دوره آنلاین آمادگی آیلتس آبان ماه ۱۳۹۷

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۲۸ در ۰۴:۲۲

   Sahand

the level of freedom that children should be given has always been a challenge . While some people believe that children should not be permitted to make decision on every day issues , others believe that offsprings must have the right to make choices about matters which shape their future.48

Allowing children to make their decision can have positive effect on their character. First of all, helping children to make decision early regarding simple matters such as food, cloths or toys will develop their personality . And as result when they become adult will be able to choose their education and work field. Secondly, making choices on their own aids them gain confidence.which leads to being more mature and responsible. If a child makes his / her decision will learn to adjust to the consequences of those decisions and this helps them to gain great self-confidence .94

On the other hand , letting children to choose whatever they want has its own drawbacks . First of all , children are not mature enough and they should be restricted from making decision about every matter specially important choices.giving them permission to make choices can result in development of a selfish attitude . And as a result of fulfilling every desire of children , they will get used to making wrong choices. Secondly offsprings making their choices can remain immature despite growing up. and as a result we will have immature adults who are not prepared to handle tough situation.100

In conclusion , a balance should be kept to permit children to make decision and they should be helped feel free and independent but not to the limit that makes them selfish. I believe that it is essential to teach offsprings to be able to make wright decisions and be responsible of consequences of their choices. 55

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۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۲۴ در ۰۹:۴۱

   Nima Da

The maps demonstrate the current and planned future Islip town center.

At first, the town center is expanded around a main road, which extends from the west to the east. There are many shops to the north and the south of the main road. Although it is mainly included in the countryside in the north, a big space is occupied by housing in the south and limited by a park in the south-east and a school in the south-west. Both of them are linked to the main road by side roads.

After development, there is a circular street goes around the city center, and contain a duplex carriageway. There is a pedestrians crossing in the middle part of the main road. The southern part of Islip does not big changes except the park has shrink, but the northern part changes significantly. The northern shops have replaced respectively with the bus station, shopping center and a car park.

Overall, it is clear that a pedestrian road is designed for shopping and housing space, while a road for vehicles is designed to frame this area.

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۲۴ در ۰۰:۲۹

   الهام

these maps below indicate that the islip town will change in the future.
In northern part of city,there are many shops also between shops is a main road and in middle of city is housing at the moment .
In future ,in northern part of city will be made one pedestrians also above it will be bus station m shopping center and car park also there will be new housing.
In the middle of map will be made many shops and new housing will be under the shops ,

In the sourthern part of city ,there are housing but there is no road ,there is one school only indeed in the eastern part of town is a big park,
certainly,in the future there will be made one big dual carriageway for comfortable of people in the sourthern part.
The housing will be under the dual carriage way also one school is there place,in the earthern part of cityis one small park .many housing and new housing are between shops and dual carriage way ,

overall, the islip town will be fasilities for people that they will life comfortable also islip town develops . . 180

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۲۲ در ۰۷:۵۰

   Sahand

The maps illustrate the present time and developed plans of Islip town centre.13

There are a countryside ,shops and a main road in the Northern part of the town centre at the moment.There will be a dual carriageway instead countryside in developed plan.A bus station ,new housing and a car park will be constructed in developed plan and also , for people’s comfort and safety main road will be replaced with a pavement.61

Housing ,a school and a park exist in southern part of Islip town centre at the moment .More houses will be stablished in developed plan and all part of town centre will be connected to each other via a dual carriageway . And existing park will become smaller.47

Overall, as it is shown ,Islip town centre will be crowded and also housing will considerably increase . Everyone will benefit from the facilities such as car park and sidewalk except park ,which will get smaller in developed plan.38

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۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۲۱ در ۱۱:۴۳

   Amin Khani

Worldwide, there are over one million fast food restaurants. Although some people believe that increasing popularity of fast foods as a meal can have their advantages and can play a positive role in the world, but others are opposed to this idea. This essay will examine both of these viewpoints.
Fast food consumption can have some advantages in the world. First of all, junk foods are usually offered anytime and everywhere at very low cost. This kind of foods can satisfy many hungers in the short term and it can help reduce the number of hungers all over the world. Also, people have more choices of foods over than before and they can taste more and more. Secondly, there are the large numbers of fast food chains restaurants in the world that provide a lot of jobs which help reduce unemployment. Also, fast food can be one of the most important factors in tourist attractions. For instance, there are over 100,000 Mc Donald restaurants in USA which have been created at least over one million jobs. these condition help bring economic prosperity.
Nevertheless, there are some important reason which explain that junk foods are not healthy for people. First of all, these foods have negative effects on physical health. Excess calories from fast-food meals and fewer vitamins and minerals can cause high weight gain. In addition, most fast food, including drinks that contain lots of sugar. These may lead toward obesity and cancer risk. Secondly, increasing in population of patients could cause economic damage. In this situation, a large number of hospitals and facilities are needed to treat them. Also inappropriate nutrition affects brain function by triggering memory impairment, which lead to reduce performances of people. (286)

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۲۱ در ۰۲:۴۱

   Nima Da

Consuming frequent fast food meals has increased significantly among people, especially young adult these years. Although, it has a few benefits, there are many drawbacks. This essay will examine both positive and negative aspects of this issue.

On the one hand, there are some advantages for using fast food. First of all, perhaps It is convenient and easy to prepare that it has made so popular. By the way Fast food is usually cheap and prepared without special skill and easy to eat for consumers. Also It can be available to buy anywhere. Secondly, Consumption of fast food does not take much time hence it saves your time. Many of people who are busy at work, usually prefer to take such food. As I said earlier, young people and probably children are more interested to use fast food because of these reasons.

On the other hand ,Having fast food has many undesirable consequences, as I will mention. First of all, it is clear that consuming fast food to excess lead to health problems for instance, hypertension or blood pressure due to sodium and cholesterol which itself causes some consequences such as heart disease and in some cases result in digestive diseases. Secondly, Eating fast foods, like hamburgers and chips will increase the weight of consumers considerably because it has a lot of fat , salt and etc. Accordingly it does not contain nutrient material so It cannot provide the needs of consumers.

In conclusion, I am a strong advocate of this approach and believe the fast food contain some dispensable materials and it cannot supplies the Nutrient to the body. However, in some cases it has a few advantages.279

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۱۷ در ۰۹:۱۵

   Amin Khani

The table illustrates the number of people visiting Ashdown Museum before and after it was repaired and the pie charts provided reveals some striking comparison between the level of satisfaction of visitor during the same two periods.
Clearly, 74000 visitors made a visit to Ashdown Museum in the year before refurbishment. However this number increased considerably after the repair by 92000 visitors.
Moreover it is evident from the pie charts that before the repair, just a minority of respondent to the survey (15%) was very satisfied and only 30 percent of them decided on satisfied in the survey. However, these numbers rose to 35 and 40 percent respectively after repair. Also a high percentage of visitors (50%) were dissatisfied or very dissatisfied to visit Ashdown Museum before refurbishment but, after repair the total percentage showed a decline in the number of 20 percent. During both two periods, five percent of visitors selected “no response” item in the survey.
Overall, the consequences of survey show that the number of dissatisfied visitors to Ashdown Museum dropped considerably.(175)

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۱۶ در ۲۲:۱۵

   Nima Da

The table below illustrates sum of numbers of people who visited Ashdown museum within after and before a reconstruction. The two pie charts show the percentages of visitors satisfaction during these two periods.

