6597بازدید
دوره آنلاین آیلتس
دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397
صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 23 ام و 24 ام
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 91 to 120 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 67 to 71
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 8 Kill
Listen Here Unit 11 to 21
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 22 23 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Advanced Page 6 to 35 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 11 to 20
5 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 23 ام و 24 ام
تسک 2
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 21 ام و 22 ام
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 61 to 90 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 63 to 66
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 7 Kill
Listen Here Unit 1 to 10
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 20 21 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Kill فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 1 to 10
5 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 21ام و 22 ام
تسک 1
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تسک 2
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 19 ام و 20 ام
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 31 to 60 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 58 to 62
Tactics for Listening Expanding Kill
Open Forum 3 Kill
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 6 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 18 19 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Page 76 to 100 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
5 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 19 ام و 20 ام
تسک 2
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7.5
The following bar chart illustrates the percentages of male and female citizens in Australia who were regularly involved in physical activity in 2010.
Overall, roughly 40 to over 50 percent of population did regular sport, with females having more participation in almost all age groups except the youngest one(15-24).
Over half of the youngest Australian women (15 to 24 years old) did regular physical activity in 2010, while the same figure for males was just under 48 percent. More aged women, 24 to 34 and 35 to 44 years old, showed less interest in sports with about 40 percent of participation, but at the same time, the participation of their male counterparts surged markedly to 52 percent.
Female Australian of older age groups (45 to 54 and 55 to 64 years old) continued to be committed to physical activities, and both age groups saw over 53 percent of participation. The percentage of participation of male Australian of these two age groups started to recover, with 43 and 45 percent doing sports. Almost 46 percent of the eldest of all people in this country, elder than 65 years old, continued doing regular physical activity regardless of the gender.
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 6.5
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Traveling is a unique and joyful experience for many people. While international tourism today has many benefits both for government and citizens, it may pose some threats too. This essay will discuss these two points. (35 words)
Host countries can gain many benefits from travelers. First of all, the money that tourists spend in host countries help their economy enormously. Travelling abroad is always expensive because tourists have to spend for tickets, hotels and food among other things. All this money improves the economy of the host country which are mostly developing countries in Asia and Africa. Secondly, tourists can contribute to the culture in their destination. This happens when they introduce new ways of thinking, foods and customs because travelers are always welcomed when they arrive and what they discuss may sound appealing to native people of host country. (103 words)
Potential threats of tourism industry, however, should not be overlooked. First of all, natural resources of the host countries will be under considerable pressure, especially in more remote areas. Since normally these resources are used by a rather scattered population, they can be replenished easily but when tourists arrive, they usually overuse the resources like water and fuel and put enormous stress on them. Secondly, native people may choose to adopt behavior and ideas from travelers that are in sharp contrast to their own culture. This may create some social issues in the host country and dealing with them would not be an easy task for the society. (105 words)
In conclusion, while the tourist destinations gain benefits from receiving tourists from around the globe, this lucrative market may create long-term problems that are not easy to deal with. (29 words)
(Total: 275 words)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 17 ام و 18 ام
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 1 to 30 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 51 to 17
Tactics for Listening Expanding Unit 17 to 20
Open Forum 2 Kill
Open Forum 3 Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 5 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 16 17 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Page 51 to 75 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
5 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 17 ام و 17 ام
تسک 1
پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره 7.5
Cambridge IELTS 12 Academic Test 3 Sample Answer
The chart illustrates six categories based on the frequency of fast food consumption in USA in three different years over a decade between 2003 and 2013.
It is most common for American people to consume fast food once a week or once or twice a month since about 30 percent of the population is reported to have these habits in 2003. In 2013, however, this number decreased by about 5 percent for the former and increased by a similar amount for the latter.
In 2003, those who had fast food several times a week and few time annually constituted slightly over and under 15 percent of the population respectively. A decade later in 2013, the first group seems to had increased by a few percent before falling closer to 15 percent and the second group, despite showing a few percent of increase, finally stabilized at its starting level. Only a negligible percentage (almost 5 percent) of Americans ate either everyday or never and both showed a downward trend to form an even smaller percentage.
Overall, eating every week and every month seems to be the most popular eating habits for fast foods during this period and it appears in all categories there is a tendency to remain unchanged.
