دوره تلگرامی فشرده آنلاین آیلتس آبانماه 1398

For the past several years, agriculture technology has improved but there are still some people who do not have enough food. Although the world hungry has many reasons, there are some approaches to solve this global issue. (37 words) The scarcity of food depends on many factors. Sometimes, these agents are complicated so solving them is radically difficult. First of all, the distribution of agricultural land is not uniform. In some places, there are not agriculture fields. People can not use agriculture improvements. Therefore, although the cost of food is very high they have to buy food in these areas.… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays, the number of hungry people around the world is growing in the 21st century. While the reasons of world hunger are complex, it can be addressed in various ways. This essay will discuss these points. (36 words) Global hunger can be caused by many reasons. First of all, climate change has affected products of agriculture in many countries in the world. Extreme weather events, such as storms, fires, and floods have increased in some regions of the world and these have affected the lives of million people. Climate change has the power to push more than 100 million people… ادامه مطلب »

T.2 Reasons # unfair wealth and technology distribution # global warming Solution # contribution of developed countries to poor ones # using green energy sources Developed countries have progressed dramatically in producing agricultural products utilizing technology, but there is still hunger in poor and undeveloped countries. Many important factors intensify this, but solutions can be devised to improve it. Nowadays people in the world suffer from unfair wealth distribution and the effects of global warming. There is an ever increasing gap between the technology and wealth level in the developed countries with the poor ones. These countries suffer from inefficient… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه نهم Writing task 2: In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem? Today, despite all technological advances in modern agriculture, achieving adequate food is still a serious challenge around the world. There are some social, and climate reasons behind this remarkable phenomenon but several solutions can be discussed. (36 words) Some important factors cause a shortage of food. First of all, the world’s population is increasing dramatically, especially in undeveloped countries, where most of the people are poor. The… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام (بدون تصحیح رایتینگ) In the modern world, with such advances in technology, lots of individuals starving from hunger. There are several reasons for this and some particular solutions can be considered. (28 words) Several reasons have been demonstrated for elimination of agricultural products in all of the world. First of all, some scientists argue that soil erosion is one of the factors effecting agricultural lands. Because this phenomenon resulted in soil nutrients elimination and consequently the quantity and quality of products will be affected. For examples, Iran is among the most top counties in soil erosion and therefore… ادامه مطلب »

ایده پردازی
Global hunger
Reasons
# increasing the world’s population (especially in underdeveloped countries)
# Natural disasters such as flood and drought
Solution
# controlling the rate of growth of human population
# Global helps to people who are affected by natural disasters.

Nowadays agriculture seem very advanced and sophisticated, but many people are still suffering from food shortage around the world. many reasons contribute to this problem. Also there are several solution to solve this problem. (35) Despite agriculture industry and preparing food are very advance but global hunger is a challenge for governments. there are many cases behind of this problem. First of all, unfair distribution food and agriculture products around the world is important factor.in some places agriculture is so thriving and people which is live in that places don’t have any problem about hunger, and the same time some… ادامه مطلب »

The graph displays the average time weekly that children from ages of 10 to 11 allocate to TV and computer as spare-time activities at home. 25 Schoolchildren had spent from slightly under 4 hours a week at the starting year (2000) till almost 2001. Then there was a dramatic rise in the next three years to almost 15 hours per week. After that in the next following four years, there was a slightly less increase to about 22 hours per week. 54 Time devoted to watching TV was significantly higher than computer’s. it started at around 21 hours a week… ادامه مطلب »

You are working for international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. In your letter explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months. Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it Dear MR GHADRSHENAS I’m writing with regards to work in company’s head office in London for six months. Since I’m interested in getting new experience, I think if I work in company’s head office in other country it would help me to progress in… ادامه مطلب »

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Writhe a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Dear sir or madam I have seen your advertisement and I am writing this letter to say that I would like to be in the position that you offer. I believe… ادامه مطلب »

Task 1 You have recently moved to a new neighborhood write a letter to a friend in your letter: • Explain why you moved • Describe your new neighborhood • Invite your friend to visit you Dear Sam I hope you are fine and I write this letter to let you know that we have recently moved to our new neighborhood and house. I will be glad if you come and visit us here. We were waiting for two years for our house to be handed over and fortunately one month ago it was delivered and we are settled down… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام (بدون تصحیح رایتینگ) You are working for international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write ……. Dear Peter I am Ali Mahmodi one of your employee in the sales department in Tehran. I am writing this letter to ask about working in one of the company international office in Turkey for six months. I believe working in our international office will help me gain more experience with international customers and would be a great opportunity for me to learn how I can communicate with those customers. I think… ادامه مطلب »

