5012بازدید
دوره آنلاین آیلتس
دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397
صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 7 ام و 8 ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 61 to 85 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 16 to 20
Tactics for listening Basic kill
Tactics for listening Intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Real Speaking and Listening 2 kill
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 6 7 8 9 10 11
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 6 7 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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تسک 2
تسک 1
دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 5 ام و 6 ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 41 to 60 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 11 to 15
Tactics for listening Basic unit 12 to 19
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit Kill
Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 1 to 6
Select Readings Elementary Unit 10
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 4 5 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 5 ام و 6 ام
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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره 7
Two maps depict a tropical island of a few hundreds square meters before and after the construction of some leisure facilities for tourists.
It appears that two sites for tourists accommodation have been built, which are connected to each other and to other areas with footpath. There is also a reception in the middle of the island, which is accessible by a vehicle track from the southern part, where a pier is constructed for some pleasure boats. The other significant change is a single restaurant in the northern part of the island that can be also accessed by vehicles. The beach in the western side can be used for swimming after this development. There are also some palm trees in the western and eastern regions of the island, which seem to be untouched by this change.
Overall, the development which appears to be more concentrated on the western side and the center, has dramatically changed the face of the island in a way that it can accommodate a few hundreds of tourists at the same time. (177 Words)
نمونه پاسخ ساده تر نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره 6 تا 7
Two maps show the construction of facilities in an island. One map show the situation before and one map after the construction.
In the first map there is not much for possible tourists to enjoy except a swimming area in the left side of the island. How ever in the second map there is a restaurant in the middle of the island on the left close to a reception. There is a vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. Other important change is the construction of several accommodation sites for tourists not far from the reception. Other important facilities for enjoyment of tourists are the boats for sailing in the southern side of the island,where a pier can be seen and a beach for swimming in the left side.
Overall, it seems the island is totally different after the construction of tourist facilities and especially the western and middle parts can be a good place for tourists to enjoy their stay. (167 Words)
نمونه پاسخ نمره 7
نمونه پاسخ زیر که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد 9 بعنوان نمونه جواب نوشته شده توسط شرکت کننده در آزمون برای نمره 7 نوشته شده را بهمراه توضیحات اگزمینر(تصحیح کننده) مشاهده میفرمایید. در صورتی دقت بیشتر متوجه خواهید شد هر 3 بخش اصلی توضیح داده شده در فایل صوتی و آورده شده در بالا به روشنی در پاسخ این شرکت کننده در آزمون رعایت شده است.
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 3 ام و 4 ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 22 to 40 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 7 8 9 10
Tactics for listening Basic unit 6 7 8 9 10 11
Real Speaking and Listening Unit 16 7 8 9 10 11 12 13
Select Readings Elementary Unit 5 6 7 8 9
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 2 3 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 3 ام و 4 ام
نمونه مقدمه نوشته شده توسط مدرس برای این پرسش:
Education and the role of gender is a very important topic among experts. Although some people believe separate schools are a better place for students, other argue that mixed schools can provide more advantages for them. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.(42 words)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف جلسه 1 ام و 2 ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 21 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 1 2 5 6
Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3 4 5
Real Speaking and Listening Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 3 4
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 از این صفحه ببینید
10 units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور 1397 – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه 1 ام و 2 ام
تسک 2
نمونه ساده نوشته شده توسط مدرس
Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times mainly because they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Moreover, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.(104 words)
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. This group tend to mention the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step. (107 words)
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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر(ٍExaminer) آیلتس که در سطح نمره 9 براورد میشود:
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Do You Prefer to Live in a Big City or in a Small Town?
Better situation for Job
#more companies and factories
#more salary
More Facilities
#more investment
#more demand
نمونه پاسخ مدرس
There is a better situation for work in a big city. First of all, there are more companies and factories in a large city and they need hundreds of thousands of simple workers to work for them. They also need many experts with technical knowledge and as a result university graduates can also stay employed. Secondly, employees can enjoy a higher salary in a large city. Since companies tend to be larger and have more production, they can afford more payment for their staff and their employees have a better situation in general. There is also a higher salary for experts and those with special capabilities. (106 words)
There are more facilities in a big city too. First of all, there is more investment by both government and the private sector. Government always gives the priority to large cities and allocate big budgets to them. As a result, big cities can provide more facilities with a better quality. Investment is very important for both preparation and maintenance of many facilities. Secondly, there is more demand in cities with large populations. This demand means more businesses can be successful and millions of people are ready to pay for good services of different kinds. Thus, residents of large cities can enjoy a variety of services with higher quality. (108 words)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس
نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها
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200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)
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بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS
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چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2
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آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)
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گرامر زبان انگلیسی به فارسی
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همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!
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دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید
عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها
5012بازدید
The general population of each country has a different advantages, regardless of age. Although some people think the large number of young adults are advantages for each country, other believes the old people are beneficial (35 word)
Some people bleive that large number of young adults has more advantages in every country. First of all, there are more work force in a young population. Each country needs to around millions of laborers and employees. So there are available kind of worker who work in a particular industry, without need to any foreigner experts and any proplems about training and facilitis for them. Secondly there are more competition to get somebody motivated to progress.Also the young population have a more confidence and good ideas in their job. Its bring to motivated to progress and its so necessary condition for each country .(105 word)
In other word, some people bleive that many young adults are disadvantages in every country. First of all, the most important things an each job are experts with enough experience. While the young people dose not it and the most employer does not request for young man without any experience.secondly there are more competition to find a job with more young adults in each country and many problems arise for every young person because not enough job for them.so the employers are abusing them with low salary in this situation and there will be problemes for their future and families at last.( 104 word)
in conclution, some people bleive many young adults in society are more advantages, while other think a large number of young people are disadvantages.( 23 word)
Advantage
Economic progress and development#
Happy and healthy society#
Disadvantage
More unemploypent#
Less experience#
Good work
Advantage
# More work force
#Get sb motivated to progress
Dis advantage
#Not enough experience
#Morr competition to find a job
Good work
#Advantage
#Ability to learning new ways
#More worker population
#Dis-advantage
#more job competition
#less experience
Good work
Adv.
more workforce#
more energy and high productivity#
Disadv.
need more job opportunity#
need more variety of entertainment#
Good work
زیر تمرین جلسه های 7 و 8 نوشته شده:
tactics for listening basic kill
real speaking and listening 2 kill
یعنی تا کجا مشخص شده؟
kill = to finish off
Dear Mahmood
It was lovely to see you & your sisters last month; I hope to see you as soon as possible.
This month I changed my job, so my job location is another address, it is near the Subway station, as you know my home is near other subway station so I do not need to use my bicycle.
Do you remember my aquamarine and lavender colors bike? That is a model of Giant 2015.It has lightweight material as an Aluxx-grade aluminum frame, chromyl fork, nylon and anti-slip platform, stainless steel spokes and about geometry, it has about 65 cm stand over height. My bicycle just had service new tires, cables, and comfort brakes, which use with direct pull.