(Total 208 words)
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تسک 2
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 15 ام و 16 ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 25 to 30 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 36 to 50
Tactics for Listening Expanding Unit 9 to 16
Open Forum 2 Unit 4 5 6 7 8
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 4 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 14 15 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Page 31 to 50 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
5 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 15 ام و 16 ام
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 13 ام و 14 ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 16 to 24 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 31 to 35
Tactics for Listening Expanding Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Open Forum 1 Kill
Open Forum 2 Unit 1 2 3
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 3 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 12 13 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Page 8 to 30 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
5 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 13 ام و 14 ام
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 11 ام و 12 ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 6 to 15 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 26 to 30
Tactics for listening Intermediate Kill
Open Forum 1 Unit 5 6 7 8 9 10
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 2 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 10 11 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 9 ام و 10 ام
تسک 2
دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 9 ام و 10 ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 86 to 100 از این صفحه ببینید
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 1 to 5 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 21 to 25
Tactics for listening Intermediate Unit 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15
Open Forum 1 Unit 1 2 3
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 Part 1 2 3
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 8 9 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 9 ام و 10 ام
تسک 1
نمونه پاسخ مدرس
The graph shows the average weekly hours spent by schoolchildren on two different leisure activities at home over a period of nine years from 2000 to 2008.
Schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 years old spent less than 4 hours per week on computer in 2000. This number increased considerably over the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. At the beginning of the same period (2000), the time spent on watching TV was 21 hours per week, which remained the same over the nest three years. Next, it fell rapidly from 21 to 15 hours weekly in 2004.
Schoolchildren continued to spend more time on computer from 2004 and 2008 and the number reached a peak of just under 22 hours. At the same time despite a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006, the time spent on watching TV remained stable at the level of almost 15 hours per week.
Overall, While TV was much more popular than computer at the beginning of this period, it seems the time schoolchildren spent on them has reversed. (175 words)
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پرسش و پاسخ های کتاب را اینجا ببینید.
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 7 ام و 8 ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 61 to 85 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 16 to 20
Tactics for listening Basic kill
Tactics for listening Intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Real Speaking and Listening 2 kill
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 6 7 8 9 10 11
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 6 7 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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تسک 2
تسک 1
نمونه پاسخ مدرس نمره 6 تا 7
The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.
In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90 in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.
At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.
The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.
Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to diminish and at the final year all these categories had very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)
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نمونه پاسخ نمره 7
The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.
The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.
Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.
Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)
نمونه پاسخ Band 9
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 5 ام و 6 ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 41 to 60 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 11 to 15
Tactics for listening Basic unit 12 to 19
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit Kill
Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 1 to 6
Select Readings Elementary Unit 10
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 4 5 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 5 ام و 6 ام
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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره 7
Two maps depict a tropical island of a few hundreds square meters before and after the construction of some leisure facilities for tourists.
It appears that two sites for tourists accommodation have been built, which are connected to each other and to other areas with footpath. There is also a reception in the middle of the island, which is accessible by a vehicle track from the southern part, where a pier is constructed for some pleasure boats. The other significant change is a single restaurant in the northern part of the island that can be also accessed by vehicles. The beach in the western side can be used for swimming after this development. There are also some palm trees in the western and eastern regions of the island, which seem to be untouched by this change.
Overall, the development which appears to be more concentrated on the western side and the center, has dramatically changed the face of the island in a way that it can accommodate a few hundreds of tourists at the same time. (177 Words)
نمونه پاسخ ساده تر نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره 6 تا 7
Two maps show the construction of facilities in an island. One map show the situation before and one map after the construction.
In the first map there is not much for possible tourists to enjoy except a swimming area in the left side of the island. How ever in the second map there is a restaurant in the middle of the island on the left close to a reception. There is a vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. Other important change is the construction of several accommodation sites for tourists not far from the reception. Other important facilities for enjoyment of tourists are the boats for sailing in the southern side of the island,where a pier can be seen and a beach for swimming in the left side.
Overall, it seems the island is totally different after the construction of tourist facilities and especially the western and middle parts can be a good place for tourists to enjoy their stay. (167 Words)
نمونه پاسخ نمره 7
نمونه پاسخ زیر که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد 9 بعنوان نمونه جواب نوشته شده توسط شرکت کننده در آزمون برای نمره 7 نوشته شده را بهمراه توضیحات اگزمینر(تصحیح کننده) مشاهده میفرمایید. در صورتی دقت بیشتر متوجه خواهید شد هر 3 بخش اصلی توضیح داده شده در فایل صوتی و آورده شده در بالا به روشنی در پاسخ این شرکت کننده در آزمون رعایت شده است.
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 3 ام و 4 ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 22 to 40 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 7 8 9 10
Tactics for listening Basic unit 6 7 8 9 10 11
Real Speaking and Listening Unit 16 7 8 9 10 11 12 13
Select Readings Elementary Unit 5 6 7 8 9
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 2 3 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 3 ام و 4 ام
نمونه مقدمه نوشته شده توسط مدرس برای این پرسش:
Education and the role of gender is a very important topic among experts. Although some people believe separate schools are a better place for students, other argue that mixed schools can provide more advantages for them. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.(42 words)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 1 ام و 2 ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 21 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 1 2 5 6
Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3 4 5
Real Speaking and Listening Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 3 4
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 1 ام و 2 ام
تسک 2
نمونه ساده نوشته شده توسط مدرس
Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times mainly because they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Moreover, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.(104 words)
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. This group tend to mention the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step. (107 words)
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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر(ٍExaminer) آیلتس که در سطح نمره 9 براورد میشود:
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Do You Prefer to Live in a Big City or in a Small Town?
