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دوره آنلاین آیلتس
دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷
صفحه پیش رو مربوط به کلاس آنلاین و غیر حضوری روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ مهندس ابوالقاسمی هست. در این صفحه بسیاری از منابع اصلی کلاس و فایل های راهنما آورده شده و زبان آموزان گرامی میتوانند در بخش دیدگاه ها تمامی پرسش های خود را در زمینه آزمون آیلتس، موارد درسی، جزئیات کلاس، درخواست واژگان یا عبارت های مناسب تر در رایتینگ ها یا هر پرسش دیگر مطرح نمایند.
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۲۳ ام و ۲۴ ام
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 91 to 120 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 67 to 71
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 8 Kill
Listen Here Unit 11 to 21
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 22 23 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Advanced Page 6 to 35 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 11 to 20
۵ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۲۳ ام و ۲۴ ام
تسک ۲
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۲۱ ام و ۲۲ ام
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 61 to 90 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 63 to 66
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 7 Kill
Listen Here Unit 1 to 10
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 20 21 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Kill فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
Common Mistakes at IELTS Intermediate Unit 1 to 10
۵ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۲۱ام و ۲۲ ام
تسک ۱
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تسک ۲
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۹ ام و ۲۰ ام
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 31 to 60 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 58 to 62
Tactics for Listening Expanding Kill
Open Forum 3 Kill
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 6 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 18 19 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Page 76 to 100 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
۵ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱۹ ام و ۲۰ ام
تسک ۲
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷٫۵
The following bar chart illustrates the percentages of male and female citizens in Australia who were regularly involved in physical activity in 2010.
Overall, roughly 40 to over 50 percent of population did regular sport, with females having more participation in almost all age groups except the youngest one(15-24).
Over half of the youngest Australian women (15 to 24 years old) did regular physical activity in 2010, while the same figure for males was just under 48 percent. More aged women, 24 to 34 and 35 to 44 years old, showed less interest in sports with about 40 percent of participation, but at the same time, the participation of their male counterparts surged markedly to 52 percent.
Female Australian of older age groups (45 to 54 and 55 to 64 years old) continued to be committed to physical activities, and both age groups saw over 53 percent of participation. The percentage of participation of male Australian of these two age groups started to recover, with 43 and 45 percent doing sports. Almost 46 percent of the eldest of all people in this country, elder than 65 years old, continued doing regular physical activity regardless of the gender.
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نمونه پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۶٫۵
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Traveling is a unique and joyful experience for many people. While international tourism today has many benefits both for government and citizens, it may pose some threats too. This essay will discuss these two points. (35 words)
Host countries can gain many benefits from travelers. First of all, the money that tourists spend in host countries help their economy enormously. Travelling abroad is always expensive because tourists have to spend for tickets, hotels and food among other things. All this money improves the economy of the host country which are mostly developing countries in Asia and Africa. Secondly, tourists can contribute to the culture in their destination. This happens when they introduce new ways of thinking, foods and customs because travelers are always welcomed when they arrive and what they discuss may sound appealing to native people of host country. (103 words)
Potential threats of tourism industry, however, should not be overlooked. First of all, natural resources of the host countries will be under considerable pressure, especially in more remote areas. Since normally these resources are used by a rather scattered population, they can be replenished easily but when tourists arrive, they usually overuse the resources like water and fuel and put enormous stress on them. Secondly, native people may choose to adopt behavior and ideas from travelers that are in sharp contrast to their own culture. This may create some social issues in the host country and dealing with them would not be an easy task for the society. (105 words)
In conclusion, while the tourist destinations gain benefits from receiving tourists from around the globe, this lucrative market may create long-term problems that are not easy to deal with. (29 words)
(Total: 275 words)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۷ ام و ۱۸ ام
Speaking Questions part 3 Questions 1 to 30 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 51 to 17
Tactics for Listening Expanding Unit 17 to 20
Open Forum 2 Kill
Open Forum 3 Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 5 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 16 17 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Page 51 to 75 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
۵ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱۷ ام و ۱۷ ام
تسک ۱
پاسخ مدرس در سطح نمره ۷٫۵
Cambridge IELTS 12 Academic Test ۳ Sample Answer
The chart illustrates six categories based on the frequency of fast food consumption in USA in three different years over a decade between 2003 and 2013.
It is most common for American people to consume fast food once a week or once or twice a month since about 30 percent of the population is reported to have these habits in 2003. In 2013, however, this number decreased by about 5 percent for the former and increased by a similar amount for the latter.
In 2003, those who had fast food several times a week and few time annually constituted slightly over and under 15 percent of the population respectively. A decade later in 2013, the first group seems to had increased by a few percent before falling closer to 15 percent and the second group, despite showing a few percent of increase, finally stabilized at its starting level. Only a negligible percentage (almost 5 percent) of Americans ate either everyday or never and both showed a downward trend to form an even smaller percentage.
Overall, eating every week and every month seems to be the most popular eating habits for fast foods during this period and it appears in all categories there is a tendency to remain unchanged.
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تسک ۲
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۵ ام و ۱۶ ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 25 to 30 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 36 to 50
Tactics for Listening Expanding Unit 9 to 16
Open Forum 2 Unit 4 5 6 7 8
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 4 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 14 15 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Page 31 to 50 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
۵ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱۵ ام و ۱۶ ام
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۳ ام و ۱۴ ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 16 to 24 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 31 to 35
Tactics for Listening Expanding Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Open Forum 1 Kill
Open Forum 2 Unit 1 2 3
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 3 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 12 13 از این صفحه ببینید
Objective IELTS Intermediate Page 8 to 30 فقط لیسنینگ ها و ریدینگ ها
۵ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱۳ ام و ۱۴ ام
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تسک ۱
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱۱ ام و ۱۲ ام
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 6 to 15 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 26 to 30
Tactics for listening Intermediate Kill
Open Forum 1 Unit 5 6 7 8 9 10
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 2 Kill
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 10 11 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۹ ام و ۱۰ ام
تسک ۲
دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۹ ام و ۱۰ ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 86 to 100 از این صفحه ببینید
Speaking Questions part 2 Questions 1 to 5 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 21 to 25
Tactics for listening Intermediate Unit 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15
Open Forum 1 Unit 1 2 3
Essential Words for IELTS Unit 1 Part 1 2 3
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 8 9 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۹ ام و ۱۰ ام
تسک ۱
نمونه پاسخ مدرس
The graph shows the average weekly hours spent by schoolchildren on two different leisure activities at home over a period of nine years from 2000 to 2008.
Schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 years old spent less than 4 hours per week on computer in 2000. This number increased considerably over the next 4 years to 15 hours in 2004. At the beginning of the same period (2000), the time spent on watching TV was 21 hours per week, which remained the same over the nest three years. Next, it fell rapidly from 21 to 15 hours weekly in 2004.
Schoolchildren continued to spend more time on computer from 2004 and 2008 and the number reached a peak of just under 22 hours. At the same time despite a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006, the time spent on watching TV remained stable at the level of almost 15 hours per week.
Overall, While TV was much more popular than computer at the beginning of this period, it seems the time schoolchildren spent on them has reversed. (۱۷۵ words)
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پرسش و پاسخ های کتاب را اینجا ببینید.
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۷ ام و ۸ ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 61 to 85 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 16 to 20
Tactics for listening Basic kill
Tactics for listening Intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Real Speaking and Listening 2 kill
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 6 7 8 9 10 11
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 6 7 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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تسک ۲
تسک ۱
نمونه پاسخ مدرس نمره ۶ تا ۷
The chart shows how much people in UK used telephones in three different categories: Local line, National and international fixed line and Mobiles between 1995 and 2002.
In 1995, Local calls were more than 70 billion minutes. This number increased about 20 billion minutes to 90 in 1998. It then started to decrease to a 70 billion minutes again.
At the beginning, the number of minutes spoken using National and international fixed line was less that 40 billion minutes. This number only increased gradually for the next 7 years to the highest amount, over 60 billion minutes, in 2002.
The number of minutes spent on the Mobile calls were only a few billion minutes in 1995 and this rather small number increased slightly to just under 10 billion minutes in 1999. Next it surged dramatically to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period in 2002.
Overall, it seems the big difference in popularity among all three categories at the beginning started to diminish and at the final year all these categories had very similar level of popularity. (182 Words)
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نمونه پاسخ نمره ۷
The charts illustrates the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in UK over a period of eight years from 1995 to 2002.
The most popular way of telephoning was local calls by fixed line in the beginning of the period in 1995 with slightly over 70 billion minutes, which started to rise gradually for the next four years to reach a peak of 90 million minutes, before falling back to the level of 1995.
Two other categories, National and International fixed lines and Mobiles, though quite different in popularity at the beginning(37 billion minutes for the former and only about 3 billion minutes for the latter), showed an increase all over the period, peaking at over 60 and 45 billion minutes respectively in 2002. This growth for mobile calls was quite slow for the first few years but in 1998 it took off and surged to a peak of 45 billion minutes at the end of the period.
Overall, while Local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones only experienced growth. Also, despite the considerable differences in popularity, all three categories were quite popular at the end and had the least difference at the end. (211 Words)
نمونه پاسخ Band 9
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۵ ام و ۶ ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 41 to 60 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 11 to 15
Tactics for listening Basic unit 12 to 19
Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit Kill
Real Speaking and Listening 2 Unit 1 to 6
Select Readings Elementary Unit 10
Select Readings Pre-intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 4 5 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۵ ام و ۶ ام
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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۷
Two maps depict a tropical island of a few hundreds square meters before and after the construction of some leisure facilities for tourists.
It appears that two sites for tourists accommodation have been built, which are connected to each other and to other areas with footpath. There is also a reception in the middle of the island, which is accessible by a vehicle track from the southern part, where a pier is constructed for some pleasure boats. The other significant change is a single restaurant in the northern part of the island that can be also accessed by vehicles. The beach in the western side can be used for swimming after this development. There are also some palm trees in the western and eastern regions of the island, which seem to be untouched by this change.
Overall, the development which appears to be more concentrated on the western side and the center, has dramatically changed the face of the island in a way that it can accommodate a few hundreds of tourists at the same time. (177 Words)
نمونه پاسخ ساده تر نوشته شده توسط مدرس در سطح نمره ۶ تا ۷
Two maps show the construction of facilities in an island. One map show the situation before and one map after the construction.
In the first map there is not much for possible tourists to enjoy except a swimming area in the left side of the island. How ever in the second map there is a restaurant in the middle of the island on the left close to a reception. There is a vehicle track for tourists who want to reach the reception or the restaurant. Other important change is the construction of several accommodation sites for tourists not far from the reception. Other important facilities for enjoyment of tourists are the boats for sailing in the southern side of the island,where a pier can be seen and a beach for swimming in the left side.
Overall, it seems the island is totally different after the construction of tourist facilities and especially the western and middle parts can be a good place for tourists to enjoy their stay. (167 Words)
نمونه پاسخ نمره ۷
نمونه پاسخ زیر که در پایان کتاب کمبریج آیلتس جلد ۹ بعنوان نمونه جواب نوشته شده توسط شرکت کننده در آزمون برای نمره ۷ نوشته شده را بهمراه توضیحات اگزمینر(تصحیح کننده) مشاهده میفرمایید. در صورتی دقت بیشتر متوجه خواهید شد هر ۳ بخش اصلی توضیح داده شده در فایل صوتی و آورده شده در بالا به روشنی در پاسخ این شرکت کننده در آزمون رعایت شده است.
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۳ ام و ۴ ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 22 to 40 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 7 8 9 10
Tactics for listening Basic unit 6 7 8 9 10 11
Real Speaking and Listening Unit 16 7 8 9 10 11 12 13
Select Readings Elementary Unit 5 6 7 8 9
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 2 3 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۳ ام و ۴ ام
نمونه مقدمه نوشته شده توسط مدرس برای این پرسش:
Education and the role of gender is a very important topic among experts. Although some people believe separate schools are a better place for students, other argue that mixed schools can provide more advantages for them. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.(42 words)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف جلسه ۱ ام و ۲ ام
Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 21 از این صفحه ببینید
Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 1 2 5 6
Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3 4 5
Real Speaking and Listening Unit 1 2 3 4 5
Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 3 4
Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1 از این صفحه ببینید
۱۰ units from Oxford Practice Grammar (اختیاری)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس روزهای فرد شهریور ۱۳۹۷ – تکالیف رایتینگ جلسه ۱ ام و ۲ ام
تسک ۲
نمونه ساده نوشته شده توسط مدرس
Some argue that teenagers enjoy the happiest times mainly because they do not share responsibility in their homes and simply benefit from everything that is made available by their parents. Even if they share some responsibilities around the house or start a part time job, it will at the minimum level of responsibility with maximum financial and emotional support and hence, they will not be under the stress of juggling numerous tasks in a hectic lifestyle. Moreover, they have abundant free time to choose their leisure activities and pursue their true hobbies. A luxury that majority of adults will not be able to afford.(104 words)
On the other hand, however, there are those who argue for adulthood as the happiest time in one’s life. This group tend to mention the opportunities that only a citizen in their adult years can enjoy. This includes a more preferable socioeconomic status and the respect that one earns as the result or the opportunity of starting a family. Adults tend to have more secure careers that bring about not only higher salaries but also more security and ease of life. Society gives them both the right and support to have family of their own if only they wish to take their lives to the next step. (107 words)
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نمونه پاسخ نوشته شده توسط اگزمینر(ٍExaminer) آیلتس که در سطح نمره ۹ براورد میشود:
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Do You Prefer to Live in a Big City or in a Small Town?
Better situation for Job
#more companies and factories
#more salary
More Facilities
#more investment
#more demand
نمونه پاسخ مدرس
There is a better situation for work in a big city. First of all, there are more companies and factories in a large city and they need hundreds of thousands of simple workers to work for them. They also need many experts with technical knowledge and as a result university graduates can also stay employed. Secondly, employees can enjoy a higher salary in a large city. Since companies tend to be larger and have more production, they can afford more payment for their staff and their employees have a better situation in general. There is also a higher salary for experts and those with special capabilities. (106 words)
There are more facilities in a big city too. First of all, there is more investment by both government and the private sector. Government always gives the priority to large cities and allocate big budgets to them. As a result, big cities can provide more facilities with a better quality. Investment is very important for both preparation and maintenance of many facilities. Secondly, there is more demand in cities with large populations. This demand means more businesses can be successful and millions of people are ready to pay for good services of different kinds. Thus, residents of large cities can enjoy a variety of services with higher quality. (108 words)
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دوره آنلاین آیلتس – لینک های سودمند برای کلاس
نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها
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۲۰۰ نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)
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بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS
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چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2
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آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته (متن + ویدیو)
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گرامر زبان انگلیسی به فارسی
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همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!
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دانلود دیکشنری پیشرفته Longman Contemporary کم حجم برای اندروید
عضویت در کانال تلگرام IELTS2 و دنبال کردن تازه ها
۷۵۴۰بازدید
با سلام استاد
آیا این ساختار و گرامر صحیح است . سپاس
I am finding a job in a english language country now and i think when i will emigrate to this country and i will have communicate to different people or i do practice with english books or i register in english classes so i think i can improve my english language perfectly
سلام استاد
میشه در مورد آخرین رایتینگامونم نظرتونو بگین؟ مثلا در چه سطحی هستن؟ ۵ یا ۶
ممنون میشم 🙏🙏
Nowadays, shopping centers changes dramatically and many small stores have closed because customers prefer buying their supplies from larger malls. Although, some people think that closing small stores have some negative results others, believe that positive effects of opening large malls is more than negative. This essay will discuss some of the positive effects.
By opening big shopping centers many related jobs are raising in the society. First of all, large shopping centers have more job opportunities because there are heavy workload and many things to do so they should employ many worker with different skills such as cashiers, simple workers, securities and customer services. Secondly, beside sales in stores they have some sites on the internet and sell their product online. Therefore, the management should hire more employee for these online shopping. They hire many skillful people in site development, designing, programmer or for transportation. So these variety of jobs are required in large shopping centers. (103 word)
Large shopping centers provide more convenience and better situations for their customers. First of all, because these malls mostly located in center of cities and finding park place is impossible and hard so the ample and huge parking are constructed. Customers can park their cars easily and freely and if their buys get heavy they can carry them with wheels beside their car. Second, shopping centers have effective customers service and their behavior are really respectful and they listen carefully and solve the customer’s problems and even if customers want to return their buys, they will accept it.(100 word)
In conclusion, while some people including me believe that large shopping centers have more advantage in people’s life, others think that small stores are more beneficial than large one. (283 word)
Nowadays, numerous small local shops have been closed due to customers go to big shopping centers. Although, there is some drawback to closing small shops, I personally believe the advantages are far more. This essay will discuss about the positive effects of this viewpoint.
There are several advantages to closing small shops and buying goods in big malls . First of all, people are able to save more their time. Since large shopping malls have many stores and their stors provide many different goods, people who go to there have easy access to many different goods. Also, if they want to seek in the small shops, they should allocate many times, because small malls do not have different goods and people have limitations on their purchase. As a result, people benefit more from shopping in bigger centers.
Secondly, another positive aspect of closing small shops and buying from shopping malls is that traffic or bustle are reduced. When people go to big mall centers, they spend more time in there, instead on the streets. They do not need to go to one small shop and go to another small shop in the street. Also, people who go to big shopping malls do not need a car or public transportation, but small shops are not centralized near each other. Thus, people need car for accessing to them. As a result, purchasing from big malls provides street without bustle and traffic.
In conclusion, while closing small shops and buying from large shopping centers might have some negative effect, I believe the benefit is far more. Buying from big shopping malls has a significant effect on people’s time and bustle or traffic.
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The first chart illustrates destination in the number of UK graduate students who did not get full-time work after graduation in 2008, and the second bar chart shows figures for UK postgraduate students who did not searched full-time job after leaving college in 2008.
In the first graph, the figure for graduate students who worked at part time job was nearly 20000 while, the figure for graduate students who was unemployment stood just over 15000. Among graduate students who did not go into a full time job, the highest figure was for further study in 29665 whereas voluntary work was the least just under 5000.
On the second graph, 2535 postgraduate students worked at part-time job while, the number of postgraduate students who was unemployment stood just over 1500. Among postgraduate students who did not go into full-time job, the most number of students was to further study in 2725 whereas the lowest figure was at just under 500 for voluntary work.