Last month, when I saw your sister she rid my bicycle and love it. You know, It has a super soft saddle that your sister never seen like this as a comfortable seat, So I think this is the best gift for your sister because she love it. I can let you buy it at a special price.
Best wishes
Sara
سلام استاد خدا قوت. ببخشید از این ساختارهایی که تو کتاب هست واسه استفاده در نوشتن نامه ، چندبار میتونیم استفاده کنیم در شروع یا پایان نامه؟ ممنون
درود و سپاس؛ حال شما
عذر میخوام متوجه نشدم کدوم کتاب و کدوم ساختارها رو میفرمایید. یا اینجا توضیح بفرمایید یا در کلاس مطرح کنید که صحبت کنیم.
زنده باشید ایشالله . کتاب New insight into ielts هست استاد. ممنون
خواهش میکنم
از عبارت ها باید یکی رو در آغاز استفاده کنید یکی رو در پایان.
اگر سوال رو درست متوجه شده باشم.
سلام منظورم همین بود استاد.متوجه شدم.ممنونم
خواهش میکنم.
The two maps illustrate an island has been changed considerably over the time period and was developed for tourism.
The island is approximately 250 meters long, has palm trees dotted around it, is surrounded by ocean and has a beach in the west. Over the period, In the north of the island, a restaurant has been constructed close to the sea. A reception building has been built in south of the restaurant that is surrounded by vehicle track and leads Tourists to the restaurant. In the west of reception building there are some trees and around of them, 6 buildings have been built. These buildings connected to a swimming beach with a footpath.
In the east of the reception, there are 9 accommodations and they have been connected to each other by footpath. In the south of island there is a pier. The eastern part of the island appears to have been undeveloped.
Overall, the island from an abundant one has been turned into a tourist spot. (168)
Two maps show the island that its construction changs from befor and it can have a lot of facilities for tourists.
In the first map there is not facilities for tourist except swmming area in the left. But in the second map there are many facilities for example there is several accommodutions in overall island. Also there is a resturant in the northwest near reception and there is reception in middle of island and near residence so that if tourist want to use vehicle track or footpath.In the west of island there are apier and boats so tourist can boat even for going there , they use vehicle track .
Overall, it seems the island changs generally and it is been better and it have basically facilities for tourist stay.also tourist have good time in the island.(152words
درود به شما
رایتینگ شما 137 واژه هست و کمتر از حداقل الزامی 150 کلمه بوده و نوشتن چنین رایتینگی در آزمون به کاهش نمره شما خواهد انجامید.
تعداد واژگان پیشنهادی ما 175 واژه هست. بعد از آپدیت در زیر همین دیدگاه ارسال بفرمایید برای فیدبک.
Dear ali
Apologies for not writing for so long, but I have been really busy. As I said my company won the new project this month,on the other side of city. I have to go to new project by transportation system. Although its so easily to catch a new subway in the neighbourhood. So I do not have enough leisure to use my bicycle unfortunately. But now I have decided to sell it.
Remember, the bicycle is a really pretty and fast. It has a rack and fancy basket for moving anythings.also it is a very pretty gold color
I would recommend that you can buy this bicycle and have it at a special price. Perhaps it would be better if you dont have enough money while you dont have good salary in your job. So you can go to work with your favorite bicycle and enjoy to ride it too.
See you at the weekend and will discuss about the
( price. (165 Word
Best wishes
Ghasem
Dear Mohammad,
I heard from Jack you d like to buy a new bicycle. I have a new one that I can’t use it,and I think you d really like it . My brother bought me a new bicycle six months ago.I really loved it .A day after my birthday my family and I went climbing and unfortunately I felt down the mountain .As my knee was injured seriously, my doctor told me I should never go biking for at least three years. l really felt regret about my knee. It s clear my bicycle isn’t suit for me until that time.
It s a modern bicycle and it’s color is your favourite one .It has comfortable seat and high speed. Also it has wide tire and strong wheels.
I think you d like to buy it .it’s a great one for biking and also i know blue one is your favourite color.Sinc you are one of my best friends i let you have it with great distance and suitable price.
let me know if you are interested,we ll discuss about price later.
Best wishes
Nasrin
There are two maps that shown developing of island during the time. Government is constructed a lot of facilities in the island of a few hundred meters square for attracted visitors.
It appears in the north of island they build a big restaurant and the restaurant have good accessibility by vehicle track to the reception. Reception is located in center of island that is near of accommodation that are built for rest of tourists and also they are constructed pier in south of the island so tourists can have entertainment with sailing boats and get to reception easily by vehicle track. Accommodations are building in both west and east of island in circle shape that have footpath between sites and to get reception. The other important facility is about beach entertainments and swimming that they provided for tourists. This beach is located in west of island and visitors can get there by walking.
Overall, the development of this island specially in center and west shows that it can support a few hundred tourist in same time. They have fun and get relax during their stay.
(words 185)
Not bad
The following two maps represent an island before and after some services were developed for tourists welfare.
It can be seen that although the West part of the island has not been constructed yet, there are a large accommodation site in the middle and a smaller one in the east side of the island which the tents are connected to each other by footpath. Between these accommodations a restaurant has been constructed in the north, close to sea and below that a reception can be seen which is connected to the restaurant and the southern sea by vehicle tracks which is leaded to the pier in the southern sea where some pleasure boats are prepared as well. A swimming area is built in the western beach.
Overall the whole constructions which is focused on the center and east side provide a fantastic welfare for hundreds of tourists to visit and stay in the island for days and have fun.(159 words)
Dear John,
It was great to get your postcard yesterday and I am thrilled to hear you are happy with the new place.
As I told before, I have to leave my small town and move to a big city for the new job situation we had already discussed. Therefore I do not need my bicycle anymore as I will be much busier in this new situation and have no leisure time, by the way it is too far to bike from my house to the company. So I decided to sell it.
The bicycle is black, large size but lightweight, with a box on the back to carry stuff in. It has a yellow front light and a red back light. A well sounded horn was placed besides the gear.
There is no doubt that it would be useful for you whereas it has a convenient box which could hold all your stuffs you have to carry to work. I know how enthusiastic you are about biking to work and not using motor vehicles. By the way your office is near enough to your house so that you can bike easily everyday.
Let me know if you are interested and we will discuss the price.
Best wishes,
Siamak
درود
نمونه خوبی هست اما به هیچ وجه نباید نامه شما بالای 200 واژه باشه.
حد مناسب 175 واژه هست
سلام استاد
ببخشید در رایتینگ تسک۱ مثلا همین نامه که سه تا بولت داره باید حتما در سه داراگراف و به همون ترتیب بولت ها نوشته بشه؟ یعنی نمیشه در دل توضیح اینکه چرا دوچرخه رو نمیخوایم تشریحشم بکنیم که درواقع بولت دوم هست؟
درود
عذر میخوام. کامنت شما رو ندیدم و پاسخ رو دیر میفرستم.