Task 1: Average time spent by schoolchildren on TV and computer. The graph shows the average weekly time spent by schoolchildren at the age of 10 to 11 on two different pastime activities (TV and computer) at home. (27 words) The children spent fewer than 4 hours a week on computer at the beginning of this period in 2000. This number showed a significant upward trend during the next four years and reached 15 hours a week in 2004. Then it increased more slowly during the following 4 years and reached a peak of 22 hours a week in 2008.… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays, information is very power and important issue and there is an urgent need for access of information. While some people believe that sharing information freely among people is good, others do not accept this idea and I agree with both views. (42 words) Some people think that maximum information sharing has useful advantages for people. First of all, it saves energy and time for other people, special Researchers or students can use freely this information. And also they don’t need to spend a lot of time and energy on investigations and collecting data again. Secondly, sharing as much information… ادامه مطلب »

Information sharing is an investable result of technology growth while some people believe in the idea of maximum information sharing , others however believe it should be limited because of their worth and I agree with both. This essay discuss both view points. Some people think sharing information in maximum amount is really good or even necessary .first of all when we share information in the internet or other social networks, people can use them and also utilize when they want . secondly when we share information , most of the time others trust us and give us their own… ادامه مطلب »

In todays life giving information away is imperative for communication. according to the belief of some, sharing information must be under regulation and be restricted, nevertheless, other individuals think of no limitation . I tend to agree with both. 38 Some argue that information sharing should be maximized. First of all, it will improve general knowledge of people. In this case people who are more up-to-date with news of different fields will have broadened views on various things and so adjust themselves more readily with whatever is happening around them. Secondly, it is more likely to lead to an increase… ادامه مطلب »

Task 2 maximum sharing: • increase general knowledge and education level in the world • provide equal opportunity for information access sharing with limitation: • copyright issue • some information is secret and valuable Nowadays accessing information has become more easy than before. While some people agree that this is a helpful issue, others believe that author’s right should be respected. I agree with both views. From long time ago accessing information in easy way has been one of the wishes of humanity. In the recent decades dramatic progress has been made in global digital network systems and people can… ادامه مطلب »

Today sharing information has been an inseparable part of modern communication. Although some argue that the maximum exchange of information is better, others including me support the idea of imposing certain restrictions on information sharing. (35 words) Some individuals believe that sharing maximum information has more benefits to people. First of all, people can access to valuable and up-to-date information without spending a great deal of time and money. This approach helps scientists achieve the final results of others’ studies related to their work. So, they can easily get this information and save much time and cost. Secondly, people can… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays importance of sharing information is undeniable, some people think information must be shared freely; however, others believe access to information need to be limited. I agree with both of views in some reasons.35 Some people think information must be shared freely, First of all as access to latest information is really hard for people who live in backward countries, Doctors, engineers and others who need to be up to date can’t take advantage of new research and fresh technology. Additionally in some cases information has high price that is unaffordable for these people so when it comes to sharing… ادامه مطلب »

Writing task 2 Nowadays sharing information is very commonplace in the our world.while some people believe maximum sharing information should be cheer,others believe some information is to important for sharing freely. I agree with both (views.(35 Some people think there are more benefits in sharing information as much as possible. First of all,it will be prevent of repeating the same researchs.if they don’ t share that information,others researchers spend more time and more money to gain same information.thus many scientists can be use the information that gain without wasting their time and their mony .secondly,new researchers can be use others… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام و احترام. استاد به نظرتون مقدمه ای که نوشتم به لحاظ گرامری ایرادی داره؟
Today information sharing has been an inseparable part of modern communication. Although some argue that maximum information exchanging is better, others including me support the idea of imposing certain restrictions on information sharing.
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ایده پردازی رایتینگ جلسه هفتم
Maximum sharing
# Possibility of exchanging up-to-date and valuable information,
# preventing individuals from wasting time and money on getting information
Sharing with limitation
# avoiding misusing of vital information (in different fields)
# providing financial gain to academic and business journals
Maximum sharing
# accessing valuable information without spending a great deal of money and time,
# making good progress in science and technology;
Sharing with limitation
# avoiding information falling into the wrong hands’
# copyright protection