Overall, in 2008, most of UK graduates and post graduates sought further study. However, the lowest figure among UK graduates and post graduates was for voluntary work. Also, some students sought part-time job and another was unemployment.
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The charts illustrates amount of using water for three main purpose in six areas around the world.
The most industrial usage of water was relevant to two areas; Europe and North America with 53 and 48 percent. South East Asia and South America with 12 and 10 percent of usage water were stand in second level. The two zones that had fewest industrial usage of water were Africa and Central Asia with 7 and 5 percent.
Central Asia and Africa and South East Asia were three largest consumer of water for agricultural usage with 88, 84 and 81 percent. Fourth area consumer was South America with 71 percent. North America and Europe were the last areas that used only 39 and 32 percent of water considering agriculture. South America, Europe and North America were three areas with highest consuming of water for domestic purpose with 19, 15 and 13 percent. The next region were relevant to Africa and the lowest usage of water for domestic were consider to Central Asia and South East Asia with 7 percent.
Overall, the most usage of water was for agricultural purpose in six areas around the world and the lowest one was for domestic used.(200 word)
A glance at the six pie chart provided reveals the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world such as North and South American, Europe, Africa, central and south east Asia.
It is noticeable a significant majority of water user is agricultural in four area such as Central Asia 88%, Africa 84%, South east Asia 81% and in South American 71%. Just over a third of agricultural user is in Europe.
Of these purpose, Industry use water is almost a half in Europe then in North American and a small minority in South East Asia then in South American. A small fraction of that is in Africa and Central Asia.
A small number of domestic use water is in South America and Europe and North America respectively. An insignificant amount of approximately 9% of that is in Africa and 7% in Central Asia and South East Asia.
Overall, the most significant purpose of water used is Agriculture in all area except Europe and North American.
Nowadays, people have different views about females and males are able to do different somethings. Although, some people argue that some work are suitable for men and some job are appropriate for women, others, including me, believe that both genders are able to contribute in the different jobs. These essay will discuss about this viewpoint.
It is incorrect that people get a job and task with their gender. First of all, there are a numerous women who are able to do physical activity or make sensible decisions. Also, they contribute in the various jobs compared with a male counterpart. In addition, women who studying in the different subject have increased and they are interested in doing different things. For instance: many women have worked as a lawyer, a pilot and climber and most of them succeed. Secondly, it is wrong that men are unable to do an emotional activity or work at home. Many men are good at emotional activity. For instance: there are several males who working as a teacher, nurse that this work need to emotional skills.
On the other hand, It is better for any job that having a sense of balance. First of all, when men and women work together, they boost the quality of their work or activity. They are able to use their experience, their skills and also are consulted together. Secondly, sometimes experienced workforce has been in the different gender, unexpectedly. For example: we are looking men for physical job and then we find a woman with high qualification and strong ability. As a result, various jobs need a both gender.
In conclusion, while some people believe male and female need to different job as a distinct ability, others argue both men and women can do a different activity or work.
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These day, borders between males and females are becoming blurred in society. Although, some people consider that some carriers are suitable for each different genders, others argue that women and men have same ability so there is no reasonably difference between their types of jobs. This easy will discuss both of these viewpoints.
Some people believe that amount of success in some special jobs is different between genders. First of all, the physical abilities of men are differ from women so it is obviously men are better in some jobs that need more muscles power and stronger body such as mechanics or construction workers. Secondly, in some society there are still old thoughts about some carriers that are special for women like nurse, ballet dancer or even cooker. These people think that characteristics and abilities of women just limited in some jobs that seems have more similarity to their behavior and personality.(100 word)
Others maintain that characteristics of male and female can different in some aspects but not in profession. At first, we have great sample of successful and popular women around the word and some of them are presidents or have official political duty or maybe famous scientists or even astronauts. So as the evidence shows women have play vital role in society as well as men. At second, choose the type of carrier is depend on person’s physical ability and intellectual capability instead of gender. There is some disable people that work same as other people and their gender or even physical abilities are not important and just their personality is base of their work.(115 word)
In conclusion, some people including me think that female and male have not any huge differences between themselves to avoid get some jobs, while others believe that some carriers are not suitable for each different genders.(300 word)
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of water used for various aims in six regions of the world. There are three different using of water in the world.
The highest proportion of water used for industrial use has been at 53% in the Europe. After Europe, the highest percentage of water used for industrial use has been at 48 percent in the North America. While, a vary small part of the water used in industrial, 5%, has been in central Asia.
The figure for agricultural use has stood at 88 per cent in central Asia. While, the percentage of agricultural use in Africa and south east Asia have been slightly lower at 84% and 81% respectively. The figure for agriculture in Europe and North America have been far less than agricultural use in another part world.
Only 19 percentage of water in South America has used for domestic use. In domestic use, a very small using of water have been in southeast Asia and central Asia at only 7 per cent.
Overall, the highest water used have belonged to agricultural use. Whereas, the figure for domestic use have been lower. The figure for industrial use have been average.
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سلام استاد
میشه لطف کنین، برنامه کلاسی رو تو صفحه کلاسمون(روزهای فرد شهریور) آپدیت کنین.
ممنون 🙏
Done
سلام وقت بخیر
استاد خواستم یاداوری کنم فایل های اسپیکینگ من فیدبک داده نشده.
سپاس
International tourism industry turns into one of the primary beneficial sources for most of countries in worldwide. Although some people believe that countries improvement directly depends on tourism profits. Others think that it could be significantly create difficulties for nations. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint. (48 words)
Destination countries widely gain considerable advantages from travelers. First of all, some residents attract many of tourists to make lucrative business because they can submit their handicrafts and sell them which maid based on their tradition. It is obvious that travelling abroad is roughly expensive and tourists have to spend far more money therefore it could bring economic prosperity enormously. Secondly, tourism industry dramatically creates appropriate opportunities to introduce a host countries in various aspects. Generally, every countries have particular cultures and spectacular civilizations and tourists mostly would like to display where cultures originated or how historical events precisely happened in their countries. (103 words)
It is proven that some kinds of difficulties cause the tourism industry is not always gainful for countries. First of all, to a large extent, travelers unfortunately do not care about the pollution of environment and damage soil and water easily by dumping a wastes in natures. As a matter of fact, it could has irrecoverable harmful impacts for country. Secondly, host countries geographically are well-suited for holidaymaking in some seasons of years due to climate and influence in tourism jobs directly hence it is expected that travelers might prefer to not have trip to such destinations countries. Therefore some residents may lose their job temporarily and encounter to financial issues. (111 words)
In conclusion, the tourist destination can be profitable for hos countries in globe, while it can brings serious environmental and economic difficulties for long- term. (25 words)
فیدبک روی رایتینگ قبلی شما
agree
#physical activity
#strong work ethics
disagree
#Women’s participation in different jobs
#need different skills for any job
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متاسفانه دلایل به ویژه در بخش agree برای من قابل درک نیست. بعد از مطالعه دقیق سوال با توضیحات بیشتر ارسال کنید.
سلام استاد
تو مورد موافق منظورم دیدگاه هاییِ که از لحاظ فیزیکی و وجدان کاری، میگه بعضی شغلها مناسب مردها و بعضی مناسب زن هاست
شاید بهتر باشه بگم دیدگاه کلیشه ای
و تو مخالف منظورم تغییر جایگاه زنان و برقراری تعادل تو کار بود
اینجوری اصلاح کنم، مناسبه؟
Agree
#stereotypes perspective
#patriarchy (men superior to women)
Disagrer
#change in traditions and streotypes attitude
#sense of balance
Nowadays, traveling is a unique and enjoyable experience for a vast number of people and international tourism has become popular. While, international tourism has many benefits for some countries, there are many disadvantages to it. This essay will discuss these two points.
International tourism has a significant effect on countries. First of all, From an economic perspective , it is a source of revenue for countries. Both, government and people benefit from international tourism. They provide more money for countries due to demand for goods and services such as: hotels, entertainment, food and so on. As a result of all money that are imported to countries, they are a source of income and also helps to improve the standard of living in this area. Secondly, from a personal viewpoint, international tourist can gain new experiences as a their own travel. people travel different countries and face many different things for instance: many different food, customs, traditional history and culture. Most of them provide a different experience and open travelers mind.
On the other hand, they pose major problems. Firstly, the traveler can have a detrimental impact on the environment. They bring about more pollution and garbage. Unfortunately, some people throw away their rubbish on the environment and destroy natural habitats. Secondly, local traditions may be lost. Many traditional ceremonies can be changed and also, traditional jobs and skills die out, for instance: farming, fishing and so on. As a result, local people are forced to work in the tourist industry.
In conclusion, while all countries can benefit from international tourism, they pose serious problems for the environment and tradition.
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سلام استاد
بنا به گفته شما خواستم در مورد تمرین listening کلاس امروز یادآوری کنم.
ممنون
سپاس از شما
International tourism industry turns into one of the primary beneficial sources for most of countries in worldwide. Although some people believe that countries improvement directly depends on tourism profits. Others think that it could be significantly create difficulties for nations. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint. (48 words)
Destination countries widely gain considerable advantages from travelers. First of all, some residents generally attract many of tourists to make lucrative business because they can submit their handicrafts which maid based on their tradition. It is obvious that travelling abroad is roughly expensive and tourists have to spend far more money therefore it could bring economic prosperity enormously. Secondly, tourism industry dramatically creates appropriate opportunity to introduce a host countries in various aspects. It raises the profile of the place generally for visiting of tourists that decided to have memorable holidaymaking. Tourism gives the locality a chance to show off their culture and raise its profile properly in the world. (110 words)
It is proven that some kinds of difficulties cause the tourism industry is not always gainful for country. First of all, to a large extent, travelers unfortunately do not care about the pollution of environment and damage soil and water easily by dumping a wastes in natures. As a matter of fact, it could has irrecoverable harmful impacts for country. Secondly, Tourism jobs are quite commonly seasonal. It means local residents insecure with no extra benefits, such as pensions, sick pay, or health care. Some areas can be saturated with visitors during busy times, and then virtually deserted for many months. (101 words)
In conclusion, the tourist destination can be profitable for hos countries in globe, while it can brings serious environmental and economic difficulties for long- term. (25 words)
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رایتینگ شما حاوی جمله کپی شده از اینترنت هست.
برای این دفعه با تصحیح و حذف این جمله(ها) فیدبک دریافت میکنید و از جلسه بعد فیدبک بر روی رایتینگ هایی که جمله کپی شده داشته باشند هرگز ارایه نخواهد شد.
The bar chart illustrate the percentage of exercising in different age groups of women and men in Australia in 2010.
Half of young woman in 15-24 years old did exercising but only 47.7 percent of men in same group had physical activity. Interested in physical activity decreased with about 40 percent between two age groups of woman ( 25- 34 and 35-44 years old) but at the same time participating male in sport surged to 52 percent.
Two groups of elderly Australian male (45-54 and 55-64 years old) continued their exercising and both groups showed 53 percent participation. The percentage of participation of women at same age group of men fell with 43 and 45 percent. At last more than 46 percent of male and women the elder of 65 and over doing regular physical activity in 2010.
Overall, between 40 and 50 percent of Australian population participate in regularly exercise however, male doing more sport in almost age groups expect youngest one.(163 word)
Tourism is one of the most profitable industry that growing rapidly in many countries. Although, some people consider that tourism have some positive effect for country, these are others who maintain that tourism caused considerable damage in country. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints.
Some people argue that increasing tourism in country have many advantages. First of all, related jobs such as tour leaders and a lot of job positions at hotels surge by this way. So social economy is improved by tourists and locals get the job and make money that is vital for everyone and also make the economy powerful. Secondly, tourists spend currency in country and it brings in money. The income generated can make up a national income and the government allocate more budget for providing advanced facilities. Therefor all developed and developing countries try to attract more tourists and governments are in hard competition. (105 word)
Others believe that tourism countries have more serious complication than other countries. At first, tourism can often cause environmental damage likes pollution or forest fires. Although some tourists behave responsibly but sheer number of them do not care about ancient places, monuments and temples and suffer wear and tear or damage. Secondly, tourists can lack respect for local tradition and culture. They maybe do not follow standard public wears, getting drunk in publics, do some rude and illegal things or behaving inappropriately towards locals. So natives and all historical and nature resources suffer from disrespected or some crimes and unlawful behavior of tourists. (103 word)
In conclusion, some people including me think that tourism is an extremely profitable process for countries, while others consider that too damages and negative points as a consequence of coming tourists into country. (287 word)
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of male and female in Australia in various age groups who exercised regularly in the year 2010.
According to the bar chart, in the group of 15 to 24, 52.8% young men in Australia participated in physical exercise while this percentage was a little bit lower for Australian women in that age group. Then, this figure dropped dramatically and reached to 42.2 with the proportion of 25 to 34. Only 39.5% of men between 35 and 44 worked out regularly, the lowest figure on the chart. However, the ratio rose moderately to 43.1 and 45.1 for the age group 45 to 54-year-old and 55 to 64-year-old respectively. After that, this figure increased gradually as the man get older, with 46.7% in the up-to-65 group.
In contrast, the majority of women showed great interest in physical activities. While only 47.7 percepts of female aged 15-24 involved in physical sports, the figures for older groups, aged between 45 and 54 years-old saw a gradual rise and peaked at 53.3 percepts. However, this number decreased slightly for the next age group (55 to 64), to reach 53% and continued to decline to the end of the period, which was almost the same for women and men over 65 (47.1% and 46.7% respectively).
Overall, although the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical exercise fluctuated, depending on their ages over the period shown, it is clear that, women tended to do exercise more than men for most of the age groups.
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رایتینگ شما ۲۵۰ واژه هست و امکان نوشتن چنین رایتینگی در ۲۰ دقیقه در آزمون رسمی وجود ندارد. بهینه درازای رایتینگ تسک ۱ حدود ۱۷۰ واژه هست. برای فیدبک تصحیح کنید بفرستید.
از نظر جمله بندی تنها خطاهای کوچگ در رایتینگ شما دیده میشه. اما خلاصه کردن بخش مهمی است و طولانی نوشتن بر نمره شما تاثیر منفی خواهد داشت.
The graph illustrates the proportion of Australian male and female in different age groups who did physical activity on a regular basis in 2010. There are 6 age group in this graph.
In 2010, the percentage of 15 to 24 men age group who did regular physical activity stood at just above 52.8. The figure for 25 to 34 age and 35 to 44 age group were lower at 42.2 and 39.5 respectively. Also, there was a minimal climb to around 43 per cent in the 45 to 54 age group. Then, there was a slight increase in both older group.
Among women, the figure for regular physical activity was at just over 47.7 in the 15 to 24 age group. Next, the proportion of women regular physical activity saw slight climb in 3 age group as age rose followed by dropped at around 47.1 in the 65 and over age group.
Overall, rate of regular physical activity between women, first, there was a gradual rose in 4 age group and then decreased. While, there was significant drop for physical activity among the younger men after which went up slightly among older men.
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سلام وقت بخیر
آیا امکانش هست برای اسپیکینگ هم کالوکیشن یا عبارت های پرکاربرد رو برای استفاده بگین؟
درود
عبارت هایی که برای نمره ۶ گزینش کردیم برای اسپیینگ مناسب هستند اما همچنان تعدادشون در این صفحه کمه.
در آینده حتما اضافه میکنیم. فرایند بسیار زمان بری هست وگرنه من خودم علاقه زیادی دارم چنین فهرستی رو در دسترس بچه ها قرار بدم:
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reap the benefits:
* my father properly reaped the benefits of his endeavors in his work
take drastic measures:
* some schools should take drastic measures to develop pupils literacy skills
lucrative business:
* the automotive industry is one of the main lucrative business at Hyundai company
intellectually stimulating:
* an intellectually stimulating conversation between experts encourage me to attend in their session.
fired their enthusiasm further
– after choosing a job, they can display their skills precisely and fire their enthusiasm further and finally, they achieve desirable dreams.
The chart indicates how often residents in the USA consumed in fast food restaurants in years 2003-2006-2013.
In 2006 and 2013 , almost 4% people have never eaten fast food. in contrast, in the same year about 3 percentage of population ate fast food every day. Just in 2003 they increased by 2%.
We can see in years the highest consuming for inhabitants were going once a week and once or twice a month that most of population ate fast foods in 2006 and 2013 respectively (about 33%). also numbers of people were in restaurant for several times in week and few times a year in 2003-2006-2013.again in 2006 and 2013 people was equal for going to restaurants (both 15%).in 2006 , 20 percent of people had fast foods several time a week.
Overall, despite some of people ate fast food basic weekly or month there is a small part of population who went to restaurants every day or that they did not never eat in this period of time in question.
سلام وقت بخیر
سوال داشتم، بعد از اتمام دوره، برای تاریخ ازمون شما به ما میگین که چه زمانی امادگی برای ازمون رو داریم؟
درود
در این زمینه معمولا جلسه یا جلسات آخر صحبت میکنیم ولی با توجه به درخواست شما جلسه قبلی در آغاز جلسه در این زمینه توضیح دادیم لطفا بشنوید
۹۷۱ odd shahrivar
Nowadays, various kind of information are attainable for people in worldwide. Although some people are strong advocate to this approach and believe sharing much information could be helpful. Others think that access to valuable information should be limited. This essay will examine both of these viewpoint. (46 words)
Most of experts claim using a wide range of information sources is very obligatory for people. First of all, individuals activated in science and business or any field of studies use an information to develop their knowledge as well. Because some of solutions are found early and mentioned in these information by others so there is no need to experience finding solution for solved issues. Secondly, one of the main factor to saving time could be using of shared an information freely because searching to find out an appropriate consequence with reference to free valuable information takes remarkably too much time. (101 words)
On the other hand, some people disagree to share much information widely and freely among people. First of all, they believe that free access to essential information could be detrimental to people because it is foreseeable that some abusers use of such these profitable information to damage society or economic. Secondly, the age for researchers in access to information is very significant because it is obvious that some information might include matters that is not suitable for some ages therefore experts suggest that all information should have an age restriction so that according to age they permit to acquire any information. (101 words)
In conclusion, some people including me believe that sharing valuable information is very helpful way to improve in any cases, others think that availability of valuable and important information could be considerably harmful. (33 words)
The chart show six categories of consuming fast foods frequency among the American people in three different years between 2003 to 2013.
In 2003, most American people about 30 percent consume fast food once a week or once or twice a month. In 2006 more people ate fast food once a week and this percentage decreased again in 2013 and people decided to ate only once or twice a month.