According to table the number of visitors who went to ashdown museum was 74000 within the year before refurbishment however it has increased markedly to 92000 during the year after renovation.

The percentages of (satisfied),(very satisfied) and( dissatisfied) in two pie charts were contained more than 80 percent in sum. Thus the number of (very satisfied) was 15% and it increased to 35% in second period also the number of (satisfied) was 30% in first period that it rose to 40% in second period. But the number of (dissatisfied) has decreased considerably from 40% to 15% in first period in comparison with the after changes.

The label of (very satisfied)and (no response) contained approximately 10% together in pie charts that did not change significantly after renovation. The percentage of (very dissatisfied) was 10% that is decreased to 5%. Also the number of ( no response) was 5 and remained until changes.

Overall, the percentage of visitors’ satisfaction improved in compare with the next period also the number of visitors to museum have increased after the repair.

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۱۵ در ۰۵:۳۹

   Sahand

The table and charts illustrate outcomes of the surveys , the level of satisfaction of visitors and number of people visited Ashdown Museum in the year before and after refurbishment.29

In the year before refurbishment 74.000 people visited Ashdown Museum and this number increased an reached 92.000 visitors in the year after refurbishment.24

Dissatisfied was 40% in the year before and this number dramatically decreased to 15% in the year after refurbishment. Also very satisfied from 10% in first period fell to 5% in year after renovation.34

However ,satisfied and very satisfied were 15% and 30% respectively but both had an increase and these numbers reached 35% and 40% respectively over two -year period.

Although , most of the sectors experienced substantial changes but , no respond remained stable with 5% in both periods.

Overall , although number of Ashdown Museum visitors had an increase but surveys results illustrate that ,refurbishment has not brought satisfactory and positive changes.

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۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۱۴ در ۰۹:۲۹

   azadeh esmaeili

The young population directly impact on the fate of their countries. In the last few years, the number of young people in comparison with the elder is increased. I want to explain both sights of the benefit and drawback in the following.
If the most population of the countries are adults, they will face with many older people in the future. Firstly, the government costs will increase due to the government payroll; in developed countries, the government pays salaries to the citizens that being retired from the tax that received and encounter with treasury shortages in the long term because of the cost of the elder cured. In addition, the rate of fail companies will be increased, because the all people, who have worked in these companies get retired and the number of young people, who will work instead of them is low and the government income is inconsiderably reduced.
The young people prepare the steady economy in the countries. At the first that is provided more job opportunities by the young workers, when there are many adults, the number of investors, who invest for new business will be increased and these companies need more young workers to improve their career and convert to larger companies like international companies. Secondly, increasing the welfare of people and the economic situation will increase and the firms, which has the import license, trade with other firms in foreign countries and the rate of their exchange will rise dramatically, thus they earn more profit and pay more wages to their employees and the government earn more income by receiving tax.
In conclusion, although the adults have prepared a better situation for the countries, they can be made some serious hazard in the future.

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۱۴ در ۰۲:۵۵

   Nima Da

recent research suggests people are really willing to have a large size congestion of teenagers in society.although the crowd increment of young people has some benefits for a country, however it has some of drawbacks in compare of the elderly population. this essay will examine both of this standpoint.49

The concession of youthful citizen is significant. First of all, a large size of workforce who have up-to-date knowledge with perfect physical and mental activities would be lucrative for industries. it is clear that the performance of this kind of worker is more than adult group. Secondly, the medical care , cost of health and revenue of teenagers are considerably less than the adult generation . Thus, the government has an opportunity to allocate their funds on the other improvement project. a fundamental reason for this is that youth rarely need medical services and their protected system fight most of diseases. that’s why they endure critical and extraordinary condition conveniently.110

On the one hand,There are some disadvantages of the young people are detrimental to the quality of lifestyle in society. At first the shortage of experience is a serious issue that can decline the reliability. In the other hand, the rate of efficiency and quality of some services for example, doing operation or designing the airplane can affect by the shortage. Secondly, the Next drawback is fundamental needs for youth which can be significant. both they have varieties and also they are the underlying topics which could vastly allocated by government. These essential needs contained , recruitment, accommodation,education and etc.100

In conclusion, although a large number of youth have various disadvantages in countries however other people including me strong advocate of this approach and believe young people have more advantages in compare of adults and can be more beneficial.39
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۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۱۱ در ۲۲:۴۷

   Nima Da

More advantages
۱- more active workforce
#forces with better motivations and novelty
# more potential with better self-contained force
۲- economic progress
# cheaper workforce
# development because of creative talents

More disadvantages
۱-less experience
#shortage of skillful force
#need to educate immatured staff
۲- more retired staff
# extra expenses
# retired insurance

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۱۰ در ۰۲:۰۲

   Sara. S

The pie chart show average household spending in 1965 and 2015. In each of this years,the budget had divided various.

In 1965, thirty -five percent of the total budget was spend on food and 30% on housing. This accounted for more than half the budget. Over on fourth the budget was spend on healthcare (15 %) and clothing (12 %). The smallest amounts were for transportation (5%)and other expenses (3%).

In 2015,household spending seems different. The large of budget spend on housing (35%) and healthcare (25%). Therefore they made up a few over half of total budget. Food had fall down from (35%)to (15%),a little from half of past,while trasportion had risen from (5%) to (15 %) . Clothing had dropped from (12%)to (5%).and other items had risen slightly to five percent.

Overall, in both years, the larger part of budget spend on housing, while the other items change notably.. (159)

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۰۹ در ۲۳:۴۳

   Hajar H

The pie charts depict how people spend their budget for household in 1965 and 2015.

The average household expenses in 1965, fall in to six categories. the largest amounts of the budget were spent on food and housing, 35% and 30% respectively. This took up just over half of the budget. Healthcare (15%) and clothing (12%) together accounted for just slightly more than one fourth of the total budget. In the meantime, the smallest part was for transportation (5%) and other expenses (3%).

In contrast, it is noticeable that, in 2015, housing and healthcare accounted for the largest share of spending, 35% and 25% respectively. Together they constituted half of total expending, meanwhile, transportation had climbed from 5% to 15 % of the budget, whereas food had fallen from 35% to 15%. spending on clothing had decreased from 12% to 5%. and the other expenses had increased slightly and reached 5%.

Overall, in both years, expending on housing constituted largest share of budget, whilst the rest of budget were allocated for other proportions altered considerably.

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۰۹ در ۲۱:۱۲

   Nima Da

The pie charts compare six category of household expenditure in the years 1965 and 2015.

Food and housing made up the two biggest items of expenditure in 1965. Together they comprise over half of household spending. Food accounted for 35% of spending in 1965, but this decreased to half to 15% in 2015. However, the investment on housing was 30%, decreasing rapidly from 30% in 1965 to 15% in 2015. The other two large items was healthcare and clothing which were 15% and 12% respectively then healthcare increased to 25% and clothing decreased to 5% totally in 2015.

In the other hand, transportation and other were contained the two lowest item of investment in 1965 These two item were almost 8% in sum, in 1965 then transportation outlay increased Significantly from 5% to 15% and other investment increased gradually from 3% to 5% in 2015.

Overall, in two years although other investment was lowest and housing was highest , they have not too much changed in 2015 but it seems the increasing in healthcare doubled and in transportation tripled.(179)

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۰۸ در ۰۷:۵۰

   Sahand

The two pie charts illustrate percentage of total household expenditure in1965 and 2015.