ایده پردازی رایتینگ
Maximum sharing
Stop reapiting the same research #
Use others experience #

Minimum sharing
Abuse information #
Some people dont undrestand #

ایده پردازی جلسه هفتم

Sharing information

Maximum sharing
# saving energy and time for people
# using of others experiences

Sharing with limitation
# Economic interests
# Copyright restrictions

—Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Today it is indisputable that sport plays a key role in everybody’s life. For sport professionals gaining more money than other majors’ professionals is considered fair for some; However, some other individuals including me oppose this. 36 Some believe it is rightful for skilled athlete to acquire more amount of money than other professionals. First of all, they have been through various physical… ادامه مطلب »

Dear Amir, I am writing this letter to let you know I want sell my bike that I have not use it for a long time. I usually used my bicycle for going to school and playing. My father bought a new motorcycle to himself two month ago and he gave me his old motorcycle. There is not enough space parking in our house. The colors of my bicycle are blue, white and gray. It has gear lever, two pretty and strong tiers and also a GPRS. The weight of it is light and it is suitable for biking in… ادامه مطلب »

Dear Mahsa, I just wanted to write a letter to tell you about my decision on selling my bicycle. I don’t need it nevertheless, it is the best bicycle that I have ever seen. I think you may like to buy it. I used to go to work by bicycle and I enjoyed this activity immensely. But I can’t use it now as my workplace was moved to another place and it was too far from my house. Consequently, I bought a car and use it to go to work. Another reason I had an accident last month and unfortunately… ادامه مطلب »

جلسه ششم نامه Dear Sara I thought you’d be interested in a bicycle I am selling. I just move to an other house which doesn’t have any free space in the parking for bike maintenance. It’s a really great bike and I think you would like it. In spite of that problem I have bought a new car recently and I don’t like to use bike anymore. And because todays I’m so busy and I work many more hours a week than I used to ,so don’t have any time to ride home or office by bike. The bicycle is… ادامه مطلب »

Task#1 Dear Tom I hope you are fine and I’m just writing this letter to let you know about selling my bike. Unfortunately, since the time we have moved to Tehran I was busy with my new job and with the air pollution and traffic congestion here, I’m no longer interested in riding my bike. If you remember I had a red mountain bike that once you rode and liked it. It is like a brand new one and you can use it for both road and off-road. The condition of its tires frame and gears is perfect, plus it… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام (بدون تصحیح رایتینگ) Dear Ali I am writing this letter to let you know about my bicycle that we bought together three months ago. I have decided to sell my bike because I could find a proper car which I am interested in. But I don’t have enough money to buy it. Therefore, I am going to sell some of my things including my bike to provide money for the car (66). It is almost a brand new bike, with some accessories including locker, light and etc. I just use it during the weekends and all of its… ادامه مطلب »

Writing Task 1: You have a bicycle that you are no longer using. You would like to sell it to a friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are no longer using your bicycle. Describe your bicycle. Explain why you think your friend would like to have it. Dear Reza, I am writing this letter to inform you that I am selling my bicycle. I am moving overseas next month, and I will not be able to take my bicycle with me. It’s a new and really fantastic racing bicycle that I bought just… ادامه مطلب »

Dear Maryam, I am writing this letter to tell you about my bicycle. I want sell my bicycle that you interested it . Before I used my bicycle for exercise and I really enjoyed from riding bike. But these days I usually busy ,also I am going to gym and I try get my regular exercise there. The bicycle is a really great and appropriate for ricing.it is lightweight and really fast speed .also it has rack for holding packages.in addition it color is shiny black. I think you would like to have my bicycle because I know you interested… ادامه مطلب »

These days lot of individual from all over the world are planning to see places with extreme condition. There are several advantages and disadvantages about these places. There are some benefits for these tourists, first of all , there are some new thing for learning in this kind of trips because dealing with difficult situation requires learning new skills. For example when a climber , for first time experiences rock climbing , she/he will get to know the new appliance and how to work with them. Secondly ,in this places tourists experience more excitement because all the things that they… ادامه مطلب »