Better situation for Job
#more companies and factories
#more salary
More Facilities
#more investment
#more demand
نمونه پاسخ مدرس
There is a better situation for work in a big city. First of all, there are more companies and factories in a large city and they need hundreds of thousands of simple workers to work for them. They also need many experts with technical knowledge and as a result university graduates can also stay employed. Secondly, employees can enjoy a higher salary in a large city. Since companies tend to be larger and have more production, they can afford more payment for their staff and their employees have a better situation in general. There is also a higher salary for experts and those with special capabilities. (106 words)
There are more facilities in a big city too. First of all, there is more investment by both government and the private sector. Government always gives the priority to large cities and allocate big budgets to them. As a result, big cities can provide more facilities with a better quality. Investment is very important for both preparation and maintenance of many facilities. Secondly, there is more demand in cities with large populations. This demand means more businesses can be successful and millions of people are ready to pay for good services of different kinds. Thus, residents of large cities can enjoy a variety of services with higher quality. (108 words)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس
نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها
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200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)
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بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS
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چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2
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آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)
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گرامر زبان انگلیسی به فارسی
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همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!
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دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید
عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها
6597بازدید
The charts illustrates amount of using water for three main purpose in six areas around the world.
The most industrial usage of water was relevant to two areas; Europe and North America with 53 and 48 percent. South East Asia and South America with 12 and 10 percent of usage water were stand in second level. The two zones that had fewest industrial usage of water were Africa and Central Asia with 7 and 5 percent.
Central Asia and Africa and South East Asia were three largest consumer of water for agricultural usage with 88, 84 and 81 percent. Fourth area consumer was South America with 71 percent. North America and Europe were the last areas that used only 39 and 32 percent of water considering agriculture. South America, Europe and North America were three areas with highest consuming of water for domestic purpose with 19, 15 and 13 percent. The next region were relevant to Africa and the lowest usage of water for domestic were consider to Central Asia and South East Asia with 7 percent.
Overall, the most usage of water was for agricultural purpose in six areas around the world and the lowest one was for domestic used.(200 word)
A glance at the six pie chart provided reveals the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world such as North and South American, Europe, Africa, central and south east Asia.
It is noticeable a significant majority of water user is agricultural in four area such as Central Asia 88%, Africa 84%, South east Asia 81% and in South American 71%. Just over a third of agricultural user is in Europe.
Of these purpose, Industry use water is almost a half in Europe then in North American and a small minority in South East Asia then in South American. A small fraction of that is in Africa and Central Asia.
A small number of domestic use water is in South America and Europe and North America respectively. An insignificant amount of approximately 9% of that is in Africa and 7% in Central Asia and South East Asia.
Overall, the most significant purpose of water used is Agriculture in all area except Europe and North American.
Nowadays, people have different views about females and males are able to do different somethings. Although, some people argue that some work are suitable for men and some job are appropriate for women, others, including me, believe that both genders are able to contribute in the different jobs. These essay will discuss about this viewpoint.
It is incorrect that people get a job and task with their gender. First of all, there are a numerous women who are able to do physical activity or make sensible decisions. Also, they contribute in the various jobs compared with a male counterpart. In addition, women who studying in the different subject have increased and they are interested in doing different things. For instance: many women have worked as a lawyer, a pilot and climber and most of them succeed. Secondly, it is wrong that men are unable to do an emotional activity or work at home. Many men are good at emotional activity. For instance: there are several males who working as a teacher, nurse that this work need to emotional skills.
On the other hand, It is better for any job that having a sense of balance. First of all, when men and women work together, they boost the quality of their work or activity. They are able to use their experience, their skills and also are consulted together. Secondly, sometimes experienced workforce has been in the different gender, unexpectedly. For example: we are looking men for physical job and then we find a woman with high qualification and strong ability. As a result, various jobs need a both gender.
In conclusion, while some people believe male and female need to different job as a distinct ability, others argue both men and women can do a different activity or work.
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These day, borders between males and females are becoming blurred in society. Although, some people consider that some carriers are suitable for each different genders, others argue that women and men have same ability so there is no reasonably difference between their types of jobs. This easy will discuss both of these viewpoints.
