دوره آنلاین آیلتس فروردین ماه 1400

دوره آنلاین آیلتس فروردین ماه 1400

دوره آنلاین آیلتس فروردین ماه 1400

دوره آنلاین آیلتس فروردین ماه 1400

صفحه پیش رو مربوط به دوره غیر حضوری آیلتس روزهای 2 شنبه 5 شنبه ساعت 6 تا 8 می باشد که در تاریخ 5 فروردین ماه 1400 آغاز میشود. در این صفحه تکالیف و توضیحات وارد شده و زبان آموزان رایتینگ ها و پرسش های خود را در بخش دیدگاه ها وارد خواهند کرد و از این راه با مدرس آیلتس آنلاین در تماس خواهند بود.

این دوره شامل دوره رایتینگ آیلتس نیز می باشد و زبان آموزان مجموعا 24 تصحیح کامل رایتینگ دریافت خواهند کرد. عزیزانی که نیازمند کلاس آنلاین اسپیکینگ آیلتس میتوانند علاوه بر خدماتی این کلاس به صورت جداگانه از جلسات خصوصی استاد با نمره 8.5 اسپیکینگ آیلتس بهره مند شوند. از تمامی زبان آموزان درخواست داریم حتما پیش از آغاز دوره صفحه سوالات متداول زبان آموزان را با دقت کامل مطالعه نمایند تا از طرح سوالات تکراری جلوگیری شود.

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دوره آنلاین آیلتس فروردین ماه 1400 – تکالیف

Assignments of the 6th and 7th Sessions

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 81 to 120 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 15 to 19  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Tactics for listening Basic unit 16 to 20 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Open Forum 1 Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Select Readings Pre intermediate Unit 5 6 7 8 9 10  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 6 and 7 از این صفحه ببینید

#6 and #7 of Most Common Grammatical Mistakes از اینجا ببینید

Writing Topic نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس را دقیق بررسی فرمایید

نمونه رایتینگ Average Time Spent School Children on TV Computer 

Writing Topic نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس را دقیق بررسی فرمایید

رایتینگ آیلتس Large Population Young Adults Older People Advantages

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Assignments of the 4th and 5th Sessions

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 51 to 80 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 10 to 14  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Tactics for listening Basic unit 10 to 15  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 9 to 15 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Select Readings Pre intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 4 and 5 از این صفحه ببینید

#4 and #5 of Most Common Grammatical Mistakes از اینجا ببینید

Writing Topic نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس را دقیق بررسی فرمایید

آموزش نوشتن Task 1 رایتینگ آیلتس

Writing Topic نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس را دقیق بررسی فرمایید

Tourists in Difficult Places Sample Writing Task 2

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Assignments of the 1st, 2nd and 3rd Sessions

Speaking Questions part 1 Questions 1 to 50 از این صفحه ببینید

Oxford Word Skills Intermediate Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Tactics for listening Basic unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Real Speaking and Listening 1 Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Select Readings Elementary Unit 1 2 3 4 5 6 7  چطور مطالعه کنم؟

Cambridge Grammar for IELTS Unit 1, 2 and 3 از این صفحه ببینید

#1, #2 and #3 of Most Common Grammatical Mistakes از اینجا ببینید

Writing Topic نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس را دقیق بررسی فرمایید

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Free Share Information

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Writing Topic  نمونه نوشته شده توسط مدرس را با دقت بررسی فرمایید نوشتن 2 پاراگراف اصلی 

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Writing Topic  چک لیست را ببینید نوشتن 2 پاراگراف اصلی 

Some people prefer to live in a big city. Others think it is better to live in a small town.

Discuss both views.