Visiting remote places where have harsh condition by tourists is more popular than in the past. There are many merits and disadvantages for these destinations.(25 words) Travelling to unusual destinations have lots of advantages. First of all, tourists who spend their holiday in these places deal with new and exciting experiences. There are many unexpected occurrences which tourist have no imagination about them and sometimes even tour guides are surprised by these strange happenings. Feeling of surprise and facing up with exciting happening are enough reasons to pursue this style for spending holiday. Secondly, sightseers require to learn many new… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام/ رایتینگ تسک 2 جلسه پنجم There has been growth in the number of people to visiting places where conditions are difficult like Sahara desert or Antarctica. I believe that travelling to such places has both benefits and disadvantages for tourists. (35 words) There are benefits for tourists to visiting difficult places. Firstly, Travelling can teach more than any university course for people and one of the important benefits of going to such difficult travels is gain new experiments in their life. With learning of useful experiments and using them, they will not be the pervious person after returning… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays the number of tourists who are attracted to difficult destinations are increasing. while there are advantages for these tourists , also there are some disadvantages for them. Some drawback that should not be ignored .(34) There are some advantages for tourists that visiting unusual l places. First of all , they have so much excitement and they enjoy because this trips are different from another types trips that everything is predictable. And that gives them a lot of excitement . also in the difficult condition tourists themselves provide basic facilities and it can be interesting for them . Secondly,… ادامه مطلب »

ایده پردازی جلسه پنجم (ترم آبان آیلتس)
+
# learning some new thing
# having challenge and excitement
_
# experience an uncomfortable trip
# maybe they get disappointed
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+
# feeling more pleasure about where you live
# feel more confidence after that
_
# no fun
# maybe you force to trying to survive

با سلام (بدون تصحیح رایتینگ) These days lots of individuals from all over the world are planning to see other places and have adventure in places with extreme conditions. There are several advantages and disadvantages about these places. (33) There are several disadvantages about visiting new places with unfavorable conditions. First of all, they might putting their lives in danger by going to such places. Many people each year risking their life and trying to climb the Everest and reach the summit to have a wonderful adventure. But some of them are dying in this way, still this is what… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays the number of adventurous tourists targeting remote areas with severe conditions is increasing intensely. Nevertheless, there are advantages concerning these travelings, the detrimental effects are also threating which requires consideration. 32 Going to these destinations with various difficulties can be beneficial. First of all, the strength of tourists is improved as the mind gets stronger through experiencing and learning new things. Also by coming to challenging experiences, people may be able to face stress better and feel less depressed since in there they to some extent learn how to overcome life difficulties and thus deal better with life. Secondly,… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ تسک 2 جلسه پنجم Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. + # enjoying the natural wonders (that cannot be seen anywhere else) ; # amazing experiences – # dangerous conditions; # no facilities and basic amenities. Nowadays the number of tourists who are attracted to difficult destinations has risen sharply. Although there are advantages for these tourists,… ادامه مطلب »

Nowadays the number of tourists who like to travel to difficult places are increase . while there are advantages for these tourists , also there are some disadvantages for them. In this article compare two types . (36) There are some advantages for tourists that visiting unusual l places. First of all , they have so much excitement and they enjoy because this trips are different from another types trips that everything is predictable. And that gives them a lot of excitement . also in the difficult condition tourists themselves provide basic facilities and it can be interesting for them… ادامه مطلب »

Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? Currently, some visitors prefer to travel to a remote place where has more challenging conditions. While traveling to these places have some benefits, there are also some harmful points to visit a remote zone. (34 words) There are some benefits to travel to a difficult area. First of all, visiting these places has new challenges. Because these situations are not normal in a remote area and there are… ادامه مطلب »

Happiness is one of the most important factors of felicity in everyone’s life. although some people think teenage years are the happiest time , others believe adult life brings more happiness and I agree with both. Some people think teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s life. First of all ,teenagers don’t have serious responsibility . people usually live with family support when they are teenagers, because they don’t have enough experience to accept great responsibility . they are in the early decades of their life so they just focus on their future’s goals. secondly ,teenagers have more… ادامه مطلب »

advantages: # Visiting new places # more excitement Disadvantages: # more difficulties # less facilities Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? Nowadays difficult destinations are considered by tourists. While these places have some advantages, they also have some drawbacks. (18 words) There are benefits for tourists visiting new places. First of all, they can visit exotic places and learn many things about the history, different living conditions and the climate. Some of these places… ادامه مطلب »