البته این مورد رو در کلاس توضیح دادیم که ترتیب بولت ها اهمیتی نداره و میتونید به هر ترتیبی دوست دارید بنویسید ولی معمولا منطقی تر هست که به ترتیب بنویسید.
Dear Fatemeh
I hope you are well. I remember you are looking a bike and I have a convinient bike which I am selling. I don’t have much time for using . I think, it is a great bicycle and I would recommend you to see it and think to buy it.
I used to the biki to go to work and also I went to cycling instead of exercise but at the moment, I cant use it like befor because I change my job and I am working at home . Also I go to gym and work out there.
The bicycle related to a famous company and I bought it eround tree years ago. It is a really comfortable. Also the color is your faverit color, It is violet.
I am sure, you would like it because it is convinent and I know you are looking a sutibel bike and its color is your favorit too. I can let you have it at a special price.
Let me know if you are interested in purchasing it.
Best wishes
fatemeh
(181)
Dear Zahra
It’s been a long time since we saw each other. As you know I used to biking at the weekends, but now I cannot ride it anymore. Recently I have a knee operation and doctor said to me it is not good for me to ride bicycle for a long time, so I decided to sell it.
I bought it last year, therefore it is in a great condition with no mechanical problems. It has a movement luggage carrier in a great color that everyone in one look would like it. The color of bicycle is white with some dark blue line in some parts. It is really beautiful.
I recommend it to you because you always wish to have one to do some exercise, so I think it is a fortune for you to have one for doing some biking, after all of that it makes me a chance to see you soon. Let me know about your decision.
Take care.
Your friend, Saba. (167 words)
درود
به نظر میرسه تعدادی از خطاهای شما مربوط به مبحث حال کامل هست. زحمت بکشید با دقت مطالعه بفرمایید. با کمی توجه و با درست به کار بردن این زمان میتونید نمره رایتینگ رو بالاتر ببرید.
There are two maps below that show an island with some different condition. At first, the island didn’t have any facilities but after a while, some tourist facilities are provided.
There were some trees that separated in the west and east side of the island that it has almost 200 meters square. Nearby the palm trees, some accommodations are built. A restaurant is made almost in north central of the island that there is a vehicle track to access to the reception that is located in the south direction of the restaurant and from there, there are some footpaths to accommodations that built in two side of the reception and the east-west side of the island. Also by another vehicle track people can go from the reception to a pier in the south sea of the island where the sailor and visitors can go sailing. In the western part of the island, an appropriate beach is provided and allocated to swimming for tourists to enjoy.
Overall, in this island, the tourist facilities are constructed and developed during the time. (179 words)
Two maps demonstrate variations in tropical island from first map to second map. There is several change befor and after the consruction of some facilities for tourist.(27)
In the first map, ther is not some facilities for tourists except a swimming area in the left of the island. While many changes can be seen in the second map. There are a lot of accommodation to stay and rest in the middle and west of island with good footpath way. There is also a restaurant in the north, near the sewiming area. Other important change is the construction of vehicle track to movment tourists from reception to restaurant and so reache from reception to pier. Another important variation is in the south of island where to make pier and a few boats can be seen for sailing. (109)
Overall, there are a good facilities for tourist in the second map that are enjoyable and some great changes can be seen among second map, especially the middle and south have more progress.(33) (169)
Tow maps show a small island before and after contraction some leisure facilities for tourists.
It appears that tow accommodation site have been made for tourists. These sites are on the two sides of the island. The only way to go through in each site is walking. In center of island there are a restaurant. This restaurant is between tow accommodation site. For access to this restaurant need to take a vehicle. The reception site is a few hundred meter to restaurant. For Boat contracted a pole in south of island. For access to it should take a vehicle too. The beach is in the west of island. footpath is the only way to go there. There are some palm tree in this island before and after construction.
overall, The for of construction show that this island prepared for tourists pleasure. Most on change are in east and center of the island. (152 words)
درود
با توجه به مشخص بودن پاسخ مورد نظر در تسک 1 رایتینگ آکادمیک باید توجه بیشتری به سمپل داشته باشید و کوشش کنید تا جای ممکن شبیه بنویسید.
Two maps show the provided of convenience in an island. One map show a place before and after the constructiondeal with tourist.
There are one restaurant in the north of map near the sea. And each tourist can use vehicle track to rich the reception place in the middle of the island almost one hundred.on the other hands, its possible for everyone by footpath toward the west of map to rich the beach area and can enjoy the swimming for long time every day.although it seems that built several accommodation around the reception place while not far from for each tourists.so where a pair is other significant changes in the south of island for vessels.
Overall, it seems in the north ,middle and south of island are very important changes after the developed of tourist facilities and there are several good place for tourist to enjoy their pleaser time. 151 word
درود
بسیاری از خطاها از بی دقتی و چک نکردن ساختارها در دیکشنری و گوگل نتیجه شده اند. در تسک 1 آکادمیک گزارش های نوشته شده توسط افراد مختلف کاملا شبیه به هم و یکسان هست و جایی برای انتخاب ساختارهای متفاوت وجود ندارد. بنابراین با بررسی دقیق نمونه های نوشته شده توسط مدرس یا سمپل های کتاب کوشش کنید تا جای ممکن شبیه به این موارد بنویسید.
Two maps depict a tropical island linearity with about one hundred square meters area which are before and after a time of development with leisure facilities for tourist. (27)
The southern pier is the main entrance to the island with some pleasure the boats, that connected with footpath and vehicle track to the reception building in the center of the land. The north of the reception is the restaurant building that toward the sea. There are six and nine the accommodations in west and east of reception that arranged into the separate group with a semicircular shape. The beach swimming is located at the western of the island. There are some palm trees in the western and eastern region of land, which seem to be untouched by change. (99)
Overall, the island is changed into tourist camp, for leisure time and activity which a lot of constructed in the central and western. (23)
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Most of experts have different opinions about educational system and the role of gender. Although some people believe mixed schools are kinder places for students, others think separate schools are better places for students. This essay will discuss both viewpoints. (40 words)
There are some reasons that people prefer to educate students in mixed school. First of all, most of girls and boys are encouraged to have communication together because they want to figure out of their feelings and ideas. This matter teaches them to know how they have to behave with opposite gender. Secondly, one of the aims of mixed schools are instructing girls and boys to have a good relationship, because they believe that having an appropriate relationships between girls and boys make them to be a sociable in society, however this is not approximately main factor for some people. (100 words)
On the other hand, some experts argue that separate schools are better place for girls and boys. First of all, many people think that a s_e_x_u_a_l abuse in separate schools are less than mixed schools, because most of students concentrate on their studies directly and prevent them from deflecting of their goals. Secondly, in separate schools students are comfortable in class because they have enough recognition each other, so it allows them to express their ideas easily and can have a discussion together in different subjects. It is obvious that separate schools motivate students to be an effective in teamwork and boosts their self-confidence. (104 words)
In conclusion, some believe mixed schools are better place for girls and boys, while others including me believe a separate schools will be effective for students. (26 words)
Education is one of the most important global issues that countries are rated base on it. Although some people believe that separate schools are more effective than mixed schools, others including me argue that mixed schools have more beneficial for children. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.(49 words)
Some people discuss that separate schools have better result than mixed schools. First of all, there are many distraction in mixed schools so students could not focus on their lessons and teachers waste their class time on silence students and talk to them for give their attention to the class. Second, experiences show that same s__e__xual can make better friendship with each other than opposite s__e__x. Girls have same behavior and interested so they can become close friend for each other and also boys are more active and noisy. They may be damage things in the school that girls do not like this at all. (105 words)
Others argue that mixed schools have a beneficial effects on the students. Firstly, when girls and boys create one group and all of them have a specific purpose for example work on project so they are forced to participate in project and in the continue they learn team working easily when they are child. Therefor mixed schools prepare them for the society. Secondly, there is more competition between girls and boys generally so students in mixed schools have more motivation to do their homework and participate in activity class to earn good marks. Not only they have competition in study their lessons but also they take tournament sport and physical education.(111 words)
In conclusion some consider that separated schools have more advantage for students than mixed schools, while others including me suppose that mixed schools are useful and prepare children for future life.(31 words)
it is a very important issue for parents how to keep students at school.although some people believe we should separate boys and girls from each other, others think we
should keep them together.(42)
mixed schools have some benefits for students. first of all there is a good opportunity for students to achieve more social experience by studying,playing and working together.secondly when they spend time together they can achieve an ability to have better understanding each other.