Other sector accounted for 3% of household expenses in 1995, which had a slight growth of 2% in 2015.Household spending on healthcare was 15% in 1995 and this increased to 25%in 2015.At the beginning of the period ,transportation and housing made up 5% and 30% of household spending respectively and these figures rose to 15% and 35% in 2015.

Food , which comprised almost a third of household expenditure in 1965 fell dramatically to 15% in 2015.Clothing was 12% and this decreased to 5% after period of 20-year.

Overall , at the beginning of the period , transportation and other were the smallest segment , while the biggest household budget was spent on food.In comparison , at the end of the period housing and health care became the largest of household expenses and the lowest spending was on clothing and other.

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۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۰۷ در ۰۱:۴۱

   Amin Khani

These days almost all companies want candidates to answer various questions related to their personal and professional information. Although there are those who maintain that these information may be relevant, but others including me do not feel need to answer them. This essay will examine both of these cases.

Some believe that personal information could be useful for employer and there will be no harm to answer such questions. First of all, obtaining general information of candidates could help managers to assign the best job position for their employees. To illustrate further, some information could be show whether these candidates can be match by organization’s goals. For instance, an applicant who interested in exercises and outdoor things, could imply properties of strong perseverance and could be appropriate for difficult jobs. Secondly, by analyzing these data, managers could identify their employee’s talents and help them to apply them in right place. For instance employees who are enthusiastic on teamwork can be proper candidates for management jobs.

On the other hand, there are some believe these information are not necessary for applying job. First of all, it is likely that this information could be used by managers against the employees. There is some serious concern about this personal information which may alter employer’s decision. For instance in the case of applicant who has a newborn child, they may refuse to hire her (him) because of she (he) is so busy at home. Secondly, there are some legal rights that support people against invasion of privacy. According these legal nobody can ask personal information of employees.

In conclusion, I believe personal information is private and should not be asked employees. Although some argue this information may be useful but others disagree and believe this data can be used against the employee.(291)

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۰۶ در ۰۴:۵۹

   Sahand

It is often argued that asking applicants to provide additional information such as their hobbies or marital status is helpful for the employers.However , others disagree with this ,and they believe private information is unnecessary and useless. This essay will elaborate both of these views and present my opinion.

It is believed that employers need more than just basic information. First of all ,further information helps employers to better evaluate prospective applicants. With increasing emphasis on team work this information assists business owners in fitting into the right groups. Secondly , personal information will help the employers to choose right candidates and mach them with right opportunities .For instance , someone who is interested in travelling and meeting people , is more suited for marketing position. However, applicants’ qualifications and work histories are necessary but , asking about their hobbies will help employers to figure this out.

On the other hand ,there are those who disagree with this , and think providing personal detail is not beneficial neither for applicants nor employers.First of all ,they claim that, employers will be able to abuse employees with being aware of their personal life and also jobseekers believe , this can access secret aspects of their life. Secondly , invasion of privacy is illegal and unacceptable ,and also there is considerable anxiety among candidates about being accessed their personal information by the employers who they do not know.
I am a strong advocate of this approach and believe that applicants should not be required to provide personal information.

In conclusion , however some still agree with presenting personal details to fit in a suitable job opportunity , but it is believed that for acquiring a correct job position providing private information is not essential and often there is anxiety of being abused.
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۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۰۵ در ۲۲:۴۲

   Sara. S

Employers ask the work-seeking about personal information such as their hobbies and whether they are married or single. Although, some people disagree this opinion, others including me think giving personal information is benefit. This essay will discuss both of these viewpoints.

The personal information can be influence the performance of firms and bring some beneficial for both side,employer and employees. First of all, the personal information help the managers of companies to choose the best alternate person for working in their organization. For example, giving personal information is very important in Germany. Each person who she/he is seeking a job should write a resume containing personal information even studying in the university. It dose not work without the personal information! Secondly, writing a resume is so important for employers because they can anderstand whose work for them. And how much they can bring greater efficiency of their own marketing. I think employers become more flexible when they have even few information about their personal life of employees and that, help their to make a close-knit working groupe,and they don’t miss their good employees, who they have a special situation in own lives like having children, any problem or responsibility.

On the other side, having personal information by companies is not always good. First of all, the information, which the employees wrote in the resume maybe is fake (like hobbies). There for the employers can select the person who is not proper for a special job. They disappear time and energy so the efficiency of commercial business can be increased for awhile. Secondly, there is a possibility that the employers can use the personal information against the employees. That way the job applicant miss a good career opportunity. For example, the female candidates case, who she is recently married. They may refuse her because of her chances of becoming pregnant in the near future.

In conclusion, I think giving some personal information which don’t damage the privacy in resume is benefit and cause to better working either for employers or employees. But others disagree that opinion and think nobody, who work in the same place has not right to anderstand anything about them.

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۰۳ در ۰۱:۰۸

   Hajar H

The chart depicts the total length of time spent on three groups of telephone calls in the UK over a period of 8 years between 1995 and 2002.

local-fixed line call was around 70 billion minutes in 1995. this figure increased moderately, and it reached a peak of 90 billion minutes in 1999. Then, started to decrease marginally to 70 billion minutes in 2002.

Two other categories, National and international fixed line and mobile call, rose constantly from 38 billion minutes for the former to approximately 61 billion minutes for the later, although the growth was minimal over the last 2 years. This growth for mobile calls increased remarkably from 2 billion minutes in 1995 to 46 billion minutes at the end of the interval. since 1999, the number of people who used mobiles tripled.

Overall, it seems a big difference in popularity among 3 categories of telephone users. Although, local fixed line calls were the highest among them, and local fixed line was the only category that showed a decline in the number of minutes, two other ones had a significantly increased.

۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۰۲ در ۱۷:۴۴

   sahnd

The chart illustrates three different types of telephone calls and the length of time that people spent on them in The UK over a period of eight years between 1995 to 2002.

Local-fixed line calls had the highest users and The UK residents spent a little more than 70 billion minutes on this kind of ringing in 1995 .This number rose and reached a peak of 90 billion minutes in 1999.However , in the second four years this figure fell , and dropped on level of beginning in 2002.

In 1995 national and international-fixed lines had a level of well under 40 billion minutes .And this trend increased gradually all over eight years with 50 billion in 1999 and a peak of 60 billion in 2002.

Mobile telephone calls were the lowest , and British people spent considerably less than 10 billion minutes in 1995 on this type of call.Though ,it had a slightly increase until 1999 but mobile calls dramatically rose from 1999 and reached more than 40 billion in 2002.

Overall , although in the first four year all of the three categories had an increasing trend but local-fixed line declined from 1999 to 2002.
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۱۳۹۷/۰۹/۰۲ در ۱۴:۱۹

   Sara

The chart shows three different categories :local line, national and international and mobils that shows how much time spend between 1995 to 2002 by people in UK.

In 1995,local calls were over 70 bilion minutes. This number increased to 90 bilion minutes in 1999. It then started to decrease to 70 bilion minutes in 2002.

At the start, the number of minutes of talking about national and international and fixed line was less than 40 bilion minutes in 1995. Gradually, this number only increased between 1995 to 2002,and reached highest amount over 60 bilion minutes in 2002.

A few bilion minute were spent in 1995 on the mobile calls, and this little number increased slightly to more than 10 bilion minutes in 1999. At the next start to peak of dramatically 45 bilion minutes at the end of 2002.

Overall, the three categories had big difference in amicability at the begin. During the period the shape of difference was preserved, but at the final years all these categories had very similar amount of popularity.