In 2003, those who had fast food several times a week was more than people who ate a few times annually and it was about above of 15 percent. 20 percent of people used to eat several times a week in 2006 and both of these group was same in 2013. People who consume fast food every day or never were less than 5 percent in 2003. In 2006 and 2013 both group were same but people that never consume fast food were a little more.
Overall, it is seem that eating fast food once a week or once or twice a month more popular than other categories over this decade and the fewest group is contain people that eat fast food every day.(194 word)
A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking similarities and differences between six frequency of eating at fast food restaurant among people in the USA during every three years between 2003 and 2013.
The Numerous Americans people preferred eating fast food once a week over 30% in 2003 and 2006 and Once or twice a month less than 35% in 2013. Less than 5% people ate junk food in the restaurant every day and never in 2003,among of these people decreasing about 2% in 2006 and 2013.
About 13% until 20% of American people choosed fast food restaurant to spend time and ate a meal several times a week and a few times a year in 2003,2006 and 2013.
Overall, Most American people preferred eating fast food in the restaurant once a week or a month during this decade and gave the impression of being a period of stability.
Sharing information about science, business and academic topics is one of the most essential issues. Although, some people believe that information should be share freely, others argue that it is not possible to share valuable information without any price. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.
There are those who maintain that it is good to share data for nothing. First of all, people who can not afford for buying books or online recourses but they are so talented can use these free information. So knowledge is increase in society and more people reach information easily and freely and society have more knowledgeable resident. Secondly, free information prevent waste of time and people can access data from different topics in business, science and academic quickly. While if they should to find and buy them, they will waste many time. So free information is far more beneficial for people’s time. (103 word)
Some people think that sharing information should not be free for anyone. At first, broking copy right low is one of the detrimental result of this. Essayist and publisher of these valuable information have a legal right and if they share information freely, it will copy without any permission or cost. Secondly, it is possible that all of these information may not be correct and you can not trust to everything that you read. Probably data share by unknown person that have not any knowledge about that topic and it can cause people face lot of serious problem in their educated and business.(103 word)
In conclusion, some people including me believe that benefits of sharing information freely more than not to do that, while others consider that information should not share free of cost. (284 word)
There are many argument to share information freely by scientist about their research in society or not.although some people believe that share information is benificial,others think it is detrimental.this essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.39
Some people has a strong advocate of this approach that share information should be freely. First of all,the scientist usually do not have enough time to explaine their research. While share information freely could be save their time. So it is far more beneficial to scientist accompany thier collegue.Secondly share information become useful for other scientist who research at the same time and field. A fundamental reason for this is that scientist could be help themself by their viewpoint and they will be sure their activity is in the accurate way.94
Some people beleive that share information freely is determental to their socirty and country. First of all, The malcontents could be abuse of significiant information such as economic research and hurt to economics senter. Some investors worry about share and abuse economic information will be determental effect on their business.51
Secondly, Some group of society maybe attempt to avoid scientific research. So they have some argument this research about academic world could be harmful for their offsprings education and their welfare.for instance They always concerne about nuclear research and organize demonstration to avoid this research because of detrimental in future.51
Inconclusion, some people believe that share information should be freely and it is beneficial for society. While others think it is detrimental.22
Circulating information has perceived as a prominent element of developing knowledge and business. Although some people are strong advocates of sharing data, others believe this issue has a couple of limitations. This essay will examine both of these viewpoints.
Many people claim that disseminating information is decidedly valuable. Firstly, acquiring a set of data which has been prepared previously, really help us save time in many fields of studies especially ones that need essential statistics. Furthermore, some technical knowledge directly relies on accumulated statistical data. A particular instance of requiring details is building a dam relating to local hydrology information in preceding years. Secondly, distributing facts can develop other fields of science like medical issues. In these case, facts help physicians to inspect and analyze a problem in individual or social aspects for instance in obesity or nutrition matters. Thus there would be stumbling block in searching in many epidemic cases if these records were not to aid specialists.
Conversely, some argue that declaring sort of information has some difficulties. Firstly, there is some strictly confidential information such as documents and data in the government archives in every country has not to be revealed. Also, these sort of information, are most vital and it might be a threat to national security. Secondly, sometimes it could be quite difficult to prove that the available information is authentic to utilize because they might be old and expired records. In this case, the repercussion of research or worthwhile undertaking would seem extremely likely that the results are inaccurate.
In conclusion, however, some people assume that exchanging information is a beneficial approach, others consider the matter as a different policy which has to be restricted.
سلام استاد
میشه لطف کنین یه نمونه از تسک ۱ این هفته برامون بزارین، چون نوشتنش برام خیلی سخت بود. البته من نوشتم و ارسال کردم ولی اگه بشه یه نمونه خوب داشته باشیم خیلی عالیه. و البته این گراف که تو سایت آپلود کردین، اونی نیست که تو کلاس نوشتیم
و اینکه میشه بجای واژه های every day و once a week از واژهای an a dayly besis و an a weekly basis استفاده کرد یا تو تسک یک نباید هیچ واژهای معادل بشه؟
ممنون
درود
بله حتما
البته تسک ۱ نگذاشته بودم اونی که بود تسک ۲ بود!
بله معادل ها درست هستند.
The bar chart shows percentage of Australian men and women who they did regular physical activity in the different age in 2010.
Men’s percentage was 52.8 and women’s percentage was 47.7 in age 15 to 24, it is clear that men did regular activity more than women. Although, after this ages men could not even do like women.
In 25 to 54 ages, females’ percentage increased gradually to reach 53.3, just females had fallen insignificant in 55 to 64 about 0.3 percent. whereas male’s percentage fluctuated , but also percentage of men was under 46.
Percentage of men and women was almost equal about 47 percent from age 65 or more. but this bounded time women’ activity decreased considerably.
Overall, men did regular activity more than women in teenagers ,while women had regular activity more than men since 25 or more.
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رایتینگ شما متاسفانه زیر ۱۵۰ واژه هست. میزان پیشنهادی ما ۱۷۵ واژه هست. بعد از به روز رسانی ارسال بفرمایید
Sharing information is crucial issue in the academic, research and business environment . Although some people argue that there are several disadvantages for sharing information, others including me believe that sharing information has some benefits. This essay will discuss both these viewpoints.
some argue that sharing information can has an adverse effect on people’s life. First of all, this decision would be detrimental to source of income because some people gain income from their information. They provid book or essay from their information and sell to people that is a source of income for them. As a result of access to information, they be deprived of this income. Secondly, some information have abused by some people. A fundamental reason for this that there are some scholars or some companies that take people’s information and then record on their own name, unfortunately.
on the other hand, some people are a strong advocate of this approach and believe sharing information freely have a significant effect on human life. First of all, they can refine the information. When people have unlimited access to information, they can use high quality data from others in the world. Also they can incorporate many data and using in their research. As a result, information quality can be boosted. Secondly, sharing information freely is more likely to save time. people can use others data without do research again and have more time to do other somethings.
In conclusion, as a result of access to the information freely, people’s lives have been facilitated, while there are several disadvantages to this decision.
(۲۶۲)
The graph illustrates the proportion of people who ate in fast food restaurants in 2003, 2006 and 2013.
Between 2003 and 2006, the proportion of people who ate in fast food restaurants every day decresed from 4% to 3%. During the same period , the perecentage of people who have never eaten in fast food restaurants has also declined to 1%. In (2013) the proportion of people ate in fast food restaurants every day was 3%, whereas that of people who never ate in fast food restaurants was 4%.
In (2003) the percentage of people ate in fast food restaurant once a week stood at 31%. Also, by contrast, between 2006 and 2013 the proportion of people ate in fast food restaurants once a week and once or twice a month were higher at nearly 33%.
Overall, the highest proportion of people have eaten in fast food restaurants once or twicea month and once a week. Also, over the whole period of time, the lowest percentage of people ate in fast food restaurant every day.
(۱۷۵)
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آیا در نقطه اتصال دو جمله مثلا با and احتیاج به and , نیست؟
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متشکرم
درود
فقط نمونه جمله مورد نظر رو بفرمایید.
آموزش و بحث تئوری انجام نمیدیم.
Mary is happy and the dog ate his food
Her mum baked a cake but it wasn’t tasty
جمله اول که چندین اشکال دارد ولی از نظر تئوری نیازمند کاما هست
جمله دو هم کاما نیاز دارد.
اطلاعات بیشتر:
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ممنون
درود استاد گرامی
این کلمات لیسینگ رو من دانلود کردم ولی فقط یک صفحه هست.
اشکال از دانلود من هست؟یا همین یک صفحه هست؟
مرسی
درود
گویا اشتباهی در فایل آپلود شده وجود داشته. الان امتحان کنید.
متشکرم.درست شد
Agree to share free
Without need to explain #
Become useful for other#
experts and use their comments
disagree to share free
Abuse by others #
maybe attempts to prevent By others#
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این مورد رو متوجه نشدم
without need to explain
سلام استاد
تکلیف این هفته oxford for skill intermediate ایا درست هست؟
ممنون
درود
در بخش تکالیف نگاه کنید نوشته شده.
The repercussions of sharing information could have crucial impacts on living. Although some people debate sharing information could be seriously detrimental to human life, others including me are strong advocate of this approach. Both of these viewpoints will be discussed in the following essay.
On one hand allowing others use our informations or methods, could have negative influences. First of all, a fundamental reason for this is that others might abuse these data. They may use them in harmful ways in spite of our positive purposes. We cannot be sure of others intentions and how they will use them. Secondly, this could decline the income for the real owner. Nowadays having specific informations is essential to develop any skills hence specialized data could be so wealthy and can accumulate its possessor fund. Consequently sharing it freely eliminates that income.
On the other side, participating informations freely could have some benefits as well. First of all, it could improve the raw data gradually . Obviously putting various minds on a specific data is far more beneficial than thinking individually and many indiscernible problems might be solved. Secondly, it will distribute informations and help human being progression and this is really profitable. Sharing informations creates a data cycle whose benefits finally return to the source as well. For instance if a group of scientists give their experiences to another group, then they can expect to use the other group’s proficiency.
In conclusion, partaking informations is double-faced and can be beneficial or detrimental to human life.However, I believe its advantages overweight disadvantages.(259 words)
نتیجه گیری باید مروری بر دو ایده اصلی باشد. هیچ حرف تازه ای نباید در نتیجه گیری وارد شود.
Agree to share free
Without need to explain #
Become useful for other experts and use their comments #
disagree to share free
Abuse by others # maybe attempts to prevent continue#
disagree to share free
#Abuse by others #
#maybe attempts to prevent continue#
درود
ایده پردازی را فقط در یک کامنت بفرستید. این کامنت ها پاک میشن
۱
Agree
Saving the time#
get familiar with other sort of collecting information#
Diagree
Lack of confidence in correction of information#
relying on other resourse without creating own databank#
۲
Agree
probability to cross check information with other sources#
useful for other field study#
Disagree
disclosing the confidential information#
breaking copy right law#
درود
این سوال Agree Disagree نیست
ضمنا این موارد رو متوجه نشدم:
get familiar with other sort of collecting information#
relying on other resource without creating own data bank#
Share free
#time management
#save money
Do not share free
#disclosing secret information
#decreasing source of income
Share free
#increasing quality of topics
#increasing competition between individuals or companies
Do not share free
#poor quality information
#breaking the copyright law
درود
این موارد قابل درک نیست:
#time management
#increasing quality of topics
A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking similarities and differences between some consumption of energy in US during the period from 1980 to 2030.
At the beginning year, Energy from nuclear and solar/wind and hydropower was equal less than 5q*.Hydropower and solar/wind have fluctuation just over 2010,hydropower will remain stable to 2030 and nuclear and solar/wind must be level-off in 2025 and expected gradually rising in 2030.
In1980, Natural gas started over 15q has variation until 2015, and could be leveled off about 25q between 2015 until 2030. Coal started well-over 15 and rose to well down 25 in 1995, between 1995 until 2005 was stable, after 2005 until 2030 expect to an upward.
The petrol and oil, for a 5 years period beginning in 1980 decreased from 35q to 30q and had a peak about 35q in 1990. After 1995 until 2013 increased dramatically and it could be surged steadily approximately 50q in 2030.
Overall, consumption of energy in US could not change to the sustainable energy and will depend on petrol and oil in the near future.
One of the principal component in the first stage of life is making decision. Although some people opine that giving children permission for daily routine has a couple of downsides, others believe this sensitive issue is highly important. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints.
Some folks feel that children should not take decision on their own. Firstly, some parents are anxious about their offspring chores and decisions, almost without exception, these kind of options are really important for them. These parents also think children are still pretty green to recognize the correction of choices and for a wise decision should be controlled by older members of family. Secondly, by making decision about whole things, kids leads to sort of selfish and stubborn person. They think if they would be free in make choices, they might not be a considerate person in favor of other people in the future.
On the contrary some parents argue that children should make decision on their own. Firstly, the first stage of life is the best time for practice of making decision so children can choose their will freely. The choices in this time usually are not pretty important and children can attempt the primary selections and if they find anything wrong in this way, they can change their choices. This is so vital for their major decision in future. Secondly, through the new decision they can understand the consequence of selections. They can learn every choice brings some responsibility for people, and on account of this issue they try to take wiser and right decision.
In conclusion, however some parents believe children had better not make decision on their own, others argue that this issue not only doesn’t have any drawbaks, but also has many merits.
The graph shows some data about the USA energy consumption by fuel since 1980 until 2030.
The consumption of petrol and oil started from 35Q unit in 1980 and then in next 15 years it had a fluctuation so in 1995 this consumption reached less than 35Q. Petrol and oil consumption surged gradually from 35Q in 1995 to about 40Q in 2008 and it will be increasing near 50Q in 2030.
The utilization of coal and natural gas were different from each other. The coal started from 15Q in 1980 and it rose slightly and showed over 20Q unit until 2008 but the consumption of natural gas reached 20Q in 1980 and it had a variation until 2008. Prediction shows coal utilize will be reach about 30Q and natural gas will be stable and reach a little over 20Q in 2030.
The consumption of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower were same at 4Q in 1980. Both of nuclear and solar/wind energy were increased slightly and reached 7.5Q and 5Q in 2008. They will be remain stable until 2025 and will increase gradually to 8Q and 6Q in 2030. Hydropower had some variation until 2008 and they will expect the consumption of hydropower will be remain stable until 2030.
Overall, the consumption of all energies by the USA is growing over years but petrol and oil are the main energy in compare with other fuels. (233 word)
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تسک ۱ نباید بالای ۲۰۰ واژه و تسک ۲ نباید بالای ۳۰۰ واژه باشند. امکان نوشتن چنین رایتینگ هایی در آزمون واقعی وجود ندارد و با توجه به معیارهای توضیح داده شده تعیین نمره، احتمال کاهش نمره نیز وجود دارد.
بعد از به روز رسانی ارسال بفرمایید.
سلام استاد
به روزرسانی شد.
The graph shows the USA energy consumption by fuel from 1980 2008 with projections until 2030.
The consumption of petrol and oil started from 35QU in 1980 and then in next 15 years it had a fluctuation. This consumption surged gradually from 35QU in 1995 to about 40QU in 2008 and it will be increasing near 50QU in 2030.
The utilization of coal and natural gas increased gradually over 20QU from 1980 to 2015. The consumption of coal will be grow until 2030 and reach to 30QU but natural gas will be remain stable near 25QU.
The consumption of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower were same at 4QU in 1980. Both of nuclear and solar/wind energy were increased slightly in 2008. They will be remain stable until 2025 and will increase gradually to 8QU and 6QU in 2030. Hydropower had some variation until 2008 and the consumption of hydropower will be remain stable until 2030.
Overall, the consumption of all energies by the USA is growing over years but petrol and oil are the main energy in compare with other fuels.(180 word)
The line graph represents the consumption of energy in the USA according to a 2008 report between 1980 and 2008 and a projection of that until 2030.
The petrol and oil usage which are the most popular energy sources at the period, was just about 35 Quadrillion units in 1980. After a slight fluctuation over first 15 years, it rose steadily from just below 35 Q units in 1995 to almost 40 in 2008 and it will expectantly reach 48 in 2030.
The utilization of coal and natural gas increased generally at the same time. It reached 17 quadrillion units in 1985 from respectively 20 and 16 in 1980. Growing similarly within 23 years, despite a slight oscillation, it has got to approximately 22 in 2008 for both gas and coal. Coal is expected to continue, reaching 31 in 2030. While, gas will arrive to 25 Q units in 2012 and then will remain stable until 2030.
The consumption of nuclear, solar/wind and Hydropower energy was equal at 4 in 1980. Nuclear and solar/wind has gone up respectively to 7.5 and 5 in 2008. these will remain constant until 2025 and will rise slightly to 8 and 6 in 2030. Experiencing some variations during 1980 to 2008, hydropower energy usage will fall back to 4 in 2012 again. Then it is projected that this level of usage will be unchanged by 2030.
Overall, the US energy consumption is increasing progressively, whereas, fossil fuels are the main energy sources among other kinds of fuel. (247words)
درود
تسک ۱ با توجه به تدریس و توضیحات ارایه شده در کلاس نباید از ۲۰۰ واژه بالاتر باشد. بعد از به روز رسانی ارسال فرمایید.
People have different views about how children should be made decision. Although, there are some people think children who make decision by own are likely to be person to think thire wishes in future, other argue that making decision for children is decisive factor. Thise essay will discuse both viewpoint.
Some people argu that children should not make decision. First of all,children are not pron to any experience because they are small and do not know about the right decisions. For example they like expensive dolls and their parents can not purchase it for them. As a result, people find it difficult to make decision without experience. Secondly, children are far more incorrect decisions than parents. Children can be easily influenced by attractive matters. For example children ador eating junk food for its attractiveness. As a result this decision can be seriously detrimental to their health.
On the other hand, there are those who belive that making decision should be chosen by children. Firstly, making decision by own is highly beneficial to self-confident. Children who can choose anything and do not force to do something are more likely to be happy and have high satisfaction. Also they think that they are very important and lovely. As a result of this situation, they are high self-confidence. Secondly, children who can choose most of things are responsible because they learn responsibility relate to their matters. Also they learn how to choose everything and are responsive to their decision. Thus making decision is important and effective on their life.
In conclusion, children who make decision by own in anything are likely to be someone just think to themselves, while making decision by own is a important part of life.