there are some benefits in separate schools. first of all when boys and girls are separated they can have more concentration and focus on their studies instead of hanging out or falling in love. secondly in separate schools girls have enough liberty for their affairs, they can wear more comfortable clothes and behave more convenient.(101)
in conclusion, some people including me think mixed schools are better for student benefits, while others think separate schools are more beneficial.(22)
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School education is one of the important issues that everyone is faced with it. Although, some think Separate schools are more efficient for girls and boys, others believe in the different way and they think mixed schools are better to educate. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (48 words)
Some people, believe that the separate school makes a better situation for students to educate. First of all, in some views it is true that they can have more concentration on their studying, so they have more chance of success in their education life without any wasting time. Secondly, in the separated school the teachers and students both are more comfortable, and the sensitivity that students have to attract others are less in comparison with mixed school, so they allocate more time to their lessons. As a result, they have a better opportunity to do better in their lessons. (100 words)
On the other side, some other people, think mixed schools have more beneficial for girls and boys in their education. First of all, these schools are a sample of society in a small size and being in such schools prepare female and male students for real mixed society. They can know about the abilities of each other and also understand better in work situation, life situation and so on. Secondly, these school’s environment can count as a stimulation for boys and girls to have considerable competition with one another in a good way and encourage them to study and work harder. (102 words)
In conclusion, some believe Separate schools are more efficient for the students, while others think mixed schools are better for girls and boys to educate.
Happiness can have a different meaning for everyone with the different age. Although some people believe that the teenage years are the happiest time, Others think that adult life brings more happiness. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (40)
Happiness can have a different meaning for everyone with the different age. Although some people believe that the teenage years are the happiest time, others have an idea that adult life brings more happiness. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (42)
Some people believe the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. First of all, the teenagers make friends easily because They are naturally curious about other people and aren’t afraid to ask questions. In the teenage years, the values of friends and friendship are very simple, they are sharing and express their feelings without fears of sarcasm by anyone that know that. Secondly, the teenagers spend a lot of happiest time with new friends replaced the family time as a source of advice. They do together any things and new experiences life to get done without worries parents. (101)
In other Hands, Some people have an idea that adult life is more happiest time. First of all, Adults make family and like to spend more time with their family and a few old friends so they have a more happy time to remember good memorials and special moments in their life. Secondly, The Adult people can make real friends and friendships that trust them aware and keep them for a long time, so they can relax and free mind to make a lot of happiest time. the old friends improve their lives, they are knowing each other to cut the small talk and that makes their happy. (109)
In conclusion, some people have an idea that adult years have more happy time, while other people believe that teenage years are the happiest time. (25)
Happiest time:
– Teenage years:
#have a Lot of New Friends
#Make friends easily
– Adult years:
# have a family and few old friends
#make real friends
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رایتینگ بسیار خوبی هست و تمامی موارد تدریس شده در این رایتینگ رعایت شده و بجز خطاهای کوچک دستوری و واژگانی که میتوان با واژگان سطح بالاتر جایگزین کرد مشکل دیگری در این نمونه دیده نمیشود.
پیشنهاد من به شما جستجوی واژگان اصلی به همراه واژه collocation در گوگل هست و اطمینان حاصل کردن از ساختارهایی که در رایتینگ های آینده به کار میبرید.
همچنین در مورد واژگان و ساختارها هر سوالی دارید قبل از ارسال رایتینگ میتونید در همین صفحه مطرح بفرمایید.
** Do you Prefer to live in a big city or small town?**
*Better Situation for a job # more companies and factories #more salary
*More Facilities #more investment #more demand
Everyone has different dreams when it comes to where they wish to live. Although some people believe a big city is the best place to live, while others prefer to live in a small town. this essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (43)
there is a better situation for a job in a big city. First of all, there are more companies and factories in a big city. So, they have a lot of potentials to make a variety of job, so they can hire people to work for them and provide a good condition for an interesting job. Secondly, in the big city, finding a job with more salary is more probably likely than n a small town. Each company and factory make a lot of a job position for each skillful worker, so workers find a type of a job with more salary and develop their potential to increase salary. (109)
There are more facilities in the big city compare to a small town. First of all, there is more investment and finance to make a business activity successful and improve the facilities to extend and make the best city. Secondly, there is more demand and request in the big city. because the population in the big city is longer than a small town. people in the city can demand money from a government. they are consent to pay citizenship fees. If demand does not exist many of facilities ignore because nobody does ask of government to wait for them. (100)
In conclusion, some people prefer to live in a big city, while others think to live in the small town is better than a big city. (26)
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The segregation of girls and boys in school has been an important matter among education experts. Although some people believe that separate schools work better in education, others prefer mixed schools. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (39words)
In some people opinion, to educate boys and girls in separate schools is much effective method of training. First of all, boys and girls are emotionally and physically different. They have dissimilar characteristics and spirits. Therefore, its essential to distinguish between boys and girls in education methods and in the way they are trained. So separate school can offer relevant education to each s-e-x. Secondly, to form a close relationship between males and females in an environment regardless of age may have undesirable consequence, such as raping or s-e-x-ual assault. It has been a matter of concern among the student parents. So separate school can reduce the respective social issues. (108 words)
However, there are people who think that mixed school is appropriate one that offer more benefits. First of all, there is an ideal opportunity for the students to understand opposite s-e-x and discover their mental and also social characteristics. It will be essential and useful for their future social life. Secondly, attending mixed schools may increase a great competition between girls and boys. In other words, it provides a motive for students to establish themselves as an able and respectable people. As a result, it will help them to gain a complete confidence to take part in other social activities. (100words)
In conclusion, some people think that separate school is useful to educate boys and girls, while others believe the mixed one offer more advantages. (24words
The subject of gender diversity and its role in school is a very important issue among educational experts. Although, some people believe that single- s.ex schools are better for students, Other including me think mixed schools more benefit for pupils. (40 words)
On the one hand, student achieve more learn better in separate school. In fact boys and girls simply learn differently and that each gender absorb information better in differing environment. In addition female and male have distinct learning needs that teachers should use particular technics for education. Also, this system is better in terms of pupils engagement in extra curricular activities like sport. Moreover, It is clear that when boys and girls are separate, it would make them more disciplined. Furthermore, It does not opposite with some religious belief. Also in this kind of school students less experience of s.ex discrimination. (101 words).
