrol and oil have been the major fuels in U.S. since 1980 where the usage of these energy sources was about 35 quadrillion and since then, it has gradually gone up despite some initial fluctuations till 1995 and it will be expected to reach 47 quadrillion in 2030. (48 The consumption of coal and natural gas is near to each other. At start point, the amount of consumed natural gas was 20 q which is higher than consumed coal… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام و تشکر از زحمات بی دریغتون. یه سوال دارم خیلی ممنون میشم راهنماییم کنین. میخواستم ببینم این سوال جز سوالات discussion type هست یعنی هر مورد رو توضیح و نهایتا نظر خودم رو مطرح کنم چون خیلی مشخص نمیشه جز کدوم دسته محسوب میشه.
research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences you may have in our life. which do you consider to be the major inflience

Dear Mr Goh I have bought a scanner recently from one of the your branch in kualalumpur and unfortunately it doesn’t work properly . The page is scanned by it is not clear at all. I have accepted many project after buying this scanner as i thought it is a new version and faster than the old one .unfortunately , i couldn’t finish even one of my project and i may lose all my customers as time is so important for them. It is not easy for me to go to the branch where i bought my scanner to repair… ادامه مطلب »

Dear Oxsana As i remember , you ‘ve told me many times that you need a bicycle even more than a car and you know what? I am moving to a big and so cold city in the north soon . As a result , it would be difficult for me to use it there. I used to get everywhere by this bicycle as our city is so small and flat .Therefore it wasn’t a big deal and i used to enjoy riding it too. Although i always prefer to ride the bicycle instead of using a car , it… ادامه مطلب »

These two maps illustrate changes in an island, before and after that some leisure touristic facilities have been developed there. (20 In the first map we just see a roughly unused land without any facilities for tourists. Actually except a few trees in each side and a beach in the east, there is no tourist attraction to beckon some visitors to the island. (42 In the second map, the island have been developed in many ways. First of all, a reception placed in the middle of the island which is connected to a restaurant in the north of it and… ادامه مطلب »

It is a dream of most people to run their own businesses .while everyone have their own reasons for making this decision, there may unfortunately be some unexpected problems.(28) Nobody can deny the benefits of being self-employment. First of all, some people believe that they can earn and save more money when they have their own businesses as most of the time the salary is fixed for most employers in the companies. However, the profit sometimes is so high for self-employment people as a result they can earn and save more money. Secondly , they have the flexible time work… ادامه مطلب »

Food shortage is still one of the serious topic spite of all advantages that modern farming systems have brought in this new century. Although there are different and complex reasons to cause this problem , the creative solutions can be certainly found to solve them.(42) Among many complex reasons that cause food shortage , two of them can be considered as the main reasons. First of all, It is obvious that climate plays an important role in agriculture industry. Therefore, the harvests have been impacted by climate changes nowadays . Farmers in some part of the world are facing with… ادامه مطلب »

In the last decades, many progresses are made in the agriculture industry. due to some obstacles, there is still a long way to eliminate starvation all over the world, but we can also find solutions to reach that goal. (39 Chief reasons of lack of food are various. First of all, human population have distorted the nature and it caused serious environmental problems such as climate change and water scarcity and consequently, environmental problems play a vital role in food shortage. For example, constructing a lot of dams has caused climate change and consequently reduction in rain and snow falls… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه ششم These days, an increasing number of youngsters choose to work for themselves instead of working for a corporation. Whereas there are various explanations for this phenomenon, self-employment has also some drawbacks. (31 words) Several causes have contributed to the rise of self-employment. First of all, the primary reason can be more income. While people who work in a company can receive a stable salary from their company, people who work for themselves can earn more money because all the profits go directly to their pocket so it is more interesting to young people. Secondly, self-employment is attracted… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه پنجم Recently, agriculture technology has improved but there are still some people who do not have enough food. Although world hunger has many reasons, there are some approaches to solve this global issue. (32 words) The scarcity of food depends on many factors. Sometimes, these components are complicated so solving them seems to be difficult. First of all, the change in climate causes famine. In some countries, extreme drought conditions persist and these places have not rained in years. So people who are living in those regions cannot grow their crops and they are dependent on food grown… ادامه مطلب »

