تصحیح رایگان رایتینگ ایلتس

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تصحیح رایگان رایتینگ ایلتس

تصحیح رایگان رایتینگ ایلتس

بررسی رایگان رایتینگ آیلتس / تصحیح رایتینگ ایلتس

بررسی رایگان رایتینگ آیلتس تنها شامل (1) براورد نمره رایتینگ و (2) تعیین بزرگترین مانع دستیابی به نمره بالاتر می باشد و توسط مهندس ابوالقاسمی دریافت کننده نمره 8 آیلتس آکادمیک(نمره 8 در مهارت رایتینگ) با بیش از 10 هزار ساعت تجربه تدریس انجام میشود. (بررسی روزمه مدرس)

اما تصحیح کامل رایتینگ از جمله اول تا جمله آخر متفاوت است و شامل گزارشی درباره (1) بررسی جمله به جمله رایتینگ ارسال، (2) تعیین بزرگترین خطاهای مشاهده شده در نگارش رایتینگ، (2) اشاره به جمله های نادرست و ارایه فرم درست آن ها ، (3) تعیین مبحث دستوری مربوطه برای مطالعه بیشتر، و (4) تعیین وضعیت 4 معیار مورد نظر تصحیح کننده رسمی آیلتس در نمونه ارسالی می باشد. برای دریافت اطلاعات بیشتر در این زمینه این صفحه را ببینید.

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بررسی رایگان رایتینگ آیلتس – شرایط ارسال

برای سرعت بخشیدن به فرایند تصحیح و نمرده دهی و ارسال نتیجه به زبان آموزان شرایطی برای رایتینگ های ارسال در نظر گرفته شده است:

1. رایتینگ ها می بایست به صورت تایپ شده به صورت Text در همین صفحه کامنت شوند.

2. تاپیک رایتینگ گزینش شده باید مربوط به یکی از تاپیک های کتاب های کمبریج آیلتس جلد 1 تا 14 باشد.

2. بیشترین حد مجاز درازای رایتینگ های تسک 1 و تسک 2 به ترتیب 220 و 320 واژه باشد.

3. زمان مورد نیاز برای ارایه فیدبک معمولا 24 تا 48 ساعت است.

4. بررسی رایتینگ شما شامل (1) براورد نمره رایتینگ و (2) تعیین بزرگترین مانع دستیابی به نمره بالاتر می باشد

5. امکان حذف رایتینگ شما بعد از دریافت فیدبک و بررسی وجود نخواهد داشت و به صورت بایگانی در همین صفحه برای بررسی علاقمندان در دسترس خواهد بود.

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بررسی تمامی رایتینگ ها فقط توسط مهندس ابوالقاسمی دریافت کننده نمره 8 رایتینگ آیلتس آکادمیک(نمره 8 overall) با بیش از 10 هزار ساعت تجربه تدریس انجام میشود. (بررسی روزمه مدرس)

همچنین میتوانید نمونه های نوشته شده توسط این مدرس در سطح نمره 7.5 تا 8 را در این مجموعه بررسی بفرمایید.

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تصحیح رایتینگ ایلتس – نمونه تصحیح کامل رایتینگ

برای سفارش این نوع تصحیح این صفحه را ببینید.

Q: In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The powerful role of technology in various aspects of life is undeniable; communication ways are no exception. Nowadays, the photographs and films are the main forms of communication due to the visualization power exchanging messages, feeling and information more effectively. In my opinion, there is no potent method for replacement of this way of contact.

The main arguments for this idea are as follows. Firstly, when contents depict in visual form, people are able to understand it easily. Putting detailed information together as a picture or film is more perceivable than reading them on the books, magazines or newspapers. Sometimes, people should read thousands of words to grasp a simple concept and this take a lot of time to realize what they study. But by the movies or images, all information could be shown in short period.

Secondly, having access to videos or images is more convenient than the press. Cellphones as another sign of progression in technology provide this accessibility. People could get anything, at any time and everywhere through surfing on the net and watching short videos about their relevant subject.

Finally, Making videos to send your message to people all over the world don’t require any particular skill. But, in written form you need to be a skillful writer for expressing your thoughts. Besides, people are fascinated to videos at the first glance because of the individuals’ faces, clothes, and their ways of looking or acting, while all of them are invisible in written forms of communication. This could consider another element in popularity of image communication among people.

To conclude, I personally agree with this fact that method of image communication has no rival due to its all potent features such as being perceivable and accessible.

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نمونه دیگری از تصحیح کامل رایتینگ آیلتس

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تصحیح رایتینگ ایلتس – بیشتر بخوانید

دوره های فشرده آیلتس(همراه با تصحیح 24 رایتینگ)

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کلاس فشرده رایتینگ آیلتس برای نمره 7 و بالاتر

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دوره های خصوصی آنلاین آیلتس

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خرید و فروش کتاب های دست دوم آیلتس و زبان انگلیسی

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1000 ویدئوی آموزش زبان انگلیسی

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دانلود 5000 پادکست آموزش زبان انگلیسی

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بزرگترین مجموعه منابع گرامر زبان انگلیسی و آیلتس

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دانلود سری کامل کمبریج 1 تا 14

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از مبتدی تا آیلتس چند سال است؟

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پیشنهاد جمله های حرفه ای تر رایتینگ آیلتس

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20 خطای متداول دستوری زبان آموزان ایرانی

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نمونه جواب 7+ برای رایتینگ های سری کمبریج آیلتس

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جدیدترین منابع Self Study آیلتس (2019) + برنامه ریزی!

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گلچین واژگان رایتینگ 7+ آیلتس

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کالوکیشن های ضروری نمره 7 رایتینگ آیلتس

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دانلود 100 تک آهنگ خاص انگلیسی با متن

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متداول ترین خطاهای تلفظ در زبان آموزان ایرانی

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درخواست رایگان پارتنر آیلتس و زبان انگلیسی

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دوره های مقدماتی تا پیش آیلتس مهندس ابوالقاسمی

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