Some people believe that amount of success in some special jobs is different between genders. First of all, the physical abilities of men are differ from women so it is obviously men are better in some jobs that need more muscles power and stronger body such as mechanics or construction workers. Secondly, in some society there are still old thoughts about some carriers that are special for women like nurse, ballet dancer or even cooker. These people think that characteristics and abilities of women just limited in some jobs that seems have more similarity to their behavior and personality.(100 word)
Others maintain that characteristics of male and female can different in some aspects but not in profession. At first, we have great sample of successful and popular women around the word and some of them are presidents or have official political duty or maybe famous scientists or even astronauts. So as the evidence shows women have play vital role in society as well as men. At second, choose the type of carrier is depend on person’s physical ability and intellectual capability instead of gender. There is some disable people that work same as other people and their gender or even physical abilities are not important and just their personality is base of their work.(115 word)
In conclusion, some people including me think that female and male have not any huge differences between themselves to avoid get some jobs, while others believe that some carriers are not suitable for each different genders.(300 word)
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of water used for various aims in six regions of the world. There are three different using of water in the world.
The highest proportion of water used for industrial use has been at 53% in the Europe. After Europe, the highest percentage of water used for industrial use has been at 48 percent in the North America. While, a vary small part of the water used in industrial, 5%, has been in central Asia.
The figure for agricultural use has stood at 88 per cent in central Asia. While, the percentage of agricultural use in Africa and south east Asia have been slightly lower at 84% and 81% respectively. The figure for agriculture in Europe and North America have been far less than agricultural use in another part world.
Only 19 percentage of water in South America has used for domestic use. In domestic use, a very small using of water have been in southeast Asia and central Asia at only 7 per cent.
Overall, the highest water used have belonged to agricultural use. Whereas, the figure for domestic use have been lower. The figure for industrial use have been average.
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سلام استاد
میشه لطف کنین، برنامه کلاسی رو تو صفحه کلاسمون(روزهای فرد شهریور) آپدیت کنین.
ممنون 🙏
Done
سلام وقت بخیر
استاد خواستم یاداوری کنم فایل های اسپیکینگ من فیدبک داده نشده.
سپاس
International tourism industry turns into one of the primary beneficial sources for most of countries in worldwide. Although some people believe that countries improvement directly depends on tourism profits. Others think that it could be significantly create difficulties for nations. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint. (48 words)
Destination countries widely gain considerable advantages from travelers. First of all, some residents attract many of tourists to make lucrative business because they can submit their handicrafts and sell them which maid based on their tradition. It is obvious that travelling abroad is roughly expensive and tourists have to spend far more money therefore it could bring economic prosperity enormously. Secondly, tourism industry dramatically creates appropriate opportunities to introduce a host countries in various aspects. Generally, every countries have particular cultures and spectacular civilizations and tourists mostly would like to display where cultures originated or how historical events precisely happened in their countries. (103 words)
It is proven that some kinds of difficulties cause the tourism industry is not always gainful for countries. First of all, to a large extent, travelers unfortunately do not care about the pollution of environment and damage soil and water easily by dumping a wastes in natures. As a matter of fact, it could has irrecoverable harmful impacts for country. Secondly, host countries geographically are well-suited for holidaymaking in some seasons of years due to climate and influence in tourism jobs directly hence it is expected that travelers might prefer to not have trip to such destinations countries. Therefore some residents may lose their job temporarily and encounter to financial issues. (111 words)
In conclusion, the tourist destination can be profitable for hos countries in globe, while it can brings serious environmental and economic difficulties for long- term. (25 words)
فیدبک روی رایتینگ قبلی شما
agree
#physical activity
#strong work ethics
disagree
#Women’s participation in different jobs
#need different skills for any job
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متاسفانه دلایل به ویژه در بخش agree برای من قابل درک نیست. بعد از مطالعه دقیق سوال با توضیحات بیشتر ارسال کنید.
سلام استاد
تو مورد موافق منظورم دیدگاه هاییِ که از لحاظ فیزیکی و وجدان کاری، میگه بعضی شغلها مناسب مردها و بعضی مناسب زن هاست
شاید بهتر باشه بگم دیدگاه کلیشه ای
و تو مخالف منظورم تغییر جایگاه زنان و برقراری تعادل تو کار بود
اینجوری اصلاح کنم، مناسبه؟
Agree
#stereotypes perspective
#patriarchy (men superior to women)
Disagrer
#change in traditions and streotypes attitude
#sense of balance
Nowadays, traveling is a unique and enjoyable experience for a vast number of people and international tourism has become popular. While, international tourism has many benefits for some countries, there are many disadvantages to it. This essay will discuss these two points.
International tourism has a significant effect on countries. First of all, From an economic perspective , it is a source of revenue for countries. Both, government and people benefit from international tourism. They provide more money for countries due to demand for goods and services such as: hotels, entertainment, food and so on. As a result of all money that are imported to countries, they are a source of income and also helps to improve the standard of living in this area. Secondly, from a personal viewpoint, international tourist can gain new experiences as a their own travel. people travel different countries and face many different things for instance: many different food, customs, traditional history and culture. Most of them provide a different experience and open travelers mind.