نمونه ایده از رایتینگ تسک 2 مربوط به جلسه پنجم

+ Advantages
# Visit new places and memorable trip
# obtain new experiences

– Disadvantages
# Fewer security in these places
# Very bad whether

+ Advantages
# have a lot of excitement
# seeing pristine and fresh areas of nature

– Disadvantages
# having more dangers
# fewer facilities

(Writing assignment, Task 2, 4th of Aban Class, Siamak Salimi) Nowadays there is an increasing demand for visiting pristine and remote places. While there are considerable natural attractions in such destinations, negative aspects should not be neglected. There are several reasons which draw the people to such destinations. First, the adventurous feeling that exists in these kinds of tours is a strong factor for attraction in comparison with normal touristic centers. The excitement of passing a narrow and dangerous bridge over a deep canyon or climbing to a frozen summit are the examples of such activities for adventurous people. Secondly,… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام چند نمونه ايده پردازي جهت رايتينگ تسك 2 جلسه پنجم
Advantage
# looking for adventure
# see the wild animals lived in there, particularly
Disadvantage
# create pollution and waste by tourists
# they put pressure on local resources
Advantage
# discover uncharted territories
# tourists can test their endurance to live in unusual places
Disadvantage
# The building of facilities and infrastructure can destroy the habitat of wild animals
# because of bad weather, it can be dangerous for tourists’ health

با سلام. آیا جمله آغازین رایتینگ مناسب هست؟
Nowadays the number of tourists who are attracted to difficult destinations has risen sharply. Although there are advantages for these tourists, they also suffer from some drawbacks that should not be ignored(34 words).
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با سلام، چند نمونه ایده پردازی رایتینگ تسک 2 جلسه پنجم
Tourists in Difficult Places
+Advantages:
# Economic developments of such places
# seeking unreached places
-Disadvantages:
# Dangerous for tourists
# Unpleasant conditions;
+ Advantages:
# getting amazing experiences
# visiting picturesque views
– Disadvantages:
# Anxiety about unexpected events
# Unbearable conditions
+ Advantages:
# astonishing experiences
# exploring unreached territories
– Disadvantages:
# having no facilities
# exhausting conditions

(Writing assignment, Task 1, 4th of Aban Class, Siamak Salimi) 09 Nov. 2019 The map depicts an island in its initial pristine condition and then, after developing some leisure facilities there. While trees remained untouched, considerable facilities were built specially in the center and left side of it. A reception building can be seen in the center which is connected to the circular pattern accommodation cottages in two sides and to a restaurant, on the upper side, by footpaths and vehicle track. In the lower part of the island sailing facilities like pier and boats have been added and on… ادامه مطلب »

The two maps illustrate changes in a tropical island before developing and after that by building lots of amenities There has been a great development in the center and the west of the island. A reception has been built in the center of the island and accommodation areas has been developed in the sides of the reception both the west and the east. Furthermore, in the south of the island a pier has been built for embarking and disembarking passengers and has connected to the reception with a vehicle track. In the north of the island next to the reception… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام (بدون تصحیح رایتینگ) Some construction activities was built on the island and the two maps illustrated these changes before and after activities. There have been a massive development in the island for visitors. A reception was built in the center of the island and connected to the restaurant by foot path in the north of the island. Also, there are 6 accommodations in a circular shape in the western side of reception. These accommodations connected to each other by foot path. Furthermore, in the eastern part of the reception there are 9 extra accommodations for visitors. Moreover, a… ادامه مطلب »

Two maps compare the provision of some tourist facilities in two distinct times for an island. 16 It is distinctly observed that a broad majority of the island on the first map was not in use. Only some green areas and a beach were available. 28 Later the island as it can be seen on the second map, has been dramatically equipped. Firstly, a reception is placed at the center and is connected by vehicle tracks to a restaurant on the northern side and a pier with sailboats in the south. Secondly, many accommodations in shapes of circles are provided… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه چهارم The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. These two maps compare the recreational facilities of a certain island. The first map illustrates the situation before and the second map after the construction. Firstly, it can be obviously seen that there is not much to suit the convenience of tourists except a small beach in the western part and some trees on either side of the island. On the other hand, a large number… ادامه مطلب »