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۳۰ در ۱۴:۳۱

   Amir Norouzi.

Edited
Today, internet usage has affected people’s lives that include both advantages and disadvantages. this essay explains my reasons for both of them.

as advantages, the internet causes easy accessibility and decreases costs. first of all the internet has facilitated to do routine tasks and people do not need to go to the different places for requirements. they can apply their requests through the internet and receive them everywhere they want. also, many companies all over the world can cooperate together by the internet. secondly, the internet has decreased the costs. when you are not forced to go to do your purposes so you do not need to use your car or other public transportation vehicles and by this way, you can save your money and decrease your costs.

on the other hand, internet usage causes some disadvantages like damaging to real people’s relationship and damaging to humans health. first of all, using the internet more than usual leads to people note less to somebodies on their around and although they are close together physically they are far from each other mentally. secondly, the internet has provided a background for humans have less activity. they spend a lot of time on the internet without any movement. this lack of movement leads to obesity and as all know this is very dangerous for health. also a long time internet usage may cause harmful effect on eyes because you have to look at the monitor for a lot of time.

in conclusion, the internet has both advantages and disadvantages. some people use less the internet because of its disadvantages. others including me use the internet more because of its advantages (277)

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۳۰ در ۱۱:۲۰

   azadeh esmaeili

سلام وقت بخیر من نمیتوانم فایل رایتینگ را آپلود کنم چون زمانی که دکمه ثبت را میزنم کلا صفحه از ابتدای سایت اطلاعات را نشان میده

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۳۰ در ۰۲:۰۸

   Nima Da

The technology of internet has considerably impacted the various aspects of our lives. Yet , it has a few drawbacks, there are many impressive advantages which can not be ignored. this essay will discuss both positive and negative side of this technology.(42)

Our lives has dramatically altered by the internet in recent time, because it can provided numerous benefits. First of all, it has caused dramatic changes in the way of communication. There are a lots of people from faraway places relate to each other by social networks and the other internet applications. Also it has ability to transport data throughout the world. Secondly, everybody can access latest and worthwhile sources including a vast amount of scientific articles , e-books and educational videos. although it can be a best space to develop people’s literacy skills. but it seems the usage advantages of internet is beyond most people’s imagination.(106)

On the one hand, using the Internet can have negative aspects and disadvantages. First of all, wasting time may be happened for everyone because there are many unusual information among others websites on the internet that most of them are chat rooms and online video games which can cause of the addiction. Secondly, the internet crime and illegal access from hackers could threatens compromise important private information of organisations and people. Also attacking to data centers and stealing the personal private information are among the obvious cases of these threats. Therefore,the data protection requires high security in network infrastructure on the Internet which requires high costs.(106)

In conclusion, although the internet facilities doing activities that are in relation to our daily life, some serious problems may arise from using the internet.
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۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۹ در ۲۳:۰۹

   Amin Khani

The internet has significant altered human lives in recent years. Although there are those who maintain that the internet has beneficial effect in lifestyle, on the other hand, some believe there may be some disadvantages about the internet. This essay will examine both of the viewpoints.
Some argue that, the overall effect of the internet has been positive. First of all, in the earlier times, there were limited access to various information for researchers. Nowadays, however, an endless supply of knowledge can be shared on the internet and it provides abundant resources that can be accessed by everyone in the world. This kind of access can lead to increase knowledge of society. Secondly, the internet provides lots electronic services which are available anytime. In the past times, people spent a vast amount of time on activities such as banking and shopping but today, it is possible to do those as electronic commerce faster with minimal cost.
On the other hand, however, there is another different perspective on internet. Some argue effects of internet have been negative. First of all, the internet connects all computers to each other, which makes it for hackers to hack accounts and steal personal information for identity theft. Also they can create viruses in some program and websites that could be used for destroying some urban substructures. Secondly, since internet offers numerous sources of entertainment, it is hard to resist the temptation and some people get addicted to the internet. Spending too much time on the Internet can lead to unhealthy lifestyle. This behavior can cause considerably less physical activity and several problem such as loneliness and emotional illness.

In conclusion, the internet offers numerous advantages and has had beneficial impacts on lifestyle, but on the other hand, however, it also offers several disadvantages. (289)

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۹ در ۰۴:۲۳

   Hajar H

The internet has played a crucial role in order to keep abreast of the contemporary world. some society members allege that, the internet has a positive influence in our lives. contrastingly, others assume that, it has an adverse impact on internet users. (42 words)

There are some benefits for people who use the internet. First of all, an overt merit is easy access to information and resources. in view of the fact that, it enables people to do broad ranging of tasks from distance learning to searching for employment easily. Thus, the internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. Secondly, it provides opportunity for easy communication and conduct business. to clarify, there are different kinds of programs available like email or internet chat programs. Therefore, via these powerful means of communication, people can contact with loved ones in faraway places and do a global trade, which eliminate the need to travel. (107 words)

Nevertheless, there are some drawbacks on people’s lives. First of all, risk of social isolation is a major threat to their lives. Because, these people eagerly tend to allot considerable amount of time surfing the internet. it will have a far-reaching impact on their social behaviors and habits. thus, they will stay aloof from others. Secondly, Using the internet for a long period of time can give rise to health problems. owing to, they spend most of their time just sitting in front of the computer. therefore, health issues accompanied by sedentary life style and lack of physical activity. Thus, it can cause long-term consequence for physical and mental health. (110 words)

By way of conclusion, the internet has certainly brought positive impact on modern world, while it may contain some serious drawbacks on internet users’ lives. (25 words)

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۸ در ۰۰:۴۳

   Sara. S

The internet has dramatically revolutionised many different fields of our lives and had been changed completely everything recently.

Although, some of these changes have been negative, many people including me think plenty of them are positive.
First of all, nowadays many information are putting by internet in different fields, and our lives become much easier and convenient than past. We can see the influence of a large number of data in several subject such as medicine, transportation, etc that maybe by pushing a button of smartphone can be using. Furthermore we can save time. Sending an email instead of going to appointed places ,where we need to go. (like university, company,…) using googelmape to reaching somewhere or online education courses and much more via the internet.

Nevertheless, the effects of internet have not all beneficial. This new technology can making isolation for human. Many people spent too much time in internet. Virtual world offers so amazing and absorbing things, therefore they are so busy with internet and forget their friendships for relationships.. Gradually the people become alone without real friends in real life. On the other side, internet made the folk inactive. The people who spent solar day in internet being lazy. They make not sport even any little activities for example like shopping because they can that online. This lazy people become overweight and different illness like diabetes or mental disorder.

In conclusion, however the internet have been changed positive our lives, it makes some people addict to itself,and bring irrecoverable damage to their lives..