On the other hand, they pose major problems. Firstly, the traveler can have a detrimental impact on the environment. They bring about more pollution and garbage. Unfortunately, some people throw away their rubbish on the environment and destroy natural habitats. Secondly, local traditions may be lost. Many traditional ceremonies can be changed and also, traditional jobs and skills die out, for instance: farming, fishing and so on. As a result, local people are forced to work in the tourist industry.
In conclusion, while all countries can benefit from international tourism, they pose serious problems for the environment and tradition.
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سلام استاد
بنا به گفته شما خواستم در مورد تمرین listening کلاس امروز یادآوری کنم.
ممنون
سپاس از شما
International tourism industry turns into one of the primary beneficial sources for most of countries in worldwide. Although some people believe that countries improvement directly depends on tourism profits. Others think that it could be significantly create difficulties for nations. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint. (48 words)
Destination countries widely gain considerable advantages from travelers. First of all, some residents generally attract many of tourists to make lucrative business because they can submit their handicrafts which maid based on their tradition. It is obvious that travelling abroad is roughly expensive and tourists have to spend far more money therefore it could bring economic prosperity enormously. Secondly, tourism industry dramatically creates appropriate opportunity to introduce a host countries in various aspects. It raises the profile of the place generally for visiting of tourists that decided to have memorable holidaymaking. Tourism gives the locality a chance to show off their culture and raise its profile properly in the world. (110 words)
It is proven that some kinds of difficulties cause the tourism industry is not always gainful for country. First of all, to a large extent, travelers unfortunately do not care about the pollution of environment and damage soil and water easily by dumping a wastes in natures. As a matter of fact, it could has irrecoverable harmful impacts for country. Secondly, Tourism jobs are quite commonly seasonal. It means local residents insecure with no extra benefits, such as pensions, sick pay, or health care. Some areas can be saturated with visitors during busy times, and then virtually deserted for many months. (101 words)
In conclusion, the tourist destination can be profitable for hos countries in globe, while it can brings serious environmental and economic difficulties for long- term. (25 words)
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رایتینگ شما حاوی جمله کپی شده از اینترنت هست.
برای این دفعه با تصحیح و حذف این جمله(ها) فیدبک دریافت میکنید و از جلسه بعد فیدبک بر روی رایتینگ هایی که جمله کپی شده داشته باشند هرگز ارایه نخواهد شد.
The bar chart illustrate the percentage of exercising in different age groups of women and men in Australia in 2010.
Half of young woman in 15-24 years old did exercising but only 47.7 percent of men in same group had physical activity. Interested in physical activity decreased with about 40 percent between two age groups of woman ( 25- 34 and 35-44 years old) but at the same time participating male in sport surged to 52 percent.
Two groups of elderly Australian male (45-54 and 55-64 years old) continued their exercising and both groups showed 53 percent participation. The percentage of participation of women at same age group of men fell with 43 and 45 percent. At last more than 46 percent of male and women the elder of 65 and over doing regular physical activity in 2010.
Overall, between 40 and 50 percent of Australian population participate in regularly exercise however, male doing more sport in almost age groups expect youngest one.(163 word)
Tourism is one of the most profitable industry that growing rapidly in many countries. Although, some people consider that tourism have some positive effect for country, these are others who maintain that tourism caused considerable damage in country. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints.
Some people argue that increasing tourism in country have many advantages. First of all, related jobs such as tour leaders and a lot of job positions at hotels surge by this way. So social economy is improved by tourists and locals get the job and make money that is vital for everyone and also make the economy powerful. Secondly, tourists spend currency in country and it brings in money. The income generated can make up a national income and the government allocate more budget for providing advanced facilities. Therefor all developed and developing countries try to attract more tourists and governments are in hard competition. (105 word)
Others believe that tourism countries have more serious complication than other countries. At first, tourism can often cause environmental damage likes pollution or forest fires. Although some tourists behave responsibly but sheer number of them do not care about ancient places, monuments and temples and suffer wear and tear or damage. Secondly, tourists can lack respect for local tradition and culture. They maybe do not follow standard public wears, getting drunk in publics, do some rude and illegal things or behaving inappropriately towards locals. So natives and all historical and nature resources suffer from disrespected or some crimes and unlawful behavior of tourists. (103 word)
In conclusion, some people including me think that tourism is an extremely profitable process for countries, while others consider that too damages and negative points as a consequence of coming tourists into country. (287 word)
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of male and female in Australia in various age groups who exercised regularly in the year 2010.