Big City
#Facilities
#Job opportunity

Small Town
#Less pollution
#Less Stress

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نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط مدرس 

Some people think it is better to live in a big city. First of all, there are more facilities in big cities. People can enjoy more facilities and services when they live in a big city because more people live there and as a result government spends more money in big city. There are big shopping malls and advanced public transport such as subway or rapid bus system but in small towns people only travel by taxis and traditional bus. Secondly, people who live in large modern cities can easily find a job. There are thousands of companies and factories, so they need many employees. Every day, there are new places and there is a chance to find a job. (120 words)

On the other hand, there are people who believe it is better to live in a small town. First of all, there is less pollution in small towns. Because there are only a few factories and a few cars in a town, air pollution is not a big problem and the environment is always clean. Secondly, people have less stress in such places. People have a simple life and they do not want a lot of things and as a result they do not need to work long hours every day. Moreover, cost of living is not very high, so people have more time to spend with their families or have fun. (112 words)

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دوره آنلاین آیلتس فروردین ماه 1400 – لینک های سودمند

نحوه استفاده درست از منابع آیلتس در این دوره – آغاز کار با کتاب ها

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200 نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

نمونه سوال اسپیکینگ آیلتس با جواب (part 1)

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بایگانی نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آیلتس سری کتاب های Cambridge IELTS

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چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آیلتس جنرال و آکادمیک Task 2

چک لیست نوشتن رایتینگ آزمون آِیلتس آکادمیک و جنرال

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آموزش گرامر زبان انگلیسی از مبتدی تا پیشرفته

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همه چیز درباره امتحان و مدرک آیلتس – به زبان ساده!

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Soheil Sa _ Farvardin 1400سارا شاهرخیمهدیه شیرزادشهریار فراستپیام اکرمی پور آخرین نویسندگان دیدگاه
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اطلاع رسانی کن
پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

درود. برای تمرین اسپیکینگ، میشه از فایل‌های اسپیکینگی که برای خریداری گذاشتید، استفاده کنیم؟ چونکه تعدادی از سوالاتی که به عنوان تکلیف داده شدن، نمونه‌ای برای پاسخ ندارن و بهتر نیست که از الان با فایل‌های اسپیکینگ‌ شما کار کنیم؟ اگر بخوایم از رکوردهای شما به عنوان الگو استفاده کنیم، باید چطور کارش کنیم؟ چون نوشته نشده که کدام فایل مربوط به پارت یک، دو و یه هست و بر اساس سال طبقه بندی شدن.

پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

سلام عرض می‌کنم. خواستم بپرسم که فقط باید در مورد بیست کلمه اول هر ده درس جمله و کالوکیشن بنویسیم یا اینکه با تمامی چهل کلمه هر درس کار کنیم؟

زهرا بابایی
مهمان
زهرا بابایی

It is fact that in many countries the young population increase considerably, this issue create a situation that have many advantages and disadvantages. The many advantages when the percentage of younger citizen increase. First of all growing population adapts better new condition in any country and youth can be a positive force for development. Productive workforce who are ready to learn quiqly and work, can help improve the economic situation . Secondly we can deny that energy level of young people higher than the older people. And also because of that the get illness , less than older people .… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

Nowadays, young people in some countries outnumber the elderly who live in other countries. In my opinion, there are pros and cons for each situation. (25) There are some advantages when youth populations increase. First of all, some countries can have youth populations who are energetic to improve the economic situation. Their motivation is higher than an aging population and, they are more active to work for long hours. Secondly, some jobs need hard-working workforce who have the physical power to overcome them. For instance, doing arduous occupations such as working as a fireman, policeman, or so on is one… ادامه مطلب »

Soheil Sa _ Farvardin 1400
مهمان
Soheil Sa _ Farvardin 1400

با سلام خدمت استاد گرامی. میخواستم به اطلاع شما برسانم که در سایت، در بخش اسپکینگ پارت اول، از سوال 176 تا 185 تکراری می باشد. (دو سری تکرار سوال 171 تا 175)

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

درود آقای ابولقاسمی. ببخشید آیا این جمله ها مناسب هستند؟ There are also some disadvantages for the countries when youth populations outnumbers aging people. First of all, higher crime rates is one the most important issues. Obviously, youth populations do immoral and criminal actions and, this could be a big problem for all of the citizens and put their life and possessions at risk. For example, they rob money and gold coins from banks, murder citizens and damage their cars or motorcycles. Secondly, countries may face many problems such as massive unemployment. If government do not invest enough budget for… ادامه مطلب »

زهرا بابایی
مهمان
زهرا بابایی

با عرض سلام خدمت استاد گرامی
آیا جملات زیر برای مقدمه درست هستند؟
It is fact in many countries, the young population considerabaly increas. This issue creat a situation that have many advantages and disadvantages.