On the other hand, There are several reason why coeducation schools has highly beneficial for students. First of all, mixed school system increase quality and understanding between the tow genders. Also, It can encourage children to work harder to outdo the other pupils in the class. moreover, girls and boys have different abilities to learn study, so they could help each other to learn better. Secondly, It is more important to prepare children for the many aspects of adult life. As result, in mixed schools students could gain valuable experience to build their self confidence and enhance participation in more team working and better communication with opposite gender in real life. (109 words).
In conclusion, some people think separate schools are better for students, while others include me believe that coeducation schools has more benefits for students gender.(25 words).
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Parents are always worried about the type of school in which their children will study.Although some prefer their children study in a separated school, others lean towards mixed schools. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints.(37 words)
Studying in a separated school may have some benefits. First of all a child in such schools may be more comfortable. As people specially children sometimes have problems in relating with the opposite gender, such problems may decrease when they study in a separated school. For example they can talk easier and the hesitation to speak will be decreased. Psychologically children feel more stressed in front of the opposite gender. Secondly when students in a class are separated by gender they will concentrate better on education and do not focus on what to wear and how to appear in class to attract his/her classmate. Therefore they spend more time to learn.(111 words)
On the other side studying in a mixed school has its advantages too. First of all it will increase students’ self confidence. Children in such schools rehearse to behave in different groups and this will encourage them to conquer their shyness. Among mixed groups a child can learn to control his/her fear in relations and make own relationships.By the way they become more sociable and gradually learn how to appear in the society and communicate with different people. They must know that there are not just their same gender outside and try to work with others as the future employees or employers.(102 words)
In conclusion people have different ideas about mixture or separation of boys and girls in schools. In my opinion the advantages of attending a mixed school are more than separated ones.(31 words)
Education and topic related to education like gender are important among people. Although Some people think separate schools are better place for student, others belive that mixed schools have a lot of benefits for them. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.(41)
Some people belive separate schools are more effective. First of all they think, in the separate schools, Students concentrate at learning of lesson better. there are learning differences and excutive function is better in males and verbal function amang females. Also, males sucssess in math and subjects like that and females are better in literature and subjects like that. As a result , it is better for students that study in the separate schools. Secondly, emotional problems are different between males and females too. Males are more eggressive and disobedient and females are sensitive and like to argue without aggressive. In general, they believe, gender is importtent in learnig and emotional issues. (112)
On the other hand, there is a different idea from the previous idea. They think, mixed schools have a lot of benefits. mixed schools can creates environment that males and females grew up together and learn more about each other. When they get to know each other, will create better identity because they learn about themselves and other in environment. Also in a mixed schools, students work together and learn about teamwork. Teamwork helps to people to live better in society and become more compatible. It is obvious that teamwork helps to better life in the community, workplace, home and other environment. (102)
In conclusion, some people argue about effective of separate schools, while others people have lots of reason for benefits of mixed school. (22)
parents have any argu that mixed school or separate school is best option for their children.although some pepole think saparate schools is better to thaire children,others blieve mixed schools is more benefit.thes essay will discuss both of viewpoint. (41 word)
Some people believ that thr separate school is better for their children.First of all, we have to avoid the relationsheep between two students.falling in love with students can be experience hardship and may be permanent damage to his/her emothion.although the experts have a beeg argument against marriage under 18 years old.Secondly, if the students paid more attention in class, they might actually learn somethings. So some parents think to dividing a group of male and female maybe able to better on their study and future.they blieved that a strong feeling such as love be able dont paid attention their children.(106)
On the other hands,some people obviously argu that mixed school help the students to become a good personality.first of all, both boys and girls work and study together and they are able to better public relation.although mixed school give more opportunities to learn each other.secondly there are more study and competition in mixed school.some people think that mixed school are more effective to teach boys and girls.so they are can able hard study safe competition with each other without any problems and successful as a result of wining in a future.also mixed school have to be able to motivate thire students. (108 Word)
In conclusion, some people believ single s_e_x school are better.while other think mixed school are best option for their children.21 word
Everyone in every age wants to have happiness in her/his life. Although some think teenage years is the happiest time of life. Others believe in the different way and they think adult life brings more happiness. This essay will discuss both of these views. (43 words)
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بجز این مورد مقدمه مناسب هست.
رایتینگ رو کامل بفرستید برای فیدبک
Creating an environment to educate the boy and girls is the important issue. Although some people think single s.e.x school is the best one, Others thinks both gender benefit more from attending the mixed school for them is best. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (47)
Some people believe that a separate school is benefits for both genders. First of all, In the Single S.E.X school all students have the same feeling so they can understand each other without too much different. They can focus on lessons without unexpected feeling to their class and teachers can teach them with more attention. Secondly, they think the same gender is comfortable with each other for social relationships and to make a friendship so students can comfortable with each other without any problem. So each gender is more comfortable and secure to each duty of class such as a lecture in the opposite of them. (106)
On the other hand, Some people think that the mixed school is more beneficial than other. First of all, male and female can easier adapt. they will find their role in a social easier to adapt to different environments when they grow up. Secondly, each group of gender learns equality in the real world. These schools show to students that equally is for all of them with no preference to their s.e.x. So they learned equally in the relationship in a social and make cultures between male and female. Absolutely the man learned how to behave with a woman. (99)
In conclusion, Some people believe separate school is benefits for girls and boys, While others believe the mixed school has more benefits for the two genders. (25)
سلام من دوبار با لپ تاپ و الان با موبايلم تايپ كردم اما ثبت نشد!!!
درود. لطفا کانال تلگرام کلاس رو چک بفرمایید.
separate school:
# offer relevant education
# reduce (or control) respective social issues
mixed school:
# understand opposite s–e–x
# more competition
Introduction:
The segregation of girls and boys in school has been an important matter among education experts. Although some people believe that separate schools work better in education, others prefer mixed schools. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (39words
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مقدمه و ایده پردازی ها خوب هستند.