The maps depict the same island while the first one prior and second one after constructed some tourist facilities. (19 words) At the first glance at the first map before construction, it can be seen that a small island with a beach in the west and some palm trees have in left and right of island. The total length of the island is approximately 200 meters. (45 words) At the second map, after the construction in the west of island, there are six accommodations around the palm trees and the swimming field close to the beach where connected to the… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام
استاد ببخشید جمله زیر از نظر ترکیب لغت و گرامر مشکلی داره؟ یا بهتر هست که تبدیل شه به دو جمله ؟
A reception is built in the middle of the island which is accessible by vehicle tracks from the restaurant in the northern part and the pier in the southern side of the island.
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با سلام و احترام
استاد آیا کالوکیشن suit the convenience of در جمله زیر درست استفاده شده است؟
Firstly, it can be obviously seen that there is not much to suit the convenience of tourists except a small beach on the western part and some trees on both sides of the island.
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There are two views about happiness in different period of life. Some people believe that happiness mainly happen in teenage years but others have opposite poin of view. I agree with both of them. Adulthood is a stage when people are in thwir middle age. Many individuals firmly believe that people achieve happiness in adulthood. First of all, they have more finicial independence. Most adults have steady job. So, they can afford most hobbies and entertainments. These activities bring adults happiness beausce of enjoyment and pleasure.secondly, adults are experienced enough to have more happy times. For example, some activities seem… ادامه مطلب »

با سلام. استاد میشه بفرمایید کدوم جمله درسته؟
There is a swimming area in the left side of island.
There is a swimming area on the left side of island.
من تو لانگمن چک کردم و همچنین گوگل کردم عبارت in the left side ندیدم.
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The amount of happiness during different stages of life has been always a serious question. Although some people claim that their adolescence were the happiest period of their life, others point out that they experience happier time during their adulthood. I agree with latter. Some people believe that teenagers experience happier time. Initially, a teenager often has no responsibilities in home even in society, which means that there is less stress and more free time. Therefore they can enjoy more from their leisure activities and pursue their interests. Secondly, supporting by their parents is another reason for being happier. They… ادامه مطلب »

when is the happiest age has been a question among people,some believe adulthood is the greatest period while others think adolescents experience more joy,for some reasons i agree with both sides. some argue that young people have a greater time compared to grown ups ,first of all since they are not tied up with full time jobs there is more free time in adolescents lives therefore teenager’s have sufficient time for pastimes and as it’s clear most of teenagers are just thinking about having fun and enjoying their time, for instance hangging out, playing video games ,and going online are… ادامه مطلب »

There is a significant link between our stages of life and happiness. Some individuals believe adolescence is the stage, whereas a number of other people consider adulthood as the one. I agree with both. 35 Some from the public regard being teenager as a happier time. First of all, the energy of teenagers in contrast to adults, is further higher and more noticeable due to having a fresh life and a long life ahead to live it up. This energy can even be reinforced substantially as they have more free time to either learn some skills to cultivate a more… ادامه مطلب »

رايتينك جلسه سوم Happiness means different things to different people. Some people believe that adolescences have the happiest time, while other ones, instead of all responsibilities, think that adolescence lives have more happiness. I agree with both of them. (35 words) Some people agree that teenagers have less responsibility in their life. First of all, they are no longer expected to work and they have not enough experiences, thus their parents do not give responsibility to them. For instance, they are not allowed to driving cars before 18 years old. Secondly, because of no responsibility, they have more leisure time.… ادامه مطلب »

رایتینگ جلسه سوم/ دوره آیلتس آبان 1398 Happiness is a very important issue for all of age groups. While some people believe that the adult have happier time in their life, others believe teenagers can have happier time in their year of life. Some people believe that teenage life brings more happiness. First of all, adolescence have fewer responsibilities in their life. Generally, teenagers haven’t any duties with earn money, rent a house, living expenses, and concern for a train of children and so on. Because of not having stress feel for doing such roles in their life, they can… ادامه مطلب »

One of the parameters to have a good life is the happiest times. Although some people believe that teenagers are the happiest people, others say that adults have the happiest times. I agree with the first group. (37 words) Some people say that teenagers enjoy the happiest time. First of all, because teenagers have more free time, they can use their time to have more fun or to spend time with their family and friends then teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Secondly, teenagers do not have any responsibility. Responsibility is not an issue for teenagers… ادامه مطلب »