(۲۸۶)
Nowadays, parents are really worry about their offspring life and what they should do exactly about children decisions. Although, some people consider that it is necessary issue that allow to children to make daily decisions by themselves, others believe that parents should decide for their children by own. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints.
Some people argue that offspring should make their routine decisions by themselves. First of all, it can be helpful for their self-confidence because they have learned how to choose between things independently. Therefore, they will be confident in their future life and make their mainly decisions easily by not rely on anyone. Secondly, if children make some routine decisions by their own without any parents interference so they are responsible about that decision. By this way they learn about responsibility from childhood and they will be sorely responsible about their actions and choices in future even some of them will be wrong. (102 word)
Other people think that if parents make their children decisions it has better effect in their offspring life. Firstly, they are so young without enough experiment so it is more probably to make wrong decisions and get into trouble. It is reasonable that parents do not allow children to choses because they fear about their wrong decision that maybe have a negative result on their moral. Secondly, letting children to make choices by themselves it may cause them to behave so selfish. They might chooses expensive and unused things that other children were envious of her or his instrument or food. So these children become selfish and want all the bests for themselves.(113 word)
In conclusion some people including me think that it is better to let children make daily decisions by themselves, while others discus that children should not have permission of making decisions.(301 word)
The graph shows energy consumption in the USA from 1980 to 2018 and projected consumption to 2030.
In 1980, the figure for consumption of Hydropower, Solar/Wind and Nuclear was equal at 4 QU. After that consumption of Hydropower, Solar/Wind and Nuclear rose erratically between 1985 and 2010. Then consumption of these fuels leveled out in 2015. In 2030, consumption of Hydropower is expected to remain stable at 4 QU and consumption of solar/wind and Nuclear is likely to increase slightly.
From 1980 to 2015, consumption of coal and Natural Gas saw gradual increased to over 20 QU. In the subsequent, consumption of coal exceeded consumption of Natural Gas. After that consumption of Natural gas is likely to remain steadily in 2030. However, consumption of coal is expected to rise significantly in 2030.
Over this whole period, consumption of Petrol and Oil have risen dramatically from 35QU to just over 40 QU. This is expected to countinue over 45 QU.
Overall, energy consumption climbed erratically from 1980 to 2018. Also in 2030, consumption of some fuels is likely to increase and , other fuels is predicted to remained steadily.
The energy consumption in the U.S.A during the years of 1980 to 2008 with a prediction of next years until 2030 is illustrated in the following graph.(27 words)
Petroleum and oil consumption in 1980 was 35 qu and after fluctuations during next 15 years, rose smoothly from 1995 to 2008 and it is predicted it keeps its smooth rise afterward and goes over 45 qu in year 2030.(40 words)
Coal and natural gad consumptions were almost similar during these years and they respectively started from a little over 15 and 20 qu and had fluctuations until 2008 and according to the future projection these fluctuations go on until 2020. Then Coal will rise steadily while Natural Gas remains stable.(50 words)
Nuclear, Solar/wind and Hydropower were consumed less than other fuels. Consumption of all these three kinds started from a little less than 5 qu and had a small fluctuation during the whole selected period of history region and keeps it until 2030.(42 words)
Overall, according to the past consumption of energy and the future prediction it can be recognized that petroleum and oil are the most staple fuel among the shown ones.(29 words)
۱
shouldn’t make decisions
make wiser decisions#
less family argument#
should make decisions
more confident#
to find out the result of decisions#
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۲
shouldn’t make decisions
avoid being selfish and stubborn#
learn them to take advise#
should make decision
best practice for major decisions#
learning responsibility for any decision#
Good
Offsprings’ decisions on insignificant routines influence their future life. Although some people argue that it could be detrimental to their future, others including me state that this has beneficial impacts.
Let the children choose independently on their routines such as clothing, hobbies, etc might be helpful. First of all, this could build their self assurance and encourage them to make bigger decisions in the future. The offsprings by deciding individually learn how to conquer their hesitation and gain experiences as well. If they have been admired and appreciated by the parents on their choices, they would gain confidence as a result. Secondly, parents could decline challenges and disputing with children if they let them decide themselves and choose on their own. When they choose what they want they cannot argue or quarrel on that. Also parents don’t need to force them doing this or that and this challenge could be omitted.
On the other hand, let the offsprings decide freely and parents do not involve might have negative influences. First of all, this could brings more mistakes and increases faults. Since children do not have enough experience it is quite possible to make wrong choice and so it can be sometimes harmful too. For instance in food they may always prefer to eat junk foods and this could threaten their health.
Secondly, it would raise family expenses. Children usually do not comprehend the value of money and how hard it will be gained in a family, therefore they spend it easily on their entertainment, foods and so on so forth.
In conclusion, letting children decide themselves on some daily matters could be beneficial or detrimental to their future life.(279 words)
ایده پردازی یک
Childrean make decision
#prepare for making future decision
#self-confident children
Children should not make decision
#dependent children
#irresponsible children
ایده پردازی دو
Children make decesion
#following the goal
#get better choice in future
Children should not make decesion
#more fail in future
Can not make a good decision
ایده پردازی سوم
Children make decision
Decreasing supportive person#
Low generosity#
Children should not make decesion
High tolerant#
High empathy#
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هر ایده باید ساپورت شود. بعضی مواردی که اشاره کرده نکات منفی هست و نمیتوانند ساپورت مورد اشاره شده باشند.
Life is just a series of decisions that we make and depend on our choice. Although some people think that offspring’s should make decision about all their choice, others believe children should not make decision on the occasions. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (46)
In one hand, some people have an opinion that youths should make decisions. First of all, children’s choices thrive their assurance and better prepare them to face with all life choices certainly. These children building confidence and attempt to develop self-confidence skills for their life and business so it is necessary to acquire this new skill to their social development. Secondly, offspring’s take responsibility for their decisions. They are wide-awake and aware of wrong decisiveness that could be seriously detrimental to the lifestyle and perilous situation for loves one so they conduct decisions carefully and enlightened after it. They must face the consequence of their choice. (106)
In other hand, a part of people believes that children should not make decision. First of all, the offspring’s without any experience make poor and worse decisions. They have serious repercussion on their whole life so their parents should make all decisions for them to avoid them of wrong way and keep them in the right way. Secondly, all the time, these children depend on parents to make the right decisions so they are also communicating with them to do best things, this so far benefits than make decision alone. Their offspring in a better direction so their children gradually develop personal skills. (103)
In conclusion, a part of people believes the youths must make decision in all matters of their life, while others thinking they should not make decision. (26)
Children make decisions:
#Confidence
#responsibility
Children should not make decisions:
#poor and wrong decisions
#depend on parents with more experience
Good
The number of students registered in two different schools during the years 2011 to 2014 is exposed in the following line graph. This number changed every year in both schools.
In Litchifield school, the number of students registered rose steadily over these four years. It started from just under 1000 in 2011 and after a smooth increase until 2013 it reached 1200 students. Then it rose sharply from 2013 and touched the point of about 1500 students at the end of this period.
On contrary , in Riverside school the enrollment fell during this period.it was nearly 800 in 2011 and in spite of a negligible rise in 2012, the enrollment number fell back to 800 in 2013 and declined calmly from 2013 to 2014 and reached to approximately 700 students.
Overall, the number of students registered in Litchfield school rose from 2011 to 2014 while the enrollment number in Riverside school fell during the same period.(157 words)
(ایده پردازی۱)
Agree
# self assurance
# less challenges
DisAgree
# make more mistakes
# increase family costs
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(ایده پردازی۲)
Agree
# prepare for bigger decisions
# make them more active
Disagree
# increase arrogance
Increase disobedience
Good
Different kinds of food habitation is became one of the most important issues that human face with it today. Although, there are those who maintain that fast foods are harmful, others argue that fast foods have many advantages in people life. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.
Some people think that fast food has some negative effect on human life. First of all, fast foods mostly have not fresh and healthy ingredients so they are harmful and dangerous for people health. They usually contain ham, salt and oil and these foods do not have any fresh vegetables so all of these unhealthy ingredients causes dieses such as blood pressure and heart attack. Secondly, coming fast foods in human homes cause loose of family tradition of eating together. They can make or buy fast foods really quickly and eat them quicker so they can not find any time to spend with family while eating foods.(107 word)
Other people believe that fast foods are changed our life to easier position and have many positive effect on our life. At first, this kinds of foods are prepare really easy and quick so you can save most of your time instead waste it for cooking traditional foods with difficult recipes because some foods may be take one or two hours for preparation. Second, price of fast foods is absolutely cheap and you do not pay much money for buy it. It is good choice for huge families with many children and they can enjoy delicious and tasty food and fell full with paying only a little money. (108 word)
In conclusion, some people including me consider that fast foods are not healthy and useful foods and it is better not use them, while others think that fast foods have .some advantage in human life
Fast food has been widely accepted as a part of modern life. Although there are many people who strongly oppose fast food, others think it might have some benefits. This essay will discuss both of this views.
Fast food is generally blamed by many people because of its serious problems. Firstly, this kind of food will be the major reason of obesity as a result of ingredients .they often are made by processed meat and fats. Also, it usually serves with soda providing a huge amount of calories which are much more than a human requires. Secondly, this kind of food might change the eating habit of people especially the young and children. The big chain fast food restaurant trying to absorb more customer in the future by many advertisements on television or other ways to keep them in junk food diet.
On the contrary, other people believe this type of food has some advantages. Firstly, most of the couples both work simultaneously thus they are really busy around and this food helps them to prepare and serve time easily. In fact, it does not take a long time to cook as much as home-cooked meal .furthermore people can obtain it in different ways like a takeaway or delivery food shop to save more time. Secondly, this business can provide some job opportunities .these industrial always need cook, clerk and so forth. Also, there are many others relatives business which they can be developed.
In conclusion, however many people find it difficult to agree with fast food, others may think of definite advantages.
The graph illustrates the number of student registered at Riverside school and Litchfield school from 2011 to 2014. The number of students changed between two school every year.
Enrolment at Riverside school first increased and then decreased at four year shown on the graph. Enrolment at this school rose gradually between 2011 and 2012, from 800 to over 800. Afterward, the number of student in this school saw a slight decrease from 2012 to 2014, to under 800.
Over the whole this period, on the other hand, there was a rise in the number of student for Enrollment in Litchfield school. At this school, there was a constant increase in the number of students enrollmen from 950 to 1200, at 3 years. Then, the number of students enrollment continued to climb more rapidly. In 2014, there was a significant rise in the number of student a close to 1500.
Overall, while enrollment changed each year at both school. It went up at Litchfield school and fell at Riverside school.
(۱۶۹)
Nowadays, fast food has become so popular among people in most countries. Although some people think fast food has some benefits for people, other argue that fast food can provide more disadvantages to living . This essay will discuss both viewpoints.
Some argue that fast food is becoming more and more popular because using fast food has so many advantages. First of all, eating fast food bring about save time. Fast food prepare faster than others food. Also there are many types of fast food with simple recipe which people can prepare it around 20 minutes. Moreover, there are many fast food shops where people are be able to access faster to meal. As a result, people can spend less time in the kitchen for making food. Secondly, people can save more money because fast food prices is suitable in most countries. Also, it is prepared with simple ingredient and does not has need meat, rice and expensive ingredient.
On the other hand, there are those who believe that fast food has several disadvantages. Firstly, they maintain that fast food is unhealthy. Most of the fast food ingredients are salt, fat and carbohydrates which are harmful for body health. From a health perspective, high use of these ingredients lead to health problems such as: heart problem, obesity and blood pressure problem. Secondly, fast food bring about overweight. Since today’s life is immobile and also fast food is full of fats and high calorie, fats and calories remain in body. Thus, people are become obese by eating fast food.
In conclusion, growing popularity of eating fast food has advantages, while there are several drawback for it.
(۲۷۵)
This days fast food become the most popular ways to replace the domestic foods. Although some people think this could be advantage, others believe has a harmful. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint. (35 word)
Some people argue growing excitment about fast food are beneficial. First of all , fast food has a many benefit for familys or juvniles.this days approximately most parents are so busy and they do not have enough time for home cooking, rather than past. As a result, fast food can be save their time and consider of issues with each other. Secondly many people can not affort to their cost.you can buy good fresh food in the market but we know home cooking is costly.by contrast, people can be save their money with eat fast food. While we can eat fast food for sometims, not at all.(109 word)
on the other hands, some people believe that fast food have negative effects on humans. first of all Fast food have full of sugar or fat and have harmful for health. Goodness that you get from food,which helps your body to stay healthy. There is not much nourishment in fast food. secondly learn about fast food effects on your different body system. The consumption of fast food has increased over the past at an alarming rate. This increased calorie intake is a leading cause of obesity in the whide world because of large portion size and increased energy density of fast foods.(103 word)
*In conclution ,some people think fast food tastes good and eating it in a while is fine, while others believe that everyone has to not eat fast food regulary because this can cause illness.(34 word)
سلام استاد
آیا ترکیب جمله زیر درسته From a health perspective, high use of them lead to…
(منظور از them در اینجا فست فود است)
و اینکه اگر بعد نوشتن، متوجه شیم تعداد کلماتمون تو هر تسک کمتر از عدد خاسته شده است، چیکار کنیم؟
مثلا من تو نوشتن تسک ۱ این هفته که بررسی ثبت نام دو مدرسه بود، بعد از نوشتن فهیدم ۱۳۵ کلمه شده، الان که تمرین بود خب تلاش کردم اضافه کنم، اگر توی آزمون اینطور شه، چیکار کنیم بهتره؟
۳-برای مقایسه دو روند (دو نمودار) تسک ۱ میشه با این عبارت شروع کرد:
…Comparing two trend together
بعد دو روند رو مقایسه کرد؟
درود
خیر این جمله به نظر میرسه که از فارسی ترجمه شده. با گوگل کردن میشه این موضوع رو فهمید.
باید به چشمتون عادت بدید حدود ۱۷۰ واژه رو بشناسه که این اتفاق نیفته. با این حال اگر ان اتفاق افتاد کوشش کنید یک مقدار بیشتر توضیح بدید ولی در نهایت به ضرر شماست.
۳٫ خیر و کلا از واژه trend استفاده نفرمایید
The graph shows how many students were enrollment in each two different schools that called Riverside school and Litchfield school from 2011 to 2014.
Registration at Riverside school started from 800 students at 2011 and the number of students fell dramatically over years. There was a little increased between 2011 and 2012 and the number of students reach a little over 800. Between 2013 and 2014 enrollment was decreased and it was showed the number near 700 student.
Number of students that enrolled at Litchfield school about near 1000 person at 2011. This number was surged slightly over three years. There were 1200 students subscripted in Litchfield school between 2012 and 2013. At the end of 2014 total number of students whom joined to this school was about 1500 and it shows that this school had a good progress.
Overall, students enrollment were different in each schools and Litchfield school was more successful compared with Riverside school. (157 word)
The line graph compares the number of students attended Riverside school and Litchfield school between 2011 and 2014.
As shown in the illustration, approximately 800 students were registered at Riverside school in 2011. The number rose steadily to just over 850 in the next year (2012) and then reduced to 800 again in 2013. The decrease were continued a little faster in 2014 and the number reached around 700.
On the contrary, enrollment at Litchfield school generally rose during the period. There was a moderate growth from a little less than 1000 students to 1200 over 2011 to 2013. At the last year of the period (2014) the number increased more quickly and reached a peak of just around 1500 students.
Overall, although the number of students enrolled in Litchfield school surged during the period, it declined on the whole at the Riverside school in spite of a small rise at the second year of the period.
(۱۵۷ words)
درود استاد گرامی
یک نامه ز من تصحیح نشده.لطف می فرمایید
ممنون
Fast foods are becoming comprehensive nowadays. Although lots of people cite this could have inappropriate influences , some believe it may have beneficial impacts as well. Both of the viewpoints will be discussed in the following article.(37 words)
Many people argue growing popularity of fast foods brings disadvantages. First of all, it harms human health. Almost all physicians note that and it has been proved that the ingredients of snacks have harmful effects on the body. High percentage of cholesterol and poor quality of nutrients in fast foods could affect many parts of human body specially the heart. It is worse that some kind of these foods must be fried first . Secondly fast foods are addictive particularly to children, for they can be easily cooked and their flavor is fantastic. So this can change the habits of eating and children prefer such junkies rather than advantageous and healthy foods.(112 words)
On the other hand some people claim developing fast food popularity has advantages . First of all, saves more times for other activities instead of cooking. Preparing such foods takes significantly less times in comparison with traditional foods. For instance making a pizza totally takes around half an hour while cooking rice and a stew with meat needs at least two hours. Secondly, it can create great opportunities for gathering and make a chance to have special moments during a meal. It is absolutely easier to serve and likewise easier to eat. There are a large number of cozy restaurants serving this kind of food and people are able to go and spend times together.(115 words)
In conclusion, improving the popularity of fast foods in all countries can have both positive and negative impacts on humans life. (21 words)
ببخشید استاد پاراگراف اول اصلی منظورم از junkies در واقع junk foods بود اشتباه نوشتم.
متاسفانه بعد از ارسال امکان تصحیح وجود ندارد. درست مثل آزمون.
Fast foods :
Advantages
Save time #
Save money #
Disadvantages
Unhealthy #
Risk of obesity #
Good
Advantage
#save time
#save mony
Disadvantage
#unhealthy
# poor quality
Advantage
#creating a Job Opportunity
#easy access
disadvantage
#spend less time with family
#lead to overweight
Good work
advantage:01
# save money
#save time
disadvantage: 01
#low quality
#minimize time to socialize
advantage:02
#good testes
#plethora of choice
disadvantage:02
#unhealthy
#easy to spend too much money
Good work
Adv
۱
save time#
new job opportunity#
Dis
unhealthy food#
risk of obesity#
۲
Adv
easy package and serving#
cheaper food#
Dis
addict to new food habit#
eating out(stay away from the family)#
Good work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to your company decision about assigning a budget for two optional offers. I appreciate your attention to our people in this city and I would like to describe our preference.
As I heard one of choice is support a football team. We all know there are a large number of children as compare with adult and they want to have more useful activity in their leisure time. Most of them are truly talented boys and girls’ footballers so as to develop young football team really helps them to be a professional footballer in future.
Besides, as I informed the other choice is about paying for our concert hall. Unluckily this place has been abandoned for a long time and spending money on this case definitely can bring many happy in our local region. Also, your colleagues can use this place.
To be honest we always would rather children’s happiness thus I think it would be really great if you could help us have a pro football team.