According to the bar chart, in the group of 15 to 24, 52.8% young men in Australia participated in physical exercise while this percentage was a little bit lower for Australian women in that age group. Then, this figure dropped dramatically and reached to 42.2 with the proportion of 25 to 34. Only 39.5% of men between 35 and 44 worked out regularly, the lowest figure on the chart. However, the ratio rose moderately to 43.1 and 45.1 for the age group 45 to 54-year-old and 55 to 64-year-old respectively. After that, this figure increased gradually as the man get older, with 46.7% in the up-to-65 group.
In contrast, the majority of women showed great interest in physical activities. While only 47.7 percepts of female aged 15-24 involved in physical sports, the figures for older groups, aged between 45 and 54 years-old saw a gradual rise and peaked at 53.3 percepts. However, this number decreased slightly for the next age group (55 to 64), to reach 53% and continued to decline to the end of the period, which was almost the same for women and men over 65 (47.1% and 46.7% respectively).
Overall, although the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical exercise fluctuated, depending on their ages over the period shown, it is clear that, women tended to do exercise more than men for most of the age groups.
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رایتینگ شما 250 واژه هست و امکان نوشتن چنین رایتینگی در 20 دقیقه در آزمون رسمی وجود ندارد. بهینه درازای رایتینگ تسک 1 حدود 170 واژه هست. برای فیدبک تصحیح کنید بفرستید.
از نظر جمله بندی تنها خطاهای کوچگ در رایتینگ شما دیده میشه. اما خلاصه کردن بخش مهمی است و طولانی نوشتن بر نمره شما تاثیر منفی خواهد داشت.
The graph illustrates the proportion of Australian male and female in different age groups who did physical activity on a regular basis in 2010. There are 6 age group in this graph.
In 2010, the percentage of 15 to 24 men age group who did regular physical activity stood at just above 52.8. The figure for 25 to 34 age and 35 to 44 age group were lower at 42.2 and 39.5 respectively. Also, there was a minimal climb to around 43 per cent in the 45 to 54 age group. Then, there was a slight increase in both older group.
Among women, the figure for regular physical activity was at just over 47.7 in the 15 to 24 age group. Next, the proportion of women regular physical activity saw slight climb in 3 age group as age rose followed by dropped at around 47.1 in the 65 and over age group.
Overall, rate of regular physical activity between women, first, there was a gradual rose in 4 age group and then decreased. While, there was significant drop for physical activity among the younger men after which went up slightly among older men.
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سلام وقت بخیر
آیا امکانش هست برای اسپیکینگ هم کالوکیشن یا عبارت های پرکاربرد رو برای استفاده بگین؟
درود
عبارت هایی که برای نمره 6 گزینش کردیم برای اسپیینگ مناسب هستند اما همچنان تعدادشون در این صفحه کمه.
در آینده حتما اضافه میکنیم. فرایند بسیار زمان بری هست وگرنه من خودم علاقه زیادی دارم چنین فهرستی رو در دسترس بچه ها قرار بدم:
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reap the benefits:
* my father properly reaped the benefits of his endeavors in his work
take drastic measures:
* some schools should take drastic measures to develop pupils literacy skills
lucrative business:
* the automotive industry is one of the main lucrative business at Hyundai company
intellectually stimulating:
* an intellectually stimulating conversation between experts encourage me to attend in their session.
fired their enthusiasm further
– after choosing a job, they can display their skills precisely and fire their enthusiasm further and finally, they achieve desirable dreams.
The chart indicates how often residents in the USA consumed in fast food restaurants in years 2003-2006-2013.
In 2006 and 2013 , almost 4% people have never eaten fast food. in contrast, in the same year about 3 percentage of population ate fast food every day. Just in 2003 they increased by 2%.
We can see in years the highest consuming for inhabitants were going once a week and once or twice a month that most of population ate fast foods in 2006 and 2013 respectively (about 33%). also numbers of people were in restaurant for several times in week and few times a year in 2003-2006-2013.again in 2006 and 2013 people was equal for going to restaurants (both 15%).in 2006 , 20 percent of people had fast foods several time a week.
Overall, despite some of people ate fast food basic weekly or month there is a small part of population who went to restaurants every day or that they did not never eat in this period of time in question.
