Dear Mahdi,
I hope you`re well. I am writing to tell you my opinion regarding to your request.
To my mind, as you are getting old, it is possible that you lose your chance of getting good jobs so I highly recommend you to cut out thinking about colleges and focus on finding appropriate job. I think it is wise to take up a profession first and try to be qualified in your occupation.
As you are married and have children it is important to earn enough money to make ends meet and provide them a quality life. I believe that having family make you responsible and it is utmost importance to have well-paid job. Going to college might have devastating effect on your family.
IT seems to be appropriate job for you due to your background in working with computer and I think it is good for you to pay more attention to this matter. By the way, I hope you will make a right decision.
I look forward to hear from you about this matter. Please feel free to call me if you need to talk me.
Best wish,

Write Right- Fast Food
The food industrial always is growing and people notice special. Some people believe the fast food suitable for people that are employee. others think those are not useful for people. This assay will discuss these points. (37 words)
Fast food is a way for save money. first of all, these are being prepared with less ingredients. their supply is affordable and is being found in everywhere. The food such as hamburger or pizza made by a few vegetables and some meat and their meat used to ready in factories so the cost of production has decreased and that is why product in big measure. Secondly this type of food has less provision and doesn’t any need to spend a lot time for cooking and Maybe one of reasons tendency of people be is this benefit. all of their supplies are accessible and eating of this food is easy. (111 words)
Some believe snack food have more disadvantage. First of all, these have less nourish value. Using of food additive Including tentative, color and oil for frying or cooking are unhealthy and down the value of these foods. besides all of additives enhance the calorie cholesterol and blood sugar and put the health of body in danger with usage of them. Secondly usually for providing junk food is being used high heat and or is being used from oils that used it before and this condition is harmful.in addition that heat and oil bring down the amount of vitamins and minerals of food. (103 words)
In conclusion, some people believe fast foods have benefits and others think junk foods are harmful and have to avoid them. (21words)

Task 2 Write Right Fast food
Over the past few decades, the popularity of fast food has increased dramatically in many countries. Although some people think that this trend is beneficial others have the opposite idea. This essay will discuss both of these views. (38)
The opponents believe that the long-term effects of fast food are negative. First of all, it is an undeniable fact that fast food is very harmful to everybody health. There is lots of fat, salt and other unhealthy ingredients in most fast food like fries and hamburger which could cause some serious health problem like high blood pressure. Secondly, fast food has changed many people eating habits. Many children start consuming fast food from their childhood and they will grow up with an unhealthy and wrong diet. In fact, fast food is not nutritious enough and cannot meet people’s daily diet demands, especially children body’s demands. It has a negative effect on their growth and later they will suffer from many illnesses. (122)
On the other hand, some people believe that consumption of fast food brings people some advantages. First of all, fast food is more affordable than other meals in a restaurant, it is an economical way of eating out. Almost all people can afford it and it helps families save their money. Secondly, fast food is very convenient and is a really appropriate meal for busy people. In fact, preparing a traditional meal at home takes a lot of time and these days people are very busy, they prefer to eat a ready meal. Moreover, they can find fast food restaurant everywhere also they can order it easily and save their time. (110)
In conclusion, however, short-term consumption of fast food has some advantages, people should be aware of it’s negative long-term effects which would endanger their health. (25)
(295 words)

FAEZEH MOHAMMADI
WRITE RIGHT- FAST FOOD
The popularity of fast food continues to be one of the challenges of societies. Although some people feel that this is a good trend, others have opposite idea. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints. (35)
Supporters of fast food put forward the argument that the advantages of fast food chains outweigh the disadvantages. First of all, brands of fast food have made noticeably. As a result, to protect brand images, these companies need to keep their consistency in quality services and following the standards. Accordingly, fast food chains have been promoting their products since they started this job as long as they have shown their attempt deliberately to give the wide range of choices and offers. Secondly, fast food industry facilitates a convenient environment for residents to buy affordable foods anytime and anywhere that they want. One particular example is MacDonald’s restaurants working 24 hours and being accessible even near petroleum stations. (115)
Conversely, people opposed to fast food highlight its drawbacks. First of all, it is said that consuming fast food excessively is detrimental. This is due to the fact that foods such as fried chicken and hamburgers are incredibly high in fat and salt and they could result in a major health problem. So, inhabitants specifically children would suffer from diabetes, obesity and so forth by consuming these foods. Secondly, it is often felt that this way of eating will hurt healthy lifestyle if it becomes a daily routine. Dependency on fatty foods would impede people to bear the difficulty of buying fresh ingredients and cook them which is led to lazy lifestyle. (109)
In conclusion, while the popularity of fast food is responsible for some disadvantages, its benefits also has been proved undeniably. (19)
Total: 265

I am writing to express my personal ideas to promote the reception area as you recently requested for this matter..
People usually complain about the unfriendly atmosphere. In addition they are sometimes upset about the time they spend in lines to be served. It mostly takes about 45 minutes which is a long time. On the other hand, the old decoration of the reception part seems that have a negative impact on them.
Since the reception area is the first place people usually see upon arrival, I found it quite important for our company. Moreover, at the first look people usually make judgement about our company according to the reception area.
I would like to recommend you that at first please change the decoration in an effort to make it modern and friendly atmosphere. Second, it would be wise if you could purchase a new device to issue ticket for people in a neat way. Furthermore, it might be a good idea to employ another receptionist.
I hope the situation will be resolved soon. Please feel free to contact me if you have any further inquiry. I would like to thank you for this opportunity.