Thank you very much for your attention.
Mohammad,
۹۷۱ odd shahrivar
task 2
Trip to the difficult places is one of the thrilling experience among the people around the world. Although some people believe that visiting difficult places can makes good memories for them, others think that tourists may encounter to serious issues during trip. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (50 words)
Nowadays travelling to the hard places has usually myriad benefits for tourists. First of all, tourists can have an exciting experience being in the difficult places because they get to know about pristine environments and natures properly and visit an animals and plants which they ever see them regularly. Secondly, visiting a difficult places even shortly enhances tourist’s knowledge to how they have to handle problems in difficult conditions, because some of unforeseeable events might occur for tourist within visiting so that they get perfectly capable of finding solution in sensitive situations accurately as this matter could be essential for tourists before choosing a destination. (105 words)
On the other hands, in spite of these useful benefits, there is some considerable disadvantages for tourists. First of all, if the people decide to visit a difficult places, access to the communication paths might be limited because there is rarely network or any type of connection ways are allocated in difficult places. Secondly, most of species of hazardous animals live in the pristine places and these places are not generally protected by someone so that could be dangerous for tourist seriously which having vital tools is remarkably important for protection because tourists might face the wild animal’s eventual attack and harm severely. (103 words)
In conclusion, some people including me that visiting difficult places could be a wonderful experience in your life, while others think that disadvantages of difficult places are much more than benefits. (31 words)
One of the unforgettable trips in our life would be a journey to faraway Lands. Although some argue this kind of travel has many advantages, others claim that it might have some drawbacks. This essay will examine both of these viewpoints.
Some adventures people agree with these travels. Firstly, These trips undoubtedly are not like common trips thus by traveling to these places people can examine their ability in term of uncommon situations like very hot or cold weather. tourists usually see many lands before they get there as well. Secondly, most people often visit places where a majority of people go there for feeling the similar experience. On the contrary, it seems that travel to untouched places is quite different. Fans face wonderful, unique experience and exclusive natural scenery and might see some rare species of animals in this places
Unlikely, others think these trips have some drawbacks. Firstly, these trips are not common journey and passengers to reach there must spend a sustainable amount of money. Accommodation fees in these places will probably be too high so traveling to these land is not like the other places as well. also, it needs many special tools, a huge amount of food and facilities transportation to get there. Secondly, there is hardly any rescue team in these tours and there are many unforeseen dangers which they can make a problem for passengers .in this case saving and bring people maybe take long hours or even many days.
In conclusion, although travel to far away destination or unknown places might have some problem, these lucky passengers would really have lots of remarkable and unforgettable memories of this kind of trips.
استاد گرامی
درود فراوان
در مورد tobe +B. V. کاملا درست می فرمایید .در عین حال اینجا Like به عنوان preposition آورده شده.
مرسی
۹۷۱ odd shahrivar
task 1
Dear Sir
I am writing to inform you that I have recently bought a laptop from your shop which the brand is well-known among others. While I have worked with laptop it was honestly quite satisfactory thus far, I wish to lodge a complaint about the laptop’s camera so that I had a weak video connection with people. In fact, when I tried to have a video conference with my company members, some of my colleagues informed me that my picture was obscure. At the first, I thought my internet system had issue but one of my friends who is a computer expert told me that this matter is not related to internet system. Unfortunately this issue has caused long delay in my work because principally I should do business through a laptop and its camera is one of the main channel to have communication with my clients. I was, therefore, wondering if you could replace a new laptop or repair the camera. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Yours sincerely
Mehran Hashemian
(۱۷۲ words)
Today’s tourist desire to be guest of the onerous area. Although some people prefer to spend our holidays in a tricky place, others do not choose these locations to lay out.this essay will discuss both of these view points.
One hand, some travelling desire to have a fun in difficult places, that to improve adorations and ensuring themselves, so after that they are impressive in sudden unexpected events. This situations increase the self-ability to face life problems and fears, So they do think well before act. Isolate and untouchable place is a feature of onerous locations that aid and abet the persons to find and know inner self. During lay land in a quiet place just involving the harsh face of nature, people achieve a free time for thinking deeply in individual life style and try to keep or change it better.
In Other hands, Some tripping believe stay in a exhausting location is awful because these have an extreme environment As an example desert have a scorching summer and frigid winter and dryness land where nobody can’t stay without full equipment near the oasis. Also they could not stay these area without technology because they are addict to the technology, as a State of an individual’s mental health Personality traits Environmental factors.
In conclusion, some traveler desire to travel to the different area, while the others, do not choose these are for their leisure’s time.
Todays, travelling and visiting places where have difficult conditions without any facilities is one of the newest experiences that tourism think about it. Although, some people believe that visiting difficult places have not any advantages, others argue that being in hard places and trying to enjoy and even survive in this situation have many benefits. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.
Some people think that visiting hard condition places like the hottest desert in the world as a visitor is useful. First of all, when you should stay on hard situation with minimum of facility and equipment it can help you to improve yourself. This situation is really useful to increased their tolerance level and learn how to live with a little facility and it is helpful for their reality life. Secondly, experience of visiting original palaces and nature is accessible by this kind of travelling. You can visit untouchable places and camping in wild nature that it can be really unique and memorable in each person life. (107 word)
Other people believe that travelling to difficult condition places is not good idea and has not any advantages. At first, travelling to original nature that there is no people with none town facilities may be make their life in danger. The travelers might face with a health problem or lack of water and food and these things are dangerous for their health. Secondly, this kind of travelling is really costly and expensive and they should pay much for transportation and all the facilities that help them to reach in those areas. They spend their money on rent camper and buy necessary equipment for travelling. (104 word)
In conclusion, some people consider that visiting strange places with hard conditions has some advantages, while others including me argue that this travelling has many of dangerous and it is not helpful at all.
The diagram illustrates the way electricity is produced by the geothermal energy. Overall, there are 5 stages in the diagram, starting with water pumping down, to the power making by some instruments like condenser, turbine, Generator and so on for producing electricity.
Firstly, cold water is pumped down with the help of the injection well to the approximately 45 kilometers in the depth. Subsequently the cold water across through the hot rocks at the geothermal region. Then, as consequence of the higher temperature of rocks, the hot water pumped up with the help of the production well to a container in the next stage. (62 words)
The last two steps are carried out above ground at the power plant. In in the fourth stage, the hot water in the condenser, the container that is mentioned before, converted to the stream and as result of the power of stream, the turbine circulates. Once the generator has been powered by a turbine, the electricity is then produced in the last step. (63 words)
Recently, people tend to go and visit some unexplored places with an unpleasant and tough situation. Although, some think these kinds of trips have some advantages for the visitors, others consider the disadvantages of them and think differently. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (45 words)
Visitors can obtain some advantage by traveling to undiscovered places with a difficult condition. First of all, they can learn a lot, such as learning how to go towards the basic and limited facilities that they carry. Also, they can learn more about how they adapt themselves to the nature they go. They know how these trips help them to overcome their fear and eventually they build their characters stronger than before. Secondly, for someone who cares about the environment, visiting strange places and experience something special has a wonderful effect on her or his feelings. Absolutely, exploring for visiting somewhere new is an interesting journey, therefore influence in a good way. (112 words)
On the flip side, there are some disadvantages for the travelers who undertake tough journeys. First of all, these sorts of trips are too costly both in terms of time and money. Not only they have to allocate so much time to participate in these tours but also they must spend plenty of money on these expeditions. Secondly, these treks could get dangerous for visitors how are foolish. The tourists have to be prepared for the probability of every disaster like an injury of an accident, losing the way, attack by the savage animals, and so on. (97 words)
In conclusion, some believe that difficult journey with though condition to strange places has advantages, while some others think this kind of trip has disadvantages for the visitors.
The figure below depicts the process of producing electricity using geothermal energy.
The process is divided to 5 main phases. At the beginning, the cold water is pumped down from a water reservoir (1) on the ground to the injection well (2) to depth of 4.5 km. then it goes through the hot rocks in geothermal zone (3). Absorbing heat from the rocks, the hot water reaches to the production well (4) in the next step and then gets pumped up to a condenser (4) placed upon the ground. At the next stage, the steam produced from hot water in the condenser is conducted to a turbine which provides the power for working of a generator (5). The generator works and converts the turbines mechanical energy to electric energy and then the generated electricity is sent to transmission network.
Overall, the cold water is send to the depth of ground, gets the geothermal energy and transmit it to produce steam that is used to operate a turbine. Finally, a generator gets power from the turbine and produce electricity.
(۱۷۸ words)
The number of many tourist are visiting different places where situation are hard, this days. Although, there are many advantage for traveling to difficult situations that have a positive effect on tourists. Also, there are several drawback for tourists who travel these places. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.
Visiting hard places has some benefit. First of all, there are different eye-catching attraction in these places. They are full of different land such as colourful soil, lands with beautiful valley, desert and high mountain. Also rare plants and fresh air are being seen in these different places because they are less exposed to visiting people and human intervention. As a result, they have eye-catching. Secondly they can broaden the horizons of people. The people who travel to a different hard place can meet with another living, various history and many new experience that helping to expand their horizon.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantage for visting hard places. First, the difficult places have limited access to facility, food and water. In these places, there are not residents or they have got few resident. Also, there are long distance from these places to city or village and if tourists losing the way or have to stay for more days in these places, tourists will have a lot of problem such as finishing food and water. Secondly, there are several danger in these environments. Since different wildlife are seen in these environments, the tourists exposed to several danger, for instance dangerous snakes and insect or poisonous plants. As a result of limited facility and dangerous environment, these places are not suitable for tourists.
In conclusion, visiting hard places have several advantages and have a significant effect on tourists. However, there are a few bad point for traveling difficult places.
(۲۹۹)
درود
بدلیل کم توجهی و عدم بررسی درست و تصحیح رایتینگ خوبی نبود. در آینده با دقت بیشتری بنویسید.
The diagram explains the way in which electricity is produced by geothermal energy. There are a five stages in the process.
First of all, in a big box connected underground, cold water is accumulated in order to be pumped down about 4.5 k.m. Then pumped cold water goes through the injection well stage. Afterwards, water is heated and is transferred by hot rocks in the geothermal zone stage.
In the subsequent stage, hot water is pumped up around 4.5 k.m to reached the condenser. Next, hot water is changed to gas and then steam put in a turbine. In addition, the steam is spun in a circle movements. At the same time, steam produced the electricity by generator. Finally, energy is transported to a geothermal power plant.
Overall, energy is produced and putted into geothermal energy in the several stage. Beginning with heating of cold water and ending up with producing of energy.
(۱۵۳)
سلام
یادگیری این همه لغت و اینکه بخواهیم معنیشونو توی دیکشنری پیدا کنیم خیلی وقت گیر هست ایرادی نداره با همون معنی فارسی در دفترچه و بدون مثال یادبگیریم؟
درود
خیر به هیچ وجه
سلام
١.امکانش هست فایلهای اسپکینگ در واتساپ بفرستیم؟
درود
اگر روی ویس ها فیدبک میخواین باید در تلگرام بفرستید. ضمنا من واتس اپ ندارم.
Traveling to faramay places with lacke good condition however there is hard but it increases nowdays. Although ,some people believe there are high risk and disadvantages , others think there are some benefical and advantages .thie essay will discuss both of these viewpoints.
Some argu that visiting such places is good influence on their life,first of all there is more expreince about that. When somebody goes a like e place who can gain a lot af skills in life that they can improve life and in during their life meet every things, they learn to confront them,secondly there is amazing places for visiting that they can see them.actully human has sences well about discovery’s places then it is very intersting. Every person sees them and to enjoy.anyway this trips are well-known fact for each tourists.
Some people believe traveling to these places have negative points. First of all , there is high cost for like traveling because there is not any things avaliabe such a shop,hospita,road so going there is difficult further for achivment there ,they have to pay vasrmt of amount money and it is not affrodable .secondly, there is high risk to reach positions and even it may endanger health then some people do not like to visit there because of its illness amd more expensive . They do not have value thet They can just see for several days in their life and their Health promblem in trips.
In conclusion, some people believe visiting tourist from like Sahara desert or the Antractic is disadvantage and negative, others including mr guss seeing those locality are benefical and advantage in our lifes.
۲۷۰words
درود
به نظر میرسه افت زیادی نسب به رایتینگ های قبلی حتی تسک ۱ دارید. اگر خودتون این رایتینگ رو نوشتید باید زمان بسیار بیشتری برای نوشتن و تصحیح و ویرایش بگذارید. هدف فقط ارسال یک رایتینگ نیست.
The diagram shows how electicity is prouduced by geothermal powerbplant in 5 steps from ground to underground then it si come back intially state for creat electricity energy.
At the first,cold water is pumped under ground in depth 4.5km ,after that water is passed ftom mesh that is can inject well and to reach geothermal zone where there are hot rocks and they can heat water ,then hot water is created by hot rocks.it is pumped up to ground and into where it compress and water altrs state and to change gas state ,then interes in generator tourbine.it is powered by steam and it can generate electicity there. Finally from gas state water gains electricity for consuming.
Overall, while there are many ways for achivment electricty, it seems geotermal is one of then in 5 steps it produces.fourth of all steps. It illustrates cold water changes another state and to arrives steam state after that by power it is vonverted to electicity
۱۵۷word
To choose the destination is an important decision for the tourists. Although the visitors have a wide choice of tourist destinations all over the world, some tourists select the places with difficult conditions to visit. This essay will discuss both the merits and drawbacks of such places. (47words)
To go to places with difficult conditions offers some advantages to the visitors. First of all, a tourist may experience more excitement in such places which are usually unknown for the most of people. In other words, tourists prefer to encounter difficulties and instead, enjoy the uniqueness of some special places, since they cant notice similar locations anywhere else. Secondly, to deal with the difficulties a traveler may face in a described situation, can increase his/her patience. It gives them the opportunity to go through different problems voluntarily to gain valuable experiences, knowing that it will make them more stronger or riper in their life. (105words)
On the other hand, the tourists opting to go to a hard-condition traveling puts them in some disadvantages. First of all, a difficult situation may pose a variety of dangers to the visitors. Usually there are some unexpected problems and risks in such places that will get the visitors into trouble if they take no precaution for the situation. Secondly, there are less services for the tourists in such conditions that cause them some inconvenience. Lack of essential tourist services make the visitors do some of their works personally. It not only causes considerable suffering to them, but also increases the costs of the journey. (105words)
In conclusion, to select a place with difficult condition as the tourist destination gives several advantages to the visitors, while it may has its bad points too. (27 words)
(۲۸۳ words)
استاد ببخشید، در مورد چهارم منظورم این بوده که توریستها ترجیح می دهند که با سختیهای این مکان ها روبرو بشوند و “در عوض” از یونیکنس اونجا لذت ببرند… .
In other words, tourists prefer to encounter difficulties and instead, enjoy the …uniqueness of some special places. این ساختار (instead,) اشتباه هست؟
Below is the schematic diagram of a geothermal power plant which illustrates the cycle of generating electricity. The power plant is divided into 5 main parts.
The first part is cold water source which is located on the surface ground near a pylon. The water from the tank is pumped down directly to the depth of 4.5 km into part 2 which is the injection well. Then it is conducted through the geothermal area( surrounded by hot rocks ) to the production well (part3).
The cold water is heated during previous step and becomes hot water. Then this hot water is pumped up directly to part 4 which is condenser. The water changes into steam in the condenser and goes to part 5 which contains a turbine and generator.
The steam in part 5 rotates the turbine and the rotating turbine makes the generator producing electricity. The outcome of part 5 goes to the network.
Overall, producing electricity from thermal energy is an open cycle which the cold water is its main input and the output is obviously electricity .(179 words)
۹۷۱ odd shahrivar
وقت بخیر
کدام بخش های کتاب IELTS write right مهمتر هستند که بیشتر در اون قسمت ها تمرکز کنیم و بیشتر وقت بذاریم؟
درود
روی رایتینگ های تسک ۲ تمرکز بفرمایید.
Adv
Wonderful and unique experience#
Seeing the less untouched place#
Dis
Often a long trip to reach#
No or less rescue team#
Good work
سلام و روز بخیر. ایا پس از پایان این دوره ، باز هم به مطالب این صفحه دسترسی خواهیم داشت؟
درود
بله حتما.
Visiting hard condition spots is becoming popular theses days. Although it has some advantages, it could also have disadvantages . This essay will discuss both viewpoints .27 words)
Visiting such places has some benefits. First of all, the endurance and strength of a person could be increased. Facing difficult situation and having few facilities could make people stronger in bearing problems and not to lose their hope easily. This could learn people trying to encounter their difficulties in life and defeat them. Secondly, being in those places brings vast experience. Since such places have not been smashed by human beings and still have virgin nature, it could be a worthy experience which not many people have possibility to achieve. Finding some new living or no living creatures is fantastic insight.(102 words)
In addition to these benefits, traveling to those places may have some disadvantages as well. First of all, possible dangers which could be considered in two aspects: first deadly diseases caused by insects or wild animals, second natural disasters like fatal coldness or extremely hot weather or even storm. Secondly, the cost of such trips. Actually traveling and staying in those hard circumstances will obviously cost a fortune . As going to these places needs some special and of course expensive means of transportations and also required expensive devices and tools. The accommodation in such spots is much costly as well.(101 words)
In conclusion, adventure traveling to the locations by difficult circumstances has both advantages and disadvantages. It is up to anybody to choose it or not.(25 words)
Advantage
#different eye-catching attractions
#can Broaden the horizons of people
Disadvantage
#have limited access to food, water and facility
#expos to more environment dangers
درود
مورد اول مزایا به نظر من دلیل خوبی نیست.
Nowadays the number of visitors who are going to hard condition spots are relatively surging. Pros and cons of this issue is discussed in this essay.(26 words)
Visiting such places has some benefits. First of all, the endurance and strength of a person could be increased. Facing difficult situation and having few facilities could make people stronger in bearing problems and not to lose their hope easily. This could learn people trying to encounter their difficulties in life and defeat them. Secondly, being in those places brings vast experience. Since such places have not been smashed by human beings and still have virgin nature, it could be a worthy experience which not many people have possibility to achieve. Finding some new living or no living creatures is fantastic insight.(102 words)
In addition to these benefits, traveling to those places may have some disadvantages as well. First of all, possible dangers which could be considered in two aspects: first deadly diseases caused by insects or wild animals, second natural disasters like fatal coldness or extremely hot weather or even storm. Secondly, the cost of such trips. Actually traveling and staying in those hard circumstances will obviously cost a fortune . As going to these places needs some special and of course expensive means of transportations and also required expensive devices and tools. The accommodation in such spots is much costly as well.(101 words)
In conclusion, adventure traveling to the locations by difficult circumstances has both advantages and disadvantages. It is up to anybody to choose it or not.(25 words)
درود
مقدمه شما با شیوه تدریس شما هماهنگ نیست.