سلام وقت بخیر
سوال داشتم، بعد از اتمام دوره، براي تاريخ ازمون شما به ما ميگين كه چه زماني امادگي براي ازمون رو داريم؟
درود
در این زمینه معمولا جلسه یا جلسات آخر صحبت میکنیم ولی با توجه به درخواست شما جلسه قبلی در آغاز جلسه در این زمینه توضیح دادیم لطفا بشنوید
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Nowadays, various kind of information are attainable for people in worldwide. Although some people are strong advocate to this approach and believe sharing much information could be helpful. Others think that access to valuable information should be limited. This essay will examine both of these viewpoint. (46 words)
Most of experts claim using a wide range of information sources is very obligatory for people. First of all, individuals activated in science and business or any field of studies use an information to develop their knowledge as well. Because some of solutions are found early and mentioned in these information by others so there is no need to experience finding solution for solved issues. Secondly, one of the main factor to saving time could be using of shared an information freely because searching to find out an appropriate consequence with reference to free valuable information takes remarkably too much time. (101 words)
On the other hand, some people disagree to share much information widely and freely among people. First of all, they believe that free access to essential information could be detrimental to people because it is foreseeable that some abusers use of such these profitable information to damage society or economic. Secondly, the age for researchers in access to information is very significant because it is obvious that some information might include matters that is not suitable for some ages therefore experts suggest that all information should have an age restriction so that according to age they permit to acquire any information. (101 words)
In conclusion, some people including me believe that sharing valuable information is very helpful way to improve in any cases, others think that availability of valuable and important information could be considerably harmful. (33 words)
The chart show six categories of consuming fast foods frequency among the American people in three different years between 2003 to 2013.
In 2003, most American people about 30 percent consume fast food once a week or once or twice a month. In 2006 more people ate fast food once a week and this percentage decreased again in 2013 and people decided to ate only once or twice a month.
In 2003, those who had fast food several times a week was more than people who ate a few times annually and it was about above of 15 percent. 20 percent of people used to eat several times a week in 2006 and both of these group was same in 2013. People who consume fast food every day or never were less than 5 percent in 2003. In 2006 and 2013 both group were same but people that never consume fast food were a little more.
Overall, it is seem that eating fast food once a week or once or twice a month more popular than other categories over this decade and the fewest group is contain people that eat fast food every day.(194 word)
A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking similarities and differences between six frequency of eating at fast food restaurant among people in the USA during every three years between 2003 and 2013.
The Numerous Americans people preferred eating fast food once a week over 30% in 2003 and 2006 and Once or twice a month less than 35% in 2013. Less than 5% people ate junk food in the restaurant every day and never in 2003,among of these people decreasing about 2% in 2006 and 2013.
About 13% until 20% of American people choosed fast food restaurant to spend time and ate a meal several times a week and a few times a year in 2003,2006 and 2013.
Overall, Most American people preferred eating fast food in the restaurant once a week or a month during this decade and gave the impression of being a period of stability.
Sharing information about science, business and academic topics is one of the most essential issues. Although, some people believe that information should be share freely, others argue that it is not possible to share valuable information without any price. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.
There are those who maintain that it is good to share data for nothing. First of all, people who can not afford for buying books or online recourses but they are so talented can use these free information. So knowledge is increase in society and more people reach information easily and freely and society have more knowledgeable resident. Secondly, free information prevent waste of time and people can access data from different topics in business, science and academic quickly. While if they should to find and buy them, they will waste many time. So free information is far more beneficial for people’s time. (103 word)
Some people think that sharing information should not be free for anyone. At first, broking copy right low is one of the detrimental result of this. Essayist and publisher of these valuable information have a legal right and if they share information freely, it will copy without any permission or cost. Secondly, it is possible that all of these information may not be correct and you can not trust to everything that you read. Probably data share by unknown person that have not any knowledge about that topic and it can cause people face lot of serious problem in their educated and business.(103 word)
In conclusion, some people including me believe that benefits of sharing information freely more than not to do that, while others consider that information should not share free of cost. (284 word)
There are many argument to share information freely by scientist about their research in society or not.although some people believe that share information is benificial,others think it is detrimental.this essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.39
Some people has a strong advocate of this approach that share information should be freely. First of all,the scientist usually do not have enough time to explaine their research. While share information freely could be save their time. So it is far more beneficial to scientist accompany thier collegue.Secondly share information become useful for other scientist who research at the same time and field. A fundamental reason for this is that scientist could be help themself by their viewpoint and they will be sure their activity is in the accurate way.94
Some people beleive that share information freely is determental to their socirty and country. First of all, The malcontents could be abuse of significiant information such as economic research and hurt to economics senter. Some investors worry about share and abuse economic information will be determental effect on their business.51
Secondly, Some group of society maybe attempt to avoid scientific research. So they have some argument this research about academic world could be harmful for their offsprings education and their welfare.for instance They always concerne about nuclear research and organize demonstration to avoid this research because of detrimental in future.51
Inconclusion, some people believe that share information should be freely and it is beneficial for society. While others think it is detrimental.22
Circulating information has perceived as a prominent element of developing knowledge and business. Although some people are strong advocates of sharing data, others believe this issue has a couple of limitations. This essay will examine both of these viewpoints.