سارا شاهرخی
مهمان
سارا شاهرخی

سلام می سه ببینید این برای مقدمه درسته؟
Many countries have a large number of young
populations. While some people believe having more young adults is accompanied with massive advantages,others maintain the idea not only it can not beneficial, but also it has lots of drawbacks

مهدیه شیرزاد
مهمان
مهدیه شیرزاد

Two maps illustrate fundamental changes in a certain island before and after building various leisure facilities. (16 words) Firstly, as can be seen the island lacked basic amenities prior to construction and there was not any tourist attraction except some natural beauties such as a small beach in the western area and some palm trees on the both sides of the island. (44 words) In the second map, a reception has been constructed in the middle of the region, which is connected to a restaurant and a pier in the north and south by a vehicle track respectively. In addition,… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

درود آقای ابولقاسمی. آیا این جمله ها مناسب هستند؟ Increasing community of young people may bring a lot of advantages First of all, some countries can have youth populations who are energetic to improve the economic situation. Their motivation is higher than an aging population and, they are more active to do jobs for long hours. Secondly, some jobs need hard-working workforce who have the physical power to overcome them. Doing arduous occupations such as working as a fireman, policeman, or so on is one of the most important reasons for having a youth population in every country. If youth… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

سلام عرض میکنم. ببخشید این جمله ها درست هستند؟
Nowadays, young people in some countries outnumber the elderly who live in other countries. In my opinion, there are pros and cons for each situation.

زهرا بابایی
مهمان
زهرا بابایی

The two maps depict an island in two different times, one before and the other after the expansion of some necessary services and facilities for tourists to enjoy such as reception and restaurant and so many accommodations and boats . It appears that in the middle of maps there is a reception have been built which are connected to a restaurant that have been constructed in the northern area of the map, by a vehicle track . The reception was connected to the piear in the southern part by a car truck. Conversely, there are two sites in the eastern… ادامه مطلب »

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

احتراما این متن جایگزین متن قبلی گردد. اصلاحات جزپی اعمال گردیده است. These maps are show change in the island face after the building the many types of facilities for development of the tourism industry. The maps reveal that construction of facilities made considerable change in island face. The majority of change happened in West part of island. One of the most important change is building a big restaurant in the North of the island. It seems that this restaurant is the biggest building on the island. Other facilities such as reception building and tourist accommodations are created in front… ادامه مطلب »

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

These maps are show change in the island face after the building the many types of facilities for development of tourism industry. The maps reveals that construction of facilities made considerable change in island face. The majority of change was happen in West part of island. One of the most important change is building a big restaurant in the North of the island. It is seems that this restaurant is the biggest building in island. Other facilities such as reception building and tourist’s accommodations are created in front of restaurant. Also the restaurant is very near to sea. The other… ادامه مطلب »

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

با سلام و احترام. احتراما این جملات برای بخش اول رایتینگ ۱ نوشته شده است.
These maps are show change in the island face after the building the many types of facilities for development of tourism industry.
The maps reveals that construction of facilities made considerable change in island face.
The majority of change was happen in West part of island

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

؟ درود آیا باید برای کلماتی مثل agricultural و archeologist که در دیکشنری مثالی ندارن، از اینترنت مثال پیدا کنیم؟ و یا مثالهایی برای فرم دیگه این کلمات مثلا agriculture و archeology و … که در دیکشنری موجود هستن و مثال دارن استخراج کنیم؟