رایتینگ کامل رو ارسال بفرمایید برای فیدبک.
education is very important during the life for males and femals. although some people belive seperate schools is better for males and femals students, others think mixed schools is better for them. this essay will discuss both of these viewpoints.(40 words)
some people think that the seperate schools is better. first of all, focus on study. seperate learning spaces make better situation for students to study effectively because they can increase attention on study and don’t pay attention to the opposite s.e.x While in mixed schools students instead of focus studying give their time to friendship with the opposite s.e.x. secondly more self-confidence. because this schools are single-s.e.x and if students making mistake they are not embarrassed from apposte-s.e.x and certainly it is better for learning more, as a result the seperate school is better than mixed school. (100 words)
however, on the other hand, some people think that the mixed schools is better. first of all, more competition. because every student against for the opposite s.e.x trying to succeed and this sense of healthy competition makes them progress.secondly preparation for future life in community. males and females student Together can see and understand each other’s differences, and this can be the basis for their better communication in their subsequent lives in marriage or job positions. aware of feeling differences between boys and girls make them preparation for better life and mutual understanding. as a result mixed schools is better for learning to male and femails. (108 words)
مقدمه مناسب هست
رایتینگ کامل رو بفرستید برای فیدبک.
Education and topic related to education like gender are very important among people. Some people think separate schools are a better place for student, others belive that mixed schools have a lot of benefits for them. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.(42)
Although some people
Nowadays, Schools have an important effect on human life. Although Some people believe that the single s.e.x schools have more positive effects on children, others think that coeducational environment produces the same or better results. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (43 words
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ساختار کلی مقدمه درست هست. رایتینگ کامل رو برای فیدبک ارسال بفرمایید.
Parents are always worried about the type of school in which their children will study.Although some prefer their children study in a separated school, others lean towards mixed schools. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints.(37 words)
Studying in a separated school may have some benefits. First of all a child in such schools may be more comfortable. As people specially children sometimes have problems in relating with the opposite gender, such problems may decrease when they study in a separated school. For example they can talk easier and the hesitation to answer will be decreased. Psychologically children feel more stressed in front of the opposite gender. Secondly when students in a class are separated by gender they will concentrate better on education and do not focus on what to wear and how to appear in class to attract his/her classmate. Therefore they spend more time to learn.(111 words)
On the other side studying in a mixed school has its advantages too. First of all it will increase students’ self confidence. Children in such schools rehearse to behave in different groups and this will encourage them to conquer their shyness. Among mixed groups a child can learn to control his/her fear in relations and make own relationships.By the way they become more sociable and gradually learn how to appear in the society and communicate with different people. They must know that there are not just their same gender outside and try to work with others as the future employees or employers.(102 words)
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# separated School
#Focus on education
#Keep from social issue
#mixed School
#Focus on community Relations
#How to live together
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Place and situation for education to children are important for parents.although some pepole think saparate schools is better to progress thaire children,others include me blieved mixed schools are more benefit to them.theses essay will discuss both of viewpoint. 41 word
ساختار کلی مقدمه درست هست. با توجه به واژگان و چک کردن اونها از نظر دستوری و با استفاده از گوگل و لانگمن رایتینگ کامل رو ارسال بفرمایید.
separate school
#there is less prone to se.xual abuse
#avoiding early relationship
mixed school
#learning to deal with another gender
#increasing equality spirit
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Separate schoole :
#Fall in love early
#More attention
# les s – e – x abuse
Mixed schools :
# better public relation
#More study and copetition
#More disciplin
همونطور که در کلاس توضیح دادیم هر طرف باید فقط 2 ساپورت داشته باشه.
اصلاح بفرمایید.
اکی ممنونم استاد
Separate schoole :
#Not Fall in love early
#More attention
Mixed schools :
# better public relation
#More study and copetition
خواهش میکنم
ایده های خوبی هستند و مشکلی دیده نمیشه.
Separate school:
# less distracting and more focus on study
# same s..e..x..ual can make better friendship with each other
Mixed school:
# learn team working and prepare for society
# more competition
good work
seperate school:
#focus on study
#more self-confidence
mixed school:
#more competition
#preparation for life in community
Good work
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زنده باشید
Separate school
#less s _e _x abuse
#more comfortable
mixed school
#more socialized
#learn equality
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Seperat school
#more concentreated learning
#less emotional problems
Mixed school
#better identity
#better teamwork
Good work
separate school
# increase children concentration on educational materials
# preparing children for future to take different role in society
Mixed school
# enhances the understanding between the two genders
# different characteristics of two gender help each other develop and grow
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Separated schools
Less s..e..x..ual abuse #
Possibility to learn more specific courses #
Mixed schools
Improve relating with opposite gender #
Learn how to compete in a convenient and different situation#
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Separated schools
More comfortability #
Better concentration on education #
Mixed schools
Increasing self confident #
Becoming more sociable #
Is comfortability true? I checked it in dictionaries and google, they both had the word but I am not sure I used it correctly or not.
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About that word you need to see the context
Separate school
# focus om education
# leaening better
Mixed school
# grow confidence
# encourage teamwork
Good work
Separate school
# more concentration
# more comfortable
Mixed school
# preparing for mixed society
# more competition in good way
good work
**Benefit Separate Schools/ Mixed Schools**
-Separate Schools:
# Same feeling
#Comfortable
-Mixed School:
#Easier to adapt
#Learn equality
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دقیقا به دلیلی که خودتون اشاره کردید تا پایان کلاس اصلا استفاده نفرمایید.
بعد از پایان کلاس توضیح دقیق میدیم خدمتتون/ البته چند جلسه دیگه کتاب دیگه ای معرفی میکنیم به همراه جواب های بسیار خوب و طبقه بندی شده از نظر نمره.
there is some reason adult life happiest time
We have too much freedom in the adult life.first of all ,actually own salary gives you greater confidence in your adult life and you are not afraid to have responsibility for your public or private expence on the other hands you can enjoy to adult life with your job and your salary. Secondly you can go to travel in the adult life also you can choice between several things if you have much freedom.an independents life is not controlled by parents and without needing advice from other people in your own travel.105
Having a husband or wife is one of the most important events in the adult life. First of all, when you are expecting for have a children after a long time,it is a great stuff in your life so we can enjoing by childrens laugh or when you are talking about them.also i enjoy everey minut when see young children enjoy helping around the house. Secondly when you are tring hard to buy somethings for house so we can enjoy to more privacy in our house and enjoy to music.also we can change the decoration of my house and pain or put special paper on the inside walls,ceiling etc of a house.
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Some people believe that people experience more happiness in teenage years. First of all, a teenager takes less responsibility in his/her life. One reason for this claim is that teenagers are supported financially and emotionally by their parents. They are less involved with routine matters of life. It means they face less problems and pressures. Secondly, they have enough time to spend in leisure activities. This may include expanding a lot of time in games, sports and share a luxury with friends. This opportunity is considered as an advantage that won’t be found in adult life and that’s why some people prefer teenage years to adult life. (108words)
However, there are people who think that adulthood is the happiest time of ones life. First of all, an adult person can gain and maintain financial independence. This gives them the vigor to make their own way in life and be independence in other subjects too. Secondly, adulthood is time to start a family. An adult man may enjoy spending time with family and children. Starting a new family also earn them more respect in society and give them a great confidence that may be a real pleasure in spite of particular responsibilities that people accept in their new status. (100 words)
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رایتینگ شما بعد از ساعت 12 ارسال شده و فیدبک کلی دریافت میکنه:
رایتینگ بسیار خوبی هست و تقریبا هیچ خطایی در این رایتینگ دیده نمیشه. امیدوارم بتونید در تاپیک های سخت تر هم به همین ترتیب بنویسید.