Many people claim that disseminating information is decidedly valuable. Firstly, acquiring a set of data which has been prepared previously, really help us save time in many fields of studies especially ones that need essential statistics. Furthermore, some technical knowledge directly relies on accumulated statistical data. A particular instance of requiring details is building a dam relating to local hydrology information in preceding years. Secondly, distributing facts can develop other fields of science like medical issues. In these case, facts help physicians to inspect and analyze a problem in individual or social aspects for instance in obesity or nutrition matters. Thus there would be stumbling block in searching in many epidemic cases if these records were not to aid specialists.
Conversely, some argue that declaring sort of information has some difficulties. Firstly, there is some strictly confidential information such as documents and data in the government archives in every country has not to be revealed. Also, these sort of information, are most vital and it might be a threat to national security. Secondly, sometimes it could be quite difficult to prove that the available information is authentic to utilize because they might be old and expired records. In this case, the repercussion of research or worthwhile undertaking would seem extremely likely that the results are inaccurate.
In conclusion, however, some people assume that exchanging information is a beneficial approach, others consider the matter as a different policy which has to be restricted.
سلام استاد
میشه لطف کنین یه نمونه از تسک 1 این هفته برامون بزارین، چون نوشتنش برام خیلی سخت بود. البته من نوشتم و ارسال کردم ولی اگه بشه یه نمونه خوب داشته باشیم خیلی عالیه. و البته این گراف که تو سایت آپلود کردین، اونی نیست که تو کلاس نوشتیم
و اینکه میشه بجای واژه های every day و once a week از واژهای an a dayly besis و an a weekly basis استفاده کرد یا تو تسک یک نباید هیچ واژهای معادل بشه؟
ممنون
درود
بله حتما
البته تسک 1 نگذاشته بودم اونی که بود تسک 2 بود!
بله معادل ها درست هستند.
The bar chart shows percentage of Australian men and women who they did regular physical activity in the different age in 2010.
Men’s percentage was 52.8 and women’s percentage was 47.7 in age 15 to 24, it is clear that men did regular activity more than women. Although, after this ages men could not even do like women.
In 25 to 54 ages, females’ percentage increased gradually to reach 53.3, just females had fallen insignificant in 55 to 64 about 0.3 percent. whereas male’s percentage fluctuated , but also percentage of men was under 46.
Percentage of men and women was almost equal about 47 percent from age 65 or more. but this bounded time women’ activity decreased considerably.
Overall, men did regular activity more than women in teenagers ,while women had regular activity more than men since 25 or more.
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رایتینگ شما متاسفانه زیر 150 واژه هست. میزان پیشنهادی ما 175 واژه هست. بعد از به روز رسانی ارسال بفرمایید
Sharing information is crucial issue in the academic, research and business environment . Although some people argue that there are several disadvantages for sharing information, others including me believe that sharing information has some benefits. This essay will discuss both these viewpoints.
some argue that sharing information can has an adverse effect on people’s life. First of all, this decision would be detrimental to source of income because some people gain income from their information. They provid book or essay from their information and sell to people that is a source of income for them. As a result of access to information, they be deprived of this income. Secondly, some information have abused by some people. A fundamental reason for this that there are some scholars or some companies that take people’s information and then record on their own name, unfortunately.
on the other hand, some people are a strong advocate of this approach and believe sharing information freely have a significant effect on human life. First of all, they can refine the information. When people have unlimited access to information, they can use high quality data from others in the world. Also they can incorporate many data and using in their research. As a result, information quality can be boosted. Secondly, sharing information freely is more likely to save time. people can use others data without do research again and have more time to do other somethings.
In conclusion, as a result of access to the information freely, people’s lives have been facilitated, while there are several disadvantages to this decision.
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The graph illustrates the proportion of people who ate in fast food restaurants in 2003, 2006 and 2013.
Between 2003 and 2006, the proportion of people who ate in fast food restaurants every day decresed from 4% to 3%. During the same period , the perecentage of people who have never eaten in fast food restaurants has also declined to 1%. In (2013) the proportion of people ate in fast food restaurants every day was 3%, whereas that of people who never ate in fast food restaurants was 4%.
In (2003) the percentage of people ate in fast food restaurant once a week stood at 31%. Also, by contrast, between 2006 and 2013 the proportion of people ate in fast food restaurants once a week and once or twice a month were higher at nearly 33%.
Overall, the highest proportion of people have eaten in fast food restaurants once or twicea month and once a week. Also, over the whole period of time, the lowest percentage of people ate in fast food restaurant every day.
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آیا در نقطه اتصال دو جمله مثلا با and احتیاج به and , نیست؟
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فقط نمونه جمله مورد نظر رو بفرمایید.
آموزش و بحث تئوری انجام نمیدیم.
Mary is happy and the dog ate his food
Her mum baked a cake but it wasn’t tasty
جمله اول که چندین اشکال دارد ولی از نظر تئوری نیازمند کاما هست
جمله دو هم کاما نیاز دارد.
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