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

The two given maps show before and also after construction of some facilities in an island for tourists. (18) These two maps depict two regions which have constructed for tourists accommodation. They were linked together and other sites with footpath. In the one island can be obviously seen there are a lot of facilities. There is a reception in the center of this island which is approachable by a vehicle track and it has linked to the other crucial facilities such as the restaurant in the north and the pier in the south. (74) On another map, some facilities such… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

درود. ببخشید این جمله ها صحیح هستند؟
On another map, some facilities such as a restaurant, reception, accommodation, boats and so on did not exist. There were just some natural attractions like palm trees, a sea and so on.

All in all, it appears the island is altered compare to before construction and, each part from north to south or west to east are good places for tourists who want to enjoy their holiday.

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

سلام عرض میکنم. خواستم بپرسم که علتش چیه که سوال من در این صفحه ثبت نمیشه؟

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

agriculture و archeology

شهریار فراست
مهمان
شهریار فراست

استاد این جملات درست هستن برای بادی

In the first map, there are not any facilities for tourists to enjoy except a little beach on the left side of the map, However, on the second map there is a reception building in the center of the island and a restaurant is top of the reception in the north of the map. There are so many accommodations for tourist who wants residence in the islands.

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

درود. ببخشید این جملات مناسب هستند؟
The two given maps show before and also after construction of some facilities in an island for tourists.

These two maps depict two regions which have constructed for tourists accommodation. They were linked together and other sites with footpath.

In the equipped island, it can be obviously seen there are a lot of facilities.

There is a reception in the center of this island which is approachable by a vehicle track and it has linked to the other crucial facilities such as the restaurant in the north and the pier in the south.

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

سلام آقای ابولقاسمی. این مقدمه مناسب هست؟
The two maps relate to different features of an island. One map depicts the previous appearance of an island and, the other illustrates after building.

پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

درود آقای ابولقاسمی. من بیشتر از نصف جمله‌های رایتینگ رو در اینجا ارسال کردم و اشکالی نداشتن اما برای رایتینگم فیدبک کلی گرفتم و نمیدونم اشکالات من شامل چه مواردی هست!

زهرا بابایی
مهمان
زهرا بابایی

In the present time, most of people travel to places with difficult situation around the world. Such as Sahara desert and Antarctica. These trips have many benefits and disadvantages. To visit uncharted territories with difficult condition have numerous advantages. First of all for most of youngsters this locations are enormous excitement as compared to easy ones. Also they want to participate in different types of dangerous activities. Secondly, by putting themselves in to the hard envirment , they can learn how to use their instructs for servive. On the other hand , traveling to these places have a lot of… ادامه مطلب »

مهدی اخلاقی
مهمان
مهدی اخلاقی

Many tourists in the world prefer to travel to difficult places and they are interested of these places. In this text, the advantages and disadvantages of difficult places will be explained.(31 Words) There are benefits to traveling to difficult places. First of all, tours to difficult places is cost-effective, of course it depend on the tourist. there is not any restaurants or fast food and they mainly have to cook for themselves and it is much cheaper than a eat out at restaurants. Also, tourists do not need to pay high fees for the hotel and the reward , they… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

These days, tourists are interested in visiting some areas where situations are difficult. Although visiting these places brings advantages, there are some drawbacks which should be mentioned. (27) Tourists who are visiting unusual and exotic places achieve plenty of profits. First of all, they obtain more experiences and knowledge. Some researchers and people are interested in visiting these places for achieving scientific information about the interesting and numerous facts in our world. Therefore, these are impressive regions for enthusiastic people who want to take notes and learning about them. Secondly, tourists go to fantastic and amazing area to enjoy taking… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

درود جناب ابولقاسمی. ببخشید این جملات درست هستند؟

In areas such as the Antarctic and Sahara desert, exotic aquatic and terrestrial creatures like snakes, jellyfish, sharks, and so on endanger people and make many unpredictable conditions

Heating and various cooling appliances such as air-condition and so on are crucial so limited range of facilities is a common problem in such places

, although tourists who visit remote areas enjoy exotic creatures and scenery, they should deal with difficulties and face unpredictable situations

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

درود آقای ابولقاسمی. این جملات درست هستند؟
. Some researchers and people are interested in visit these places due to achieving scientific information about the facts that exist in our world

tourists go to fantastic and amazing area to enjoy taking photos of some unusual places. For instance, they take photos of huge mountains, melted lava, geometric stones, and some rare objects and share them on social media.