برای دریافت فیدبک باید با شیوه تدریس شده هماهنگ ارسال فرمایید.
.
Tourist visitsing different places:
advantage :
More experience #
Compare between countries #
Disadvantage:
costly trips #
experience hardship#
Not bad
**Tourist visiting difficult place**
Benefits:
#adaptable and endure
/Isolate and untouchable place
#Disadvantage:
# extreme environment
without technology
I
درود
خوب هست ولی کوشش کنید یک مورد برای هر هشتگ بنویسید ولی یک مورد خوب
The graph illustrates the number of hours spent on two daily activity per week by schoolchildren during the years from 2000 to 2008.
According the figure the average time that the schoolchildren aged10 to 11 spent on watching TV was more than 20 hours per week in 2000. This number remained stable for next 3 years and then it dropped to just under 15 hours weekly, in 2004. At the beginning of the period (2000) schoolchildren spent approximately 4 hours on computer per week that it rose steadily to 15 in 2004. The increase were continued and reached a peak of just under 22 hours weekly in 2008. While over the same period (2004 – ۲۰۰۸) the number of hours spent on watching TV remained constant at the level of almost 15 hours per week, although a fluctuation can be seen between 2005 and 2006.
Overall, despite the more popularity of TV at the beginning of this period, Computer has become more favorite leisure activity among the schoolchildren in the last years of that. (173words
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As the technology of the internet appear to our lives, significantly changes happen in recent years. Beside the internet become an integral part of our lives, and used in almost all sectors, some believe that it in a negative development.
Nowadays, the internet has brought advantage effect on human lives. First of all, the internet allow us to communicate more efficiency and easier. Internet have made the boundaries irrelevant. No matters where we are, we can stay in touch with our family members and friends living far from us in another country. We can also communicate with world famous people and know more about them with. Secondly, the internet has made vast information accessible to everyone. All educated an uneducated people can find the answer of their question easy and search them automated. Everyone can find prominent books, international magazines, science books from all over the world free. (108 words)
On the other hand it has maybe some disadvantage. First of all, with the internet, anybody can easily share their personal information in some social site like Facebook, Instagram, thus, their personal information can be threated. Also, some hackers can snoop crucial data like banking data. As a result, the users can lost their privacy. Secondly, in some cases the internet attractions made some people addicted. Some users wasting their time many hours of day in the internet and they make online social communication but in the real world they cannot communAs the technology of the internet appear to our lives, significantly changes happen in recent years. Beside the internet become an integral part of our lives, and used in almost all sectors, some believe that it in a negative development.
Nowadays, the internet has brought advantage effect on human lives. First of all, the internet allow us to communicate more efficiency and easier. Internet have made the boundaries irrelevant. No matters where we are, we can stay in touch with our family members and friends living far from us in another country. We can also communicate with world famous people and know more about them with. Secondly, the internet has made vast information accessible to everyone. All educated an uneducated people can find the answer of their question easy and search them automated. Everyone can find prominent books, international magazines, science books from all over the world free. (108 words)
On the other hand it has maybe some disadvantage. First of all, with the internet, anybody can easily share their personal information in some social site like Facebook, Instagram, thus, their personal information can be threated. Also, some hackers can snoop crucial data like banking data. As a result, the users can lost their privacy. Secondly, in some cases the internet attractions made some people addicted. Some users wasting their time many hours of day in the internet and they make online social communication but in the real world they cannot communicate with their friends and even their family member. As result they face with some problems in their relationship. (109 words)
In conclusion, the internet has both positive and negative impacts, it depends on users how they use it and do their performance.
icate with their friends and even their family member. As result they face with some problems in their relationship. (109 words)
In conclusion, the internet has both positive and negative impacts, it depends on users how they use it and do their performance.
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As the technology of the internet appear to our lives, significantly changes happen in recent years. Beside the internet become an integral part of our lives, and used in almost all sectors, some believe that it in a negative development.
Nowadays, the internet has brought advantage effect on human lives. First of all, the internet allow us to communicate more efficiency and easier. Internet have made the boundaries irrelevant. No matters where we are, we can stay in touch with our family members and friends living far from us in another country. We can also communicate with world famous people and know more about them with. Secondly, the internet has made vast information accessible to everyone. All educated an uneducated people can find the answer of their question easy and search them automated. Everyone can find prominent books, international magazines, science books from all over the world free. (108 words)
On the other hand it has maybe some disadvantage. First of all, with the internet, anybody can easily share their personal information in some social site like Facebook, Instagram, thus, their personal information can be threated. Also, some hackers can snoop crucial data like banking data. As a result, the users can lost their privacy. Secondly, in some cases the internet attractions made some people addicted. Some users wasting their time many hours of day in the internet and they make online social communication but in the real world they cannot communicate with their friends and even their family member. As result they face with some problems in their relationship. (109 words)
In conclusion, the internet has both positive and negative impacts, it depends on users how they use it and do their performance.
The internet is one of the most brilliant invention in recent decays. Although a substantial number of people acknowledge the internet has many advantages, others claim that it brings many difficulties .this essay will discuss both of these views.
It would be quite hard to deny the benefits of the internet. Firstly a large number of people all around the world use and share the data and information so it is an amazing virtual place to achieve many kind of details in different knowledge, ant time , anywhere and complementary. More over facilities such as many videos, podcasts like YouTube help people perceive the facts easily. Secondly ,thanks to the internet and its applications people can be stay in touch from anywhere even the furthest place in the word. Also through these apps has been provide many online courses and other materials and they completely help people are not able to attend in regular classes.
On the other hand, some people seem be anxious about its drawbacks. Firstly there are many web sites that are not suitable for children and even for adults and the web surfing must be controlled. They believe it is one of the big treat for families so people must be ban in some browsing the sites. In addition there are many websites to deceive people such as lottery or selling goods witch they are not legally. Secondly there are many cybercrime in the internet .people always have to be careful about hacking their electronic bank accounts, email password or sort of these things. Furthermore hackers can get into some government website and manage them.in this case it might treat the security of many people and countries.
In counclusion,while some people believe the internet has many advantages, others think it may provides some big difficulties.
The graph showe schoolchildren spent their tim on variety lusire activites from year 2000 to 2008 in every week(22words
Schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 years old spent time for used computer less than 4hours per week, then in creased to reach15 hours in 2004, next time it rised rapidly until just under 22 hours per week.
In contrast in 2000 , schoolchildren spent for watching TV on nearly 21hours in a week, then it remaind the same amount next three years.next, it fell rapidly from 21 to 15 hours per week.In 2004 for one year it fixed from 2004 to 2005.There was a flucatikn between 2005 and 2006,afther that watching TV is stabled about 15 hours weekly a period of 2006 to 2008.
Oversll, while schoolchildren spent on watching TV at the beginning after several years it changed and they spent on computer . However watching TV reached a stable after that but rising to spent on for computer was impressive.(
The charts illustrates the average weekly hours spent on two different hobbies of school children in the age of ten or eleven in the home over a period of eight years from 2000 to 2008.
Students prefer to spend more time to watching TV rather than working on computer in the beginning of the period in 2000 with slightly over 21 hours per week, which remained stable for the next four years, and it sharply felt to about 16 hours in 2005, then despite a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006. Next, the time spent on watching TV remained constant at the level of almost 14 hours until 2008.
As the time past, schoolchildren allocate more time to work with computers in compare to other leisure activities like watching TV. First of all, working with computers were not common in 2000 for ten or eleven years old children, so in earlier time they spent about 3hours per week, however this amount grew slightly over the eight years and reached to almost 22 hours a week in 2008.
Overall, while the amount of time that schoolchildren allocate to computer experienced growth, watching TV lost its popularity and show a decline over the time. (201 words)
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Nowadays the internet turns into a way to develop fast communication in worldwide. Although, some people believe that the internet is very useful in daily programs, others believe the internet has a harmful effects on their lives. This essay will discuss both of viewpoint. (44 words)
Many of the people think that the internet changes their lifestyle in a good way efficiently. First of all, the internet is a perfect place to work from home, because employees can sit in front of computer and communicate with client for business. In fact they can provide their computer as virtual office. Secondly, the internet increase people knowledge remarkably because it is obvious that they are fascinated to understand some of matters which are conflict in their lives. So they can refer to internet and seek a needed data because there is a main accessible resource to find any data they required. (103 words)
Nonetheless, in some cases the internet has a negative influence on the people. First of all, most of children in society are not limited to access to virtual world and may encounter to something which are impermissible for them. However, some of websites set an age restrictions on resources for children. Secondly, people often prefer to carry out daily activities by using the internet therefore they spend too much time sitting in front of computer and look directly to the computer screen and finally can easily get ill. Because the radiation emitted by computers is very detrimental to their eyes. (100 words)
In conclusion, some people including me believe that the internet is considerably helpful in their lives and works, while others believe that the negative effects of the internet is more than positive effects. (33 words)
The internet has significantly impacted on most aspects of our life. The overall effects of this modern phenomenon are seem to be positive, while there are some undesirable consequences that may be observed on the society. This essay will discuss both positive and negative influences of the internet. (48words)
Appling the internet has offered several advantages in different contexts. First of all, it has provided an easy access to information about a wide variety of subjects. On the other words, using the internet, people can get their required data in their educational and professional activities, research projects and any other context that they are involved in. Secondly, developing of internet technology has prepared the ground for appearance of many new sorts of jobs. These internet-based jobs have brought relative comfort to people to accomplish their daily task in a very easier way compared with other common methods. These jobs can also produce significant money and time saving as well. (110words)
Despite the great benefits the internet offers, there are some undeniable disadvantages in the rapid spread of that. First of all, spending a long time using internet is an underlying reason for the low level of people physical activities, particularly for “internet addicts”. In addition, to carry out the routine works via the internet-that was formerly done through physical works- has improved the matter, in spite of the considerable advantages. Secondly, the extension of internet applying has provided an easy access to different means of communication for people, regardless of age and educational level. It may result in some social issues if there be no control over the matter. (109words)
In conclusion, the internet has brought a variety of different benefits in modern world, while it may contain some serious concerns for the society. (24words
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Nowadays, the Internet is a decisive factor in life of the majority of people in the world. Although some people believe that the Internet have positive effect on worldwide. Others have a negative attitude towards the Internet. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.
Some people think, the Internet is highly benficail to their life. First of all, the Internet can be able to faster communication. with the help of the Internet, many things such as letter, essay and so on are sent faster by email. Also we can have video calling with many people around world. Secondly there are many social networks on the Internet. Social networks provide great communication for people. They are highly beneficial to making new friends in the different country. Moreover they provide a place for more romantic relationship, getting married, free advertising and working. As a result of access to the Internet, people’s lives have been facilitated.
On the other hand, others believe, the Internet have negative effect on people. First, the widespread use of the Internet bring about a social isolation. Most people use the Internet and it is full of attraction. Internet attractions cause people spend more time on the Internet instead of interacting with family and friends. As a result, people become alone. Secondly, people who use the Internet all the time are more prone to Internet addiction because they spend time more play games, chat, and watching more online videos. Also they have been bad feeling, when they do not have access to the Internet. As a result, Internet addiction comes by spending more time on the Internet.
In conclusion, some people believe the internet have significant effect on people, while others think, the Internet pose serious problem.
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The graph shows the number of hours of leisure time spent by school children in per week. Two activities are observed at the age of 11 to 12 years old from 2000 to 2008.
Schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 years old spent less than 4 hours on computer in 2000. This figure went up significantly up 14 hours between 2000 to 2004. Also there is a different home acctivite in this graph. At first, watching television was spent about 21 hours per week. This amount of consumption remind the same over next three years. Then, there was a rapid fall from 21 to 15 hours weekly in 2004.
Schoolchildren continued to spend mor time on computer from 2004 to 2008 and the amount peaked at under 22 hours. At the same time despite a fluction between 2004 and 2008, the time spent on watching tv maintained the same level at 15 hours per week.
Overall, over the whole period, there was a significanta rise in the figure for spending time on computer between schoolchildrens 10 and 11 years old. by contrast, during the same period, the number of hours of spent on watching tv declined erratically.
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The following graph indicates the average weekly hours spent by schoolchildren of 10 to 11 years on two different home activities computer and TV during the period of 2000 to 2008.(26 words)
In year 2000 the schoolchildren spent about 3 hours a week on computer while the time they spent on TV was around 21 hours. The number of hours spent on computer raised significantly during the next four years and came to 15 hours a week in 2004. After that it had a steady increase during next four years and peaked so close to 22 hours a week in 2008.
The time spent on TV remained stable during the first four years and in 2003 it was still 21 hours a week. Then it had a considerable fall and reached to 15 hours in 2004 and remained the same until 2005.
Then besides a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006 it remained stable on 15 until 2008.
Overall at the beginning the number of hours spent on TV was much bigger but at the end of 2008 it reversed .(180 words)
The graph shows the totally weekly hours that schoolchildren between 10 and 11 years old spent on two home activities like computer and television from 2000 to 2008. (28 word)
Schoolchildren spent about 21 hours per week on television in 2000 and it remained stable until three years later. Then it fell sharply from 21 to 15 hours in 2004 and again it stabilize for one year later. Using television programs slightly varied from 14 to 16 hours between 2005 and 2006. Then it reached to about 15 hours until 2008.
In the beginning they used computer for 4 hours weekly in 2000. This hours were surging considerably next four years for about 15 hours a week. The hours spent on computer reached a peak of about 22 hours in next four years until 2008.
Overall, although television programs were more popular at the beginning for schoolchildren but in continuous they spent more time on computer in compare to television. (158 word)
The internet:
Advantage
# free information and source
# easier communication
Disadvantage
#Not identify the truth
# without limited for child
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The internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. There remains some disagreement as to whether the overall impact of this technology has been positive or negative. This essay will discuss both of viewpoints. (37)
Some people believe that the internet has numerous positive impact on global lives. First of all, There are multifarious gratis information that can be access by this technology. Using search engine like google and find a web page and also millions of videos on site that help to explain the various topic and even online courses that can be taken. Secondly, some people these days prefer buying things online over the conventional method of going into stores. The internet gives everyone easy access to compare price between companies and even see what others think about a product to make better purchasing decisions at any moment and everywhere. (107)
In other hands, some people think although the internet is one of man’s greatest creations, it has many disadvantages. it is so easy and cheap just ask email or by click on web pages, it can mean that see more advertising and get more spam in e-mails Inbox and surfing the internet by clicking on web pages than in real life. Secondly, The Internet makes it easy to buy things that no need them to buy things without putting much thought also for some people buying items on the Internet can become so addictive that it can cause serious debt. (100)
In conclusion some people relate to advantages of the internet and like to use it for their daily life, while others thinking about disadvantages and disagree with this technology. (29)
سلام استاد گرامی
در مورد فکر کردن و اعتقاد داشتن به موضوعی بیشتر از کلمات Think , و believe استفاده می کنیم.در بعضی از تاپیک ها احتیاج هست که چند مرتبه این کلمات یا مشابه آنها تکرار شود.جهت عدم تکرار این افعال چه افعالی رو پیشنهاد می دهید که متناسب نوع نگارش تسک ۲ باشد.
ممنون
درود
میتونید با گوگل کردن واژه هایی که اشاره کردید به همراه لغت synonym به این واژگان دست پیدا کنید.
مثلا argue، maintain، opine، و واژگانی دیگر
The internet is the enormous network system that connected all of the world together and this technology make important changes globally. Although some people believe that this changes have positive effects on human life, others argue that disadvantages of internet are over weigh of advantages. This essay will discuss benefits and negative points of the internet. (55 word)
Some people think that the internet has many positive aspects on whole of word. First of all, the internet causing people access to information and data so easily and freely. They can research everything about every knowledge on the internet and increase their data and also up to date them on the newest one without pay money. Secondly, people can communicate with each other from different parts of the world with using the internet. This helping that may be new people get familiar with each other and transfer their data or friends or families are far from each other can continue their connection and keep in touch by the internet and using social medias. (114 word)
The other people believe that using the internet by people have harmful results on their life. At first, some people spend a lot of time on the internet and wasting time is the biggest problem of using the internet. Playing online games for hours a day especially between teenagers and spend time in social medias are such a kinds of losing time. Secondly, everyone has at least one account or maybe more on social medias and most of the time it has not enough privacy and security to protected this information. Therefore these data may be hacked easily and you run into serious problem. (104 word)
In conclusion some people including me believe that usage the internet has many advantages on people life, while others argue that the internet has some negative results and irrecoverable effects on human life. (33 word)
A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking dissimilarities between TV and computer by schoolchildren spent average weekly hours during the period from 2000 to 2008.
schoolchildren aged 10 to 11 spent less than 4 hours per week in 2000, This number rose to 15 in 2004. At the beginning of the same period (2000), the time spent on watching TV was approximately 21 hours per week which remained constant over three years. next year, it plunged from 21 to 15 hours weekly. schoolchildren continued to spend more time on the computer from 2004 to 2008 and the number riched a pick of just under 22 hours. At the same time show some fluctuation in 2005 and 2006, spend on watching TV to remain constant at the level of 15 hours per week.