بدون تصحیح رایتینگ It has been always a challenge that either being in early stage of life or being an old person come with more pleasure. Although some people believe that elderly individuals have more happy life. Others, including me disagree. Some people believe that there are more joy and fun in life when you are younger compared to elderly people. They have several reasons for this argue. First of all, being teen means that you have full family support. It means that you do not need to have full time job with full daily schedule. In the other hand,… ادامه مطلب »

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others thinks that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Adult life: # more independence; # getting more money. Teenage years: # no responsibility; # more free time. Feeling of happiness is a strong motivation for going through the life. Although group of people argue that the adulthood is the best time of life, other group, including me, believe that teenage years have more happiness. (26 words) Some people believe that adulthood is the happiest time of life. First of all, adults… ادامه مطلب »

Happiness is very important in the everyone s life . every body can be happy during the life . some people believe teenagers more happy than adults. And another group believe adults are more happier. I agree with both of them . (40) Some people think the teenagers are more happy than adults . First of all , teenagers have more free time in comparison with adults. So they can spend their free times with friends and can have more entertainments and enjoy with friends. Secondly, people in the teenagers age don’t worry about finance and income. They don’t have… ادامه مطلب »

Happiness is something that is hard to define. Some people believe teenagers are more cheerful, however others consider adults are more joyful and enjoy their life. I agree with both views. 31 Some people think teenagers are happier in compare with adults. First of all, teenagers have less responsibility that this leads to less stress and being pleased with their life. They often don’t have to tackle with life’s big problem. Also when it comes to making big decision they have their parent’s support, so they can enjoy their life freely. Secondly they are highly energetic that this energy consequently… ادامه مطلب »

(Writing assignment, Task 2, 4th of Aban Class, Siamak Salimi) 05 Nov. 2019 Giving an idea about the most cheerful period of the life is a controversial subject. While some people believe that teenage years are joyful, but the others express that adolescence has its own sense of fulfillment. I think this can be different from person to person. Teenage years are really memorable time, first the sense of freedom in these ages allows us to feel of being able to do everything we want. This is the time in which we spent joyful moments with our peers, in addition… ادامه مطلب »

Some people think that the teenage years are the best time of their life however the others claim that adulthood brings more happiness to their lives in spite of greater responsibilities. Some argue that the teenage years are the best. First of all teenagers are fully supported by family and live with their parents so they don’t have to pay for rent, bills or food even if they have a part time job they don’t have to be concerned about anything, also if they participate in family decisions they aren’t the ultimately responsible ; secondly they have more free time… ادامه مطلب »

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1-she patted me on the back as i was leaving home for a long jorney 2-slightly//rates are changing slightly these days
3-no more // it’s no more easy to take advantage of people 4-casual//casual relationship is what you need know .no commitment
5-brign//it brings drawbacks based on joe’s experience 6-supply//you won’t last long with no fresh supply

there are two views about happiness in different period of life. some people believe that happiness mainly happens in teenage years but others have opposite point of view.in this essay i will explain why teenager have more happy time in their life

Happiness

Teenage years
# they have fewer responbilities

#they have more free time

Adult life
# they have more Financial independence
#they are expereinced enough

مقدمه رایتینگ جلسه دو ابان 98
what age includes more happiness has been a question among people ,some believe that adulthood is the happiest perioed,
while ,others think adolescents have a greater life ,for some reasons i agree with both sides.

teenagers

1 more energy
2 no responcibility

adults

1 independence
2 being married ,having children

oxford intermediate words and 7+ essential IELTS words: 1- i don’t remember the whole speech but this is the gist 2-i myself do have a chat with my grandpa in every 2 weeks 3-i do revision at the weekends to keep me remembering everything 4-the government experimented with extra taxes/rising the taxes 5-by seeing the enthusiasm in his face I decided to go with him 6-i could completely express my plans toward the subject 7-the advice of our elderlies are somewhat relevant to our lives 8-parents have to emphasize their offspring 9-we need to stop using offensive words toward our… ادامه مطلب »