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

سلام آقای ابولقاسمی. این دو جمله درست هستند؟
These days, tourists are interested in visiting some areas where situations are difficult. Although visiting these places brings advantages, there are some drawbacks which should be mentioned.

زهرا بابایی
مهمان
زهرا بابایی

Nowadays knowledge increases by sharing information in modern world . although some people think that scientific and academic and business data should be shared, others believe that some data is extremely valuable and it is better keep this information. Some people believe that sharing data is very useful. First of all there is no doubt that sharing information has many advantages for people. Actually existing free data that is shared on the internet provide easy access for all of the researchers and students . Also they spend less time for finding necessary information . secondly many student in all over… ادامه مطلب »

شهریار فراست
مهمان
شهریار فراست

These days Sharing information can help people to make quick progress in research and technology. Although Some people feel that information can help advance people all around the world, others believe we should hide information in private. on the one hand, development in scientific research or education would happen rapidly if we share information. The fundamental cause for this belief is that education research and other information in business explanations will get improved when more people have access to the information, we all have limited capacity and resources to research this limitation is not there, when people have so many… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

Data sharing is one of the most important and complicated issues in our modern world. Although some people think maximum data sharing is possible and a good idea, others believe some information is too crucial for sharing freely. (38) Some people think sharing a lot of information on the Internet is very useful. First of all, unrestricted free data that is shared on the Internet by anyone or companies, facilitates accessing new information for researchers and people who need to seek out modern science. For instance, scholars can freely study academic texts about their majors and improving their knowledge. Secondly,… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

سلام جناب ابولقاسمی آیا این جملات درست هستند؟ و آیا به جای consider میشه بگیم pay attention to؟
. If we do not consider rules and their right, they might immigrate to another country due to living in a suitable condition

because of dangerous inventions such as creating huge bombs and rockets that have effects on our environment and life, we should restrict sharing certain free data that is related to immoral decisions of terrorists.

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

با سلام و ادب، جملات زیر برای بخش مقدمه نوشته شدند. رهین منت خواهد بود بررسی فرمائید.
Nowadays, a large amount of information is generated by scientists around the world-
One of the most important issues is existing a protocol on how much we can share the information-
Some people argue that information can share without any limitations-
– While some others believe that it is better that put some limitations on information sharing

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

سلام آقای ابولقاسمی، خسته نباشید. این دو جمله درست هستند؟
existing free information on websites is one of the best methods for absorbing poor students and attracting their attention to studying

they do not have to give up studying or expending exorbitant expenditure for buying some books.

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

سلام عرض می کنم ببخشید این سه جمله درست هستند؟
Some people think sharing large volumes of information on the Internet is very useful.
scholars can freely study academic texts about their majors and improve their knowledge.
unrestricted free data that is shared on the Internet by anyone or companies, facilitates accessing new information for researchers and people who need to seek out

پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

سلام ببخشید این جمله درسته؟

Although some individuals think maximum data sharing is possible and a good idea, others Believe some information are too crucial for sharing freely.

پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

سلام ببخشید دو سوال دارم. یکی اینکه این کلیدواژه‌ها مناسب هستن؟
Sharing information

Maximum sharing

#updating new information
#available free data

Sharing with limitation

#right of copyright
#sensitive information

و سوال بعد اینه که برای ایده‌پردازی‌های رایتینگ، از منابع و رایتینگ‌های موجود استفاده کرد اما جملات و کلمات متفاوت باشن؟

پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

سلام آقای ابولقاسمی. رایتینگ teenage years رو امروز قبل از ساعت دوازده ظهر ارسال کردم اما فیدبک دقیق دریافت نکردم و نمیدونم ایراداتم چی هست.