Overall, while Tv was more popular than the computer in this period, it seems the time of schoolchildren spent on them has reversed. (157)
Advantage
#easier communication
#access to vast information
Disadvantage
#personal privacy
#addictive
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سلام استاد
اسپیکینگ های جلسه قبل من هنو فیدبکی دریافت نکرده ان، البته چون فک کردم شاید خیلی تو پیام هاتون رفته پایین، دوباره پیام دادم ولی هنو سین هم نشده، حالا نمیدونم به دستون نرسیده یا ؟ ممنون میشم راهنمایی کنین
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نمیدونم چرا اصلا ندیده بودم. فیدبک ارسال شد
ممنون 🙏
#Advantage
#keep in touch
#free resource
#Disadvantage
#Internet Abuse
#wasting time
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ایده ها خوب هستند اما با انتخاب واژگان مناسب تر میتوانید مشخص تر ایده مورد نظرتون رو نشون بدید
The internet has changed human life significantly. Although some people argue internet has negative influences, others including me believe that the overall impacts are positive. Positive effects will be discussed in this essay.(33 words)
First of all it revolutionized the communication. Before the invention of internet talking to a person or seeing others lived in other cities was dramatically difficult while nowadays chatting to people even in other countries is piece of a cake. Moreover in spite of sending a letter with post which may take from many hours to many days it is possible to send an Email by a few key press and one click in less than a minute. People can share files with others throughout internet so easily and send or share photos and videos as well. So it makes communicate to whole world possible and easy.(107 words)
Secondly it has increased information availability. In earlier times in order to search and find a specific data, a person should spend lots of time in libraries reviewing many resources while currently thanks to internet many various informations is in touch. There are several searching engines such as google which can help people and do the search for them and give the results. A person just need to ask these engines what he/she wants and the engine looks for it throughout the whole World Wide Web and returns the output in a few seconds. So it is possible to find any information at a glance.(105 words)
As a result internet besides the negative influences which may have on our lives, has much more positive impacts which I think these impacts can totally outweigh the negative ones.(30 words)
Age composition plays a key role in development of a nation. Todays, the population in some societies contains relatively big number of young adults, while some others encounter ageing population. This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of former one. (40words
Higher rate of young adults number in population offers several advantages for a society. First of all, there are more work forces in such a society. This is one of the most important items that is considered as an economic indicator. Abundance of workers may result in development in many contexts and bring economic improvement. Secondly, the high young-to-older ratio of population can give rise to activity and sprightliness in a community. A young population is more productive and its in a high level of public health. It can reduce the cost of health service that’s regarded as a financial benefit for the governments in addition to other social advantages. (109words
On the other hand, there are some undeniable disadvantages to the relative abundance of young adults population. First of all, the large number of young people in a society will make a heavy demands of various types of job positions. Providing job for a huge amount of young people present a serious challenge to the governments. Secondly, the younger workers are not well experienced in some contexts. In other words, they have not gained enough knowledge or ability to do the works that its needed to spend a very long time learning the required skills. So it would be very costly to the both worker and employer. (107words
In conclusion, the relative abundance of young adults population offers some advantages, while it has its bad points that may be known as disadvantages of the situation. (27words
The Internet:
ADV
# easy access to information
# create new internet-based jobs
Dis
# less physical activity
# to make some social issues
Good
advanege1
keep in touch#
online classes and online workshop#
disadvantege1
waste of time#
internet scam
advantege2
faster communication#
social networking and entertaiment#
disadvantege2
social isolation and depresion#
internet addict#
Good job
Adv1
connecting people#
access to the data#
Dis1
abusing privacy#
addicting to this matterial#
Adv2
new start up bussiness on the web#
less transportation via doing home affairs on the web#
Dis2
encountering with vrtual charecter#
inappropriate sites for children#
Good
**Internet 1
*Advantage:
# free information, knowledge, learning
#banking, bills, and shopping
*Disadvantage:
#Spam and advertising
# buying things not needed
**Internet 2
*Advantage:
#cloud computer and cloud storage
#connectivity and communication in social network
Disadvantage:
#hacking and identity theft
#depression, social isolation
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مواردی که اشاره میکنید باید غیر تخصصی باشه و برای همه قابل درک باشه
درود استاد، اصلاح شد:
*Advantage:
# free information
# shopping online
*Disadvantage:
#Spam advertising
# buying things not needed
درود و سپاس.
موارد خوبی هستند
A society is definitely combined with a different part of the age groups. Although some people believe more young population brings many advantages others think there are some disadvantages by being more population of the young. This essay will examine both of these views.
Some believe it is clear fact that young people have undisputed advantages.Firstly these kind of people are efficiently able to work more and more. As we all know majority of them naturally love working and being in progress, so they are interested in starting a job anywhere and in any position. Also, they are not very expected by high salary. Secondly, they are highly energetic. Admittedly in this period of life people are really ambitious to obtain their dream. That is why it can be a great benefit.In the other words, if they would be encouraged, they probably bring a great deal of productivity.
On the contrary, other thinks more population of the young has some difficulties. Firstly, when the majority of people are young, they desire basically many demands and obviously top of them is job opportunities. Secondly, as it mentioned above the young have more energy instead of other groups. They can work hard and for long hours meanwhile after work time need suitable and more complicated entertainments as compare to older group ages. They often desire happy, relaxing and amusing in their leisure time thus providing and developing some sort of these facilities as recreational centers need much more attention and finance.
In conclusion, some think more young population has many advantages for society, while others believe dealing with this kind of group has many problems.
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چهارچوب اصلی رایتینگ رعایت شده و مشکلی وجود ندارد اما در سطح واژگان و ترکیب ها و درست بودن از نظر گرامری خطاهایی دیده میشود که باید با بررسی در لانگمن و گوگل کوشش کنید این موارد را برطرف نمایید.
Recently, population of people that adults and youngs rise sharply and countries are their dependent.Although there are many advantages and benifical for country others.there are several advantages and disadvantages for country.This esaay will discuss both viewpoints.(45words
There are many advantages.First off all,there is motivation when population of country considered adults and youngs.They can do a lot of things about improvment for their country.they creat many jobs for people because they know everybody can earn every thing with their work,so they make places,facilities,companeis,factories and every where that people can have career and they spend their life,secondly there are so much effort between adults.they have effort for to reach their dreams so it is very good for countries that they can grow with like people, because they want to build their life and their country and it is the best for every country(101words
There are some disadvantages for country if it relative young and adults,first of all they do not have exprience enough for works then they do no do their work correctly and it can last works untill they reach to succes. So it is one of negative points,secondly there is more competition between population of country because they can not see anybody can develop so there is more competition and this subject can postbon to teach aim of country and theirseles,finally competition can effect on health and behaviour and if they can not seprate healthy and domestic competition and it is danger for countrie(100words)
In conculusion,some people think old people can lead better a country,while others including me beleive adults can do these work in country and a country develops sooner by adults and youngs(36words
This chart shows ,presidents in UK use different telephone calls from years 1995 until 2002, that how much they used them.
In local-fixed line is started from over 70 billion minutes until it is reached 90 billion minutes in 1999.it is the highest,then in fall down to 70 billion again in 2002.
Narional and international-fixed line began near 40 billion minutes and it had rised and it could reached over 60billion minutesin 2002.
There is a suprised about mobiles.when residents started to use it in 1995 ,it just underr 5billion minutes after several years it had grown dramatically and it had reached over 40 billion minutes.
Overall ,however local-fixed line used the most between type calls but it could not see improved mobile calls that it could be important for people in UK. Natonal and internatinal -fixed line hade rised extremetly but not same mobils calls.
Dear sirs or madam
I would like to express my concern about my radio telephone. As you may remember I bought of your company several radio telephone about two weeks ago. Your company has a warranty for this equipments to communicated more than one
kilometers with each others. But does not work more than two hundred meters at the moment.
Actually I work for gas company and we use this radiotelephone into process unit to communicate between control center with operator man. Also it is necessary to be able to reach for every person Because work in the industry is very dangerous. we often need to doing a diffrent change in our unit and make a decision immidiately.
Although this equipment include to warranty but we expecte to your company to solving this problem by emergency repair or change it. I think It is better your serviceman come here to my company for checking, after that trying to solve a problem. I hope this situation will be resolved soon 172 word
Yours faithfully
Ghasem
The following chart represents the total telephone usage of UK people from 1995 to 2002 in three categories: local, national and international in fixed line and mobiles in all calls.
Local call usage raised on a smooth line from 72 to 90 billions minutes until 1999. Afterwards it knocked down to 72 billions again until 2002. This falling could be because of progression in public transportation systems so people did not need to spend much time on phone and could visit each other.
National and international calls just raised through these years and never fell. This could be because of migrations of parts of families to big cities and other countries for job or education so people had to spend much times talking to their families or friends on phone.
By improvement of mobile people have interested in using this type of communication system more than others and by developing this system year after year and since it was so easy to use and was portable the time of using it increased in UK as well through 1995 to 2002 .
Overall in advanced countries people interest in using communication systems such as mobile raises yearly.(196 words)
Nowadays, some countries encounter with the large number of young people in the population. while there are undoubted benefits, various negative effects stem from this too. There are arguments on both sides, however, which we will discuss here.
On the one hand, the main advantages of a young population include decrease in pension and health-care costs. An increasing number of younger persons means less pension requirements, resulting in a decrease in the cost to the government, and therefore, taxpayer. If most of these youngers were pension contributors, then the additional cost to the governments would be less. Furthermore, young people are less prone to illnesses and ailments, as such, a decreasing number of sick persons will reduce pressure on health care facilities.
On the other hand, an increase in the proportion of young persons in the population leads to a growing pool of volunteers in the economy, then an increasing number of job seekers will put pressure on economy of the country. A young population also increase completion for jobs, especially if the country’s economy not be able to cope with the demand. In addition, a young population is associated with higher children. Another disadvantage highlighted as a result, is cost associated with having to cater to higher children and young people in the economy. This would result in higher public education cost, higher health-care cost and other social program for children by the governments.
Overall, it seems logical to accept that economic pressure of young population leads to some economic implications for countries. However, the benefits of a young population outweigh the disadvantages. (264)
The chart shows three different kinds of call type and reporting the sum of number of minute (in billions) in the United Kingdom between 1995 -2002.
It appears the number of minute for local _ fixed line spent more than 70 minute in 1995 and it reached a peak 90 in 1999 and for three years it reached fall to 70 in 2002. Flow chart show that national and international line expended about 38 minute in 1995. This minutes were increasing gradually in eight years and it was achieved to 60 in 2002. The third call was mobiles line and at first was not so popular and people only spend about 3 minutes on it. Until 1999 it was raised very slowly and it expended only about 10 minutes but in 2000 surged to more than 20 sharply and after two years it achieved to more than 45 minutes in 2002.
Overall, it seems that over eight years the local line in the United Kingdom had peak process and national and international rose gradually also mobiles line since 2000 until 2002 were grew sharply and it was doubled.(188 words)
two maps illustrate situation of the center of the town of Islip and future plan for its development.
It is clear that the principal change to the town will be the construction of a ring road around the center Shops in the north of Various other developments with regard to shops and housing will accompany the building of this road.
Currently, there is a main road that connect east to west and it has two branches. One branch leads to park and another is finished into a housing area. There are some shops in the north and south of main road.
According to the future state of the town, the main street will turn into a pedestrian thoroughfare and it appears that the shops along the north side of the new pedestrian street will be demolished to make way for a bus station, shopping center, car park and new housing area. (151)
Age is a crucial parameter in any population and must be considered by government or other responsible agencies to organize a practical plan for a better future . This essay is going to discuss pros and cons of younger population.(40words)
Having a larger number of young adults may have some advantages. First of all innovational ideas can be raised. Technically younger people have fresher minds consequently they can make more creative decisions. Furthermore they are more up to date and more familiar to the latest technologies and so it helps them think modernly. Secondly younger working force can boost the production rate. Naturally younger workers have more energy and body strength therefore can work harder and more hours rather than older adults. For this reason the industry and production efficiency will be incremented and so the outcome will be increased.(100 words)
Besides these advantages, younger society has some disadvantages as well. First of all juvenile people have less experiences. Since experience is acquisitive and can be achieved gradually, immature people are often less experienced than matures. This experiences include both living and working experiences which is gained by living and working more years. Secondly more greediness. Generally human greediness knocks down by growing up and will be replaced by modesty and satisfaction. Unfortunately most of juveniles often want more and more because they think they are in the beginning of a long way and to pass through it successfully they always need more.(102 words)
In conclusion a less aged society in comparison with aged societies may have both advantages and disadvantages which must be esteemed to know which one outweighs the other one.(29 words)
The given bar graph reveals three type of telephone calls in the United-Kingdome in 8 years, from 1995 to 2002. In general, the local-fix line was the most approved type of call from 1995 to 2002 while the usage of the mobiles increased over the time. (46 words)
Initially, in 1995, the people in the UK made 70 billion minutes of local-fixed lines while the national and international-fixed calling time was approximately half of that. Very few mobile calls were made in this year, but over time the mobile call span rapidly slipped to somewhere in the vicinity of 50 billion in 2001. The local calling was the most accepted way of calling throughout the period especially in 1999, the peak of calling times was about 100 billion minutes. But after 1999, this way of calling kept declining with the popularity of mobile phone and reached to 70 billion minutes, again. (102 words)
In summary, the local-fixed line calling in the UK is higher than national and international-fixed line calling and mobile calling, throughout of the given period and mobile phone calling times increased more quickly than other two ways of calling. (38 words)
Some countries include a large number of young adults in comparison with other countries that have older people. Although, some people think that having young adult has some advantages, others believe this issue have disadvantages for their countries. This essay will discuss both of those viewpoints. (46 words)
More population of young adults have some advantages in their countries. First of all most of them have academic education in the university, so they have contemporary knowledge. As they have an impressionable young mind, they can learn about the latest science and technology very fast. So their brain power helps them in their occupation to progress, therefore the progress of the country can be possible. Secondly, young adults are more energetic compared to old people. As a result, the young generation, consider as an active group of society that has the positive effect on the Economic of the county. Their performance has a profound influence over the country. (109 words)
The majority of young people of a country have some disadvantage. First of all, the lack of experience of the young people could not be denied. Sometimes this makes some problems for them and they cannot overcome the lack. But old people, Base on their extensive experience and old knowledge that they have, can make better decision under the critical condition. Secondly, the demand for job will increase as the number of the youngsters grow. In some countries, the government is not capable to provide a good situation for the young adult to find an appropriate job, therefore the number of unemployment will increase. (104 words)
In conclusion, some believe that a large number of youngsters have more advantage to their country, while others think in opposite way and believe that it has some disadvantage for their country. (32 words)
The bar chart shows the proportion of minutes of phone calls from three different types of calls from 1995 to 2002 in the uk. There are three kind of phone calls, such as: local-fixed line, national and international-fixed line and mobiles.
The proportion of minutes of local-fixed line experienced peaked at 1990 but there was a gradual increasein the figure for two diffrent type of phone calls among different years. Also the figure for minuts of mobiles saw a significant rise from 1990 to 2002. Among different years, number of minutes of local-fixed line has been more than two others type. Also amount of minutes of mobill has been less.The figure for minutes of local-fixed approximetlly leveled out at 90 minutes between 1998 and 1999.
Overall, it seems the proportion of minutes of phone calls has been different. The number of minutes of local-fixed rocketed until 1999 and then plunged. Also other types of minutes of call phone rose moderately.
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Nowadays, number of population’s country related to age is very important issue in the world. Although, there are a many countries where number of young adult have increased in comparison number of older people. There are advantages to this, but I think that it could lead to some problem. This essay will discuss both privilege and harm.
There are many advantages for growing a young adults population comper to older people around world. First of all, there are more economic progress and development among this countries because they have plenty of people who can work more. As a result, there are many people who are workers. They create more production. It seems this situation have positive affect on sections of society especially at economic. Secondly, young population have a lot of energy, work more, do much exercise and have healthy bodies. Also they spend a lot of time with family or friends and enjoy their time. Therefor they can creat happy and healthy society.
On the other hand, there are a several negative effect from this situation. First of all, most countries with a lot of young adult encounters high unemployment related to number of people who ready for work. Secondly, the society with abundance of adult population have less experience because people usually get experience after a long period of live or work. Also some of Youth do not have job and have not encounter a big problem. As a result, there are less experience among young adult.
In conclution, plenty of number of young adult among countries have so many benefits. However, there are some disadvantage for this situation.
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Nowadays, different variety of the population and young or old percentage of communities is one of the important social scale around the word. Although some people believe young society have more advantage than older, others argue that older society is more effective than younger. This essay will discuss benefits and disadvantages of young society.
Some people think that large number of young people has more positive results on community. First of all, the younger people make more motivation and happiest in the society because they are full of energy and enthusiasm to be activate so they bring up hope and pleasance. But older society become calmer and calmer and finally dead step by step. Second, the younger people are more incentive to get a work than older people. They are motivated to have a job and get married and bring some children so the society and absolutely the economy grow up day to day by hard-working and responsibility of young people. (107 word)
The other people argue that the younger society have more problems and not as effective as older one. At first, young people have not much experience in compare of older and they know only about theory of the things that do. So this may cause mistakes and faults in affairs. Secondly, in this society because of the high demand for getting job between youngers so the competition is increase and it is difficult to find suitable job for everyone. In this equal situation that everyone is educated without any experience it is difficult and may be want chance or relation to get job. (103 word)
In conclusion some people including me believe that younger society have more advantage than older one, while others consider that disadvantage of younger society is more than benefits. (131 word)
The general population of each country has a different advantages, regardless of age. Although some people think the large number of young adults are advantages for each country, other believes the old people are beneficial (35 word)
Some people bleive that large number of young adults has more advantages in every country. First of all, there are more work force in a young population. Each country needs to around millions of laborers and employees. So there are available kind of worker who work in a particular industry, without need to any foreigner experts and any proplems about training and facilitis for them. Secondly there are more competition to get somebody motivated to progress.Also the young population have a more confidence and good ideas in their job. Its bring to motivated to progress and its so necessary condition for each country .(105 word)
In other word, some people bleive that many young adults are disadvantages in every country. First of all, the most important things an each job are experts with enough experience. While the young people dose not it and the most employer does not request for young man without any experience.secondly there are more competition to find a job with more young adults in each country and many problems arise for every young person because not enough job for them.so the employers are abusing them with low salary in this situation and there will be problemes for their future and families at last.( 104 word)
in conclution, some people bleive many young adults in society are more advantages, while other think a large number of young people are disadvantages.( 23 word)
Advantage
Economic progress and development#
Happy and healthy society#
Disadvantage
More unemploypent#
Less experience#
Good work
Advantage
# More work force
#Get sb motivated to progress
Dis advantage
#Not enough experience
#Morr competition to find a job
Good work
#Advantage
#Ability to learning new ways
#More worker population
#Dis-advantage
#more job competition
#less experience
Good work
Adv.
more workforce#
more energy and high productivity#
Disadv.
need more job opportunity#
need more variety of entertainment#
Good work
زیر تمرین جلسه های ۷ و ۸ نوشته شده:
tactics for listening basic kill
real speaking and listening 2 kill
یعنی تا کجا مشخص شده؟
kill = to finish off
Dear Mahmood
It was lovely to see you & your sisters last month; I hope to see you as soon as possible.