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۶ در ۲۳:۵۴

   Amin Khani

#Advantage:
-Abundant Information and Resources
-Easy access to Services and electronic commerce
#Disadvantage:
-Virus attacks and Information loss
-Health issues and loneliness

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۶ در ۱۲:۵۱

   منا بسحاق

Dear sir
I’m writing with regards to inform you that I have some problems with my cell phone which bought from your store last week. Unfortunately, the touch screen isn’t responding perfectly. I’m using the phone device to put on orders or close my positions for my tradings. Because of the phone problems,
I couldn’t open or close my trades precisely and on time.As result,it is making a lot of losts in my jobs since the problem started.
I would like to request a check up on my cellphone problem as soon as possible. I’m looking forward to getting fix by your technicans.
Also I would like to know if there are other options to fix my phone problem.
Please do let me know
your faithfully

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۶ در ۱۱:۴۲

   r_hosseini

The line graph shows different leisure home activities for spending hours per week time schoolchildren, who have 10-11 years old over nine year from 2000 to 2008.

according to this line graph, schoolchildren spent less than 4 hours per week on computer activities in 2000. this number increased to upper
than 15 hours in 2004, also at the continue, spending time for this activity has uptrend to 22 hours approximately. at the same time(2000)
of beginning for this activities, the spending time for watching TV is 21 hours per week and it was flat for 3 years to 2003, then it fell rapidly
۶ hours per week in 2003. in 2004 schoolchildren spent 15 hours for both activities.

spending time on watching TV in 2004 to 2008 was fluctuated, so that the number of peak in this period was 16 hours in 2006, also in this activity minimum time spent in this period and it was 14 hours a little after 2005.

Overall, finally spending time for these two activities in 2000 to 2008 has reversed, although watching TV has much more population than computer at the first.
word = 188

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۶ در ۰۴:۳۳

   Hajar H

The graph depicts the average weekly hours spent on two kinds of leisure activities by schoolchildren aged 10 to11 over a nine-year period between 2000 and 2008.

Looking more closely at the trend for computer use, it can be seen that, schoolchildren aged 10 to11 Spent nearly 3 hours per week in 2000. Then, this number rose substantially over the next 4 years to approximately 15 hours in 2004. from 2004 to 2008 children continued to spend more time on watching TV and this figure hit a peak of well under 22 hours.

Contrastingly, Watching TV, shows a different trend. Between 2000 and 2003, children spent their time for watching TV 21 hours per week which remained constant during this interval. Next, this figure sank remarkably from 21 and reached 15 hours per week in 2004. Then, apart from a slight fluctuation between 2005 and 2006, the time spent watching TV, remain unchanged about 15 hours per week.

Overall, computer use is becoming more popular than watching TV among schoolchildren.

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۵ در ۱۹:۵۹

   Nima Da

The following graph illustrate the average weekly hours spent by schoolchildren of 10 to 11 years on two different home activities ( TV and computer ) during the period of 2000 to 2008.//31//

In 2000 schoolchildren spent less than 4 hours a week on computer, however the time they spend on TV was about 21 hours. The number of hours spent on computer came up significantly during the next four years and come to 15 hours a week in 2004. After that it had steady increase during next four years and peaked slightly under 22 hours in 2008.
The time spend on TV remained stable during the first four years and in 2003, it was still 21 hours a week. Then it had a considerable fall and reached to 15 hours in 2004 and remained the same until 2005. Then besides a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006 it remained stable on 15 until 2008.//122//

Overall, at the beginning the number of hours spent on TV was much more but at the end of 2008 became decreased, however the spent time on computer in this period has only increased.//34//
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۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۴ در ۱۲:۳۰

   Amin Khani

The graph compares the number of hours per week that schoolchildren spent on two different home activities (TV and Computer) between 2000 and 2008, a period of nine years.
Schoolchildren (10 -11 years old) spent nearly 21 hours per week on watching TV in 2000. This number remained stable over the next 4 years, till 2003. Since then, a considerable decline took place and this level dropping to less than 16 hours per week in 2004. Then, apart from a fluctuation between 2005 and 2006, the time spent on TV remained constant at an average of 15 hours per week.
On the other hand, Computer use shows so much different trend. The time spent on computer started at three hours per week in 2003 and then it rose significantly to 15 hours in 2004. After that, this trend continued to grow to more than 21 hours per week and this number seems to be on the increase.
Overall, the schoolchildren spent more time on computer than TV in the last five years. (172)

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۳ در ۰۵:۰۵

   Hajar H

These given maps depict the construction of facilities for tourists in an island. One map illustrates the situation before and another map after the construction.

It appears that, in the first map, there is no recreational facilities for tourists, this island was surrounded by a small beach and sea without any road and hubs for tourist’s accommodation. just palm trees were spread in the east and west of the island. nevertheless, in the second island can be seen many physical structures. The most striking changes is that, a reception block has been added in the central part of the island, which is surrounded by two sites of accommodations in the west and center of reception. a single restaurant is fairly close to reception too. Furthermore, there is a pier and a place that boats can dock, which are located in the southern part of the island. One interesting change is that, a vehicle track linking the reception with pier and restaurant. As well as, small hubs are connected to each other by footpath.

Overall, it seems that, the island has changed considerably, in as much as some recreational facilities have been constructed and become ready for accommodate hundreds of tourists.

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۲ در ۱۶:۳۴

   azadeh esmaeili

These maps illustrate before and after the times that some facilities were constructed for tourist in an island.
In the first map there are no much facilities for tourists to enjoy except a beach with some swimming area in the west of the island. In the secound map there is a resturant in the middle of the island ,which is located on the left close side of the reception and in the west there are some accomodation place ,which are connected to the reception on the right side ,to the beach on the left side and to each others by footpath; some swimming places are located near the beach on the left side of west. In the south of the island there is a pier with some boats for sailing and a vehicle track ,where the tourist use to reach to the restaurant and reception.
Overall, it seems most of the construction for tourists are made in the center and west of the island.

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۱ در ۱۳:۲۱

   niloufar m

the diagram illustrate the construction of facilities in an island one map show the situation before and one map after the construction .
the first map shows a few hundreds square island with a beach in the west side .however, in the second map there are various developments with regards to two site of accommodations in the center and west ,one reception between them, a restaurant in the north and also a pier with two sailing boats in the south side . accommodations are connected to each other by footpath in each site also the west site is connected to the beach witch is ready for swimming as well. the reception ,restaurant and pier are connected to each other by vehicle track .
overall, it seems the island is completely different after the construction of tourist facilities .the island is ready to accommodate few hundreds of tourists at the same time and also is used for some see activities the new island has become a pleasing place for tourism .

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۱ در ۰۳:۵۹

   sepideh .m

Two maps show before and after the construction of some facilities in a Island .

In the first map we can not seen much facilities for tourists just there is a beach for swimming in the left side of the Island. But in the second map there is the reception which is in the middle of the Island and also a restaurant that located in northern part that can be accessed by vehicle . there are many accommodation in both side for tourists . Thus , is possible to conjoin to each other and move to other side of Island by footpath . In addition can be seen a pier for boats and some palm trees which are in eastern and western area of the Island . There is swimming area as well as.

Overall , these maps illustrate that the Island after construction changed sharply and built more facilities . Therefore can be fantastic place for tourists.(150)

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۲۰ در ۰۲:۱۸

   Sara. S

Two maps appear before and after of a tropical island ‘s changes, which show facilities and services for tourists.
It manifests that a reception have been built in the middle part, that is located two collection tourist’s accommodation in both side of itself. Also, there is a restaurant in the northern part, which connected with footpath to reception and than a pier in southern side of island, where located pair glee bots for sailing. A compact beach can be used for swimming or sunbathe after this changes in the western part. Some palm trees in the western and eastern region of the island, which seem to be same position by changing.
Overall,it seems the island can be used by many
tourists , because it is absolutely different of first in the middle and western part. A neu good place had been created, where a large of people can enjoy it.