Humans are always concerned about their accommodations. As it seems that in some place new home must be built on countryside, some people feel that countryside should be preserved from building. On the other hand, others think differently. This essay will discuss the first viewpoint.45
There are points to protect trees belong to countryside. Firstly, sometimes by keeping trees safe from being cut. It results in a clean weather around cities and balances the air pollution which daily produces by factories or by machines inside the urban areas. Secondly, trees have a positive impact on the soil fertility as there is conclusive evidence which reveals tree`s root prevent soil from erosion and contribute the farmer to have more opportunities to produce rich corps. In addition, by protecting countryside from construction of new building we obtain more benefits and support the agriculture boom.98
Countryside is a natural habitat for diverse species in some cases. Firstly, it is important to protect local wild animals from distinction. For instance, by destroying countryside, which is animal`s living place, they are forced to leave their habitat and it would have detrimental effect on their life. Since humans desire to have privacy in their home, animals have a right to inhabit in their lands and reproduce. Fortunately, there are a number of official organizations which are active and protect animals from those who violate the animal rights. Secondly, they could be a place for entertainment. It would be wise if authorities conserved the countryside and utilized them as national park and provided people a place for enjoyment.119
In conclusion, protecting countryside in long run offers more benefits. There are some advantages to protect trees and natural habitats of countryside.22
TOTAL=285

Cambridge 12 Academic Test 2 Task1
The maps show the physical feature of Islip town center at present and in the future. We can observe how the city will be changed by some proposed modifications during the planned development. (33)
According to the current map, there is a main road in the northern part of town which is the connection way between the shops, houses, school and the park, also there are a few shops on the both sides of it. Moreover, the city is closed to the countryside. (49)
Looking at another map related to proposal development, the town center will have a dual carriageway that will surround all part of the town and make all facilities more accessible. The main road will become a pedestrian way and the shops above it will be changed to some facilities including a bus station, a car park and a shopping center, also there will be built some new houses. The school will remain at its original place though it will be bigger and the park will be smaller because of building new houses. The other point is by increasing the size of the town the countryside will disappear. (108)
Overall, by comparing two maps we can see significant changes in the planned development that result in a commercial, residential and roadway improvements in the city. (26)
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سلام استاد من بین دو عبارت برای مقدمه نمیدونستم کدومو انتخاب کنم :
others believe others have to make decisions for children.
یا
others believe children mustn’t be alone in decisions

There are many tough tourist attractions in the world can be visited by people. The objective of this essay is to discuss pros and cons of visiting difficult places for tourists.32
There are merits to visit difficult places. For one thing, tourists experience challenging condition. As it is hard to visit difficult places for tourists, they should be more collaborative and more responsible. In addition, they have to be precise enough to preclude making mistake throughout a tough tour. For another, tourist can learn a lot. Tourists are able to learn more when they set off a difficult and dangerous journey. While tourists accompany with at least one skilled tour lead, it is on them to be a team player and to avoid putting others in danger. Therefore, they would gain more knowledge about how to be a team player and responsible.111
There are demerits to tour tough places. First of all, these places are usually dangerous. Therefore, it is not recommended to all people. For instance, children and old people could not visit this place easily. On the other hand, in this type of journey if something goes wrong, they might have irrecoverable disasters. Secondly, it is expensive. To visit tough places usually specific instruments and facilities are required that make it less affordable to all people. Consequently, a minority of people are able to visit these places which some of them are worthwhile to be visited.98
In conclusion, visiting difficult places have both merits and demerits. While tough tourist destination could bring disadvantages, they are able to offer benefits.23

Faezeh Mohammadi
Cambridge 12 General Test 1

Visiting challenging places might bring some profits for tourists. Although some people believe that experiencing these places have some advantages, others have opposite ideas. This essay will discuss both of these views. (32)
Many tourists have benefited from experiencing difficult places. First of all, these spaces could result in unique memories. For instance, visiting amazing parts of nature could have remained in visitors’ minds forever. Moreover, engaging with specific kinds of social activities and cultural performances could register wonderful days for guests. Secondly, traveling to challenging places is responsible for having exclusive experiences. For instance, visitors could watch and feel marvelous and impressive atmospheres, such as amazing landscapes, sceneries, and landmarks. Besides, one trip to such places and staying in there are costly and generally, people cannot visit them any time that they want. (101)
Conversely, it is sometimes argued that visiting difficult places may not be convenient for tourists. First of all, these places are too expensive. Accordingly, most of the people cannot afford to visit them. Because, transporting foods, providing accommodations and so forth need lots of expense. Secondly, there might be having less access to the urgent facilities. For instance, the travelers may become sick as a result of a sudden change of weather, facing hurricane and other similar things. Nonetheless, in some cases, these places are not equipped with technical emergency helps and also technical hospitals. For example, if passengers get stuck in snow in Everest, defiantly they will face difficulty. (109)
In conclusion, while traveling to strange places could be amazing, it surely has some disadvantages which will be decreased in near future from my perspective. (25)
Total: 284