زهرا بابایی
مهمان
زهرا بابایی

Happiness is very hard to define and varies from person to person. According to another group , adult part of the life is happier part of our lives. first of all in adulthood , people are independency and they do not need the support of others. For example they have not financial dependency because of that they have job. Also they are not forced to take permission for whatever they want to do .Secondly, people in their adulthood stage can experience new sense of happiest that they have not in their teen ages stage. For example when they start to… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی پور

Some people consider and argue which the teenage years are the happiest period in over people’s life. First of all, it seems teenagers have more free time than persons of mature age and, it means there are lots of activities to do for themselves. As a result, they can do activities more than adults in their free time such as, playing online games or doing sports with their friends. Secondly, others think being optimistic and cheerful in teenage years is much more possible than in mature years because they do not have to take responsibility for their families and friends.… ادامه مطلب »

ساراشاهرخی
مهمان
ساراشاهرخی

سلام ببخشید من میخوام کلاس گرامر بعد کلاس باشم ولی چون ی دختر چهار ساله دارم بعد از دوساعت خسته میشه و نمیگذاره برای کلاس گرامر حضور فعالی داشته باشم ولی در کل میتونه برای من مفید باشه اگه امکان داره با این شرایط میتوتم ثبت نام کنم؟

پیام
مهمان
پیام

Some people consider and argue which the teenage years are the happiest period in over people’s life. First of all, it seems teenagers have more free time than persons of mature age and, it means there are lots of activities to do for themselves. As a result, they can do activities more than adults in their free time such as, playing online games or doing sports with their friends. Secondly, others think being optimistic and cheerful in teenage years is much more possible than in mature years because they do not have to take responsibility for their families and friends.… ادامه مطلب »

sara shahrokhi
مهمان
sara shahrokhi

Teenagers enjoy spending their time trying new things
این جمله گرامری درسته؟

sara shahrokhi
مهمان
sara shahrokhi

There are some supporters believing firmly teenagers have the happiest times. First of all, their ultimate desire to obtain goals makes them more satisfied in their lifetime. The advocators assert because of being bursting with energy, the adolescence can achieve breakthrough accomplishments which provide the state of being happy. This endless energy could use to find their abilities and aptitudes that guarantee their career and personal life. Apart from that, they have abundant free time without real responsibilities to devote their genuine desire, true hobbies and social life that adults have limitation and drawback due to the heavy responsibilities. Secondly,… ادامه مطلب »

مهدی اخلاقی
مهمان
مهدی اخلاقی

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives. First of all, teenagers do not have a heavy responsibility in their lives and they have few things to worry about. They are not required to earn money or support a family. In other words, not only do they not give money to someone like their own family, but they also take money from their parents. Secondly, they have more free time hanging out with friends and enjoy a carefree life. Moreover, Teenagers have a daily routine of sleeping, playing and enjoying their free time. Teenagers are… ادامه مطلب »

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

با سلام و احترام
این جملات برای free time در teenageنوشته شدند. رهین منت خواهد بود اعلام نظر فرمائید.

Many people believe that teenage is the happiest period in a life-time-
.-They are not forced to work and mostly support by family members.
Also, They have less important duties or tasks that can finish them fastly- and save their time
In this regard, teenagers can use their extra times that they have during- the day to play with their friends

sara shahrokhi
مهمان
sara shahrokhi

بعد از copy paste از ورد به این جا ساختار به هم میریزه حتما باید در این چهارچوب نوشته شه یا میشه کار دیگه ای کرد؟

sara shahrokhi
مهمان
sara shahrokhi

و سوال دومم اینه که در انشای اگزمینر نمره 9 کلمه ی fireworkچندین بار ذکر شده مخصوصا بارگراف اخر که معنیش رو در این جمله متوجه نمی شم.