From one perspective happiness is considered to be connected to the stages of life; nevertheless, some individuals believe adolescence is the stage of happiness, whereas others including me appear to believe adulthood is the one.(35)

Teenage years
#more energy
#less responsibility
Adult life
#act more mature in situations
#independent

Evryone at any age can enjoy throghout there
lives.teenagers believe they are more happy than another ages,adult believe they are more happier.i agree with both of them

Teenagers
no worry about incom#
Have more free time#

Adult
Have family#
Have job#

The amount of happiness during different stages of life has been always a significant question. Although some people claim that their adolescence were the happiest period of their life, others point out that they experience happier time during their adulthood. I agree with latter view.
Teenager years:
#No responsibility
#More support

Adult life
#More money
#More authority

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others thinks that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

Teenage years
# no responsibility
# more free time

Adult life
# More independence
# Gettig more money

Feeling of happiness is a strong motivation for going through the life. Although group of people believe the adulthood is the best time of life, other group, including me, think that teenage years have more happiness.

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others thinks that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Teenage years
# more free times
# less responsibility
Adult life
# more financial independence
# more ability
Term of happiness is very difficult to explain and it depends on people. While some people think teenage years are the best time of life, the others believe the adulthood is happier time. I agree with the first group.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others thinks that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

Teenage years
# less stress
# less responsible

Adult life
# more money
# more responsible

Happiness is an important factor in people’s life. Although group of people believe that teenage years are the best time of life, other think adulthood can be happier. I agree with the first group.

There are different point of view about happiness because happiness for every one is different, some times people make related between happiness and age , so some of them believe that teenage are the happiest time of peoples life and other are disagree with them. about teenage First of all I can say that teenagers usually have a lot of time in their own hands so they can spend it in any way that they want for instance exercising, studying, watching movies or get together with their friends, usually they don’t have any responsibility so they can live carefree and… ادامه مطلب »

One of the parameters to have a good life is happy times. Although some people believe that teenagers are the happiest people, others say that adults have the happiest times but I disagree with them.

Happiness
Teenage years
# More free time
# No responsibility

Adult life
# Independent
# More opportunities

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enthusiastic//you seem enthusiastic about your dreams mostly about the ielts exam ….motivated//everyone in my english class is motivated…
motivation//what is your motivation of taking ielts exam…improvement//we have noticed signs of improvement in patients…
express//expressing an opposition is something which you are concerned about..effectively// we are studying effectively for the ielts exam…
encouraged//she encouraged me to continue good deeds…aware of // are you aware of your knee problrm…frustrating//
this job is going to be frustrating..expand//electronic systems are expanding…complex//it is a complex issue…in detail//
explain a wide range of information in more details…appropriate//this class is appropriate for you undoubtedly..

Oxford word skill ارمین Unit1 Recognize / he immediately recognized the criminal …gist//it is not easy to convey the gist … Go through// I go through ielts techniques every day…identify//he was able to identify the murderer….guess//it’s not hard to guess just say sth…context//try to get the gist through context ..keep a record…it’s a good habit to keep a record of new words //make a record/you’d like to make a record of every detail//make note//don’t make notes during explanations//keep note/ don’t forget to make notes accurately //construction/grammatical constructions are crucial for our advanced exams/translation/I haven’t used anything in translation teacher ,believe… ادامه مطلب »

مقدمه جلسه دوم/ دوره آنلاین آیلتس/ آبان 1398

Happiness is very important issue for all of
age groups. Although some people believe that the adult have happier times in their life, others believe teenagers can have happier times in their of life. (35 words)

Teenager years:
# less responsibilities
# have more free time

Adult life:
# have more money
# have good life style

با سلام (مصطفی م. بدون تصحیح رایتینگ)
It has been always a challenge that either being in early stage of life or being an old person come with more pleasure. Although some people believe that elderly individuals have more happy life. Others, including me think otherwise.

Teenager years

# more free time

# full family support

Adult life

# have permanent job

# better position in society

Everybody has been always thought what stage of our life is more delightful. Somebody consider teenagers enjoy their life and this stage is more memorable than adulthood, however it’s thought by others, grown persons have more pleasure time. I would say it depends on every stage quality.

با سلام و احترام جناب استاد ميخواستم بدونم ايا اين جمله از نظر ساختاري درست است؟
Some people believe it is each for some countries to deny their responsibility when in comes to global air pollution.