This month I changed my job, so my job location is another address, it is near the Subway station, as you know my home is near other subway station so I do not need to use my bicycle.
Do you remember my aquamarine and lavender colors bike? That is a model of Giant 2015.It has lightweight material as an Aluxx-grade aluminum frame, chromyl fork, nylon and anti-slip platform, stainless steel spokes and about geometry, it has about 65 cm stand over height. My bicycle just had service new tires, cables, and comfort brakes, which use with direct pull.
Last month, when I saw your sister she rid my bicycle and love it. You know, It has a super soft saddle that your sister never seen like this as a comfortable seat, So I think this is the best gift for your sister because she love it. I can let you buy it at a special price.
Best wishes
Sara
سلام استاد خدا قوت. ببخشید از این ساختارهایی که تو کتاب هست واسه استفاده در نوشتن نامه ، چندبار میتونیم استفاده کنیم در شروع یا پایان نامه؟ ممنون
درود و سپاس؛ حال شما
عذر میخوام متوجه نشدم کدوم کتاب و کدوم ساختارها رو میفرمایید. یا اینجا توضیح بفرمایید یا در کلاس مطرح کنید که صحبت کنیم.
زنده باشید ایشالله . کتاب New insight into ielts هست استاد. ممنون
خواهش میکنم
از عبارت ها باید یکی رو در آغاز استفاده کنید یکی رو در پایان.
اگر سوال رو درست متوجه شده باشم.
سلام منظورم همین بود استاد.متوجه شدم.ممنونم
خواهش میکنم.
The two maps illustrate an island has been changed considerably over the time period and was developed for tourism.
The island is approximately 250 meters long, has palm trees dotted around it, is surrounded by ocean and has a beach in the west. Over the period, In the north of the island, a restaurant has been constructed close to the sea. A reception building has been built in south of the restaurant that is surrounded by vehicle track and leads Tourists to the restaurant. In the west of reception building there are some trees and around of them, 6 buildings have been built. These buildings connected to a swimming beach with a footpath.
In the east of the reception, there are 9 accommodations and they have been connected to each other by footpath. In the south of island there is a pier. The eastern part of the island appears to have been undeveloped.
Overall, the island from an abundant one has been turned into a tourist spot. (168)
Two maps show the island that its construction changs from befor and it can have a lot of facilities for tourists.
In the first map there is not facilities for tourist except swmming area in the left. But in the second map there are many facilities for example there is several accommodutions in overall island. Also there is a resturant in the northwest near reception and there is reception in middle of island and near residence so that if tourist want to use vehicle track or footpath.In the west of island there are apier and boats so tourist can boat even for going there , they use vehicle track .
Overall, it seems the island changs generally and it is been better and it have basically facilities for tourist stay.also tourist have good time in the island.(152words
درود به شما
رایتینگ شما ۱۳۷ واژه هست و کمتر از حداقل الزامی ۱۵۰ کلمه بوده و نوشتن چنین رایتینگی در آزمون به کاهش نمره شما خواهد انجامید.
تعداد واژگان پیشنهادی ما ۱۷۵ واژه هست. بعد از آپدیت در زیر همین دیدگاه ارسال بفرمایید برای فیدبک.
Dear ali
Apologies for not writing for so long, but I have been really busy. As I said my company won the new project this month,on the other side of city. I have to go to new project by transportation system. Although its so easily to catch a new subway in the neighbourhood. So I do not have enough leisure to use my bicycle unfortunately. But now I have decided to sell it.
Remember, the bicycle is a really pretty and fast. It has a rack and fancy basket for moving anythings.also it is a very pretty gold color
I would recommend that you can buy this bicycle and have it at a special price. Perhaps it would be better if you dont have enough money while you dont have good salary in your job. So you can go to work with your favorite bicycle and enjoy to ride it too.
See you at the weekend and will discuss about the
( price. (165 Word
Best wishes
Ghasem
Dear Mohammad,
I heard from Jack you d like to buy a new bicycle. I have a new one that I can’t use it,and I think you d really like it . My brother bought me a new bicycle six months ago.I really loved it .A day after my birthday my family and I went climbing and unfortunately I felt down the mountain .As my knee was injured seriously, my doctor told me I should never go biking for at least three years. l really felt regret about my knee. It s clear my bicycle isn’t suit for me until that time.
It s a modern bicycle and it’s color is your favourite one .It has comfortable seat and high speed. Also it has wide tire and strong wheels.
I think you d like to buy it .it’s a great one for biking and also i know blue one is your favourite color.Sinc you are one of my best friends i let you have it with great distance and suitable price.
let me know if you are interested,we ll discuss about price later.
Best wishes
Nasrin
There are two maps that shown developing of island during the time. Government is constructed a lot of facilities in the island of a few hundred meters square for attracted visitors.
It appears in the north of island they build a big restaurant and the restaurant have good accessibility by vehicle track to the reception. Reception is located in center of island that is near of accommodation that are built for rest of tourists and also they are constructed pier in south of the island so tourists can have entertainment with sailing boats and get to reception easily by vehicle track. Accommodations are building in both west and east of island in circle shape that have footpath between sites and to get reception. The other important facility is about beach entertainments and swimming that they provided for tourists. This beach is located in west of island and visitors can get there by walking.
Overall, the development of this island specially in center and west shows that it can support a few hundred tourist in same time. They have fun and get relax during their stay.
(words 185)
Not bad
The following two maps represent an island before and after some services were developed for tourists welfare.
It can be seen that although the West part of the island has not been constructed yet, there are a large accommodation site in the middle and a smaller one in the east side of the island which the tents are connected to each other by footpath. Between these accommodations a restaurant has been constructed in the north, close to sea and below that a reception can be seen which is connected to the restaurant and the southern sea by vehicle tracks which is leaded to the pier in the southern sea where some pleasure boats are prepared as well. A swimming area is built in the western beach.
Overall the whole constructions which is focused on the center and east side provide a fantastic welfare for hundreds of tourists to visit and stay in the island for days and have fun.(159 words)
Dear John,
It was great to get your postcard yesterday and I am thrilled to hear you are happy with the new place.
As I told before, I have to leave my small town and move to a big city for the new job situation we had already discussed. Therefore I do not need my bicycle anymore as I will be much busier in this new situation and have no leisure time, by the way it is too far to bike from my house to the company. So I decided to sell it.
The bicycle is black, large size but lightweight, with a box on the back to carry stuff in. It has a yellow front light and a red back light. A well sounded horn was placed besides the gear.
There is no doubt that it would be useful for you whereas it has a convenient box which could hold all your stuffs you have to carry to work. I know how enthusiastic you are about biking to work and not using motor vehicles. By the way your office is near enough to your house so that you can bike easily everyday.
Let me know if you are interested and we will discuss the price.
Best wishes,
Siamak
درود
نمونه خوبی هست اما به هیچ وجه نباید نامه شما بالای ۲۰۰ واژه باشه.
حد مناسب ۱۷۵ واژه هست
سلام استاد
ببخشید در رایتینگ تسک۱ مثلا همین نامه که سه تا بولت داره باید حتما در سه داراگراف و به همون ترتیب بولت ها نوشته بشه؟ یعنی نمیشه در دل توضیح اینکه چرا دوچرخه رو نمیخوایم تشریحشم بکنیم که درواقع بولت دوم هست؟
درود
عذر میخوام. کامنت شما رو ندیدم و پاسخ رو دیر میفرستم.
البته این مورد رو در کلاس توضیح دادیم که ترتیب بولت ها اهمیتی نداره و میتونید به هر ترتیبی دوست دارید بنویسید ولی معمولا منطقی تر هست که به ترتیب بنویسید.
Dear Fatemeh
I hope you are well. I remember you are looking a bike and I have a convinient bike which I am selling. I don’t have much time for using . I think, it is a great bicycle and I would recommend you to see it and think to buy it.
I used to the biki to go to work and also I went to cycling instead of exercise but at the moment, I cant use it like befor because I change my job and I am working at home . Also I go to gym and work out there.
The bicycle related to a famous company and I bought it eround tree years ago. It is a really comfortable. Also the color is your faverit color, It is violet.
I am sure, you would like it because it is convinent and I know you are looking a sutibel bike and its color is your favorit too. I can let you have it at a special price.
Let me know if you are interested in purchasing it.
Best wishes
fatemeh
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Dear Zahra
It’s been a long time since we saw each other. As you know I used to biking at the weekends, but now I cannot ride it anymore. Recently I have a knee operation and doctor said to me it is not good for me to ride bicycle for a long time, so I decided to sell it.
I bought it last year, therefore it is in a great condition with no mechanical problems. It has a movement luggage carrier in a great color that everyone in one look would like it. The color of bicycle is white with some dark blue line in some parts. It is really beautiful.
I recommend it to you because you always wish to have one to do some exercise, so I think it is a fortune for you to have one for doing some biking, after all of that it makes me a chance to see you soon. Let me know about your decision.
Take care.
Your friend, Saba. (167 words)
درود
به نظر میرسه تعدادی از خطاهای شما مربوط به مبحث حال کامل هست. زحمت بکشید با دقت مطالعه بفرمایید. با کمی توجه و با درست به کار بردن این زمان میتونید نمره رایتینگ رو بالاتر ببرید.
There are two maps below that show an island with some different condition. At first, the island didn’t have any facilities but after a while, some tourist facilities are provided.
There were some trees that separated in the west and east side of the island that it has almost 200 meters square. Nearby the palm trees, some accommodations are built. A restaurant is made almost in north central of the island that there is a vehicle track to access to the reception that is located in the south direction of the restaurant and from there, there are some footpaths to accommodations that built in two side of the reception and the east-west side of the island. Also by another vehicle track people can go from the reception to a pier in the south sea of the island where the sailor and visitors can go sailing. In the western part of the island, an appropriate beach is provided and allocated to swimming for tourists to enjoy.
Overall, in this island, the tourist facilities are constructed and developed during the time. (179 words)
Two maps demonstrate variations in tropical island from first map to second map. There is several change befor and after the consruction of some facilities for tourist.(27)
In the first map, ther is not some facilities for tourists except a swimming area in the left of the island. While many changes can be seen in the second map. There are a lot of accommodation to stay and rest in the middle and west of island with good footpath way. There is also a restaurant in the north, near the sewiming area. Other important change is the construction of vehicle track to movment tourists from reception to restaurant and so reache from reception to pier. Another important variation is in the south of island where to make pier and a few boats can be seen for sailing. (109)
Overall, there are a good facilities for tourist in the second map that are enjoyable and some great changes can be seen among second map, especially the middle and south have more progress.(33) (169)
Tow maps show a small island before and after contraction some leisure facilities for tourists.
It appears that tow accommodation site have been made for tourists. These sites are on the two sides of the island. The only way to go through in each site is walking. In center of island there are a restaurant. This restaurant is between tow accommodation site. For access to this restaurant need to take a vehicle. The reception site is a few hundred meter to restaurant. For Boat contracted a pole in south of island. For access to it should take a vehicle too. The beach is in the west of island. footpath is the only way to go there. There are some palm tree in this island before and after construction.
overall, The for of construction show that this island prepared for tourists pleasure. Most on change are in east and center of the island. (152 words)
درود
با توجه به مشخص بودن پاسخ مورد نظر در تسک ۱ رایتینگ آکادمیک باید توجه بیشتری به سمپل داشته باشید و کوشش کنید تا جای ممکن شبیه بنویسید.
Two maps show the provided of convenience in an island. One map show a place before and after the constructiondeal with tourist.
There are one restaurant in the north of map near the sea. And each tourist can use vehicle track to rich the reception place in the middle of the island almost one hundred.on the other hands, its possible for everyone by footpath toward the west of map to rich the beach area and can enjoy the swimming for long time every day.although it seems that built several accommodation around the reception place while not far from for each tourists.so where a pair is other significant changes in the south of island for vessels.
Overall, it seems in the north ,middle and south of island are very important changes after the developed of tourist facilities and there are several good place for tourist to enjoy their pleaser time. 151 word
درود
بسیاری از خطاها از بی دقتی و چک نکردن ساختارها در دیکشنری و گوگل نتیجه شده اند. در تسک ۱ آکادمیک گزارش های نوشته شده توسط افراد مختلف کاملا شبیه به هم و یکسان هست و جایی برای انتخاب ساختارهای متفاوت وجود ندارد. بنابراین با بررسی دقیق نمونه های نوشته شده توسط مدرس یا سمپل های کتاب کوشش کنید تا جای ممکن شبیه به این موارد بنویسید.
Two maps depict a tropical island linearity with about one hundred square meters area which are before and after a time of development with leisure facilities for tourist. (27)
The southern pier is the main entrance to the island with some pleasure the boats, that connected with footpath and vehicle track to the reception building in the center of the land. The north of the reception is the restaurant building that toward the sea. There are six and nine the accommodations in west and east of reception that arranged into the separate group with a semicircular shape. The beach swimming is located at the western of the island. There are some palm trees in the western and eastern region of land, which seem to be untouched by change. (99)
Overall, the island is changed into tourist camp, for leisure time and activity which a lot of constructed in the central and western. (23)
۹۷۱ odd shahrivar
Most of experts have different opinions about educational system and the role of gender. Although some people believe mixed schools are kinder places for students, others think separate schools are better places for students. This essay will discuss both viewpoints. (40 words)
There are some reasons that people prefer to educate students in mixed school. First of all, most of girls and boys are encouraged to have communication together because they want to figure out of their feelings and ideas. This matter teaches them to know how they have to behave with opposite gender. Secondly, one of the aims of mixed schools are instructing girls and boys to have a good relationship, because they believe that having an appropriate relationships between girls and boys make them to be a sociable in society, however this is not approximately main factor for some people. (100 words)
On the other hand, some experts argue that separate schools are better place for girls and boys. First of all, many people think that a s_e_x_u_a_l abuse in separate schools are less than mixed schools, because most of students concentrate on their studies directly and prevent them from deflecting of their goals. Secondly, in separate schools students are comfortable in class because they have enough recognition each other, so it allows them to express their ideas easily and can have a discussion together in different subjects. It is obvious that separate schools motivate students to be an effective in teamwork and boosts their self-confidence. (104 words)
In conclusion, some believe mixed schools are better place for girls and boys, while others including me believe a separate schools will be effective for students. (26 words)
Education is one of the most important global issues that countries are rated base on it. Although some people believe that separate schools are more effective than mixed schools, others including me argue that mixed schools have more beneficial for children. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoint.(49 words)
Some people discuss that separate schools have better result than mixed schools. First of all, there are many distraction in mixed schools so students could not focus on their lessons and teachers waste their class time on silence students and talk to them for give their attention to the class. Second, experiences show that same s__e__xual can make better friendship with each other than opposite s__e__x. Girls have same behavior and interested so they can become close friend for each other and also boys are more active and noisy. They may be damage things in the school that girls do not like this at all. (105 words)
Others argue that mixed schools have a beneficial effects on the students. Firstly, when girls and boys create one group and all of them have a specific purpose for example work on project so they are forced to participate in project and in the continue they learn team working easily when they are child. Therefor mixed schools prepare them for the society. Secondly, there is more competition between girls and boys generally so students in mixed schools have more motivation to do their homework and participate in activity class to earn good marks. Not only they have competition in study their lessons but also they take tournament sport and physical education.(111 words)
In conclusion some consider that separated schools have more advantage for students than mixed schools, while others including me suppose that mixed schools are useful and prepare children for future life.(31 words)
it is a very important issue for parents how to keep students at school.although some people believe we should separate boys and girls from each other, others think we
should keep them together.(42)
mixed schools have some benefits for students. first of all there is a good opportunity for students to achieve more social experience by studying,playing and working together.secondly when they spend time together they can achieve an ability to have better understanding each other.
there are some benefits in separate schools. first of all when boys and girls are separated they can have more concentration and focus on their studies instead of hanging out or falling in love. secondly in separate schools girls have enough liberty for their affairs, they can wear more comfortable clothes and behave more convenient.(101)
in conclusion, some people including me think mixed schools are better for student benefits, while others think separate schools are more beneficial.(22)
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School education is one of the important issues that everyone is faced with it. Although, some think Separate schools are more efficient for girls and boys, others believe in the different way and they think mixed schools are better to educate. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (48 words)
Some people, believe that the separate school makes a better situation for students to educate. First of all, in some views it is true that they can have more concentration on their studying, so they have more chance of success in their education life without any wasting time. Secondly, in the separated school the teachers and students both are more comfortable, and the sensitivity that students have to attract others are less in comparison with mixed school, so they allocate more time to their lessons. As a result, they have a better opportunity to do better in their lessons. (100 words)
On the other side, some other people, think mixed schools have more beneficial for girls and boys in their education. First of all, these schools are a sample of society in a small size and being in such schools prepare female and male students for real mixed society. They can know about the abilities of each other and also understand better in work situation, life situation and so on. Secondly, these school’s environment can count as a stimulation for boys and girls to have considerable competition with one another in a good way and encourage them to study and work harder. (102 words)
In conclusion, some believe Separate schools are more efficient for the students, while others think mixed schools are better for girls and boys to educate.
Happiness can have a different meaning for everyone with the different age. Although some people believe that the teenage years are the happiest time, Others think that adult life brings more happiness. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (40)
Happiness can have a different meaning for everyone with the different age. Although some people believe that the teenage years are the happiest time, others have an idea that adult life brings more happiness. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints. (42)
Some people believe the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. First of all, the teenagers make friends easily because They are naturally curious about other people and aren’t afraid to ask questions. In the teenage years, the values of friends and friendship are very simple, they are sharing and express their feelings without fears of sarcasm by anyone that know that. Secondly, the teenagers spend a lot of happiest time with new friends replaced the family time as a source of advice. They do together any things and new experiences life to get done without worries parents. (101)
In other Hands, Some people have an idea that adult life is more happiest time. First of all, Adults make family and like to spend more time with their family and a few old friends so they have a more happy time to remember good memorials and special moments in their life. Secondly, The Adult people can make real friends and friendships that trust them aware and keep them for a long time, so they can relax and free mind to make a lot of happiest time. the old friends improve their lives, they are knowing each other to cut the small talk and that makes their happy. (109)
In conclusion, some people have an idea that adult years have more happy time, while other people believe that teenage years are the happiest time. (25)
Happiest time:
– Teenage years:
#have a Lot of New Friends
#Make friends easily
– Adult years:
# have a family and few old friends
#make real friends
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