Highschool students are in a crucial stage of their lives. In my opinion, taking part in mandatory activities is able to have a positive impact on their future behavior, but it also has some shortcomings. (35 Teenagers can benefit from working voluntarily, in many aspects. Firstly, after spending some years at school, they would be able to gain some useful experience that will help them in their future jobs which are more serious. For example, they will learn how to be responsible for the duties which are devolved to you by your employer or the society.secondly, in that occasion they… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه چهارم High school years are the best time for young people to gain some good experience with compulsory work. Although some disagree, others including me agree with it. Youngsters can benefit from doing work when they are a student in high school. First of all, more experience is one of the advantages of it. While teenagers do their work, they will learn new things. Because young people have to do works that they have not done before. So they can gain more experience. Secondly, making new and more friends is another benefit of working for young people. when… ادامه مطلب »

In some countries the number of young people exceeds the bumber of elderly ones. In my opinion it can has both benefits and shortcomings. (24 Increase in young population is able to produce many advantages in the society. First of all, young people are expected to be more energetic and strong both mentally and physically, so they are more adaptable with different work conditions and obviously it has a good impact on both economical and industrial aspects of the society. Next, people in lower ages are usually more creative so a significant rise in their population can inject new ideas… ادامه مطلب »

Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them.other believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them . Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Friends play an important role in most people’s life .while some people think that it is the better choice to have friends with shared interests, others ,include me do not agree with that.(30) Some people prefer to choose friends who have the same opinion as them . First of all, they believe that they can really enjoy their moments together. It… ادامه مطلب »

The number of people who have put traveling to striking places in their bucket list is increasing these days. Although it could be a great privilege for those visitors, it’s merits are indispensable. (33 There are a couple of obvious benefits in traveling to odd places for the ones who travel to them. Firstly, it would be an outstanding experience to be in such places and get the chance to make good memories which would last a life time. for example it would be exciting to sleep in a tent, where you can clearly hear the sounds of wild animals… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه سوم In some countries, young people make up a large population while other countries have an old population. Although this phenomenon has some advantages, it creates some negative points. A large number of young population has some benefit. First of all, the workforce is an issue in all countries. If the population in a country is young, there are more workforce because these citizens are ready to learn and work and they have a strong motivation to do work so it helps to increase society who want to work. Secondly, people have a lot of need for more… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه دوم Currently, some visitors prefer to travel to a remote place where there are more challenging conditions. While traveling to these places has some benefits, there are also some drawbacks to visit a remote zone. There are some benefits in traveling to a difficult area. First of all, there are some abnormal and unusual situations in these places so visiting these places has a lot of challenges. Because these situations in a remote area are some special conditions that they will create new and unfamiliar challenges. So tourists will be familiar with these challenges. Secondly, traveling to a… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه اول The happiest time is an important parameter to have a good life. Although some include me believe that teenagers are the happiest people, others think that adults have the happiest time. Some people argue that teenagers have more happiness time in their life. First of all, teenagers have more free time then they can use their time to have more fun and they can spend more time with their family and friends so the teenage years are the happiest times of the people’s life. Secondly, teenagers do not have any responsibility. The obligation is not the main… ادامه مطلب »

some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest time. first af all, they are less responsible than than adults , so they would have more free time for leisure activities. for example they can go to cinema, have a party and sport activities with other peers which leads to more satisfied with the life. secondly, there are some activities which is forbidden for youngster. as a result asspect these activities they are limited. on the other hand, some people think adolesecents are more happiness.they are more independent, as they have an own incom, so they can afford to have a rent… ادامه مطلب »

The growth of online shopping will one day lead all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? In this modern century the number of online shop stores are increasing day by day rapidly and the owner of traditional businesses predict to go bankrupt soon. Although some people agree with this view include me , others think in the different way.(42) It is forecasted that traditional shops will be replaced by online shop stores soon as there are some beneficial advantages of shopping online. First of all , people can save their time because they do not… ادامه مطلب »

There are two major idea about the most delightful part of life. The first group assume that it is between 13 and 17 and the second part believe that the people who are more than 18 are the happiest. (39 The ones who are in the first category refer to the fact that teenagers do not have to think about the future all the time and are able to live in the moment. For example do the young people have to worry about paying the bills or concerning about bringing somebody up? The answer is often no. Next, obviously teenagers… ادامه مطلب »