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۹ در ۱۱:۵۱

   M.Mahdi Shahmoradi

I bought a new bicycle last week. you remember I had another bicycle and I live in a medium sized flat I don’t have enough space for two bicycles and I could not use both of them. You know I’m single and I don’t have any partner for use it.
My old bicycle is a tourism bicycle. it’s fit for road cycling by long distance. It’s made by Cannondale company and its accessories are made by Shimano. It is lightweight and compact. The bicycle color is red and black. its tires size is 26 inch and those are rather narrow.
I remember you rode it several times and you love it. I think its size is fit and suitable for you. On the other hand, we don’t have any anxious about of price and payment. In my opinion in the weekends we could cycling around all the city.

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۶ در ۱۲:۱۵

   الهه

visiting the world is very important and very exciting for the all tourists. Although there are some benefits to visit the difficult places, others including me believe there are some disadvantages for tourists to visit the difficult places. This essay will examine both of these cases.(46 words)

There are some benefits to visit hard and difficult places. First of all,there is a new experience in visiting strange places, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. They travel to untouched places and learn how to live in the hard conditions, they face hardship situations while they must solve their problem alone. Secondly the visiting to exotic places is very exciting.The difficult places have not a lot of crowd, there are not a lot of noises. As matter of fact tourists can enjoy without no stress or no challenge.(93 words )

On the other hand,there are some disadvantages to visit exotic places. First of all, there is not a lot of security in untouched places. Hard places are very dangerous, and visiting them has a lot of risk, and they usually solve their problems difficultly and alone .Secondly there are not a lot of facilities and services in the difficult places. Usually the countries do not spend a lot of budget for exotic places because there is few population and climate is not appropriate. therefor tourists do not have access a lot of facilities. They travel long distance on walk or do not have enough food and sleep (108 words)

In conclusion, the visiting places where condition are difficult may be some benefits and on the other hand may be a lot of disadvantages for tourists.(26 words

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۶ در ۰۸:۳۵

   Nima Da

Some tourists travel to areas with difficult conditions to sightseeing. Although there are more benefits to visit these areas. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to go to these places, this essay will examine both of these viewpoint.39

Some of tourists who visit areas with difficult situation they have some advantages. First of all, they achieve diverse experiences because they are experiment different situation like Sahara desert and the antarctic. A fundamental reason to acquiring any new experience is explore and sightseeing in these areas for the adventurous people. Secondly, the distance of Technology and Urbanization lead to no noise ,crowded and pollution and therefor this feeling Calm lead to make the tourist happy that no any other thing in any other place could do that. Another advantages is getting energy from nature and There is also clean air for breathing and relaxing. 105

On the other hand, visiting these places with difficult condition it could have more inadequate consequences for tourists. First of all, there are no adequate facilities in these areas with difficult condition also there is no help when anyone needed if tourist are injured with each natural occurrence. Secondly, these abandoned places that there is no accurate information about them and also their distance to urban areas have caused the majority of people are sometimes understandably reluctant to attend visiting this places with bad situation where there are no humankind to live and may be attacked by wild animals or snakes and scorpions.102

In conclusion go sightseeing around the areas with bad situation like Sahara desert could be a good experiences and benefits for some people. However,visiting these places with difficult condition maybe have many disadvantages.32

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۶ در ۰۵:۵۱

   Sahand nasiri

Visiting Sahara Desert or the Antarctic

Advantages

*- Gaining new experience

*-Health benefits

Disadvantages

*- Dangerous and dull

* lack of facility
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These days people are more interested in visiting places with harsh and severe conditions . Although visiting such places has some advantages ,on the other hand there are some worries about spending time on visiting this kind of places.This essay will examine both of these viewpoints.(46 words)

Visiting an unusual place such as Sahara Desert can be beneficial for visitors . First of all, most of the tourists who visit this kind of lands gain a unique and completely new experience.Also , visiting Sahara Desert or any other rare places is suitable for the people who want to broaden there experiences . Secondly ,however, there are harsh and though conditions in Sahara desert but, the advantages are that there is rarely noise and air pollution so tourists will have the chance to breath clean air and improve there health in uninhabited and peaceful places which people don not see in their everyday lives.(107words)

On the other hand , on the negative side ,visiting such places might create problems to tourists specially who are weak or addicted to technology . First of all ,the feeling of isolation could make them feel homesick and they may become depressed . Tourists , specially who are mentally weak usually cut their trip before visiting the best parts .Also for some tourist is deadly dull to be away from internet and social networks . Secondly , in the locations such as Sahara Desert tourists usually face a land lack of facilities. Also people who have decided visiting such places must be aware of dealing with lack of essential and basic facilities.(108 words)

In conclusion ,exploring places that have an uncommon condition could be a positive trip for some people who are intrepid.However , for people who are afraid of losing their comfort and the connection with the social network , this kind of trips could be a disappointed idea .(46words)
totally 307 words

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۴ در ۲۳:۵۶

   Sara. S

Some of the most spectacular and beautiful environments of the world are forest and desert. Although many people think visiting the sahar desert is terrible! Others including me believe it’s worth a try, because you can have worthy experience. This essay will examine both of these. The tourists who visit such as the fascinated eara can taking a good knowledge. First of all, in the same hard nature of the desert and forest, they are beautiful. In this place, you have different feeling. There are many kind of plants or tree, animals, wich you have never ever seen. The picturesque sky with tausend stars of Sahara enchant you. You enjoy the quit withauot end of desert.far away from city and busy world. Secondly, you can getting to know new culture.. Difrent people with different lifestyle, are maybe more attractive. Crowds of people who live in this area have dissimilar and very special etiquette. Particular cloth, language even religion can be informative. That is such as pleasing story. On the other side, travelling to challenging region create worry for tourists. First of all, there are very low facilities.when you travel to forest or desert that means you are distance of city and services. It dose no matter slow internet, no fridge or no hospital. That can being big problem for tourists. Secondly, danger is on the door. Many wild animals in the forest are dangerous. The poisonous snakes and scorpins are everywhere. Even the insects wich is in africa’s forest can making disease like malaria. In conclusion of, this place can attract many tourists who are adventurousness. And the other hand visiting the location accompany with danger have many disadvantage for tourists.

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۴ در ۰۹:۲۹

   رضا حسینی

Writing Task2- session4(tourists)
#Advantage
new challenge
more experience
# disadvantage
less facilities
more dangerous
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#Advantage
more exciting
more attractive
# disAdvantage
high risk for health
more stress

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۳ در ۲۳:۵۹

   sepideh .m

Because of storm,many people make the decision to abandon their cars#
Nowadays, the coffee shops provide internet access#
Our hotel can accommodate up to 400 guests#
Some of the friends were accompany us in this journey#
Accurate information about the education is very helpful for us#

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۳ در ۱۱:۲۶

   Amin Khani

Visiting the world is a very exciting way to learn about a real life experience. Although there may be plenty of benefits to visit the difficult places, on the other hand there may be some disadvantages about these places. This essay will examine both of these cases.(45)
There are some benefits for tourists who visit difficult places. First of all, it’s a different experience to visit the abnormal places such as Sahra desert and Amazon forests. Traveling to these places can make tourist’s knowledge wider about their surroundings and it’s an interesting challenge to live so that, they learn and practice new way to live and all these could enhance their self esteem and make a better situation for their life and health. Secondly, these unconventional places are so attractive and there is a little or no air pollution and noise so these conditions could help to tourists enjoy their journey with less stress and anxious.(108)
On the other hand, traveling to locations with difficult conditions might create a problem for tourists. First of all, there are minimum or no facilities at those condition and if the injured person needs help (fore instance attacked by wild animal or falling), there may not be quick access to emergency services and can put the tourist’s life in danger. Secondly, the difficult conditions can cause more fatigue for tourists and abandon them to continue traveling. These places are far from city so their conditions are more different from urban life. Tourists have to travel long distance on walk or don’t have enough food and sleep.(106)
In conclusion, there are some benefits to visit unconventional places and the other hand visiting the location with difficult conditions have some disadvantage for tourists. (25)
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۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۲ در ۱۰:۳۶

   M.Mahdi Shahmoradi

Two parts of life cycle, teenage years and adult years. Both of them have positive and negative points for happiness life. What do you think about them? Which one do you prefer? I’m trying compare these parts and find advantage of one another.