sara shahrokhi
مهمان
sara shahrokhi

سلام این باراگراف اول انشای دومی هست که دادید میشه ببینید ساختارو نگارش چه ایراداتی داره

sara shahrokhi
مهمان
sara shahrokhi

There are some supporters believing firmly teenagers have the happiest times. First of all, their ultimate desire to obtain goals makes them more satisfied in their lifetime. The advocators assert because of being bursting with energy, the adolescence can achieve breakthrough accomplishments which provide the state of being happy. This endless energy could use to find their abilities and aptitudes that guarantee their career and personal life. Apart from that , they have abundant free time without real responsibilities to devote their genuine desire, true hobbies and social life that adults have limitation and drawback due to the heavy responsibilities.… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

سلام جناب ابولقاسمی. متاسفانه من برای هر پاراگراف رایتینگ جلسه اول ۵۰ کلمه نوستم و شما گفتید که باید برای هر پاراگراف ۱۰۰ کلمه بنویسم، میشه بعد از جلسه سوم تحویل داده بشه؟

الهه گودرزی
مهمان
الهه گودرزی

Most of the people prefer to live in a big cities. In fact there are many facilities in big cities. The population is more than small town , so the demands increase too.there are many developed hospitals, gyms, institus and spacialists, so people can progress more fast and easily.the second Strong point is job opportunity as every one knowes the population is large, so they have more needs.so it is a good opportuity for the government and rich people to investment,so it is more successful to run a business. There are many factories and companies which need people to work… ادامه مطلب »

sara shahrokhi
مهمان
sara shahrokhi

Some people believe that living in the big cities will give them big opportunities to get a better job, health service, education, and other facilities such as recreational center and shopping mall. On the contrary, others maintain the idea that living in a small town not only recovers and refreshes mind and spirit, but also it is beneficial for physical and mental health, in other words, small cities have some advantages including the lack of pollution problem, mental stress and overcrowding. To begin with, having a qualified education and other standard amenities is an important reason attracting people to big… ادامه مطلب »

پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

Some people believe living in a big city is a good idea. In terms of this opinion, facilities are an important issue due to attract people to big cities. There are more and developed hospitals, bridges, museums, and etcetera. Also, they can achieve crucial jobs because there are a lot of companies and factories. However, certain people consider staying and living in small cities has more advantages than living in large towns. Because of existing fewer vehicles, pollution is lower and individuals are healthier. One of the most issues that bring people to a small town is less noise and… ادامه مطلب »

مهدی اخلاقی
مهمان
مهدی اخلاقی

Some people may choose to live in big cities. First of all, there is infrastructure. In a big city, there will be excellent transportation system. People will be able to go wherever they want. The quality of roads, bridges and buildings will be good. Even if they get damaged The government will rebuild or repair them as soon as possible since it is a city. Also There are factories and companies that have a positive impact on employment. Secondly , people who live in a big city will have a lot of facilities and services. There are hospitals, educational institutions… ادامه مطلب »

زهرا بابایی
مهمان
زهرا بابایی

Some people think that a big city is better than a small town for living.first of all there are more facilities in big city.in fact big cities are usually more economically developed. in big city we are many banks ,markets , shopping and also there are many important hospitals and the best university . also in big cities we find more options to go out to have fun. secondly , there are variety job opportunity in big city and people can find jobs easier in .this place than in the small town because there are many factories and companies that… ادامه مطلب »

الهه
مهمان
الهه

Most of the people prefer to live in a big cities. In fact there are many facilities in big cities. The population is more than small town , so the demands increase too.there are many developed hospitals, gyms, institus and spacialists, so people can progress more fast and easily.the second Strong point is job opportunity as every one knowes the population is large, so they have more needs.so it is a good opportuity for the government and rich people to investment,so it is more successful to run a business. There are many factories and companies which need people to work… ادامه مطلب »

