دوره غیر حضوری آموزش و تصحیح رایتینگ آیلتس

These two maps illustrate changes in an island, before and after that some leisure touristic facilities have been developed there. (20 In the first map we just see a roughly unused land without any facilities for tourists. Actually except a few trees in each side and a beach in the east, there is no tourist attraction to beckon some visitors to the island. (42 In the second map, the island have been developed in many ways. First of all, a reception placed in the middle of the island which is connected to a restaurant in the north of it and… ادامه مطلب »

It is a dream of most people to run their own businesses .while everyone have their own reasons for making this decision, there may unfortunately be some unexpected problems.(28) Nobody can deny the benefits of being self-employment. First of all, some people believe that they can earn and save more money when they have their own businesses as most of the time the salary is fixed for most employers in the companies. However, the profit sometimes is so high for self-employment people as a result they can earn and save more money. Secondly , they have the flexible time work… ادامه مطلب »

Food shortage is still one of the serious topic spite of all advantages that modern farming systems have brought in this new century. Although there are different and complex reasons to cause this problem , the creative solutions can be certainly found to solve them.(42) Among many complex reasons that cause food shortage , two of them can be considered as the main reasons. First of all, It is obvious that climate plays an important role in agriculture industry. Therefore, the harvests have been impacted by climate changes nowadays . Farmers in some part of the world are facing with… ادامه مطلب »

In the last decades, many progresses are made in the agriculture industry. due to some obstacles, there is still a long way to eliminate starvation all over the world, but we can also find solutions to reach that goal. (39 Chief reasons of lack of food are various. First of all, human population have distorted the nature and it caused serious environmental problems such as climate change and water scarcity and consequently, environmental problems play a vital role in food shortage. For example, constructing a lot of dams has caused climate change and consequently reduction in rain and snow falls… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه ششم These days, an increasing number of youngsters choose to work for themselves instead of working for a corporation. Whereas there are various explanations for this phenomenon, self-employment has also some drawbacks. (31 words) Several causes have contributed to the rise of self-employment. First of all, the primary reason can be more income. While people who work in a company can receive a stable salary from their company, people who work for themselves can earn more money because all the profits go directly to their pocket so it is more interesting to young people. Secondly, self-employment is attracted… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه پنجم Recently, agriculture technology has improved but there are still some people who do not have enough food. Although world hunger has many reasons, there are some approaches to solve this global issue. (32 words) The scarcity of food depends on many factors. Sometimes, these components are complicated so solving them seems to be difficult. First of all, the change in climate causes famine. In some countries, extreme drought conditions persist and these places have not rained in years. So people who are living in those regions cannot grow their crops and they are dependent on food grown… ادامه مطلب »

Highschool students are in a crucial stage of their lives. In my opinion, taking part in mandatory activities is able to have a positive impact on their future behavior, but it also has some shortcomings. (35 Teenagers can benefit from working voluntarily, in many aspects. Firstly, after spending some years at school, they would be able to gain some useful experience that will help them in their future jobs which are more serious. For example, they will learn how to be responsible for the duties which are devolved to you by your employer or the society.secondly, in that occasion they… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه چهارم High school years are the best time for young people to gain some good experience with compulsory work. Although some disagree, others including me agree with it. Youngsters can benefit from doing work when they are a student in high school. First of all, more experience is one of the advantages of it. While teenagers do their work, they will learn new things. Because young people have to do works that they have not done before. So they can gain more experience. Secondly, making new and more friends is another benefit of working for young people. when… ادامه مطلب »

In some countries the number of young people exceeds the bumber of elderly ones. In my opinion it can has both benefits and shortcomings. (24 Increase in young population is able to produce many advantages in the society. First of all, young people are expected to be more energetic and strong both mentally and physically, so they are more adaptable with different work conditions and obviously it has a good impact on both economical and industrial aspects of the society. Next, people in lower ages are usually more creative so a significant rise in their population can inject new ideas… ادامه مطلب »

Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them.other believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them . Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Friends play an important role in most people’s life .while some people think that it is the better choice to have friends with shared interests, others ,include me do not agree with that.(30) Some people prefer to choose friends who have the same opinion as them . First of all, they believe that they can really enjoy their moments together. It… ادامه مطلب »

The number of people who have put traveling to striking places in their bucket list is increasing these days. Although it could be a great privilege for those visitors, it’s merits are indispensable. (33 There are a couple of obvious benefits in traveling to odd places for the ones who travel to them. Firstly, it would be an outstanding experience to be in such places and get the chance to make good memories which would last a life time. for example it would be exciting to sleep in a tent, where you can clearly hear the sounds of wild animals… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه سوم In some countries, young people make up a large population while other countries have an old population. Although this phenomenon has some advantages, it creates some negative points. A large number of young population has some benefit. First of all, the workforce is an issue in all countries. If the population in a country is young, there are more workforce because these citizens are ready to learn and work and they have a strong motivation to do work so it helps to increase society who want to work. Secondly, people have a lot of need for more… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه دوم Currently, some visitors prefer to travel to a remote place where there are more challenging conditions. While traveling to these places has some benefits, there are also some drawbacks to visit a remote zone. There are some benefits in traveling to a difficult area. First of all, there are some abnormal and unusual situations in these places so visiting these places has a lot of challenges. Because these situations in a remote area are some special conditions that they will create new and unfamiliar challenges. So tourists will be familiar with these challenges. Secondly, traveling to a… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه اول The happiest time is an important parameter to have a good life. Although some include me believe that teenagers are the happiest people, others think that adults have the happiest time. Some people argue that teenagers have more happiness time in their life. First of all, teenagers have more free time then they can use their time to have more fun and they can spend more time with their family and friends so the teenage years are the happiest times of the people’s life. Secondly, teenagers do not have any responsibility. The obligation is not the main… ادامه مطلب »

some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest time. first af all, they are less responsible than than adults , so they would have more free time for leisure activities. for example they can go to cinema, have a party and sport activities with other peers which leads to more satisfied with the life. secondly, there are some activities which is forbidden for youngster. as a result asspect these activities they are limited. on the other hand, some people think adolesecents are more happiness.they are more independent, as they have an own incom, so they can afford to have a rent… ادامه مطلب »

The growth of online shopping will one day lead all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? In this modern century the number of online shop stores are increasing day by day rapidly and the owner of traditional businesses predict to go bankrupt soon. Although some people agree with this view include me , others think in the different way.(42) It is forecasted that traditional shops will be replaced by online shop stores soon as there are some beneficial advantages of shopping online. First of all , people can save their time because they do not… ادامه مطلب »

There are two major idea about the most delightful part of life. The first group assume that it is between 13 and 17 and the second part believe that the people who are more than 18 are the happiest. (39 The ones who are in the first category refer to the fact that teenagers do not have to think about the future all the time and are able to live in the moment. For example do the young people have to worry about paying the bills or concerning about bringing somebody up? The answer is often no. Next, obviously teenagers… ادامه مطلب »