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۲ در ۰۷:۲۱

   Sahand nasiri

People have different ideas about the happiest period of their lives.Although some people argue that adolescence is the happiest time in their lives, others including me believe adulthood is the happiest time of everyone’s life.This essay will examine the second viewpoint. 40

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Living location has always been challenging for everyone.Although some believe small towns are the best places for living ,others think big cities are better for living. This essay will examine both of these viewpoints.35

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۱ در ۲۱:۵۵

   رضا حسینی

The happiest time for teenage year and adult is important for everyone. Although some people believe teenage year are happiest time of people’s lives, others including me believe the adult life brings more happiness. This essay will examine both of this viewpoint.
(۴۲ words)

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۱ در ۰۳:۳۳

   Hajar H

choosing the place of living is a major decision for everyone. Although some people believe small towns are better for residing, others including me believe big cities are more beneficial for living. This essay will examine the second viewpoint.

Happiness is an emotional factor that we usually pursue in everyday life. Although some people believe school days are the happiest period others including me believe people are generally happier in their adulthood. This essay will examine both of these viewpoints.

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۰ در ۲۱:۵۲

   Avishan -sh

Happiness is very important for every one at any age ,although somepeople believe the teenage years enjoy the happiest time, others including me think in adult life can achieve more happiness.
(this essay will examin both of these viewpoint,(37 words

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۱۰ در ۰۲:۴۴

   Sara. S

The place where you live shows ,what is your priority in life. Although some people believe big city are spiny than small town for living, others think big cities are more better for living. This essay will examine the both viewpoints. …………..

Happiness is the spirit of life. Although many people believe majority is the happiest time in lives, other including me think teenage years are important andgladness time of life. This essay will examine the second viewp

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۰۹ در ۱۳:۵۵

   Niloufar m

Happiest time of life:
Teenage life
Reponsibily #
Freetime#
Adult life
Life experience #
Career#
Some people argue that teenage years are the happiest time of a persons life .First of all they don’t take much responsibility for what they do in their family and everything is widely available for them without much effort even if they take some responsibility like getting a part-time job and try to be financial independent. They are supported by their parents till they get older and ready to pursue a career and support a family. Secondly, teenagers have plenty of time that they can choose any leisure activity and hobby to do and also they have lots of time to hang out with friends and enjoy their life. 112
On the other hand, however, there are those who believe that adulthood is the happiest time of life .First of all, adults have a lot of life experience therefore they can make decisions and find solutions more effectively and restrain themselves from doing things that hurts them like like preventing heartbreaks as we can see a lot in teenagers life.
Secondly, adults can have a higher level of life and greater opportunity to have better jobs with higher salary because they are well educated and expert in their own field .89

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۰۹ در ۱۱:۴۳

   Azadeh esmaeili

Some people argue there are more happiness in adolescence life in comparison the youth.first of all teenages have lack of the responsibility, as they unpaid the family living expenses and emotionally and financially support by their families, they often get part-time job to make and evolution in their life. Further more teenages have more free times, they went to the school and spend most of the their times to studying, they also participate in diverse leisure activities like playing an instrument and signing in which are interesting and prefer o spend their times with their peers out of home.

Some people argue the adult are more happiness in their life. Firstly the adult are more independent they define divers between the good and the evil and having feel more responsibility in the life; the youth gain more experience in their career at small companies and evolve their job for working in well-known companies. In addition they have less free times compered with teenagers.when the youth go to work they do all the best to progress their profession and their experience to promote to high rank in their work, they also want to make a significant relationship which fine a girl or a boy to got married and having a family

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۰۹ در ۰۸:۲۲

   M.Mahdi Shahmoradi

Happiest time of life
Teenage years
# More free time
# Less responsibility

Adult Life
# Financial independence
# More abilities and experience

Happiest time of life
Teenage years
# More energy and motivation
# Less responsibility

Adult Life
# accordant spouse
# perfect and old friendships

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۰۹ در ۰۶:۲۳

   Sahand nasiri

Teenage years-
Having less responsibility *
Being energetic *

Adult life-
having more freedom*
chance of having family*

Some people think that teenage years are the happiest period of our lives.First of all, teenagers are less responsible .They are not mature to deal appropriately with the society .Either , they are supported by their families, and criminal law is kind to them.Also they are praised for small things. Secondly ,they are full of energy and enthusiasm to do a lot of things.Although ,they are young but, they take more risks than any other age groups.As result .teenagers actively seek new experiences .Also, during adolescence period ,there is an increasing peer relationships .Teenagers always are fresh to go out and spend time with each other
( words 110)

On the other hand , others believe that adult life is the best time of people’s lives .First of all, adults have more freedom , however , it comes with responsibility.Adults have the freedom to choose where to live, what to learn and so on.Freedom gives permission to adults to act freely and personify ideas .Secondly , being an adult gives people the chance to have family .Having family has been a part of human culture for thousands of years. Although , adults have responsibility to their families but , sharing experience enhances adults lives and also , there are often financial benefits associated with having family.
( words 100)

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۰۸ در ۱۴:۳۸

   amir

Somebodies believe that young ages are the happiest life time. First of all, young people try hard at these ages to get into the community, connect with others, and find new friends, and therefore try to engage in various activities and try almost anything to get what they want according to their desire. In this era, they choose models as their ideals and use their best endeavors to become like those. secondary During this period, they do not have duties such as cleaning home, cooking food, washing clothes, and earning enough money to housing; therefore they have fewer problems and endeavors to achieve their wishes. (105)

On the other hand, somebodies believe that adolescence is the happiest times in every person’s life. They believe that adults work and earn money and therefore they can buy anything they want if have the power to buy it. Secondly adults are separated from the family in the adulthood and they personally seek to shape their lives. That’s why often, they decide independently, they alone decide who to socialize, where to live, what to buy, how to dress, though they may consult, but they ultimately make the final decision, because both families ask for them have the ability to decide and assume responsibility and themselves tends to have an independent vote in this era. (114)

۱۳۹۷/۰۸/۰۸ در ۰۸:۴۵

   نصیبی الهام

Some people agree that teenagers enjoy the time first of all they have all facilitie and services and they supply by their parents also they don’t stress of their life s however they have more free time they choose the best activities for them and they can have many happiest for them teenagers try that they reach there goals and they can make the best choices,they can spend their time with their friends also they can use their energy for their hippies,parents must help to choose for their children and they provide for them ,Teenager cared their of a nice figure and they do more exercise also they go to gum that they to be always health (106
In the other hand ,same people believe the adult life is more hippies first of all,they try ,they want to be a good family and they married in adult old ,they try that they have been good choose Teenager try that they be concentrate and they realise that they can’t be Careless and ambitious .any way they important of choose husband and their life and they spend some quality time with their family ,they go to university and they have aften a good level education also they find a good job, they give in that they work hard until they don’t have failures)106

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   sorour.z

Some people believe that teenagers are happier in their lives. First of all, they are more focused on doing their things and they do not have to repeat too much because they do not have multiple responsibilities to learn, and they can control emotions that they have when they are adolescents. Which they are given to do right.Secondly, teenagers because of their low age, have more time to reach their goals. And if they are properly directed by the elderly, they can make the best choices in the future, while, in contrast to the past, parents have taken a lot of choices for their children and provided good guides for them. (111 words)

On the other hand, there are people who believe adults are happier. First of all, they have more skills in all fields and, thanks to their personal and professional experience, they can use their expertise to ensure their success. And despite all the frustrations, they will solve the problems. Secondly, adults have more autonomy in their lives, because they lack control of others, they have more freedom to do their job, which gives them a sense of power. The experience of this feeling is sweet for all people and therefore they do not need to be protected. (97 words)

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   Foad J

I sent it before, but can not find it here !