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

Many people believe that living in big cities has many advantages. Overall, People in big cities have a high income. Because living in a big city provides more opportunities to earn extra money. People in big cities have more chance to find a good job with a high salary. Also, most people in big cities work two part-time jobs. That means people in these cities can get two more times more money than people in small cities. Also, people in big cities have more access facilities. They can go to big malls or shopping centers. People in big cities can… ادامه مطلب »

Maryam Maleki
مهمان
Maryam Maleki

Some people believe that it is better to live in a big city. First of all, there are more opportunities for job. It’s one of the most important reasons for people to live in a big city. People with different skills can find their intended job in big cities much easier than small towns. Salaries are usually higher, the causes the level of public welfare is rising. Secondly, there are so many facilities in big cities which makes people lives mush easier. people can find all thing that they want faster than small towns, such as easy access to public… ادامه مطلب »

Soheil Sa
مهمان
Soheil Sa

Nowadays, most people prefer living in the big city. First of all, one of the important issues in the big city is medical services. In the big town, there are numerous hospitals and clinics also the presence of doctors who specialize in various fields is one of the best advantages of the big city. While in the small town there are fewer doctors. Secondly, shopping malls have always been a place to meet the needs of the people. Nevertheless, equipped shopping malls have been replaced by small local shops also some of the major centers have amusement parks and amenities… ادامه مطلب »

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

These sentences writing for “more free time” in small town.
Because they didn’t spend more time on work or a part-time job-
They didn’t stay in heavy traffic or driving to get home or work-
In this regard, they have more extra time to stay with family or friends-

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

These sentences writing for low cost in small cities.
People in small cities can receive services at a lower cost-
– They didn’t spend a lot of money on transportation
– In most cases, people in small-town can find cheap goods and foods to buy

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

این جملات هم برای facilities نوشتم. با تشکر
People in big cities can easily access to good health centers and receive
high quality services
The can use modern and comfortable transportation systems
Children in big cities can play in big and modern parks.

پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

سلام جناب ابولقاسمی. خواستم در مورد خرید یکی از مجموعه‌های شما سوال کنم. آیا تمامی ۶۰۰ فایل اسپیکینگ که توسط شما پاسخ داده شده در حد نمره ۸ و دارای متن هستند و به صورت مساوی، سه بخش یعنی پارت یک، دو و سه رو پوشش میدن؟

سالار سلطانی
مهمان
سالار سلطانی

سلام و وقت بخیر استاد ارجمند.
من این جملات را برای high income در شهرهای بزرگ نوشتم. رهین منت خواهد بود اعلام نظر فرمائید. با تشکر
Because living in a big city provides more opportunities to earn extra money
People in big cities has more chance to find good job with high salary
Also most of people in big cities working two part time jobs

مهدی اخلاقی
مهمان
مهدی اخلاقی

There is a wide variety of options that people can choose based on their income and needs.
درود فراوان، جناب آقای مهندس
میخوام بگم : تنوع زیادی وجود دارد که مردم میتوانند براساس درآمد و نیاز خود انتخاب کنند.

جملاتی نظیر : greater variety of choices هم هست ولی از نظر ساختار احساس میکنم فارسی نوشتم. لطفا بنده را راهنمایی بفرمایید . ممنون

الهه
مهمان
الهه

سلام تکالیف این هفته رو میشه بگید

پیام اکرمی‌پور
مهمان
پیام اکرمی‌پور

سلام جناب ابولقاسمی. اگر درست اطلاع داشته باشم، در این ترم کلا ۷۰ فایل اسپیکینگ تصحیح میشه. آیا باید برای تکالیف هفته اول، ۳۰ فایل یک دقیقه‌ای به صورت جدا ارسال کنیم و از این سی فایل چند تاش به صورت رندوم تصحیح میشه؟ تصحیح ۷۰ فایل اسپیکینگ به لحاظ تقسیم بندی بر اساس تعداد تصحیح هفتگی به چه صورتی هست؟ با تشکر.