سلام . سپاسگزارم. از بابت تاخیر عذر خواهی می کنم.
خواهش میکنم. همیشه کوشش کنید اولین کار در تکالیف ارسال رایتینگ شما باشه.
سلام استاد. ببخشید من دو روز هست تاپیک جدید رو ارسال می کنم ولی ثبت نمیشه در قسمت نظرات. علت میدونید چی هست؟ بقیه دوستان ولی مشکلی ندارند انگار!!!
بدون شک کلمات ممنوع در رایتینگ شما هست
ممنون استاد الان ثبت شد
The teenage years are the happiest time.first of all:we have lower responsibility.because we can live with our parents,so we can get financial protect from them. Secondly:more Play:in teenage years people usually have more friendship and they have more free time for varius plays. So they can make happiest Life for themself and enjoying.
The adult life years are the happiest time.first of all: become independent: in adult life years people can find job and they can have personal independence,wich personal independence arise them confidence,as e rsult they can better decision making and make a happy life. secondly people can become indipendent frome the family and to fall in love and get married and make a happiest life with them love
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پاراگراف های اصلی شما باید بین 100 تا 110 واژه باشند. لطفا به نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس و همچنین نمونه دوستان در همین صفحه توجه بفرمایید. آپدیت کنید بفرستید زیر همین رایتینگ
Some people believe that the teenage years are the happiest time of life. First of all, in these years teenagers have a lot of free time to do interesting things and spend their time with their friends and hang out with them, so they have a lot of fun. They have the opportunity to do their hobbies and whatever they want. Secondly, in the teenage years, they have to study their lesson so parents have to provide everything that is necessary for them. Therefore they have less responsibility for their family and they do some little and easy work just for practicing responsibility, so they can be happy more. (109 words)
On the other hand, some other people argue that the adult years are the happiest time in every body’s life. First of all, having a good job in these years have a significant effect on their happiness and as a result, they have an opportunity to make money and live differently without any dependency on parents. Secondly, in these years they can marry and have a family and some children. Most of them think children bring happiness to their lives and some of them believe in the different way. In consequence, with more money and having a family they can feel more happiness. (103 words
Some people believe teenage years are happiest time in human life. First of all, children not have any responsibility to their life and ether to other people. Usually in most culture, children only play and never think about life’s hardships. Parents must prepare all thing for better life and the must important task for children is education well and improving their ability for adulthood. Secondly, for children, there are always parents supports. Children never think about finding a job or paying bills. Fortunately, these help to children examination the world without considering about its hardships, go through and improving basic ability for adulthood. (word 103)
Some other people believe adulthood is more happiness than teenage years. Fists of all, Adult persons have freedom to select their life style. Usually, people chose their interest related to personal characters and their-selves conditions. They are not responsible for interest or believed of other people in this reason. This is an specific ability for adult person and children not chose it. Secondly, in adulthood there are more opportunity in regular life and work life. Adult can arrange their social environment about theme-selves. Related to this ability, there are several opportunity in front of adult person and they can chose their friends, their job and other things. (107 words)
teenagers
less responsibilities#
having a lot of free time#
adult life
having independence#
make money#
Some people believe that teenagers are the happiest in comparison with others .
Firstly teenagers do not have abundant responsibilities as much as adults and
every thing is available by their parents.Also they are mostly supported financially and emotionally by their patents so if they do mistake they will be supported by their parents.As a result teenagers will not be under stress.Secondly teenagers have abundant free time to do their favorite entertainments and pursue them enthusiastically .They always go out with their friends and have fun and do not care about problems so they feel happy undoubtedly.(101)
On the other hand,there are those who believe the adults are the happiest people.Firstly they are independent and do every things they like and they are not
have to do works that do not like.This independence lead them to follow their favorite and reach to their goals.They make decision by their own and find the best way to solve their problem .Secondly , most adults are employed and make money
so they can buy every things for themselves and enjoy it and decide how to spend it for enjoyment.They can also go to trip and see places that have not seen before .(102)
Some people argue that teenage years are the best period time that one’s can enjoy and achieve happiness and it’s not repeated again in older years. Firstly, most of teenagers have more free time and they work as a part time so they have less responsibilities and can enjoy their time more than adults. Secondly, in teenage years your energy and motivation is on the highest level that anytime would be exist so you face risk and doing many kinds of exciting activity with your friends that may be release adrenalin on your body so on that time you can be filled with happiness. (104 words}
On the other hand, there are people who argue that in your adult time you can bring happiness for yourself and maybe for family. First of all, at adulthood you are independent completely and you do not face with some limitation that teenagers have these. So your freedom helps you bring more happiness. Also you have fulltime work and maybe you saved much money all around your old years and now in your adulthood you can spend this money for anything you want. So you can have great entertainment and use any facilities with your own family and in the end achieve to happiness. (104 words)
Happiness time:
Teenage years:
#have free time and less responsibility
#have more energy and motivation
Adult years:
#more independent and free of limitation
#have money to do everything
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ایده های خوبی هستند.
some people argue that the teenage years have more happiness of most people life. First of all,teenagers do not stress about future, Because everything provide by children parents. In addition, They support and protect by them. Also, teenagers do not have grater responsibilities like adult people. For example, I remember when i was in elementary school the only thing that i think about it was just play and do homework. secondly, teenagers have a lot of free time that, They would gain valuable experience to build their self confidence and learn skills. (100 words).
on the other hand, some believe that, The adult have more happiest time in their live. First off all, Since adult have family and children, they have a lot of task to do. This this kind of responsibility result to that, They feel satisfaction in happiness in their life. Also, they could work and earn money and spend it as they wish. Secondly, they have more freedom to travel and meet friends. In other words, They have no limitation to do that. Also, The adult could spend their leisure time with family and close friend that this elements create joy and happiness in them life.(106 words).
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پاراگراف اول شما 92 واژه هست و از جلسه بعدی پاراگراف های کوتاه تر از 100 واژه فیدبک دریافت نخواهند کرد. دقت بفرمایید.
ضمنا تمامی ترکیب ها و واژگان میبایست در گوگل و Longman بررسی شوند. کوشش کنید خطاهای ساده را در رایتینگ های بعدی حذف کنید.