There are more facilities and services in a big city compared to a small town, first of all there is more budget in big cities and it results in more and also better services. Having more budget allows to provide better services such as transportation, health care, education and also entertainment. Secondly there is more demand in a big city so it makes sense for government and private companies to introduce more services to satisfy their citizens and clients. Here usually there are multiple choices for each service and competition between service providers increase the quality. (96)
Big cities provide better situation for work, first of all the average salary of employees with similar capability and responsibility is higher. It’s due to more income of corporations in big cities and also more demand for professional human resources. Here there is more opportunity to be promoted or accepted in new positions and even moving to other companies. Secondly there is wider range of job, in big cities there are lots of small and big companies and it’s more likely to find a job in your favorite field and flaunt your talents. Even big cities provide better environment for you to establish your own business. (106)

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   sepideh .m

Teenager years
# More entertainment
# support by parents

Adult life
# better experience
# Own business

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   amir

there are more facilities and services in a big city compared to a small town. first of all is that governments and investors invest more in big cities, so cause increasing population, working and living facilities and increasing their dependent services in major cities. Secondary, the massive population of large cities is increasing demand. This demand also increases for consumer goods, welfare services and, more generally, for all levels of urban living.
big city prepare a better situation for job. first of all is that bigger and stronger companies exist in big cities. And these companies are more likely to pay higher salaries to their employees because of the power of financial strength. Secondary, these companies offer more job opportunities due to their large size, and they also employ more employees for these jobs.

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   M.Mahdi Shahmoradi

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   sorour.z

There are more facilities and services in a big city compared to a small town. First of all, there is more budget in a big city, the government will allocate more funds in all fields, including aviation and land, the expansion of universities and hospitals in the city, as well as telecommunications, firefighting, and other fields of work. Secondly, More people live in the city, which definitely needs more and better services, the number of people who are eager to continue their studies, as a result of which more universities are needed, also the control of a big city is harder and more complex in every direction, and the force More work is being done in the relevant organizations, and it shows the demand and demand of the people in terms of the level of information and the level of information they need.(143words)

Big city provide a better situation for job. First of all, having more income is possible and making money depends on the individual’s efforts. Due to the large number of companies, especially the large corporations, these companies, considering their earnings, consider more salary for their personnel. It is also possible that a person can work simultaneously in 2 different installments and earn more income to earn. Secondly, Due to the wide variety of cities and companies, there is a greater choice and there is enough for every job, so with the least potential and talent, you can have the right occupation of any person. (104words)

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   M.Mahdi Shahmoradi

Do you prefer to live in a big city or in a small town?
There are more facilities and services in big cities. First of all, government spend more money and allocate bigger budget for a big city, because that there are more services like public transportation and long high-ways. This budget helps to build many hospitals or advanced education centers. Secondly, there are many people, firms and companies in a big city they need many things for their life. They need transportation, commercial centers, an advanced health system and a good education structure. People in a big city must spend their free time in the entertainment places like, cinemas and sport clubs. Because of these, government has to develop facilities for them. (109 words)

Big cities have more and better situation for job. First of all, it is easier to find a good salary job in big cities because there is more competition between firms to employ experts. These Firms need worker, engineers and manager to run their business. Because of these, the government and the firms have to pay more salary to any employee. Secondly, there are many various jobs and the range of jobs are wider, specially any student after graduated, can find a job related to his/her studies. Every employee could change his/her job and get a lot of experience in another progressive situation. (103 words)

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   pooria sadeghi

There are more facilities and services in a big city compared to a small town. First of all, governments have a strategic and specious sight to big cities. For this reason, they specify more budget to big cities compared to smallest once that can provide various infrastructures. These infrastructures are included transportation, environment, educational buildings, shop centers and so on. Secondly, big cities always are a crowded area, so population’s demands should be satisfied by the government. There are myriad businesses to cover people’s demands, in the result, seem business owners have a huge and sometimes raw deal race to expand their equipment and quality of services. (105)

Big cities provide a better situation for a job. First of all, in all around the world’s big cities rent, transportation and high-quality services are higher than in a small town, furthermore, air pollution threatens people health. Thus, people have a costly living and should be getting more salary. There is a hidden fact, a family can moderate its cost and in long-term save money more than a small town’s family. Secondly, myriad companies and service providers that built in a big city or around, extremely depended on their human resources. Thus, a wide range of knowledge is needed and almost everyone can find a job that sometimes isn’t fair. (112)

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   منا بسحاق

Mona:
I personality prefer to live in a big city ,first of all there is more budget in a big city and here is more accommodation as a result.The budget helps construct universities, modern hospitals.
secondly,big cities are more crowded and they require more facilities. people need moderns transportation to commute easily.
Their children need more schools and some facilities for their liesuire time.
Big cities provide a better suituation to find a job.
In big cities,there are more apportunities to find a job because there are lots of companies and different places to work.As a result there is a good chance to find a high pay job.
secondly there are many companies and factories.It gives the chance to find suitable job according to the people’s intrest and their talents.

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   Avishan-Sh

There are many more facilities and services in a big city compared to a small town. First of all, there is more budget in a big city and in fact it provides a variety of facilities and more services for example there are many more hospital or school or universities or sportcenters. Secondly, they are many people live in a big city and so they need many things to do for daily life .for instance people need to move from one place to other place in a fraction of minutes because of this there are several tips of public transportation they also need places for leisure time activities like park or cinemas or sport clubs .(109 words)

people prefer to live places where there are a lot of jobs opportunities with better situation First of all there are many more bigger companies and factories and educational centers and they need more employees as a managers or workers .as a result, it is reasonable to have a higher salary in a big town ,people have a shorter time to make progress in the big city compared to a small town. Secondly, the range of jobs are wider and many engineer or simple workers and experts can find jobs. Also studenten can work in the universities to make money and continue their own life more comfortable,(102words)

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   sepideh .m

There are more facilities and services in a big city compared to a small town. First of all, the government do the most spend for a big city that causes to worthy services and establish big companies and also the best people ‘s services such as universities, hospital. Secondly ,the majority of people prefer to live in a big city and they expect to have complex leisure center for their free time also they need special transportation for easier life . In additional they demand for better schools and advanced institute for themselves and their children . So this facilities are many important for them.(102)

Big cities provide a better situation for job. First of all , there is higher salary in big cities because there are many factories and they need more staff and managers and also the people can easier improve their experience for take higher salary .Secondly the range of jobs are winder. The people can to find their favourite job easily . In most jobs , they hire anyone that have experience work specially despite of the evidence of college or university good suggestion will be given from the big companies. As a result are good jobs for everyone.(96 )