There is more situation job in a big city compared to small town. First of all, more huge and important companies and industry factories located in a big cities because small towns have not suitable opportunity the construction industry. As a result more job position in different major could be offer in big cities. Secondly, in the big cities companies pay more salary to their employee so they can live easily and the high salary make them satisfy. Some of the employees are educated and others hard working and motivation so actually the CEO pay more salary and support to them. (101 words)
There are more facilities and high surface of living in a big city that small town has not this chance. At first, many investors from people and also government want to investing on big city because big city has a big capacity for extremely investing. So the fund raising equal to more facility. At second, needs of residents in big city to facility and different kinds of funs, public transportation, restaurants and Et cetera force on government to assemble these. People who live in big cities demand facility and spend money for it so government provide all equipment that can do. (101 words)
Some people believe the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. First of all, the teenagers make friends easily because They are naturally curious about other people and aren’t afraid to ask questions. In the teenage years, the values of friends and friendship are very simple, they are sharing and express their feelings without fears of sarcasm by anyone that know that. Secondly, the teenagers spend a lot of happiest time with new friends replaced the family time as a source of advice. They do together any things and new experiences life to get done without worries parents. (101)
In other Hands, Some people have an idea that adult life are more happiest time. First of all, Adults make family and like to spend more time with their family and a few old friends so they have more happy time to remember good memorials and special moments in their life. Secondly, The Adult people can be make a real friends and friendships that trust them aware and keep them for a long time, so they can relax and free mind to make a lot of happiest time. the old friends improve their lives, they are knowing each other to cut the small talk and that makes their happy.
**Happiest time**
– Teenage years:
#have a Lot of New Friends
#Make friends easily
– Adult years:
# have a family and a few old friends
#make real friends
Good work
Teenage years
#lower responsibility
#more enerdic
Adult life
#family and children
# free time
Some people belive the teenagers enjoy the happiest time.because teenage years is lower responsibility.this time have not newlife and baby so many skill life is finding new friend and travel whit them.at this time every one have diffrent idea for own.so some people prefer living for many happy with out attention of future.other hand often people think teenage years is more energic
because in this time there is more health and better feeling.some people think in this time is open mind and in period is many way for arrive to more experience .so many people believe despite the lower responsibilities and more energic this time is happiest of life.(114
Some people belive that adult life is the happiest
time. In this period time there are many cases about with together and spend time. after several times, families needs to children because they must made their society. There are many ceremonies and parties between all of families that spend their times with children. In this case
families and children have free times for together because they do not have need for working. They do not have more trying for achieve money because have a salary for continuing life. They needs some more relax time. They are happy times because have not any apportunity in life. (105
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کوشش کنید جمله ها رو ساده بنویسید اما حتما ساختارها و ترکیب ها رو چک کنید. در هر موردی که شک دارید همینجا سوال بفرمایید تا راهنماییتون کنیم. مورد دیگه اینکه کوشش کنید برای لغات از منابعی که معرفی شده مثل Select Readings، Oxford Word Skills و کتاب های لیسنینگ استفاده بفرمایید.
Some people belive that the teenager years are happiest time because they do not have responsibility about life, work and world. If even there is responsibility for teenagers, there is less responsibility about theire room and school homework that it is not serious. The teenager live with parent and their parent have responsibility about them. Also it is obviously that theenager do not have to work and they have to study for learning. As a result, not having responsibility is good for them. When they do not have responsibility, they can learn about life of your parent, teacher and other people because their think is not busy for problem life and making decision. (113)
On the other hand, there are those who argu for adult life as the happiest time in their life. This group belives that adult can make decision for living. Making decision in life is important for adult, Because they want to be autonomous. Also they try to get job and start a new life without invention their parents. As well as, they earn more money than befor. They can buy something that they love and they can travel everywhere too. As a result, they can enjoy more than befor. Due to they have a new life, job, money and they are autonomous. (102)
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رایتینگ شما با وجود جمله های ساده تمامی موارد تدریس شده رو رعایت کرده و نمونه خوبی هست.
کوشش کنید در جلسات آینده تعداد خطاها را با بررسی در دیکشنری، گوگل و پرسش در همین صفحه کاهش داده و رفته رفته معادل های آکادمیک تری از کتاب Oxford Word Skills و Select Readings جایگزین واژگان ساده تر کنونی کنید.
Teenage years
# having a lot of free time
# less responsibility
Adult Life
# family and children
# make money
Good work
971 Odd Shahrivar
There is some reasons that the teenage years are happiest time. First of all, teenagers generally have a lots free times and can concentrate on their study. When teenagers have a free time during a day, they spend most of times to do their favorite activities. On the other hand, their parents pay more attention to them and prepare what teenagers need. Secondly, they have lower responsibilities in comparison with other older parents’ members, so this reason decreases their stress efficiently in their life. As they protect by their parent, they do not need to work. Parents often give them a money and good services so that teenagers motivate to continue their study easily. (114 words)
Some people argue that adult years are happiest time more than teenage years. First of all, adults are independent and hardly ever need to parent. They usually want to build a life independently so it means that they have to work to make more money. When adults have enough salary they can prepare an ideal life for themselves. Secondly, adults have higher responsibilities and can afford to do every tasks. They can make a decision properly. This includes a decision to getting married or choosing job opportunity. Adults are eager to be efficient in their job with joint to active group. Although they always try to demonstrate themselves in job and prove their skills. (114 words)
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دقت بفرمایید از جلسه آینده به پاراگراف های بالاتر از 110 واژه فیدبک ارایه نمیشود. حتما رعایت بفرمایید. ضمنا به خطاها توجه بفرمایید تا امکان پیشگیری از اونها در کارهای بعدی وجود داشته باشد و پیشرفت سریعتری رو شاهد باشیم. با توجه به رایتینگ شما انتظار بیشتری از شما هست.
سلام وقت بخیر
در بخش انتهایی سوال رایتینگ نوشته تعداد لغات بایستی حداقل 250 عدد باشه. مجموع دو پاراگراف اگر 110 عدد باشه کمتر از حداقل تعداد لغت در استاندارد رایتینگ نیست؟ من بخاطر همین سعی کردم از تعداد لغات بیشتری استفاده کنم
Why do some people think teenage years are the happiest times? First of all teenagers usually have smaller responsibilities and they are often supported by theirs parents. They encountered less challenges or troubles and if so they can solve them easily by parents’ help. As a result they are not under pressure of living responsibilities and they just would be worried about themselves. Secondly they have more free times and can do more fun activities. They can go out freely and have times to play more games. They can spend more times together with their friends and enjoy life happily .(100 words)
Another group think that adult life is the most happiest times in people lives. First of all adults have their independency. They can think and decide for themselves independently and so they can feel better and by making thoughtful decisions they can bring happiness to their lives. They can decide where to live, what to buy and so on and so forth. Of course there are always some limitations but obviously adults are much independent to decide. Secondly giving birth and growing a child is one of the most beautiful gift of God and means a lot to adults. Having beautiful and sweet baby in a family can bring a lot of happiness and joy.(115 words)
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به خطاها دقت بفرمایید. بسیاری از این خطاها با بررسی در دیکشنری و گوگل کردن یا پرسیدن در همین صفحه قابل پیشگیری هستند. با توجه به سطح جمله بندی شما دقت بسیار بالاتری از شما انتظار میره و خطاهای مربوط به سهل انگاری نباید تا این اندازه زیاد باشند.